Troublemakers
Submitted March 20, 2005 Updated December 4, 2005 Status Incomplete | Bladebreakers atend a boording school. a group of 4 girls come new, and they promise to get into trouble, themselfs and others! Better be a friend then a enemy!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Of course we're new!
Submitted: March 20, 2005 • Updated: March 20, 2005
Word count: 1232 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 237
Chapter 2 - The beginning of the Mariah
Submitted: March 21, 2005 • Updated: March 21, 2005
Word count: 2347 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 260
Chapter 3 - Ocean breakfast
Submitted: March 22, 2005 • Updated: March 22, 2005
Word count: 1658 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 266
Chapter 4 - Colored Breakfast
Submitted: March 24, 2005 • Updated: March 24, 2005
Word count: 2068 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 254
Chapter 5 - Be careful...
Submitted: April 9, 2005 • Updated: April 9, 2005
Word count: 1654 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 175
Chapter 6 - Alibi's and Smiles :D
Submitted: April 25, 2005 • Updated: April 25, 2005
Word count: 1465 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 281
Chapter 7 - S or A?
Submitted: May 15, 2005 • Updated: May 15, 2005
Word count: 1555 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 224
Chapter 8 - The chip thief
Submitted: July 7, 2005 • Updated: July 7, 2005
Word count: 1942 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 251
Chapter 9 - BeyParts
Submitted: July 24, 2005 • Updated: July 24, 2005
Word count: 2623 • Size: 13k • Comments: 1 • views: 234
Chapter 10 - Breaking an entry
Submitted: July 24, 2005 • Updated: July 24, 2005
Word count: 2180 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 243
Chapter 11 - Sweat Dreams
Submitted: October 20, 2005 • Updated: October 20, 2005
Word count: 1425 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 214
Chapter 12 - Chronicles from under the bed
Submitted: November 14, 2005 • Updated: November 14, 2005
Word count: 6232 • Size: 34k • Comments: 0 • views: 232
Chapter 13 - Bubblegum, random names and cleaning psychos
Submitted: December 4, 2005 • Updated: December 4, 2005
Word count: 2608 • Size: 13k • Comments: 1 • views: 258
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Howl_From_the_Blue_Moon on December 25, 2005, 7:52:20 AM
Howl_From_the_Blue_Moon on (Chapter: 13)
i was just wandering when your going to put up another story.i've read EVERY one so far,so plez put more up. =^_^= i would be VERY HAPPY because this story ROCKS. =^-^=ShadowLove101 on October 14, 2005, 9:11:46 AM
ShadowLove101 on (Chapter: 1)
I hate Tyson anyway. This stury sounds good!Sapphire_Angels_Devil on August 27, 2005, 6:21:39 AM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 10)
Hiya KAT! ^-^I just found out that I totally forgot to review this chapter sorry for that ^-^U but I have been busy with you know what (page I am talking about so lets not talk about it more then we do witch is a lot :p)
Anyways if I remember correctly I liked the chapter ^-^ it was a long time but me liked... oh look your in on MSN talk with ya soon then :p
BYE!
BTW It was nice to see ya come back to Sweden anytime you want again ^-^
~Saph~
heartless-sinner on July 25, 2005, 3:42:00 AM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 10)
weeeeeeeeee!!! this is so much fun getting confused. ^-^ another chap!! another chap!!! chi!!!!heartless-sinner on July 25, 2005, 3:27:47 AM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 9)
i figured you wouldnt tell me but ya know i could always hope cant i? I am still more lost than ever so i will continue reading till the end!!! It is getting so good every time i get on the computer i check if the next chapter is up. Pathetic i know. ^-^Kaira on July 21, 2005, 2:41:12 PM
Kaira on (Chapter: 8)
hehe this story is kooly ^^ can't wait to see the next chapter woooo ^^Sapphire_Angels_Devil on July 11, 2005, 12:12:07 AM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 8)
Hiya! ^-^You know what I think so yeah keep it going!
~Saph~
heartless-sinner on July 7, 2005, 4:52:59 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 8)
okay now i am confused...alot! Are the shadows Sara and her sister or someone else. The story is getting really tense(that means it is awesome). Cant wait for the next chapter!!heartless-sinner on July 7, 2005, 4:39:11 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 7)
wannna know something bad....i garentee you that i am 100% more sarcastic than half the ppl in the world. it runs in the family and your TM chicks are like me. It is getting really good so i am going to go read your next chapter now!heartless-sinner on July 7, 2005, 4:27:14 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 6)
do not worry i thought this chapter was your best yet....Kai was so awesome. You are really good at witting these kinds of storys. MORE PRANKS!!! i love pranks!Green_Metalic_Devil on May 19, 2005, 6:01:09 PM
Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 7)
It getting better and better.Sapphire_Angels_Devil on May 16, 2005, 2:25:21 AM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 7)
So then we meet again story, lol ^-^ Well you know what I think and it is good so well then I dont know what more to say actually ehhh... good luck studying and with the whole Many ways to kill B thingy I am so going to comment you on them and ¨snickers¨ if i get any more ideas I lt you know.~Saph~
Kaira on April 30, 2005, 8:27:34 AM
Kaira on (Chapter: 6)
are u kidding leave it like this it's funny when he smiles cuze everyone goes all crazy over it ;)Green_Metalic_Devil on April 30, 2005, 5:32:55 AM
Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 6)
This was a graet chapter. Sapphire_Angels_Devil on April 25, 2005, 4:37:27 AM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 6)
A bit OOC in the end but well it is hard to change but maybe you should do him more cold when he talks to them like he couldn't care less but wanted to see what was happening so he did it anyways. ^-^Sorry again I'm still here and are going to be for a while.
~Saph~
Please don't be pissed, please don't be pissed... oh and my homepage is finally up ^-^
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on April 25, 2005, 4:27:44 AM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 6)
Gomen nasai, gomen nasai, förlåt, förlåt, sorry, sorry, jag är så ledsen, jag är så ledsen, ursäkta, ursäkta, please forgive me!!!!I tried to get into the net but something was wrong with our broadband and I couldn't get out on it. I have spent the most time trying to get in and working on a sort of compensation for you. ^-^U
I am really sorry but there was some mayor problem over here and I couldn't reach you if you are in go to the MSN so we can chat, please! I didn't stand you up or anything.
~Saph~
Green_Metalic_Devil on April 13, 2005, 6:34:53 AM
Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 5)
So funny. cant wait to read next one.Tarius: I have the solution on that.
Me: What do you mean?
Tarius: I have created a time machine. So now you can go to the future and read next chapter.
Me: Oki doki!! (steps inside the Machine). And now What?
Tarius: push the yellow button!
Me: If you say so....
Tarius: YEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! His gone. I sended him to the Crita period.
Now he can torture the dinosaurs instead of me. His gone so now it is party!
(Later on the party)
Ray: So you have this party becuz you haved defeated the biggest evil of all?
Tarius: Thats rigth.
Me: Who are defeated?
Tarius: My master your idiot. how many times i have to explain that to you all...
Me: I am back!
Tarius: B-but how? I sended yo back in time.
Me: You sended one of my robots back in time.
Tarius: It was a robot? But since when can you build robots?
Me: Since i taked Einsteins brain. And now you die!!!!
Tarius: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: But this is such a cool party. You invited every great character from the anime Beyblade. I Kill you later. Now we party.
GREAT STORY!!!!!
heartless-sinner on April 9, 2005, 12:45:27 AM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 5)
you three like to argue alot huh. ^-^ hmph...blame it on Bob huh. that made me crack up! i love your ideas with all the pranks and the Secret Kai thing sounds awesome. yay more Kai!!!!!!!! keep up the awesome work. ^-^Sapphire_Angels_Devil on April 8, 2005, 9:54:27 PM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 5)
I have read that one and it is fun ^-^Well done with the chapter and if you need more help just tell me. I have amiled it again but just a short message to see if you got it since I don't want someone ells to get the story and then wonder who the hell I am and start to mail bomb me and you could do that to Tyson, mail bomb him secret mail address and he can't catch anyone of your OC's and what is she supposed to do in a boring comp. class anyways ¨smirks¨
BYE!
HEJ DÅ!
AU REVOIR!
CIAO!
ADJÖ!
GOD BYE!
SAYONARA!
AUF FIDESENE!
and so on...
~Saph~
Green_Metalic_Devil on April 7, 2005, 8:22:16 PM
Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 4)
I have some ideas.1.Glue Tyson to his launcher.
2.Let Tyson wake up whith a snake or pig or something like that.
