Control
Submitted July 16, 2008 Updated September 19, 2010 Status Incomplete | neh. A basic fight between Condemned and Eclipse for control over Eclipse's body. Sometimes it would go too far... More stories are to be added!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Control
Submitted: July 16, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 794 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 114
Chapter 2 - Interrogation
Submitted: August 4, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 919 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 137
Chapter 3 - Eclipse's Death
Submitted: August 5, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
Word count: 1159 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 110
Chapter 4 - When True Evil Was Born
Submitted: August 13, 2008 • Updated: August 15, 2008
Word count: 871 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 155
Chapter 5 - Evil Eclipse and his Inner Turmoil
Submitted: August 15, 2008 • Updated: August 15, 2008
Word count: 691 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 111
Chapter 6 - Questions and a Lack of Sleep
Submitted: August 30, 2008 • Updated: September 3, 2008
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Chapter 7 - Condemned's Origin
Submitted: September 9, 2008 • Updated: September 9, 2008
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Chapter 8 - Eclipse and Condemned talk about... stuff
Submitted: September 14, 2008 • Updated: September 14, 2008
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Chapter 9 - If Shadow Never Stole the Rocket Shoes (what if)
Submitted: September 21, 2008 • Updated: September 21, 2008
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Chapter 10 - Luminos Info
Submitted: October 3, 2008 • Updated: October 3, 2008
Word count: 96 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 112
Chapter 11 - Luminos' Theme Song...
Submitted: October 10, 2008 • Updated: October 10, 2008
Word count: 355 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 118
Chapter 12 - Mr. Blue-and-damned Finds a Friend
Submitted: October 1, 2009 • Updated: October 1, 2009
Word count: 1177 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 121
Chapter 13 - Plight of the Fallen Angel
Submitted: February 4, 2010 • Updated: February 4, 2010
Word count: 1133 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 171
Chapter 14 - Rage Of the Sin Against Nature
Submitted: September 19, 2010 • Updated: September 19, 2010
Word count: 905 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 126
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mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:41:50 AM
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.........................wow............... just, wow..... that was.... wow. reminds me of that oneshot i wrote............. but this is so much better......... wow. *is happy*TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:44:43 AM
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thanks XDMy favorite part, i believe, was the ending ^^
I thought it was cute ^^
mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 8:07:08 AM
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i knoooow..... i loved it too..... shows how much one's life affects the other....TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 8:54:06 AM
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yes indeed!ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 31, 2008, 10:35:58 AM
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*squee* How sweet X3 Eclispe seems to be a troubled little thing, I hope he gets well soon. Though Rosette helps him alot, why does she really find interest him? You listed all those things and it just made me wonder >.>TheGameArtCritic on August 31, 2008, 3:22:34 PM
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i dunno.... i gues she likes him because1. he really is sweet on the inside, and
2. he saved her life.
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 24, 2008, 9:06:35 AM
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lulz teh eval 8D I am a sucker for killing cops XD Also, may I suggest a suggestion, that is, if you don't mind :3 NEVAR start a sentence with 'But'. I DON'T KNOW WHY you aren't supposed to do that, but my mom is always "Don't start a sentence with 'but' or I'll disown you!" So yeah, apparently if it's dialogue, it doesn't matter -__- But I am still impressed and amazed by your writing! They're are very few good authors 'round here, it saddens me so :(TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 8:40:22 AM
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YOU ARE ONE OF THEM!!!!Jerk... doubting yourself..... XD
Also for the "but" thing...... hmm.... i'll see about that....
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 25, 2008, 8:49:52 AM
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I ALWAYS doubt myself, it is a plauge upon my house :x...lol romeo/juliet reference :D
Take your time with the 'but' stuff(this is sounding very naughty...) Instead of using that, you can use 'although' and 'however' or anything else that plays the same role. It is very hard to get used to, I still make the mistake and end rewriting whole paragraphs because of it D8
TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 8:58:28 AM
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waaaaaiiiiit.I can't find "but". - IT'S ON YOUR BEHIND, STUPID! XD
no.
Which thingy is it in? (omfg that was nasty)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 25, 2008, 9:08:41 AM
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There was one sentence in Chapter three, and I think that's it...OMG YOU WIN FOR HAVING THE LEAST AMOUNT OF 'BUT'S 8D good on ya mate n_n Though, if you ever get the urge, you are now prepared!....I am so totally hating 'but' now >__<
TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:05:27 AM
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lol ^^ I'll go find it ^^mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:36:00 AM
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whoa..... i had no idea eclipse felt this way........ *wipes eyes, and finds a tear* eh? didnt notice that...... im tearing up for real right now......TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:39:44 AM
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lol you're like Eclipse!Eclipse: I sweaar to GOD I didn't cry because I was sad...
