Control
Submitted July 16, 2008 Updated September 19, 2010 Status Incomplete | neh. A basic fight between Condemned and Eclipse for control over Eclipse's body. Sometimes it would go too far... More stories are to be added!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Control
Submitted: July 16, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 794 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 114
Chapter 2 - Interrogation
Submitted: August 4, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 919 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 137
Chapter 3 - Eclipse's Death
Submitted: August 5, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
Word count: 1159 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 110
Chapter 4 - When True Evil Was Born
Submitted: August 13, 2008 • Updated: August 15, 2008
Word count: 871 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 154
Chapter 5 - Evil Eclipse and his Inner Turmoil
Submitted: August 15, 2008 • Updated: August 15, 2008
Word count: 691 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 111
Chapter 6 - Questions and a Lack of Sleep
Submitted: August 30, 2008 • Updated: September 3, 2008
Word count: 1021 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 125
Chapter 7 - Condemned's Origin
Submitted: September 9, 2008 • Updated: September 9, 2008
Word count: 738 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 228
Chapter 8 - Eclipse and Condemned talk about... stuff
Submitted: September 14, 2008 • Updated: September 14, 2008
Word count: 578 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 134
Chapter 9 - If Shadow Never Stole the Rocket Shoes (what if)
Submitted: September 21, 2008 • Updated: September 21, 2008
Word count: 595 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 136
Chapter 10 - Luminos Info
Submitted: October 3, 2008 • Updated: October 3, 2008
Word count: 96 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 111
Chapter 11 - Luminos' Theme Song...
Submitted: October 10, 2008 • Updated: October 10, 2008
Word count: 355 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 118
Chapter 12 - Mr. Blue-and-damned Finds a Friend
Submitted: October 1, 2009 • Updated: October 1, 2009
Word count: 1177 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 121
Chapter 13 - Plight of the Fallen Angel
Submitted: February 4, 2010 • Updated: February 4, 2010
Word count: 1133 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 171
Chapter 14 - Rage Of the Sin Against Nature
Submitted: September 19, 2010 • Updated: September 19, 2010
Word count: 905 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 125
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Zukoinferno on September 25, 2010, 12:20:57 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2010, 3:14:49 AM
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YAY, YOU READ IT.Orly? Different? Hurrr. :B
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2010, 12:19:16 PM
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o.othat was really well-written, i must say. nice and short, but nice and awesome too. ever considered putting stuff up on fanfiction.net? you'd get tons of reviews. XD
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2010, 12:30:07 PM
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No, because no one would understand the characters.Or what the hell was going on. XD
Doomlord1234 on February 28, 2010, 6:51:17 AM
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owch....TheGameArtCritic on March 1, 2010, 7:54:07 AM
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Woaaahhhh - this was SUCH an old story! XDI really reccommend looking at the LAST chapter - everything else is pure garbage to me. ^^;
Zukoinferno on February 5, 2010, 11:07:00 AM
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I loved this. It's very dark. But i can't help but wonder why I'm appleased by this ._.OH, GOD, I'M TURNING INTO ONE OF THEM.
OUR GROUP.
WHY MEEEEEEEE!?!?
TheGameArtCritic on February 5, 2010, 11:45:54 AM
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Pffft. Chris, we all know that darkness attracts the inner evil in our hearts. XDI'm glad you liked this. Writing the transformation from a sane person to one of insanity made me nervous.
Zukoinferno on February 6, 2010, 6:46:40 AM
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KINGDOM HEAAAAAAAARTS!!!!!You seemed to capture the feeling of it well. Almost as if Sonic were a newborn, not knowing anyone. Least of all, himself.
TheGameArtCritic on February 6, 2010, 11:04:14 AM
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oh, you. XPSo having him seem to interrupt himself was a good idea?
mechadragon13 on February 4, 2010, 8:36:27 PM
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whoooooooooooah.......you're so good at writing scary thinhs that it frightens me ._.
TheGameArtCritic on February 5, 2010, 7:59:48 AM
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Oh thank you. :3This is actually what I plan to make happen to Sonic...
... AND I'M BRINGING IN A BIBLICAL CHARACTER.
OH GOD.
LUCIFER.
mechadragon13 on October 1, 2009, 12:06:47 PM
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.................... *PITYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY*TheGameArtCritic on October 1, 2009, 2:21:33 PM
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Condemned's only friend gets stabbitied. Poooooorrrr Condemned. :3mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 5:29:48 AM
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.......ah.TheGameArtCritic on October 11, 2008, 11:21:52 AM
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yes.mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:49:39 AM
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Fira: rrrrrgh....... RAH! *stomps her front paws into the ground and jets of flame start shooting from the ground*MEANWHILE!!!!!!
Twilight: heheheh. this is fuuuun. *reaches the destination* HEY ECLIPSE!! I BROUGHT THE OTHER SLOWPOKE!!!
Blizagga: RAAARGH!! *lunges towards twilight, but misses her, running right into fira*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:52:49 AM
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Eclipse: *succesfully dodges all flame bursts* Man... I should be playing DDR... Oh! Hey Twilly! Great! Let's take 'em down!OUTSIDE
Me: woot.
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:04:00 AM
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Twilight: DDR what where??? ^^Fira: get off you oaf! *pushes blizagga offa her* grrr....
Blizagga: *scrambles back onto her feet* my my, you certainly are tricky little mutts....
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:09:26 AM
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Eclipse: "mutt" is such a broad term... I personally prefer to be called a hybrid, or hedgebat ^^ *punches Fira in the face while still wearing his happy expression*Outside
Me: level up.
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:29:16 AM
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Me: *busts out laughing*Fira: *yelps from the blow and puts a paw over her nose* grrr.
Twilight: ooh, that had to hurt.
Blizagga: this will too! *covers her paws in ice and claws at twilly*
Twilight: *jumps ON HER PAW* it probably would, if you could hit me ^^ *uppercuts blizagga*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:30:39 AM
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Eclipse: *golf clap*OUTSIDE
Me: major lol.
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:52:00 AM
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Me: *still dying of laughter*Twilight: *lands on her feet and bows* thatnk you, thank you. i'm here all night! ^^
Blizagga: *recovers from the blow* grrrrr..... *suddendly turns around and goes right for eclipse*
Fira: *goes for eclipse from the opposite dirction*
Twilight: eclipse, look out!!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:54:52 AM
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Eclipse: hmph. Don't you guys watch cartoons? *sidesteps so that they crash into each other*OUTSIDE
Me: OK WTF ROFLMAO!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 5:24:10 AM
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*fira and blizagga try to slow down, but they bash right into each other*Twilight: *falls to the floor, laughing like crazy* HAHAHAHAHAAAA!! ECLIPSE, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!
Me: *see twilight's post*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 8:23:27 AM
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Eclipse: thank'ya very much. *Elvis pose*OUTSIDE
Me: XDDDDDDDDDDD
mechadragon13 on October 5, 2008, 10:17:22 AM
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Twilight: *still ROFL* *fira and blizagga groan, and stumble back onto their feet*
Me: *joins you in all teh XDDDDDDDD* OMG ELVIS XDDDDD
TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 11:25:03 AM
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Eclipse: oh goody. You're awake. We can have more fun. I now see why Condemned likes all this mayhem...OUTSIDE
Meh: lol Elvis.
mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 7:12:24 AM
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Twilight: *manages to conpose herself and stands up, still grinning* watch youself eclipse, or i might end up facing three nutcases instead of two XDFira: very funny.
Blizagga: simply hilarious.
twilight: i know, riiiiiight? *sticks her tongue out at them*
Me: XDDDD
TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 8:45:49 AM
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OUTSIDE:Me: XDDDDDD yes.
MIND!
Eclipse: aww, Twilly... you know I would never hurt YOUUUU... *jumps up into the air (remember, he can jump pretty dang high), and lands a kick on Blizzaga* just them ^^
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 9:09:44 AM
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Twilight: *mimics his move, cuz she can jump pretty high too* i knowwwww, i was just goofin' around ^^Fira+Blizagga: *are driven into the ground*
Twilight: *jumps off* dun, dun, dun, another one bites the dust-ah!
Me: XDDDDD
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 9:48:29 AM
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Eclipse: XDDDDDDDOutside
Me: I LOVE THOSE GUYS!!! XDDDDDD
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:16:21 AM
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Fira: *suddendly flips up and pins twilight down with her paw* and another one downBlizagga: *does the same wih eclipse* and another one down,
Fira+Blizagga: *grinning* another one bites the dust!
Me: oooh, that was a good one....
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:23:52 AM
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Eclipse: *kicks Blizzaga off like Simba does with Scar* I didn't know you guys knew Queen! I thought you guys were like old ladies, or something!OUTSIDE
Me: buuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrn
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:34:41 AM
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Twilight: *claws at fira's face, forcing her to retreat* yeah seriously.Fira: *retreats* we're in your HEAD, girl.
Blizagga: *is knocked off, then stands again* we know everything you do.
Twilight: ah. umm...... interesting to know.... *blushes*
Me: ooooooooooooooooooh!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:37:02 AM
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Me: ooooooooooo...................................... XDMIIIIIIIND
Eclipse: ok... Rawr, i kill you dead. *punches Blizzaga, then follows up with a tripping*
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:54:08 AM
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Me: *cough*plotpointscan'tdie*cough*Blizagga: *is hit, then falls over* AGH! grr... *wraps one of her tails around his ankle and pulls on it, making him fall backwards*
Fira: *pounces towards the tripped eclipse*
Twilight: ECLIPSE! *spinballs into blizagga, unwrapping her tail from eclipse's ankle*
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:02:35 AM
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Eclipse: thank you! *dodge rolls out of the way*Sora: STOP IIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!! FAKEEEEERRRRRRR!!!! *sniffle*
Eclipse: *kills Sora*
Outside
Me: more lawlz.
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:13:31 AM
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Me: heck yes.Twilight: no prob ^^
Fira: *hurtles past eclipse* huhh?
Blizagga: rrrrrr.....
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:18:02 AM
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Eclipse: hi.Outside
Me: XDDDD
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:23:53 AM
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Twilight: lol. *thinks about what fira said and blushes again*Fira: aww.... we have an embarassed little mutt, dont we?
Blizagga: heheheh... what do you say to spilling?
Fira: spilling would be humiliating!!! i love it.
Twilight: *turns RED* you wouldnt..........!
Fira+Blizagga: we would.
Me: uh oh.
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:28:44 AM
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Outside:Me: uh oh?
Mind
Eclipse: what is it THIS time?
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:34:57 AM
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Me: ARENT YOU PAYING ATTENTION???Fira: oh yes. blizagga, do you remember that time on the roof of hn? that was sooooo cute.
Blizagga: you mean that one with liiiightning? ohhh i remember thaaaaat....
Twilight: *is redder than knux* STFU!!!! *jumps into the air and goes to spinball them from above*
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 12:03:54 PM
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Me: whaaaaaat happeeeeeened............MIND
Eclipse: wait - huh?
mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 2:47:28 AM
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Fira+Blizagga: *jump away from the spinball* Fira: oh you mean she never told you?
Blizagga: interestiiiing.....
Twilight: SHUT UP!! *kicks fira in the jaw, knocking her over, then uppercuts blizagga, sending her flying*
Me: nothing bad really... it's just.... that memory's important to her and she doesnt want it used against her in any way....
Twilight: *is feeling a strange mix of anger and embarassment*
TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 8:28:29 AM
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Eclipse: Twilly... it can't be THAT bad...OUTSIDE
Me: i bet it's bad.
mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 11:00:02 AM
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Me: it's not bad! it's just... private. she prefers not to have it proclaimed to the world ^^;;Twilight: rrrrrrAGH!! *pounces towards them, claws out and teeth bared*
Fira; whoa hey. *dodges to the side* watch it!!
Blizagga: someone's piiiissed.....
Twilight: NO S**T!! *immediately tuns and scratches blizagga across the face*
TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 2:21:46 PM
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Eclipse: Twilight! Calm DOWN! You MUST remain calm during the course of this battle or they will use your emotions against you!menwhial
Me: such a hypocrite... -_-;;;
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:13:07 AM
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Twilight: *turns to eclipse, still enraged* oh really eclipse?! how would you feel if condemned decided to yell your deepest secrets to the world?! HUH?!Fira: *tries to get back on her paws
Twilight: *kicks fira in the face, causing her to fall down again* *yelling* STAY DOWN!!!!
Fira: *whimpers*
Me: whao...... twilly's piiiiissed.......
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:18:14 AM
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Eclipse: that's not the point, Twilight... look at yourself... what you're doing is a little... cruel. I KNOW they are daemons. I KNOW they were going to share something you wished they didn't... but... do you really have to hit them THAT hard...?meanwhile
Me: is Eclipse SERIOUSLY going soft on the daemons? That's so unlike him...
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:21:59 AM
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Twilight: *half growling* eclipse..... the daemons are to me like condemned was to you. they hurt me, eclipse. they hurt me bad. and now that i have a chance to give them a taste of their own medicine, you have the nerve to tell me to let up??Blizagga: *is laying on her belly with her ears flat against her head and her tail wrapped around her front paws, whimpering*
Fira: *is too scared to move* *whimper*
Me: oh my god..... the daemons are scared of her......
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:42:31 AM
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Me: O.O I think I'm a little scared as well...MIND
Eclipse: Yes. I'm not letting you go any further with this. I refuse to compare them with Condemned, Twilly, because they're AFRAID. LOOK AT THEM. They are shaking in their fur! Condemned does NOT feel fear. THAT is the difference. Don't hurt them anymore, Twilight... they've had enough... surly this will at least teach them a lesson...
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 9:14:49 AM
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Twilight: *looks back at the daemons, and the rage in her eyes fades into shock* did..... did i....?Fira: *takes her chance and scurries over to blizagga, tails between her legs*
Blizagga: *has a look of genuine fear in her eyes, she's trembling slightly*
Fira: *is pretty much the same as blizagga*
Twilight: ....i........... oh my god.....
Me: okay, she stopped....
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 9:20:55 AM
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Me: GOOD. Liek, holy CRAP.Mind
Eclipse: there... it's all good now... everything has calmed down... they won't talk now that they've been terrified, so your secret is safe...
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 9:52:36 AM
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Twilight: ......... *suddendly drops down onto her knees and punches the ground* how could i let myself lose it like that?! how could i?! i've never lost it like that before... never.....never........... *tears start to roll* Fira+Blizagga: *stop trembling, and look at each other, both wearing expressions of astonishment*
Me: oops. guilt attack.
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:02:18 AM
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Eclipse: Twilly... *sits down next to her* it's ok... we all lose ourselves at SOME point... this is just proof that you're like any other normal mobian... don't let guilt eat at you like that...OUTSIDE
Me: um.... how can he say that when most of his LIFE he was eaten away by guilt. MY GOD.
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:11:32 AM
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Me: maybe he doesnt want twilly to suffer the same fate...MIND!!!
Twilight: *tears flow freely* i know, eclipse.... it's just that.... it's never happened like this before...... i've never been this enraged in my LIFE!! it felt horrible after i realized what i was doing...... *wipes her tears*
Fira+Blizagga: *look back at twilight and sorta just sit there for a bit....*
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:21:59 AM
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Eclipse: That's a feeling that i share as well... you're not alone, Twily... you don't have to cry...menwhiarlz
Me: the daemons can attack them at any point... why won't they?
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:38:30 AM
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Me: ...i have no idea......Twilight: *sniffles* ......... *suddendly turns around and hugs eclipse* thank you eclipse.... thanks a whole lot...... i really needed that.
Fira+Blizagga: ........ *stay in the same position*
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:40:52 AM
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Eclipse: *hugs back, and smiles* you ok, now?OUSIDE.
Me: westside!
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 11:51:33 AM
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Twilight: *nods and smiles* yeah. *lets go of eclipse and stands up and looks around* wait.... where'd the daemons go?*without twilight and eclipse noticing, they had run back into the burning and frozen city. blizagga had put out all the flames, and fira, had unfreezed the other half of the city*
Twilight: w-whoa.
Me: whoa is right.... O.O
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 2:01:12 PM
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Me: they're helping. Why are they helping?Mind
Eclipse: this is strange... i thought they were malevolent, and that was it...
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 2:05:06 PM
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Me: i have no clue..... maybe they have a conscience....MIND!!
twilight: i doont think so eclipse..... they might be more like mobians than we thought..... you know, more mikenno than condemned......... maybe?
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 2:27:33 PM
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Eclipse: it really depends on their final move. Will they attack, or stay true to their change of heart?OUTSIDE
Me: duuuuuuuuuuude.
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 2:37:24 PM
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Fira+Blizagga: *walks out from the somewhat-destryed city, matching their steps so they walk in unison*Twilight: well, here they come. we'll find out soon enough.
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 8:27:26 AM
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Eclipse: *gets ready for a sudden attack*OUTSIIIIIIIIIIDE
Me: he's paranoid.
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:14:21 AM
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Me: obviously. XDMIND!!!
Twilight: *watches the daemons carefully, ready to fight if necessary, but isnt as paranoid as eclipse*
Daemons: *keeps walking, step, step, step, until they're about 20 feet away from twilight and eclipse* ..... *suddendly sit down and rest their heads on their paws*
Twilight: ...... *slowly starts walking towards them*
OUTSIDE!!!
me: O.O she's insane.
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 11:21:16 AM
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Me: she gonna DIIIIEEEE... O.Omeanwhile
Eclipse: *building up for the "sudden attack"*
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:39:12 AM
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Daemons: *stay in the same positions, tails sweeping back and forth*Twilight: *is slowly moving towards them, then stops 5 feet from them and sits down* ........you're not attacking me.
Fira: we are not.
Twilight: why?
Blizagga: we have felt your power, twilight.
Fira: you have earned our respect.
Twilight: and you mine.
Me: OOOOOOOH!
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 11:47:35 AM
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Eclipse: *was going to pounce on them but stops himself and falls over* WOAH! AH! ouch...MEANWHILEZ
Me: dude. Dude that's AWESOME!
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:06:37 PM
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Me: NO EFFING KIDDING.Twilight: *winces at the sound of eclipse falling and looks back* eclipse? you ok back there??
Daemons: *are doing their best to stifle a laugh*
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 12:12:17 PM
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Eclipse: grrr... yeah... I'm fine... *gets up and tries his best to not look embarrassed*outside
Me: lol XD
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:45:08 PM
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Twilight: *laughs and stands up*Daemons: *stand up as well*
Fira: we have decided to give you something.
Blizagga: a new ability.
Twilight: ???
