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Final Distance Book 3: Broken

The epic adventures continue!.

Book 1: Revolution
Book 2: Dust to Dust
Book 3: Broken
Book 4: Break Out

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Bright Lights That Cast A Shadow
Submitted: October 16, 2008 • Updated: October 16, 2008
Word count: 241 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 350

Chapter 2 - Extended Union
Submitted: October 19, 2008 • Updated: October 19, 2008
Word count: 355 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 327

Chapter 3 - Mama We're All Full Of Lies
Submitted: October 25, 2008 • Updated: October 25, 2008
Word count: 305 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 329

Chapter 4 - Greater Evils
Submitted: October 29, 2008 • Updated: October 29, 2008
Word count: 290 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 320

Chapter 5 - Come And Take Me Away
Submitted: November 1, 2008 • Updated: November 1, 2008
Word count: 393 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 324

Chapter 6 - Infatuation
Submitted: November 1, 2008 • Updated: November 1, 2008
Word count: 341 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 304

Chapter 7 - Villian
Submitted: November 4, 2008 • Updated: November 4, 2008
Word count: 420 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 309

Chapter 8 - Defiance
Submitted: November 4, 2008 • Updated: November 4, 2008
Word count: 279 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 340

Chapter 9 - Reporting Back To Camp
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 10, 2008
Word count: 203 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 326

Chapter 10 - Kits
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 10, 2008
Word count: 163 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 355

Chapter 11 - News From The Enemy
Submitted: November 12, 2008 • Updated: November 12, 2008
Word count: 325 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 314

Chapter 12 - Mystery Of His Past
Submitted: November 14, 2008 • Updated: November 14, 2008
Word count: 318 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 297

Chapter 13 - Disturbia
Submitted: November 17, 2008 • Updated: November 17, 2008
Word count: 341 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 297

Chapter 14 - One Girl Revolution
Submitted: November 26, 2008 • Updated: November 26, 2008
Word count: 209 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 300

Chapter 15 - 2 Days Later
Submitted: December 6, 2008 • Updated: December 6, 2008
Word count: 304 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 298

Chapter 16 - Second Thoughts
Submitted: December 21, 2008 • Updated: December 27, 2008
Word count: 287 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 268

Chapter 17 - New Recuits
Submitted: December 27, 2008 • Updated: December 27, 2008
Word count: 235 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 300

Chapter 18 - Blood Is In My Blood
Submitted: December 29, 2008 • Updated: December 29, 2008
Word count: 153 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 298

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icestorm on January 2, 2009, 6:00:01 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 18)
icestormlol nice propehsey!

icestorm on January 2, 2009, 5:58:43 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 17)
icestormRobinstream is coming home? ^^

icestorm on December 27, 2008, 12:22:51 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 16)
icestormAWESOME!!

icestorm on December 25, 2008, 8:11:21 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 16)
icestormokay! How can I inspire you to write more? XD

desertbreeze on December 26, 2008, 1:12:38 AM

desertbreeze on (Chapter: 16)
desertbreezeI promise I'll get more up soon! I just got distracted with a Roleplay I'm doing on YouTube

icestorm on December 6, 2008, 11:01:32 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 15)
icestormsave the kits! I now HATE Neonbeam!

kaitlin_mckitrick on November 29, 2008, 3:29:03 AM

kaitlin_mckitrick on (Chapter: 14)
kaitlin_mckitrickYay! Jayfeather!

icestorm on November 27, 2008, 12:00:46 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 14)
icestormooh! Cool prophesy! Your good at making them!!

icestorm on November 17, 2008, 6:39:56 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 13)
icestormlol Dusty is not strong at the moment! XD

icestorm on November 14, 2008, 11:26:33 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 12)
icestormNOOOOO!!! Dusty you...you RRRRRRR!!!!

icestorm on November 12, 2008, 6:32:18 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 11)
icestormKill Danger? His own mate?! He is PURE EVIL!!!

ginathehedgehog on November 12, 2008, 4:20:21 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 10)
ginathehedgehogAwww, so sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter!

ginathehedgehog on November 12, 2008, 4:19:18 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 9)
ginathehedgehogDanger had her kits! SQUEE!

Go Ferret in BloodClan, I hope she an Bandit will get together X3

ginathehedgehog on November 12, 2008, 4:17:42 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 8)
ginathehedgehogOnestar ish mean D:

I hope Ferret gets an awesome Warrior name! =D

ginathehedgehog on November 12, 2008, 4:15:53 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 7)
ginathehedgehogI love the last line! Awesome job! :D

ginathehedgehog on November 12, 2008, 4:13:14 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 6)
ginathehedgehogAwww, FerretpawxBandit = <3

X3

ginathehedgehog on November 12, 2008, 4:10:37 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 5)
ginathehedgehogI feel so sorry for Danger!

ginathehedgehog on November 12, 2008, 4:08:27 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 4)
ginathehedgehogAwww, Ferretpaw is adorable! =3

icestorm on November 10, 2008, 8:54:49 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 10)
icestormCUTE names!!!

desertbreeze on November 10, 2008, 11:00:00 AM

desertbreeze on (Chapter: 10)
desertbreezeThanx! Originally it was just gonna be Tritium but then I decided he need some siblings XD

icestorm on November 10, 2008, 8:53:59 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 9)
icestormOoh Danger had her kits!!

icestorm on November 4, 2008, 10:10:54 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 8)
icestormYAY!! Go Ferret, she is brave! ^-^

icestorm on November 4, 2008, 9:42:17 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 7)
icestormSTUPID Dusty folwers! hah, they deserved to die!! =D Nice Chapter, your storie is just SOOO good!!

desertbreeze on November 4, 2008, 9:56:01 AM

desertbreeze on (Chapter: 7)
desertbreezeThanks ^^ I appreciate your feedback!

icestorm on November 1, 2008, 10:36:22 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 5)
icestormaww poor Danger!

icestorm on November 1, 2008, 10:35:59 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 6)
icestormNOOOOOOOOOOO, i just HATE HATE HATE that...that Dusty!!!

icestorm on October 29, 2008, 7:16:41 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 4)
icestormaww! Ferretpaw sounds cute!! ^-^

desertbreeze on October 29, 2008, 7:26:51 AM

desertbreeze on (Chapter: 4)
desertbreezeshe is! I designed her about 2 years ago when I first started reading warriors LOL I'll post a pic of her soon

icestorm on October 30, 2008, 8:51:51 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormcool! YAY!!

icestorm on October 25, 2008, 10:53:41 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 3)
icestormDanger must be mad she wants to murder Dusty now, i bet! XD


MWAHAHA!!! If i was Frozenheart i would join BloodClan and get Dusty's trust, then kill him! But its probobly not as simple as that O_O

ginathehedgehog on October 25, 2008, 12:03:41 PM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 3)
ginathehedgehogIntense chapter! I feel sorry for Danger and Flare, they must feel heartbroken!

ginathehedgehog on October 24, 2008, 7:26:08 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 2)
ginathehedgehogAwesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!

ginathehedgehog on October 24, 2008, 7:23:57 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
ginathehedgehogGrrr, I hate Dusty now! XD

EternalDarknessWaitsForDawn on October 22, 2008, 8:15:32 AM

EternalDarknessWaitsForDawn on (Chapter: 2)
EternalDarknessWaitsForDawnWow!

icestorm on October 19, 2008, 10:01:42 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 2)
icestormWOW!! This is very interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter!

icestorm on October 19, 2008, 9:59:55 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
icestormO_O Dusty ish EVILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL