Iris

Chapter 1 - Gray
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 2 - Survive
Submitted: November 27, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 3 - Darkness
Submitted: December 1, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 4 - Sanctuary
Submitted: December 4, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 5 - Silence
Submitted: December 7, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 6 - Reason
Submitted: December 8, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 7 - Antithesis
Submitted: December 11, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 8 - Same
Submitted: December 18, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 9 - Ruby
Submitted: December 22, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 10 - Stone
Submitted: December 28, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 11 - Bat
Submitted: December 30, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 12 - Monster
Submitted: January 3, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 13 - Dead
Submitted: January 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 14 - Blood
Submitted: January 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 15 - Lost
Submitted: January 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 16 - Taint
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Chapter 17 - Half
Submitted: January 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 18 - Found
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Chapter 19 - Purse
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Chapter 20 - Mutual
Submitted: January 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 21 - Drop
Submitted: January 30, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 22 - Wolf
Submitted: February 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 23 - Trapped
Submitted: February 13, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 24 - Journey
Submitted: February 15, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 25 - Beautiful
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Chapter 26 - Paradox
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Chapter 27 - Disconnected
Submitted: February 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 28 - Distraction
Submitted: February 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 29 - Spider
Submitted: February 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 30 - Bone
Submitted: March 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 31 - Human
Submitted: March 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 32 - Fall
Submitted: March 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 33 - Earth
Submitted: April 11, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 34 - Pity
Submitted: April 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 35 - Continue
Submitted: April 23, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 36 - Scar
Submitted: May 1, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 37 - Ally
Submitted: May 7, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 38 - Nothing
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: November 21, 2006
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Chapter 39 - Seal
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 40 - Purpose
Submitted: August 19, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 41 - Labs
Submitted: August 25, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 42 - Shatter
Submitted: August 29, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 43 - Burning
Submitted: September 4, 2006 • Updated: September 4, 2006
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Chapter 44 - Separated
Submitted: November 3, 2006 • Updated: November 3, 2006
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Chapter 45 - Secret
Submitted: November 12, 2006 • Updated: November 12, 2006
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Chapter 46 - Side
Submitted: November 19, 2006 • Updated: November 19, 2006
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Chapter 47 - Opposite
Submitted: November 21, 2006 • Updated: November 21, 2006
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Chapter 48 - Camael
Submitted: November 23, 2006 • Updated: November 23, 2006
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Chapter 49 - Demon
Submitted: November 24, 2006 • Updated: November 24, 2006
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Chapter 50 - Remember
Submitted: December 5, 2006 • Updated: December 5, 2006
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Chapter 51 - Simple
Submitted: December 14, 2006 • Updated: December 14, 2006
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Chapter 52 - Longevity
Submitted: December 21, 2006 • Updated: December 21, 2006
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Chapter 53 - Deal
Submitted: December 27, 2006 • Updated: December 27, 2006
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Chapter 54 - Dual
Submitted: December 30, 2006 • Updated: December 30, 2006
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Chapter 55 - Goodbye
Submitted: January 11, 2007 • Updated: January 11, 2007
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Chapter 56 - Peace
Submitted: January 15, 2007 • Updated: January 15, 2007
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Chapter 57 - Fool
Submitted: January 21, 2007 • Updated: January 21, 2007
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Chapter 58 - Forest
Submitted: February 3, 2007 • Updated: February 3, 2007
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Chapter 59 - Bound
Submitted: March 11, 2007 • Updated: March 11, 2007
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Chapter 60 - Touch
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
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Chapter 61 - Ending
Submitted: April 22, 2007 • Updated: April 22, 2007
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Chapter 62 - Alive
Submitted: May 3, 2007 • Updated: May 3, 2007
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Chapter 63 - Sky
Submitted: June 12, 2007 • Updated: June 12, 2007
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Chapter 64 - Look
Submitted: June 19, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
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Chapter 65 - Moment
Submitted: June 22, 2007 • Updated: June 22, 2007
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Chapter 66 - Mortal
Submitted: June 23, 2007 • Updated: June 23, 2007
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Chapter 67 - Rain
Submitted: June 25, 2007 • Updated: June 25, 2007
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Chapter 68 - Epilogue
Submitted: June 26, 2007 • Updated: June 26, 2007
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Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:17:40 PM

Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:17:40 PM (Chapter: 3)

I think you made it up to the double digits…^.^

So, Iris is a philosopher. Among other things. The interesting thing about this chapter (and something that truly demonstrates your prowess as a writer) is how different the chapter reads from Valkyre to Iris. Iris thinks in a completely different way from Valkyre, and here you can see it. This chapter is written in a completely different way from the previous ones with Valkyre. That means you can “hear” character voice. And that’s excellent.