Daemons: *raise a paw and place it on opposite shoulders*
Twilight: *gasps as she feels energy run through her*
me: !!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 12:46:26 PM
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Eclipse: *watches carefully, making sure it's not killing Twilight*OUTSIDE
Me: He's still paranoid.
mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 5:34:29 AM
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Daemons: *back off*twilight: *holds her head, as if she had a bad headache, and her claws grow huge. her muzzle gets longer and her tail splits into four. her ears get a bit bigger and her eyes change color, so one is red-orange and the other is ice blue* ah...... *looks at her hands* what did you....?
Fira: we know how much you hate having to go into your full wolf form when facing powerful enemies.
Blizagga: so we have given you an alternative. if you feel the full form isnt necessary, you can call upon bits and pieces.
Fira: dont worry, the headache only occured because it was the first time.
Blizagga: you wont have it every time you change.
Twilight: *stares at her hands* whoah......
me: i'll say!
TheGameArtCritic on October 11, 2008, 11:23:14 AM
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Me: DAAAAAYYYUUUM, LADY!MIND
Eclipse: O_o
mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 12:38:37 PM
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Twilight: ...and you say i can do this at will?Daemons: *nod*
Twilight: lets see..... *closes her eyes, and her claws go back to normal, and her ears shrink back donw, but she keeps the tails and the eyes* ....cool......
Daemons: *smile*
Me: so the change of heart is permanent then.
TheGameArtCritic on October 11, 2008, 3:39:41 PM
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Me: whee! Now if only we can do that with Condemned and Vorace... >:3MIND
Eclipse: I guess i should go then, since i am no longer need.
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:01:44 AM
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Twilight: *turns completely back to normal* i guess...... *runs up to him and glomps him* thanks for everything, eclipse.....Me: dawwwww.....
TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 11:04:26 AM
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Me: wheeeee.....MIND
Eclipse: hey, no biggie. You guys have helped me a ton. Now I'll help YOU a ton.
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:29:23 AM
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Twilight: ^^ thanks again.....Me: did eclipse use incorrect grammar or is he gonna do something?
TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 11:48:56 AM
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Me: he meant he's going to help in the future as well, if needed (hopefully not, but considering our track record.... >_>)mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 12:04:26 PM
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Me: point ^^;;Twilight: *lets go of eclipse and puts both hands on his shoulder* you have no clue how thankful i am, eclipse.
TheGameArtCritic on October 13, 2008, 6:19:52 AM
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Eclipse: hey, like i said before, it's no big deal. You did most of the work, anyways... I was pretty much the cheerleader XDOUSIDE
Me: that was a weird metaphor... O_O
mechadragon13 on October 13, 2008, 6:26:55 AM
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Me: agreed XDTwilight: *laughs* well, you must be the greatest cheerleader on the planet then XD *lets go of eclipse and smile*
TheGameArtCritic on October 13, 2008, 8:41:26 AM
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Eclipse: *laughs* thanks! *looks around* well... everything seems to be in order here... though it pains me to say this, I'll have to return to my ghost form outside your mind, and YOU need to wake up. *fades away*MEANWHILE
G. Eclipse: *reappears*
Me: WAUGH!!! *falls down in suprise*
mechadragon13 on October 14, 2008, 3:01:56 AM
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Me: jeez, critic you could have expected that XDMIND!!!
Twilight: *turns back to the daemons* ......thank you.
Daemons: *dip their heads in reply*
Fira: you should go.
Blizagga: dont keep em waiting.
Twilight: *nods*
OUTSIDE!!!
Twilight: *wakes up* urgh....... *sits up* well THAT was fun!! XD
Me: *sweatdrop* just like twilly to be happy 'bout everything.......
TheGameArtCritic on October 14, 2008, 6:00:09 AM
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G. Eclipse: <yes. FUN. As in no, not really...>Me: and jut like 'Clipsey to be a pessamist.
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 2:31:21 AM
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Twilight: eclipse, you FAIL at being happy. -_-Me: and you fail at taking things seriously!!
Twilight: *groans and rolls her eyes*
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 8:39:07 AM
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Me: we all fail. End of story.G. Eclipse: <*sniffle* I WANT TO BE ALIVE AGAAIIIIIIN!!!>
Me: that was... random...
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 9:31:17 AM
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Me: *POOF looks different* huh? oh. my appearance has changededed. i is COLORFUUUUUUUL!!! *flaily arms* ^o^Twilight: ......wtf?
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 9:46:28 AM
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Me: whaaaaa?...mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 10:00:37 AM
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Me: i changed mah apperance!! i found an 2006 pic my friend lynn made for me with my first sonic character! mish the red fox! i found it and fell in love with it again. ^^ then i decided to base my mobian appearance off my personality and not my appearance ^^ i is still a hedgefox tho ^^Twilight: colorful. i'll say XD. XD
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 10:06:23 AM
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Me: that's totally what i did with my raccooness!!!! HIGH FIVE!!!!mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 10:13:03 AM
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Me: YEAH!! *returns high five*Twilight: i was created during her emo stage -_-
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 10:17:09 AM
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Me: awwwww Twillyyyyyyy...G. Eclipse: <I'm sorry...>
Me: Eclipse was a character I created during the HUGE part of my obsession with Sonic Unleashed.... or maybe it was before thaaaat....
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 10:34:28 AM
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Twilight: its ok. i'm less emo nowwwwww ^^Me: LOL. hey, where'd lupe go to?
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 10:42:29 AM
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Lupe: *has run off*Me: DAMN THAT PANTHERWOLF!!!!
G. Eclipse: <it's fine so long as he doesn't rampage as Condemned...>
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 11:12:46 AM
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Me: yeahhhh...... we dont want him to go crazy around the HN grounds......Twilight: ditto.
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 11:19:45 AM
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Me: that would be chaotic.G. Eclipse: <what IS it with this world and the word "chaos" it's EVERYWHERE! EVEN IN THE MUSIC!!!!*>
*see Open Your Heart lyrics for proof
mechadragon13 on October 16, 2008, 10:45:41 AM
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Me: well, there's both chaos and order in the world. one cant exist without the other. seems like chaos is the one we notice more....Twilight: yeah, no one notices the calmness..... just the bad stuff.
TheGameArtCritic on October 16, 2008, 11:42:09 AM
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Me: that's because there is more bad than good, at the moment...Luminos: like what?
Me: like you, and Eclipse, and Dr. Eggman.
Luminos: Eclipse? AND WHY ME???
Me: it's a secret! Sssshhh!
mechadragon13 on October 19, 2008, 10:30:16 AM
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Me+Twilight: *smack you upside the head in unison* STFU!!!TheGameArtCritic on October 19, 2008, 12:03:52 PM
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me: owwww... *whimper* 8CLuminos: i don' geddit!
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 3:23:14 AM
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Me+Twilly: you're not supposed to!! ^^;TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 6:14:01 AM
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Luminos: you're keeping something from me...Me: um... duh.
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 6:58:45 AM
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Me: like we said, you dont need to know yeeeeet! ^^Twilight: oh we can tell him. ok luminos, when a mommy and a daddy loe each other veeeeery much-----
Me: oh jeez, dont tell him THAAAT!!! XDDDD
Twilight: what? he wanted to know!! XD
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 8:35:14 AM
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Luminos: D8Me: .... uh...
Luminos: D8
Me: aaahhh.... >_>
Luminos: DDDDDDDDDDD8
Me: ah!! ok!!! stop staring like that!!!
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 9:00:17 AM
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Me+Twilight: *are currently laughing their asses off*TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 9:12:44 AM
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Me: SHADDUP!!Luminos: *gets in my face* D8
Me: *creeped out*
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 9:39:27 AM
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Me+Twilight: *stop for a second, then start up again* XDDDDTheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 9:45:00 AM
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Me" *pushes Luminos off*Luminos: *falls down laughing*
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:07:18 AM
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Me+Twilight: *still laughing, almost crying*TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:31:36 AM
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Luminos: woof... ok... yeah.. done laughing... *wipes a tear from his eye* pffft.... heheheheh...Me: ok, that's NOT done...
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:41:55 AM
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Me: *see previous comment*Twilight: gahahah..... oh jeez, that was funny
...............
DDDDDDDD8 *right in critic's face*
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:48:03 AM
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me: WHOAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!!!!!!1 *smacks her* DON'T DO THAAAAAT!!!!!!mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:02:52 AM
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Twilight: AHH! HEY!! *growlz at chu, right in your face*Me: *laughing even harder*
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 11:09:55 AM
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Me: that makes me uncomfortable. I have artist powahz and I'm not afraid to use it. *snaps fingers*Aladdin and Abu: *poof appears...... in the cave of Wonders*
Aladdin: look at all the cheezburgahs here! Cheezburgah! Cheezburgah! CHEEEEEEZEBURGAH!
Abu: *runs up to get gold*
Aladdin: WAAAAAAAAAAAAIT.
Abu: *stops in midair* D:
Aladdin: those AREN'T cheezburgahs. It's only gold. *walks off*
Abu: i don't WANT a f***ing cheeseburger! *pouts, and walks*
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:34:13 AM
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Twilight: *opens her mouth to say something, then closes it again and just shakes her head slowly* ...........weirdy.Me: GAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 11:57:34 AM
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me: it's from something called Aladdin and the Cave of Cheezburgers. If you plan to watch it, be areful, it says f*** a lot.mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:30:15 PM
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Me: LOLZ!!!twilight: you're both weirdys......
Me: and you arent? XD
twilight: -_-
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 6:04:33 AM
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me: point. you fail.mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:07:20 AM
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Twilight: STFU, critic, its mish's fault.Me: moody much? XD
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:10:56 AM
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me: well... y'know... your emo time...G. Eclipse: <that has nothing to do with it.>
me: LIFE!!!
G. Eclipse: <AAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!!!> *dissappears*
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:26:02 AM
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Twilight: huh? eclipse?!Me: critic, wtf happened??
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:32:12 AM
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Me: ANGEL. HE SAID. SOMETHING!!! SOMETHING ABOUT BRINGING ECLIPSE BACK, OR SOMETHING THEN KILLING HIM HIMSELF OR SOMETHING.G. Eclipse: *GONE*
Me: we need to get to his graaaaave....
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:49:44 AM
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Twilight: *grabs critic and mish without hesitating and guns it to eclipse's grave* here?? now what?? to we have to dig him out?TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:53:48 AM
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me: errr... not neccessary.Grave: *a small lump can be seen rising from the ground, pounding from underneath. Finally, and hand breaks through, tips bloody from excessive digging*
me: AHHH!!! DIEZOMBIE!!!! *stomps on the hand*
Eclipse: *still underground* owww....
mechadragon13 on October 22, 2008, 3:12:04 AM
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Twilight: critic, you retard!!! *grabs the hand and pulls on it really hard, and manages to pull out eclipse far enough so that his upper body is showing* eclipse, are you ok?!?!?!?!?Me: <:(
TheGameArtCritic on October 22, 2008, 8:53:45 AM
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Eclipse: *spits out some dirt* I'm... alive... owww... and hurting... *pulls himself out fully, and shakes off the rest of the dirt like a dog* I'm going to have to thank Angel later...Me: :O
Eclipse: Critic?
Me: :O
Eclipse: oh no...
Me: SQWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! *glompeth*
Eclipse: oy, Critic... stop... I ache all over...
Me: oh quit whining. Angel wants to kill you!
mechadragon13 on October 22, 2008, 9:06:08 AM
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Me: *is pissed off at the soud of angel's name* he dealt with mikki. now he's after you. thats why he rought you back, so he could kill you himself.Twilight: who's angel? and what happened to mikki???
TheGameArtCritic on October 22, 2008, 9:22:08 AM
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Angel: hiMe: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHGH!!!! *shields Eclipse from Angel*
Eclipse: ... -_-
Me: also, Angel SERIOUSLY hurt Mikki... DON'T YOU EVEN THINK OF TOUCHIN' CLIPSEY, NOW!!!!
Angel: relax. Newman talked me out of it ^^
Me: wha?
Angel: *teleports so that he's right behind Eclipse* we need more help if we want to purify the world though...
Eclipse: ok, how come EVERYONE want to make me join them???
Angel: because you are powerful and unstable.
Me:... which leads to easy manipulation of a nuclear missle.
Eclipse: I'm NOT a nuclear missle... *pout*
Angel: *SLAMS HIS FIST INTO THE BACK OF ECLIPSE'S HEAD*
Eclipse: O_O *blacked out*
Angel: dispite my growling and tugging of Eclipse, takes the hedgebat, and teleports*
Me: D8
everyone: O_O
Me: D8
everyone: <_<
Me: WHYYYYYYYYYY???? WE LITERALLY JUST GOT HIM BACK!!!!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 23, 2008, 2:20:30 AM
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Twilight: grrrrrrr. GODDAMMIT!! *goes daemon and gives chase unrelentingly, nearing the speed of sound*Me: DAAAAANG. she's fast when she's pissed..... i need a plane. BRB!! *runs to go get a plane*
TheGameArtCritic on October 23, 2008, 6:07:11 AM
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Angel: *slams Eclipse down on a cold steel chair in Inderretta's old hideout. The chair is attached to a strange machine that sends shockwaves or something to the head*Eclipse: auugh... ow... ANGEL! LET ME GO!
Newman: sorry Clipsey... can't do that...
Eclipse: Newman...
Newman: At least I convinced Angel not to KILL you ^^;;
meanwhile
Me: oh DANG OH DANG!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 2:51:56 AM
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Me: *lands the heli/plane next tocritic* GET IN!!!!Meanwhile...
Twilight: *sees the base and keeps running towards it at top speed* rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrAAAAAAAAAARRRRRH!!! *runs into the wall of the building, making a huge hole, and keeps running*
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 6:06:51 AM
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Newman: *ACTIVATES A COMPUTER ATTACHED TO THE MACHINE*machine: *whirrrrrr buzzzzzzz*
Eclipse: *gets shocked with tons of electricity in the brain* AUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!! *starts twitching and spazzing out like a guy in an electric chair*
computer: MEMORY WITHDRAWEL AT 10%
meanwhile
Me: yeah, we're screwed.
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 6:44:02 AM
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Me: NO WE'RE NOT!!! *sticks a chaos emerald into a slot in the cockpit* didnt think we'd have another one, didja? >:D HANG ON!!! *TURBO*MEANWHILEZ*
Twilight: *burns into the room and lets out a monstrous roar* LET. HIM. GO!!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 8:28:45 AM
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Angel: you have GOT to be kidding me.Newman: 'fraid not, new friend.... but we can't have her meddle... not now... *leaps up into the air, and meteor kicks Twilight*
Computer: MEMORY WITHDRAWAL AT 30%
Angel: *puts a forcefield around the machine and computer*
Eclipse: *still being shocked, his eyes have faded to a pure white* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:19:12 PM
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Twilight: ECLIPSE!!!! *swats newman away, and freezes him to the ground when he falls back down* you let him go, angel, or i'll rip your little wings off!!! *snarl*Me: HERE! *lands on the roof* OUT! *jumps out of the copter/plane and looks for a way in*
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:27:39 PM
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Angel: I dare you.Newman: YEAH! HE DARES YOU! >:(
Angel: you're not helping... -_-
Newman: sorry...
Computer: MEMORY WITHDRAWAL AT 60%
Angel: you can't break the force field... not without my command.
Newman: exactly! *charges at Twilight again, this time successfully whomping her onto the ground*
Eclipse: *goes silent. Though his eyes are open, he appears to have fainted from shock trauma. His hands tighten and untighten on the arms of the metal chair he is strapped to as he is electrocuted*
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:31:32 PM
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Twilight: AH! *is whomped into* you think you can take me on, eclipse clone? HA! *smashes him into the ground, then so quickly you cant see her, she has pinned angel down* i accept your dare!! *closes her jaws around his wing and starts pulling HARD*TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:37:26 PM
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Angel: AAAUUGH!!! *as if praying* I ACCEPT THIS SUFFERING TO REPENT FOR THE MURDERS I HAVE COMMITED IN THE NAME OF GOD! MAY I GO TO HEAVEN WHEN ALL OF MY CLEANSING IS COMPLETE! AAAHH!!Computer: MEMORY WITHDRAWAL AT 90%
Newman: eep! I can't let you hurt him! *gets up, and pulls Twilight off*
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:48:29 PM
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Twilight: you PEST!!! *smacks him off with her tails, then resumes attempting to rip angel's wing off. she has already drawn blood and ripped part of the muscle* *triple voice* you get what you deserve, angel. this is for mikki, and for eclipse!!!! *pulls once more and almost pulls his wing right off*TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:55:10 PM
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Angel: RAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!! *kicks her off, wing weeping mass amounts of blood. He glares at Twilly, and winces in pain* you will pay. Agh... *wing slowly and painfully starts to regnerate*Computer: MEMORY WITHDRAWAL AT 100%. BEGIN FALSE MEMORY INJECTION.
Machine: *makes a reverse bzzzzz noise, and the color of the electricity turns from a white, to a dark red*
Me: *bursts in* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *using my amazing force-artist powers, I throw Angel against a wall, breaking his concentration and forcefield*
Me: TWILLY!!! DESTROY THE MACHINE!!!
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:07:04 PM
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Twilight: wait, what'll ahppen to eclipse?! he has no memories!!!TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:13:14 PM
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Me: IT DOESN'T MATTER RIGHT NOW!!! DESTROY THE MACHINE BEFORE HE'S TURNED AGAINST US!!!Computer: FALSE MEMORY INJECTION AT 10%
Me: AH!!!!
Newman: I STOP YOU CRITIC!! *runs at me*
Me: *flicks him away*
Newman: *crashes into the same wall*
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:20:23 PM
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Twilight: allRIGHT!!!! *rams right into the machine and tears at it with her claws, and after ripping it open, the starts knawing at the wires and cables in the mackine* RAAAAARGHH!!!TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:26:35 PM
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machines: *EXPLODEDY!!!*Computer: ERROR: DISCONNECTION WITH SYSTEM A3253666. PLEASE RECONNECT YOUR SYSTEM TO RETURN TO PROGRA -
Me: *smashes the computer* yeah, no thanks.
Eclipse: *shakes his head and blinks a few times. He looks around confused. His irises are a milky white*
Me: oh noooooooo... he's like Shadow in Sonic Heroes! AHHHHHHGH!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:38:17 PM
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Twilight: I TOLD YOU IT WOULD BE BAD!!!!!!TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:46:28 PM
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Eclipse: where am i?Me: no time to explain. We need to go. Now. Really. *grabs him*
Eclipse: hey!
Angel: *concious* YOU WILL NOT ESCAPE!!!
Me: errr... yeah, no. We will.
