Naruto: the Middle Ages!
Submitted July 1, 2007 Updated September 28, 2007 Status Complete | While cleaning out her attic,Sakura finds a beautifully encrusted bracelet.It has the Konoha symbol designed with emeralds and it has an inscription on it:To my beautiful Cherry Blossom with love yourOnyx Knight.What happened when she put it on her wrist?
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: July 1, 2007 • Updated: July 1, 2007
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Chapter 2 - chapter 2
Submitted: July 2, 2007 • Updated: July 2, 2007
Word count: 1204 • Size: 6k • Comments: 21 • views: 660
Chapter 3 - chapter 3
Submitted: July 4, 2007 • Updated: July 4, 2007
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Chapter 4 - chapter 4
Submitted: July 7, 2007 • Updated: July 7, 2007
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Chapter 5 - chapter 5
Submitted: July 12, 2007 • Updated: July 12, 2007
Word count: 1227 • Size: 6k • Comments: 19 • views: 560
Chapter 6 - chapter 6
Submitted: July 18, 2007 • Updated: July 18, 2007
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Chapter 7 - chapter 7
Submitted: July 23, 2007 • Updated: July 23, 2007
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Chapter 8 - chapter 8
Submitted: July 28, 2007 • Updated: July 28, 2007
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Chapter 9 - chapter 9
Submitted: August 3, 2007 • Updated: August 3, 2007
Word count: 1910 • Size: 10k • Comments: 17 • views: 560
Chapter 10 - chapter 10
Submitted: August 7, 2007 • Updated: August 7, 2007
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Chapter 11 - chapter 11
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
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Chapter 12 - chapter 12
Submitted: August 15, 2007 • Updated: August 15, 2007
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Chapter 13 - chapter 13
Submitted: August 23, 2007 • Updated: August 23, 2007
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Chapter 14 - chapter 14
Submitted: September 3, 2007 • Updated: September 3, 2007
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Chapter 15 - chapter 15
Submitted: September 8, 2007 • Updated: September 8, 2007
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Chapter 16 - chapter 16
Submitted: September 14, 2007 • Updated: September 14, 2007
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Chapter 17 - chapter 17
Submitted: September 21, 2007 • Updated: September 21, 2007
Word count: 1196 • Size: 6k • Comments: 14 • views: 502
Chapter 18 - chapter 18
Submitted: September 28, 2007 • Updated: September 28, 2007
Word count: 1883 • Size: 9k • Comments: 35 • views: 699
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KonanxItachi on July 9, 2009, 5:43:27 PM
KonanxItachi on (Chapter: 18)
omg i knew wat was in the bag! lol loved it even though im an anti sasusaku i loved it! great job!!!!winxgirl21 on July 26, 2009, 8:17:46 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
thanks! it really means a lot to hear that from someone who's anti-sasusaku! lol. =)Forestdahedgehog on October 14, 2008, 6:49:03 AM
Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
pretty awsum XD lolwinxgirl21 on October 15, 2008, 6:28:13 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
thanks =)Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on June 2, 2008, 8:16:40 AM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 18)
Loved it! The whole story was brilliant, i read it all in one go, i was hooked so bad!winxgirl21 on June 2, 2008, 8:20:27 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
I'm so glad to hear that! =)cloudaeris on April 20, 2008, 10:18:17 AM
cloudaeris on (Chapter: index)
I had never gotta a chance to read this and i just did....AND I LOVE IT! You are amazing.winxgirl21 on April 20, 2008, 11:01:51 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
thanks so much! =)Kwazi on April 8, 2008, 5:52:37 PM
Kwazi on (Chapter: index)
omg! this was story was so great!!!!!!I really love it!!!
winxgirl21 on April 12, 2008, 1:15:51 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
thanks so much! *hugs you*PinkAngel101 on November 13, 2007, 3:12:33 AM
PinkAngel101 on (Chapter: 18)
AWWW IT OVER .... IT ...WAS... RAD!!!!!!!winxgirl21 on November 13, 2007, 8:37:05 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
Thanks!! ^-^kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 1:52:01 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 18)
omg lol my inner sakura wud deffently faint aaaaaa[faint]winxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 11:18:56 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
^-^ Thanks so much for reviewing the story!kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 1:43:10 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 17)
lol narutos dead is wat my inner sakura is thinkinwinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 11:18:01 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
haha, Sasuke's gonna burn him to a crisp. ^-^kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 1:35:06 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 16)
lol soooo romanticwinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 11:16:15 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
^-^kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 1:29:02 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 15)
lol my inner ino is saying i knew sometin was diffrentwinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 11:06:13 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
haha, ya, Ino would know.kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 1:18:39 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 14)
lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol my inner sakuras curiouswinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 11:04:37 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
^-^kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 1:09:36 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 13)
omg my inner sakuras wonderin how the hell am i going to do thiswinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 10:44:34 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 13)
ya, it is tough on Sakura....kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 1:02:11 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 12)
omg omg omg omg omg omg soooooooooooo uncool me and my inner sakura + saskue
winxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 10:42:08 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 12)
...ya, it is kinda...kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 12:53:11 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 11)
oooooooo {k let me finish}winxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 10:38:41 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
kks.kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 12:51:35 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 10)
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamy inner sakuras aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaingwinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 10:37:03 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
lol. ^-^kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 12:43:01 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 9)
ooo saskue aaaaa SOOOO cute me and my inner sakura shift into dream modewinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 10:35:43 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 9)
^-^kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 12:27:26 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 8)