3.Let a strange boy pretend that he was Tysons old boyfriend.
4.Let Tyson think that he is dead and haved come to the beybladehell.
5.Let Tyson believe it is go-dressed-like-a-girl-day for the boys.
6.Send out an evil messege in Tysons name.
This is all the ideas i have now. But it comes more. Bye
Green_Metalic_Devil on April 7, 2005, 7:42:00 PM
Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 3)
I lov the idea whith the fishes. I gonna read the next now.Green_Metalic_Devil on April 7, 2005, 7:29:18 PM
Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 2)
Tyson in pink?? I want to see a pic of that. cuz when im thinking on it i start laugh. lol. Great story.Green_Metalic_Devil on April 7, 2005, 7:15:27 PM
Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 1)
Okey. Great story. And Marissa is crazy if she likes Tyson.heartless-sinner on March 24, 2005, 12:19:36 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 4)
oh yay secrets about kai. i like that idea.hehe!good chpter. ireally liked it. ^-^keep writting k.heartless-sinner on March 24, 2005, 12:05:57 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 3)
haha you wanna know what the funney thing is. we live by the water so my brother smells like fish everyday.he is going to kick my but if he reads this. oh and about the kai thing...at least you tried.^-^your pranks are hillarious...maybe i should try some.(evil thoughts arizing.)hehehehe! oh and this story is totally going in my favs. comedys are awesome.
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on March 23, 2005, 10:35:09 PM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 4)
We'll here is what popped into my mind.*School, test make Tyson fail big time ^-^
* Want to know more about their bitbeasts
* They can try and find out why Kai is always up so early and finds out a secret...
* Follow the principal around when he tries to find proff buut falls into a prank they did not do and they get of the hook
* Max and Tyson can try to investigate if it really was them who did it but gets theirselves into trouble
I had better ideas but they jsut went poff so yeah this was what I got when you asked for help. Hope something is usefull ^-^ See Ya around BYE!
~Saph~
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on March 23, 2005, 10:21:42 PM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 4)
You sneaked this chapter in without me even notice -.-Well I am here now so I am going to give you a review when i have read it ^-^
Donno why I leave one before and one after, I guess I think it is fun ^-^
~Saph~
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on March 23, 2005, 12:46:30 AM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 3)
You didn't? ¨tilts her head to the side¨ Gee I am not that mean that I wont review on one of my new friends stories, right? Because you are my friend, or at least am I counting you as one of my friends ^-^Lookie Tyson is going to smell even more than usual and well I like ^-^
I want to add some ideas but I don't have a single one at the moment but if you want to use something from one of my stories do it! ^-^
But I'll come back when I get something witch should be around midnight tonight when I am trying to sleep, somehow I always get my best ideas then ^-^
Good luck with this one BYE!
~Saph~
heartless-sinner on March 21, 2005, 6:34:13 AM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 2)
really great ...i have a tip for ya...HAVE MORE KAI:P. hehe i am such a big loser. ^-^Sapphire_Angels_Devil on March 20, 2005, 10:30:09 PM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 2)
I have finisched it and would scream yay! and dance around if it was not for him so just pretend that I am doing so ^-^Really good and go and get him really good in the next chapter and now I know what a Mariah is. ^-^
Have to go now I am going to nag on my teacher so he will let us out 50min soner and it will maybe work ^-^
Hej Då! (Swe for Bye!) ~Saph~
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on March 20, 2005, 10:18:24 PM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 2)
~Before I have read it~What is a Mariah, I am in comp class so this is the message I can promise you if he sees me here. He don't like when you not do what he wants you to, lol. Funny sentence but oh so boring to read, I'll be back when I have read the chapter and are sure my teacher don't see me review. ^-^
~Saph~
heartless-sinner on March 20, 2005, 4:57:15 AM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 1)
hehe you can throw Tyson in a ditch for all i care...just pwease dont hurt Kai. he WILL be my husband one of these days. :P great story. i cannot wait for the evil pranks.Sapphire_Angels_Devil on March 19, 2005, 7:16:28 PM
Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 1)
Fun! ^-^Hope to see the next chapter up soon, but I am a little surprised that Kira, Akeira and Tirza are not in this one. If they did not change name to be in this story. Still good BYE! ^-^
~Saph~ Go and kick Tyson's butt well from me, lol. But don't touch it, it is pure toxic. O.o