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:50:13 PM
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Twilight: *suddendly turns around and pins angel to the wall, growing at him* shut up, angel, or i'll get rid of your other wing too.TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 2:00:55 PM
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Eclipse: Hey! What are you DOING???Me: um... threatening him?
Eclipse: *wrenches his hand away from me, and ruuns up to Twilly* I'm not letting you hurt someone...
Me: ARGH! YOU GOT HIS FACTS ALL MIXED UP!!! WE NEED TO GO NOW!!!
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 2:03:36 PM
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Twilight: *growls at angel* you got lucky this time, angel. pray to your "god" that i dont find you again. *lets go of angel and in the same movement, picks eclipse up carefully in her jaws* struggle and you'll get hurt, eclipse! get on critic, mish!Me: awesome. *jumps on*
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 2:10:53 PM
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Me: coolio! No death! *jumps on as well*Eclipse: ...huh?
Me: he doesn't remember his own name, Twilly...
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 2:14:26 PM
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Twilight: *muffled by eclipse* whatev. we do that later. *runs out of the same hoe she made to get in and runs like hell*TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 2:15:54 PM
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Eclipse: AHHH!! PUT ME DOWN!!!Me: CALM DOWN!!!
Eclipse: WHO THE HELL ARE YOU PEOPLE?????
Me: uh... WE ARE THE PEOPLE.
Eclipse: that doesn't help.
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 2:18:38 PM
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Me: if you struggle, you'll get hurt! those teeth arent just for show!!TheGameArtCritic on October 25, 2008, 2:07:27 AM
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Eclipse: great. I can't remember anything and I'm being kidnapped by a dog theme, and a crazy raccoon.Me: that hurts me, man. GO TWILLY!!!
Angel: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 25, 2008, 6:12:23 AM
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Twilight: *seriously hits the turbo*Me: see ya later, angel!!! HAHAHAA!
TheGameArtCritic on October 25, 2008, 6:15:46 AM
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Eclipse: *clinging to Twilight for dear life* AAAUUUUUUGH!!! STOP STOP!!! AH!!!! *eyes, though still pretty and white and stuff, are full of fear*Me pffft. Noob.
mechadragon13 on October 25, 2008, 6:18:41 AM
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Twilight: *through eclipse* do you mind letting go, i cant breathe!!TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 2:53:30 AM
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Eclipse: *lets go, but is still terrified*Me: i think he's scared of you, Twilight.
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 5:55:43 AM
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Twilight: hey, i was scared of MYSELF when i first turned, he has an excuse.Me: XD
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 5:58:57 AM
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Me: ok yes... but it feels wrong. He's like a video game who's memory has been wiped... AND WE WERE AT THE FINAL BOSS TOO! NOOOOO!!!Eclipse: *calms down a bit* ok, WHAT is that raccoon rambling about?
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 6:20:05 AM
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Me: your memory was wiped! your name is eclipse the hedgebat, you're our friend!!Twilight: i say we wait till we get back....
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 6:21:49 AM
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Eclipse: how do i know you're not lying to me?Me: aaaaaaand his paranoia shines even through amnesia.
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 6:50:57 AM
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Twilight: you'll have to trust us.TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 6:54:23 AM
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Eclipse: that's kinda hard, considering i don't even know you.Me: *sniffle* :(
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:06:44 AM
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Me: you'll get to know us eventually.TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:16:11 AM
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Eclipse: Um... right... I'd rather not be kidnapped simply to know someone...Me: WE'RE NOT KIDNAPPING YOU!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:28:28 AM
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Twilight: ugh. he's a lost cause.....TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:32:47 AM
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Me: amnesia is rather annoying -_-;;; ..... and so is Eclipse's tendency to not be able to trust people...Eclipse: that one badger who i forgot the name of told me about all these terrible people in the world...
Me: ah. That must be the 10% of the false memories...
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:47:02 AM
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Me: the badger himself is one of those terrible people. he was trying to trick you.twilight: *cough*notgonnawork*cough*
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:50:09 AM
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Eclipse: HOW DO I KNOW YOU'RE NOT TRYING TO TRICK ME???? I KNEW HIM FOR ALL I CAN REMEMBER OF MY LIFE!!! WHERE IS HE????Me: uhhhhhhrrrmmmm.... >_>
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 8:08:00 AM
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twilight: he's dead. you killed him.TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 10:31:54 AM
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Eclipse: w-what? NO! No you're lying! I wouldn't do that!Me: how can you say that when you don't even know who you are?
mechadragon13 on October 27, 2008, 2:29:40 AM
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Twilight: the raccoon's right, eclipse. you dont even know your own name.Me: ugh.
TheGameArtCritic on October 27, 2008, 6:09:04 AM
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Eclipse: well NOW i do!Me: sigh...
mechadragon13 on October 27, 2008, 6:51:32 AM
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Me: because we told you, dum-dum.TheGameArtCritic on October 27, 2008, 8:53:45 AM
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Eclipse: well... yeah... but... shut up!Me: don't tell Mish to shut up!
Eclipse: i think i just did. Also; GET ME OUT OF THE JAWS OF THIS THING!!
Me: we can't... we are helping you escape...
Eclipse: you mean kidnapping me.
Me: OY! STOP SAYING THAT!
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 7:59:11 AM
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Me, ok, now you're starting to piss me off. *to critic* can i KO him? pleeeeease?Twilight: *eye roll* *to eclipse* hey, you arent particularly tasty either, ya know.
TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 8:31:27 AM
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Eclipse: well, you can't expect me to bathe in a garlic sauce.Me: i actually think that's the best thing tyo do >_>
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 8:35:21 AM
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Twilight: strawberry would be better.Me: *KONK* *whacks eclipse with teh wrench*
TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 9:14:40 AM
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Eclipse: URK! *blinks a few times, then goes unconcious*Me: that's better.
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 9:16:41 AM
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Me: he's not gonna like us for it later though.Twilight: no shoot.
TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 9:17:27 AM
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me: actually that might make him even MORE suspicious of us...mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 9:22:10 AM
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Me: obviously.Twilight: *confused look* .....why didnt i swear?! AAAAH!! I cant say "shoot"!!! AAAAAAAA!!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 9:42:24 AM
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Me: Twilly, you DID swear.mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 10:00:20 AM
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Twilight: eh? AAAH!! i'm confuzzled!!!Me: do you have the old fanart layout? the dark gray one that has inuyasha at the top?
TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 10:03:15 AM
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me: yes i do.mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 10:11:59 AM
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Me: AH! thats why. the new fanart layout edits swears so that "s***" is shoot, a** is @$$, and... i dont know what f*ck is.Twilight: ......are we there yet?
TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 10:14:25 AM
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Me: ya mean at HNHQ? By the looks of it, yes.Eclipse: *groan*
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 10:24:11 AM
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Twilight: oh yay. *stops at the entrance and spits eclipse out* remind me not to do that again.TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 10:34:01 AM
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Me: ok XDEclipse: *shivers, and gets up super fast* AHHH!!! Where the hell did you take me????
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 10:56:29 AM
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Me: HNHQ. you'll be safe here.TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 10:58:49 AM
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Eclipse: safe? SAFE??? From WHAT??? Right now, to me, YOU guys are the ones I need to be safe from! You knock me unconcious and kidnap me! What is WRONG with you?? WHY DID YOU DO THIS???!!!Me: oh boy... hopefully he'll only be annoyed and not seriously pissed off...
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 11:17:52 AM
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Me: do i need to knock him out again?Twilight: i dont think that'll be necessary... *reverts to her normal form*
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 11:31:08 AM
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Eclipse: O_O ... ... You're a mobian...?Me: yes she is.
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 11:33:48 AM
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Twilight: duh i am. what do i look like, a human? pfft.Me: *rolls her eyes*
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 11:44:02 AM
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Eclipse: n-no, nothing like that... i just thought you were this big dog thing.Me: *facepalm*
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 12:01:04 PM
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Twilight: i am a big "dog thing" *turns daemon again* see? *pokes her arm* all real.Me: we'll explain later i guess.....
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 12:12:15 PM
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Eclipse: *freaks out* what are you, a werewolf? O_OMe: ayyyye! *punches him lightly* she might take offence to that!
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 12:25:46 PM
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Twilight: *rolls her eyes and turns back to normal* you have no idea how many times i've been asked that........ *looks up at the moon* is that full? nope. not a werewolf. i'm posessed!! ^^me: XD she says it like it's a good thing XDD
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 12:41:30 PM
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Eclipse: p-possessed? L-like by the devil, or a ghost or something? What...? O_OMe: lol. He gets so much easier scared now that he has nothing scarier to compair it to... he's like a pathetic little puppy...
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 12:53:02 PM
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Twilight: *sighs* i miss the old eclipse..... do, they're not ghosts, OR the devil. the devil don't like meh.TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 1:40:43 PM
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Eclipse: then what ARE they? O_OMe: i miss him, too...
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 2:24:44 PM
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Twilight: daemons. pronounced day-muhns.TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 6:01:38 AM
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Eclipse: alright... um... yeah... daemons...Me: DAEMONS.
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 10:21:35 AM
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Twilight: dont worry, they're perfectly harmless unless i dont want them to be ^^me: lolz XD
TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 11:48:59 AM
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Eclipse: oh ok. That's... good to know... O_OMe: you freaked him out. XD
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 11:50:55 AM
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Me: dont worry she's chill 99.9% of the time ^^TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 12:03:34 PM
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Eclipse: and the other .1%...?Me: then she'll smash your skull in.
Eclipse: O_O
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 12:05:50 PM
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Twilight: critiiiic... you're scaring hiiiiim.....Me: the other .1% there's usually someone around who calms her down. aka, lightning and/or luminos ^^
TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 1:40:39 PM
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Eclipse: who?Me: *SOB*
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 1:51:29 PM
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Me: hmm what? oh is it cuz he doesnt know?Twilight: ack. highly unfortunate.
TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 2:02:11 PM
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me: *sniffle* he doesn't know who we're talking about...Eclipse: no i don't. How many friends do you HAVE...?
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 2:09:19 PM
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Me: hundreds. HN is VAST, man.Twilight: no kidding. we had to make the building bigger cuz we ran out of room O.O
TheGameArtCritic on October 31, 2008, 7:18:54 AM
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Eclipse: *sarcastically* joy.Me: oh hush. For the final time, we are NOT evil!
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 6:22:09 AM
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Me: when will you understand that we aren't---AAAAAAAAAAAH!!! *is glomped* aaah!! git her offa meh!!Po: MIIIIIIIISHYYYYYYY!!!! *CLING*
Twilight: oh god, not the shrimp again....
Po: IM NOT A SHRIMP!!! *CLING*
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 11:21:04 AM
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Me: ANOTHER fan character?Eclipse: *nearly has a heart attack* OMFJC WTF IS THAT??????
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 11:35:24 AM
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Me: *tries to get po offa her* she's not an oc, she's my sister!!!Po: *CLING* yeah, im her sister!!! im a hedgefox!!
Twilight: her very irritating sister.......
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 11:42:22 AM
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Me: oh my. I definetally understand that (evil annoyances). Po is a very interesting name. It sounds Asian.Eclipse: err... hi?
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 11:58:58 AM
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Me: naw, it's just her nickname. OW. do you mind letting go???Po: yeeeeeessssss *CLING* and tell her to stop calling me po, only you can call me thaaaat.
Me: fine. ow. call her lyssa.
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 12:44:38 PM
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Me: wow. That sounds NOTHING like the nickname you gave her. Why Po as a nickname?Eclipse: you live on the east coast.
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 12:53:30 PM
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Me: da? no, it's a family joke. my aunt calls her melipou, cuz her name's melissa, and i shortened it to Po.Po: we don't live on the east cooooast..... *CLING*
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 12:57:02 PM
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Me: oh i must be thinking of the wrong time zoooooooone... *facepalm*Eclipse: oh ok.
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:07:25 PM
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Me: get this girl off me please. please?Twilight: got it. *goes daemon and roars in her face*
Po: O.O *slowly lets go and takes a few steps away from mish*
Me: *GASP* yay, i can breathe......
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:19:24 PM
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Eclipse: The full moon makes people go crazy.Me: what?
Eclipse: really. The full moon and the new moon actually makes people become more irritable and reckless. It's a fact.
me: that was random.
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:26:12 PM
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Me: well, that came out of nowhere.Po: *gone*
twilight: thank goodness for curfews XD
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:33:05 PM
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Eclipse: it explains why the story of lycanthropy has to do with full moons.Me: whateverrrrrrrrr.....
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:39:07 PM
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Twilight: I'M NOT A WEREWOLF!!!me: XDDDD
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:48:43 PM
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Eclipse: I never said you were one.........Me: Luminos got shanked.
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:56:28 PM
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Me: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!twilight: ...did i miss something?
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 2:07:56 PM
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Eclipse: *remembers* AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!Me: yeah...
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 2:14:00 PM
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Twilight: what the----Me: *POKES HER FOREHEAD* you know everything now.
Twilight: wait. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 2:20:50 PM
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Eclipse: LUMINOS!!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM???? WHAT HAPPENED???????Me: CHAOS!!!
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 2:53:21 AM
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Me: OMFG CHAOS WAAAALL!!! Po: 'sup peoplez???
Twilight: NOW'S NOT A GOOD TIME!!!
((my sister wants to know if you actually thought she was a shrimp))
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 2:59:09 AM
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((I never thought she was a shrimp XD))Eclipse: WHY IS HE LIKE THIS???? WHY?????
Me: calm down, Eclipse... you need to CALM DOWN... we can fix him... we can -
Eclipse: I CAN'T TRUST YOU!!! I CAN'T TRUST ANYONE!!! *eyes glow red*
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 3:03:36 AM
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Po: O.O FLEEEEEEEEEE!!! FLEE FOR YOUR LIIIIVES!!!! *hides behind a rock*Me: *facepalm* retard..... eclipse, you need to control youself!!! luminos will be fine!!! he was used to torture his foster father!! surely you remember mikenno???
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 3:13:07 AM
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Eclipse: *eyes turn back to normal, and he gives Mish a look of shame, and weakness* no... i don't... *lays Luminos down on the grass that just so happens to be there because I think we're outside*Luminos: *does not stir. His blood stains the grass*
Me: Mikenno's not acting so very civilized right now...
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 3:28:36 AM
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Me: how would you feel if someone took your foster child (whom you loved very much) and stabbed them multiple times in front of you???? and you were a mentally unstable demon???Twilight: i would tear their face off ^^
Me: EXACTLY.
Po: O.O blooooooooooooooood!!!
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 3:32:57 AM
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Me: good point... argh, though... did he have to scratch Darkie THAT hard? I'm pretty sure Luminos will recover... he IS basically a demon -Eclipse: *growls at me* don't call him that. Don't you EVER call him that...
Me: ... er... anyway, he will be able to regenerate, but it will be slow.
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 5:21:05 AM
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Me: thats good..... we gotta get mikki to chill, tho. if we could somehow reassure him that lumi will be ok, we might get him to calm down. he already broke half his chains. only his ankles are still attatched to the wall......Twilight: whoa, is he THAT mad? wow, i've never seen him that mad....
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 7:50:49 AM
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Me: dude, he gets FREAKY when he's mad. He gets like FERAL.Eclipse: who?
Me: *snicker*
mechadragon13 on November 3, 2008, 6:19:33 AM
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Me: only crazier. and stronger. being a pure demon helps, i guess........Twilight: *in blizagga's voice* he is showing his true nature, kekekekeh..... *in her normal voice* wow that was weird...... O.O
TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 9:52:20 AM
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Me: Blizzaga took you over for a bit.Eclipse: LUMINOS!!!!! LUMINOS HAS BEEN HURT!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!! WE NEED TO HELP HIM!!!!!
Me: oh right, right...
mechadragon13 on November 24, 2008, 5:10:51 AM
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Me: *evil idea* oh i thought you didnt trust us.Twilight: miiish... now's not a good tiiiime.....
TheGameArtCritic on November 24, 2008, 5:55:54 AM
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Eclipse: *desperate* gaaahhhh.... please....Me: MISHY BACK SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!
mechadragon13 on November 24, 2008, 6:25:34 AM
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Me: hell frickin' yeah. help me out, he asked nicely ^^Twilight: *groans* this girl and her mood swings...
Me: they're not worse than yours. ^^
Twilight: -_-;
TheGameArtCritic on November 24, 2008, 6:35:25 AM
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Me: pah. 'Clipsey, Lumie's fine. He's better. So THERE!Eclipse: r-really? Wait... how can i trust you?
Me: AGAIN with the trust...
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:14:42 AM
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ah. so this is the WHOLE bio. jeez, half his ancestors are dead O.OTheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:18:27 AM
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yeah... kinda sucks...Luminos: huh?
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:46:49 AM
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Me; huh? oh!! hi there, lumi!! how's it goin'? ^^;;TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:49:26 AM
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Luminos: uh... it's going... is that my family tr -Me: *burns it*
Luminos: D8
Me: we already know who your dad is! heheheheheh! Heh... Yeah... uh... Mikenno... where's Mikenno...
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:02:33 AM
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Me: mikki? oh, he's on his way ^^; *discretely presses some numbers into her watch*TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:11:10 AM
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Luminos: why did you BURN it???? D8Me: because... um... because....
Luminos: D8
Me: WHEEEEEAAAAAAAAAUUUGH!!! STOP STARRRRRRRRRIIIIIING!!!!!
Luminos: '_'
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:30:26 AM
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Me: ..... *falls over laughing her head off* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA---- *stops to breathe* HAHAHAAHAHAAAAA!!!Mikenno: *walks in and looks at mish* .......what happened to her?
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:32:17 AM
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Luminos: i dunno.Me: he was STARING AT ME!!!!! *points at Luminos* MAKE HIM STOOOOOOOOOOP!!!!
Luminos: :I
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:49:32 AM
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Mikenno: *laughs* you're scared of him? thats hilarious. *messes up luminos's quills* he couldnt scare a fly!Me: *is dying of laughter*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:53:00 AM
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Luminos: ^^Me: burrrrrtttt heeeee staaarrrreezzzzz. rawr. Hey there, "dad".
Luminos: hi ^^
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 5:25:21 AM
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Me: *stops laughing and glares at critic* heeeey!! rawr is MY line!!!Mikenno: *starts laughing*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 8:24:51 AM
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meh: well "kekeke" is Condemned's line! XDLuminos: Critic... you're weird...
