Control
Submitted July 16, 2008 Updated September 19, 2010 Status Incomplete | neh. A basic fight between Condemned and Eclipse for control over Eclipse's body. Sometimes it would go too far... More stories are to be added!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Control
Submitted: July 16, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 794 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 114
Chapter 2 - Interrogation
Submitted: August 4, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 919 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 137
Chapter 3 - Eclipse's Death
Submitted: August 5, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
Word count: 1159 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 110
Chapter 4 - When True Evil Was Born
Submitted: August 13, 2008 • Updated: August 15, 2008
Word count: 871 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 155
Chapter 5 - Evil Eclipse and his Inner Turmoil
Submitted: August 15, 2008 • Updated: August 15, 2008
Word count: 691 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 111
Chapter 6 - Questions and a Lack of Sleep
Submitted: August 30, 2008 • Updated: September 3, 2008
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Chapter 7 - Condemned's Origin
Submitted: September 9, 2008 • Updated: September 9, 2008
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Chapter 8 - Eclipse and Condemned talk about... stuff
Submitted: September 14, 2008 • Updated: September 14, 2008
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Chapter 9 - If Shadow Never Stole the Rocket Shoes (what if)
Submitted: September 21, 2008 • Updated: September 21, 2008
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Chapter 10 - Luminos Info
Submitted: October 3, 2008 • Updated: October 3, 2008
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Chapter 11 - Luminos' Theme Song...
Submitted: October 10, 2008 • Updated: October 10, 2008
Word count: 355 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 118
Chapter 12 - Mr. Blue-and-damned Finds a Friend
Submitted: October 1, 2009 • Updated: October 1, 2009
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Chapter 13 - Plight of the Fallen Angel
Submitted: February 4, 2010 • Updated: February 4, 2010
Word count: 1133 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 171
Chapter 14 - Rage Of the Sin Against Nature
Submitted: September 19, 2010 • Updated: September 19, 2010
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mechadragon13 on September 21, 2008, 7:17:06 AM
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Eclipse. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEmechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 8:06:19 AM
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cooooooool....MAKE A PIC!!! XD i am totally imagining that part in my head and it would make an awesome pic XD
TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:35:40 AM
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which part? There were a few.mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 8:44:32 AM
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well DUH. my bad. i mean the part where he flew and became a shadow against the moon. you know, that last sentence. you should do a pic of eclipse watching them too..... it would be really interesting....TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:47:05 AM
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wheee! Maybe I should!mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 12:04:00 PM
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DO IT.ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on September 18, 2008, 7:22:08 AM
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The already astounding funniness of this conversation was escalted as my friend read it aloud while we were in school today :) I thought you would like to here that fact XD Srsly, the "your're my dog" caught us off gaurd, we laughed like idiots and eveyone around us was all "...wtf is they're problem?!" I never knew Condemned could make funnies too 8DTheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 9:54:01 AM
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HE MAKES FUNNIES.woot.
I'm glad to have entertained you, and your friend.
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:00:45 AM
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me: *sniffle* that was very meaningful...Eclipse: *still blacked out. He is now burning up (fever, not literally)*
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:52:00 AM
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Me: *closes her eyes and is silent* .............Twilight: its because it's the truth..... *sighs and puts a water-covered hand on eclipse's forehead,trying to cool him down. she sings again*
Down, the water holds me down
It's like I have no weight
Me: *hears what song she's singing and joins in, eyes still closed*
And now, I'm floating with the tide
The sun is on my face
I hear you talking. I hear you speak
Someone's talking saying something
But I'm on my own, there's nothing left to say
It carries me away
And you call out
I can't hear you
I can't feel you
No, I can't feel nothing
And you call out
I can't hear you
No, I can't hear nothing
And you all look the same, now
You all look the same, now
Now, there's nothing that I want
To take me from this place
I'm drifting further with the tide
That carries me away
And you call out
I can't hear you
I can't feel you
No, I can't feel nothing
And you all look the same, now
You all look the same, now
I know you're trying hard to reach me
You'll always feel the cold without me
I know you're trying hard to reach me
You'll always feel the cold without me
I know you're trying hard...
