Control
Submitted July 16, 2008 Updated September 19, 2010 Status Incomplete | neh. A basic fight between Condemned and Eclipse for control over Eclipse's body. Sometimes it would go too far... More stories are to be added!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Control
Submitted: July 16, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 794 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 114
Chapter 2 - Interrogation
Submitted: August 4, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 919 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 137
Chapter 3 - Eclipse's Death
Submitted: August 5, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
Word count: 1159 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 110
Chapter 4 - When True Evil Was Born
Submitted: August 13, 2008 • Updated: August 15, 2008
Word count: 871 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 154
Chapter 5 - Evil Eclipse and his Inner Turmoil
Submitted: August 15, 2008 • Updated: August 15, 2008
Word count: 691 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 111
Chapter 6 - Questions and a Lack of Sleep
Submitted: August 30, 2008 • Updated: September 3, 2008
Word count: 1021 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 125
Chapter 7 - Condemned's Origin
Submitted: September 9, 2008 • Updated: September 9, 2008
Word count: 738 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 228
Chapter 8 - Eclipse and Condemned talk about... stuff
Submitted: September 14, 2008 • Updated: September 14, 2008
Word count: 578 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 134
Chapter 9 - If Shadow Never Stole the Rocket Shoes (what if)
Submitted: September 21, 2008 • Updated: September 21, 2008
Word count: 595 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 135
Chapter 10 - Luminos Info
Submitted: October 3, 2008 • Updated: October 3, 2008
Word count: 96 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 110
Chapter 11 - Luminos' Theme Song...
Submitted: October 10, 2008 • Updated: October 10, 2008
Word count: 355 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 118
Chapter 12 - Mr. Blue-and-damned Finds a Friend
Submitted: October 1, 2009 • Updated: October 1, 2009
Word count: 1177 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 121
Chapter 13 - Plight of the Fallen Angel
Submitted: February 4, 2010 • Updated: February 4, 2010
Word count: 1133 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 171
Chapter 14 - Rage Of the Sin Against Nature
Submitted: September 19, 2010 • Updated: September 19, 2010
Word count: 905 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 125
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Zukoinferno on September 25, 2010, 12:20:57 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2010, 3:14:49 AM
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2010, 12:19:16 PM
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Doomlord1234 on February 28, 2010, 6:51:17 AM
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Zukoinferno on February 5, 2010, 11:07:00 AM
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mechadragon13 on February 4, 2010, 8:36:27 PM
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mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 5:29:48 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:49:39 AM
MEANWHILE!!!!!!
Twilight: heheheh. this is fuuuun. *reaches the destination* HEY ECLIPSE!! I BROUGHT THE OTHER SLOWPOKE!!!
Blizagga: RAAARGH!! *lunges towards twilight, but misses her, running right into fira*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:52:49 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:04:00 AM
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Blizagga: *is hit, then falls over* AGH! grr... *wraps one of her tails around his ankle and pulls on it, making him fall backwards*
Fira: *pounces towards the tripped eclipse*
Twilight: ECLIPSE! *spinballs into blizagga, unwrapping her tail from eclipse's ankle*
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:02:35 AM
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:13:31 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:23:53 AM
Fira: aww.... we have an embarassed little mutt, dont we?
Blizagga: heheheh... what do you say to spilling?
Fira: spilling would be humiliating!!! i love it.
Twilight: *turns RED* you wouldnt..........!
Fira+Blizagga: we would.
Me: uh oh.
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:28:44 AM
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:34:57 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 2:47:28 AM
Fira: oh you mean she never told you?
Blizagga: interestiiiing.....
Twilight: SHUT UP!! *kicks fira in the jaw, knocking her over, then uppercuts blizagga, sending her flying*
Me: nothing bad really... it's just.... that memory's important to her and she doesnt want it used against her in any way....
Twilight: *is feeling a strange mix of anger and embarassment*
TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 8:28:29 AM
mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 11:00:02 AM
Twilight: rrrrrrAGH!! *pounces towards them, claws out and teeth bared*
Fira; whoa hey. *dodges to the side* watch it!!
Blizagga: someone's piiiissed.....