Curiosity is screaming, “Enough with the analyzing! Get back to the bloody story!!” ^.^;

Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:17:13 PM

Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:17:13 PM (Chapter: 2)

Oh, it worked. Trust me, it worked.

This is a fascinating world you’ve found, Trinity. And Iris is a fascinating character. Blend of bloods, antithesis itself, huh? Highly intriguing…

My curiosity’s starting to get violent ^.^

Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:16:43 PM

Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:16:43 PM (Chapter: 1)

Of course the opening doesn’t explain anything, it’s not supposed to! This is a perfect example of a “hook” opening—it snatches you in and doesn’t let you go. Your curiosity can’t stand to leave it alone…

I’m foreseeing a long night ahead… ^.^

crazy_jamaican_gurl on August 5, 2006, 12:37:28 PM

crazy_jamaican_gurl on August 5, 2006, 12:37:28 PM (Chapter: 39)

yay!!! more iris!!! it took ya long enough!LOL XP but it was well worth the wait. I think the details are fine. It keeps the story going. And the tatoos...wow. I want a pen like that...and then be an awsome artist so I can draw some for myself. I'm going to sit here and wait for the next chappie! *plunks down with a bowl of m&ms* Mmmmmmmmm chocolate mmmmmmmm!!!! LOL Keep up the good work! XD

SenayDragon on July 31, 2006, 11:14:44 AM

SenayDragon on July 31, 2006, 11:14:44 AM (Chapter: 38)

Aw! You're very welcome! *hug* X3 Actually, I was thinking of drawing Iris again... but with Valkyre this time. ^^ Nothing extravagant, but I really want to draw them, even if it's a sketch, 'cuz they're so adoreeble!!! Looking at your pics makes me want to draw.... o_o But anyways, I like how you're pogressing in terms of writing style. I really enjoyed this chapter, even if it is just "mostly useless actions-description and dialogue". You managed to make it very interesting (at least to me). Can't wait for the next one! X3

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 14, 2006, 11:59:15 AM

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 14, 2006, 11:59:15 AM (Chapter: 38)

yay I have now read them all and have to say this WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wuv you and iris and about a hundred people...then again i hate about 5,000people...or mroe like it they hate me still My asher is gay...yay for him bad for me. Oh well whatever makes ya happy!!

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 14, 2006, 11:48:42 AM

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 14, 2006, 11:48:42 AM (Chapter: 37)

Great now I have to choose. Raguel...Asher...Rageul...Asher??? Damn~~~~ I know!!! I wann'em both! Don't ya love my english!!!!!!

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 14, 2006, 11:43:07 AM

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 14, 2006, 11:43:07 AM (Chapter: 36)

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not asher!!!! poor baby!! *grabs asher to nurse him back to health...of the undedad????* tahnx for the warning a head of time though...I would have been even more sad. I need sometime by myself...just remember I dumped you!!!! XD lol!! *goes to corner to cry*



Ps. I may be a little sugar high! I had a Sonic slushie!!!!

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 14, 2006, 11:31:47 AM

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 14, 2006, 11:31:47 AM (Chapter: 34)

nooooooo poor corryn...even though he was like a spider I was beginning to like him even more. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww and poor valkyre he got bit!!! and poor iris he was shaking...wow that is a lot of pooor people. *hugs for all*

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 13, 2006, 2:21:22 PM

crazy_jamaican_gurl on July 13, 2006, 2:21:22 PM (Chapter: 32)

awwwwwww poor corryn and poor iris...*hugs for both* another god chappie...have ya ever thought of publishing?? cause i would buy!!