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:59:23 AM
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Me: Who sings that? I know it's not important now, but I'm curious.Eclipse: *doesn't move at all from the contact of cold water*
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 2:30:52 AM
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Me: the song's called carry me away by chris lake, but is sung by emma hewitt......... its a good song.......... the first one was faded by cascada.Twilight: ............. *starts tearing up* I HATE THIS!!! IM SO FREAKING USELESS!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 9:56:42 AM
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Me: no you're not... don't feel bad...Eclipse: *has gotten worse*
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 11:11:04 AM
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Twilight: *tears are now flowing freely* i AM!!! i cant do anything to save him and it pisses me off!!! goddamn it, it feels horrible!!!! *punches the floor in fury, and leaves a little dent, but bruises her knuckles* aghh! damn....... *cant take it anymore and starts sobbing* im so sorry, eclipse.......Me: twilly..... *twillys emotions reflect in her face and she starts tearing up too, she wipes her tears away, she sings slowly*
when my time comes
forget the wrong that i've done
help me leave behind some
reasons to be missed
and dont resent me
and when you're feeling empty
leave out all the rest......
leave out all the rest............
forgetting all the hurt inside
you've learned to hide so well
pretending someone else can come
and save me from myself
i can't be who you are.......
i cant be who you are.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 11:14:54 AM
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Me: It's... hard, Twilly... but his will is strong... there IS a good chance that he won't truly leave us... if you know what i mean...Eclipse: *is very pale*
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 11:20:26 AM
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Twilight: *senses the change in eclipse's condition and looks up, and at seeing his situation, she starts tearing up again* ..........oh god......TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 11:29:04 AM
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Me: it's a shame, really... no matter how hard he tried to do so, he couldn't get rid of Condemned on time... he tried everything... i guess he really DOES stay with you until death... *scowls* it's all HIS fault... *tightens fists*Eclipse: *still lays there, his breathing, still at it's worst. His sickness appears to affect him most on the inside, slowly destroying his heart and lungs, and eating away at his muscles, making him weak*
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 2:35:55 AM
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Twilight: .................... is his mind still intact?Me: say what?
Twilight: the daemons. they can talk to each other with their minds. if his subconscious int screwed up yet, one of themcan get in there and covey anything eclipse may be wanting to say..... only problem might be condemned.....
Me: can condemned talk to the daemons? maybe that would work... critic?
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 6:07:21 AM
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me: it... no. No. It's over. Look.Eclipse: *not breathing*
Me: he's dead.
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 6:11:04 AM
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Twilight: OH NO!!!! no he cant be, he cant, be he can't........ no......Me: .............. *bows her head*
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 8:40:35 AM
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Me: Yeah... good kid... just wasn't ever in the right place at the right time... Where should we bury him? Or will we cremate him?Rosette: *is sobbing, and hugging Eclipse's dead body*
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 9:10:17 AM
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Twilight: *cant even talk, she's so distraught*Me: i wouldnt know how to answer that question....... you decide. if you wanna bury him, he can be buried somewhere in HNHQ grounds.... we'll honor him.
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:19:10 AM
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Me: if he was here, he'd like that... I'm not too fond of cremation anyway... where on the grounds? Is there some place rural?Rosette: *sob*
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 9:33:55 AM
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Me: probably. why rural though?TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:40:56 AM
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Me: it's a place of memories... rural places are where most people bury other people. Ok, who wants to touch the body?Everyone: D:
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 8:29:31 AM
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Me: ............eeee......Twilight: i'll do it. *looks up at rosette* will.... will you help?
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 8:31:01 AM
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Rosette: s-sure.Me: ok then!
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 8:34:38 AM
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Twilight: okay. *stands up and stands by eclipse's feet, and bends down* you pick up his head, m'kay? one, two, up!Me: .... i know where to put him.
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 8:49:39 AM
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Rosette: *picks up the head, tears flow down her cheeks*Me: where?