Me: um... duh.
mechadragon13 on October 5, 2008, 10:16:07 AM
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Me: obviously.Mikenno: *lauging* you better get used to it, luminos, because she's like that all the time. XD
TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 11:25:59 AM
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Luminos: aww... This is going to KILL my sanity...Me: I destroyed all of THEIR'S a long time ago! :D
mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 7:10:26 AM
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Mikenno: it's true. she drives us all crazy.Me: TOTALLY LOONY!!! 8D
Mikenno: .... *takes a step away from mish* okey then....
TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 8:49:33 AM
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Luminos: D:Me: Hey... "Lumie (or something)"?
Luminos: uhhhhhh yeah?
Me: YOU need to actually be tested. Well... Vorace needs to be tested just in case it's actually lethal to your health when you transform. We haven't quite figured out how to handle you yet so -
Luminos: VORACE!!! VORACE!!!! WHO IS VORACE!!!! YOU KEEP TALKING ABOUT HIM!!! WHO IS HE????????????
Me: I could never tell you that...
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 9:06:57 AM
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Mikenno: critic..... cant it wait until later? isnt he still a little young for that?Me: POINT!
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 9:50:02 AM
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Me: never too young. He'll be weak, and easy to fend off at young age, plus he won't remember anything...G. Eclipse: <i hate to say this but... counter-point.>
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:14:51 AM
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Me: ...point.Mikenno: ...... i hate to say this too, but.... i agree...
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:25:53 AM
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Me: Luminos?Luminos: uh... yeah?
Me: *puts a hand on his shoulder, which glows dark red* I'm sorry.
Luminos: wh-what are you.... you.... AAAUUUUUUUUGH!!!!! *eyes turn red. They, and his mouth start to bleed*
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:36:08 AM
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Mikenno: *force himself to stop from flinging critic into a wall*Me: oh god... *looks away*
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:38:51 AM
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Luminos: *blood turns to tenticals yadayadayada... becomes a monster... yadayadayada... the change is done*Vorace: NRRAAARRRRRGH!!!!! *flings me off with suprising strength*
Me: YEEP! *flung*
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:50:42 AM
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Mikenno: *goes demon, but keeps his appearace normal to luminos's eyes* i dont want to hurt you, vorace.Me: *takes out her wrench* i WILL defend myself.
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:54:01 AM
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Vorace: *snarls at Mikenno, and gets into a pouncing position, but doesn't go any further than that*Me: oh look. He's not attacking. Is he actually THINKING about what Mikenno said? That's a first!
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:01:37 AM
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Me: *holding the wrench behind her, ready to swing if necessary* remember, it's only a PART of condemned.Mikenno: *sits down, to show his lack of hostility* luminosidade. i know you can hear me. try to control this part of you. like it or not, vorace is a part of you. you must try to control him.
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:08:15 AM
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Vorace: *snarl fades away into a look like a lost puppy. He whimpers*Me: omg. That was cute. Oh, and he also understood Mikenno, yeah, that too... >_>
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:15:35 AM
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Mikenno: thats it, luminos. vorace has to obey you whether he wants to or not. *slowly starts moving towards him on his hands and knees* dont let him control you....Me: *lowers the wrench* it's working....
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:30:52 AM
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Vorace: whimpers again, shaking his head, and backs away in shame and fear*Me: IT'S CUTE!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:36:21 AM
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Mikenno: *stops* it's ok, luminos, i wont hurt you. it's ok.... i know how you feel. maybe someday i'll tell you all about it.... *sits down again* come here, luminos, come sit by me.Me: ..... *sits down as well*
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 12:06:04 PM
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me: *sits down too*Vorace: *slowly moves inch by inch towards Mikenno on all fours. He's shaking all over, but probabally from trying to contain the monster personality, not fear towards Mikenno*
Me: careful, Mikki...
mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 2:48:51 AM
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Mikenno: *thought-speak to critic, notlooking away from luminos* i'll be fine. i've faced worse things than vorace. Me: ehhh......
TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 8:31:20 AM
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Vorace: *is breathing heavily at first, but then stops halfway through trying to slowly walk towards Mikenno. He just stands there, wide-eyed*Me: I'm feeling very uncomfortable now...
mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 11:01:37 AM
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Mikenno: ....luminos? can you hear me? what's wrong? *tries to hear luminos's thoughts*me: ....... O.O
TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 2:24:39 PM
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Vorace: *his thoughts are unlear at first, but suddenly a VERY dark VERY scary voice is heard...*voice: kill...
Vorace: *eyes narrow. He starts to growl once more, and pounces on Mikenno!*
Me: i knew it. I knew he couldn't keep Vorace contained for too long. Although it's just a demekarr pup, it's STILL a demekarr... and it WILL grow stronger over time...
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:15:40 AM
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Mikenno: *keeping his appearance the same to luminos, he turns to his demon form and holds a hand out, catching vorace in mid-pounce and tossing him to the ground* LUMINOS!! FIGHT IT!!Me: OMJC!!!! *scrambles to stand up and grabs her wrench and is about to join the fight when---*
Mikenno: NO!! i will handle this.
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:21:01 AM
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Vorace: *snarls at Mikenno and gets up. All of a sudden, he's behind Mikenno, and rams into him at 900 mph (Vorace's top speed)*Me: ooooo..... *sheilds eyes and grimaces*
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:24:16 AM
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Mikenno: AGH!!! *flies into the air, but opens up his wings and straightens himself out, flapping hard to stay aloft. this looks odd to vorace/luminos because it looks like he's floating* comeon, luminos, you're in there!!! i know you are!!!Me: eeee.... *wants to help mikki, but manages not to stand up*
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:44:21 AM
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Vorace: *clutches his head, and falls to his knees* NRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!! Me: it's working again...
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:12:45 AM
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Mikenno: *stops flapping and lands in the ground with a thunp* thats it, luminos, fight it!!!! you can do it!Me: *crosses fingers*
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:25:13 AM
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Vorace: nrrgh... graaahrr... ggg.... *turns back to normal*Luminos: *just stares blankly at everyone. The bottem of his eyes are stained red with blood, like smeared makeup. Finally, he falls down on his face, unconcious*
Me: ... and now we know that he can control it if he tries really really hard. Plus he's not dead. There we go.
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:40:14 AM
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Mikenno: *glares at critic as he turns back to his hedgehog form, then walks over to luminos and picks him up bridal-style* ....... he'll be fine. we gotta take him somewhere safe, though.Me: *sigh of relief*
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:44:03 AM
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Me: very well... HNHQ is always safe.... except when our characters turn evil... it's all good there! ^^ *gasps* You know what? Throughout that transformation, Luminos' dark aura got an inch bigger...mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 11:54:43 AM
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Me: condemned is pure dark, surely his offspring is the same.Mikenno: *nods* HNHQ it is. *turns back to his demon form* sorry, guys you'll have to walk.....
Me: it's ok, mikki ^^
Mikenno: *Spreads his wings wide and takes off*
Me: well, we may as well start walking.
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 2:03:02 PM
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Me: aye. *starts walking* ... I wonder what Vorace shall turn out to be like in the future when he starts forming a personality... do you think he'll be like Condemned?mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 2:07:35 PM
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Me: i really hope not..... luminos is less conflicted than eclipse. maybe he'll develop bettr control because he has less anger......MEANWHILE!!
Mikenno: *is gliding with a using thermal for support, holding luminos to himself tightly so he wont drop him* luminos... what to do with you........?
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 2:29:08 PM
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Me: i really hope that's the case... *continues the walk*mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 2:38:31 PM
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Mikenno: *continues the flight in silence*MEANWHILE
Me: *nods* yeahhh..... wonder how lumi and mikki are doing..
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 8:37:16 AM
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Me: I hope they're doing fine...MEANWHILE
Luminos: *slowly wakes up, groggy from a headache, and aching muscles from over-exertion* Dad...? Wh... Where are we...?
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:42:13 AM
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Mikenno: *doesnt hide his appearance, and glances down at luminos* we're on our way to HNHQ. Me: i'm sure they're ok...... im just worried about lumi's reaction to mikki...... O.O
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 11:49:02 AM
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Luminos: *now has a clear view of Mikenno* DAD????Meanwhile
Me: i don't think Mikki would scare him... he's still Lumi's "dad"
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:08:05 PM
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Mikenno: yeah.... *makes it sound like both a question and an answer*Me: good point.....
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 12:13:54 PM
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Luminos: how did you...? I thought.... i must be going crazy... o.Omeanwhile
Me: *points* that's da roof of HN.
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:46:19 PM
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Me: yup.Mikenno: *laughs once* you're not going crazy, luminos. yes it is me, and yes we're flying. *lands on the roof* and now we're not.
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 12:47:51 PM
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Luminos: are you sure you're ot a figmant of my imagination...?meanwhile
me: IMAGINAAAAATIOOOOOON.... I love that ride in Disneyworld... XD
mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 5:38:06 AM
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Mikenno: *pokes him* that felt real enough didnt it? *turns back to his hedgehog form* its me, luminos. its dad. you're awake.Me: i prefer SPACE MOUNTAIN!! XD
TheGameArtCritic on October 11, 2008, 11:34:31 AM
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Luminos: *at first not sure, but then decides to accept it as the truth* alright... but... Dad? Do you know what happened? I... i can't remember anything other than Critic telling me she was sorry...mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 12:39:56 PM
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Mikenno: ....... i'll explain later. comeon, lets go inside. you must be tired.Me: neooooooo... we want in! *door to HNHQ opens* THANK you.
TheGameArtCritic on October 11, 2008, 3:41:18 PM
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Me: lufflyness is high technoligy... *dances in*meanwhile
Luminos: i guess i am a bit tired... owww... my arms and legs hurt...
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:03:22 AM
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Mikenno: come on. *picks him up and goes into the base through a door in the roof*MEANWHILE!!!
Me: awesomeness, isnt it? i wonder if they'll go to mikkis room.
TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 11:05:42 AM
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Me: It would be cute ^^MEANWHILE
Luminos: i didn't know there was a door on the roof...
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:30:51 AM
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Mikenno: we have a helicopter pad. we gotta get on the roof SOMEHOW. *takes teh elevator down to teh 3rd floor, living space*Me: yeahhh.. i think so. lets go that way. *heads towards the stairz*
TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 11:50:26 AM
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Me: *SAME*Luminos: um... ok... helicopter... wow... O_O ... i didn't know we had a helicopter...
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 12:06:13 PM
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Mikenno: we have a lot of stuff, luminos. you have to remind me to show you around...... *elevator stops, and they get off* we're going to my room, okay?MEANWHILE!!
Me: god i hate stairs -_-
TheGameArtCritic on October 13, 2008, 8:42:59 AM
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Luminos: okay ^^meanwhile
Me: YOU'RE the one who drew them... or wrote about how the others built them... whatever. It's your fault.
mechadragon13 on October 14, 2008, 3:05:15 AM
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Me: *vein* *takes out the wrench* dont make me hurt you.MEANWHILE!!
Mikenno: *opens the door to his "living area" and closes it behind him, then puts luminos down on the couch. the room is somewhat plain, there is a couch and a table and a window looking towards the city, but not much else. the other rooms aren't visible* well... yeah. this is my room. not much to look at, but it's ok.
TheGameArtCritic on October 14, 2008, 6:01:39 AM
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Luminos: I think it's cool! ^^meanwhile
Me: Your wrench! AAHH! *runs up the stairs*
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 2:33:46 AM
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Me: well, that works! ^^ *goes up two steps at a time*MEANWHILE!
Mikenno:*smiles and goes into another room* *calling from the other room* you hungry, luminos? do ya want somethingtoeat?
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 8:40:19 AM
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Luminos: I'm fine ^^ for some reason... I'm just not hungry...MEANWHILE
Me: that's because he ate me. Sorta.
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 9:33:35 AM
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Me: HAHAHAHA----AAAH!! *almost trips on the stairs cuz she laughed too hard* whoops. im okay. *snickers* *looks around* door. *openz teh door to the third floor*MEANWHILEZ!!!
Mikenno: *comes out of what is apparently the kitchen* you sure?
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 9:47:24 AM
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Luminos: yeah... it's so weird...MEANWHILE
Me: you PHAIL.
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 10:03:30 AM
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Me: *holds up the wrench again* i will use this.MEANWHILE!!
Mikenno: okay then.... *goes back into teh kitchen*
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 10:07:51 AM
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Luminos: *shivers a bit and rubs himself as if he was cold, though it is not cold in the room*MEANWHILE
Me: AH!! NO HITTING!
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 10:18:47 AM
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Mikenno: *comes out of the kitchen with a sandwich and munches into it. he noticed luminos shivering* luminos? you cold? *asks even though he knows he's not*TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 10:23:21 AM
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Luminos: no... no I'm fine... it's just... you know that feeling where it feels like something's crawling up your arms and legs? It's like that, but times twenty...MEANWHILE
Me: *goes up to the living quarters (or whatever), and looks shift eyed, then darts away to Eclipse's old room* DON'T FOLLOW ME, MISH!!!!............ wait... maybe i shouldn't have said that...
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 11:13:56 AM
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Me: dont worry, i wont. *continues to mikki's room*MEANWHILEZ
Mikenno: *sits down next toluminos on the couch* yeah.....
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 11:25:39 AM
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Luminos: it's creepy... like something's moving under my skin... is that a little weird to you?MEANWHILE
Me: thank GOD she didn't follow me... *opens the door to Eclipse's old room, and sits down on his old bed, looking at a lump under the covers with concern* i know i shouldn't be helping you... but... with Inderretta helpless, you have no one to take care of you... *opens the covers to reveal a very tired looking Newman, sleeping* Mish wouldn't approve... *gets out a battery, and cuts it in half* you're running out of power... soon you will be drained, and will have to shut down... until then, I MUST keep you alive with any source of energy i can fine... *opens his mouth and pours the battery acid down his throat, maknig him shudder in pain* hey... it helps...
mechadragon13 on October 16, 2008, 10:48:37 AM
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((i was wondering what happened to him XP))Mikenno: everyone feels it at some point. i know i've felt like that. a whole bunch of times, actually.....
MEANWHILEZ
Me: why did mikki's room happen to be at the end of the hallway?? ugh. wonder what critic's doin'.....
TheGameArtCritic on October 16, 2008, 11:44:31 AM
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Luminos: so... it's not weird? It's just natural?MEANWHILE
Me: *sigh* *pets Newman's head*
Newman: *lightly groans*
Me: oh! You still have a teensy bit of energy! I wish Inderretta gave someone else the codes to your recharging machine... he was so selfish to not trust anyone else...
mechadragon13 on October 19, 2008, 10:34:10 AM
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Mikenno: yeah, it happens to everyone. you shouldnt worry too much about it.Me: *knocks* yellow!
Mikenno: oh its mish. come in!!
Me: *comez in and closes the door* HIIIII!!
Mikenno: *facepalm* hello. hey where's.......critic...... *stands up* mish, where did critic go??
TheGameArtCritic on October 19, 2008, 12:06:15 PM
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Meh: uh oh... peepz are suspecting thingies...Newman: wha time iz it...?
Me: hammer time. Go back to sleep. *covers him up*
meanwhilez
Luminos: yeah... where IS Critic?
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 3:24:16 AM
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Me:umm,i think she went to eclipses---Mikenno: *is out the door*
Me: -----.....room.
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 6:15:00 AM
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Luminos: where's dad going?MEANWHIAL
Me: oh shoot oh shoot oh shoot...
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 7:06:09 AM
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Mikenno: *slams the door to eclipse's room open and walks in, already knowing where critic is* critic the racoon, you are in a whoooooole lot of trouble......MEANWHILEZ
Me: ........ O.O oh!! *to luminos* your dad sort of knows what everyone else is doing, like, he can see it. in his mind. you know, like a mind reader ^^; critic must be doing something she isnt supposed to......
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 8:37:26 AM
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Me: comes out of my hiding place* t-trouble? Watcha talkin' about? I've got nothing to hide! heheheh! Heh! heh... ^^;;;meanwhile
Luminos: uh oh. That's -
AOSTH Sonic: THAT'S NO GOOD!
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 9:01:25 AM
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Me: lets go over there. *opens teh door*Mikenno: i know you're hiding newman, critic.
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 9:23:56 AM
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Me: *freaks out* NEWMAN???? WHAT???? WHO????? AAAAAAHHHH!!!!Newman: *weakly moans*
Me: ahh... I'm sorry... *pats the lump*
meanwhile
Luminos: yes. Let's. I'm tired of Critic hiding things... *follows Mish*
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 9:38:22 AM
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Me: this way. *heads to teh room*Mikenno: critic, what are you THINKING?! keeping that thing here?? you could have at least told me or lightning he was here, we could have let you!! but sneaking him in?? you must be INSANE!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 9:47:35 AM
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Me: *sniffle* I was afraid you guys might not let me help him... he's going to shut down soon anyways, Mikki... right now he's too weak to do anything... He may be an antagonist character... but he's still MY character...Newman: I can't see... who's thar...?
Me: Mikki.
Newman: joy.
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:08:50 AM
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Mikenno: *sees the truth in her statement and falls silent* .............Me: *GOEZ IN* hey mikki, whats OMG IS THAT NEWMAN???
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:32:58 AM
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Me: *sniffle* yes...Newman: I hear Mish...
Luminos: who's Newman?
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:43:37 AM
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Me: a very long story we have no time for. critic......Mikenno: *puts a hand up, silencing mish* .............
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:50:42 AM
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Me: nnn... well... hang on... *fumbles around in jean pockets, only to get out a AA battery, then cuts it, and forces Newman to drink the acid*Newman: *shudders, and suddenly sits up, but still looks really tired* stop making me drink thaaaat....
Me: You would be long dead if i wasn't, Newman...
Luminos: w-what's wrong with him...
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:05:43 AM
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Me: critic could explain it better than i could.....Mikenno: ........ *attempts to read into newman's thoughts* do not be afraid, newman. i will not hurt you. would you be able to tell me what happened after you knocked eclipse out with that remote?
((YEAH I STILL REMEMBER THAAAAAAT!!!))
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 11:14:19 AM
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Newman: i... i needed him... I was hoping Inderretta told Eclipse my recharge password while he was evil but... he would never help me normally... after I was stopped, I went back to Zephcorp, disappointed. I had to just sit there... and... and wait to die...Me: um... Newman's running out of energy. He's a clone of a guy named Eclipse, but his life system is different from ours. He doesn't eat, but he needs to be recharged every 72 hours, or he'll slowly run out of energy...
Luminos: oh no... I don't want him to die! :(
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:35:39 AM
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Mikenno: neither does he. critic, is there any way to charge him?TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 12:01:17 PM
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me: besides that one thingy? NO.Luminos: oh noooooo!!!
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:31:38 PM
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Mikenno: ...........Me: so thats it??? no one knows inderetta well enough to know the code????
