The Last Remaining Ancient 1
Submitted May 28, 2007 Updated October 6, 2007 Status Complete | Just a little story object thing I thought up in my spare time. Nothing that extravagant.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - The Shinra Mansion
Submitted: May 28, 2007 • Updated: July 16, 2007
Word count: 476 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 301
Chapter 2 - The Temple of the Ancients
Submitted: May 28, 2007 • Updated: June 7, 2007
Word count: 562 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 299
Chapter 3 - The Forgotten City
Submitted: May 28, 2007 • Updated: July 16, 2007
Word count: 438 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 312
Chapter 4 - At Mideel
Submitted: July 10, 2007 • Updated: July 16, 2007
Word count: 305 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 312
Chapter 5 - The Proposal
Submitted: July 15, 2007 • Updated: July 17, 2007
Word count: 432 • Size: 2k • Comments: 14 • views: 289
Chapter 6 - The Lifestream
Submitted: July 23, 2007 • Updated: July 23, 2007
Word count: 466 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 289
Chapter 7 - To Midgar
Submitted: August 20, 2007 • Updated: August 20, 2007
Word count: 523 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 312
Chapter 8 - The one before chapter 9
Submitted: August 22, 2007 • Updated: August 22, 2007
Word count: 407 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 290
Chapter 9 - This is the epilogue; I skipped the next part.
Submitted: October 4, 2007 • Updated: October 4, 2007
Word count: 250 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 266
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Tifa777 on May 16, 2011, 2:52:20 AM
Tifa777 on (Chapter: 1)
i love vinny's hair.....<3kylaVegeta on November 12, 2007, 12:32:51 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 7)
wow a nice and interesting twist. Coolio.aeris7dragon on November 12, 2007, 7:05:21 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 7)
yep. i had 2 hav some familiarity w/ sun and kadaj before i started number two...which is kinda, well, duh, everyones seen the movie and if they havent they should or they should DIE.kylaVegeta on November 14, 2007, 2:02:59 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: index)
Yeah. It's very coolio. XDaeris7dragon on November 19, 2007, 5:41:30 AM
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Ya my FAVE MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!kylaVegeta on November 12, 2007, 12:36:16 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 8)
wow coolio. this is really really coolio. i like it. whenever I red it I get chills. I guess its the chills of remenissing...aeris7dragon on November 12, 2007, 7:02:59 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 8)
reminiscing...reminiscing...now where hav i heard that word before?kylaVegeta on November 14, 2007, 1:57:45 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: index)
it's like a word meaning to remember think about the past whatever... I remember hearing it in Derge of Curberus and in some other places.aeris7dragon on November 19, 2007, 5:41:04 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: index)
oh yeah........................................................kylaVegeta on November 12, 2007, 12:39:38 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 9)
AHHHHHHHHH I LOVE IT!!! I got a question. please please please can my pepes be in your next one all you are going to be be in my next one. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! (ooops I bet I'm anoying you now sorry...) but yeah you all are totally gonna be in my next story. and we are all gonna find away to bring Aeris back.aeris7dragon on November 12, 2007, 7:02:07 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 9)
well ive already got the whole series planned out...but ill put all ur people in another one i'm planning on, a bit of a random comedy thing with everyone i kno in real life and some OCs and my fave animes and mangas.kylaVegeta on November 14, 2007, 1:56:18 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: index)
ok. That'll be awesome. ^-^ I love comedy. XDaeris7dragon on November 19, 2007, 5:40:09 AM
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SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Destiny127 on August 22, 2007, 2:23:08 PM
Destiny127 on (Chapter: 7)
ah. now i understand. I really thought I'd read this chapter. wow...aeris7dragon on August 24, 2007, 12:02:52 PM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 7)
ya when one hasnt read a story for a while one should go back to the one before the one u definitely havent read yet.Destiny127 on August 22, 2007, 2:20:55 PM
Destiny127 on (Chapter: 8)
neep? I think I skipped a chapter..crap. lol one min!! *runs back to read other chapters* I am puzzled...when did sun get bloodily hurt? You did say sephiroth did that..i dunno..aeris7dragon on August 24, 2007, 12:01:35 PM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 8)
oh i was kinda vague about taht part...see kadaj drew his sword and hit her before she could react.Destiny127 on July 27, 2007, 2:27:56 PM
Destiny127 on (Chapter: 5)
What? I SO didn't read that last part...wow. That little Miroku! (from Inu Yasha...)aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:57:03 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 5)
well, thats cuz when u read it before, i hadnt finished it yet. then when i got back on-my sissy kicked me off for a bit-i finished writing it.aeris7dragon on July 28, 2007, 12:52:59 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 5)
never seen Inuyasha but my friend says Sseshomoru's hot... -_-' yeah i have crazy friends.kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:52:02 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 5)
What!!! *laughs soooo hard almost starts to cry and is having trouble breathing.* Woa Vincent have you been hanging out wid Miroku???aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:52:30 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 5)
whodacrap is miroku?Kupo on August 1, 2007, 4:57:41 AM
Kupo on (Chapter: index)
Miroku is from InuYasha (aka the most overrated anime ever, but it's okay) and he's very well known for being a pervert.aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 6:24:26 AM
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oh i see!!! never seen inuyasha. wanna, though!!!kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 5:38:50 AM
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Yeah What Kupo said. Miroku goes around and asks every pritty women to bear his child. But he finally settaly for Songo.aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:28:46 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 5)
She actually does bear his child, not children, however.vinny: WHAT!!!!!!!
aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:27:56 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 5)
i know. im weird making him say that. and stupid-he tried to kill me for it!!!!!!kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:36:29 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 2)
Oooo this is interesting. I was like 11 when I finally got to really play it. I cried when they killed Aeris. It was so sad. Why couldn't they bring her back. *pouts* I need to write a fanfic where we are able to bring her back. *skims up an idea.* Ooo I'll start wirting it when I finnish the one I'm currently writing. Anyone wanna be in it???aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:25:45 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 2)
I wanna be in it!!!!!!!! (im a swordfighter with sabres, mee hee!)kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 5:42:25 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: index)
Alright I'll defanitly put you in it. I'll start writing it once I finnish My final fantasy X story. I have another story that I haven't finnished that I started writing two or more years ago. Then one I started around the begging of this year. But they can wait longer... Now that I think about it so far I've only finnished one story called "When Squirrels Attack."aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 8:13:26 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: index)
YAY!!! Thats two storys im in!!! (go check out Xiaolin Comedy! by DrakeGirlandLuna. http://www.fanart-central.net/story-43090.php Im in chapter nine!!!!)kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 8:31:17 AM
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Ok. I will soon. I kinda have something to do now...aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 8:37:16 AM
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!...wait, tahts not my fanfic.Sun: Uh, duh!
Me: Shut up!
Vinny: Wut did u just say to my wife?
Me: uh, nuthin......
kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 9:04:29 AM
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Kyla: Come on Vincent please don't Kill her. Me: Yeah I will check that one out and your other fanfics out real soon I promise.
aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 9:17:59 AM
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Vinny: Who said I was gonna kill her? Im just gonna shoot her in the leg, leaving her immobile for the rest of her life.Sun: Not in front of Windsong.
kylaVegeta on August 2, 2007, 1:04:40 AM
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Me: Yeah don't do that in front of Windsong. And plus if she's inmobelized haw are you gonna stay so fit. B/ c you wont get to chase her anymore. *gets a bad image* uhh don't answer that... And if you shoot her in the wrong please she could bleed to death... Kyla: *thinking: I wonder what Kayla saw...*
aeris7dragon on August 2, 2007, 2:07:45 AM
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sun: ya and i dont wanna use my marigold on her.me: why not?
sun: b/c u suck.
me: on lollypops!!!! *pulls one out and is about to lick it when windsong snatches it* awwwwwww........
vinny: myess, my daughter, steal the lollypop! mwahahahahahahah!!!
kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:56:56 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 6)
I love it. I'm starting to get chills its soo good. In fact sooo good the chills are staring to make me cry.kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:47:06 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 4)
you write sooo good. I am getting sad remembering all the stuff that happened. I haven't played this in atleast a year. *eyes start feeling with tears again*kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:43:38 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 3)
Oh man here come the water works... Not you Sun but me. SOOO SAAAAD!!!. When I put my oc in the story I had it where she sprinted in front of Sephiroths blade and the sword went clear through her and Aeris. In her mind she was like "No why couldn't I have died instead." I bet you would think the same thing. Seeing as my character can bring heself back from the dead. NOOOOOOOOOOO *cries even more*kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:26:49 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 1)
This is good. sounds like something that would good on in my mind. I always end up putting my oc in final fantasy games. This is really good. Alot better then the one I wrote and is still writing.Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:56:36 PM
Kupo on (Chapter: 6)
I like how it's all serious but then kinda comic relief-y by saying things like the overratedness of unconsciousness at the same time ^^lolz, that just reminded me of this one time, me and my friends were thinking about making up a "religion" call Jenova's Witnesses XP
aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:51:23 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 6)
sephiroth could be teh high priest of jenovas witnesses!!!!! and loz could be the mourner (u know, when jenova's witness members r kiled!)Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:51:18 PM
Kupo on (Chapter: 5)
What Vincent asks Sun is funny, but extreeeeeeeemely OOC. I could never ever picture him saying that in reality (well, I mean in like y'know official stuff anyway. Obviously Vincent himself will never be seen in reality), which is slightly annoying.Yay Red Bull! He rox
aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:50:00 AM
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yah mee hee vinny:WHAT exactly did i say?
me: oh nuthin.
vinny:...really. *looks up teh fanfic* u r so dead.
me: yipes!!!!! *runs away, dodging vinny's bullets*
Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:46:54 PM
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hrm...is this going off the part where Cloud is a total veg for a while and you play as Tifa or did you make this up? I'm really getting the feeling that you've played this game 10x more recently than I have and I'm beginning to feel a little stupid/FF7 deprived -_-'aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:48:11 AM
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well ive restarted it over and over and can never seem to play it right. but last time i played this was last month-well, actually, a month and a week ago-a month ago i was grounded for talking back-excessively stupid of me-to Mom.Kupo on August 1, 2007, 4:21:32 AM
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dat sux. but seriously, tell me what you're stuck at and maybe I can help. I've played the whole thing through twice, except for not bothering to do the Sephy fight in the end the second time.aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:51:23 AM
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well the only thing im doing wrong is not getting some key items. im not very thorough mee hee hee......Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:40:42 PM
Kupo on (Chapter: 2)
yay it's so cool, like I'm revisiting this part, seeing as I haven't played it in forever. I love this part of the game too! Lots of story and lots of pleasantly (sort of) infuriating little puzzles! And I ask you, why the heck, when Aeris could be revived by a pheonix down, is she left for dead while Cait Sith who is OBLITERATED gets to come back???? And everyone hates him!!! Gah! What a horrific little plothole. ok, so him coming back isn't a plothole, but the pheonix down thing is anyway! and I mean seriously no one even wants Cait Sith back and obviously the producers don't have a problem with permanently getting rid of your party members, and this wouldn't even be an actual death!! It'd just be one less random little what-teh-heck-were-they-thinking moment! And c'mon, surely Shinra wouldn't have more than one ridiculous remote control fat moogle/cat toy hanging around!!??? *pant pant* ok I'll stop ranting now...aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:46:14 AM
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I tink u can only be revived with a phoenix down if ur KOed, not dead.Kupo on August 1, 2007, 4:20:15 AM
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I've thought of that, but I'm pretty sure it isn't true. More than anything just because they're called pheonix downs. Like y'know in the pokemon games they're called revives, and use them to revive pokemon that are clearly labled fainted (or ko or something like that anyway. the point is they're labled) but in FF they give you every reason to think they're really dead and then call em pheonix downs. pheonixes are mythical birds that KILL THEMSELVES every 500 years or so just cuz they're bored and then they regenerate. and that's why they're called pheonix downs, cuz they're for bringing ppl back to life.Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:31:07 PM
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hmm very interesting. actual paragraphs would be nice (accidentally read a couple lines twice since they all look the same from the left) but at least it's not a text wall. Question: when she turns back into a human does their light source go out?btw, isn't the vin vin room (lol) just like the creepiest place evah or what?!! When I was playing DoC I was all spooked out to go in there and I actually screamed when one a those random battle dudes popped out of the coffin *shudders*
aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:44:56 AM
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HEY!!!!! Dont give away anything from DoC yet, Im gonna play it in a few days! (Note: I cant play in CA b/c grandma doesnt have a PS2.) And yes, their light source goes out. She only has fire when shes a cat.Kupo on August 1, 2007, 7:16:58 AM
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Sorry! I thought you'd already played it or something. ^^' at least that's not really a plot spoiler.aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 9:19:15 AM
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Tahts ok. Tahts why I didnt really make up a Sun plot line for DoC, is b/c I havnt played it yet. All she does is watch teh kids.Destiny127 on July 16, 2007, 5:02:48 PM
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hm. I'm yet again curious to know what happens...I only watched my sister play the game...I missed out on certain parts I suppose.Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:34:58 PM
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lol I did that with my brother for a long time before I ever played it. Entertaining isn't it? kind of rotten tho, how seeing big plot points makes them spoilers for later since you can't fully appreciate them yet -_-'aeris7dragon on July 18, 2007, 2:44:48 AM
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MISSED OUT!!! balderdash. maybe you should play it urself. my fave game!!!! i want dirge of cerberus 4 my bday YAY dirge of cerberus rpg-shooting game thats ALL VINNY!!! (oh yeah dont call him vinny dont wanna get slapped again...this time he might use his claw!)Destiny127 on July 27, 2007, 2:25:41 PM
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Meh bf gave it to meh...I couldn't get into it though. I tried..it just bored meh. I dunno why. O.o' strangeness...aeris7dragon on July 26, 2007, 11:36:28 AM
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YAY I GOT DIRGE OF CERBERUS!!! I LOVE MY DADDY!!! REMAKE FF7!!!!!...sorry that last one was randomDestiny127 on July 27, 2007, 2:44:25 PM
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aww...I love it. O^-^O thank you for continuing the series...this story always cheers meh up...and it's not retarded. -_-' I like it...aeris7dragon on July 28, 2007, 12:50:03 AM
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I beg to differ about the retardedness...but thx!Destiny127 on July 16, 2007, 5:11:20 PM
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NOO YOU BETTER CONTINUE IT DADGUMMET!!! >.< aww...I love this story...continued pwease!!!aeris7dragon on July 26, 2007, 11:39:07 AM
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WHAT KINDA WORD IS DADGUMMET!!!...oh yeah a hillbilly word mee hee heeDestiny127 on July 27, 2007, 2:53:48 PM
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Yeah...I live in a very southern place...o_o I bet if you lokoedyou couldn't find this town I live in on any map...you'd have to google or go wikipedia it or something...O.oaeris7dragon on July 18, 2007, 2:45:37 AM
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gonna be gone a few days but i'll continue when i get backaeris7dragon on July 17, 2007, 2:06:08 AM
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there I continued. hee hee...it's funny what Vinny asked Sun! Read it, it's funny(ish) until the end.Destiny127 on July 16, 2007, 5:07:58 PM
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O.O suspenseful...gah.aeris7dragon on July 26, 2007, 11:38:20 AM
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really? i didnt know i could be suspenseful!! ...are u sugarcoating how awful i am?!?!Destiny127 on July 16, 2007, 4:59:45 PM
Destiny127 on (Chapter: 1)
thats a really good story...you put it together really good! I like it.aeris7dragon on July 26, 2007, 11:34:58 AM
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really? well actually i dont think i write very good-i like my story lines but how i put the actual words together it sounds like im in third grade, ya know? i didnt inherit that from my mom, thats for sure.aeris7dragon on July 26, 2007, 11:10:13 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 6)
Well... umm, I can't really add any more chapters until I get back to Utah...cuz I kinda left my rough draft for this story at home...but I'll update it as soon as I can! Besides, Final Fantasy 7 quirks doesn't need a rough draft-it comes out in a sketch pad originally, and I don't leave my sketch pads ANYWHERE!!! (unless they're full; then I leave them at home, mee hee)aeris7dragon on July 23, 2007, 12:32:54 PM
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I think this one was the wierdest ever-I kept running out of adjectives (especially when Vincent stopped Sun from jumping in). But who knows, maybe next time will be even more retarded.aeris7dragon on July 23, 2007, 12:33:26 PM
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THERE!! I finished-are you happy now?Destiny127 on July 27, 2007, 2:48:35 PM
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wait...it's over? O.O ...aeris7dragon on July 28, 2007, 12:50:39 AM
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no i finished the chappie. mee heeDestiny127 on July 16, 2007, 5:05:39 PM
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O.o NOOOOO omg...three chapters and I'm hurt. dang...aeris was always my fav character, next to vincent...>.<aeris7dragon on July 17, 2007, 1:44:36 AM
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Aeris & Vinny r my faves too!!! dang you got me in abbr. mood.aeris7dragon on July 10, 2007, 1:29:39 PM
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PLEASE COMMENT!! I WANT TO KNOW HOW WELL I WRITE!! ...please?