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Unknown Paths

What happens when one of Keitaro's American friends comes to visit? Could this mean love for one of the residents?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 1720 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 238

Chapter 2 - Chapter 2
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2378 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 234

Chapter 3 - Chapter 3
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2462 • Size: 14k • Comments: 1 • views: 218

Chapter 4 - Chapter 4
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 4035 • Size: 22k • Comments: 0 • views: 210

Chapter 5 - Chapter 5
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2985 • Size: 16k • Comments: 0 • views: 216

Chapter 6 - Chapter 6
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2323 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 212

Chapter 7 - Chapter 7
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2216 • Size: 12k • Comments: 0 • views: 213

Chapter 8 - Chapter 8
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2231 • Size: 11k • Comments: 1 • views: 226

Chapter 9 - Chapter 9
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 2205 • Size: 11k • Comments: 1 • views: 202

Chapter 10 - Chapter 10
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 5028 • Size: 27k • Comments: 1 • views: 234

Chapter 11 - Chapter 11
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 5625 • Size: 31k • Comments: 2 • views: 178

Chapter 12 - Chapter 12
Submitted: March 9, 2006 • Updated: March 9, 2006
Word count: 3391 • Size: 18k • Comments: 2 • views: 202

Chapter 13 - Chapter 13
Submitted: March 25, 2006 • Updated: March 25, 2006
Word count: 4716 • Size: 25k • Comments: 2 • views: 256

Comments

Comments (11)

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Amadeus on May 12, 2006, 6:49:18 AM

Amadeus on (Chapter: 11)
AmadeusActually Motoko's about 20-21 and Amadeus is 25

AnimeMangaLover on March 31, 2006, 5:34:32 AM

AnimeMangaLover on (Chapter: 13)
AnimeMangaLoverGood chapter ^^ A few grammatical and spelling errors, but that's pretty much it ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

Riverwind on March 26, 2006, 12:52:26 AM

Riverwind on (Chapter: 13)
Riverwindkyaaahhhhh I like this Chapter! hehe Hide and Seek!!! I want to see Motoko in her outfit ^^ Nice design Amadeus, from what I pictured it to be hehe

Riverwind on March 23, 2006, 7:36:33 AM

Riverwind on (Chapter: 8)
RiverwindI'm just loving this story more and more!!

Riverwind on March 23, 2006, 5:47:42 AM

Riverwind on (Chapter: 3)
RiverwindHAHA I LOVVVVEEEE this sorty, its sooo funny! Keitaro hehe soooo funny! Funny Funny Stuff here!! I'm adding this to my faves list!

Aaedien on March 14, 2006, 12:48:06 PM

Aaedien on (Chapter: 12)
AaedienWell, good story!

However, I detest the usage of the word 'thru' in replacement of 'through'.

Also, there aren't enough commas when you have the characters speak.

AnimeMangaLover on March 12, 2006, 6:44:47 AM

AnimeMangaLover on (Chapter: 12)
AnimeMangaLoverI like that Amadeus and Motoko's relationship is starting to grow ^^ It seems to be a lot of dialogue, so maybe describing things more? I have do the same thing in my stories; a lot of dialogue and not enough description.
Until the next chapter ^_~

AnimeMangaLover on March 12, 2006, 6:26:19 AM

AnimeMangaLover on (Chapter: 11)
AnimeMangaLoverAmadeus is in his twenties (I think?) and Motoko's gotta still be in her teens, right? Like 17 or something like that? Ah, anyways, I'm on to the next chapter ^^

AnimeMangaLover on March 12, 2006, 5:54:51 AM

AnimeMangaLover on (Chapter: 10)
AnimeMangaLoverI've noticed that you spell "through" like "thru." Sorry, but that kinda irks me ^^; Anyways, this was a good chapter ^^ On to the next one!

AnimeMangaLover on March 12, 2006, 5:35:57 AM

AnimeMangaLover on (Chapter: 9)
AnimeMangaLoverAh, sorry I didn't comment on the other chapters; I remembered I had read them already ^^ This was a good chapter, so I'm on to the next one! ^^