Mikenno: .......i dont see anything...... im sorry.
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 10:02:19 AM
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Me: Mr. Inderretta would have used a code from something in his past. Unfortunatally, he makes sure to burn any records of himself...Angel: *DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN. Is here* maybe I can help the A.L.?
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:08:31 AM
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Mikenno: *fur spikes out and he growls* why is he here??Me: *WRENCH* you arent allowed here, "angel." get out.
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:12:54 AM
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Angel: I want to help the A.L.Me: um... sure... then you want to make him JOIN you...
Angel: is it so wrong to create a group of do-gooders?
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:27:06 AM
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Mikenno: DO-GOODERS? HA!! stop kidding yourself, angel, i know about your demekarr.Me: !!!!!!! whaaaat???
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:34:38 AM
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Angel: i don't have your so-called demakarr. Now if you'll excuse me... *zaps Newman with a bajillion volts of electric shoot*Newman: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAAAAUUUUUUUGH!!! OH GOD!!!! OH GOD!!!! *zings up in the bed and punch Angel in the face* don't DO THAT!!! huff... huff...
Me: um... he recharged you...
Newman: oh. Go figure.
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:53:13 AM
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Mikenno: *is highly distrusting of angel and seriously wants to rip his wings off* ........Me: cool it, mikki.....
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:57:30 AM
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Angel: yes. Indeed. "cool it"me: lame-o.
Angel: *grabs Newman and teleports*
me: wait... what?
mechadragon13 on October 22, 2008, 3:10:14 AM
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Mikenno: RRRAGH!!!! DAMN THAT ANGEL!!!Me: CHILL!!! you cant turn, not now!!!
Mikenno: WHY?!
Me: *tiny voice* cuz you'll die......
TheGameArtCritic on October 22, 2008, 8:55:02 AM
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Me: cuz he'll die?Luminos: wha?
mechadragon13 on October 22, 2008, 9:07:43 AM
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Me: *cough*angelRP*cough*Mikenno: *suddendly realizes what mish is saying and his mouth opens as if to say something, then closes again. suddendly, he's out the door and down the hallway, headed who knows where*
TheGameArtCritic on October 22, 2008, 9:23:11 AM
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me: um... Mikki... can't... DIE... >_> ... <_< ... *follows Mikki*mechadragon13 on October 23, 2008, 2:22:00 AM
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Me: no, it's much much worse.... *follows mikki* coming, lumi?Mikenno: *is running to eclipse's grave*
TheGameArtCritic on October 23, 2008, 6:08:01 AM
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Luminos: sure ^^merwhrial
ground: OMFG!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 3:09:27 AM
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Mikenno: *grab a nearby shovel and starts digging*Me: 'cmon!
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 6:07:40 AM
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Eclipse: *gets dug out, but then POOFGONE*Me: D8
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 6:44:51 AM
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Mikenno: DAMN!!!! grrr....Me: no swearing in from of lumi, mikki!!!! D:
Mikenno: *GLARE*
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 8:29:50 AM
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Luminos: What happened to that guy???Me: a paradox.
Luminos: a WHAT????
Me: a thingy that happens in another pic can happen to all pics.
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:20:18 PM
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Me: O.O oh not cool.Mikki: ...... *puts a hand on his head, as if he had a headache, and falls to his knees*
Me: MIKKI!!! OH NO!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:28:35 PM
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Me: grrr.... stupid Angel and his stupid lightness.... DAMNIT!!!Luminos: DAD!!! *runs over to him* are you ok????
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:33:06 PM
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Mikenno: i-i'm fine, luminos dont worry about ---AGH!!! *is on his hands and knees on the ground, and seems to be in intense pain*Me: MIKKI!!! hang on!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:38:22 PM
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Me: oh noes! MIKKI!!! DON'T DIE!!!Luminos: DIE???????
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:49:43 PM
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Me: MIKKI!! come on, you can't die, not now!!Mikenno: *weak laugh* looks like there's no stopping that now.....
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:57:08 PM
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Luminos: ...what...? *tears begin to form and roll down his cheeks* how... did this happen? *suddenly, his eyes widen, then turn into a glare. His irises pulse with hate* *in a double voice* who did this to you?Me: uh oh.
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:08:55 PM
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Mikenno: luminos... calm down...... we dont want anyone agh... to get hurt! Me: listen to your dad, lumi.... he knows whats good....
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:14:34 PM
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Luminos: *is a dark, scary, doubled growl* NO!!! *to Mikenno* WHO DID THIS TO YOU???? *eyes start to turn red*Me: hoh boy...
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:23:09 PM
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Mikenno: *seeing the possibility of death for the others, he staggers to his feet and puts his hands on luminos's shoulders* luminosidade, you need to calm down. you are putting all of us in danger. as for who "did this" to me, it was a man named jacob. jacob the hedgehog. promise me you will not seek revenge against him. please, luminos, promise me.TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:28:33 PM
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Luminos: *eyes and voice return to normal. His face is full of distress* Dad...Me: ...
Luminos: ok... I promise... *sniffs, and hugs Mikenno tightly*
Me: awwww....
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:41:08 PM
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Mikenno: *hugs luminos back, tears filling his eyes* i hate leaving you like this, luminos.... please.. forgive me....... *suddendly isnt able to hold his own weight, and staggers forward*Me: *steps forward to try to catch him*
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:47:50 PM
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Luminos: *gets out of the way, but is sobbing* DAD!!!Me: it's like with the Lion King, sorta...
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:52:16 PM
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Me: *catches mikki and lowers him to the ground carefully*Mikenno: *is breathing heavily* agh....... not again.... not again..... *thought speak to all but lumi* <should.. should i tell him? that im not......?>
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 2:01:57 PM
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Me: maybe... maybe the time is right... but... but how will he react?Luminos: *crying*
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Mikenno: <*pauses, then* he will not understand. he will begin to ask questions. are we sure we can answer?>TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 2:11:55 PM
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Me: *dead serious* ... we'll try...Luminos: :'(
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 2:16:13 PM
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Mikenno: *closes his eyes and relaxes, to conserve what little energy he has left* tell him...Me: lumi... we have to tell you something important...
TheGameArtCritic on October 25, 2008, 2:43:08 AM
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Luminos: *sniffle* what is it?Me: I don't know if i can tell him...
mechadragon13 on October 25, 2008, 6:13:19 AM
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Me: so you're making ME tell him?! thats horrible!! it was your idea!!Mikenno: stop bickering..... luminos?
TheGameArtCritic on October 25, 2008, 6:16:56 AM
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Luminos: *sniffle* yeah?Me: OY! I can't tell 'im! He'd rip my throat out!
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 5:57:07 AM
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Mikenno: i have to tell you something important. but first, promise me you wont, you know, freak out..... i need you to take this completely seriously. this is the truth.Me: O.O
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 6:00:02 AM
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Luminos: w-what's the truth? What's going on?Me: nnn.....
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 6:20:52 AM
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Mikenno: luminos...... i'm not your dad.me: oooooh.... O.O
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 6:24:30 AM
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Luminos: what...? But... but of COURSE you're my dad... there's no one else here that looks anything like me but YOU!Me: Luminos, he said BEFORE that he was telling the truth.
Luminos: O.O
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 6:53:30 AM
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Mikenno: t-that's because he's not here, luminos... i'm sorry i had to lie to you all this time........TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 6:57:45 AM
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Luminos: no... then... *backs away* then all of this was a lie... it explains everything... why Critic got nervous about my family tree... why you all seemed to be covering something up... it's because you WERE!... *thinks a bit* why did he leave me?Me: you mean your dad? He... kinda had no choice, Luminos...
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:09:20 AM
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Mikenno: we're so sorry luminos. you father left you with me because he wasnt going to be able to take care of you. he was thoughtful enough to leave you with us than out in the streets like his father left him........ me: *puts a hand on luminos's shoulder* this doesn't mean we love you any less, luminos. especially mikki.
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:19:42 AM
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Luminos: *his head had been lowerd a bit, and seems a little hurt to have been lied to. He looks up at Mish* ... *a weak smile returns to his face* alright, Mish... *hugs her*Me: your real father was that guy you saw in the Sim Room.
Luminos: WHAAAAAAAAT?????
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:29:58 AM
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Mikenno: his name is eclipse. eclipse the hedgebat. it hurt him to leave you, more than you could imagine.......me: *hugs back*
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:34:34 AM
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Luminos: but that doesn't make sense. If it hurt him, then WHY would he leave?Me: i already told you. He had no choice. Even if he didn't die -
Luminos: HE DIED???????
Me: let me finish. Even if he didn't die, he still had a certain... problem...
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:48:33 AM
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Mikenno: *senses his end approaching* another thing luminos....... i.... i'm not mobian......Me: O.O say WHAT?? *thinking* didnt think he'd go that far into the truth....
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:52:18 AM
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Me: uh oh.Luminos: then... then what are you?
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 8:09:42 AM
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Mikenno: *can't hold his mobian form any longer and is forced into his demon form. his wings are burnt off, just like when angel did it* i.... well.... you can see.....me: ...he's a demon.
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 10:35:05 AM
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Luminos: *gasp* omigawd! You... wait... i saw this before... i seriously thought i was dreaming...Me: aye, Luminos. Also, Eclipse should be back.
Luminos: Back??? When??? I thought he died!!!
Me: he did.... then he came back...
Eclipse: *stumbles in. His irises are milky white* w-woah... ok... where am i?...
Me: oh look! Mikki!! Mikki, you DO get to see Eclipse before you....... yeah...
mechadragon13 on October 27, 2008, 2:31:24 AM
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Mikenno: *weak laugh* he doesnt know who i am, critic..... but i guess it'll have to do........ forgive me, luminos.... *he dies, and fades away, leaving no remnants*Me: ohhhhhh...... *teary eyed*
TheGameArtCritic on October 27, 2008, 6:10:52 AM
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Luminos: D8 D-dad... *tears up again*Me: he's not your dad...
Luminos: i know but... but... he was always a dad to me...
Eclipse: whaaa? What just happened?
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 8:01:17 AM
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Me: go away, eclipse, now's not a good time....... *goes to give luminos a hug*TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 8:32:54 AM
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Eclipse: I'm confused...Me: ...
Luminos: *hugs Mish tightly, crying*
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 8:37:55 AM
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Me: *hugs luminos too, patting his head slowly* it's ok, luminos, dont cry..... plase, dont cry... he's in a better place now.... *thinking* if only i could believe that myself....TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 9:16:51 AM
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Luminos: *still sobbing* i... know... but... I'm... never... going... to see him... AGAIN! *sob*Me: Oy Lumie, we ALL miss Mikki... :((((
Eclipse: err... do you guys need help?
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 9:18:26 AM
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Me: no, eclipse, we're fine. dont worry, luminos, it'll all be okay......TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 9:43:32 AM
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Luminos: *sniffle* but what if it WON'T be ok...?Eclipse: what happned?
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 10:04:07 AM
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Me: .... his adoptive father died. lumi, it will be ok, you have to trust me....TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 10:06:38 AM
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Luminos: *looks up at Mish* *sniffle* o-o-okay Mish...Eclipse: dang... must be hard on him... *pity on Luminos* <:(
Me: GAWD, Mih, you're REALLY good at comforting Lumie...
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 10:14:51 AM
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Me: i've got experience....... there. better now?TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 10:19:36 AM
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Luminos: *sniff* i guess... *wipes tears from his eyes*Eclipse: there was always a voice that bothered me...
Me: not Condemned
Eclipse: ... a voice that said that true men don't cry. A voice that told me to "get tougher". To "stop being pushed around".
Me: i thought all of Eclipse's memories were erased... I didn't know Shadow-hidden-in-a-cloak's words were still with him... huh. Maybe that's the only thing Newman didn't erase...
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 10:30:17 AM
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Me: shadow-in-a-cloak? heh. and lumi's not a man, he's still got a whole lot of growing to do. ^^TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 10:36:49 AM
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me: yeah, but... Eclipse was younger than Luminos when Shadow told him to "get tougher". Then he gave Eclipse the location of his first street gang. HISTORY! OOH!Luminos: *tries not to be miserable*
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 10:57:41 AM
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Me: *tilts her head towards luminos and mouths* you're not helping!!TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 11:01:00 AM
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me: not miserable from history. Miserable from Mikki's death. Honostly, Mish, he died, like, ten minutes ago.Eclipse: death is an uncomfortable subject.
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 11:34:40 AM
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Me: everyone's miserable right now, critic. news like this spread like wildfire in HN.....TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 11:46:28 AM
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me: it's so depressing...Luminos: so everyone knows now?...
Me: no duh.
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 12:02:06 PM
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Me: basically. someone's always watching everywhere, cuz we're paranoid about the racist purebloods in moonglow....TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 12:13:20 PM
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me: oooohhhhhhh.Luminos: great... we get to all go home to cry on each other's shoulders...
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 12:53:50 PM
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Me: *smiles sadly*TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 1:41:59 PM
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Luminos: i miss him already...Me: <:(
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 2:25:37 PM
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Me: i think everyone does..... *shivers8 i miss his hugs too. he was always waaaarm.....TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 6:02:28 AM
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Luminos: he was, wasn't he? *small smile*mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 10:23:04 AM
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Me: yeah... speaking of warm, let's go inside........TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 11:49:42 AM
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Luminos: omigosh let's, plzthx.Me: alrighty. HNHQ! *dashes inside*
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 11:51:43 AM
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Me: *rolls eyes* sheez..... *follows critic, only walking not running*TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 12:05:23 PM
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Me: it's cozy in here... ok Lumie. I shall be tucking you in, then.Luminos: NUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!
Me: why not?
Luminos: you scare me, like, a LOT.
Me: :(
Luminos: someone else... PLEASE...
Rosette: i will ^^
Luminos: Mom! Hiya!
Rosette: hey there :)
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 12:07:55 PM
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Me: that works then ^^ hey rosette... didja hear...?TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 1:41:31 PM
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Rosette: hear......?Me: she doesn't know.
Luminos: ...
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 1:53:15 PM
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Me: huh. thats odd...... umm.... hate to break it to ya.... but... mikki's kinda..... dead.TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 2:04:54 PM
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Rosette: *gasps and clasps her hands over her mouth* th-that can't be true... Mikki can't.. *chokes a bit* d-DIE.Luminos: he... he can... and another thing, Mom... he told me... he told me about my REAL dad...
Rosette: a lot definetally happened when i wasn't here... O_O
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 2:10:15 PM
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Me: yeah, dont you hate that?? ^^;TheGameArtCritic on October 31, 2008, 7:23:16 AM
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Rosette: Lumie... I'm so sorry... We never meant to hurt you in any way... I promise...Luminos: it's fine, Mom... I need to get used to it, that's all...
Rosette: <:) c'mon... you need to get to sleep... *walks to Luminos' room, away from sight, Luminos holding her hand*
Me: that was cute.
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 6:24:22 AM
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Me: simply adorable.Zenith: hey guys! *walks over to us* hey i heard about mikki.... that must have been tough on little lumi....
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 11:22:55 AM
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Me: aye... kid was sobbing. THEN he found out that Mikenno wasn't his dad. Or a real mobian. Also, tonight, he'll have quite a few nightmares.mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 11:36:51 AM
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Zenith: ee, that wont be good...... think i'll stay up just in case....Me: you dont have to worry about that, z, i think rosette has that covered....
Zenith: i'll take your word for it.....
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 11:45:09 AM
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Me: it's a shame that he has to go through those nightmares as Eclipse has. They made Eclipse, a fully grown hedgebat, become a frightened, sobbing MESS.mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 12:00:20 PM
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Me: ......Zenith: thats a horrible thing to have to go through, especially for a ten-year-old....... he's going to need all the support he can get....
Me: yeah....
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 12:46:56 PM
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me: indeed. Also, HOLY CRAP 666 COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!!!mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 12:54:33 PM
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Me: O.OZenith: O.O
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:00:52 PM
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Me: oh well, now it's over. XDmenwhial
Rosette: *tucks Luminos in*
Luminos: I'm old enough... you don't have to tuck me in anymore...
Rosette: but i LIEK to tuck you in...
Luminos: yrrr....wellllll....
Rosette: ............. ok? Whatever. Goodnight. Try not to have any bad dreams...
Luminos: I can't promise you that.
Rosette: just try. If it's hopeless then... try to fight the scary monsters...
Luminos: g'night Mom
Rosette: <:) goodnight. *closes the door to Luminose's room*
Luminos: *tries to sleep*
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:08:27 PM
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Me: .........he's gonna have nightmares, isnt he?Zenith: .........
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:23:04 PM
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me: it's part of the demakarr thing.meanwhile, in Luminos' dream
Luminos: *walking around, in a dark DARK DARK DARK street* oh no... I know where this is going...
Condemned: *climbs down, head first, a brick wall near Luminos* boo.
Luminos: AHH!! It's you again!!
Condemned: join us, Vorace.
Luminos: STOP IT! STOP SAYING THAT!!
Condemned: do i upset you, Vorace? Are you angry?
Luminos: STOP!!!
Condemned: feel the predetor within you, Luminos... it's there...
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:27:54 PM
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Me: .......we gotta help him. you remember when rosette went into eclipse's room and the nightmares stopped? we should try it!!Zenith: but is there anyone here who could do that?
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:36:59 PM
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Me: is Skye around? I'm sure SHE could heelllp... :3meanwhile, Lumi's Nightmare
Condemned: you must except the fact that you are one of us, Vorace... stop living in denial...
Luminos: shut... UP!!! *growls. His eyes turn pure red*
Condemned: Have you awakened? Have I finally been able to trigger my spawn?
Luminos: rraaawwwrrrgh!!! *falls to his knees, shivering all over... bleeding... becoming engulfed in tenticals*
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:40:36 PM
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Me: SKYYYYYE!!!!*somewhere else in the base*
Skye: *ears twitch as she hears a faint call for her* ..... *runs towards the cry*
Zenith: hurry uuuuup......
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:52:20 PM
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me: honostly... for someone with Sonic's speed..... gawd...meanwhilez, Lumi's dream. Blah.
Luminos: *turns into Vorace* NRRAAARRRRRGH!!!!
Condemned: kekekeke... a pleasure to meet you again, my son... it is time once more, that we hunt...
Vorace: sssss...
Condemned: *leaps off the wall, spreads his wings, and soars at a high speed, searching for victims*
Vorace: *follows Condemned*
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:59:32 PM
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Me: she's on the other side of the building!! give her a break!Skye: *screeches to a halt next to mish* whats going on?
Zenith: luminos needs you.
Skye: *immediate concern* why? what's wrong with him??