my inner sakura is yell shut up stupid kakashiewinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 10:34:38 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
^-^ kakashi can be annoying at times...kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 12:11:11 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 7)
lol my innber sakuras screaming im gonna mrry a crazy guywinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 10:33:11 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 7)
lolz.kogalover2013 on November 8, 2007, 12:03:17 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 6)
k finished oooooo my inner sakura is sacared to start a warwinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 9:19:22 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 6)
ya...kogalover2013 on November 7, 2007, 12:03:44 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 6)
gaara scars me k let me finishwinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 9:10:04 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 6)
ya, he can be scary. Ok then! ^-^kogalover2013 on November 7, 2007, 11:52:33 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 5)
lollol my inner peps are screamingwinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 9:04:12 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 5)
^-^kogalover2013 on November 7, 2007, 11:39:58 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 4)
lol gaaras a prince my inner sakura likes that saskae & saskue likes herwinxgirl21 on November 8, 2007, 9:03:28 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
^-^kogalover2013 on November 6, 2007, 8:33:39 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 3)
lol my inner sakura is thinking the past as well as the present if u know wat dat meanswinxgirl21 on November 6, 2007, 8:40:55 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
lolz, ya, i think i do.kogalover2013 on November 6, 2007, 2:03:45 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 2)
ooooooooo excitng MY inner sakura is saying yes we use to be royalwinxgirl21 on November 6, 2007, 5:51:18 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
yupz. ^-^winxgirl21 on November 6, 2007, 5:50:59 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
yupz. ^-^kogalover2013 on November 5, 2007, 11:54:53 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 1)
cooleo my inner sakuras daydreaming with wonderwinxgirl21 on November 6, 2007, 5:40:05 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
^-^GreyPichu on October 13, 2007, 12:45:02 AM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 18)
OMG!i think i was crying for the entire second half of the stroy!^^IT WAS SO AWESOME!!!btw,can't wait for Konoha High:The Homecomeing to be updated!winxgirl21 on October 13, 2007, 12:53:12 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
Thanks so much! I'm actually trying to work on the next chapter for taht, now. I'm having some difficulties with make it go the way i want, though. lolz.GreyPichu on October 12, 2007, 11:21:18 PM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 11)
OMG!...i love this story SO much.^^winxgirl21 on October 12, 2007, 11:32:33 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
Thanks so much! ^-^NightWing101 on October 5, 2007, 5:43:18 AM
NightWing101 on (Chapter: 18)
That was wonderful!!!!!winxgirl21 on October 5, 2007, 7:22:24 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
thanks bunches! ^-^PinkAngel101 on October 5, 2007, 5:15:50 AM
PinkAngel101 on (Chapter: 18)
O FUDGE ITS OVER....... IT WAS A AEWSOME STORY!!winxgirl21 on October 5, 2007, 7:20:51 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
thanks so much!sasukeXsakuraforever on October 2, 2007, 11:31:56 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 18)
BEAUTIFUL!! SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL! What a way to end a lovely story, VERY GOOD JOB!!! *gives you the Gai and Lee thumbs up as my teeth sparkle*winxgirl21 on October 3, 2007, 3:39:35 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
Thanks so much! And thanks for always reviewing it! ^-^kagome99 on October 1, 2007, 5:44:13 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: 18)
AHHHHHHHHHHH!SO ADORABLE!!I LUVED THE WHOLE ENTIRE THING.TT I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER!!!!!!!!!!
winxgirl21 on October 1, 2007, 7:37:36 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
Thanks so much! And thanks for always giving me positive reviews! Ya, it's sad taht it's over...AlleyCat17 on September 30, 2007, 1:30:29 AM
AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 18)
wow awesome chapter and awesome story.and i so loved the last chapter i so saw it coming when he gave her the bracele.now if you don't mind i got to go back to crying my eyes out.*cry's out*winxgirl21 on September 30, 2007, 4:50:30 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
thanks so much for reviewing for the entire thing! ^-^ And I'm crying too...TT-TT i can't believe it's over. I'm just glad that everyone has liked it so much.rffraff05 on September 29, 2007, 1:17:29 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 18)
waaaaahhhh!!! imsosaditsoverwaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!good ending!!
winxgirl21 on September 29, 2007, 2:01:40 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
I',m sad it's over, too. :(and thanks! ^-^
Fullmetalchibi on September 28, 2007, 10:51:23 PM
Fullmetalchibi on (Chapter: 18)
Yay! Good chapter! :Dwinxgirl21 on September 29, 2007, 12:00:16 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
thanks ^-^waterbender00 on September 28, 2007, 1:36:43 PM
waterbender00 on (Chapter: 18)
I Love it. But its over!!!!!!!!!! *cries* I actually saw the ending coming. Sasuke putting the bracelet on the wrist being their ride home. LOved it SASUSAKU RULZZ
winxgirl21 on September 28, 2007, 11:55:35 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
thanks ^-^ Ya, i've had that ending planned out for a very long time. lolz.SasukesChick on September 28, 2007, 1:02:37 PM
SasukesChick on (Chapter: 18)
OMG! SO AWESOMENESSES!!!!! IM SAD IT OVER, BUT I LOVED THE ENDING! OMG! THIS SHOULD B THE NEXT NARUTO MOVIE!!winxgirl21 on September 28, 2007, 11:53:20 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
wow, thanks! ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on September 28, 2007, 12:36:01 PM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 18)
TTTT^^TTTTAwsome endingTT^^TT i love this.yay^^60000 bags of pocky for you^^winxgirl21 on September 28, 2007, 11:52:03 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
thanks so much! And thanks for always reviewing this story! ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on September 29, 2007, 2:15:55 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
your stories make me happy^^winxgirl21 on September 29, 2007, 2:00:28 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
thanks! ^-^gaaralover1 on September 28, 2007, 11:31:30 AM
gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 18)
*Cry* WAAAAAAahHHH!!!! >< It's so sweet!!! I'm crying.... *sniffle* Caleb! ( My boyfriend) * Hugs*winxgirl21 on September 28, 2007, 11:51:05 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
*hands tissues* I think i might cry now that it's over...Thanks for reviewing.zerotimberwolf on September 28, 2007, 8:53:25 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 18)
the last chapter is always the bestwinxgirl21 on September 28, 2007, 9:01:22 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
thanks ^-^kagome99 on September 24, 2007, 7:04:45 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: 17)
YAY!CAN'T WAIT!I'VE BEEN HYPER ALL DAY AND EVEN GOT IN TROUBLE FOR TALKING THROUGH A STUPID VIDEO AND HAD LUNCH DETENTION.IT WAS ACTUALLY REALLY FUN!PEACE LOVE AND A SNICKERS BAR.