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 8:54:54 AM
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Me: a nice spot near the back. it's got trees and this patch of white flowers......Twilight: *carrying eclipse, she walks with rosette to the spot described my mish* .....here?
Me: *nods*
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 8:58:28 AM
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Rosette: *sets Eclipse down, and wipes the tears from her eyes* he was so cold......Me: Mish, this is great! *draws a shovel, and starts digging* yay.
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 9:20:20 AM
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Me: you're welcome. *grabs a shovel also*Twilight: hold up. *goes daemon* i got this. *starts scooping out large amoounts of dirt with her large claws*
TheGameArtCritic on September 21, 2008, 4:04:29 AM
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me: wait... the chip in his head... it's still there...Rosette: you're right... i feel like it's violating his body...
me: *gets out a small pocket knife* this was Eclipse's pocket knife that he owned before Condemned came. I think it would be fair to use this to get the chip out.
mechadragon13 on September 21, 2008, 7:18:36 AM
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Twilight: *shakes her head and keeps digging* dont look at me, i'm not doin' it.Me: *shakes her head* im a little faint of heart...... i dont think i could bear to watch, much less do it.
TheGameArtCritic on September 21, 2008, 8:11:47 AM
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Me: alright then, Mish. You may want to look away. *uses the knife to stab at Eclipse's head until a bloody, thin, square object falls out. The tip of the knife is now drenched in blood*Rosette: oh my god... i should have looked away too...
mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 8:07:38 AM
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Me: *was covering her eyes* ehhh... is it over...?Twilight: yep. *still digging*
Me: ok. *uncovers her eyes and sees the bloody mess* oh lord. *covers eyes again* sorry.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:37:13 AM
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Me: no, no. It's ok. If i were you, I'd be squeamish as well. It's that damn badger... he shoved that chip deep into his head... had to dig to get it out...Rosette: *face of disgust*
mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 2:46:48 AM
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Me: *still covering eyes* aww, thats gross.....Twilight: *sticks her tongue out in disgust, and keeps digging*
Me: *uncovers eyes* i guess i can take it. i saw interview with the vampire this weekend.
TheGameArtCritic on September 23, 2008, 8:32:10 AM
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me: daaaang, woman, that's a SCARY movie!Rosette: are we done, yet, Twilly?
mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 12:05:39 PM
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Twilight: *sticks her paw in the hole, and leans down uptil it is flat against the bottom* yup. it's deep enough. *backs away from the hole and reverts to her normal form* .....me: ............
TheGameArtCritic on September 23, 2008, 12:30:06 PM
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Me: alright. *puts in Eclipse's body*Rosette: *snifflesob*
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 2:51:22 AM
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Me: .........Twilight: *loud sniffle*
Me: ....anyone have anything they wanna say?
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 8:20:03 AM
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Me: I don't know... i fear if i try, I'll be reduced to a puddle of tears...Rosette: same... *wipes a tear from her eyes*
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 8:36:41 AM
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Me: agreed. *wipes away tears* Twilight: ....... we'll miss ya eclipse..... *starts pushing the dirt back into the hole*
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 8:47:55 AM
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Everyone: *helps*Lupe: *is suddenly there, and looking at the body with curiosity* so... that was him?
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 9:46:48 AM
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Me: WHOA GOD!!! *pulls out her wrench in surprise and points it at lupe* oh. *puts it down* it's you.....Twilight: *finishes pushing in the rest of the dirt and smooths it flat over the grave*
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:15:48 AM
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Lupe: what's wrong with ME?Me: ... uhhhh...
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:30:04 AM
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Me: nothing, i just didnt expect you.....Twilight: *lays down in front of the grave, then sniffles* ........ *suddendly stands up and lets out an anguished howl* AWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:45:21 AM
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Lupe: she seems upset. Was his death really that bad?Me: is the sky blue?
Lupe: ...what?
Me: one day, he was perfectly normal, the next, he's coughing up a storm. It was bad.