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 2:10:28 PM
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Me: he's having a rather... CRUEL nightmare...meanwhial, L.N.
Condemned: there. *points at Hybrid Nation HQ*
Vorace: *dark grin*
((i need a Dream Skye...))
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 2:16:01 PM
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((how the flip do we get a dream skye??? if you need to use her go ahead))Me: come on, we gotta get to his room!!
Skye: way ahead of ya. *grabs mish and critic by thw wrists and goes ZOOm to lumi's room*
Zenith: hey wait, what about---? ugh. oh well. *starts running towards the room*
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 2:25:32 PM
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me: EEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLL OOOOOOOHHHHHHH EEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLL((i can't get her personality right...))
L.N.
Vorace: *smashes into the building*
Dream!Rosette: L-L-Luminos? Oh no... please... please calm down, and -
Vorace: *impales Rosette with his claws*
Condemned: gyahahahahah!!
Dream!Rosette: *with tears in her eyes* Eclipse... how could you let Luminos......... *doesn't finish her sentence. She dies halfway through it*
Vorace: *roars a roar of victory*
meanwhile
Luminos: *is whimpering*
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 2:56:21 AM
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Me: GAAAAAH!!! *opens teh door to teh room* LUMINOS!!!Skye: *pushes in between critic and mish to get into the room* LUMI!!!
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 3:02:11 AM
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Luminos: *wakes up* gah! AAAHH!! Skye?? Mish?? *looks around* i-it was only... it was only a nightmare, then... *looks completelly shaken up. There are tears in his eyes*Me: my GAWD. If this keeps up, you'll develop some pretty bad insomnia...
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 3:05:08 AM
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Skye: oh lumi..... *sits down on the edge of the bed and puts one hand on his* everything's going to be okay, lumi, trust me.....me: *thinking* DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 3:14:46 AM
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Luminos: ok Skye... <:) *notices Skye's hand on his, and his face goes red*me: *tries to hold in a loud "squeee"*
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 3:30:42 AM
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Skye: eh? oh. *realizes she put her hand on his and turns even redder* o////////////////////////oMe: *same as critic*
Zenith: *finally gets there* hey whats goin' on? *sees teh situation* oh, well isn't that the sweetest thing ^^
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 3:34:29 AM
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Luminos: AH!! *face goes redder, and he slides his hand away from Skye's* Me: *trying to hold in a mixture of "squeee" "lol" and "damnit, Zenith, you ruined it"*
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 5:24:30 AM
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Me: *looks at zenith and gives her the you killed it look*Zenith: *returns the oops, ok i'm leaving look* *leaves*
Me: *grins* *to critic* let's give them a moment, mkay? *pushes critic out of the room, and closes the door behind her, and unknowingly to those two inside, she locks it* oh yeah, i'm a genius.
MEANWHILE!!!
Skye: *thinking* awkwaaaaard...... *pulls her hand back and turns even redder* umm..... yeah.... so.... you're gonna be ok, right? ^////////^
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 7:52:37 AM
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Luminos: y-yeah. S-sure! ^////^meanwhile
Me: it's gonna suck when Luminos gets the draft letter.
mechadragon13 on November 3, 2008, 6:17:51 AM
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Skye: thats good to hear ^///^ so... i'll leave you to your sleeping, ok? g'night!! *stands up and goes to open the door. it doesnt open. she yanks on it. still doesnt open* oh come on... *takes a few steps back, then runs into the door at 500mph. and bounces right off and into a wall* OWW!!! what the heck???MEANWHILE!!
Me: *had drawn steel supports against the door, making it impossible to open from the other side* say it. i'm a genius~!!!!
Zenith: yeah, you're a genius. XD
TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 9:54:12 AM
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Luminos: don't tell me we're locked in... -_-meanwhile
Me: i mean... it's gonna REALLY suck... because... when Luminos finally comes back... all of his innocence will be lost... the army is goingto RUIN him...
mechadragon13 on November 24, 2008, 5:13:27 AM
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Me: skye'll straighten him out ^^ heheheh...MEANWHILE!!
Skye: ......crudmuffins. we're locked in. great. *sits down on the bed in a huff* mish aggravates me -_-
TheGameArtCritic on November 24, 2008, 5:57:56 AM
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Luminos: why would she do that, anyway? GOD. *sits down next to Skye on the bed*menwhialer
Me: MISH I GOT SONIC UNLEASHED FOR THE XBOX 360 AND SAW TWILIGHT. ZOMG.
mechadragon13 on November 24, 2008, 6:27:44 AM
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Me: TWILIGHT?? BUT HOW---- oh movie twilight. mah bad. yeah, i saw that too XD wasnt it fuuunnyyyyy? XDMEANWHILE!!
Skye: *drops back on the bed* how should i know? that girl's more complicated than a ten sided rubiks cube.....
TheGameArtCritic on November 24, 2008, 6:38:44 AM
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Luminos: heck, why do ALL artists do this? meanwhile
Me: my favorite part was the disappearing pants in the Edward Is Totally In Bella's Room scene. XDDD
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 9:56:01 AM
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Me: the daemons are goin power-crazed!!! they've been feeding off her emotions, both good and bad, and now they have enough power to take over!! and if we dont do something NOW, this might be permanent!!!Twilight: *is tearing up, still screaming* MAKE IT STOP!!! PLEASE, IT HURTS!!! STOP IT!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:19:02 AM
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G. Eclipse: *has appeared, and, though before had a look of concern for Twilly, now holds a look of determintaion to help her*Me: he's... gonna help her fight them... *facepalm* are you really sure she can handle it...?
G. Eclipse: *without hesitation, walks into Twilight to help her battle the Daemons*
Me: *whispering* you f***ing asshole...
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 10:23:50 AM
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Me: she's dealt with two almost her whole life, i dont think another would hurt too much...Twilight: *eyes snap open as she realizes eclipse is in there too* e-eclipse?? what are you---arghhh!!!! *doubles over again, holding her head* MAKE IT STOP!!! *is practically begging* GET THEM TO STOP, ECLIPSE!! I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE!! I COULD JUST DIE!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:34:51 AM
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Eclipse: *in Twilight's mind, he looks normal, except for his irises, for they glow turqoise* Twilly... please... I'm here to help you...Meanwhile:
me: dang. He really did it. I'm worried for Twilly...
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 10:49:32 AM
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(in twilly's mind)Twilight: eclipse? oh god... help... it hurts... so much...
*her mind is a ravaged city, burned down in some places and frozen solid in others*
Twilight: they're going insane... it hurts, eclipse... help...
(outside)
Me: all we can do is hope he can help her....
Twilight: *has stopped screaming, but is still crying and curled up in a ball*
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:52:46 AM
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Lupe: it's like she's having an unconcious emotional breakdown...Me: yeahhhh...
merwhrialar
Eclipse: i know, Twilly... I know... I'll help you fight them as best as i can... we can do this - YOU can do this...
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:08:46 AM
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(in twilly's mind)Twilight: *looks up at him, eyes full of gratitude* thanks eclipse. *looks around* first thing we gotta do is find them.
(outside)
Twilight: *has calmed down a whole lot, but is still curled up in a ball*
Me: i think we should lend some emotional support. *walks over to twilly and sits down next to her and puts an arm around her* come on, twilly, you can do it..... we believe in you.
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:31:57 AM
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Me: agreed. *walks over to Twilly, crouching down beside her* be your own mobian...TWILLY'S MIIIIIIND...
Eclipse: that's the spirit, Twilight... I think they would reside in the hottest and coldest places here...
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:42:49 AM
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IN TEH MIND!Twilight: a decent conclusion. lets see..... *points out a tall building near the middle of the city* see that skyscraper? i need you to search of fira and draw her there. i'll find blizagga, then we'll fight them together.
OUTSIDE!!!
Twilight: *is breathing almost normally, and has relaxed a bit*
Me: that's the spirit........ *to critic* is lupe still over there?
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:46:53 AM
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Me: yeah. He's also calmed down a bit.Lupe: yeah, well the chick still's freaky...
MIND
Eclipse: got it. *runs off in the direction of the skyscraper*
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:58:18 AM
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MIND!Twilight: *thinking* heheh. that eclipse never ceases to amaze me. *runs in another diraction, heading towards the frozen part of the city* BLIZAGGA!!! COME OUT!!
OUTSIDE!
Me: she freaks out everyone. even herself. even ME. you get used to it eventually.
Twilight: *is breathing steadily*
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 12:03:24 PM
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Lupe: *Shudders* i see this... this thingy... this light around her... it's purple...Me: it's called a dark aura. You can see them when you're possessed by Condemned.
MIND
Eclipse: *breaks down the door to the flaming skyscraper* Oh Firrrraaaaa.... i know you're in heeeerrreeeee... *walks inside*
mechadragon13 on September 27, 2008, 11:36:35 AM
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Me: c-condemned?? but... how??MIND!!
Fira: *is hiding in the flames, her red-and-orange coat blending into the inferno* kekekekekeh......
Twilight: BLIZAGGA!!!!
Blizagga: *is within one of the ice crystals, almost invisible*
TheGameArtCritic on September 27, 2008, 1:23:36 PM
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(you totally stole that from Condemned... XD)Me: It's one of Condemned's "gifts" to the host.
MIND
Eclipse: *looks around some more, ears twitching at any noise*
mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 3:24:28 AM
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Me: *freaking out* so condemned is in twilly???????????TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 6:20:05 AM
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Me: no! Nononono noooo.... no. Not in Twilly. Condemned's HOSTS can see the aura of peoplemechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 7:02:48 AM
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Me: oh... *calms down* i was about to say.......MIND!!
Fira: heheheheheh...... RAAAGH!! *leaps out of the flames, going straight for eclipse*
MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: ......i know you're here. come out!!
Blizagga: *is standing on top of an ice shard* well, well, little girl wants to play some more *toothy grin* allright, alright, i'll play!! *leaps off the ice right at twilly*
OUTSIDE!!
Twilight: *shivers*
Me: *notices* she must have found blizagga...
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 9:29:09 AM
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me: aye. I hope she'll be ok...MIND.
Eclipse: *words are spoken with hate and disgust* Fira... *dodge rolls the attack, woo Sora*
mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 9:43:29 AM
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Fira: *lands a bit past him, and faces him. her fur looks like it's on fire, and her eyes are blazing* i hear anger in your voice, hybrid. what troubles you? *grins*MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: *easily side-steps the pounce, and glares at blizagga* why? why do you hurt me like this??
Blizagga: *her fur looks spiked out, as if it were frozen solid, and just looking in her eyes makes you feel cold* *grins* you mean you haven't figured it out yet?
OUTSIDE!!!
Me: .........*thoughtful*
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 1:02:33 PM
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Eclipse: a LOT troubles me... maybe I'm just taking out my frustrasion on YOU... at the same time I'll be helping Twilight. Two birds, one stone.OUTSIDE.
Me: Mish? You being thoughtful?
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 2:41:18 AM
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Me: no effing duh. just thinking...... eclipse..... isnt very happy right now....so to speak...MIND!!
Fira: ah, so you ARE full of anger, hedgebat. very well. i'll help you relieve this anger. RAAAWRGH!! *leaps towards him, claws-first*
meanwhile!!!
Twilight: *glares* what do you mean, figure it out?
Blizagga: you're dumber than i thought. *sigh* hopefully this might help you remember!!! *stomps the ground with her front paws causing ice shards to shoot out of the ground*
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 5:43:48 AM
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Eclipse: *sidesteps and hammerfists Fira in the back of the head, suprisingly strong, even without the help of Condemned*OUTSIDE
Me: dude. Eclipse is almost NEVER happy... or are you talking about his frustration? Mish. He's frustrated because he's dead. He's not truly himself, just an IMAGE of himself caused by the semi-conciousness he still has left, and our ties to him.
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 7:45:07 AM
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Me: makes sense. MIND!
Fira: *is hit* agh!! grrrrrr..... *tries to bite at his arm*
Twilight: AAH! *is scrambling frantically to avoid being impaled*
Blizagga: *furious* rrrrragh! *jumps at twilight*
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 8:10:23 AM
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Eclipse: *steps backwards a little and punches Fira in the teeth* HA! *runs away back to the entrance of the building* Hey Fira! *taunting* You can't catch me! Hahaha! *runs out and heads to where he and Twilly met*MEANWHILE
Me: oh. He's following through with... THE PLAN.
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 8:48:19 AM
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Fira: RAGH!! *rubs her snout and snarls angrily* this is a race you will not win, hybrid. *gives chase*MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: *rolls to the side, narrowly avoiding getting pounced on* *ear twitches* heh. *gets to her feet and makes a face at blizagga* YOU'RE TOO SLOW!!!!!!! 8D
Blizagga: *snarls* wanna bet?
Twilight: yep!! *runs like hell*
Blizagga: *chases*
OUTSIDE!!
Me: this is gonna be interesting...
Twilight: *smiles slightly*
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 8:50:15 AM
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me: omg she pulled a Sonic! XDMIIIIIIIIIIIND
Eclipse: *still running, he sohuts behind him* WHAT ARE YA, A DEAD TURTLE??? HA!
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 8:54:15 AM
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Fira: *gets seriously ticked, and tries to slash at eclipse as she runs*MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: wow, you're slower than my great-grandmother!!!
Blizagga: insolent fool!! *tries to catch up, but SHE'S TOO SLOW!!! 8D*
OUTSIDE!!!
twilight: *smile gets wider*
Me: looks like twilly's enjoying herself XD
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 9:10:57 AM
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Me: BLIZZAGA'S TOO SLOW!!! XDMIND
Eclipse: *barely manages to dodge it* ooooh! So close, and yet so far! You need to try harder, young lady! Get A's in school! Make the football team! TRY HARDER! *runs faster*
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:19:58 AM
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OUTSIDE!!!Me: eclipse has a good sense of humor, even as a ghost!! XD
INSIDE!!!
Fira: *vein* why you little...... *is seriously pissed* I'LL GET YOU YOU STUBBORN LITTLE HYBRID MUTT!!! *runs faster*
MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: *is totally having fun with this* hehehehe. whazzamatter, blizagga, cant catch a kid? come on, you're better than thiiiis!
Blizagga: you're damn right i am!!! *tries to speed up*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:31:02 AM
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MINDEclipse: "Get me"? "GET ME"? How are you gonna get me if you can't even succesfully attack me!? My god! You're such a naive little daemon, aren'tcha? *reaches his destination* come on! HIT ME!
OUTSIDE
Me: why so serious???? XD
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:47:45 AM
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it's up there ^^TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:50:07 AM
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up where?mechadragon13 on September 21, 2008, 7:17:06 AM
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whoaaaaaah....... thats really somethin' critic... i cant believe how different things would have been if shad handt stolen those shoes......question. who's the winged demon?
TheGameArtCritic on September 21, 2008, 8:09:50 AM
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Eclipse. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEmechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 8:06:19 AM
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cooooooool....MAKE A PIC!!! XD i am totally imagining that part in my head and it would make an awesome pic XD
TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:35:40 AM
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which part? There were a few.mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 8:44:32 AM
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well DUH. my bad. i mean the part where he flew and became a shadow against the moon. you know, that last sentence. you should do a pic of eclipse watching them too..... it would be really interesting....TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:47:05 AM
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wheee! Maybe I should!mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 12:04:00 PM
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DO IT.ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on September 18, 2008, 7:22:08 AM
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The already astounding funniness of this conversation was escalted as my friend read it aloud while we were in school today :) I thought you would like to here that fact XD Srsly, the "your're my dog" caught us off gaurd, we laughed like idiots and eveyone around us was all "...wtf is they're problem?!" I never knew Condemned could make funnies too 8DTheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 9:54:01 AM
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HE MAKES FUNNIES.woot.
I'm glad to have entertained you, and your friend.
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:00:45 AM
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me: *sniffle* that was very meaningful...Eclipse: *still blacked out. He is now burning up (fever, not literally)*
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:52:00 AM
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Me: *closes her eyes and is silent* .............Twilight: its because it's the truth..... *sighs and puts a water-covered hand on eclipse's forehead,trying to cool him down. she sings again*
Down, the water holds me down
It's like I have no weight
Me: *hears what song she's singing and joins in, eyes still closed*
And now, I'm floating with the tide
The sun is on my face
I hear you talking. I hear you speak
Someone's talking saying something
But I'm on my own, there's nothing left to say
It carries me away
And you call out
I can't hear you
I can't feel you
No, I can't feel nothing
And you call out
I can't hear you
No, I can't hear nothing
And you all look the same, now
You all look the same, now
Now, there's nothing that I want
To take me from this place
I'm drifting further with the tide
That carries me away
And you call out
I can't hear you
I can't feel you
No, I can't feel nothing
And you all look the same, now
You all look the same, now
I know you're trying hard to reach me
You'll always feel the cold without me
I know you're trying hard to reach me
You'll always feel the cold without me
I know you're trying hard...
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:59:23 AM
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Me: Who sings that? I know it's not important now, but I'm curious.Eclipse: *doesn't move at all from the contact of cold water*
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 2:30:52 AM
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Me: the song's called carry me away by chris lake, but is sung by emma hewitt......... its a good song.......... the first one was faded by cascada.Twilight: ............. *starts tearing up* I HATE THIS!!! IM SO FREAKING USELESS!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 9:56:42 AM
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Me: no you're not... don't feel bad...Eclipse: *has gotten worse*
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 11:11:04 AM
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Twilight: *tears are now flowing freely* i AM!!! i cant do anything to save him and it pisses me off!!! goddamn it, it feels horrible!!!! *punches the floor in fury, and leaves a little dent, but bruises her knuckles* aghh! damn....... *cant take it anymore and starts sobbing* im so sorry, eclipse.......Me: twilly..... *twillys emotions reflect in her face and she starts tearing up too, she wipes her tears away, she sings slowly*
when my time comes
forget the wrong that i've done
help me leave behind some
reasons to be missed
and dont resent me
and when you're feeling empty
leave out all the rest......
leave out all the rest............
forgetting all the hurt inside
you've learned to hide so well
pretending someone else can come
and save me from myself
i can't be who you are.......
i cant be who you are.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 11:14:54 AM
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Me: It's... hard, Twilly... but his will is strong... there IS a good chance that he won't truly leave us... if you know what i mean...Eclipse: *is very pale*
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 11:20:26 AM
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Twilight: *senses the change in eclipse's condition and looks up, and at seeing his situation, she starts tearing up again* ..........oh god......TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 11:29:04 AM
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Me: it's a shame, really... no matter how hard he tried to do so, he couldn't get rid of Condemned on time... he tried everything... i guess he really DOES stay with you until death... *scowls* it's all HIS fault... *tightens fists*Eclipse: *still lays there, his breathing, still at it's worst. His sickness appears to affect him most on the inside, slowly destroying his heart and lungs, and eating away at his muscles, making him weak*
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 2:35:55 AM
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Twilight: .................... is his mind still intact?Me: say what?