Twilight: NO S**T!! *immediately tuns and scratches blizagga across the face*
TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 2:21:46 PM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:13:07 AM
Fira: *tries to get back on her paws
Twilight: *kicks fira in the face, causing her to fall down again* *yelling* STAY DOWN!!!!
Fira: *whimpers*
Me: whao...... twilly's piiiiissed.......
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:18:14 AM
meanwhile
Me: is Eclipse SERIOUSLY going soft on the daemons? That's so unlike him...
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:21:59 AM
Blizagga: *is laying on her belly with her ears flat against her head and her tail wrapped around her front paws, whimpering*
Fira: *is too scared to move* *whimper*
Me: oh my god..... the daemons are scared of her......
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:42:31 AM
MIND
Eclipse: Yes. I'm not letting you go any further with this. I refuse to compare them with Condemned, Twilly, because they're AFRAID. LOOK AT THEM. They are shaking in their fur! Condemned does NOT feel fear. THAT is the difference. Don't hurt them anymore, Twilight... they've had enough... surly this will at least teach them a lesson...
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 9:14:49 AM
Fira: *takes her chance and scurries over to blizagga, tails between her legs*
Blizagga: *has a look of genuine fear in her eyes, she's trembling slightly*
Fira: *is pretty much the same as blizagga*
Twilight: ....i........... oh my god.....
Me: okay, she stopped....
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 9:20:55 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 9:52:36 AM
Fira+Blizagga: *stop trembling, and look at each other, both wearing expressions of astonishment*
Me: oops. guilt attack.
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:02:18 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:11:32 AM
MIND!!!
Twilight: *tears flow freely* i know, eclipse.... it's just that.... it's never happened like this before...... i've never been this enraged in my LIFE!! it felt horrible after i realized what i was doing...... *wipes her tears*
Fira+Blizagga: *look back at twilight and sorta just sit there for a bit....*
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:21:59 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:38:30 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 11:51:33 AM
*without twilight and eclipse noticing, they had run back into the burning and frozen city. blizagga had put out all the flames, and fira, had unfreezed the other half of the city*
Twilight: w-whoa.
Me: whoa is right.... O.O
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 2:01:12 PM
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mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:14:21 AM
MIND!!!
Twilight: *watches the daemons carefully, ready to fight if necessary, but isnt as paranoid as eclipse*
Daemons: *keeps walking, step, step, step, until they're about 20 feet away from twilight and eclipse* ..... *suddendly sit down and rest their heads on their paws*
Twilight: ...... *slowly starts walking towards them*
OUTSIDE!!!
me: O.O she's insane.
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 11:21:16 AM
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:39:12 AM
Twilight: *is slowly moving towards them, then stops 5 feet from them and sits down* ........you're not attacking me.
Fira: we are not.
Twilight: why?
Blizagga: we have felt your power, twilight.
Fira: you have earned our respect.
Twilight: and you mine.
Me: OOOOOOOH!
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 11:47:35 AM
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:06:37 PM
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mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:45:08 PM
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mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 5:34:29 AM
twilight: *holds her head, as if she had a bad headache, and her claws grow huge. her muzzle gets longer and her tail splits into four. her ears get a bit bigger and her eyes change color, so one is red-orange and the other is ice blue* ah...... *looks at her hands* what did you....?
Fira: we know how much you hate having to go into your full wolf form when facing powerful enemies.
Blizagga: so we have given you an alternative. if you feel the full form isnt necessary, you can call upon bits and pieces.
Fira: dont worry, the headache only occured because it was the first time.
Blizagga: you wont have it every time you change.
Twilight: *stares at her hands* whoah......
me: i'll say!
TheGameArtCritic on October 11, 2008, 11:23:14 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 14, 2008, 3:01:56 AM
MIND!!!
Twilight: *turns back to the daemons* ......thank you.
Daemons: *dip their heads in reply*
Fira: you should go.
Blizagga: dont keep em waiting.
Twilight: *nods*
OUTSIDE!!!
Twilight: *wakes up* urgh....... *sits up* well THAT was fun!! XD
Me: *sweatdrop* just like twilly to be happy 'bout everything.......
