Sunshine and Moonshine
Submitted July 31, 2007 Updated February 22, 2008 Status Incomplete | A new story about my OC, Kay, and her friends, life, lovelife, and so on. Ryuuzashipping EternalShipping Ratings may change
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Welcome Back to Duelist Kingdom, Ms. Simms
Submitted: July 31, 2007 • Updated: July 31, 2007
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Chapter 2 - Away to Domino
Submitted: August 8, 2007 • Updated: August 8, 2007
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Chapter 3 - Observation
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
Word count: 1646 • Size: 8k • Comments: 12 • views: 228
Chapter 4 - A Serious Duelist
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
Word count: 1349 • Size: 7k • Comments: 10 • views: 315
Chapter 5 - Great, Egoman's Hosting a Tournament
Submitted: August 13, 2007 • Updated: August 13, 2007
Word count: 1719 • Size: 9k • Comments: 14 • views: 198
Chapter 6 - The Duel Disk, Locater Card, and Rare Hunters
Submitted: August 14, 2007 • Updated: August 14, 2007
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Chapter 7 - Kicking Off Battle City
Submitted: August 15, 2007 • Updated: August 15, 2007
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Chapter 8 - A total of four Locater Cards and a Group of Thugs
Submitted: August 17, 2007 • Updated: August 17, 2007
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Chapter 9 - The Rare Hunters Mean Buisiness
Submitted: August 19, 2007 • Updated: August 19, 2007
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Chapter 10 - Wait, you're a WHAT?!
Submitted: August 31, 2007 • Updated: August 31, 2007
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Chapter 11 - The Deadliest Duel pt. 1
Submitted: September 7, 2007 • Updated: September 7, 2007
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Chapter 12 - The Deadliest Duel pt. 2
Submitted: October 12, 2007 • Updated: October 12, 2007
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Chapter 13 - The Deadliest Duel pt. 3
Submitted: October 12, 2007 • Updated: October 12, 2007
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Chapter 14 - The Finals Begin
Submitted: October 14, 2007 • Updated: October 26, 2007
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Chapter 15 - The Dark Spirit
Submitted: October 27, 2007 • Updated: October 27, 2007
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Chapter 16 - The Second Duel pt. 1 Embodiments of Apophis
Submitted: October 28, 2007 • Updated: October 28, 2007
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Chapter 17 - The Second Duel pt. 2 Mystical Beast Serket
Submitted: October 28, 2007 • Updated: October 28, 2007
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Chapter 18 - A Darker Shadow Is Revealed
Submitted: November 2, 2007 • Updated: November 2, 2007
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Chapter 19 - Two Connections
Submitted: November 11, 2007 • Updated: November 19, 2007
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Chapter 20 - Shadow Games Take a Whole New Level pt. 1
Submitted: November 19, 2007 • Updated: November 19, 2007
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Chapter 21 - Shadow Games Take a Whole New Level pt. 2
Submitted: November 30, 2007 • Updated: November 30, 2007
Word count: 2142 • Size: 11k • Comments: 8 • views: 199
Chapter 22 - Shadow Games Take a Whole New Level pt. 3
Submitted: December 15, 2007 • Updated: December 15, 2007
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Chapter 23 - The Ancient Text
Submitted: December 31, 2007 • Updated: December 31, 2007
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Chapter 24 - The Duel Tower
Submitted: January 11, 2008 • Updated: January 11, 2008
Word count: 3399 • Size: 18k • Comments: 6 • views: 189
Chapter 25 - Four-Way Duel
Submitted: January 13, 2008 • Updated: January 13, 2008
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Chapter 26 - Near the Brink of Death pt. 1
Submitted: January 18, 2008 • Updated: January 18, 2008
Word count: 4163 • Size: 21k • Comments: 8 • views: 197
Chapter 27 - Near the Brink of Death pt. 2
Submitted: January 25, 2008 • Updated: January 25, 2008
Word count: 4705 • Size: 24k • Comments: 10 • views: 225
Chapter 28 - She won't wake up!
Submitted: February 22, 2008 • Updated: February 22, 2008
Word count: 1216 • Size: 6k • Comments: 13 • views: 210
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Kohakucrazy on February 28, 2008, 8:47:28 PM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 28)
KionaKina on February 29, 2008, 9:53:00 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 28)
Actually, a few of her friends are sitll with her.Tori, Alex, Kristen, they're with her
Kohakucrazy on February 28, 2008, 8:39:47 PM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 27)
Hakura: Can I kick Marik off the blimp? Pretty please...NOOOOO!!! Violence is not for you...
Hakura: * pouts*
Oh well.. Great chapter.... And ya know.... Ya ruined the seriousness for me when you did that whole thing with the popcorn and the movie..... -.- but oh well
Hakura
KionaKina on February 29, 2008, 9:52:26 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 27)
yeah, I wanted some comic relief in thereAnd you can kick Marik off the building a little later
Kohakucrazy on February 26, 2008, 10:11:37 AM
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Oooooh... Don't let Hakura see! * covers a red head with god bangs and at the tips of her hair's eyes*Hakura: What's going on!?
Nothing.. You just keep quiet....
She may be sixteen, but has a fear of watching things like this..... Great chapter too!!!
Zakuro
KionaKina on February 26, 2008, 10:34:05 AM
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thanks ^_^Kohakucrazy on February 25, 2008, 9:17:02 AM
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I agree with you for Mokuba.. He is too cutre for his own good... >< * huggles Mokuba* And I thought it was ' Godly trench coats' Not ' Gravity Defying trench coats.'Zakuro
KionaKina on February 25, 2008, 11:05:42 AM
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ah ah, it's both. *Nods wisely*Kohakucrazy on February 24, 2008, 9:52:00 AM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 9)
This is cool to read... I wanna keep going, but it'll have to wait till tomorrow.Zakuro
KionaKina on February 25, 2008, 7:02:54 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 9)
thank you ^_^ I'm just happy you like itKelekiahGaladrian on February 23, 2008, 1:43:49 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 28)
Awesome job Kay-chan! I feel bad for Kay, but I guess it can't be helped. I'm excited to see how Cat and Kaiba's duel will turn out and I hope she kicks his butt, but we'll see. Great job once again!KionaKina on February 23, 2008, 11:35:03 PM
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Yeah, that duel is gonna be fun to write out. ^_^ I just hope I can figure out what kind of deck Cat has.KelekiahGaladrian on February 25, 2008, 6:01:40 AM
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I'm sure it'll be an awesome duel and I'm sure you'll do superb at it! ^^SnowKitty on February 22, 2008, 12:53:36 PM
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Cool chappie, Kay-chan! . . . . . . and hooray for the Nekoshipping, Anti-Silentshipping, and Azureshipping! It made me happy! ^-^ Good luck with the next chappie!KionaKina on February 23, 2008, 11:34:29 PM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 28)
Whoo-hoo! I'll update ASAPAlleyCat17 on February 22, 2008, 11:25:34 AM
AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 28)
wow sweet chapter and i hope kay wakes up soon and i can't wait to see cat dule kaiba and that is going to be a fight worth seeing.KionaKina on February 23, 2008, 11:24:38 PM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 28)
indeed it is! I'm excited about it too!Moon_Princess on February 22, 2008, 10:41:38 AM
Moon_Princess on (Chapter: 28)
Yay! Nekoshipping and Anti-Silentshipping And Azureshipping!All in one. o.o
Hurray!
But Kay-chan! Whaaaaaaaa~!! TT-TT *sniffle*
Whoa! Even I'm surprised that Cat challenged Kaiba! :O
This is so cool! x3
Update real soon!!
Loved it!
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on February 22, 2008, 10:42:32 AM
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I've been planning this part for over a month and I can't wait! Marik vs KayCat vs Seto
These were the two Battle City duels i've been dying to work on!
PandaChan21 on February 22, 2008, 9:35:15 AM
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Oh...em...gee...I LOVE IT!!!
