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Username Tachzaruu Gender Female
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i love drawing and writing about xiaolin showdown. it has completely taken over my soul. chase young is my favourite character, but i also love jack spicer. i wish he was real because it is one of my dreams to have him as a boyfriend.
If you want to read my stories then look up Tachzaruu on

This is a poem i wrote about why chase young traded his soul and emotions. its called 'Dark Emotions'. i hope you like.

p.s: I am perfectly aware that the rhyming pattern is constantly changing, but that is how i wanted to write it.

p.p.s:I'd really appreciate some feedback so please, please comment...


She was gone. Gone.

Vanished without a trace.

She promised that it wouldn’t be long

Before I once again saw her face.

But she lied to me

Bade goodbye to me

And walked into the night.

I cried to her

Whispered goodbye to her

And so vanished the light.

I waited for her promised return

But it soon began to dawn

That no matter how much I yearn

She would be forever gone.

My heart began to blacken

And in anger my fists clenched

My mind began to slacken

Something inside me was wrenched.

The years passed and my strength grew

But even as I battled

My heart still ached right down to

The core and my emotions prattled.

No matter how much I fought

I couldn’t escape even as I sought

Release from the all these writhing feelings

And the rage that dwelled within me.

Emotions pricked and tore at me

Revelling in my red fury

It was unbearable to be like this

This was my ultimate weakness.

When I could bear the pain no longer

I summoned the services of the demon

I did not even sit to ponder

I rashly demanded my freedom

From these emotions which tore inside

The compassion in me I could no longer abide.

I traded my feelings and my soul

For a potion that would grant me eternal life

Without emotions I am an empty hole

Now my pleasure is gained from other’s strife.

My mind is calm, my emotions dead

And now my heart is bound to evil

My enemies my presence dread

The worms, so helpless and so feeble.

When I have no potion, I

Become a fearsome form

For centuries this I have borne

With empty, golden eyes.

Sometimes I still sit and ponder

Why she left, where did she wonder?

Perhaps because she had already seen

The monster that has become me.

There. I hope you like! :)


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man_in_a_bra on December 29, 2005, 4:10:58 AM

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man_in_a_braLaura: heya ^^ thanks for the comment *grateful* i will do more xiaolin work for the future and I'll take request if you want.
ps. I love your poem you have serious talent

kittycatsugar on December 28, 2005, 10:18:35 PM

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kittycatsugarby the way ur really pretty!!!!! what part of england are you frm? i'm frm nottingham!

nitro_the_loon on December 28, 2005, 6:29:12 PM

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nitro_the_loonI'm glad I could do something! My favourite character is Raimundo (distantly followed by Chase, Omi or Wuya depending on my mood), just so you know. I'm going to go and see your picture now, weee!

usagi_moon on December 27, 2005, 9:53:46 PM

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usagi_moonhello you are from england too? yay! ^-^ and thirteen too hey my mind is about xiaolinshowdown/sailor moon/ffx and more see ya round ^-^

nitro_the_loon on December 27, 2005, 12:23:23 AM

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nitro_the_loonOnce again, thanks for the totally awesome comments! I'll get right down to your request.

Yin-Yang15 on December 26, 2005, 9:27:11 AM

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Yin-Yang15HI!...I just wanted to thank you for the comment you left on my picture of see i-it's the first one I've gotten on a picture and I'm REALLY flattered by what you said and how much you like it. thank you, you really made my day^_^. please stay in touch and re-visit my pictures any time

nitro_the_loon on December 26, 2005, 6:13:54 AM

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nitro_the_loonWell, because you left such a brilliant comment (really, I love in depth ones) I'll let you request :)
**Bows deep** What exactly do you want?

Tachzaruu on December 26, 2005, 1:19:28 AM

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Tachzaruuhiya!!! thanks for posting. i have just recently put up a picture so hopefully that will show up on the site sometime soon.

MasterSkushy on December 24, 2005, 12:51:54 PM

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MasterSkushyfan thing? why, that's jack's backpack...thing!

xxKILLtheSYSTEMxx on December 24, 2005, 10:02:07 AM

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xxKILLtheSYSTEMxxdude welcome to fan art central!
hope ta see some pics or somting from ya



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