TheGameArtCritic on October 14, 2008, 6:00:09 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 10:00:37 AM
Twilight: colorful. i'll say XD. XD
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Aladdin and Abu: *poof appears...... in the cave of Wonders*
Aladdin: look at all the cheezburgahs here! Cheezburgah! Cheezburgah! CHEEEEEEZEBURGAH!
Abu: *runs up to get gold*
Aladdin: WAAAAAAAAAAAAIT.
Abu: *stops in midair* D:
Aladdin: those AREN'T cheezburgahs. It's only gold. *walks off*
Abu: i don't WANT a f***ing cheeseburger! *pouts, and walks*
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TheGameArtCritic on October 22, 2008, 8:53:45 AM
Me: :O
Eclipse: Critic?
Me: :O
Eclipse: oh no...
Me: SQWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! *glompeth*
Eclipse: oy, Critic... stop... I ache all over...
Me: oh quit whining. Angel wants to kill you!
mechadragon13 on October 22, 2008, 9:06:08 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 22, 2008, 9:22:08 AM
Me: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHGH!!!! *shields Eclipse from Angel*
Eclipse: ... -_-
Me: also, Angel SERIOUSLY hurt Mikki... DON'T YOU EVEN THINK OF TOUCHIN' CLIPSEY, NOW!!!!
Angel: relax. Newman talked me out of it ^^
Me: wha?
Angel: *teleports so that he's right behind Eclipse* we need more help if we want to purify the world though...
Eclipse: ok, how come EVERYONE want to make me join them???
Angel: because you are powerful and unstable.
Me:... which leads to easy manipulation of a nuclear missle.
Eclipse: I'm NOT a nuclear missle... *pout*
Angel: *SLAMS HIS FIST INTO THE BACK OF ECLIPSE'S HEAD*
Eclipse: O_O *blacked out*
Angel: dispite my growling and tugging of Eclipse, takes the hedgebat, and teleports*
Me: D8
everyone: O_O
Me: D8
everyone: <_<
Me: WHYYYYYYYYYY???? WE LITERALLY JUST GOT HIM BACK!!!!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 23, 2008, 2:20:30 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 23, 2008, 6:07:11 AM
Eclipse: auugh... ow... ANGEL! LET ME GO!
Newman: sorry Clipsey... can't do that...
Eclipse: Newman...
Newman: At least I convinced Angel not to KILL you ^^;;
meanwhile
Me: oh DANG OH DANG!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 2:51:56 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 6:06:51 AM
machine: *whirrrrrr buzzzzzzz*
Eclipse: *gets shocked with tons of electricity in the brain* AUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!! *starts twitching and spazzing out like a guy in an electric chair*
computer: MEMORY WITHDRAWEL AT 10%
meanwhile
Me: yeah, we're screwed.
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 6:44:02 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 8:28:45 AM
Newman: 'fraid not, new friend.... but we can't have her meddle... not now... *leaps up into the air, and meteor kicks Twilight*
Computer: MEMORY WITHDRAWAL AT 30%
Angel: *puts a forcefield around the machine and computer*
Eclipse: *still being shocked, his eyes have faded to a pure white* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!!
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:19:12 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:27:39 PM
Newman: YEAH! HE DARES YOU! >:(
Angel: you're not helping... -_-
Newman: sorry...
Computer: MEMORY WITHDRAWAL AT 60%
Angel: you can't break the force field... not without my command.
Newman: exactly! *charges at Twilight again, this time successfully whomping her onto the ground*
Eclipse: *goes silent. Though his eyes are open, he appears to have fainted from shock trauma. His hands tighten and untighten on the arms of the metal chair he is strapped to as he is electrocuted*
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Computer: MEMORY WITHDRAWAL AT 100%. BEGIN FALSE MEMORY INJECTION.
Machine: *makes a reverse bzzzzz noise, and the color of the electricity turns from a white, to a dark red*
Me: *bursts in* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *using my amazing force-artist powers, I throw Angel against a wall, breaking his concentration and forcefield*
Me: TWILLY!!! DESTROY THE MACHINE!!!
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Computer: ERROR: DISCONNECTION WITH SYSTEM A3253666. PLEASE RECONNECT YOUR SYSTEM TO RETURN TO PROGRA -
Me: *smashes the computer* yeah, no thanks.