KionaKina on February 22, 2008, 9:40:16 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 28)
SQUEE!KelekiahGaladrian on February 9, 2008, 1:28:04 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 27)
NO!!!!!!! NOT COOL!!!!!!!!!! I HOPE SHE WAKES UP ON TIME SO THAT SHE DOESN'T LOSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAH!!!!!! *cries*Kel: If not, then I feel bad for Kay, but that means Yami has to kick his butt.
*blinks* I thought you said you wanted to kill him?
Kel: RIGHT!!!!! I'LL DO THE SAME THING TO HIM AS I DID TO KAIBA!!!!!!!!
*sweatdrops* Eh....
Kel: *kicks Yami Marik off the blimp and watches him hit the water and get impaled on a rock* HA!!!!!!!!!!! I'M A GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
*facepalms* Okay, now she's the hyper one.... Great chapter though Kay-chan, it came out really good.
KionaKina on February 10, 2008, 4:45:19 AM
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HEY! Leave Seto alone!! *Grabs Seto and hugs him protectively*Seto: *Sweatdrop* Um, Kay-Chan? Will you let go of me?
Kay-Chan: NO!
KelekiahGaladrian on February 12, 2008, 7:05:42 AM
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*bangs head against nearest wall continually* I'm sorry Kaiba... very sorry.... Yori-chan and I were having an RP one day and Kaiba insulted one of Yori's OCs so Kel got angry at him and I wrote a fanfic where she killed him. You might not want to read that....Kel: >_< *ranting about killing people and other such things*
*knocks myself out* @_@
KionaKina on February 22, 2008, 10:50:36 AM
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Seto and Kay-Chan: O_O Kay-Chan: O-kay then?
KelekiahGaladrian on February 23, 2008, 1:39:21 AM
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@_@ I'm okay....Kel: *continues to rant*
KelekiahGaladrian on February 9, 2008, 1:24:43 AM
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YAY!!!! IT'S KAY'S BLUE EYES!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!! DIE MARIK DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_<Kel: *blinks* No more sugar for you.
*bounces around room* IF KAY DOESN'T WIN I'LL BE VERY TICKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kel: *facepalms*
GREAT JOB KAY-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KionaKina on February 10, 2008, 4:44:26 AM
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O_O I'm so scared of what's gonna happen when you read the next chapterKelekiahGaladrian on February 12, 2008, 7:03:04 AM
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AHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KelekiahGaladrian on February 3, 2008, 11:00:26 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 25)
GAH!!! KAY VS. MARIK?!?!?! AHH!!!! That's so creepy! I hope she wins! Great job!KionaKina on February 8, 2008, 8:39:47 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 25)
...not going to comment ^^KelekiahGaladrian on February 9, 2008, 1:23:15 AM
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Should I be worried? *doesn't wait for an answer* THEN I MUST READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!! AHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KelekiahGaladrian on February 3, 2008, 10:59:40 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 24)
Oh boy! I can't wait to see who ends up dueling who!! The potato song rocked as did Kay's proclaimation (sp?) of being female. That was awesome! Great job Kay-chan! ^^KionaKina on February 8, 2008, 8:39:29 AM
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Thanks so much! i'm glad oyu liked it ^_^KelekiahGaladrian on February 9, 2008, 1:22:40 AM
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You're welcome!SnowKitty on January 25, 2008, 10:54:42 PM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 27)
AHHHH! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLIN' ME!!!!!!! Awesome chappie!KionaKina on January 26, 2008, 12:04:13 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 27)
^_^ Thanks Ki-Kianimewolflover on January 25, 2008, 12:13:46 PM
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So . . . much . . . action. Kay-chan better not die(although I already know what to expect ^-^')KionaKina on January 26, 2008, 12:03:58 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 27)
It's like "Kay dies. The end."I think you all would hunt me down and kill me
Moon_Princess on January 25, 2008, 12:04:11 PM
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~!KAY-CHANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN~!!!!!! DON'T DIEEEE!! >_< *sob*
Stupid Marik! *kicks him off the blimp* JERK! >.<
You wrote this chapter out very well! Awesome duel!
Please update soon, okies? TT.TT
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on January 26, 2008, 12:03:21 AM
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I shall ^_^ And thnak youYes, Marik needs to...wait, they're not on the blimp. They is on the duel tower because it's that aweosme ^_^
Well, either way, he is throw off a high place
Moon_Princess on January 26, 2008, 4:06:00 AM
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O.O *slaps forehead* Oops. >.< Sorry I forgot they were on the Duel Tower. X.xEither way, it IS a high place. *sticks tongue out at Marik*
YuckFou on January 24, 2008, 12:10:11 AM
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Not to sound all fussy but I thought "Sunshine and Moonlight" sounds a bit better but w/e.I like it! I just started reading and so far its pretty good. Hopefully will get to more soon. keep it up darlin'.
KionaKina on January 24, 2008, 10:12:33 AM
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Neh! no insulting the ficcie! I don't like that. >_<It's better in my opinion. The old story made Kay to Mary-Sueish. She's more hardcore in this one and it has a more stable plot
Plus no overload of OC characters
animewolflover on January 25, 2008, 12:16:01 PM
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*nods in agreement* Hardcore alright.Julia: Won't be surprised if Kay-Chan hits Joey in the later chapters.
KionaKina on January 26, 2008, 12:02:13 AM
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aw, how'd you know she was gonna do that?animewolflover on January 26, 2008, 12:17:18 AM
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lolYoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:52:40 AM
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Kaiba... *sighs* I give up. I'll just have to be patient for your good side to come out.Yay! Kay-chan met Miho! ^^
KionaKina on January 23, 2008, 10:54:47 AM
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Seto and Kay's feels are VERY slow progress. Kay falls for him first, his feelings are more gradual. He's kinda afraid to fall in love so..there's lot of complications, but it sohuld be fun to read and write
YoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:57:30 AM
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Even though those kind of stories try your patience I love them ^^ Can you imagine thinking back on that? *snickers**imagining scene*
Kay: Remember how we first met?
Seto: *sweatdrop* Yeah... we hated each other for quite a while huh?
*falls over laughing*
Yeah, this'll be worth it ^^
YoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:32:56 AM
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Oh yeah, Kay ROCKS as a duelist! ^^ And Kaiba, you could not crush her easily. You and your big ego... *sigh*KionaKina on January 23, 2008, 10:34:15 AM
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EGOMAN!!! XPYoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:37:31 AM
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PERFECT DESCRIPTION! lolYoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:38:19 AM
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*sees title of next chapter containing "Egoman"* lolYoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:28:11 AM
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Poor Yugi ^^; I hope everything there clears up soon.He he she met Kaiba, and so we begin the Hate part of the Love-Hate he he he
KionaKina on January 23, 2008, 10:29:57 AM
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heck YES!YoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:10:07 AM
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*squeals* I LOVE THE MOKUBA/KAIBA REUNION!!!!!!! THAT'S SO SWEEET!!!! Poor Pegasus *cries*
KionaKina on January 23, 2008, 10:12:37 AM
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he'll be ok, I promiseYoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:18:30 AM
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Yay ^^YoriXYamiForever on January 22, 2008, 12:32:51 PM
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Oooh... love the beginning! ^^ I've never read anything in Duelist Kingdom before. She made Blue Eyes... THIS SHOULD BE KOOL! Joey and Tristan are idiots... -_-0
KionaKina on January 23, 2008, 9:37:51 AM
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yes, yes they are.Duelist Kingdom is pretty good. I finally got all the manga for it. Some parts are better than the hsow,. BUT PEGASUS DIES! I was so friggin sad! i'm glad the show is different at that part
YoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 9:52:03 AM
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O_O PEGASUS DIES?!?! NOOOOO!!!! >_< I LOVE PEGASUS!! He makes me laugh lol, I love his attitude and his deck! ^_^ Even if he does have an obsession with kidnapping people... and... stealing their souls... he still rocks!I didn't know they had a manga for anything farther than season zero! MUST READ IT! ^^
KionaKina on January 23, 2008, 10:12:11 AM
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yuppers. It's good. ^_^And Bakura gouges Pegasus' eye out and I think he dies from bloodloss. It made me sad!
I love him too, that's why he's Kay's uncle.
YoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:17:50 AM
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*listens to the story about Bakura* Excuse me, one moment. *disappears*Yori: *sweatdrop* This can't be good..... Wulf-chan, (me ^^) calm down! It's just a manga! That's what fanfics are for, so you can change things like that!!
*screaming that can be recognized as Yami Bakura's echoes from another room*
Yori: O_O Um... well... That's kool that Pegasus is Kay's uncle! Um... what happened to her parents?
KionaKina on January 23, 2008, 10:31:35 AM
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Dead.Mom and big sister were murdered by her crazy and abusive father. In the old story, he was still alive. In this one he commited suicide. That scar on her forehead is from when he ground a burning cigarette into her forehead.
Dramatic story. Kay's like amother ot her little sister, Adelinda. And Pegasus is like their dad but she's still kind of a loner.
YoriXYamiForever on January 23, 2008, 10:36:39 AM
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SAD!!! T_T Poor Kay... I'M SORRY! That scar thing is really really sad. All my OCs have hard pasts like that (but Kay's is saddest I think *cries*). I think it's actually what makes writing a romance easier, at least for me ^^; all my characters are kind of hiding behind a mask and the only way to get to them is through their past.
Moon_Princess on January 19, 2008, 4:20:50 AM
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YAY! The Blue-Eyes White Dragon is out! x3Eat Marik alive Blue-Eyes! EAT HIM!
Lol.
Great chappie! ^-^ I can't WAIT for the next one! *hops up an down* Update REAL soon! x3
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on January 19, 2008, 6:06:04 AM
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I will trySnowKitty on January 18, 2008, 11:12:14 PM
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Hooray for the Blue Eyes! This is an awesome duel so far! Good luck with the next one! ^-^KionaKina on January 19, 2008, 6:05:46 AM
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thank you, Ki-kiQuickCookie on January 18, 2008, 12:48:09 PM
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Yes! I loved this chapter! Kiaba is going want that card so bad! Great job, now work on the next chapter so that you can update soon!KionaKina on January 19, 2008, 6:05:32 AM
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no, he's not. He's just gonna be like "WHAT THE HELL?!"QuickCookie on January 20, 2008, 2:13:59 PM
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Oh. I thought that he would because of the whole "Only I can own all the Blue Eyes White Dragons so that they can't be used aginst me ect..."TaisyXPegasus on January 15, 2008, 1:16:59 AM
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Common,Kay!!!!Â
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KionaKina on January 15, 2008, 11:29:46 AM
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yuppersAlleyCat17 on January 14, 2008, 11:30:00 AM
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sweet chapter kay and i can't wait to see your dule with marik.so update soon ok.KionaKina on January 15, 2008, 11:29:32 AM
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I shallSnowKitty on January 13, 2008, 5:10:27 AM
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Yeah, manipulation is oh, so awesome! I'm happy for you. You finally get to start typing out your duel with Marik, the laughaholic. Good luck! ^-^KionaKina on January 13, 2008, 5:12:09 AM
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thank you Ki-Ki! I just can't wait!!!Moon_Princess on January 13, 2008, 4:32:40 AM
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Sweet chap! Can't wait to see how Kay's duel with Marik turns out! x3
Update REEEEALLLLLLLYYYY soon, okies?! ^-^!
I'm looking forward to it!
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on January 13, 2008, 4:36:26 AM
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I'[m looking forward to writing it!! ^_^ ...but you all might hate me for a part of it... O_o;SnowKitty on January 11, 2008, 11:13:46 PM
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That was a funny chappie! I loved the potato song and the sexist parts! I still don't understand where 'artichoke head' came from. . . . . . . Anyhoo, great chappie! ^-^KionaKina on January 12, 2008, 12:41:15 AM
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I know, I know. I have seen artichokes...they're weird looking O_o;Moon_Princess on January 11, 2008, 12:44:50 PM
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YAY! Another update! ^_^ *cheers*That was great! :D You're ahead of me. XD
Lol, everyone loves to laugh at Jounouchi. XD
"THAT IS JUST SEXIST, BUB! I might not be a girly-girl, BUT I AM NOT A MAN! I could prove that but I don't believe in public stripping."
That part made me laugh SO HARD! LOL! Kay's such a funny character. XD
Update Real soon, kk? ^-^
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on January 12, 2008, 12:40:47 AM
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That line's from me, actually. Sometimes my friends joke around and occasionally Nick will flip words almost to question my sexuality and I say lines along those lines, especially the part about not believing in public stripping.Yeah, good times. ^^ Anyho, thanks for your comment!
TaisyXPegasus on January 4, 2008, 8:01:12 PM
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Great chappie once again!KionaKina on January 5, 2008, 3:03:35 AM
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ty!TaisyXPegasus on January 4, 2008, 7:59:57 PM
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OMG...Poore Kay...KionaKina on January 5, 2008, 3:03:17 AM
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yeah...but it's ok, she's a trooper!TaisyXPegasus on January 4, 2008, 7:57:59 PM
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Gauldoth:Let the romance begin!KionaKina on January 5, 2008, 3:02:53 AM
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...sure, let's go with that!TaisyXPegasus on January 4, 2008, 7:56:03 PM
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Taisy:I should be proud of Adrian...He teched me to duel to five starts.Pegasus:Go,Kay!I'm so proud of you!
Taisy:You are the best!Because 've got that rate thanx to my spells and magick I use on the battle field.
Me:Well,nobody could do that,do you know?
Taisy:Yeah,but it's like cheating
Pegasus:Forget it,Tais,you know,that nothing could stop you.
Taisy:You got the point...
KionaKina on January 5, 2008, 3:02:26 AM
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thank you!!!TaisyXPegasus on January 4, 2008, 7:47:03 PM
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wow...Miho and Bakura are dating...Great!Â
Kaiba...Grr,evil.=(((( Kay,go!Hit the bastard!!!!!!!
KionaKina on January 5, 2008, 3:02:00 AM
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yesh, she is so muck more spunkyTaisyXPegasus on January 4, 2008, 12:23:33 AM
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Cool chappie!=))))Great story!KionaKina on January 4, 2008, 10:54:21 AM
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WHOO-HOO!TaisyXPegasus on January 4, 2008, 12:21:56 AM
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Cool chapter!KionaKina on January 4, 2008, 10:53:36 AM
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thank you very muchTaisyXPegasus on January 4, 2008, 12:20:37 AM
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Cool beginning!Great!KionaKina on January 4, 2008, 10:52:42 AM
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thanks ^_^KionaKina on January 4, 2008, 10:52:40 AM
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thanks ^_^QuickCookie on December 31, 2007, 4:09:57 PM
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Yay! Thank you for updating! Great job on this chatper, I can't wait for Kay and Kaiba's duel. Can't wait for the next chapter so hurry and update!KionaKina on January 1, 2008, 9:20:26 AM
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hmm...no, no spoilers. Not spoiling naything!Thnaks for commenting ^_^
AlleyCat17 on December 31, 2007, 6:05:36 AM
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sweet chapter kay.KionaKina on December 31, 2007, 12:09:56 PM
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thank ya!KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 4:37:00 AM
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Great job Kay-chan. This was a great chapter. ^^ I think Adelinda and Mokuba make a cute couple and I noticed just a titch of Ryuuza fluff. ^^ Great job!!KionaKina on December 31, 2007, 12:09:41 PM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 23)
uh-huh, I needed some Ryuuza fluffKelekiahGaladrian on January 1, 2008, 6:50:26 AM
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^^ Luvs the Ryuuza fluff. I think the world needs a little bit more of that, but I suppose we have to be patient. ^^SnowKitty on December 31, 2007, 4:03:54 AM
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Yay for the update! Great job! ^-^KionaKina on December 31, 2007, 12:09:22 PM
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thankies!Moon_Princess on December 31, 2007, 8:19:27 AM
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Yay! ^_^ Finally another chappie! ^.^I'm guessing this is where the virtual world comes in, right?
I can't wait! :3
Please update soon Kay-chan! ^_^
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on December 31, 2007, 12:09:05 PM
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actually, no. I'm skipping that part becuase I don't have those episodes on DVD and I don't like the quality of the online episodes.So we will ignore Noah's arc
Moon_Princess on January 1, 2008, 4:44:02 AM
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Oooh, okies. :DI still can't wait till the next update! ^^
~Moon_Princess
QuickCookie on December 20, 2007, 2:02:14 PM
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YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!!! I love Kay in this story, and I can't wait to see everyone's reaction when she uses her Blue Eyes. Great job on this chapter! NOW HURRY AND UPDATE!!!KionaKina on December 21, 2007, 8:25:52 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 22)
Aww, thank you. I'm glad you like it. I'll try and at least start updating tonightKelekiahGaladrian on December 19, 2007, 7:16:59 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 22)
Whoa, that was intense. I don't know how you can write your chapters so long. But that was good anyway. Great job! ^^ YAY! MAI'S DUEL IS FINALLY OVER!! I'm saying that because that duel was intense. ^^KionaKina on December 19, 2007, 10:04:39 AM
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hee hee, I'm glad you liked it ^_^SnowKitty on December 15, 2007, 10:29:00 PM
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Yeah, once again, I just have to point out that Yami Marik is a PSYCHO THAT LAUGHS WAY TOO MUCH!!! The chappie was awesome Kay-chan! ^-^KionaKina on December 16, 2007, 2:07:41 AM
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Exactly! I was thinking to myself "Ki-Ki will totally agree to the laughter thing" so...chya!Moon_Princess on December 15, 2007, 12:17:20 PM
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Awwwwwww! Poor Mai~~!!! D:And poor Yami-kun got hit bu Ra! GuH! D:
Nah, Cat sounded fine. ^^
GREAT chappie! I LOVED it! :D I can't wait to read more, Kay-chan! ^-^
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on December 16, 2007, 2:07:08 AM
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YAY!!!!animecrazyfan on December 11, 2007, 12:28:26 AM
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can you tell nme what chapter I last comentedon 0_0animecrazyfan on December 11, 2007, 12:28:49 AM
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commented on*KionaKina on December 11, 2007, 8:51:39 AM
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O_O 14...Wow...
KelekiahGaladrian on December 1, 2007, 2:19:37 AM
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MAI!!! NO!!! *cries* DON'T LOSE IT!! HOLD ON!!Great job Kay-chan... this is a long duel....
KionaKina on December 1, 2007, 2:25:41 AM
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Yeah, but it's one of the coolest ones. All the duels with Yami Marik are long but exciting. Wait til KAY'S next duel comes up. It'll probably be long, but I plan on making it excitingKelekiahGaladrian on December 6, 2007, 6:57:19 AM
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Yeah... that's true.... YAY!! KAY-CHAN'S DUEL!!! I CAN'T WAIT!!! ^^SnowKitty on December 1, 2007, 1:07:21 AM
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Yeah, I've got one word for Yami Marik. Therapy. He seriously needs therapy! Great job, as usual, Kay-chan! ^^KionaKina on December 1, 2007, 2:24:44 AM
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YES! Therapy is the magic wordThanks for commenting, Ki-Ki *Hugs*
Moon_Princess on November 30, 2007, 1:44:16 PM
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Whaaa! Poor Mai! TT_TTAck, brain oozing out of your ears...*shutters* NOT a pretty sight...>_<;
Great job! I can't wait until the next chappie, Kay-chan! ^^
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on December 1, 2007, 2:24:13 AM
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Thats what the manga said. I agree...mega gross concept
AnimeAngel87 on November 30, 2007, 11:35:57 AM
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MAI!!! U can Do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Geez it's an Illusion!
Not really! Kasumi chopped his head off!!!!
KionaKina on November 30, 2007, 11:37:32 AM
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um, it's kinda not done yetAnimeAngel87 on November 30, 2007, 12:04:33 PM
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O.O Thats EmbarassingKionaKina on November 30, 2007, 12:06:00 PM
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eh, I accidently hit submit and I meant to hit another button fro something else. My faultAnimeAngel87 on November 22, 2007, 11:47:02 AM
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OMG MAI!!!!BELIEVE IN j00SELF!!!!!!!!!
KionaKina on November 22, 2007, 11:50:13 AM
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YEAH!!!!!AnimeAngel87 on November 22, 2007, 11:46:30 AM
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MORE FLASHBACKS AND PAST THINGYS!!!!!!!KionaKina on November 22, 2007, 11:49:57 AM
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lol, indeedPandaChan21 on November 20, 2007, 5:30:39 PM
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Tori: *freaks*Kay: Calm down, it's only a story...
Tori: *still freaks*
KionaKina on November 20, 2007, 11:21:40 PM
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Kay: ~Sigh~(Thanks for commenting)
Moon_Princess on November 20, 2007, 10:34:58 AM
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AHH! Poor Mai! O.OYOU CAN DO IT! >.<;
Great chappie! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on November 20, 2007, 11:21:21 PM
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Thanks Catty Catty.I wish had won...but the show is too sexist to let the woman win. JK. The villain HAS to last until the final round, am I right?
SnowKitty on November 19, 2007, 9:15:14 PM
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I'm glad that you didn't forget about this duel! You describe it pretty darn well. Anyhoo, I'm glad that you've updated! Can't wait for the next part of the duel! ^^KionaKina on November 20, 2007, 9:11:52 AM
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Aww, thanks Ki-Ki *Hugs*KelekiahGaladrian on November 19, 2007, 7:35:41 AM
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That's awesome Kay-chan! I personally prefer the dubbed show, but you can do what you want. This was actually a little darker than what I'd thought it'd be, but it's still cool. ^^ AWESOME!KionaKina on November 20, 2007, 9:11:33 AM
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But darkness is awesome...KelekiahGaladrian on November 26, 2007, 7:25:17 AM
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Of course it is! It's just darker than I thought it'd be. *shrugs* IT'S STILL AWESOME THOUGH! AS IS WONDERFUL DARKNESS!YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 7:06:44 AM
YamiRevea on (Chapter: 20)
You have the coolest Duel Scenes!!!!!!!!! I JUST LOVE IT!! AWESOME CHAPTER!! I can't wait for your next UPDATE!KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 7:16:43 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 20)
thank you!YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:16:03 AM
YamiRevea on (Chapter: 19)
Evanesscence!!! LUV THAT BAND!!!! >.< Loved this Chappie as ALWAYS!! And now, I have to wait again...-_- awwwwww....KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 5:09:35 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 19)
GAH! I am so mad! I just wrote my update AND THE DAMN THING LOST IT!!!!!!YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 5:38:46 AM
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WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 6:39:19 AM
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yeah, I had to rewrite it. But it's longer now and a bit better so whateverYamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:14:04 AM
YamiRevea on (Chapter: 18)
Shadi.... and Marik....*shudders* Heh ^^;; LOVED THIS CHAPPIE!!!KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 5:09:02 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 18)
tyYamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:12:29 AM
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Hee, the real Marik's been revealed! YAY!!!! >.< CLIFFY! But the next one is here...hehe *Dashes to it*KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 4:13:15 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 17)
Yup!YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:11:14 AM
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MARIK VS KAY!! AWESOME!! >.< Do well Kay-chan!!!KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 4:13:04 AM
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She shallYamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:10:11 AM
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'KURA!!!!!!!!!!!! >.< Your evil you know that Bakura?Bakura: >.> and your point iiiis??
<.< pfft, jerk...GREAT CHAPPIE KAY-CHAN!!
KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 4:12:45 AM
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lol, thanksYes, he's evil
YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:08:03 AM
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Lol!! Ishizu's not there..HAHAHA LOL!!! *Snickers at Ishizu* ehehe...Kay's better than you XD FINALS!!!! >.<KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 4:12:19 AM
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She actually will pop in, just not as a duelistYamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:06:21 AM
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Love, Looovee, LOOOOVVVEEE THIS STORY!! IT'S SOOO GOOD!!!KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 4:11:49 AM
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haha, is it really? Well thanks sis ^_^YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:05:20 AM
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*Glomps* AWESOME!!!!!! But a little short...well, eitherway...I'm off to then NEXT ONE!! *Glomps*KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 4:11:22 AM
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*Glomps back*YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:04:15 AM
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I've been reading this for quite sometime now ^^;; I just forget to review! LOL!!Kay and Kaiba's...really annoyed at each other huh? hee..NEXT ONE!!
KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 4:05:23 AM
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oh yesMy story is a love-hate and it's SO fun to write ^_^
YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:02:35 AM
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YAAAAAYYYYY!! Coolie!!!!!!!! NEXT ONE, NEXT ONE!!!!KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 4:03:23 AM
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Indeed!YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 4:01:31 AM
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I HATE those RARE HUNTERS!!! >.< Poor Ryou...;__; heh, GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS!KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 4:03:09 AM
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thank you very much!YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 3:59:17 AM
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NOO!! Kay-chan!! CLIFFY!! >.< Big Sis Cat was introduced!!!! YAY!!!!!!! >.< COOLIE!!
KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 3:59:50 AM
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Yes!YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 3:56:54 AM
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Cool new characters!! ^^ YAY!The tournament's finally starting!!!! CAN'T WAIT!!
KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 3:58:57 AM
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YES!YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 3:54:41 AM
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Reshea: Black Cat!!! Love the nickname, COOL! Kay-chan's a champion!! can you teach me sometime? Stupid Rare hunters, BUT YOU WON!! YOUR SO COOL BIG SIS!!
KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 3:56:48 AM
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lol, thank you very mcuh ^_^ *hugs*YamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 3:51:16 AM
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Serves that bastard Seto...Ha! O_O; Ryou and Miho are...d-dating?? Lol...I can't belive it ^^;; ehehehe... I should run. Great chappie!
KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 3:54:51 AM
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that was from the original undubbed Yugioh. They break up by the end of Battle CityYamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 3:47:50 AM
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YAY!! Great Job Kay!! *looks at Hirutani* don't mess with her...GREAT CHAPPIE!!KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 3:54:22 AM
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*Bows* Thank youYamiRevea on November 19, 2007, 3:45:24 AM
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O_O Wow...Kay-chan's hee, pissed? Lol, Loved this chapter!! >.<KionaKina on November 19, 2007, 3:46:57 AM
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thank you ^_^PandaChan21 on November 12, 2007, 10:43:08 PM
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I still think Ishizu is funny..."please don't kill me..."
Ha, funny (lolz, Kaiba said that...)
KionaKina on November 12, 2007, 10:43:39 PM
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It's only awesome when Kaiba says itKelekiahGaladrian on November 12, 2007, 6:23:16 AM
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YAY! EVANESCENCE!!! I LOVE THAT BAND!! ROCK ON!!! YAY!! PASTS ARE ALWAYS FUN TO LEARN!!! YAY!! Great job Kay-chan!!Kel: ISHIZU!! I HATE YOU!!
Don't even start that. Update as soon as you can Kay-chan!! I loved it!! Your story's progressing faster than mine is. *sigh* I'll get there eventually.
KionaKina on November 12, 2007, 10:42:43 PM
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lol, thanksEVANESCENSE KICKS @$$!!!!!
KelekiahGaladrian on November 13, 2007, 7:49:15 AM
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You're welcome. ^^EVANESCENCE!!! AW YEAH!!!
SnowKitty on November 11, 2007, 9:49:08 PM
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Hooray for the update! Good job! I would type more, but I need to make sure I don't miss my bus, so yeah.KionaKina on November 12, 2007, 3:14:18 AM
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okies. Thanks for commentingMoon_Princess on November 11, 2007, 11:36:16 AM
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YAY! New chappie!!!!!!!! *celebrates* Huzzah! (Sorry, I HAD to barrow your word. ^^) We got to learn more about Kay-chan's and Cat's past! Wheee! x3
*giggles* *sing-song voice* Kay loves Kaiba~ Kay loves Kaibaaaa~!
Hehehe, I haven't used the sing-song voice in forever. :D
Awesome chappie!! X3 I can't wait for the next one!!
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on November 12, 2007, 3:14:06 AM
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lol! I'm always amused when you use that sing-song voice hee heeYes, she loves him...well, sheWILL, now, she do not like him much at all.
KelekiahGaladrian on November 8, 2007, 7:00:34 AM
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Nice job Kay...Kel: SHADI!!!! *chases him around with her Shadow Dagger*
*sweatdrops* Nice job Kay-chan.
Kel: AYEE!!! DIE SHADI DIE!!
Shadi: I'M ALREADY DEAD!!
Kel: I HAVE THE POWER TO KILL YOU AGAIN!!!
Shadi: NOOOOOOOO!!!! *dies*
Kel: HA!! I'VE KILLED HIM! *suddenly disappears*
That's enough from you. Update as soon as you can Kay-chan!
KionaKina on November 8, 2007, 11:17:08 AM
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O_o What's up with you and Shadi??KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 2:07:47 AM
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Shadi bothers me, just like Ishizu. I put up with them, but Kel hates them both. Shadi drives her insane because of his constant bugging her and for other reasons that the public isn't allowed to know yet. ^^KionaKina on November 10, 2007, 3:46:52 AM
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Ah, I see...well, good luck with that ^_^KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 3:49:11 AM
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Yeah....SnowKitty on November 2, 2007, 10:08:50 PM
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Nice chappie, Kay-chan! I agree. He DOES laugh WAY TOO MUCH! I liked the update. Good luck with the next one! ^^KionaKina on November 3, 2007, 3:41:41 AM
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That was a shout-out to ya, Ki-kiMoon_Princess on November 2, 2007, 2:08:42 PM
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YAY! 'NOTHER CHAPPIE! X3BUT AHHH! ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER! @_@ *falls out of chair*
...
Great job! ^-^
OMG! O.O Yami Marik knows about Khephera?! GUH! D: Who knows what else he knowwwssss...*shifts eyes* >_> <_<
Lol, I think I'm hyper. XD
Awesome chappie! ^-^ I can't wait for another one!! X3
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on November 3, 2007, 3:41:27 AM
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Ishizu and Marik and Odion...that's it... *Sweatdrops*AnimeAngel87 on November 2, 2007, 11:44:29 AM
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No he didnt just Step to Kay Usnaps fingers*STAY WITH US ODION!!!!
Nice Chap *thumps up*^_^
KionaKina on November 3, 2007, 3:40:56 AM
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^_^ Arigato!AnimeAngel87 on November 6, 2007, 8:05:52 AM
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*Bows*AnimeAngel87 on October 30, 2007, 11:16:10 PM
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OMG NO CLIFFIE AND EVERYTHING WAS GETTUNG GOOD!!Hey was that italic stuff a flashback?
KionaKina on October 31, 2007, 9:33:41 AM
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no, it was a dreamPandaChan21 on October 30, 2007, 5:11:43 AM
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...My brain just broke...KionaKina on October 30, 2007, 9:48:07 AM
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Aw, I'm sorrySnowKitty on October 29, 2007, 7:55:52 AM
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Don't worry. I enjoyed your updates very much! ^^KionaKina on October 29, 2007, 11:34:30 AM
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That's awesome *Hugs*PandaChan21 on October 29, 2007, 4:36:26 AM
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*still laughing* Can't...breathe...KionaKina on October 29, 2007, 11:34:13 AM
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O_O Hol CRAP!BAKURA! GIVE HER CPR!!! *Pushes him on top of ya*
Bakura: WTF?!
Kay: QUICK! GET THE JAWS OF LIFE!