winxgirl21 on September 24, 2007, 7:09:41 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
Lunch detention? What's that? is it like detention during lunch? (sorry, we never really had lunch detention...my middle school was really small, and they didn't really do much more than take away recess. And my highschool just hands out detentions for tuesdays and thrusdays, or saturday if you're really bad....) yay, snickers bar! lolz ^-^
kagome99 on September 26, 2007, 4:44:49 AM
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at our school,lunch detention means you have incomplete and have go get your lunch and go back to that teacher's classroom and eat there or,you get in trouble in the lunch room and have to get your lunch and eat it up on the stage in silence.no one is alouded to talk up there or you get a referral(spell?).i actually liked it.YAY ME!
winxgirl21 on September 26, 2007, 6:39:04 AM
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ah,. We used to have lunch at my middle school. You had to sit in complete silence or sit by the vafeteria lady, and if you talked, recess got taken away...>.< Now we just have someone making sure we don't kill each other in the cafeteria, but other than that, we can do whatever we want. Well, if we break the school rules we get in trouble. But I don't think anyone's taht stupid, because the teachers eat in a room taht's off our cafeteria. They'd probably know really quickly...lolz. So did you have to go sit in a teachers clas room? We've done taht before, but i think it was because my friend was really upset or something and the teacher wanted us to stay up there with her while she ate...
kagome99 on September 27, 2007, 4:46:18 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
no but last year i did.there was like 3 classes in there.since im such a "model student",i got leave early.this time i was up on the stage.
winxgirl21 on September 27, 2007, 6:00:01 AM
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ah. lolz. 'model student'? that sounds like something my teachers would end up doign too...Hmm, we don't have a stage in our cafeteria...they probably think we'd trash it, which is right. my middle school did, though, and so did my elementary school...ambersaotome on September 22, 2007, 2:34:15 AM
ambersaotome on (Chapter: 4)
and i thought it was shikamaru XDwinxgirl21 on September 22, 2007, 12:51:20 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
lolz. ^-^ambersaotome on September 22, 2007, 2:31:05 AM
ambersaotome on (Chapter: 3)
I THOUGHT IT WAS SHIKAMARUwinxgirl21 on September 22, 2007, 12:49:31 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
really?Symphoniaprincess101 on September 22, 2007, 2:19:32 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 17)
OMG*SQWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*Awsome^^*2 bags of strawberry pocky*^^winxgirl21 on September 22, 2007, 12:47:46 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
yay! thankies! *eats pocky*rffraff05 on September 21, 2007, 12:51:42 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 17)
Just like Naruto to pull a prank during a seroius time! i can't wait for the last chapter!winxgirl21 on September 22, 2007, 12:45:38 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
ya, I know. lolz ^-^gaaralover1 on September 21, 2007, 12:35:53 PM
gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 17)
COOL!!! MORE MORE MORE!!1winxgirl21 on September 22, 2007, 12:41:42 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
lolz, I should update next friday, hopefully. ^-^zerotimberwolf on September 21, 2007, 12:14:27 PM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 17)
of course naruto pulled the prank, would you expect anything less. LMAOwinxgirl21 on September 22, 2007, 12:39:03 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
Ya, i know. lolz ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on September 21, 2007, 11:53:22 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 17)
lolz! Nice prank Naruto! xD haha! and ZOMG and uproar already?! Dang, hurry up and get out of there you guys!! Please continue soon, It's getting very exciting!!winxgirl21 on September 22, 2007, 12:34:11 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
Thanks! Ya, I can totally see Naruto doing something like that...especially during such a stressful time...lolz. ^-^uchihacrimson on September 20, 2007, 1:59:33 AM
uchihacrimson on (Chapter: 16)
OMFG NO,.. COME ON UPDATE DANGIT T.T;; It's getting so damn goooooodddd~ x.x;;winxgirl21 on September 20, 2007, 5:49:29 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
I'm going to update tomorrow night. ^-^ Just hold out a litle longer, ok? lolz.Symphoniaprincess101 on September 21, 2007, 6:07:15 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
yayness^^winxgirl21 on September 21, 2007, 6:09:15 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
I just have to put a few finsihing touches on this chapter, and finish up my Konoha High the Homecoming chapter.shikamaru66 on September 19, 2007, 10:41:09 AM
shikamaru66 on (Chapter: index)
sickwinxgirl21 on September 20, 2007, 5:48:03 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
huh? ?_?PinkAngel101 on September 18, 2007, 11:44:37 PM
PinkAngel101 on (Chapter: 16)
OMGOMGwinxgirl21 on September 19, 2007, 6:10:06 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
is that a good omg, or a bad omg? lolz.Symphoniaprincess101 on September 21, 2007, 6:08:05 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
it's a good "omg" i can tell^^winxgirl21 on September 21, 2007, 6:10:02 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
taht's good. I can't tell, lolz.kagome99 on September 18, 2007, 5:13:01 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: 16)
AHHHHH!Why does it have to end so soon.i just luv it!can't wait to find out what happens next!