Me: suuuuuuuuuure.....
Eclipse: *hand turns into a claw and he impales me* SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:44:54 AM
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......yeah............. i guess so. lightning and twilight mean THAT MUCH to his normal self, huh?TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:50:45 AM
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well, they DID except him into their team. They all had a pretty fun time together..........mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:56:53 AM
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yeah...... i hope those memories are what bring him back....TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 4:08:25 AM
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I do think so............................and a near-death experience XD
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 4:49:47 AM
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eeeeee....... if 'clipsy is gonna have a near-death experience, it's gonna be from acid...... i SO hope eclipse is immune to taipan venom...... >.>TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 5:45:49 AM
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ooooooooooooh lets hope XDmechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 12:19:59 PM
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acid's gonna crack soon...... O.OTheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 3:16:04 AM
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I can see that. Yeesh...what are the symptoms of the poison?
mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 6:50:37 AM
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well..... there's bloody wound discharge, fang marks in the skin and swelling at the site of the bite, severe localized pain, discoloration, such as redness and bruising , burning
convulsions, fainting, dizziness, weakness, blurred vision, excessive sweating, fever, increased thirst, loss of muscle, coordination, nausea, numbness and tingling, especially in the mouth, rapid pulse, altered mental state, shock, paralysis, and breathing difficulties.
i found a list. but by the time you start seeing these it might be a little late..... taipan venom sets in quick.
TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 9:59:50 AM
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that's a loooooooot of symptoms........ O.Omechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 11:44:33 AM
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yep. but those are just general venomous snake bite symptoms. the best way for eclipse to save himself is not to get bitten at all. acid's venom is fast. one bite is all it takes..........TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 4:30:40 AM
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I highly doubt he won't stop taunting Acid. He is sooooo screwed.Luckily, Condemned will keep him barely alive, so he has more time then most ppl! ^^
lucky.....
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 4:34:11 AM
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NOT GOOD!!! it wont give us enough time to make an anti-venom!!!!TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 4:49:46 AM
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OMG NUUUUUUUUUUU!!!! WE CAN'T HAVE HIM DIE!!!!!uh oh.
Acid.
Not good.
Maybe if we ruuuuuuuushhh...
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 4:56:29 AM
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...rush?TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:35:58 AM
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yeah! If we hurry with what we're doing!mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 6:42:00 AM
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okay then...........TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 8:47:27 AM
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AWESOME.mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 12:53:48 PM
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Me+all my OCs: O.O oh @#$%.Me: how... could you? WHYYYY???? WHYYYYYYYYYYY?????
im goin' back to the rp and replying to this !!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 2:28:17 PM
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um... ok?mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:06:19 AM
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*hangs head in grief* oh god...... *is crying* oh god.... this made me cry as much as the comic did.... oh god....TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:12:03 AM
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dawww.... i'm sorry....I just HAD to put it out in story form... i loved that story Arc...
mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:18:05 AM
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me too..... me too......TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:42:21 AM
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it's like, it's so sad it's AWESOME...and it makes a nice story too.
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 3:08:03 AM
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it DOES........... omg paradox, no!!!! *sad*TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 6:43:37 AM
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*sad look of sad sadnessy sadness* mah character.... o noes!Eclipse: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 7:11:56 AM
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*hugs eclipse comfortingly* it's ok eclipse, we'll find a way to fix this..... just hang on for a bit, ok?TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 10:13:43 AM
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Me: AH! DON'T HUG HIM! AH! NOT NOW!!Eclipse: *suddenly eyes turn red* augh augh augh augh.... *suddenly stabs Mish* AH!!! I'M SORRY!! I DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!! AH!! *transforms*
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 12:17:20 PM
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Me: ack!!! *stares at hole in self* WHAT THE FREAK?!?!?! why am i staaaabbed????TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 2:02:48 PM
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me: because you were close to Eclipse when the paradox sunk in.Eclipse: *is backing away and clutching his head*
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 2:04:34 PM
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Me: *falls to the ground, in pain* agh..... no... its ok... no biggie..... *winces in pain* i've had worse... i know it ain't your fault, clipsy....TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 9:07:10 AM
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Eclipse: *suddenly eyes turn back to normal* another paradox. T-thanks Mish... oh god... even though i didn't fully transform... i still feel hella weak...Me: Condemned uses your body, so he uses your energy. When he uses you like that, he forces you to over-exhert yourself, and that's why you always feel so tired and out-of-it when you gain control again...
