YunieXTidus

Hahaha. xD

I THINK DC, but I'm not sure.

Well, I read the occasional X-Men, but I preferred to watch them. And Spiderman was good, too. But not a big comic reader.

:D

Ah, cool, cool.

Were you a fan of the original X-Men cartoon series? The old, hand-drawn 90's cartoon?

Oh, I had an idea for our co-op fic. I plan to make Dan the Starfleet Security Liaison, which will annoy Odo. What will annoy Odo further is his friendship with Major Kira. What would you think about Odo losing restraint and giving Dan a good smack at some point? (There's more to it than that, but just as an overview)

Yes! I loved that! Although I liked the newer version simply because nightcrawler was so awesome. xD

Yes! That would be awesome.

Okay, while we're on that subject, what did you have in mind for our current 'episode'? Like, the main plot? Cause I can't really remember.

Yes, that's true. I loved the old stuff. The hokey voice acting, the hand-drawn comic style...the opening. It's like every guy's Satam cartoon fantasy- space flight, giant explosion, powerful guys, hot (and powerful) girls, and a kick-@$$ villain. A number of kick-@$$ villains, actually. Magneto rocks!

Cool. That's perfect, then. I can make that work.

Well, for the time being we're just doing some random episodes to establish characters and love interests. Central theme, I think, would be fighting the dominion occupation. Sound okay?

Well, I've got to go for the night. TTYL, friend.

I meant the specific plot that particular episode was taking. xD I'm not very good at getting places without directions.

Ah, sorry I missed you. I didn't get the notification email until just now. Talk to you later!

Cool, thanks ^^

Well, work has picked up. That's good and bad. It's majorly stressful on mind, body, and spirit, but the money's good enough. Greed triumphs, I guess. lol. So, I'll just say 'surviving', at any rate. How about you?

He'd shake, sweat, and be nervous as hell (just shy of throwing up, since he hates vomiting more than anything), but he'd rise to the challenge, then be completely drained afterward.

Haha, I wish I had a job. I needs money! Just midterms coming up for me, mostly. I've been wanting to get some tattoos (as I talked with you about before), but they're so expensive and mom doesn't have spare money at the moment. xD So I'm just stuck with my plain boring skin until further notice.

Another question- how do you feel about dreadlocks on a girl?

I'm gonna have a lot of fun with that. xD

I've been looking for another job, but there's just nothing out there that fits my skill set atm --'
Oh (**^! My midterms are coming up, but I've got no idea when! Crap crap crap! (panic mode)

I guess they look good on the right girl. I'm not a fan personally, though. (Shrug) They're okay.

lol, I bet. XD

I just updated Serving, by the way.

(grabs your shoulders and shakes you) CALM DOWN! It'll be okay! You're a smart cookie.

I've considered getting them. I think I could pull it off, once I grow my hair out a bit more.

Ah, I'll go check that out.

My track record for math tells a different story, believe me. Not one time have I passed a college math course on the first try. Not. One. Time.
lol, thanks for the compliment, though ^^ I appreciate it, and of course return it. It's obvious from your writing that you're very intelligent.

You probably could. On the right girl, I'm sure it would look good. so you'll pull it off just fine.

Enjoy!

Taking it easy now. Had a full day of other stuff. Just relaxing now, and loving it!

Fun! What are you doing to relax?

ehe, it sometimes is hard to find out that far back.

True.

Blah. i hate not being tired at night.

Benadryl.

I have a high tolerance to to Benadryl. It doesn't work on me and my prescribed sleep meds are out. I'm running low on my anxiety pills too. blah.

Ah. So whatcha doing, since you aren't sleeping?

Not much. Drinking vitamin Water watching M*A*S*H again. lol

Why vitamin water?

I just really like it. lol

Just fine, thanks. What's up tonight?

Listening to music and thinking about writing a bit. You?

Not much. Answering some emails, doing some homework, etc.

You know what sucks? I was just hit with two ideas for our ST fic.

1. Dan and Amy were both on Enterprise D. Holmes leaves when O'Brien does, telling Picard that he 'doesn't think he's important to the function of the Enterprise. It's too easy to get lost among that many people. I wish I'd worked with you more.'

2. Dax breaks up with Dan. He accepts a promotion and transfer to another ship as a second officer and chief of security. He later comes back and dies (or nearly dies) defending DS9 against orders.

What sucks about these is they're both depressing!

Anyway, what are you writing tonight, if I may ask?

Both depressing, and the first one is incongruous to our storyline!

Some Vice City. I just haven't felt inspired to write more on your RQ the past few days. I'm hoping this coming week I'll get out of this rut and finish it up.

Yeah, I was thinking of the alternate universe route at some point. Not sure why this popped up. Probably because I could see Holmes feeling that way. It's gotta be hard to crack the starting line-up on a crew that huge!