PEACE,LOVE,AND A SNICKERS BAR!
winxgirl21 on September 18, 2007, 7:33:53 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
I know...it really upsets me that it's so close to ending...i've had so much fun writing it...zerotimberwolf on September 16, 2007, 8:02:34 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 16)
awesome stuff too bad there is only a couple chapters leftwinxgirl21 on September 16, 2007, 8:15:30 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
ya, i've had so much fun writing it, i can't believe it's almost over...>.<zerotimberwolf on September 17, 2007, 5:14:52 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: index)
nither can I :(winxgirl21 on September 17, 2007, 6:59:43 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
it's crazy...hopefully I'll be able to do something else with this story...not really a sequel, but maybe a spin off...i'm not quite sure yet...zerotimberwolf on September 18, 2007, 8:53:16 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: index)
go 4 itwinxgirl21 on September 19, 2007, 6:12:15 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
I'm goig to try when everything's a little less hectic, or i'm really bored, lolz. ^-^digimonlover06 on September 16, 2007, 5:01:47 AM
digimonlover06 on (Chapter: 16)
OMG I want to know what happens next!!!!winxgirl21 on September 16, 2007, 7:42:44 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
It should be up next friday evening. ^-^ I'm trying to update every friday, since i'm busy with school and such. It's my new goal. ^-^SasukesChick on September 16, 2007, 4:52:59 AM
SasukesChick on (Chapter: 16)
nice only 2 more chapts left!? wowwinxgirl21 on September 16, 2007, 7:38:51 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
ya, i can't believe how quickly it's flown by...>.<gaaralover1 on September 15, 2007, 9:13:58 AM
gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 16)
HURRY UP!! Nice signal though...winxgirl21 on September 16, 2007, 1:51:48 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
Thanks. I should update next Friday. i'm trying to make my goal an update every Friday night, since s chool's started up, and I have a lot of projects in the next few months...>.<sasukeXsakuraforever on September 14, 2007, 1:07:51 PM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 16)
AWWW! So pretty, and very nice signal! Pink petals its sooooo cute!!! :3 Awesome, I can't wait to read whats happening next when they attempt to escape!!! Yaywinxgirl21 on September 14, 2007, 11:48:41 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
thanks! Yesh, pink petals are so very prettyful. ^-^AnimeAngel87 on September 14, 2007, 10:27:15 AM
AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: index)
:o DamnI Missed This Many Chappies?
winxgirl21 on September 14, 2007, 11:47:24 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
ya, lolz. ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on September 14, 2007, 9:50:44 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 16)
Awsomeness major that's it*gives u a bag of strawberry pocky*^^winxgirl21 on September 14, 2007, 11:46:10 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
Thanks! Yummy! Strawberry pocky! ^o^xxYaoiNinjaGirlxx on September 14, 2007, 9:07:04 AM
xxYaoiNinjaGirlxx on (Chapter: 16)
*grabs a bowl of popcorn and sit in front of the computer*winxgirl21 on September 14, 2007, 11:45:15 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
lolz, thanks for reviewing. ^-^rffraff05 on September 14, 2007, 8:50:39 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 16)
YAY ultra goodness! i cannot wait for the next chapter!!!*sits and waits*
winxgirl21 on September 14, 2007, 8:55:04 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
lolz, you might not want to sit there that long! I still haven't finished my chemistry report yet...>.< =P and then i have some questions that are due for my teacher on monday...why do teachers do this to us? it's crazy...*sigh* ok, my mini-rant is over. ^-^kagome99 on September 11, 2007, 4:52:45 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: 15)
YAY!!!!I LUVED IT!!!CAN'T WAIT FOR THE GREAT ESCAPE!!!
CUPCAKES TASTE GOOD!!!!!
winxgirl21 on September 11, 2007, 6:18:30 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
thanks! I'm having fun planning out the escape. Hopefully it'll turn out the way that i want it to. ^-^ Cupcakes are good! ^-^
kagome99 on September 11, 2007, 6:28:49 AM
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SO IS ICE-CREAM!!!!winxgirl21 on September 11, 2007, 6:31:37 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
yes! Especially cookie doug ice cream! yummy!kagome99 on September 11, 2007, 6:42:08 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
you're right!that's the best.so is just cookie dough.winxgirl21 on September 11, 2007, 6:51:10 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
yes! i love eating just cookie dough!kagome99 on September 12, 2007, 5:11:31 AM
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me too!i just luv it!
winxgirl21 on September 12, 2007, 6:57:28 AM
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lolz, my mom says its bad for you cuz of the raw eggs, but i eat it anyways...lolz!rffraff05 on September 12, 2007, 6:59:20 AM
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its why you eat the toll house cookies! they have no eggs!winxgirl21 on September 12, 2007, 7:02:46 AM
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haha, yea! i need to buy more of those!kagome99 on September 13, 2007, 4:39:35 AM
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my mom eats it too.i was bad once and finished off a bucket of cookie dough in 2 weeks.my mom was a little bit mad.I ESPECIALLY LUV LIL' CEASER'S COOKIE DOUGH.^^winxgirl21 on September 13, 2007, 9:10:17 AM
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:i; Ceaser's? i've never had it...8adds to list of things to try* ^-^kagome99 on September 14, 2007, 6:03:39 AM
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it tastes soooooo good.i think it may be my fave.idk.^^winxgirl21 on September 14, 2007, 6:39:06 AM
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Agh! now i HAVE to try it! lolz.kagome99 on September 18, 2007, 5:07:40 AM
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YAY!zerotimberwolf on September 9, 2007, 12:15:14 PM
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man i get writers block all the timebut the chapter turned out great
winxgirl21 on September 10, 2007, 7:35:37 AM
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thanks 6-^ i hatw writeer's block...>.< it's awful!SasukesChick on September 9, 2007, 5:44:37 AM
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sweet!! cant wait 4 da next chapterwinxgirl21 on September 9, 2007, 5:53:31 AM
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Thanks for the review! ^-^ i've started the next chapter, but idk when it'll be up yet.sasukeXsakuraforever on September 9, 2007, 2:32:52 AM
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Poor Sakura! Everything is so complicated for her right now! *hugs Sakura* No worries, Sakura. Winx will make everything ok...right winx?... lolz. J/k, Very nice job^^winxgirl21 on September 9, 2007, 2:36:24 AM
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yes, i wll make everything all right. lolz. ^-^PanicMode24 on September 8, 2007, 6:43:32 PM
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I really want my wedding dress to look like that.winxgirl21 on September 8, 2007, 10:01:26 PM
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ya, same here. ^-^AlleyCat17 on September 8, 2007, 7:26:52 AM
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wow great chapter and i can't wait for you to update soon please.oh and do you want to be friends?winxgirl21 on September 8, 2007, 7:57:15 AM
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Thanks for reviewing! Sure I want to be friends! ^-^rffraff05 on September 8, 2007, 6:20:32 AM
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this is awesome! congradulations strawberries for you!eelchic: Hey thats my line!