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 5:28:44 AM
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Me: i can imagine... *hisses in pain* oww!!TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:19:23 AM
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Me: oh jeez! Here! *bandages you up*Eclipse: *guilt trip*
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:52:40 AM
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Me: (after you're done) *gets up* thanks critic. *to eclipse* dont feel guilty, eclipse. condemned made you do it. *looks down and shakes her head* we have enough guilt flying around right now.......TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 7:03:10 AM
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Me: i know... i feel so bad for Twilight right now...Eclipse: wha? What did she do?
Me: well, you're unconcious in the pic, so you wouldn't know.
Eclipse: BUT WHAT DID SHE DO...?
Me: oh look! A pretty flower?
Eclipse: BUT WHAT THE HELL DID SHE FREAKING DO????
mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 7:58:09 AM
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Me: *shakes her head* dont say it critic, dont say it.((O.M.G. i went to bed last night thinking about the RPs and i dreamed about this one. i woke up the this morining with an odd taste in my mouth, so i rinsed it out.
i spit blood. O.O))
TheGameArtCritic on August 10, 2008, 8:04:40 AM
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(( OoO o...m...g.... IT'S A SIGN!!! IT'S A SIGN!!!!!!!!))Me: I'm not going to say it...
Eclipse: *takes me by the shirt, and slams me into a wall* *in a dark tone* I swear to GOD, you piece of s***... if you don't tell me what's upset Twilight, i swear, you're going to wish you were never even born...
Me: well, Condemned's personality definetally mixed with your normal one, Eclipse...
Eclipse: *loosens his grip a little and sighs*
mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:09:35 AM
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((OMG I KNOW!!! it happened to me once before, but i had dreamed of the fight thats gonna happen between acid and twilly........and it was twilly who got bled.......))mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:10:00 AM
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*erase that "got" in there XDmechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:10:38 AM
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Me: *shakes her head* ......you can tell him ,critic. i dont want you to get hurt because of me.TheGameArtCritic on August 10, 2008, 9:37:35 AM
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Me: it's no biggie. We're immortal, remember?Eclipse: ....
Me: oh alright... Twilly is guilty because she hurt you right as you were transforming back to normal. There.
Eclipse: What??? How???
Me: Condemned totally upset Twilight by... um... by... killing Vera
Eclipse: *ears droop* oh no...
mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 9:17:05 AM
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Me: ..... it's true. but i think twilight feels worse than you do.TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 9:24:39 AM
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Eclipse: Twilight...Me: mm hmm.
Eclipse: we have to make her feel better...
Me: how?
Eclipse: uh... well... we could... er... *slumps over* i don't know...
mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 9:43:29 AM
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me: all the other you has to do is show her you're alive. she might snap out of it when she sees you, since the cause of her guilt is that she thought she killed you.TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 10:07:35 AM
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me: dawwww....Eclipse: uh... yeah! Of course!
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 1:36:16 AM
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Me: and so we wait. it might work.....TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 2:30:16 AM
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Me: it did XDALSO ECLIPSE IS GOING TO BE A HOT VILLAIN AND I'M GIVING HIM EBIL VILLAIN CLOTHES!!!!!!!!!!! ZOMG!!!!!!!!!!!
Elipse: WTF HUH VILLAIN???
Me: memory wipe.
Eclipse: DAMN YOU I CAN'T REMEMBER STUFF NOW!!!
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 3:46:01 AM
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Me: GAAH! i havent gotten around to looking at the new pic!! grr....TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:41:33 AM
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HE'S SO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 5:16:28 AM
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ah. i saw it.TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 5:29:25 AM
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ISN'T HE COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL????XD
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 8:42:44 AM
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....yes. but its a bad idea... *eyes widen* oh no you arent.TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 9:11:29 AM
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oh yes I am... XDmechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 1:05:22 PM
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OMG YOU DID!!!!! NUUU!!!TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 2:28:45 PM
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hard cooooooooore....... Eclipse.ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 4, 2008, 9:36:01 AM
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:O....HOLY shoot CAKES, WAT?!...*cannot think straight* that was fuggin incredible...
I LERVE THIS, OH YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH I LERVE THIS...
Been waiting years for a tale like this :3 But I advise switching your violence meter to high(for ripping ribs out and vivid describtion of it XD) I honestly thought he would rip his heart out >.> I believe my imagination is worse than I had thought...
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 9:39:43 AM
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ripping the heart out has already been done with Mr. Inderretta (in the future when Eclipse and Devon face off).This resulted in Eclipse dying.