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:53:30 AM
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Twilight: *returns to normal* it was horrible! he just suddendly got so sick........... it happened so fast...TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:58:46 AM
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Lupe: um... yikes... but... i saw a glimpse of the body before you buried him... other than the vampire-pale skin, he seemed like he died healthy...Me: Condemned, after three years, kills his hosts with a toxic gas.
Lupe: D8
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:03:53 AM
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Me: basically, he was killed from the inside. thats why he didnt look any different. Twiligt: *shakes her head* terrible, terrible....
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:06:57 AM
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Lupe: that's gross.Me: Twilly... *pats her on the back*
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:23:26 AM
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Twilight: i'll be ok, critic. you should worry about rosette. she'll be taking it harder than i am...... *sniffle*Me: *picks the bloody chip up off the ground and holds it away from her with her index and thumb* so... whaddowedo with this goddamned thing?
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:29:42 AM
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Me: BURN IT. It's a blight upon us all. Goddamn chip...Lupe: so Rosette was his girlfriend... huh. Tha's (really pronounced like this) a shame...
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:41:17 AM
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Twilight: better idea. *snatches the chip from mish and turns her other hand into a light blue demon hand, and freezes the chip solid. then, she tosses it in the air and punches the frozen chip so hard, that it shatters into a million microscopic pieces*Me: i dont think that chip'll bother us anymore....
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:50:31 AM
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Me: IT'S SO PRETTY ALL SPARKLEY AND RED LIKE THAAAT *is mezmerized*Lupe: is she ALWAYS like this?
mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 2:59:49 AM
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Twilight: *Returns to hand to normal* yep. all the time.... unless she suddendly decides to turn serious.Me: which doesnt happen often XD
Twilight: *suddendly falls to her knees holding her head* AGHH!!!
Me: twilight?? whats wrong???
Twilight: daemons... bad........ agh...... it hurts.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 11:10:04 AM
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Lupe: w-what's wrong with her???Me: um... internal daemons?
Lupe: you mean "demons"?
Me: er... no.
Lupe: great... more paranormal crap...
mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 11:56:35 AM
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Twilight: *still holding her head in pain* urgh... i IS pronounced daemons..... and they're going power-crazy!!!! they're screaming in my head!!! AAAAAAH!!!!Me: this is not cool.
TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 2:34:18 PM
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Lupe: *his heart rate speeds up from fear*Me: oh boy...
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 8:57:25 AM
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Me: umm... *takes a few steps back* id stand back if i were you.Twilight: RAAAAAGH!!!! *is screaming in pain* THEY WONT STOP!! IT HURTS!!!!! AAAAARGH!!!!!
Me: umm...... i think she's having one of those episodes like eclipse used to have....... eeeek.
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 9:47:43 AM
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Lupe: Eclipse had these episodes...? Um... wait - WHAT THE F*** CAUSED THE WOLFIDNA WENCH TO GO ALL ABOUT LIKE THIS???!!!Me: ummm... i don't know. Ask Mish.
Lupe: this is really f-freaking me out, man... i never asked to be put into this mess... now I'm just gonna walk away and... *takes a few steps back*
Me: *grabs him* you still need our help. And Twilly needs our help. WE WILL HELP.
SpiralDemon on September 15, 2008, 10:14:28 PM
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TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 8:35:02 AM
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dawwwww..... poor emo....mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 7:40:22 AM
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Dear Critic,I have currently run off to laugh my @$$ off. I'll be back in a jiffy!! ^^
Sincerely, Mish.
PS: And now for something completely different. ^^
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 9:20:08 AM
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roflmao!but now you're not online... boo <:(
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 11:17:31 AM
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Dear Critic,Still laughing........ be back tomorrow XD
PS i have to say, that was some seriously funny stuff XD
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 12:46:35 PM
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o rly? HOORAY!Kirbyt on September 14, 2008, 2:02:27 PM
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That is so funny!TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 2:03:20 PM
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you like it?Condemned: you're my dog.