me: Sorry
winxgirl21 on September 8, 2007, 6:32:15 AM
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Thanks! Strawberries? I <3 strawberries!! ^-^ lolz.Symphoniaprincess101 on September 8, 2007, 4:54:11 AM
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Yay the escape is almost here^^winxgirl21 on September 8, 2007, 5:02:17 AM
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Yes, it is ^-^kagome99 on September 7, 2007, 7:42:17 AM
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That's just sooo cute.Forbidden love!^_~keep up the good work!!
winxgirl21 on September 7, 2007, 8:15:56 AM
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yes, forbidden love ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on September 3, 2007, 11:12:54 AM
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i'm with sasukeXsakuraforever on this awsome^^winxgirl21 on September 4, 2007, 6:32:28 AM
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Thanks ^-^gaaralover1 on September 3, 2007, 10:41:30 AM
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Keep goin!winxgirl21 on September 3, 2007, 10:54:19 AM
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thnx ^-^winxgirl21 on September 3, 2007, 7:52:30 AM
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http://www.sugarloot.com/entry/1043643354 hey guys! Go check out my friend Shelby's audition and vote her a 10! She's a really great actress and deserves to win! xxYaoiNinjaGirlxx on September 3, 2007, 3:18:46 AM
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keep on typing!!!!winxgirl21 on September 3, 2007, 4:01:05 AM
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Thanks ^-^zerotimberwolf on September 3, 2007, 1:58:57 AM
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YES the new chapter is awesomewinxgirl21 on September 3, 2007, 2:02:08 AM
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thanks ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on September 3, 2007, 12:39:23 AM
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Awww! Poor Sasuke. He can't see Sakura! IT'S LIKE A BAD NIGHTMARE! Very nice job keeping me on the edge of my seat...AGAIN! Twenty thumbs up!.... I wonder who was in the bushes?.... Hmmmmm?winxgirl21 on September 3, 2007, 2:00:05 AM
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I know, it is like a bad nightmare...And I wonder who was in the bushes as well...I haven't decided yet...lolz.sasukeXsakuraforever on September 3, 2007, 7:27:13 AM
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0_0 hahaha! Thats hilarious! The writer must ALWAYS fool the reader I suppose.... I guess this time the writer fooled herself too! lolz!winxgirl21 on September 3, 2007, 8:00:32 AM
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yes, she did...But I'll come up with something..i have a couple different ideas.rffraff05 on September 2, 2007, 11:47:55 PM
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YAYAYAY thank you for updating, this is AWESOME!winxgirl21 on September 2, 2007, 11:49:29 PM
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lolz, thanks. ^-^ I finally had the time to finish up the endings of the chapters.AlleyCat17 on September 1, 2007, 12:55:42 PM
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great chapter and poor sakura and i know how you feel my dad just went to the hospilbe yesterday because he broke his hip long story short he just got out of sceary yesterday and he has to stay for a while a my mom go's to see him for about 12 hrs a day and that leaves me along with my dog's and cat and then i also have to go to my sisters place to help her with her baby boy alittle and i also have to get ready for school on the 5 of this month but i only need to go for a hr to know what homeroom im in and to get my class list then i go home until the 6 which is a full day of school.so anyways i hope you fell better and that you get thought it all ok just like me and it's ok that your story's woun't be update in a while i understand that you have a lot to do.so i can wait for you to update anyways i must shut up now im talking to much.well i'll talk to you next time you update.(man this is the longset comment i made on fac)winxgirl21 on September 1, 2007, 11:39:12 PM
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lolz, that is a long comment! Actually, my grandmother passed away last monday, and her funeral was yesterday. All my family is still at my grandfather's house, though. (you know, cousins, aunts uncles?) So we habve to go there....I'm hoping to get to update soon...>.<PinkAngel101 on August 30, 2007, 8:09:44 AM
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OMG AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH GGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPROPOSED!!!!111!!!!