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 4, 2008, 9:45:05 AM
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Daw you made me cry by spoiling such precious infoz ;_;OH WELL, BETTER LUCK NEXT TIME >8D
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 9:54:18 AM
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duurrr.. the comic has been posted...ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 4, 2008, 10:00:04 AM
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I don't read things thoroughly dammit, that is why I just found this story yesterday!TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 10:01:12 AM
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAyou make me laugh.
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 3, 2008, 8:47:31 AM
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holy shoot D: I'm like really really creeped out...BUT YET I ENJOYED IT lol
No really, that was good! I am quite impressed too, I havn't had a good scare like this since Cloverfield. May I, ask for some pointers? Soon enough, I'll need to write in some pretty frightening things for my stories, and I want to be able to give a spine-chilling performance just like this!
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 8:02:24 AM
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seriously? I thank you!I actually have no idea where i come up with this stuff.
I think of something that frightens me. I bend it until it's a new fear, but to do so, i need to find out what is it that makes someone afraid in the first place (sorry for the confusion).
Eclipse is afraid of losing control and hurting the people he cares about. I used that to my advantage.
I'm evil.
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 4, 2008, 8:08:48 AM
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No confusion, I get where you're coming from *is taking notez* AND...Everyone is evil m'dear. Half of us just haven't met their breaking point that makes them realize the damage they could bring >:3
Dahar, I'm a poet XD
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 9:19:48 AM
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yus chu ARRRREEEE.Didja see mah nuuuu chapter?
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 7:19:16 AM
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deus ex machina........................ dude, i was practically crying while i read this!! and when i got to that third-to-last paragraph, i prectically yelled in relief!! so loud, in fact, that my mom gaveme a weird look and asked me if i was ok....... but just...wow.... i was scared like, to DEATH!!!!TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:40:09 AM
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seriously? Eclipse, when he had Condemned had dreams like this almost every NIGHT!He would be killing his family and friends
He would be in his Condemned form, being burned at the stake
Condemned's voice would be insulting him in an empty hallway, calling him "weak" and other such things.
yeah... my little trooper got tough...
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 7:54:40 AM
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ohhhh........ eclipse really had it rough..... and i thought twilight had it bad......TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:58:37 AM
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no kidding there...ALMOST EVERY NIGHT.
I would go INSANE from that.
All of this Condemned crap led Eclipse to almost commiting suicide... er... three times now.
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 8:10:48 AM
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O.O name them. PLEASE.TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 8:41:01 AM
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1. second page of the Special Condemned Comic I'll Never Put Up Ever (is going to jump off the roof)2. first few comics of "Condemned", when Eclipse almost kills Sonic (wonders why he should even exsist, then proceeds to turn his hand into a claw and stab self. Is interrupted by Rosette.)
3. um... I forgot the last one, BUT I KNOW IT'S THERE.
yes. He's a very suicidal little hedgebat....
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 8:46:11 AM
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oh. will you ever post the second page?TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 8:59:25 AM
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NOmechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 9:05:52 AM
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YES! you MUST post it!!!TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 1:11:53 AM
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IT'S NOT DONE. IT WILL NEVER BE DONE.mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:52:26 AM
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WHYYYYYYYY????????????????????????????????TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 6:28:53 AM
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I FEEL TERRIBLE ABOUT IT.mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:18:10 AM
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................... T.TTheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 7:20:48 AM
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don't cry! DON'T CRY!!mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:47:15 AM
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post it...... T.TTheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 9:24:47 AM
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NUUUUUUUUUUU!!mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 11:20:45 AM
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yes....... T.TTheGameArtCritic on July 24, 2008, 4:31:24 AM
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NEVERRRRR - *gasp*Mr. Inderretta.... just did something unforgivable...
mechadragon13 on July 27, 2008, 11:33:08 AM
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....what did he do? if you're not gonna post it, at least tell me!!!TheGameArtCritic on August 1, 2008, 11:29:32 PM
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oh you already know now...mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 1:20:44 AM
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..................................omfg. i just read the chapter you just put up. O.O umm....... it makes me wonder.. should i really make that badgerwolf character.... im scared of badgers now. O.OTheGameArtCritic on August 5, 2008, 1:39:08 AM
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it's fine to make a badgerwolf character! It's only Mr. Inderretta who's scary......mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 1:58:01 AM
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yeah.............. mistrust might blossom though..... whoa.
TheGameArtCritic on August 5, 2008, 6:15:22 AM
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woah?mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:07:06 AM
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omg i just read the new chappie........TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:12:22 AM
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roflmao... yeah...