It's all good. Not pressuring; only asking out of conversation. No need to explain. Go, write. Writewritewritewrite! (Dinozzo style persuasion. lol)

Oh, if it was Dinozzo style persuasion, I'd be flat on my back. ;)

lmao. I'm not that good at impressions, unfortunately.

Now, if it was Ziva-style persuasion you were using, it would be ME on my back! lmao. Or Abby, too, for that matter...

(shakes self back to reality).

I think THAT impersonation would be pretty easy to do. xD

Or any girl with mild confidence. ;P

Well, maybe so. lol.

Yeah, true. Lol. But Ziva with the whole knife thing...that's kinda hot. (And that is from the same episode as Tony's writewritewritewritewrite thing)

I don't think I've seen that ep.

It's the one where they're trying to find that Navy Lt. in a car trunk. The group finds these two kids using her cell phone. Ziva takes the phone after the guy says he's talking ot his gf, and giggles, saying 'don't touch me there!'.

Oh! I remember that one. Just not the 'writewritewrite' bit.

Ah. That part comes when Tony is trying to talk to the two kids with the phone. He puts the speaker on his phone on and walks away. They mention a guy name 'Gecks'. Tony comes back and tells them to 'write. write----'.

Hmm. I'll need to re-watch that. xD

So, sup?

Btw why do I think of Dan when I see this?

http://www.advancedanime.com/pictures/normal_train03_1.jpg

You should. It's a good episode ^^

Not much. Just finished homework; still answering this one email. Man, it's long!

lol, I see it, too! The stern look and the trenchcoat!

I remember that much. I love Ziva.

Email for what?

xD Yeah! Glad I'm not nuts.

lol, I did that to one of my friends once. He was on the phone with either his gf or another male friend. Either way, they didn't know who I was, so I shouted out in a rich baritone 'hey, don't touch me there!'. I guess my buddy got razzed pretty good for that. lol. I owed him one.

It's from a friend I don't see very often. When we catch up, it tends to be lengthy. like 3000 words plus.

No, you're as sane as anyone else. Except me. I'm nuts. XD

Hahaha. See, if it was me, I'd be like, "that feels soooo goood," in a sensuous voice. xD "Rich baritone"? Is that not your normal voice?

lol, I didn't think about that. Next time, next time.

Well, I made my voice extra deep. My voice is average pitch. I just made it sound extra deep and masculine. lol.

See, now I'm curious. xD

So, you, Kiba, and me get together for a photoshoot. You guys in your own specialty gear, and i'll photograph! What say you?

Celtic is always amazing. I could listen to it all day. In fact I have about three hours of it on my Phone, along with Classical and Electronica music in about as equal of parts. lol

Nice. You should check out "erutan". You have to order the cd cause she doesn't do digital, but she has a preview of each song in a YouTube video on her channel. Look up "erutan album", and it should be one of the first ones.

I have heard those before. One of my friends has the CD. I want it, but couldn't remember the name. I wants!

The album is Raindancer. I love that cd so much.

A música é fermoso. Eu amo tanto.

I totally agree!

Lol. You actually understood me? Nice.

No clue what language it was though.

It's Gaelic. Lol. How did you know what it meant?

Google translate is a beautiful thing. How do you know Gaelic?

Little trick of the Religious trade. A lot of spells and such are Gaelic. I know a bit of Gaelic, Babylonian and can write Theban, Angelic, Malachim.

I see. That's really cool. I have a possible slight Gaelic ancestry, so that always perks my ears up.

Well. I'm in there nao. Lol. Anyway, 2:20pm here. Same timezone as NG.

Oh, only 1 hour ahead. I thought it was loads more for some reason.

Wait, you're in the shower right now and messaging me? How'd you swing that?

Ah I see. I have a smartphone too, but I'd drop it xD

You can send me your story now if you like.

Lol. I never have dropped it. Steady hands. Medic ya know. Anyway, sure. Once I'm out I'll hop on the compy and let ya see.

Once you get out of the bath obviously xD

Lol yeah, bad idea. XD

Ok I'll check it out.

Thanks. Remember. it's tweaks. Mostly vocab increases and getting rid of non dialog cliches. *in the dialog i am using real speak rather than Grammatically correct English* Anyway, also hoping to give deeper psychoanalysis to the characters.

Yes I can see a major improvement. My only advice is to use ellipses instead of commas in this part.

“Wait for it... five... four... three... two... one... and now.”

It makes the reader pause, so your meaning comes across better. But yeah, I like the changes.

I forgot to change those back actually. The proofreader I am using doens't recognize them and instead tries to say it is multiple end punctuation. Anyway, in the finished bit it will be corrected.