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What I still remember

What if naruto returned in six years instead of two? Naruto relizes that he loves Hinata, so he asks her out, Only to realize that she's Kiba's Fiance. Will she stay faithfull to Kiba, or be with The one person she's wanted her whole life?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - the boy
Submitted: November 13, 2007 • Updated: November 13, 2007
Word count: 666 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 436

Chapter 2 - The kiss
Submitted: November 13, 2007 • Updated: November 13, 2007
Word count: 969 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 351

Chapter 3 - the promise
Submitted: November 13, 2007 • Updated: November 13, 2007
Word count: 1191 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 381

Chapter 4 - the battle
Submitted: November 13, 2007 • Updated: November 13, 2007
Word count: 821 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 372

Chapter 5 - the embrace
Submitted: November 13, 2007 • Updated: November 13, 2007
Word count: 902 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 388

Chapter 6 - great news
Submitted: November 29, 2007 • Updated: November 29, 2007
Word count: 380 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 384

Chapter 7 - a woman's heart
Submitted: December 2, 2007 • Updated: December 2, 2007
Word count: 1010 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 385

Chapter 8 - goodbye
Submitted: December 2, 2007 • Updated: December 2, 2007
Word count: 1168 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 356

Chapter 9 - The real goodbye
Submitted: December 2, 2007 • Updated: December 2, 2007
Word count: 399 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 349

Chapter 10 - Never an Absolution
Submitted: December 3, 2007 • Updated: December 3, 2007
Word count: 416 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 345

Chapter 11 - Unable to stay, unwilling to leave
Submitted: December 3, 2007 • Updated: December 3, 2007
Word count: 600 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 382

Chapter 12 - Epilogue
Submitted: December 5, 2007 • Updated: December 5, 2007
Word count: 548 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 369

Comments

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MaliceKiotsu on April 30, 2008, 6:21:22 AM

MaliceKiotsu on (Chapter: 3)
MaliceKiotsuAhhhh dude this is like sooo messed up but it is soooo bad @$$ man.Naruto and Hinata was ment for one another

GreyPichu on December 5, 2007, 8:48:13 PM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 12)
GreyPichuYEAHS!Ur doing a sasusaku story!i'm SO GLAD!!!i'll be sure to read it too.^^

hflp on December 5, 2007, 11:26:37 AM

hflp on (Chapter: 12)
hflpThat was amazing

ZeldaGirl9793 on December 5, 2007, 11:27:53 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 12)
ZeldaGirl9793awww, thanks so much!:-)

cherryblossom93 on December 5, 2007, 11:16:26 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 12)
cherryblossom93OH-EM-GEEEEEEEEEEEE.

You are good at updating. And the epilogue made me smile.

(OMGWTFBBQ. You're doing SasuSaku next. Yesshums.)

This was an awesome story, and I can't wait for your next!

NARUHINA IS TEH SHET!

^.^

And, you get a camel, of course...

*:3

ZeldaGirl9793 on December 5, 2007, 11:27:33 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 12)
ZeldaGirl9793Awww, thankyou so much!!! ^-^
I cant wait to start writing my next X3
And thankyou for all the comments you gave me on this fanfic, they're always so nice XD
and Ha, I like the whole OMGWTHBBQ phrase, very nice!
Yay camel!!!!
*:3

GreyPichu on December 5, 2007, 9:49:42 AM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 11)
GreyPichuAWESOMENESS!u know, u should make another story similar to this, but with sasusaku in it. that would be SO cool!just suggesting that, though.^^

ZeldaGirl9793 on December 5, 2007, 11:23:55 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 11)
ZeldaGirl9793Awww, thankyou so much!:-)
And you sooo read my mind, lol. I am definatly planning on writting a sasusaku fanfic next! ^-^
And thankyou so much, Your comments are always so nice!X3

cherryblossom93 on December 4, 2007, 4:28:41 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 11)
cherryblossom93Yay, a lil' random SasuSaku (you know my obssessions...).