winxgirl21 on September 1, 2007, 11:36:20 AM
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lolz, yes! He did! I'm trying to update soon. I just haven't had the time to finish up the next chapter...^-^'Symphoniaprincess101 on August 30, 2007, 2:20:18 PM
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breeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaath woman O.Orffraff05 on August 26, 2007, 5:41:48 AM
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darn cliffhangers!winxgirl21 on August 26, 2007, 5:47:07 AM
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lolz, sorry. ^-^gaaralover1 on August 24, 2007, 12:27:06 PM
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Ah! What a way to ennd a friday night.. Foot massage, Full metal alchemist and reading a new chapter of Naruto: Middle ages. Good chapter.winxgirl21 on August 25, 2007, 12:36:43 AM
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Thanks! Yes, that does sound like a way to end a wonderful night! ^-^zerotimberwolf on August 24, 2007, 11:21:17 AM
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i love it that is typed art
winxgirl21 on August 25, 2007, 12:35:43 AM
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O, thanks! ^-^zerotimberwolf on August 24, 2007, 10:56:20 AM
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awesomewinxgirl21 on August 25, 2007, 12:35:09 AM
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thankies ^-^zerotimberwolf on August 24, 2007, 10:50:21 AM
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Naruto missing his ramen: funnySasuke and Sakura hugging: sweet
awesome job
winxgirl21 on August 25, 2007, 12:33:33 AM
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Thanks! ^-^TheBestDamnThing on August 24, 2007, 8:31:39 AM
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OK!!!!!*mental list*ok so wedding sunday!ok ill wear meh best clothes!lOlwinxgirl21 on August 24, 2007, 8:34:51 AM
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lolz, ok! ^-^TheBestDamnThing on August 24, 2007, 8:40:16 AM
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lOl sasuXsaku rules!!!!!!winxgirl21 on August 25, 2007, 12:34:28 AM
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Yes, it does! ^-^kagome99 on August 24, 2007, 7:21:08 AM
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Ohhhhhh!I luved it.I can't wait to see what happens next.
keep up the good work!^_^
winxgirl21 on August 24, 2007, 8:11:45 AM
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thanks.Symphoniaprincess101 on August 23, 2007, 12:53:29 PM
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i can't think of any thing right now ecept good luck at school and awsome chapter here and in Konoha High:The Homecomeing^^winxgirl21 on August 24, 2007, 1:49:03 AM
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thanks ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on August 23, 2007, 3:37:03 AM
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Yes, Sakura! Run! Run like the wind! Don't look back! Run, Sakura, run (in a forest Gump voice :P)Very nice, I like this chapter! I'm glad Sakura is going to run, but she's bound to run into some problems here and there. Those problems my friend, are up to you! You are the writer after all! ^_~ hehe, good luck with the next chappie!^^
winxgirl21 on August 23, 2007, 5:45:58 AM
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Thanks! I'm not sure what the problems will be, but I already have had the escape scenen running through my mind =PSymphoniaprincess101 on August 31, 2007, 1:38:22 PM
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yay^^gaaralover1 on August 19, 2007, 10:48:00 AM
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What a great thing to come back home to... I've been at camp for the week... Up and down a steep hill and paddeling a Canoe every day. And going through Headwind and all that junk... I got my Orca A though... YAY ME!!winxgirl21 on August 20, 2007, 3:15:52 AM
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And Orca A? *looks at you with a blank stare* I don't know what that is, but congrats! ^-^ And thanks!gaaralover1 on August 20, 2007, 12:10:33 PM
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It's a level in canoeing.winxgirl21 on August 21, 2007, 7:16:40 AM
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Ah! Can you tell I've never been to camp or anything like that? lolz ^-^gaaralover1 on August 22, 2007, 12:02:28 PM
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Yep... * Nods* I can definatly tell... And I'm the one sitting here running meh fingers through my hair and flicking it out of my face....winxgirl21 on August 22, 2007, 12:08:28 PM
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lolz, yea, I don't do much during the summer...i kind of do my homework, go on vacation for a couple of weeks, and then come home.SasukesChick on August 16, 2007, 10:27:26 PM
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awwww. sweetness.winxgirl21 on August 17, 2007, 5:02:06 AM
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Thankies ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 16, 2007, 12:45:05 PM
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AWSOME^^i'm glad you got a new kitty^^this is one of your best chapters yet^^same here give Izzy a well deserved scrach between the ears^^also 60 more cookies^^winxgirl21 on August 17, 2007, 4:59:52 AM
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Thanks so much! I'll def. give her a scratch between the ears for you ^-^perryfamily53 on August 16, 2007, 12:57:40 AM
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this is great! i hope you update soon and i'm sorry about your cat. someone murdered my dog and when i find out who did it they'll suffer for all of eternity! and i'm glad that you found a new cat! please write more of the story it's realy, realy, realy good! i hope you're happy with your new cat! :PSymphoniaprincess101 on August 16, 2007, 12:48:37 PM
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i'm sorry about your doggieTT^TTi had a dog too her name was Titina but when i had to move here to north america from peru after a year she passed away of a broken heartTTTT^TTTTand she was only 3 years oldTT^TTwinxgirl21 on August 16, 2007, 3:27:07 AM
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Thanks so much! I'm sorry to hear that that happened to your dog. Some people are just awful. I hope that Izzy will like it here, because i know taht Zoe would want us to give her a home.TheBestDamnThing on August 16, 2007, 8:07:49 AM
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awwwwww.....i love this storeh!!!ya sooo good!!oh and give izzy a big hug for meh!winxgirl21 on August 16, 2007, 8:11:09 AM
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Thanks! I'll definately give her a big hug for you! ^-^ My mom just told me i could go back up to see her a couple o minutes ago, actully. (I was in the rom where she is right now since we got her, so my mom told me I had to leave her alone for half an hour, lolz!)sasukeXsakuraforever on August 15, 2007, 11:14:11 AM
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Oh my! Sakura said yes... I wonder what Kiba ment by saying "this guy said some scary things on our tour"... GAARA! I told you not to make trouble!Gaara: No, you said not to "hurt no body"
Me: Ah. Touche.
Gaara: *smirk*
Me: AWESOME CHAPTER WINX! And what are you talking about, its really good!
On a second note, I'm glad you found another companion cat. Of course she won't take Zoe's place, but its good to know that your getting through this! ^_~
winxgirl21 on August 15, 2007, 11:44:58 AM
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Thanks! I actually don't know what kiba means by that, but it was just some creepy stuff Gaara said...And, yea, it's going to be nice having anotehr cat around the house now ^-^ I actually think Zoe would have wnted us to give another cat a home.
sasukeXsakuraforever on August 13, 2007, 3:02:01 AM
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kyaaaa! *faints* That was the cutest sasu/saku moment..EVA! *squee* I can't wait for the walk with the three of them! .... Gaara, don't hurt no body, ok?Gaara: I'm not making any promises.
