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Vincent's Daughter

Vincent's daughter discovers she has a special power on her sixteenth birthday...

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Proluge
Submitted: July 8, 2005 • Updated: July 8, 2005
Word count: 318 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 313

Chapter 2 - Chapter 1
Submitted: July 8, 2005 • Updated: July 8, 2005
Word count: 605 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 315

Chapter 3 - Chapter 2
Submitted: July 8, 2005 • Updated: July 8, 2005
Word count: 1166 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 311

Chapter 4 - Kiro
Submitted: July 20, 2005 • Updated: July 20, 2005
Word count: 696 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 290

Chapter 5 - 5
Submitted: August 27, 2006 • Updated: August 27, 2006
Word count: 714 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 271

Chapter 6 - 6
Submitted: August 27, 2006 • Updated: August 27, 2006
Word count: 1773 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 304

Chapter 7 - 7
Submitted: August 27, 2006 • Updated: August 27, 2006
Word count: 1177 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 296

Chapter 8 - 8
Submitted: August 29, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1115 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 298

Chapter 9 - 9
Submitted: September 2, 2006 • Updated: September 2, 2006
Word count: 800 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 311

Chapter 10 - 10
Submitted: September 2, 2006 • Updated: September 2, 2006
Word count: 918 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 271

Chapter 11 - 11
Submitted: September 2, 2006 • Updated: September 2, 2006
Word count: 548 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 314

Comments

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aeris7dragon on July 10, 2007, 8:36:24 AM

aeris7dragon on (Chapter: index)
aeris7dragonWRITE ANOTHER! IM GETTING BORED HERE! THERE'S NOTHING TO DO BUT READ! MY GRANDMA DOESNT HAVE A PS!

aeris7dragon on May 27, 2007, 5:05:58 PM

aeris7dragon on (Chapter: index)
aeris7dragonHey! That was the best fanfic story I've ever read! Seriously! You should write another story. You write better than me, & I'm an English freak!

waterwolf29 on September 3, 2006, 6:57:07 AM

waterwolf29 on (Chapter: 11)
waterwolf29Oh...PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!
Uh, when you get more time!

waterwolf29 on September 3, 2006, 6:48:40 AM

waterwolf29 on (Chapter: 10)
waterwolf29Me likey ^-^.

waterwolf29 on September 3, 2006, 6:40:48 AM

waterwolf29 on (Chapter: 9)
waterwolf29Keep going at it!

waterwolf29 on August 31, 2006, 12:06:51 AM

waterwolf29 on (Chapter: 8)
waterwolf29Keep going!

waterwolf29 on August 27, 2006, 9:47:09 AM

waterwolf29 on (Chapter: 7)
waterwolf29OH PLEASE WRITE MORE TOMMROW
OR WHEN YOU CAN WRITE MORE!
Because if you put to much
data on here you can't put it
on untill 1:00AM.

waterwolf29 on August 27, 2006, 4:33:02 AM

waterwolf29 on (Chapter: 4)
waterwolf29*zombie me* U MUST WRITE MORE!

waterwolf29 on August 27, 2006, 4:22:54 AM

waterwolf29 on (Chapter: 3)
waterwolf29No it's, OW, good.
(sorry I'm having chest pains)

waterwolf29 on August 27, 2006, 4:13:19 AM

waterwolf29 on (Chapter: 2)
waterwolf29What happened to Yuffie?
Oh wait I'll read the next
chapter!

Vincent11 on July 27, 2006, 1:56:07 PM

Vincent11 on (Chapter: 3)
Vincent11poorly writen you were awsome i love it

Vincent11 on July 27, 2006, 1:45:55 PM

Vincent11 on (Chapter: 2)
Vincent11I love it the way you end it makes the reader want more your great!

VincentValentine13 on January 12, 2006, 3:05:35 AM

VincentValentine13 on (Chapter: 4)
VincentValentine13Short but bitter-sweet. Kinda non-descriptive, and I think that when a person is wracked with pain, the last thought on their mind is whether a person is hot or not....sorry, just saying it.

VincentValentine13 on January 12, 2006, 3:02:26 AM

VincentValentine13 on (Chapter: 3)
VincentValentine13Kinda short, but not too bad. Just a few descriptive and grammatical issues, just the normal stuff all us writers suffer from.

VincentValentine13 on January 12, 2006, 2:55:18 AM

VincentValentine13 on (Chapter: 2)
VincentValentine13Well, I'll ignore the Yuffietine factor, but I will say something.
At the beginning of this chapter, you wrote, "Cold, Dark, This would describe....etc." Now, the cold dark part was okay, but you probably couldv'e worded that next sentence, that was kinda....hmm, I don't know....not right?
Anyway, Vincent's portrayel is good, but maybe you could be a bit more descriptive in your writing. Hope this helps you, and come point out my mistakes on my story too, please!

Zell11 on December 17, 2005, 11:52:09 PM

Zell11 on (Chapter: 4)
Zell11Omg. This is so good.Plz write more.

Zell11 =^-^=

Kupo on August 22, 2005, 7:03:21 AM

Kupo on (Chapter: 4)
Kupowtf? why haven't i commented on ths!!! i've seen it before and i'm pretty sure it's on my favs (and if it's not it should be) so i have no idea why i haven't commented on it! anyway great job! this story is super awsomeness! that leon was clouds son was almost painfully obvious but maybe it was supposed to be? i was just coming here anyway to see if you'd added any chapters but no *sniffles* PLEASE WRITE MORE!

KYOSCHIC on July 30, 2005, 7:13:46 AM

KYOSCHIC on (Chapter: 4)
KYOSCHICI LIKE IT!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

Serenity89 on July 12, 2005, 8:53:23 AM

Serenity89 on (Chapter: 3)
Serenity89Ooh, Keep It Up ^_^

orangegirl on July 9, 2005, 7:24:57 AM

orangegirl on (Chapter: 3)
orangegirlexcellent! i cant wait to read the next chapter!