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Sworn enemies

Kevin 11 returns from the Null Void and takes a vengeance on the Tennysons.
The story continues in the future.
Can Ben 5 000 stop him? Read, and find out the details!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: August 19, 2007 • Updated: August 19, 2007
Word count: 747 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 384

Chapter 2 - Chapter 2
Submitted: August 31, 2007 • Updated: August 31, 2007
Word count: 1118 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 339

Chapter 3 - Chapter 3
Submitted: October 11, 2007 • Updated: October 11, 2007
Word count: 1668 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 340

Chapter 4 - Chapter 4
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 1484 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 323

Chapter 5 - Chapter 5
Submitted: October 22, 2007 • Updated: October 22, 2007
Word count: 1446 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 294

Chapter 6 - Chapter 6
Submitted: October 22, 2007 • Updated: October 22, 2007
Word count: 868 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 333

Chapter 7 - Chapter 7
Submitted: October 23, 2007 • Updated: October 23, 2007
Word count: 544 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 299

Chapter 8 - Chapter 8
Submitted: October 24, 2007 • Updated: October 24, 2007
Word count: 2259 • Size: 12k • Comments: 2 • views: 333

Chapter 9 - Chapter 9
Submitted: October 26, 2007 • Updated: October 26, 2007
Word count: 1689 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 339

Chapter 10 - Chapter 10
Submitted: November 2, 2007 • Updated: November 2, 2007
Word count: 2059 • Size: 11k • Comments: 3 • views: 388

Chapter 11 - Chapter 11
Submitted: November 4, 2007 • Updated: November 4, 2007
Word count: 1404 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 339

Chapter 12 - Chapter 12
Submitted: November 7, 2007 • Updated: November 7, 2007
Word count: 2372 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 347

Chapter 13 - Chapter 13
Submitted: November 11, 2007 • Updated: November 11, 2007
Word count: 939 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 333

Chapter 14 - Chapter 14
Submitted: November 14, 2007 • Updated: November 14, 2007
Word count: 1793 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 358

Chapter 15 - Chapter 15
Submitted: December 5, 2007 • Updated: December 5, 2007
Word count: 3228 • Size: 17k • Comments: 5 • views: 304

Chapter 16 - Chapter 16
Submitted: January 1, 2008 • Updated: January 1, 2008
Word count: 5634 • Size: 31k • Comments: 6 • views: 383

Chapter 17 - Chapter 17
Submitted: January 1, 2008 • Updated: January 2, 2008
Word count: 543 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 292

Chapter 18 - Chapter 18
Submitted: January 2, 2008 • Updated: January 2, 2008
Word count: 675 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 289

Comments

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Devon11 on September 17, 2008, 12:33:52 PM

Devon11 on (Chapter: 4)
Devon11. . . . KEvin killed Max, woah dude become an author, you'd make a Ton of money <:-( Max died.

Devon11 on September 17, 2008, 12:22:59 PM

Devon11 on (Chapter: 2)
Devon11seriously become an author AND an artist

Devon11 on September 17, 2008, 12:18:57 PM

Devon11 on (Chapter: 1)
Devon11you should become an aouthor, Gee you're RELAAY GOOD!!!!!

ginathehedgehog on January 4, 2008, 1:00:56 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 18)
ginathehedgehogWow, so awesome! Are you gonna make a second one too? I hope so! Anyway, really awesome story Gee! I loved it!

ginathehedgehog on January 4, 2008, 12:57:23 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 17)
ginathehedgehogAwww, that was a cute chapter ^^

cactar on January 3, 2008, 6:47:14 AM

cactar on (Chapter: 18)
cactarThis was one great story,Gee hope to see future stories,like one with GhostKevin.

Gee on January 3, 2008, 11:45:01 PM

Gee on (Chapter: 18)
GeeThank you very much! It's good to hear that. I'm glad you find that way. Yes, I'm thinking about cintinuing this plotline, and I even have some ideas of a sequel or sequels, showing what Ben did in that eight years away from Earth.;D

cactar on January 3, 2008, 6:39:15 AM

cactar on (Chapter: 16)
cactarthe names of the aliens are Benviktor and Benmummy i think but wat ever you want.

Gee on January 3, 2008, 11:43:05 PM

Gee on (Chapter: 16)
GeeYes, I know, but only the cartoon's creators named those aliens, Ben himself didn't, so I changed their names, to fit in more...;D

cactar on January 5, 2008, 3:29:40 AM

cactar on (Chapter: index)
cactaroh,I see.

ginathehedgehog on January 1, 2008, 12:00:11 PM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 16)
ginathehedgehogAwesome chapter Gee! The fight was so intense! I can't wait to see what Ben has to do next ^^

Gee on January 1, 2008, 1:36:17 PM

Gee on (Chapter: 16)
GeeYou will.;D I'm planning to write one or maximum two more chapters, but they will be shorter ones.;D

ginathehedgehog on January 1, 2008, 1:38:51 PM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: index)
ginathehedgehogAwesome! Can't wait to read them! =D

ginathehedgehog on December 6, 2007, 2:25:55 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 15)
ginathehedgehogWow, awesome chapter! I can't wait for more!

Gee on December 6, 2007, 5:53:44 AM

Gee on (Chapter: 15)
GeeThank you!;D

cactar on December 5, 2007, 9:18:51 AM

cactar on (Chapter: 15)
cactarcan't wait 4 more!!!

Gee on December 5, 2007, 9:31:38 AM

Gee on (Chapter: 15)
GeeThanks!;D
I've recognized I've mistyped alot of words, I've already corrected them.;D