Me: *sigh*
winxgirl21 on August 13, 2007, 3:58:50 AM
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lolz! I cam make the promise for him that no one should be injured! Gaara: Fine....
^-^
SasukesChick on August 12, 2007, 10:12:21 PM
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Awwww, how adorable!!!!! Must read more!!! This is the best chapter yet!!!!winxgirl21 on August 13, 2007, 3:57:29 AM
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Thanks so much! ^-^PinkAngel101 on August 12, 2007, 8:16:08 AM
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AWW SASUSAKU ^^............. PIE^^winxgirl21 on August 13, 2007, 3:56:52 AM
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Thanks! yes, Pie! lolz ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 12, 2007, 12:28:46 PM
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the "pie" thing was randomPinkAngel101 on August 12, 2007, 8:12:59 AM
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OMG THIS IS SOOOOO KAWAI ^^winxgirl21 on August 13, 2007, 3:56:18 AM
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Thanks! ^-^gaaralover1 on August 11, 2007, 12:27:21 PM
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YAY!!! SasuXSaku all the way!winxgirl21 on August 13, 2007, 3:55:44 AM
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lolz! Yes!!waterbender00 on August 11, 2007, 4:10:37 AM
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HE FINALLY KISSES HER!!! YAY SASUSAKU!!I luv this story.
^^
winxgirl21 on August 13, 2007, 3:55:16 AM
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Thanks! ^=-6 I love sasuxsaku, too! Well, taht's why I write it, lolz!Symphoniaprincess101 on August 20, 2007, 10:55:32 AM
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i'm thinking of starting my own sasusaku fic not sure though.TheBestDamnThing on August 11, 2007, 2:47:46 AM
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i have to agree ULTRA AWESOME!!!ya i cant wait update soon ok?winxgirl21 on August 13, 2007, 3:53:04 AM
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Thanks! I actually haven't even started the next chapter, but I'll start it as soon as I'm done replying to reviews! ^-^TheBestDamnThing on August 13, 2007, 4:55:27 AM
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lolzwinxgirl21 on August 13, 2007, 5:07:13 AM
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I'm starting it right now, actually! lolz ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 13, 2007, 5:53:07 AM
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good^^winxgirl21 on August 13, 2007, 6:03:41 AM
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yup ^-^TheBestDamnThing on August 15, 2007, 4:15:13 AM
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yeswinxgirl21 on August 15, 2007, 4:22:21 AM
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^-^ it should be up around tomorrow.Symphoniaprincess101 on August 15, 2007, 4:41:15 AM
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Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^winxgirl21 on August 15, 2007, 4:48:48 AM
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yup! ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 15, 2007, 7:09:30 AM
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LOL^0^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 11, 2007, 2:26:30 AM
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OMFG THAT WAS ULTRA AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^5000000000000000 cookies for u^^winxgirl21 on August 11, 2007, 2:27:47 AM
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lolz! Thanks so much! ^-^ I'm glad that you think so! Yay! More cookies!!waterbender00 on August 7, 2007, 10:55:12 AM
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More SasuSak moments YEAH!!! and a cliffie ... Even better.winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:36:39 AM
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lolz, glad that you think so! ^-^waterbender00 on August 7, 2007, 8:28:27 PM
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Note that everything is in exclamations... which I forgot to add. ^^winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:04:55 PM
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lolz ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on August 7, 2007, 9:31:24 AM
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ZOMG yet another sasu/saku moment that makes me all warm and tingly inside!! *hugs myself* ITS SO CUTE!!! I can't wait for the next chappie!!! ^o^winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:35:54 AM
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Thanks! I hope to get it up around Saturday ^-^gaaralover1 on August 7, 2007, 9:29:34 AM
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XP Hurry up and write more!winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:31:21 AM
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lolz, I'm working on the next chapter now! ^-^SasukesChick on August 7, 2007, 8:10:47 AM
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sweetness!!!!! Cliffies are annoying, but i loved this chapter!! Continue!!!!winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 8:26:00 AM
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Yea, i hate writing um, but I like to put them in there sometimes ^-^ Thanks for reviewing!Symphoniaprincess101 on August 7, 2007, 6:13:47 AM
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=^_^=Awsomeness Major=^_^=500000000 cookies for u for makeing the sasusaku pairing look awsome^^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 7, 2007, 6:18:11 AM
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he is not ooc'd at all^^winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 6:17:53 AM
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Thankies!! Now I have enough cookies to last me for a year! yes! *does a happy dance*TheBestDamnThing on August 7, 2007, 6:12:02 AM
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OMG!!!!i hate cliffies!!!but this chappie rules contnue soon?winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 6:17:14 AM
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I'm hoping to update Saturday, with all the school work i just found out i have to do...>.< stipid teachers not telling us we have work until the last minute...TheBestDamnThing on August 8, 2007, 5:24:55 AM
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ya i understand!*nod nod* we shall be doing that the 16!!!lolz ya school sucks!!!winxgirl21 on August 8, 2007, 6:42:10 AM
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Yea, my friend text me yesterday complaining about all the work we have to do for one of our summer reading books, and i was like, tehre's work with taht? TT.TT I hate school..Symphoniaprincess101 on August 8, 2007, 7:41:10 AM
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u and me both><School is such a drag><(Note "drag" was used from Shikamaru^^)winxgirl21 on August 8, 2007, 10:53:36 AM
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Yea, i would really like to figure out who the person who invented school was, bring them back to life, then kill them all over again. >.<TheBestDamnThing on August 8, 2007, 11:52:30 AM
