SasuShio Files
Submitted January 21, 2011 Updated January 9, 2013 Status Incomplete | This story is about Sasuke, and Shiori, my oc. So if anyone even reads this, honestly tell me what you think! Give me some feedback! If you don't like canon/oc pairings that's fine, but don't flame. Criticism is WELCOME! I can take it! Trust me!
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Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Characters (OC's) |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Warm Again
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 16, 2013
Word count: 993 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 341
Chapter 2 - For Future Reference
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 340 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 353
Chapter 3 - Introductions
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 556 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 332
Chapter 4 - Round One
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 542 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 323
Chapter 5 - Wonder
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 307 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 345
Chapter 6 - Cardiac Arrest
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 906 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 346
Chapter 7 - Forgiveness
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 771 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 362
Chapter 8 - Past
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 1348 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 367
Chapter 9 - Atattchment
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 340 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 503
Chapter 10 - Names
Submitted: January 24, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 455 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 489
Chapter 11 - Present
Submitted: February 17, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 524 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 333
Chapter 12 - Encounter
Submitted: March 29, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 394 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 328
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PapayaKat on April 3, 2011, 4:09:27 AM
SatomiTakashida on April 21, 2011, 7:49:15 AM
Well I'm sorry you feel that way xDBut I hope we can get along.
Thank you for your lovely comment<3
nextguardian on February 18, 2011, 8:35:17 AM
Good description and drama here. The characters interaction is done very well.SatomiTakashida on March 28, 2011, 11:55:15 AM
Thank you so much for your encouragement! Although now that I reread this I see so many mistakes in my writing. I can't believe you actually like this. -u-;nextguardian on January 28, 2011, 8:25:25 AM
Very nice; good job sustaining the drama here. I also really liked the use of the loan word. Good choice :)nextguardian on January 27, 2011, 11:01:17 AM
I really like the subtle romantic elements you put in. The tone of her voice, her eyes, etc. Another nicely done chapter.nextguardian on January 26, 2011, 4:10:23 PM
I think that was the best description of the physical characteristics of the Sharingan I've ever read. Seems weird to point out, but that stuck out to me, for some reason.Shiori has a really cool jutsu, too, for the record.
Good chapter.
nextguardian on January 24, 2011, 1:25:41 PM
I like Sasuke's thought process. Good observations while keeping true to his personality. Good work.nextguardian on January 23, 2011, 12:57:39 PM
Very nice start here. You've got some good description in there. I like that you explained the meaning behind the names at the end. That's a good move imho.SatomiTakashida on January 24, 2011, 11:05:03 AM
Thank you very much!:) Author notes ftw.nextguardian on January 23, 2011, 12:58:21 PM
A tad short, but has some nice content.