KelekiahGaladrian on October 29, 2007, 1:39:33 AM
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AYEE!!! KAY AND ODION KNEW EACH OTHER IN THE PAST?!?!?! *faints*Kel: *sweatdrops* Uh... that was awesome Kay-chan. I liked it, except for the cliffie. ^^
KionaKina on October 29, 2007, 4:11:05 AM
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yeah, sorry 'bout that. I was low on time at that pointKelekiahGaladrian on October 29, 2007, 4:12:46 AM
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Kel: That's ok, I understand. ^^Moon_Princess on October 28, 2007, 11:49:53 AM
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WHA! CLIFFHANGER! *falls out of chair* X_x;*jumps back up* UPDATE SOON! X3
AH-HA-HA! WE FINALLY FIGURED OUT WHO THE REAL MARIK IS! Although I already knew. lol. :3
Great job! :D Update real soon! I'm getting more and more into this story with each chappie! ^-^
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on October 28, 2007, 11:52:15 AM
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lol, thank you, Cat ^_^ I'm flattered you like itSnowKitty on October 28, 2007, 10:50:11 AM
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Good chappie! Tell you more about it at school tomorrow.KionaKina on October 28, 2007, 10:51:15 AM
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okies, I am working on another one right now so you have a treat for tomorrowMoon_Princess on October 28, 2007, 7:42:40 AM
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AHHH! GO KAY-CHAAAAAAAAAANNN!!! >.<NEVER GIVE UP! X3
Great job Kay-chan! :3 I can't wait until the next update as always. ^.^ *giddy*
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on October 28, 2007, 7:44:01 AM
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Working on it right now ^_~Moon_Princess on October 28, 2007, 7:48:05 AM
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YAY!!! X3KelekiahGaladrian on October 28, 2007, 7:30:22 AM
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O.O KAY AGAINST MARIK?!?! (wink wink) *faints* Awesome though. HAHA!! ISHIZU IS LEFT OUT!! Sorry, good job though. This story is progressing more than mine is. *sigh* Oh well. I LOVE IT KAY-CHAN!! AND I KNOW SHE'LL WIN!! HEE!!!KionaKina on October 28, 2007, 7:38:29 AM
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lol, it's actually Odion just to make sure we all knowbut thank you, Kel.
SnowKitty on October 28, 2007, 4:19:16 AM
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Geez. . . You and Kaiba are not ones to be messed with, huh? That was funny, though, seeing Jonouchi freak out like that. You've made my day! Great chappie! ^^KionaKina on October 28, 2007, 4:43:35 AM
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Well, I'm happy to have made your day, Ki-Ki. I'm gonna start the next chappie todayKelekiahGaladrian on October 27, 2007, 9:31:09 AM
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Wow, long. But good. ^^ Kel-chan likes. ^^ RYOU!!! NOOO!!!! MY POOR BABY!!! AYEE!!! Kay is so cool; she helped my baby.... YAY!!! I LIKED A LOT KAY-CHAN!!!KionaKina on October 27, 2007, 9:33:18 AM
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lol, I'm flattered you think she's coolAnd Ryou was one of the first friends she made in Domino sooo...ya
KelekiahGaladrian on October 27, 2007, 9:34:57 AM
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You should be flattered; she is cool, and so are you. ^^ RYOU IS AWESOME!!! I'M OBSESSED!!!KionaKina on October 28, 2007, 2:15:31 AM
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I am obsessed with Seto. We understand obsession.Moon_Princess on October 27, 2007, 4:15:40 AM
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Why are you disappointed that it was long?It was GREAT! x3 *dances* Yay yay!
I loved it! ^-^ Great job Kay-chan!
Lol, Kay blushed. *snickers*
Update really soon, okies?! ^.^
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on October 27, 2007, 5:56:16 AM
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I wanna try to update todayAnimeAngel87 on October 27, 2007, 4:34:06 AM
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I isnt mad :DI ish Happy and that chappie was great :D
Moon_Princess on October 27, 2007, 4:35:31 AM
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Oh, no, sorry, I wasn't talking to you. XD ^-^;I was talking to Kay-chan because at the end of the chappie she said she was trying to make it shorter. lol XD
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on October 27, 2007, 5:55:52 AM
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yes, because i wanted ot put Kay's duel in this chapter, but I spent all the time on Yugi's duel so..yeahWell, whatever. So long as the fans and friends are happy ^_^
AnimeAngel87 on October 27, 2007, 4:02:35 AM
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Damn this chap is long took me 10 mins O.oKionaKina on October 27, 2007, 5:54:38 AM
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Yeah, I wanted it to be shorter but I guess that didn't happen ^^;AnimeAngel87 on October 20, 2007, 2:28:05 AM
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Lol Kay thought she was slosing itXD
UPDATE!!!!
KionaKina on October 20, 2007, 2:31:38 AM
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I will try my very bestAnimeAngel87 on October 20, 2007, 2:27:25 AM
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OMG THAT WAS SOO AWEOSME!!!!!!!!!1KionaKina on October 20, 2007, 2:31:22 AM
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thank you ^_^YamiRevea on October 19, 2007, 9:46:10 AM
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COOL!!!!!!"Maybe Kaiba's soul was summoned to heaven." That made me crack a little!! LOL!!!! GREAT CHAP!!
KionaKina on October 19, 2007, 9:50:29 AM
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hee hee, thnaks. I forgot that one for a minuteYamiRevea on October 19, 2007, 9:44:31 AM
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SUCH A COOL START!!!! YAY!!!!! >.<KionaKina on October 19, 2007, 9:49:45 AM
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I'm happy you like it ^_^AnimeAngel87 on October 17, 2007, 9:45:17 AM
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This chappie is incredibly shortXD
KionaKina on October 17, 2007, 11:28:46 AM
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heh, yeahAnimeAngel87 on October 17, 2007, 9:44:34 AM
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Damn i missed alotKionaKina on October 17, 2007, 11:28:34 AM
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s'okanimecrazyfan on October 15, 2007, 2:27:11 AM
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you didn't mintion ishizo? but hey! who cares? the scene of mokie blushing almost made me forget all about it! SO ADORABLE! XD x////xKionaKina on October 15, 2007, 11:37:48 AM
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yeah, I dropped her on purpse to help match-ups. Originally, Cat and I were both in the finals, but I didn't want either of us to actually lose and I'm shutting up before I spoil something major *Shifts eyes*PandaChan21 on October 14, 2007, 11:21:10 PM
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I'm finally there...Gosh, took ya long enough!KionaKina on October 15, 2007, 11:36:54 AM
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yeah, keep complaining and I'll rip ya from the storyjk
PandaChan21 on October 15, 2007, 11:23:27 PM
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Gasp! You wouldn't do that...would you?KionaKina on October 16, 2007, 4:16:08 AM
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...I don't know...SnowKitty on October 14, 2007, 9:46:23 PM
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Yay! Update! Finally, I come into the story! Great chappie!!! XDKionaKina on October 15, 2007, 11:36:26 AM
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I'm happy you're happy, Ki-kiMoon_Princess on October 14, 2007, 9:24:49 AM
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YAAAYYY! AWESOME CHAPPIE! X3Lol, "BINGO!" XD
This chappie rocks! XD
*snickers* Kay thought she was losing her mind. Lol
I loved this chappie muchly! I can't wait for the next one! x3
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on October 14, 2007, 10:48:03 AM
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I'm happy to hear that ^_^KelekiahGaladrian on October 14, 2007, 8:47:55 AM
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Kel: HA!!! ISHIZU WAS LEFT OUT! REPLACED BY WONDERFUL KAY-CHAN!! (sorry, I don't like Ishizu very much, but I won't bash her, honest) That was awesome! I'm gonna have issues with that part in my story, when I get to it.... Nice job Kay-chan! (hope you don't mind me calling you that)KionaKina on October 14, 2007, 10:47:46 AM
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I prefer being called Kay-chan so don't feel uncomfortable, KelAnd heh, glad you liked it.