Eclipse: *shakes his head and blinks a few times. He looks around confused. His irises are a milky white*
Me: oh noooooooo... he's like Shadow in Sonic Heroes! AHHHHHHGH!!!!
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Luminos: *does not stir. His blood stains the grass*
Me: Mikenno's not acting so very civilized right now...
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Me: Hey... "Lumie (or something)"?
Luminos: uhhhhhh yeah?
Me: YOU need to actually be tested. Well... Vorace needs to be tested just in case it's actually lethal to your health when you transform. We haven't quite figured out how to handle you yet so -
Luminos: VORACE!!! VORACE!!!! WHO IS VORACE!!!! YOU KEEP TALKING ABOUT HIM!!! WHO IS HE????????????
Me: I could never tell you that...
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 9:06:57 AM
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voice: kill...
Vorace: *eyes narrow. He starts to growl once more, and pounces on Mikenno!*
Me: i knew it. I knew he couldn't keep Vorace contained for too long. Although it's just a demekarr pup, it's STILL a demekarr... and it WILL grow stronger over time...
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:15:40 AM
Me: OMJC!!!! *scrambles to stand up and grabs her wrench and is about to join the fight when---*
Mikenno: NO!! i will handle this.
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:21:01 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:24:16 AM
Me: eeee.... *wants to help mikki, but manages not to stand up*
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:44:21 AM
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Luminos: *just stares blankly at everyone. The bottem of his eyes are stained red with blood, like smeared makeup. Finally, he falls down on his face, unconcious*
Me: ... and now we know that he can control it if he tries really really hard. Plus he's not dead. There we go.
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:40:14 AM
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MEANWHILE!!
Mikenno: *opens the door to his "living area" and closes it behind him, then puts luminos down on the couch. the room is somewhat plain, there is a couch and a table and a window looking towards the city, but not much else. the other rooms aren't visible* well... yeah. this is my room. not much to look at, but it's ok.
TheGameArtCritic on October 14, 2008, 6:01:39 AM
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MEANWHILE
Me: *goes up to the living quarters (or whatever), and looks shift eyed, then darts away to Eclipse's old room* DON'T FOLLOW ME, MISH!!!!............ wait... maybe i shouldn't have said that...
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 11:13:56 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 11:25:39 AM
MEANWHILE
Me: thank GOD she didn't follow me... *opens the door to Eclipse's old room, and sits down on his old bed, looking at a lump under the covers with concern* i know i shouldn't be helping you... but... with Inderretta helpless, you have no one to take care of you... *opens the covers to reveal a very tired looking Newman, sleeping* Mish wouldn't approve... *gets out a battery, and cuts it in half* you're running out of power... soon you will be drained, and will have to shut down... until then, I MUST keep you alive with any source of energy i can fine... *opens his mouth and pours the battery acid down his throat, maknig him shudder in pain* hey... it helps...
mechadragon13 on October 16, 2008, 10:48:37 AM
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MEANWHILEZ
Me: ........ O.O oh!! *to luminos* your dad sort of knows what everyone else is doing, like, he can see it. in his mind. you know, like a mind reader ^^; critic must be doing something she isnt supposed to......
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 8:37:26 AM
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Newman: *shudders, and suddenly sits up, but still looks really tired* stop making me drink thaaaat....
Me: You would be long dead if i wasn't, Newman...
Luminos: w-what's wrong with him...
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:05:43 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 11:14:19 AM
Me: um... Newman's running out of energy. He's a clone of a guy named Eclipse, but his life system is different from ours. He doesn't eat, but he needs to be recharged every 72 hours, or he'll slowly run out of energy...
Luminos: oh no... I don't want him to die! :(
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Newman: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAAAAUUUUUUUGH!!! OH GOD!!!! OH GOD!!!! *zings up in the bed and punch Angel in the face* don't DO THAT!!! huff... huff...
Me: um... he recharged you...
Newman: oh. Go figure.
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:53:13 AM
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Me: you mean your dad? He... kinda had no choice, Luminos...
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:09:20 AM
me: *puts a hand on luminos's shoulder* this doesn't mean we love you any less, luminos. especially mikki.
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:19:42 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 10:35:05 AM
Me: aye, Luminos. Also, Eclipse should be back.
Luminos: Back??? When??? I thought he died!!!