SONICXROUGELUVA on September 11, 2008, 5:58:32 AM
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THAT IS AWESOME!!!TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 11:51:28 AM
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thank you ^^mechadragon13 on September 11, 2008, 3:17:01 AM
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O.O so was an echidna???Twilight: O.O no effing way!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 11:51:16 AM
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OMG I KNOW!!!I was trying to find the right animal for Codemned, but then i realized that the time he was in was when Echidnas were dominant sooo... yeah. I said "screw this" and made him an echidna.
thank you Fleetway <3
mechadragon13 on September 12, 2008, 2:25:08 AM
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Twilight: NO! I REFUSE TO BE EVEN REMOTELY RELATED TO THAT ABOMINATION!!! *freaks out*Me: chill, twilly.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 8:30:14 AM
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Condemned: lol I'm related to you.Eclipse: dude, she's gonna punch me because of you.
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:07:43 AM
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Twilight: no. no, no, no, no, NO!!! *holds her head* gaaah!! my brain hurts!!!!!!me: ow. me too.
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 8:36:30 AM
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Eclipse:... or she'll do that.Condmened: aww... i wanted her to punch you... the pain could have stimulated me...
Eclipse: D:<
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:44:54 AM
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Twilight: hey, my echidna temper is stifled by my wolf calmness. so dont expect a punch from me anytime soon.Me: heheh. one way she's the total opposite of eclipse. twilight has very good control and restraint, and eclipse has a hard time with those.
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 1:25:12 PM
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me: indeed. His one weakness. Besides seeing his friends and family hurt. BECAUSE IT HURTS HIM.Condmened: *talks through Eclipse* stupid hybrid... you're not an echidna, and you're not a wolf. You're a wolfidna. No, I'm sorry... YOU'RE DIRTY. YOU DIRTY FILTHY MUTT.
Me: ok, Condemned, NOW you're asking for it.
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 6:52:13 AM
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Twilight: *suddendly glares at condemned* what did you just call me?Me: ohhhhhhhh lord. now he's done it. nothing's more dangerous than a seriously pissed wolfidna.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 6:56:19 AM
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Me: i can't believe he's making Eclipse say all this crap...Condemned: i called you a mutt. Of course, you wouldn't understand... we all know that mutt brains are too small to understand insults...
Me: *facepalm*
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:42:12 AM
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Twilight: *growls in extreme anger* *through gritted teeth* you'll regret you ever thought of saying that, condemned........ *is trying hard to hold herself back, she doesnt wanna hurt eclipse*me: she's trying hard....... hope she dont crack.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 7:44:42 AM
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Condemned: hahaha! I didn't know mutts KNEW how to feel rage! HAHAHA!!Me: burn.... poor Twilly...
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:58:59 AM
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Twilight: *snarls, and takes a step forward, but manages to contain herself* i'm not like you condemned. i wont kill out of rage.Me: *phew* im glad twilly's so level-headed......... very unlike an echidna, OR a wolf......
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:11:05 AM
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Condemned: daww... really? But it's so FUN... *malicious laugh* *turns back into Eclipse*Eclipse: w...what happened?
Me: Condemned. Twilly. Insults.
Eclipse: oh...
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:24:46 AM
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Twilight: *is taking deep breaths, trying to dissipate her anger* grrrrrr..... that thing annoys me greatly......Me: ya did the right thing, twilly.
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:34:55 AM
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Eclipse: hell. I would have punched him if i could. I'm sorry you had to hear that, Twilly...mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:39:31 AM
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Twilight: *is calm now* its ok, eclipse. it's just that..... being called names just for being a cross-breed makes me angry.... and sad........Me: it sucks, really. she's has to deal with it practically her whole life....
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Eclipse: *opens his arms wide* do you need a hug?Me: cute.
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:59:43 AM
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Twilight: yes. yes i do. *hug*Me: *smiles*
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 11:55:34 AM
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Eclipse: *hugs Twilly*Me: dawwwwwww...