See? Hinata's smarter than you think, Kiba. *blows rasberries*

I love how they yell when they proclaim their love to each other. Very cute.

Can't wait for the final installment!!!

^.^

ZeldaGirl9793 on December 4, 2007, 6:04:54 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 11)
ZeldaGirl9793haham i know, very random, right?
I was like "hmmmmm, I must make a very random twist that no one will think of" But i have a feeling this was a little too random though.... lol
And thankyou very much :-)
Woah, it smells like rasberries!

cherryblossom93 on December 4, 2007, 6:33:25 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 11)
cherryblossom93Hahahahaha.

Funny.

^.^

puppydog2 on December 4, 2007, 4:58:52 AM

puppydog2 on (Chapter: 11)
puppydog2this entire story is awsome!!!!!!

cherryblossom93 on December 3, 2007, 10:01:10 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 10)
cherryblossom93Aw. Naruto's totally gonna crash the wedding last minute and win lil' Hina's heart.

...D-R-A-M-A-!

Teehee. Update soon, dearie.

^.^

puppydog2 on December 3, 2007, 8:19:52 AM

puppydog2 on (Chapter: 10)
puppydog2more more more!

GreyPichu on December 2, 2007, 10:21:06 AM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 8)
GreyPichuOMG!This chappie was SO sweet!loved it way too much!

ZeldaGirl9793 on December 2, 2007, 11:07:07 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 8)
ZeldaGirl9793aww, thankyou :-)

cherryblossom93 on December 2, 2007, 9:43:03 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 7)
cherryblossom93Choices, choices.

Ha, love Naruto's little solo there. Very nice.

Off to the next!

^.^

ZeldaGirl9793 on December 2, 2007, 11:05:05 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 7)
ZeldaGirl9793aww, thankyou! :-)

GreyPichu on December 2, 2007, 10:25:04 AM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 9)
GreyPichuoh my god i thought this ended the story, but i guees u said there are a couple more chapters.YEAH!^^cant wait

cherryblossom93 on December 2, 2007, 9:48:49 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 9)
cherryblossom93Suspenseeeeeeeeeee. EVIL.

Hee, awkward turtle time. *makes akward turtle*

Anyways. Poor Hina-chan, stuck in the middle. Hope she gets out okay.

Update sooooooooon.

^.^

cherryblossom93 on December 2, 2007, 9:46:05 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 8)
cherryblossom93Aw. Sweetness.

Ha, Naruto used pink highlighter. And drew hearts.

...He MUST be in love.

^.^

Kouni46892742 on December 2, 2007, 6:40:52 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742These last two chapters were amazing!!!

ZeldaGirl9793 on December 2, 2007, 8:28:01 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: index)
ZeldaGirl9793aww, thankyou:-)

cherryblossom93 on November 29, 2007, 10:06:46 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 6)
cherryblossom93Ha, can't wait to read about the partyyyy.

Naruto should totally try and sneek in. Cute chapter, post the next up real soon!

^.^

gaaralover1 on November 13, 2007, 8:25:52 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 5)
gaaralover1Crap... Now I wanna cry...................

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 8:29:38 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 5)
ZeldaGirl9793aww, lol, dont cry X3
thankyou for the comment!:-)

Kouni46892742 on November 13, 2007, 8:20:34 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742Poor Hina-chan!

Wish I could help!
 
Amazing chappie!!

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 8:29:12 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: index)
ZeldaGirl9793aww, thankyou so much!:-)

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 8:19:15 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 5)
cherryblossom93My, my... Men are so... possessive.

Poor Hinata. So confusing, these boys are.

Mixed signals, much?

Another awesome (and fast) update. Woot.