Me: he did.... then he came back...
Eclipse: *stumbles in. His irises are milky white* w-woah... ok... where am i?...
Me: oh look! Mikki!! Mikki, you DO get to see Eclipse before you....... yeah...
mechadragon13 on October 27, 2008, 2:31:24 AM
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Eclipse: there was always a voice that bothered me...
Me: not Condemned
Eclipse: ... a voice that said that true men don't cry. A voice that told me to "get tougher". To "stop being pushed around".
Me: i thought all of Eclipse's memories were erased... I didn't know Shadow-hidden-in-a-cloak's words were still with him... huh. Maybe that's the only thing Newman didn't erase...
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 10:30:17 AM
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menwhial
Rosette: *tucks Luminos in*
Luminos: I'm old enough... you don't have to tuck me in anymore...
Rosette: but i LIEK to tuck you in...
Luminos: yrrr....wellllll....
Rosette: ............. ok? Whatever. Goodnight. Try not to have any bad dreams...
Luminos: I can't promise you that.
Rosette: just try. If it's hopeless then... try to fight the scary monsters...
Luminos: g'night Mom
Rosette: <:) goodnight. *closes the door to Luminose's room*
Luminos: *tries to sleep*
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:08:27 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:23:04 PM
meanwhile, in Luminos' dream
Luminos: *walking around, in a dark DARK DARK DARK street* oh no... I know where this is going...
Condemned: *climbs down, head first, a brick wall near Luminos* boo.
Luminos: AHH!! It's you again!!
Condemned: join us, Vorace.
Luminos: STOP IT! STOP SAYING THAT!!
Condemned: do i upset you, Vorace? Are you angry?
Luminos: STOP!!!
Condemned: feel the predetor within you, Luminos... it's there...
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:27:54 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:36:59 PM
meanwhile, Lumi's Nightmare
Condemned: you must except the fact that you are one of us, Vorace... stop living in denial...
Luminos: shut... UP!!! *growls. His eyes turn pure red*
Condemned: Have you awakened? Have I finally been able to trigger my spawn?
Luminos: rraaawwwrrrgh!!! *falls to his knees, shivering all over... bleeding... becoming engulfed in tenticals*
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:40:36 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 1:52:20 PM
meanwhilez, Lumi's dream. Blah.
Luminos: *turns into Vorace* NRRAAARRRRRGH!!!!
Condemned: kekekeke... a pleasure to meet you again, my son... it is time once more, that we hunt...
Vorace: sssss...
Condemned: *leaps off the wall, spreads his wings, and soars at a high speed, searching for victims*
Vorace: *follows Condemned*
mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 1:59:32 PM
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mechadragon13 on November 1, 2008, 2:16:01 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 2:25:32 PM
((i can't get her personality right...))
L.N.
Vorace: *smashes into the building*
Dream!Rosette: L-L-Luminos? Oh no... please... please calm down, and -
Vorace: *impales Rosette with his claws*
Condemned: gyahahahahah!!
Dream!Rosette: *with tears in her eyes* Eclipse... how could you let Luminos......... *doesn't finish her sentence. She dies halfway through it*
Vorace: *roars a roar of victory*
meanwhile
Luminos: *is whimpering*
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 2:56:21 AM
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mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 5:24:30 AM
Zenith: *returns the oops, ok i'm leaving look* *leaves*
Me: *grins* *to critic* let's give them a moment, mkay? *pushes critic out of the room, and closes the door behind her, and unknowingly to those two inside, she locks it* oh yeah, i'm a genius.
MEANWHILE!!!
Skye: *thinking* awkwaaaaard...... *pulls her hand back and turns even redder* umm..... yeah.... so.... you're gonna be ok, right? ^////////^
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 7:52:37 AM
mechadragon13 on November 3, 2008, 6:17:51 AM
MEANWHILE!!
Me: *had drawn steel supports against the door, making it impossible to open from the other side* say it. i'm a genius~!!!!
Zenith: yeah, you're a genius. XD
TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 9:54:12 AM
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mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 9:56:01 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:19:02 AM
Me: he's... gonna help her fight them... *facepalm* are you really sure she can handle it...?
G. Eclipse: *without hesitation, walks into Twilight to help her battle the Daemons*
Me: *whispering* you f***ing asshole...