Twilight: the daemons. they can talk to each other with their minds. if his subconscious int screwed up yet, one of themcan get in there and covey anything eclipse may be wanting to say..... only problem might be condemned.....
Me: can condemned talk to the daemons? maybe that would work... critic?
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 6:07:21 AM
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me: it... no. No. It's over. Look.Eclipse: *not breathing*
Me: he's dead.
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 6:11:04 AM
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Twilight: OH NO!!!! no he cant be, he cant, be he can't........ no......Me: .............. *bows her head*
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 8:40:35 AM
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Me: Yeah... good kid... just wasn't ever in the right place at the right time... Where should we bury him? Or will we cremate him?Rosette: *is sobbing, and hugging Eclipse's dead body*
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 9:10:17 AM
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Twilight: *cant even talk, she's so distraught*Me: i wouldnt know how to answer that question....... you decide. if you wanna bury him, he can be buried somewhere in HNHQ grounds.... we'll honor him.
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:19:10 AM
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Me: if he was here, he'd like that... I'm not too fond of cremation anyway... where on the grounds? Is there some place rural?Rosette: *sob*
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 9:33:55 AM
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Me: probably. why rural though?TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:40:56 AM
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Me: it's a place of memories... rural places are where most people bury other people. Ok, who wants to touch the body?Everyone: D:
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 8:29:31 AM
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Me: ............eeee......Twilight: i'll do it. *looks up at rosette* will.... will you help?
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 8:31:01 AM
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Rosette: s-sure.Me: ok then!
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 8:34:38 AM
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Twilight: okay. *stands up and stands by eclipse's feet, and bends down* you pick up his head, m'kay? one, two, up!Me: .... i know where to put him.
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 8:49:39 AM
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Rosette: *picks up the head, tears flow down her cheeks*Me: where?
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 8:54:54 AM
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Me: a nice spot near the back. it's got trees and this patch of white flowers......Twilight: *carrying eclipse, she walks with rosette to the spot described my mish* .....here?
Me: *nods*
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 8:58:28 AM
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Rosette: *sets Eclipse down, and wipes the tears from her eyes* he was so cold......Me: Mish, this is great! *draws a shovel, and starts digging* yay.
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 9:20:20 AM
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Me: you're welcome. *grabs a shovel also*Twilight: hold up. *goes daemon* i got this. *starts scooping out large amoounts of dirt with her large claws*
TheGameArtCritic on September 21, 2008, 4:04:29 AM
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me: wait... the chip in his head... it's still there...Rosette: you're right... i feel like it's violating his body...
me: *gets out a small pocket knife* this was Eclipse's pocket knife that he owned before Condemned came. I think it would be fair to use this to get the chip out.
mechadragon13 on September 21, 2008, 7:18:36 AM
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Twilight: *shakes her head and keeps digging* dont look at me, i'm not doin' it.Me: *shakes her head* im a little faint of heart...... i dont think i could bear to watch, much less do it.
TheGameArtCritic on September 21, 2008, 8:11:47 AM
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Me: alright then, Mish. You may want to look away. *uses the knife to stab at Eclipse's head until a bloody, thin, square object falls out. The tip of the knife is now drenched in blood*Rosette: oh my god... i should have looked away too...
mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 8:07:38 AM
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Me: *was covering her eyes* ehhh... is it over...?Twilight: yep. *still digging*
Me: ok. *uncovers her eyes and sees the bloody mess* oh lord. *covers eyes again* sorry.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:37:13 AM
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Me: no, no. It's ok. If i were you, I'd be squeamish as well. It's that damn badger... he shoved that chip deep into his head... had to dig to get it out...Rosette: *face of disgust*
mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 2:46:48 AM
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Me: *still covering eyes* aww, thats gross.....Twilight: *sticks her tongue out in disgust, and keeps digging*
Me: *uncovers eyes* i guess i can take it. i saw interview with the vampire this weekend.
TheGameArtCritic on September 23, 2008, 8:32:10 AM
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me: daaaang, woman, that's a SCARY movie!Rosette: are we done, yet, Twilly?
mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 12:05:39 PM
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Twilight: *sticks her paw in the hole, and leans down uptil it is flat against the bottom* yup. it's deep enough. *backs away from the hole and reverts to her normal form* .....me: ............
TheGameArtCritic on September 23, 2008, 12:30:06 PM
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Me: alright. *puts in Eclipse's body*Rosette: *snifflesob*
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 2:51:22 AM
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Me: .........Twilight: *loud sniffle*
Me: ....anyone have anything they wanna say?
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 8:20:03 AM
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Me: I don't know... i fear if i try, I'll be reduced to a puddle of tears...Rosette: same... *wipes a tear from her eyes*
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 8:36:41 AM
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Me: agreed. *wipes away tears* Twilight: ....... we'll miss ya eclipse..... *starts pushing the dirt back into the hole*
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 8:47:55 AM
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Everyone: *helps*Lupe: *is suddenly there, and looking at the body with curiosity* so... that was him?
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 9:46:48 AM
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Me: WHOA GOD!!! *pulls out her wrench in surprise and points it at lupe* oh. *puts it down* it's you.....Twilight: *finishes pushing in the rest of the dirt and smooths it flat over the grave*
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:15:48 AM
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Lupe: what's wrong with ME?Me: ... uhhhh...
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:30:04 AM
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Me: nothing, i just didnt expect you.....Twilight: *lays down in front of the grave, then sniffles* ........ *suddendly stands up and lets out an anguished howl* AWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:45:21 AM
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Lupe: she seems upset. Was his death really that bad?Me: is the sky blue?
Lupe: ...what?
Me: one day, he was perfectly normal, the next, he's coughing up a storm. It was bad.
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:53:30 AM
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Twilight: *returns to normal* it was horrible! he just suddendly got so sick........... it happened so fast...TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:58:46 AM
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Lupe: um... yikes... but... i saw a glimpse of the body before you buried him... other than the vampire-pale skin, he seemed like he died healthy...Me: Condemned, after three years, kills his hosts with a toxic gas.
Lupe: D8
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:03:53 AM
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Me: basically, he was killed from the inside. thats why he didnt look any different. Twiligt: *shakes her head* terrible, terrible....
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:06:57 AM
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Lupe: that's gross.Me: Twilly... *pats her on the back*
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:23:26 AM
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Twilight: i'll be ok, critic. you should worry about rosette. she'll be taking it harder than i am...... *sniffle*Me: *picks the bloody chip up off the ground and holds it away from her with her index and thumb* so... whaddowedo with this goddamned thing?
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:29:42 AM
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Me: BURN IT. It's a blight upon us all. Goddamn chip...Lupe: so Rosette was his girlfriend... huh. Tha's (really pronounced like this) a shame...
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:41:17 AM
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Twilight: better idea. *snatches the chip from mish and turns her other hand into a light blue demon hand, and freezes the chip solid. then, she tosses it in the air and punches the frozen chip so hard, that it shatters into a million microscopic pieces*Me: i dont think that chip'll bother us anymore....
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:50:31 AM
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Me: IT'S SO PRETTY ALL SPARKLEY AND RED LIKE THAAAT *is mezmerized*Lupe: is she ALWAYS like this?
mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 2:59:49 AM
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Twilight: *Returns to hand to normal* yep. all the time.... unless she suddendly decides to turn serious.Me: which doesnt happen often XD
Twilight: *suddendly falls to her knees holding her head* AGHH!!!
Me: twilight?? whats wrong???
Twilight: daemons... bad........ agh...... it hurts.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 11:10:04 AM
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Lupe: w-what's wrong with her???Me: um... internal daemons?
Lupe: you mean "demons"?
Me: er... no.
Lupe: great... more paranormal crap...
mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 11:56:35 AM
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Twilight: *still holding her head in pain* urgh... i IS pronounced daemons..... and they're going power-crazy!!!! they're screaming in my head!!! AAAAAAH!!!!Me: this is not cool.
TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 2:34:18 PM
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Lupe: *his heart rate speeds up from fear*Me: oh boy...
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 8:57:25 AM
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Me: umm... *takes a few steps back* id stand back if i were you.Twilight: RAAAAAGH!!!! *is screaming in pain* THEY WONT STOP!! IT HURTS!!!!! AAAAARGH!!!!!
Me: umm...... i think she's having one of those episodes like eclipse used to have....... eeeek.
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 9:47:43 AM
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Lupe: Eclipse had these episodes...? Um... wait - WHAT THE F*** CAUSED THE WOLFIDNA WENCH TO GO ALL ABOUT LIKE THIS???!!!Me: ummm... i don't know. Ask Mish.
Lupe: this is really f-freaking me out, man... i never asked to be put into this mess... now I'm just gonna walk away and... *takes a few steps back*
Me: *grabs him* you still need our help. And Twilly needs our help. WE WILL HELP.
SpiralDemon on September 15, 2008, 10:14:28 PM
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dawwwww..... poor emo....mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 7:40:22 AM
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Dear Critic,I have currently run off to laugh my @$$ off. I'll be back in a jiffy!! ^^
Sincerely, Mish.
PS: And now for something completely different. ^^
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 9:20:08 AM
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roflmao!but now you're not online... boo <:(
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 11:17:31 AM
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Dear Critic,Still laughing........ be back tomorrow XD
PS i have to say, that was some seriously funny stuff XD
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 12:46:35 PM
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o rly? HOORAY!Kirbyt on September 14, 2008, 2:02:27 PM
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That is so funny!TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 2:03:20 PM
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you like it?Condemned: you're my dog.
SONICXROUGELUVA on September 11, 2008, 5:58:32 AM
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THAT IS AWESOME!!!TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 11:51:28 AM
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thank you ^^mechadragon13 on September 11, 2008, 3:17:01 AM
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O.O so was an echidna???Twilight: O.O no effing way!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 11:51:16 AM
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OMG I KNOW!!!I was trying to find the right animal for Codemned, but then i realized that the time he was in was when Echidnas were dominant sooo... yeah. I said "screw this" and made him an echidna.
thank you Fleetway <3
mechadragon13 on September 12, 2008, 2:25:08 AM
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Twilight: NO! I REFUSE TO BE EVEN REMOTELY RELATED TO THAT ABOMINATION!!! *freaks out*Me: chill, twilly.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 8:30:14 AM
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Condemned: lol I'm related to you.Eclipse: dude, she's gonna punch me because of you.
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:07:43 AM
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Twilight: no. no, no, no, no, NO!!! *holds her head* gaaah!! my brain hurts!!!!!!me: ow. me too.
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 8:36:30 AM
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Eclipse:... or she'll do that.Condmened: aww... i wanted her to punch you... the pain could have stimulated me...
Eclipse: D:<
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:44:54 AM
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Twilight: hey, my echidna temper is stifled by my wolf calmness. so dont expect a punch from me anytime soon.Me: heheh. one way she's the total opposite of eclipse. twilight has very good control and restraint, and eclipse has a hard time with those.
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 1:25:12 PM
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me: indeed. His one weakness. Besides seeing his friends and family hurt. BECAUSE IT HURTS HIM.Condmened: *talks through Eclipse* stupid hybrid... you're not an echidna, and you're not a wolf. You're a wolfidna. No, I'm sorry... YOU'RE DIRTY. YOU DIRTY FILTHY MUTT.
Me: ok, Condemned, NOW you're asking for it.
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 6:52:13 AM
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Twilight: *suddendly glares at condemned* what did you just call me?Me: ohhhhhhhh lord. now he's done it. nothing's more dangerous than a seriously pissed wolfidna.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 6:56:19 AM
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Me: i can't believe he's making Eclipse say all this crap...Condemned: i called you a mutt. Of course, you wouldn't understand... we all know that mutt brains are too small to understand insults...
Me: *facepalm*
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:42:12 AM
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Twilight: *growls in extreme anger* *through gritted teeth* you'll regret you ever thought of saying that, condemned........ *is trying hard to hold herself back, she doesnt wanna hurt eclipse*me: she's trying hard....... hope she dont crack.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 7:44:42 AM
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Condemned: hahaha! I didn't know mutts KNEW how to feel rage! HAHAHA!!Me: burn.... poor Twilly...
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:58:59 AM
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Twilight: *snarls, and takes a step forward, but manages to contain herself* i'm not like you condemned. i wont kill out of rage.Me: *phew* im glad twilly's so level-headed......... very unlike an echidna, OR a wolf......
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:11:05 AM
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Condemned: daww... really? But it's so FUN... *malicious laugh* *turns back into Eclipse*Eclipse: w...what happened?
Me: Condemned. Twilly. Insults.
Eclipse: oh...
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:24:46 AM
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Twilight: *is taking deep breaths, trying to dissipate her anger* grrrrrr..... that thing annoys me greatly......Me: ya did the right thing, twilly.
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:34:55 AM
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Eclipse: hell. I would have punched him if i could. I'm sorry you had to hear that, Twilly...mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:39:31 AM
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Twilight: *is calm now* its ok, eclipse. it's just that..... being called names just for being a cross-breed makes me angry.... and sad........Me: it sucks, really. she's has to deal with it practically her whole life....
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:45:39 AM
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Eclipse: *opens his arms wide* do you need a hug?Me: cute.
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:59:43 AM
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Twilight: yes. yes i do. *hug*Me: *smiles*
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 11:55:34 AM
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Eclipse: *hugs Twilly*Me: dawwwwwww...
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 7:37:04 AM
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Twilight: *sniffles* thanks... i needed that.Me: *still smiling, but more widely now* *to critic* we dont see these moments very often anymore...... i miss those times......
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 9:23:43 AM
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me: as do i. Now all we see is discrimination and racism... not to mention death and hate...Eclipse: there... see? It's all good.
Me: y-yeah.. it's... it's all... *starts to cry*
Eclipse: What? What's wrong??
Me: it's... and you... and... *snifflesob*
Eclipse: i don't know what you're talking a... ab... ack! *coughs, and becomes unsteady. He holds his throat, wide eyed*
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 11:16:48 AM
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Twilight: eclipse? eclipse?! Critic, whats wrong?????Me: i dunno!!!! *freaking out*
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 12:48:04 PM
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Me: he dies on the 18th. The countdown starts today. It will get worse and worse over the next few days.Eclipse: oh god... *clears his throat* yeah... um... that was... wow... that was weird.
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 10:52:24 AM
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Twilight: *in disbelief* ....no........................Me: *thinking* should i say it?
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 11:56:28 AM
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Eclipse: *rocks a bit* ah... ah... ok... room... room is spinning....Me: dizziness and extreme fatigue. That is what happens on the next stage.
Eclipse: ... or maybe I'm just sick. That's weird. *cough* I've never been this ill before... *cough* why now?
Me: Eclipse... *sad look of sadness*
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:01:32 PM
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Twilight: ......... *is too scared to talk for fear of tearing up* ......... *sniffle*Me: twilly? you have something to say?
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:05:35 PM
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Eclipse: Twilly? What's wrong?Me: AUGH!!! THIS IS TOO MUCH!!! *runs out of the.... story place... thing*
Eclipse: O_O
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:23:38 PM
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Me: you go on ahead, twilly, i'll be right back. *runs after critic*Twilight: well.....umm...... how do i put this..... *blushes only slightly*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:44:52 PM
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Eclipse: er... what is it?meanwhile
Me: DX GAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAA *sobbing and running*
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:50:46 PM
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Me: critiiiiic, come back! *catches up to critic* critic, whats wrong?? *seriously concerned*MEANWHILE!!!!
Twilight: err..... ok, fine. i'll say it. *clears throat, turns a liitlle bit redder*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:54:15 PM
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Eclipse: look, you can just say it. I won't laugh. I swear.menwhial
Me: I WAS TALKING TO SOMEONE WHO'S GONNA DIE IN 3 DAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYSSSSSS!!!!!! DX
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:05:27 PM
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Me: critic, i was talking to him too. just calm down... you brought this upon yourself, ya know.MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: im no worried you'll laugh, it's just...... fine, i'll say it. *clears throat and turns slightly redder*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:08:10 PM
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Eclipse: -_-meanwhile
Me:... *sniff* i *sniffle* KNOW *sniff* i just... IT'S HARD!!!!! BUT YOU HAVE TO KEEP IT DRAMATIC/HORROR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH *sob*
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:18:16 PM
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Me: it's ok...... i know it's your style, and i understand that. just, dont be too hard on yourself, ok? *smiles* AND NOW FOR SOMETHING COMPLETELY DIFFERENT! heheheh. lets go back over there.MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: ....... OHHH!!! i cant take it anymore!!!! *practically glomps eclipse, starting to tear up* i dont want you to go!!!! you cant just leave like that!!! i wont let you!!! *hugs him tighter*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:28:38 PM
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Eclipse: Twilly... I'm not going anywhere...Me: *sniffle* *walks in* oh how sad that sentence is...
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:31:06 PM
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Twilight: yes you are... and its not just that.....Me: you mean she hasnt said it yet??? sheez!
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:33:39 PM
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Me: OMFG DON'T SAY IT, TWILLY!!!!!!!!!!Eclipse: say what? WHAT IS GOING ON??!! *cough*
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:49:13 PM
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Me: i didnt mean that...... *rolls eyes*Twilight: *looks at mish with wide eyes, still hast let go of eclipse* umm..... you want me to spill THAT??
Me: ya might as well....
Twilight: *turns SERIOUSLY red* ohh.. umm... okay then.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:51:04 PM
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Everyone: *waits and listens*mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:55:33 PM
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Twilight: *glares at mish* i hate you. *still hugging eclipse* umm.... you guys promise you wont freak?TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:56:27 PM
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me: um. NO.Eclipse: why would we, eh? We're your FRIENDS.
me: true.
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 2:00:21 PM
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Twilight: umm.... yeah. *coughs, and turns really red* umm... eclipse? mish wants me to tell you that....... i.........kinda................like you.Me: *throws her hands up in the air* THANK YOU!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 2:02:13 PM
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Eclipse: ... what?Me: OoO OMFG!!!!! How would... and Eclipse... and Rosette.... WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT???????????
LIGHTNING!!!!!
LIGHTNING'S GONNA KILL ECLIPSE............ early-ish.
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 2:08:25 PM
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Twilight: *glare* you promised you wouldnt freak.Me: no its not like thaaaaaat!! lightning knows ^^ she told him. she just.... kinda...... developed a thing for him after a while XD but its nothing major and/or serious ^^
Twilight: pfft. whatever. i told you it was a bad idea to tell them thaaaat. *hugz eclipse*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 2:10:55 PM
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Eclipse: this is... um... wow... *face goes red*Me: OoO I'm sorry for freaking out... it's just....
catfight.
