Unknown Paths
Submitted March 9, 2006 Updated March 25, 2006 Status Incomplete | What happens when one of Keitaro's American friends comes to visit? Could this mean love for one of the residents?
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 1720 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 353
Chapter 2 - Chapter 2
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
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Chapter 3 - Chapter 3
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2462 • Size: 14k • Comments: 1 • views: 301
Chapter 4 - Chapter 4
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
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Chapter 5 - Chapter 5
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
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Chapter 6 - Chapter 6
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Chapter 7 - Chapter 7
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Chapter 8 - Chapter 8
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2231 • Size: 11k • Comments: 1 • views: 304
Chapter 9 - Chapter 9
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2205 • Size: 11k • Comments: 1 • views: 286
Chapter 10 - Chapter 10
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 5028 • Size: 27k • Comments: 1 • views: 317
Chapter 11 - Chapter 11
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 5625 • Size: 31k • Comments: 2 • views: 260
Chapter 12 - Chapter 12
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 3391 • Size: 18k • Comments: 2 • views: 280
Chapter 13 - Chapter 13
Submitted: March 25, 2006 • Updated: March 25, 2006
Word count: 4716 • Size: 25k • Comments: 2 • views: 337
Comments
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Amadeus on May 12, 2006, 6:49:18 AM
Actually Motoko's about 20-21 and Amadeus is 25AnimeMangaLover on March 31, 2006, 5:34:32 AM
Good chapter ^^ A few grammatical and spelling errors, but that's pretty much it ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^Riverwind on March 26, 2006, 12:52:26 AM
kyaaahhhhh I like this Chapter! hehe Hide and Seek!!! I want to see Motoko in her outfit ^^ Nice design Amadeus, from what I pictured it to be heheRiverwind on March 23, 2006, 7:36:33 AM
I'm just loving this story more and more!!Riverwind on March 23, 2006, 5:47:42 AM
HAHA I LOVVVVEEEE this sorty, its sooo funny! Keitaro hehe soooo funny! Funny Funny Stuff here!! I'm adding this to my faves list!Aaedien on March 14, 2006, 12:48:06 PM
Well, good story!However, I detest the usage of the word 'thru' in replacement of 'through'.
Also, there aren't enough commas when you have the characters speak.
AnimeMangaLover on March 12, 2006, 6:44:47 AM
I like that Amadeus and Motoko's relationship is starting to grow ^^ It seems to be a lot of dialogue, so maybe describing things more? I have do the same thing in my stories; a lot of dialogue and not enough description. Until the next chapter ^_~
AnimeMangaLover on March 12, 2006, 6:26:19 AM
Amadeus is in his twenties (I think?) and Motoko's gotta still be in her teens, right? Like 17 or something like that? Ah, anyways, I'm on to the next chapter ^^AnimeMangaLover on March 12, 2006, 5:54:51 AM
I've noticed that you spell "through" like "thru." Sorry, but that kinda irks me ^^; Anyways, this was a good chapter ^^ On to the next one!AnimeMangaLover on March 12, 2006, 5:35:57 AM
Ah, sorry I didn't comment on the other chapters; I remembered I had read them already ^^ This was a good chapter, so I'm on to the next one! ^^AnimeMangaLover on March 11, 2006, 1:27:29 AM
Good chapter ^^ There are some grammatical and spelling errors (as with all online stories, so don't worry ^^), you have some words that shouldn't be there and there are some places where you need words, but otherwise this is good ^^ I'll read the other chapters later ^^