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 7:37:04 AM
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Twilight: *sniffles* thanks... i needed that.Me: *still smiling, but more widely now* *to critic* we dont see these moments very often anymore...... i miss those times......
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 9:23:43 AM
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me: as do i. Now all we see is discrimination and racism... not to mention death and hate...Eclipse: there... see? It's all good.
Me: y-yeah.. it's... it's all... *starts to cry*
Eclipse: What? What's wrong??
Me: it's... and you... and... *snifflesob*
Eclipse: i don't know what you're talking a... ab... ack! *coughs, and becomes unsteady. He holds his throat, wide eyed*
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 11:16:48 AM
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Twilight: eclipse? eclipse?! Critic, whats wrong?????Me: i dunno!!!! *freaking out*
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 12:48:04 PM
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Me: he dies on the 18th. The countdown starts today. It will get worse and worse over the next few days.Eclipse: oh god... *clears his throat* yeah... um... that was... wow... that was weird.
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 10:52:24 AM
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Twilight: *in disbelief* ....no........................Me: *thinking* should i say it?
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 11:56:28 AM
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Eclipse: *rocks a bit* ah... ah... ok... room... room is spinning....Me: dizziness and extreme fatigue. That is what happens on the next stage.
Eclipse: ... or maybe I'm just sick. That's weird. *cough* I've never been this ill before... *cough* why now?
Me: Eclipse... *sad look of sadness*
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:01:32 PM
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Twilight: ......... *is too scared to talk for fear of tearing up* ......... *sniffle*Me: twilly? you have something to say?
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:05:35 PM
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Eclipse: Twilly? What's wrong?Me: AUGH!!! THIS IS TOO MUCH!!! *runs out of the.... story place... thing*
Eclipse: O_O
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:23:38 PM
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Me: you go on ahead, twilly, i'll be right back. *runs after critic*Twilight: well.....umm...... how do i put this..... *blushes only slightly*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:44:52 PM
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Eclipse: er... what is it?meanwhile
Me: DX GAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAA *sobbing and running*
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:50:46 PM
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Me: critiiiiic, come back! *catches up to critic* critic, whats wrong?? *seriously concerned*MEANWHILE!!!!
Twilight: err..... ok, fine. i'll say it. *clears throat, turns a liitlle bit redder*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:54:15 PM
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Eclipse: look, you can just say it. I won't laugh. I swear.menwhial
Me: I WAS TALKING TO SOMEONE WHO'S GONNA DIE IN 3 DAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYSSSSSS!!!!!! DX
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:05:27 PM
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Me: critic, i was talking to him too. just calm down... you brought this upon yourself, ya know.MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: im no worried you'll laugh, it's just...... fine, i'll say it. *clears throat and turns slightly redder*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:08:10 PM
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Eclipse: -_-meanwhile
Me:... *sniff* i *sniffle* KNOW *sniff* i just... IT'S HARD!!!!! BUT YOU HAVE TO KEEP IT DRAMATIC/HORROR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH *sob*
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:18:16 PM
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Me: it's ok...... i know it's your style, and i understand that. just, dont be too hard on yourself, ok? *smiles* AND NOW FOR SOMETHING COMPLETELY DIFFERENT! heheheh. lets go back over there.MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: ....... OHHH!!! i cant take it anymore!!!! *practically glomps eclipse, starting to tear up* i dont want you to go!!!! you cant just leave like that!!! i wont let you!!! *hugs him tighter*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:28:38 PM
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Eclipse: Twilly... I'm not going anywhere...Me: *sniffle* *walks in* oh how sad that sentence is...
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:31:06 PM
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Twilight: yes you are... and its not just that.....Me: you mean she hasnt said it yet??? sheez!
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:33:39 PM
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Me: OMFG DON'T SAY IT, TWILLY!!!!!!!!!!Eclipse: say what? WHAT IS GOING ON??!! *cough*
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:49:13 PM
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Me: i didnt mean that...... *rolls eyes*Twilight: *looks at mish with wide eyes, still hast let go of eclipse* umm..... you want me to spill THAT??