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 2:17:46 AM
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Twilight: ^^ *turns redder*Me: yeah bu she doesntl like, REALLY REALLY like him. here, watch. TWILLY!!
Twilight: whaaaat?
Me: give eclipse a kiss!
Twilight: what? no. eww! i dont like him that much....
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 8:18:41 AM
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Eclipse: ok. Wow. Phew... for a second there... yeah................................ *is silent*Me: Eclipse?
Eclipse: *falls down*
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 8:29:15 AM
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Twilight: *was hugging him and held him up so he DIDNT fall* eclipse? *freaking out* OH NO!!!! ECLIPSE!!! Me: and so it begins......... *sniffle*
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 8:38:00 AM
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Me: aye... *sniffle*Eclipse: *has blacked out, but this time it's worse*
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 8:54:06 AM
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Twilight: guys? GUYS!? GUYS???!!! he's not responding!!! what do we do????Me: ....we wait.
Twilight: WAIT? but... but he'll DIE!!! you cant just let him die like that!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 9:49:07 AM
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me: don't worry, Twilly... he's stll got two days on him. For now, he needs rest... *draws up a bed, and places Eclipse in it*Eclipse: *still blacked out*
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 9:56:59 AM
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Twilight: *feels totally useless* so thats it then. we're just gonna let him fade away untiil there's nothing left?? *sighs exasperatedly and sits down on the floor abruptly. she shakes her head and grumbles to herself*Me: she hates feeling useless........ *sits down in the same manner twilight did* so do i...............
Twilight: *sings softly*
Who's got nothing to say
I'm not gonna wait around
Let you run my whole life down
So you can watch me fade away
Me: *joins twilly*
You try to fit
Fit me in your perfect box
You try to fit
Fit me in a perfect box
You let me slip between the cracks
Now I've faded
Into someone else
Made me someone I don't wanna be
Yeah I'm faded
My true colour's gone
Like a picture nobody sees
Yeah I've faded
Like I never was
Till I don't even know myself
Now I'm faded
Into what you want
But I'm not takin' it too well
Now I'm faded.............
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on September 11, 2008, 9:55:47 AM
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Oh wow, that was good! I like backgroubd stories alot X3 They just add more to the adventure of the main plot lolSo Condemned wouldn't be himself if he was just luffed a little! But then there would be no epic story of Eclipse so never mind 8D
TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 11:49:33 AM
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bwahahahaha.... yesh. Condmned just wanted a hug XDsucks to be him.
SpiralDemon on September 4, 2008, 8:23:46 AM
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thx ^^mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:41:50 AM
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.........................wow............... just, wow..... that was.... wow. reminds me of that oneshot i wrote............. but this is so much better......... wow. *is happy*TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:44:43 AM
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thanks XDMy favorite part, i believe, was the ending ^^
I thought it was cute ^^
mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 8:07:08 AM
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i knoooow..... i loved it too..... shows how much one's life affects the other....TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 8:54:06 AM
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yes indeed!ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 31, 2008, 10:35:58 AM
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*squee* How sweet X3 Eclispe seems to be a troubled little thing, I hope he gets well soon. Though Rosette helps him alot, why does she really find interest him? You listed all those things and it just made me wonder >.>TheGameArtCritic on August 31, 2008, 3:22:34 PM
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i dunno.... i gues she likes him because1. he really is sweet on the inside, and
2. he saved her life.
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 24, 2008, 9:06:35 AM
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lulz teh eval 8D I am a sucker for killing cops XD Also, may I suggest a suggestion, that is, if you don't mind :3 NEVAR start a sentence with 'But'. I DON'T KNOW WHY you aren't supposed to do that, but my mom is always "Don't start a sentence with 'but' or I'll disown you!" So yeah, apparently if it's dialogue, it doesn't matter -__- But I am still impressed and amazed by your writing! They're are very few good authors 'round here, it saddens me so :(TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 8:40:22 AM
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YOU ARE ONE OF THEM!!!!Jerk... doubting yourself..... XD
Also for the "but" thing...... hmm.... i'll see about that....
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 25, 2008, 8:49:52 AM
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I ALWAYS doubt myself, it is a plauge upon my house :x...lol romeo/juliet reference :D
Take your time with the 'but' stuff(this is sounding very naughty...) Instead of using that, you can use 'although' and 'however' or anything else that plays the same role. It is very hard to get used to, I still make the mistake and end rewriting whole paragraphs because of it D8
TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 8:58:28 AM
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waaaaaiiiiit.I can't find "but". - IT'S ON YOUR BEHIND, STUPID! XD
no.
Which thingy is it in? (omfg that was nasty)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 25, 2008, 9:08:41 AM
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There was one sentence in Chapter three, and I think that's it...OMG YOU WIN FOR HAVING THE LEAST AMOUNT OF 'BUT'S 8D good on ya mate n_n Though, if you ever get the urge, you are now prepared!....I am so totally hating 'but' now >__<
TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:05:27 AM
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lol ^^ I'll go find it ^^mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:36:00 AM
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whoa..... i had no idea eclipse felt this way........ *wipes eyes, and finds a tear* eh? didnt notice that...... im tearing up for real right now......TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:39:44 AM
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lol you're like Eclipse!Eclipse: I sweaar to GOD I didn't cry because I was sad...
Me: suuuuuuuuuure.....
Eclipse: *hand turns into a claw and he impales me* SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:44:54 AM
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......yeah............. i guess so. lightning and twilight mean THAT MUCH to his normal self, huh?TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:50:45 AM
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well, they DID except him into their team. They all had a pretty fun time together..........mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:56:53 AM
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yeah...... i hope those memories are what bring him back....TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 4:08:25 AM
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I do think so............................and a near-death experience XD
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 4:49:47 AM
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eeeeee....... if 'clipsy is gonna have a near-death experience, it's gonna be from acid...... i SO hope eclipse is immune to taipan venom...... >.>TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 5:45:49 AM
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ooooooooooooh lets hope XDmechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 12:19:59 PM
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acid's gonna crack soon...... O.OTheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 3:16:04 AM
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I can see that. Yeesh...what are the symptoms of the poison?
mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 6:50:37 AM
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well..... there's bloody wound discharge, fang marks in the skin and swelling at the site of the bite, severe localized pain, discoloration, such as redness and bruising , burning
convulsions, fainting, dizziness, weakness, blurred vision, excessive sweating, fever, increased thirst, loss of muscle, coordination, nausea, numbness and tingling, especially in the mouth, rapid pulse, altered mental state, shock, paralysis, and breathing difficulties.
i found a list. but by the time you start seeing these it might be a little late..... taipan venom sets in quick.
TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 9:59:50 AM
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that's a loooooooot of symptoms........ O.Omechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 11:44:33 AM
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yep. but those are just general venomous snake bite symptoms. the best way for eclipse to save himself is not to get bitten at all. acid's venom is fast. one bite is all it takes..........TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 4:30:40 AM
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I highly doubt he won't stop taunting Acid. He is sooooo screwed.Luckily, Condemned will keep him barely alive, so he has more time then most ppl! ^^
lucky.....
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 4:34:11 AM
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NOT GOOD!!! it wont give us enough time to make an anti-venom!!!!TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 4:49:46 AM
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OMG NUUUUUUUUUUU!!!! WE CAN'T HAVE HIM DIE!!!!!uh oh.
Acid.
Not good.
Maybe if we ruuuuuuuushhh...
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 4:56:29 AM
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...rush?TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:35:58 AM
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yeah! If we hurry with what we're doing!mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 6:42:00 AM
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okay then...........TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 8:47:27 AM
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AWESOME.mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 12:53:48 PM
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Me+all my OCs: O.O oh @#$%.Me: how... could you? WHYYYY???? WHYYYYYYYYYYY?????
im goin' back to the rp and replying to this !!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 2:28:17 PM
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um... ok?mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:06:19 AM
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*hangs head in grief* oh god...... *is crying* oh god.... this made me cry as much as the comic did.... oh god....TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:12:03 AM
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dawww.... i'm sorry....I just HAD to put it out in story form... i loved that story Arc...
mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:18:05 AM
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me too..... me too......TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:42:21 AM
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it's like, it's so sad it's AWESOME...and it makes a nice story too.
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 3:08:03 AM
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it DOES........... omg paradox, no!!!! *sad*TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 6:43:37 AM
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*sad look of sad sadnessy sadness* mah character.... o noes!Eclipse: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 7:11:56 AM
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*hugs eclipse comfortingly* it's ok eclipse, we'll find a way to fix this..... just hang on for a bit, ok?TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 10:13:43 AM
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Me: AH! DON'T HUG HIM! AH! NOT NOW!!Eclipse: *suddenly eyes turn red* augh augh augh augh.... *suddenly stabs Mish* AH!!! I'M SORRY!! I DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!! AH!! *transforms*
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 12:17:20 PM
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Me: ack!!! *stares at hole in self* WHAT THE FREAK?!?!?! why am i staaaabbed????TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 2:02:48 PM
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me: because you were close to Eclipse when the paradox sunk in.Eclipse: *is backing away and clutching his head*
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 2:04:34 PM
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Me: *falls to the ground, in pain* agh..... no... its ok... no biggie..... *winces in pain* i've had worse... i know it ain't your fault, clipsy....TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 9:07:10 AM
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Eclipse: *suddenly eyes turn back to normal* another paradox. T-thanks Mish... oh god... even though i didn't fully transform... i still feel hella weak...Me: Condemned uses your body, so he uses your energy. When he uses you like that, he forces you to over-exhert yourself, and that's why you always feel so tired and out-of-it when you gain control again...
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 5:28:44 AM
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Me: i can imagine... *hisses in pain* oww!!TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:19:23 AM
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Me: oh jeez! Here! *bandages you up*Eclipse: *guilt trip*
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:52:40 AM
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Me: (after you're done) *gets up* thanks critic. *to eclipse* dont feel guilty, eclipse. condemned made you do it. *looks down and shakes her head* we have enough guilt flying around right now.......TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 7:03:10 AM
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Me: i know... i feel so bad for Twilight right now...Eclipse: wha? What did she do?
Me: well, you're unconcious in the pic, so you wouldn't know.
Eclipse: BUT WHAT DID SHE DO...?
Me: oh look! A pretty flower?
Eclipse: BUT WHAT THE HELL DID SHE FREAKING DO????
mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 7:58:09 AM
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Me: *shakes her head* dont say it critic, dont say it.((O.M.G. i went to bed last night thinking about the RPs and i dreamed about this one. i woke up the this morining with an odd taste in my mouth, so i rinsed it out.
i spit blood. O.O))
TheGameArtCritic on August 10, 2008, 8:04:40 AM
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(( OoO o...m...g.... IT'S A SIGN!!! IT'S A SIGN!!!!!!!!))Me: I'm not going to say it...
Eclipse: *takes me by the shirt, and slams me into a wall* *in a dark tone* I swear to GOD, you piece of s***... if you don't tell me what's upset Twilight, i swear, you're going to wish you were never even born...
Me: well, Condemned's personality definetally mixed with your normal one, Eclipse...
Eclipse: *loosens his grip a little and sighs*
mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:09:35 AM
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((OMG I KNOW!!! it happened to me once before, but i had dreamed of the fight thats gonna happen between acid and twilly........and it was twilly who got bled.......))mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:10:00 AM
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*erase that "got" in there XDmechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:10:38 AM
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Me: *shakes her head* ......you can tell him ,critic. i dont want you to get hurt because of me.TheGameArtCritic on August 10, 2008, 9:37:35 AM
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Me: it's no biggie. We're immortal, remember?Eclipse: ....
Me: oh alright... Twilly is guilty because she hurt you right as you were transforming back to normal. There.
Eclipse: What??? How???
Me: Condemned totally upset Twilight by... um... by... killing Vera
Eclipse: *ears droop* oh no...
mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 9:17:05 AM
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Me: ..... it's true. but i think twilight feels worse than you do.TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 9:24:39 AM
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Eclipse: Twilight...Me: mm hmm.
Eclipse: we have to make her feel better...
Me: how?
Eclipse: uh... well... we could... er... *slumps over* i don't know...
mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 9:43:29 AM
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me: all the other you has to do is show her you're alive. she might snap out of it when she sees you, since the cause of her guilt is that she thought she killed you.TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 10:07:35 AM
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me: dawwww....Eclipse: uh... yeah! Of course!
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 1:36:16 AM
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Me: and so we wait. it might work.....TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 2:30:16 AM
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Me: it did XDALSO ECLIPSE IS GOING TO BE A HOT VILLAIN AND I'M GIVING HIM EBIL VILLAIN CLOTHES!!!!!!!!!!! ZOMG!!!!!!!!!!!
Elipse: WTF HUH VILLAIN???
Me: memory wipe.
Eclipse: DAMN YOU I CAN'T REMEMBER STUFF NOW!!!
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 3:46:01 AM
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Me: GAAH! i havent gotten around to looking at the new pic!! grr....TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:41:33 AM
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HE'S SO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 5:16:28 AM
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ah. i saw it.TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 5:29:25 AM
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ISN'T HE COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL????XD
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 8:42:44 AM
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....yes. but its a bad idea... *eyes widen* oh no you arent.TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 9:11:29 AM
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oh yes I am... XDmechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 1:05:22 PM
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OMG YOU DID!!!!! NUUU!!!TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 2:28:45 PM
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hard cooooooooore....... Eclipse.ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 4, 2008, 9:36:01 AM
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:O....HOLY shoot CAKES, WAT?!...*cannot think straight* that was fuggin incredible...
I LERVE THIS, OH YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH I LERVE THIS...
Been waiting years for a tale like this :3 But I advise switching your violence meter to high(for ripping ribs out and vivid describtion of it XD) I honestly thought he would rip his heart out >.> I believe my imagination is worse than I had thought...
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 9:39:43 AM
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ripping the heart out has already been done with Mr. Inderretta (in the future when Eclipse and Devon face off).This resulted in Eclipse dying.
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 4, 2008, 9:45:05 AM
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Daw you made me cry by spoiling such precious infoz ;_;OH WELL, BETTER LUCK NEXT TIME >8D
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 9:54:18 AM
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duurrr.. the comic has been posted...ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 4, 2008, 10:00:04 AM
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I don't read things thoroughly dammit, that is why I just found this story yesterday!TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 10:01:12 AM
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAyou make me laugh.
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 3, 2008, 8:47:31 AM
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holy shoot D: I'm like really really creeped out...BUT YET I ENJOYED IT lol
No really, that was good! I am quite impressed too, I havn't had a good scare like this since Cloverfield. May I, ask for some pointers? Soon enough, I'll need to write in some pretty frightening things for my stories, and I want to be able to give a spine-chilling performance just like this!
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 8:02:24 AM
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seriously? I thank you!I actually have no idea where i come up with this stuff.
I think of something that frightens me. I bend it until it's a new fear, but to do so, i need to find out what is it that makes someone afraid in the first place (sorry for the confusion).
Eclipse is afraid of losing control and hurting the people he cares about. I used that to my advantage.
I'm evil.
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 4, 2008, 8:08:48 AM
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No confusion, I get where you're coming from *is taking notez* AND...Everyone is evil m'dear. Half of us just haven't met their breaking point that makes them realize the damage they could bring >:3
Dahar, I'm a poet XD
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 9:19:48 AM
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yus chu ARRRREEEE.Didja see mah nuuuu chapter?
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 7:19:16 AM
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deus ex machina........................ dude, i was practically crying while i read this!! and when i got to that third-to-last paragraph, i prectically yelled in relief!! so loud, in fact, that my mom gaveme a weird look and asked me if i was ok....... but just...wow.... i was scared like, to DEATH!!!!TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:40:09 AM
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seriously? Eclipse, when he had Condemned had dreams like this almost every NIGHT!He would be killing his family and friends
He would be in his Condemned form, being burned at the stake
Condemned's voice would be insulting him in an empty hallway, calling him "weak" and other such things.
yeah... my little trooper got tough...
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 7:54:40 AM
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ohhhh........ eclipse really had it rough..... and i thought twilight had it bad......TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:58:37 AM
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no kidding there...ALMOST EVERY NIGHT.
I would go INSANE from that.
All of this Condemned crap led Eclipse to almost commiting suicide... er... three times now.
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 8:10:48 AM
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O.O name them. PLEASE.TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 8:41:01 AM
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1. second page of the Special Condemned Comic I'll Never Put Up Ever (is going to jump off the roof)2. first few comics of "Condemned", when Eclipse almost kills Sonic (wonders why he should even exsist, then proceeds to turn his hand into a claw and stab self. Is interrupted by Rosette.)
3. um... I forgot the last one, BUT I KNOW IT'S THERE.
yes. He's a very suicidal little hedgebat....
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 8:46:11 AM
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oh. will you ever post the second page?TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 8:59:25 AM
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NOmechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 9:05:52 AM
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YES! you MUST post it!!!TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 1:11:53 AM
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IT'S NOT DONE. IT WILL NEVER BE DONE.mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:52:26 AM
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WHYYYYYYYY????????????????????????????????TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 6:28:53 AM
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I FEEL TERRIBLE ABOUT IT.mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:18:10 AM
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................... T.TTheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 7:20:48 AM
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don't cry! DON'T CRY!!mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:47:15 AM
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post it...... T.TTheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 9:24:47 AM
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NUUUUUUUUUUU!!mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 11:20:45 AM
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yes....... T.TTheGameArtCritic on July 24, 2008, 4:31:24 AM
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NEVERRRRR - *gasp*Mr. Inderretta.... just did something unforgivable...
mechadragon13 on July 27, 2008, 11:33:08 AM
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....what did he do? if you're not gonna post it, at least tell me!!!TheGameArtCritic on August 1, 2008, 11:29:32 PM
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oh you already know now...mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 1:20:44 AM
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..................................omfg. i just read the chapter you just put up. O.O umm....... it makes me wonder.. should i really make that badgerwolf character.... im scared of badgers now. O.OTheGameArtCritic on August 5, 2008, 1:39:08 AM
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it's fine to make a badgerwolf character! It's only Mr. Inderretta who's scary......mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 1:58:01 AM
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yeah.............. mistrust might blossom though..... whoa.
TheGameArtCritic on August 5, 2008, 6:15:22 AM
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woah?mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:07:06 AM
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omg i just read the new chappie........TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:12:22 AM
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roflmao... yeah...
It was very luffly, as always. Extremely different from the current reality XD