The duel match-ups are gonna be a bit different from the show ^_^ you'll see later
KelekiahGaladrian on October 14, 2007, 10:52:10 AM
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Kel: Ooh, can't wait. ^^SnowKitty on October 13, 2007, 11:07:46 PM
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Oh boy! I can't wait for the finals, either! You made some amazing updates, Kay-chan! ^^KionaKina on October 14, 2007, 12:44:25 AM
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I am so flattered. And guess what, I started th enext chappie and oyu and Tori pop inSnowKitty on October 14, 2007, 5:57:50 AM
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Awesome! XDKelekiahGaladrian on October 13, 2007, 6:47:42 AM
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Kel: *gives you thumbs up and cookies* AWESOME!! I would've reviewed this last night, but my mom kicked me off the comp. Nice job!KionaKina on October 13, 2007, 8:11:18 AM
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I know that feeling. ^-^; Glad ya like itPandaChan21 on October 13, 2007, 4:50:32 AM
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Kay...is an ANGEL! Kiba deserved it...KionaKina on October 13, 2007, 8:11:01 AM
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Ummm... *not 100% sure what you mean8 Thank...you, Tori? ^^;;Moon_Princess on October 12, 2007, 2:36:19 PM
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YAY! That was AWESOME! x3 *dances* LolI can't wait till the next chappie, sis! ^-^ I love this story so far! :3
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on October 13, 2007, 12:41:07 AM
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I'm very happy to hear that!Moon_Princess on October 12, 2007, 2:29:59 PM
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YAY! You updated! ^-^ I couldn't wait! Great job! :3 *glomps you* It's awesome. x3
I'm gonna read the next chappie! ^.^ *skips off*
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on October 13, 2007, 12:40:51 AM
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YAYNESS!KelekiahGaladrian on October 12, 2007, 10:57:26 AM
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Kel: YAY! I'VE BEEN READING THIS STORY FOR A WHILE AND I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS PART! AWESOME!KionaKina on October 12, 2007, 10:58:32 AM
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Heh, I'm writing another update now ^_^KelekiahGaladrian on October 12, 2007, 11:14:55 AM
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Kel: SWEET!AnimeAngel87 on September 24, 2007, 7:55:34 AM
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x] Typo?Kay looked to see Mokuba, Anzu, and Mokuba also there.
KionaKina on September 24, 2007, 11:29:00 AM
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eh, probably/ But I'm too much of a lazy bum to fix it.AnimeAngel87 on September 24, 2007, 9:53:38 PM
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I Just notcied it too. I was commenting on the chappies and they nvr shownD:
animecrazyfan on September 9, 2007, 2:12:27 AM
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yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!update soon this time!
and please.. the show had 4 episode for this duel.. don't make it 4 chapters! I don't like long duels x_x
KionaKina on September 9, 2007, 2:18:14 AM
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I dunno what I'll do, we'll have to see.And I can pretty much only get myself to update on Fridays because school keeps me busy.
I'll try to cut out chunks of the duel. It'll probably be shorter because I am NOT adding in those annoying flashbacks
SnowKitty on September 8, 2007, 9:12:08 AM
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You have very funny comments to what the guys say. It is hilarious! When will I show up, by the way? Good chappie!KionaKina on September 9, 2007, 2:01:54 AM
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Wither next chappie, you pop in with Mai and them, or in the finalsSnowKitty on September 10, 2007, 9:44:10 AM
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Cool!Moon_Princess on September 7, 2007, 3:25:09 PM
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YAY! A new chappie! *cries from happies* It was awesome! ^.^ As usual.
Kay-chan and Kaiba got into another fight. o.o
I dunno if I should call it "bonding" or what. '_'; It was pretty intense.
Anywho...*ahem* UPDATE SOON! X3 *falls out of chair from excitement*
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on September 8, 2007, 3:59:49 AM
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O_O *Helps you up* I shall ^_^SnowKitty on September 1, 2007, 12:23:34 AM
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Yeah, flashbacks are a bit annoying, aren't they? Great update! I love that tooth fairy line, too. Kaiba is SO funny with his sarcasm! Can't wait for the next update! ^^KionaKina on September 1, 2007, 8:49:43 AM
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EXACTLY! All hail teh sarcasmanimecrazyfan on August 31, 2007, 2:04:13 PM
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yay!!good chappie!
continue soon this time!
KionaKina on September 1, 2007, 8:49:26 AM
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I'm gonna try to start updating tomorrow. The next chapter is gonna be SO long -_-Moon_Princess on August 31, 2007, 12:23:13 PM
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WHEEEE!!!! X3 Yay! Another chappie! :D Okay, I feel a little better. ^-^ I couldn't wait to read what was next.*snickers* Tooth fairy....pfft...XD
But I'm still excited about the next chappies!! Update soon, okies?? :3
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on August 31, 2007, 12:31:32 PM
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I'll try to ^^animecrazyfan on August 31, 2007, 9:54:18 AM
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CONTINUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEE!KionaKina on August 31, 2007, 9:56:53 AM
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um, I'm actually writing an update right nowSnowKitty on August 25, 2007, 12:09:31 PM
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Whoa, this is getting dangerous now! Thank goodness that Kay, Cat, Adelina, and Mokuba were able to get out of there! Great chappie!KionaKina on August 25, 2007, 12:10:33 PM
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thank you ^^ don't fret, you'll pop in soon enough with ToriSnowKitty on August 26, 2007, 8:58:06 AM
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Awesome!SnowKitty on August 25, 2007, 11:47:47 AM
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NOOOO!!! KAY-CHAN!!! Please let her be saved!KionaKina on August 25, 2007, 11:51:21 AM
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okie,s relax Ki-chan. Next chappie shows it allSnowKitty on August 25, 2007, 11:40:42 AM
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This was a very neat chappie! I'm happy the tournament is finally starting!KionaKina on August 25, 2007, 11:43:00 AM
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indeed it is. ^^SnowKitty on August 25, 2007, 11:31:45 AM
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Nice chappie. Once again, nothing special to say.KionaKina on August 25, 2007, 11:33:10 AM
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lol, that's fine ^^SnowKitty on August 25, 2007, 11:22:51 AM
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Haha! Kay ROCKS! Kaiba SO deserved that slap! Great chappie!KionaKina on August 25, 2007, 11:23:42 AM
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YES! she does rock!SnowKitty on August 22, 2007, 8:32:35 AM
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Wow, that was a cool chappie! Kay is awesome! ^^KionaKina on August 22, 2007, 8:33:46 AM
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YESH!!! She is always awesomeSnowKitty on August 19, 2007, 9:49:46 AM
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Good chappie. Sorry. Nothing much to say once again.KionaKina on August 19, 2007, 9:52:37 AM
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lol, ok that's coolanimecrazyfan on August 19, 2007, 9:09:00 AM
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!When will the love begin >.<
I WANT LOVE!
wait..that sounded weird ^^"
KionaKina on August 19, 2007, 9:10:12 AM
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I don't know when the love will begin, to be honest. Maybe around the KC Grand Prixanimecrazyfan on August 19, 2007, 5:24:18 PM
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ok, then I'll have to wait..I HATE WAITING! >.<
KionaKina on August 20, 2007, 1:48:34 AM
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O_O Sa-chan, take a deeeeeeep breath. *Pats your shoulder*I'll probably write another Ryuuzaship oneshot soon
animecrazyfan on August 20, 2007, 6:25:07 AM
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ok ^^NAERA on August 19, 2007, 7:32:58 AM
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KionaKina on August 19, 2007, 8:09:23 AM
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Well, there's a problem, I'm not featuring Waking the Dragons in my fic and I don't know much about Valon.And last story I had too many OCs and their pairing and I could hardly work with em so I'm trying to control it this time.
But if I decide to pop Valon in, I will probably feature Candyshipping
NAERA on August 19, 2007, 8:13:32 AM
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KionaKina on August 19, 2007, 8:16:18 AM
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~GASP~ Really?! 8Sniffle* I'm touchedMoon_Princess on August 19, 2007, 6:16:51 AM
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Yay! Another really awesome chappie!*shakes a fist at the rare hunters* You CREEPS! >_<
Lol, I remember some of this from our RP. ^_^
This is getting better and better! I can't wait until the next chapter! See? *points to twitching eye* XD
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on August 19, 2007, 6:18:32 AM
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lol, you dork. JK! ^^Moon_Princess on August 19, 2007, 6:23:01 AM
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XDanimecrazyfan on August 19, 2007, 2:26:35 AM
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SETO GO TO HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!don't do that Kay T_T
no more clifhangers pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!
KionaKina on August 19, 2007, 4:03:03 AM
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O_O Breathe! BREATHE!Yes, I'm an evil author. I have so many cliffhangers that the deat hthreats people give me are ridiculous, of course I laugh it off
animecrazyfan on August 19, 2007, 8:31:14 AM
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sure ^^hehe,sorry.
it's just nicer to end a chapter in peace T_T
biut it's more exciting that way!