^.^

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 8:22:42 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 5)
ZeldaGirl9793Amen sista! boys are possessive. lol X3
thankyou so much again. I love getting comments, I thought my writing sucked X3

MaliceKiotsu on April 30, 2008, 7:10:01 AM

MaliceKiotsu on (Chapter: 5)
MaliceKiotsuHell no your writting is some of the best i have ever seen in my whole life of reading fanfics. Kudos

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 8:25:53 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 5)
cherryblossom93Too modest. XP

You are a much better writer than you give yourself credit for. I, however, can say that I suck. But you can't say that you do. Because you don't.

*:3 (camel with a flower)

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 8:31:19 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: index)
ZeldaGirl9793lmao, thankyou very much but u are crazy, woman! you are an AMAZING writer, seriously, even nathan and the camel think u rock!
*:3

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 8:34:06 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: index)
cherryblossom93*huggies*

(Not the diaper brand, I swear. That would just be weird.)

*bows ridiculously low* I AM UNWORTHY OF THE CAMEL'S PRAISE.

...right. Anyway.

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 8:39:59 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: index)
ZeldaGirl9793lmao, ur so silly!! XP
*huggies* but hey, i like diapers too...lol
*:3

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 8:41:36 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: index)
cherryblossom93Silly isn't the word for it.

I think they call it shizophrania, where I go to see the nice people in the white coats.

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 8:48:02 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: index)
ZeldaGirl9793lmaoo, do the people in white coats give you cookies?

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 8:49:30 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: index)
cherryblossom93No.

Only oddly shaped candies. That make me tired.

They taste funny.

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 8:52:39 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: index)
ZeldaGirl9793lmao, haha! candy...interesting

gaaralover1 on November 13, 2007, 7:39:37 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 4)
gaaralover1HURRY IT UP WILL YA!!!!!

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 8:19:35 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 4)
ZeldaGirl9793kk, lol X3
I just added chapter five. ^-^

Kouni46892742 on November 13, 2007, 7:38:16 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742This is amazing!!
 
The last chappie kinda made me wanna cry, but this story is beautiful!

When will you update again!?

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 8:19:01 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: index)
ZeldaGirl9793Aww, thankyou so much! ^_^
I just added chapter five a few minutes ago ^-^

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 7:13:18 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 4)
cherryblossom93Mm. *stomach growls* Hungry for more.

Someone's true nature comes out in stressful situations. Like Kiba. Meanie. Eat dog food. XP

Naruto would never insult someone like that. Not willingly, anyway.

Update soon, pwetty pweeze.

^.^

*faves*

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 7:19:43 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 4)
ZeldaGirl9793lmao, i kno. kiba is a butt head in this chapter! X3
i am actually working on the next chapter right now, i might have it up tonight ^_^....i hope

lol, thankyou so much again

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 7:06:24 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 3)
cherryblossom93Aw, I heart awkward love triangles. *nods head*

And this is one of my favorites. Any other pairings appearing in here? Maybe a smidge of ShikaTem, or ChoIno? An OC for Sai (er... if he's even here in this universe...)

*coughs* I feel so demanding.

^.^

ZeldaGirl9793 on November 13, 2007, 7:16:44 AM

ZeldaGirl9793 on (Chapter: 3)
ZeldaGirl9793thankyou, actually, i might sove some choino, or shikatemi, i'm not sure yet :-) but I'm so happy u like it ^_^

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 7:02:16 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 2)
cherryblossom93Sneaky, sneaky, Naru-chan...

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 6:58:57 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 1)
cherryblossom93And, finally, Naruto and his oblivious self has eveolved. A little late. (bum bum BUM)

OM-EM-GEE, I would type more, but my beloved little puppy just attempted to rip my arm off by latching onto my BRUISED hand (Dani hit me with the remote, and HARD) with her evilly sharp teeth and tugging like there's no tommorrow. And now it's more than a little sore. Ouchies.

Loving it so far, and glad you're writing again. Off to the next chapter!

^.^

cherryblossom93 on November 13, 2007, 6:59:46 AM

cherryblossom93 on (Chapter: 1)
cherryblossom93Evolved, I meant EVOLVED. Stupid keyboard.