Midnight_Chaos

hi my friend!how are you?

whats up ^_^

I know, really, if you're going to edit the stuff out, why show it later on? And besides, I don't think any of the stuff they DO edit out will hurt anyone. I wish they'd put the unedited version on later at night or something.

I don't know how good I'll do, but I'll give the comments a try. My writing style might be part of the problem. The dialogue for sure, lol. I was never one to pay attention to scenery. But you're right.

I DO have photoshop, I just haven't had the time to learn it. I mean, I DID learn it, but that was on a Mac at school, whereas I use a PC at home, so the functions take some extra practice.

Corad, you are a genius. I read your comments, and they all make incredible sense! My description needs the most work. I used to focus on that, then I started streamlining my fics too much. I'm glad you pointed out the different things that make it easier to read, I honestly never even considered those things.

On the pics, to answer your question, YES, that MS paint thing took forever. Roughly 8 hours. It's not good enough to warrant that much time, but it's a step up from where I've been^^ I'm going to do one more version, this time hand colored with a background. Well, I'll try anyway, lol.

Ekyt's look was influenced by Kakashi, Hayate, Lee, and Shikamaru, though that reference is kind of hard to see. His personality was picked from all of those, plus Iruka, Naruto, Sasuke, and a little bit o' me, lol. I guess every fan char has that.

Thanks again for all the suggestions, I'll give them a shot starting in my next ch^^

That's homogenizing (sp) to the extreme, ridiculous! They take out the nosebleeds (Kind of stupid, really.), and they edit the language (Understandable for the target audience), and some very select scenes (Like Naruto kissing Sasuke by mistake). So it's not too bad. The manga's great, though^^

I really appreciate you checking out my fic, any criticism would be fine, it's the only way to get better ^^ Besides, I know you're not going to flame it, you've given me suggestions in the past and they've really been helpful!

I've got two pics of Ekyt up. Here's one http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-626514.html

You'll see a lot of regular char influence in him. That pic really makes me wish I was somewhat talented with photoshop -_-'

Any feedback you could give me on my pics would be really helpful too, since it's really my first time drawing anything anime-style.

hey,

just wanted to drop in and say hi and to see if anything is new with 'chu. (other than your Ripp heads) ^^

hello

Thanks MC, I'll def check out that tutorial! I created my character, and he is, I'm told, THE weirdest mix of people. I'll have a pic up soon. (Not the greatest, but better than I usually put up ^^')

I know what you mean. Around here, they've cut Naruto, but not down to G. The language is toned down, and a very few scenes are cut. It's a surprisingly good translation!

I'd really appreciate any input you have on my Naruto fic. lol, don't let the number of chapters fool you. They all tie in, but reading them individually won't throw you off the storyline! At least, that's what I tried to do, lol!

Hi MC, how's it going? I've got a new addiction- Naruto! I still can't draw though, lol! But my Naruto fic is off to a great start! Your new work looks great btw!