KionaKina on August 19, 2007, 8:32:17 AM
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And it helps you anticipate the update even more!!!animecrazyfan on August 19, 2007, 5:25:50 PM
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yeah lol!Moon_Princess on August 17, 2007, 10:35:39 AM
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AHHH! CLIFFHANGER! X_X *hangs from a cliff*XD
Yay! Cat was introduced! :3 *throws confetti and gives you a cookie...cuz I can. XD*
I hope Kay-chan will be alright! X_X; Please update soon! Okies?? ^-^ *eye twitches* o.o;
XD
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on August 17, 2007, 11:43:39 AM
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don't worry, I won't kill off my own OC, that'd be horribleMoon_Princess on August 17, 2007, 12:34:35 PM
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That WOULD be. O.O~Moon_Princess
cutie88 on August 15, 2007, 10:42:27 AM
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Wow thats a great story^^KionaKina on August 15, 2007, 10:48:13 AM
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thanks ^^Moon_Princess on August 15, 2007, 6:01:13 AM
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Yay! Alex-chan and Adelinda-chan are here now!! ^-^ Yesh! Let the tournament BEGIN! X3 *slaps hand against desk* O.O! Ow, ow, ow, ow! >.<;;
And of course you know what I'm gonna say next. *ahem* Update soon! ^-^ *wants to know what happens next*
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on August 15, 2007, 6:02:26 AM
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Hey, that's my line! >.<lol, jk.
animecrazyfan on August 15, 2007, 5:18:41 AM
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LET IT BEGIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nice chappie ^^
lookin forward for the next..
and yeah!
first comment ^^
KionaKina on August 15, 2007, 5:27:53 AM
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YAY SA-CHAN!!! ^^animecrazyfan on August 14, 2007, 10:15:49 PM
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NICE ONE!*thums up*
KionaKina on August 15, 2007, 2:03:58 AM
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Thank you, Sa-chan ^^ *Hugs*Moon_Princess on August 14, 2007, 9:08:07 AM
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Yay! Another great chappie! ^.^ *dances*And once again you were able to write out a duel! Once again, something I can't do! XD;
*claps hands together* This is neat! You following the Yugioh storyline with Kay! It's awesome! ^-^ Update soon, okies sis? :3
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on August 14, 2007, 9:09:16 AM
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I shall ^^animecrazyfan on August 13, 2007, 7:16:27 AM
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YES!!she smacked him!!!
sometimes he gets on my nerves I just want to do that!
KionaKina on August 13, 2007, 7:20:41 AM
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HECK YEAH! *High fives* you go girl!animecrazyfan on August 14, 2007, 7:40:03 AM
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YEAH!Moon_Princess on August 13, 2007, 6:06:40 AM
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Woooowwww! Hard feelings left and right. O.O *can feel the eeriness in the room* '__';
But never-the-less yay! Kay finally was able to make a friend and Battle City is on! ^-^
I look forward to what's happening next! Update soon, okies? ^-^!
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on August 13, 2007, 6:43:21 AM
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I shallanimecrazyfan on August 12, 2007, 6:38:36 AM
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amazing chappie ^^I can't dicribe a duel like you ^^"
KionaKina on August 12, 2007, 10:16:32 AM
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uhhh really? ...actually, all I wrote wa "She/he drew a card" then I looked through my cards and wrote one down. ^^'animecrazyfan on August 12, 2007, 10:35:21 AM
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well, at least you memorize the card names x_XKionaKina on August 12, 2007, 10:36:36 AM
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No I didn't, I just looked at the actual card. Silly. ^^I don't know THAT many cards...if I did...obsession has a new meaning. O_O
animecrazyfan on August 12, 2007, 10:43:56 AM
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lol, ok then ^^Moon_Princess on August 12, 2007, 5:10:25 AM
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Yay for Kay-chan!! ^-^ *throws confetti*Wow! You wrote out a whole duel! Amazing! Something I can't do. X.X
Great job! ^^ Update soon, okies? :3
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on August 12, 2007, 5:13:18 AM
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Yeah, I almost stopped halfway, but I like "NO! ,ust keep going...MUST KEEP GOING!"animecrazyfan on August 11, 2007, 6:44:32 AM
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Kay is so freggin cool!!!wooooooooooooooooooow!!
KionaKina on August 11, 2007, 6:47:16 AM
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*Bows* Thank you, thank you very muchMoon_Princess on August 11, 2007, 5:35:53 AM
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Whoa! It's true, Kay's completely different then the other stories. But it's going good so far. She's kinda like me in school. XDI get kinda grumpy at school and I don't want to talk to many people. o.0
Lol, anyways, I loved the chappie! ^^ It was awesome as usual! ^-^ I look forward to the next chappie! :D
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on August 11, 2007, 5:40:02 AM
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I'm glad you like it, Cat-chananimecrazyfan on August 9, 2007, 8:10:26 PM
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wow cooly ^^KionaKina on August 10, 2007, 12:25:10 AM
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thankiesanimecrazyfan on August 9, 2007, 7:59:26 PM
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emmm, I really don't get it, this story is so diffrentfirst, your father is suppossed to be alive.
Alsoyour sis is supposed to be kidnapped.
Is this another story?
I don't get it. the other story, is is from this one, I mean, will happen afterwords ?
KionaKina on August 10, 2007, 12:24:58 AM
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This is a completely different and seperate series all its own.Adelinda is not kidnapped in this one an dKay's father is dead this time. I wanted to try something that focused more on the real plot of Yugioh and less on the story of my OC's life alone
animecrazyfan on August 10, 2007, 6:20:57 AM
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oh, I ot it ^^animecrazyfan on August 10, 2007, 6:21:11 AM
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got itMoon_Princess on August 8, 2007, 8:56:55 AM
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Yay! Awesome chapter! ^^This is going really good so far! I love it! ^^ Update soon, okies?
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on August 9, 2007, 4:50:47 AM
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*Nods* I shall ^^ I'm glad oyu like it so far
AnimeAngel87 on August 5, 2007, 4:18:54 AM
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CoolsnKionaKina on August 5, 2007, 4:32:05 AM
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thanks ^^SnowKitty on August 3, 2007, 3:46:20 AM
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Funny letter. Pervy boys. Good chappie. . . . . . . . Sorry I'm not using exclamation points. I just feel really tired right now.KionaKina on August 3, 2007, 4:30:14 AM
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lol, that's coolMoon_Princess on July 31, 2007, 12:05:49 PM
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Yay! Awesome chappie!Lol..."throw me a bone"...*giggles* Reminds me of a fairly odd parents episode I once saw...^^
I love this story so far! ^^ *favs*
And I'm sure it's gonna get better and better! :D
Update soon, m'kay? (Not to rush you or anything. Hehehe. ^^;)
~Moon_Princess
KionaKina on July 31, 2007, 12:07:01 PM
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I wanna try to finish the other series, but I had inspiration for this one so POP, all hail my chappieMoon_Princess on July 31, 2007, 12:09:05 PM
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Yesh! *makes people hail your chappie*AnimeAngel87 on July 31, 2007, 8:03:07 AM
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kay!ty
=D
AnimeAngel87 on July 31, 2007, 7:57:20 AM
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idk u choose lol i just wanna help this seems cool 2 read=D
KionaKina on July 31, 2007, 8:01:41 AM
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hm....well, if I can think of anything or if I get a block, I'll drop you a comment ^^AnimeAngel87 on July 31, 2007, 7:49:37 AM
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Heya can i help?KionaKina on July 31, 2007, 7:52:04 AM
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um, how would you like to help?
Hakura: Nobody staying by her? * crosses her arms in front of her chest* How inconsiderate... They may have a friend dueling Seto, but I think at least SOMEONE should be by Kay.... * sighs* I'll go... * walks into the room and pulls up a chair sitting by Kay* Oh boy... Marik really IS dangerous..... That was a close call too....
Alright alright.. You're by Kay now just talk to her and not yourself... UPDATE PLEASE!!! I wanna know what happens!!!!
Hakura