Me: ya might as well....
Twilight: *turns SERIOUSLY red* ohh.. umm... okay then.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:51:04 PM
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Everyone: *waits and listens*mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:55:33 PM
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Twilight: *glares at mish* i hate you. *still hugging eclipse* umm.... you guys promise you wont freak?TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:56:27 PM
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me: um. NO.Eclipse: why would we, eh? We're your FRIENDS.
me: true.
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 2:00:21 PM
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Twilight: umm.... yeah. *coughs, and turns really red* umm... eclipse? mish wants me to tell you that....... i.........kinda................like you.Me: *throws her hands up in the air* THANK YOU!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 2:02:13 PM
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Eclipse: ... what?Me: OoO OMFG!!!!! How would... and Eclipse... and Rosette.... WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT???????????
LIGHTNING!!!!!
LIGHTNING'S GONNA KILL ECLIPSE............ early-ish.
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 2:08:25 PM
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Twilight: *glare* you promised you wouldnt freak.Me: no its not like thaaaaaat!! lightning knows ^^ she told him. she just.... kinda...... developed a thing for him after a while XD but its nothing major and/or serious ^^
Twilight: pfft. whatever. i told you it was a bad idea to tell them thaaaat. *hugz eclipse*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 2:10:55 PM
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Eclipse: this is... um... wow... *face goes red*Me: OoO I'm sorry for freaking out... it's just....
catfight.
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 2:17:46 AM
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Twilight: ^^ *turns redder*Me: yeah bu she doesntl like, REALLY REALLY like him. here, watch. TWILLY!!
Twilight: whaaaat?
Me: give eclipse a kiss!
Twilight: what? no. eww! i dont like him that much....
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 8:18:41 AM
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Eclipse: ok. Wow. Phew... for a second there... yeah................................ *is silent*Me: Eclipse?
Eclipse: *falls down*
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 8:29:15 AM
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Twilight: *was hugging him and held him up so he DIDNT fall* eclipse? *freaking out* OH NO!!!! ECLIPSE!!! Me: and so it begins......... *sniffle*
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 8:38:00 AM
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Me: aye... *sniffle*Eclipse: *has blacked out, but this time it's worse*
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 8:54:06 AM
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Twilight: guys? GUYS!? GUYS???!!! he's not responding!!! what do we do????Me: ....we wait.
Twilight: WAIT? but... but he'll DIE!!! you cant just let him die like that!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 9:49:07 AM
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me: don't worry, Twilly... he's stll got two days on him. For now, he needs rest... *draws up a bed, and places Eclipse in it*Eclipse: *still blacked out*
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 9:56:59 AM
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Twilight: *feels totally useless* so thats it then. we're just gonna let him fade away untiil there's nothing left?? *sighs exasperatedly and sits down on the floor abruptly. she shakes her head and grumbles to herself*Me: she hates feeling useless........ *sits down in the same manner twilight did* so do i...............
Twilight: *sings softly*
Who's got nothing to say
I'm not gonna wait around
Let you run my whole life down
So you can watch me fade away
Me: *joins twilly*
You try to fit
Fit me in your perfect box
You try to fit
Fit me in a perfect box
You let me slip between the cracks
Now I've faded
Into someone else
Made me someone I don't wanna be
Yeah I'm faded
My true colour's gone
Like a picture nobody sees
Yeah I've faded
Like I never was
Till I don't even know myself
Now I'm faded
Into what you want
But I'm not takin' it too well
Now I'm faded.............
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on September 11, 2008, 9:55:47 AM
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Oh wow, that was good! I like backgroubd stories alot X3 They just add more to the adventure of the main plot lolSo Condemned wouldn't be himself if he was just luffed a little! But then there would be no epic story of Eclipse so never mind 8D
TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 11:49:33 AM
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bwahahahaha.... yesh. Condmned just wanted a hug XDsucks to be him.
SpiralDemon on September 4, 2008, 8:23:46 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 8:53:42 AM
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thx ^^
question. who's the winged demon?