Iris
Submitted November 24, 2005 Updated June 26, 2007 Status Complete | Shonen-ai/Slash! For DD_DM. A black-winged angel finds himself caught up in the fate of a young boy that defies existence itself, a boy with paradoxed wings, a boy named 'Iris'...
Category:
Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Gray
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 2 - Survive
Submitted: November 27, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 3 - Darkness
Submitted: December 1, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 4 - Sanctuary
Submitted: December 4, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 5 - Silence
Submitted: December 7, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 6 - Reason
Submitted: December 8, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 7 - Antithesis
Submitted: December 11, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 8 - Same
Submitted: December 18, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 9 - Ruby
Submitted: December 22, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 10 - Stone
Submitted: December 28, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1435 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 180
Chapter 11 - Bat
Submitted: December 30, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3745 • Size: 20k • Comments: 10 • views: 193
Chapter 12 - Monster
Submitted: January 3, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2068 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 248
Chapter 13 - Dead
Submitted: January 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1697 • Size: 9k • Comments: 7 • views: 194
Chapter 14 - Blood
Submitted: January 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 15 - Lost
Submitted: January 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 16 - Taint
Submitted: January 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 17 - Half
Submitted: January 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 18 - Found
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 19 - Purse
Submitted: January 26, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 20 - Mutual
Submitted: January 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 754 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 169
Chapter 21 - Drop
Submitted: January 30, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2087 • Size: 11k • Comments: 10 • views: 193
Chapter 22 - Wolf
Submitted: February 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1444 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 176
Chapter 23 - Trapped
Submitted: February 13, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 605 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 158
Chapter 24 - Journey
Submitted: February 15, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1055 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 164
Chapter 25 - Beautiful
Submitted: February 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 26 - Paradox
Submitted: February 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 27 - Disconnected
Submitted: February 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 28 - Distraction
Submitted: February 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 29 - Spider
Submitted: February 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2120 • Size: 12k • Comments: 9 • views: 182
Chapter 30 - Bone
Submitted: March 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2842 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 192
Chapter 31 - Human
Submitted: March 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2100 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 183
Chapter 32 - Fall
Submitted: March 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2850 • Size: 15k • Comments: 6 • views: 208
Chapter 33 - Earth
Submitted: April 11, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2034 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 168
Chapter 34 - Pity
Submitted: April 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2411 • Size: 13k • Comments: 8 • views: 177
Chapter 35 - Continue
Submitted: April 23, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1108 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 208
Chapter 36 - Scar
Submitted: May 1, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1611 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 170
Chapter 37 - Ally
Submitted: May 7, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1472 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 178
Chapter 38 - Nothing
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: November 21, 2006
Word count: 2982 • Size: 16k • Comments: 8 • views: 182
Chapter 39 - Seal
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2527 • Size: 14k • Comments: 4 • views: 196
Chapter 40 - Purpose
Submitted: August 19, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 41 - Labs
Submitted: August 25, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1809 • Size: 10k • Comments: 6 • views: 202
Chapter 42 - Shatter
Submitted: August 29, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3221 • Size: 18k • Comments: 4 • views: 205
Chapter 43 - Burning
Submitted: September 4, 2006 • Updated: September 4, 2006
Word count: 2868 • Size: 16k • Comments: 4 • views: 173
Chapter 44 - Separated
Submitted: November 3, 2006 • Updated: November 3, 2006
Word count: 2236 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 156
Chapter 45 - Secret
Submitted: November 12, 2006 • Updated: November 12, 2006
Word count: 870 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 185
Chapter 46 - Side
Submitted: November 19, 2006 • Updated: November 19, 2006
Word count: 1704 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 157
Chapter 47 - Opposite
Submitted: November 21, 2006 • Updated: November 21, 2006
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Chapter 48 - Camael
Submitted: November 23, 2006 • Updated: November 23, 2006
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Chapter 49 - Demon
Submitted: November 24, 2006 • Updated: November 24, 2006
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Chapter 50 - Remember
Submitted: December 5, 2006 • Updated: December 5, 2006
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Chapter 51 - Simple
Submitted: December 14, 2006 • Updated: December 14, 2006
Word count: 2821 • Size: 16k • Comments: 3 • views: 171
Chapter 52 - Longevity
Submitted: December 21, 2006 • Updated: December 21, 2006
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Chapter 53 - Deal
Submitted: December 27, 2006 • Updated: December 27, 2006
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Chapter 54 - Dual
Submitted: December 30, 2006 • Updated: December 30, 2006
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Chapter 55 - Goodbye
Submitted: January 11, 2007 • Updated: January 11, 2007
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Chapter 56 - Peace
Submitted: January 15, 2007 • Updated: January 15, 2007
Word count: 569 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 147
Chapter 57 - Fool
Submitted: January 21, 2007 • Updated: January 21, 2007
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Chapter 58 - Forest
Submitted: February 3, 2007 • Updated: February 3, 2007
Word count: 1276 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 153
Chapter 59 - Bound
Submitted: March 11, 2007 • Updated: March 11, 2007
Word count: 3176 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 133
Chapter 60 - Touch
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
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Chapter 61 - Ending
Submitted: April 22, 2007 • Updated: April 22, 2007
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Chapter 62 - Alive
Submitted: May 3, 2007 • Updated: May 3, 2007
Word count: 2631 • Size: 14k • Comments: 5 • views: 131
Chapter 63 - Sky
Submitted: June 12, 2007 • Updated: June 12, 2007
Word count: 1911 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 125
Chapter 64 - Look
Submitted: June 19, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 1913 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 129
Chapter 65 - Moment
Submitted: June 22, 2007 • Updated: June 22, 2007
Word count: 1202 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 128
Chapter 66 - Mortal
Submitted: June 23, 2007 • Updated: June 23, 2007
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Chapter 67 - Rain
Submitted: June 25, 2007 • Updated: June 25, 2007
Word count: 5074 • Size: 28k • Comments: 3 • views: 156
Chapter 68 - Epilogue
Submitted: June 26, 2007 • Updated: June 26, 2007
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Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:22:55 PM
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:22:19 PM
What was THAT? A zombie? Or perhaps a âfailedâ Iris, an experiment that failed to work correctly? Or something even weirder stillâ¦?And Iris isnât boring. Heâs quiet and almost lethargic, but heâs not boring. Anyone who wants a small bat is not boring.
