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SasuShio Files

This story is about Sasuke, and Shiori, my oc. So if anyone even reads this, honestly tell me what you think! Give me some feedback! If you don't like canon/oc pairings that's fine, but don't flame.
Criticism is WELCOME! I can take it! Trust me!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Warm Again
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 16, 2013
Word count: 993 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 241

Chapter 2 - For Future Reference
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 340 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 244

Chapter 3 - Introductions
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 556 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 233

Chapter 4 - Round One
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 542 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 227

Chapter 5 - Wonder
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 307 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 241

Chapter 6 - Cardiac Arrest
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 906 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 241

Chapter 7 - Forgiveness
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 771 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 257

Chapter 8 - Past
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 1348 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 248

Chapter 9 - Atattchment
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 340 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 396

Chapter 10 - Names
Submitted: January 24, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 455 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 377

Chapter 11 - Present
Submitted: February 17, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 524 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 234

Chapter 12 - Encounter
Submitted: March 29, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2013
Word count: 394 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 213

Comments

Comments (11)

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PapayaKat on April 3, 2011, 4:09:27 AM

PapayaKat on (Chapter: index)
PapayaKatI hate CanonxOC pairings.

Hate.

Them.

With a burning passion.

hatehatehatehatehatehatehatehatehatehate


But I still think this is very well written. c:

SatomiTakashida on April 21, 2011, 7:49:15 AM

SatomiTakashida on (Chapter: index)
SatomiTakashidaWell I'm sorry you feel that way xD
But I hope we can get along.

Thank you for your lovely comment<3

nextguardian on February 18, 2011, 8:35:17 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 7)
nextguardianGood description and drama here. The characters interaction is done very well.

SatomiTakashida on March 28, 2011, 11:55:15 AM

SatomiTakashida on (Chapter: 7)
SatomiTakashidaThank you so much for your encouragement! Although now that I reread this I see so many mistakes in my writing. I can't believe you actually like this. -u-;

nextguardian on January 28, 2011, 8:25:25 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 6)
nextguardianVery nice; good job sustaining the drama here. I also really liked the use of the loan word. Good choice :)

nextguardian on January 27, 2011, 11:01:17 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 5)
nextguardianI really like the subtle romantic elements you put in. The tone of her voice, her eyes, etc. Another nicely done chapter.

nextguardian on January 26, 2011, 4:10:23 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 4)
nextguardianI think that was the best description of the physical characteristics of the Sharingan I've ever read. Seems weird to point out, but that stuck out to me, for some reason.
Shiori has a really cool jutsu, too, for the record.
Good chapter.

nextguardian on January 24, 2011, 1:25:41 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 3)
nextguardianI like Sasuke's thought process. Good observations while keeping true to his personality. Good work.

nextguardian on January 23, 2011, 12:57:39 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 1)
nextguardianVery nice start here. You've got some good description in there. I like that you explained the meaning behind the names at the end. That's a good move imho.

SatomiTakashida on January 24, 2011, 11:05:03 AM

SatomiTakashida on (Chapter: 1)
SatomiTakashidaThank you very much!:) Author notes ftw.

nextguardian on January 23, 2011, 12:58:21 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 2)
nextguardianA tad short, but has some nice content.