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Chonicles of LuCana: Kalimna

The LuCana, god of dragons, has been locked away, dorment inside his own soul for many thousands of years. The empire of Hexia, advanced race of planet conquring beings, have found out about this adn plan on controling him as a weapon...

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Brothers in the Military, and boys in minishorts
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 2801 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 230

Chapter 2 - A fortunate fall
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 4700 • Size: 24k • Comments: 3 • views: 472

Chapter 3 - Deadly kisses
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 2912 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 269

Chapter 4 - Brothers are such trouble
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 3149 • Size: 16k • Comments: 2 • views: 208

Chapter 5 - A dragon god's wrath
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 5671 • Size: 30k • Comments: 2 • views: 219

Chapter 6 - The Reotai Brothers
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 3738 • Size: 19k • Comments: 2 • views: 319

Chapter 7 - The Demon Fox
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 1384 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 239

Chapter 8 - The bratty princess and the deviant prince
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 1842 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 200

Chapter 9 - The cave of elementals
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 1864 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 197

Chapter 10 - The royalty arrives
Submitted: May 9, 2006 • Updated: May 9, 2006
Word count: 706 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 190

Chapter 11 - insert random chapter name here
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 1255 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 210

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Astri on June 22, 2006, 10:53:59 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 11)
AstriSala getting drunk? O.O Why does that sound like a bad thing? Cute, but bad?

Sudden note of curiosity. If Arkin kissed an elemental, what would happen? O.O

Well, anyway, looks like the scream was adequately weathered. Time to go on...
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Oh no! No more! TT.TT

Oh well, guess I'll just have to wait...

Astri on June 22, 2006, 10:49:21 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 10)
AstriAgain it went all lined :perplexed: But I am liking Nadia more and more. Whacking Shima upside the head? Feel sorry for Shima, but can't help laughing in praise of Nadia. I can only imagine what she's gonna do when Shima tells her that Naku "died"...an A-bomb'll have NOTHING on her. The whole planet will probably hear her scream.

Let me fetch earplugs, and then I shall continue on...

Astri on June 22, 2006, 10:46:30 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 9)
AstriSomebody's played Secret of Mana! ^.^ I love that game. So that's who Sala is! Sala is so cute ^.^

More seriously, I loved this:
"This is a gateway to Ethia, the realm of eternity. Nothing is eternal,even the immortal gods have their downfalls, therefore nothing is here."

That was brilliant. Even my dad liked that line, and he's...difficult to please. I am still becoming more and more interested in this story with every chapter I read.

Time to become a bit more obsessed still...^.^

Astri on June 22, 2006, 10:38:36 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 8)
AstriI like these two. Very much ^.^ Was there a picture of Kreedeth in your gallery? I can't remember...I must go look again.

And on a lighter note still--Naku is not blind! Arkin IS alive! I knew it! Haha! Good, I liked Arkin ^.^ But I did not foresee the elder returning. Now I'm getting curious about him as well...

Well, your story just gets more and more interesting. Onwards yet again...

Astri on June 22, 2006, 10:23:26 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 7)
AstriEep. Naku has been blinded? Owwwwww...makes my eyeballs hurt in sympathy --.--

So we have Forin the cat, Cian the mouse, Seth the dog, Sanja the unknown--or no, wait. There's a wolf that is not Sanja, so Seth must be the wolf and Sanja must be the dog--and Koronis the fox. Hmm...Koronis sounds hot. Evil, but hot ~.^

Now I'm curious as to what cavalry Natami brought, as well as just how Cian is now taking care of Tir/ Flip ^.^ Lessee then...

Astri on June 22, 2006, 10:15:42 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 6)
AstriI have a feeling Seth is the dog, but I could be wrong. Guess I have to see. Umm...nothing new to report. Some typos still, but like Trinity says, the plot is definitely heating up. Oh yeah...and Shima's mother is funny ^.^

Flip the page...

Astri on June 22, 2006, 10:10:25 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 5)
AstriHow sad...Arkin left alone like that :depressed:. Yet I have a feeling we might not have seen quite the last of him...despite the rather painfully good description of the action he was in.

And the cat's identity remains unknown. Hmm. Curiouser and curiouser, as they say. Next!

Astri on June 22, 2006, 9:25:53 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 4)
AstriKissing a fish. A soul-eater forced to kiss a fish. There is at least one gem like this in every chapter of your story. "Fish-lips"...ha! Arkin must've LOVED that.

Is it Flip or Tir?! I'm getting lost in the switch!

And the cat. I must learn more about this "cat"--on to the next chapter! After I eat!

Astri on June 22, 2006, 9:20:13 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 3)
Astri"A friend with a heavy metal object." Is anything better? ^.^ Although, if my best friend had a heavy metal object, we'd probably all be dead by now.

I wonder what happened to underline and grey half of your story? :perplexed: Hmm. Also, why is Naku now calling Tir Tir instead of Flip? @.@ Confusion...

Oh well. Doesn't mean it's not still a good story. Forward!

Astri on June 22, 2006, 9:14:38 AM

Astri on (Chapter: 2)
AstriMore typos, but I loved the cheerleader line ^.^ After that two-toes thing, I gained a whole new inquisition towards what exactly Hexians are. For that matter, the two toes made me think of Two-Toed Tom from the Abarat books. Isn't it weird how different people can pick out such different things from a story like yours? Star Ocean (^.^) Chrono Cross, Abarat...

Did you mean to call Flip Tir at that one point soon after we meet him, or was that a typo? Just curious...

Onwards!