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God, Iâm STILL thinking about that part! ^.^;
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:21:45 PM
This chapter has one of the most prosaically hysterical lines Iâve ever seen. For some odd reason, Iris saying, ââ¦Just a small bat,â is absurdly funny to me. I couldnât tell you why (maybe because itâs 11:29 at night ^.^; ) but it really is.And no, I donât think this is really a high lemon storyâ¦and yes, I really like the tattoos ^.^
The funny part is, while writing that last sentence, I accidentally put âbatâ instead of âtattoos.â See what that line did to me?! ^.^
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:21:17 PM
Andâ¦you definitely reached 20 ^.^I sympathize with the whole spider thing. I donât kill spiders either. Not sure Iâd let them on my hand (Iâm not quite trusting enough --.--) but I take great pains not to kill them. Iâll spend ten minutes trying to coax a spider out of the shower before I use it.
Flies, on the other handâ¦I murder without mercy --.--
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:20:39 PM
And not long after my whole statement about Iris not being helpless, look what we see ^.^; Heâs REALLY not helpless. He could have torn Valkyre limb from limb when the angel came to kill him, had he wanted to. But that, of course, is the clincher. He doesnât want to. First he didnât care, and now I think he might really not want to.You know, once Iâm done with this I think I might have to read it again. Knowing the characters better at the end, Iâm going to have to go back again and see the things I missed the first time. Like Iris being able to shred Valkyre without breaking a sweat.
Interesting. This just keeps getting more and more interesting.
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:20:11 PM
Ohhhhâ¦tattoos⦠:bliss, although rather naughtier bliss than the last one: I LOVE tattoos. Well, some tattoos, anyways. Aesthetic ones. And Valkyreâs sound aesthetic. VERY aestheticâ¦I think getting these two characters beyond the âokay, I WONâT stab you on contactâ relationship is a huge step, so Iâd say this chapter actually accomplished a lot. Plus it is one of those scenes that show intense sensuality in a perfectly innocent act. For some reason, I like that a lot better than when itâs outright; thereâs something appealing about the innocuousness of it. Or the subtlety. Or the delicacy.
I have no idea what Iâm saying. Iâll stop now.
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:19:34 PM
Oh, good. Iris isnât the annoying type who just stands there and lets himself be captured. Guy or girl, I always hate that. Thatâs one of the things I like about Coletteâshe actually fights back. She still gets kidnapped a few times, but she fights back. Sheâs not helpless. Iris is not helpless.Can you say âoff-topicâ? Sorry ^.^; Really nice action sequence here. I loved the description of the lamiaâit was masterly, particularly the description of her tail. ââ¦curling away in soft loops like the trail of a river on flat plains.â Ah, imagery⦠:bliss:
All right, all right, my curiosity can put the chair down nowâ¦
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:19:06 PM
I think it works well. I can understand Valkyreâs fascination with Irisâand that feeling Iris had when Valkyre touched him helps explain his side as well. Theyâre both oddly lonely, and I think they can feel it in each otherâ¦You know, until this chapter it never occurred to me they had long hair? What is wrong with me? I usually always assume long hair unless the author (ess) says otherwise --.--
My curiosity is screaming at me to figure out what the hell is going on, so Iâd better humor itâ¦
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:18:38 PM
Oh, yes, Iâm confused. And curious as all getout about what the heck THIS wasâ¦must keep reading and find outâ¦!Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:18:12 PM
You know, the amethyst-eyes part reminds me of Tsuzuki, from Yami no Matsuei/ Descendants of Darkness. Except Valkyre isnât much like Tsuzukiâ¦well, hopefully heâs as hot as Tsuzuki, but he doesnât act like Tsuzuki ^.^You misjudge yourself. You donât have vague dialogue, you have philosophical dialogue. Your dialogue wanders through the mist-shrouded backroads of the abstract and considers broken statues of confusion and thought, caring far more about the way it gets to its destination and how much it can see along the way than how fast it does it. Granted, that drives some people (like my mom) nuts. But me, personally? I like it. It makes me think. Why do I live? What do I want to know? What am I, really?
Okay, curiosity trying to bite me nowâ¦Iâll shut up and keep reading.
And what on earth was going on with Iris or the weird thing in THIS one? One resurrecting, the other lying to rest. Somehow I have the feeling things will convolute further before they become clear.
How wonderfully intriguing ^.^
Oh yes. And here:
A SHOWER OF LOVE AND ADORATION!!!!!!!! ^.^ ^.^ ^.^ :luvluvluv:
That help any? ~.^