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 10:23:50 AM
Twilight: *eyes snap open as she realizes eclipse is in there too* e-eclipse?? what are you---arghhh!!!! *doubles over again, holding her head* MAKE IT STOP!!! *is practically begging* GET THEM TO STOP, ECLIPSE!! I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE!! I COULD JUST DIE!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:34:51 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 10:49:32 AM
Twilight: eclipse? oh god... help... it hurts... so much...
*her mind is a ravaged city, burned down in some places and frozen solid in others*
Twilight: they're going insane... it hurts, eclipse... help...
(outside)
Me: all we can do is hope he can help her....
Twilight: *has stopped screaming, but is still crying and curled up in a ball*
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:52:46 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:08:46 AM
Twilight: *looks up at him, eyes full of gratitude* thanks eclipse. *looks around* first thing we gotta do is find them.
(outside)
Twilight: *has calmed down a whole lot, but is still curled up in a ball*
Me: i think we should lend some emotional support. *walks over to twilly and sits down next to her and puts an arm around her* come on, twilly, you can do it..... we believe in you.
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:31:57 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:42:49 AM
Twilight: a decent conclusion. lets see..... *points out a tall building near the middle of the city* see that skyscraper? i need you to search of fira and draw her there. i'll find blizagga, then we'll fight them together.
OUTSIDE!!!
Twilight: *is breathing almost normally, and has relaxed a bit*
Me: that's the spirit........ *to critic* is lupe still over there?
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:46:53 AM
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mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 3:24:28 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 6:20:05 AM
mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 7:02:48 AM
MIND!!
Fira: heheheheheh...... RAAAGH!! *leaps out of the flames, going straight for eclipse*
MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: ......i know you're here. come out!!
Blizagga: *is standing on top of an ice shard* well, well, little girl wants to play some more *toothy grin* allright, alright, i'll play!! *leaps off the ice right at twilly*
OUTSIDE!!
Twilight: *shivers*
Me: *notices* she must have found blizagga...
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 9:29:09 AM
mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 9:43:29 AM
MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: *easily side-steps the pounce, and glares at blizagga* why? why do you hurt me like this??
Blizagga: *her fur looks spiked out, as if it were frozen solid, and just looking in her eyes makes you feel cold* *grins* you mean you haven't figured it out yet?
OUTSIDE!!!
Me: .........*thoughtful*
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 1:02:33 PM
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 2:41:18 AM
MIND!!
Fira: ah, so you ARE full of anger, hedgebat. very well. i'll help you relieve this anger. RAAAWRGH!! *leaps towards him, claws-first*
meanwhile!!!
Twilight: *glares* what do you mean, figure it out?
Blizagga: you're dumber than i thought. *sigh* hopefully this might help you remember!!! *stomps the ground with her front paws causing ice shards to shoot out of the ground*
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 5:43:48 AM
OUTSIDE
Me: dude. Eclipse is almost NEVER happy... or are you talking about his frustration? Mish. He's frustrated because he's dead. He's not truly himself, just an IMAGE of himself caused by the semi-conciousness he still has left, and our ties to him.
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 7:45:07 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 8:10:23 AM
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 8:48:19 AM
MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: *rolls to the side, narrowly avoiding getting pounced on* *ear twitches* heh. *gets to her feet and makes a face at blizagga* YOU'RE TOO SLOW!!!!!!! 8D
Blizagga: *snarls* wanna bet?
Twilight: yep!! *runs like hell*
Blizagga: *chases*
OUTSIDE!!
Me: this is gonna be interesting...
Twilight: *smiles slightly*
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 8:50:15 AM
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 8:54:15 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 9:10:57 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:19:58 AM
Me: eclipse has a good sense of humor, even as a ghost!! XD
INSIDE!!!
Fira: *vein* why you little...... *is seriously pissed* I'LL GET YOU YOU STUBBORN LITTLE HYBRID MUTT!!! *runs faster*
MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: *is totally having fun with this* hehehehe. whazzamatter, blizagga, cant catch a kid? come on, you're better than thiiiis!
Blizagga: you're damn right i am!!! *tries to speed up*
It was very luffly, as always. Extremely different from the current reality XD