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lolz wouldnt that be a little senceless!!!i do hate school but thats where all meh friends are!!!i would not be able to live life with out them!!!!lolz plus we will need to learn life lessons...i know it sounds crazy and a "drag" but we need it.....sometimes u will like some of the lessons you learn...im not a big hisory fan...but i like to learn about the "Plaque",or "WW1 and WW2"....i've grown up around history allmy life...who knows you might be making it as we speak ^_-.this might not make sence to u but i think with out school we will act like naruto and be dimwitted for our entire life...think about it...winxgirl21 on August 8, 2007, 11:58:18 AM
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Yea, i know where you're coming from. I just get sick of all the work they give us sometimes. i probably wouldn't hate it as much if there wasn't any homework....Hmm..I wonder who invented homework *grins evilly*...But i can't imagine a bunch of naruto's running around, our world would be chaos! And I love history, it's actually one of my favorite classes. And History based stories are my favorite (that's why I enjoy writing this one so much) I actually get some ideas from my history class, like a story that I'm just writing right no for no reason...TheBestDamnThing on August 8, 2007, 12:06:51 PM
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ya i think i might start a storie soon....probibly naruto.....it might be about ww1 or ww2...idk i havent desided yet......but im still working on the begenningwinxgirl21 on August 8, 2007, 12:08:49 PM
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That sounds like a good basing for the story. ^-^ I hope you do write it, and you have to let me know if/when you get it up!TheBestDamnThing on August 9, 2007, 2:50:50 AM
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ok tinky winky!lolz i was up all night doing this i doubt it is any good but im working on it.i gotta get people to want me to write another chapter before i do more!lolz ya well here is the linkhttp://www.fanart-central.net/story-47675.html
winxgirl21 on August 9, 2007, 8:47:05 AM
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yay! I'm definately going to check it out!Symphoniaprincess101 on August 11, 2007, 10:43:29 AM
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it's really good^^PinkAngel101 on August 6, 2007, 1:44:57 AM
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awe sweet sasusaku moment ^^winxgirl21 on August 6, 2007, 3:12:47 AM
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Thanks ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on August 5, 2007, 7:25:03 AM
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awww! I really loved that sasusaku moment! Sooo kawaii!!! This is so awesome, good job!!^^winxgirl21 on August 5, 2007, 11:17:52 AM
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Thanks! ^-^SasukesChick on August 3, 2007, 1:05:33 PM
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Nice work........SasuSaku!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue...........please!!!!winxgirl21 on August 3, 2007, 1:10:13 PM
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Thanks! ^-^ Expect an update around wednesdaySasukesChick on August 3, 2007, 1:13:17 PM
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kdigimonlover06 on August 3, 2007, 11:13:50 AM
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I love your stories!!! Keep up the good work!!!winxgirl21 on August 3, 2007, 11:14:53 AM
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Thanks! ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 3, 2007, 10:30:25 AM
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*sing-song vo=ice*I'm senceing romance^^*normall voice*Awsome 40 cookies^^winxgirl21 on August 3, 2007, 11:14:28 AM
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Thanks! ^-^ yay! More cookies!Symphoniaprincess101 on August 4, 2007, 4:43:45 AM
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^-^TheBestDamnThing on August 3, 2007, 7:44:37 AM
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OMG!!IM GONNA CRY!!*starts to tear up* have u seen the movie marie antoinett it might be able to help u understand these things...oh and sasuke is now a total HOTTY!!and gaara is now SEXI !!XD!!!!poor naruto!i miss ramen too!mom forgot to be meh sum!DX!winxgirl21 on August 3, 2007, 7:48:06 AM
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Yes, I love the movie Marie Antoinette! I've been looking towards it a bit for some inspiration for this, adn then i look towards some of my favorite books that are time based in the Middle Ages for more inspiration! ^-^ Your mom forgot to buy ramen?! *gasps* that's awful!TheBestDamnThing on August 3, 2007, 7:57:48 AM
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i kno!!!!i spasificly told her to!and does she listin*sniffles* NO!!!SHE DONT!winxgirl21 on August 3, 2007, 8:00:49 AM
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That's not good at all! My mom just buys it and keeps a bunch of it in the pantry. She ormally eats it when we're at school, but this summer I've been eating it, lolz! ^-^TheBestDamnThing on August 3, 2007, 8:18:59 AM
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well that is what happens to me!im an only child why do i have to go through this!!well im not an only child all my 4 sisters are grown and gone.ya im going to stay the night at my best friend/sister who is 20 tonight!ya rock on!!!but she is kinda sad...she had a miscarage last weekend.but she still rox!she rox ur sox!winxgirl21 on August 3, 2007, 8:26:42 AM
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Oh, that's sad! You're lucky to be the youngest adn the only one left at home now. I'm the oldest, and have two little sisters who are constantly bothering me. We actually get into fights so bad I'm surprised taht we don't kill each other...TheBestDamnThing on August 3, 2007, 9:52:14 AM
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i always wanted a little sister.but i have a neibore name hunter..he is ten and im like his older sister.he learns alot from me.and ya we do get into fights but i worry about him...he is crazy he is always trying perfect these stunts on a dirt bike or 4 wheeler.and when he gets like a scrape or a cut im always like,"OMG hunter are u ok what happend?""oh nothing really""are you an idiot?*slapps him*" some times it scares me how instead of acting like a sister i act more like a mom as in worring so much.sometimes when i run home crying my mom has to reasure me that he is only 10 and he hasnt been through what i have.thats when i try my best to act more like a sister and be there and be strong.winxgirl21 on August 3, 2007, 11:18:51 AM
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Yea, my neighbor is 11 (turning 12 in december) and he has a little dirt bike thing, and he's always trying to do these crazy things on it...My little sister just turned 12, and she's a major tom-boy. She and my neighbor play with frogs and stuff all the time...*shivers* there favorite hobby is chasing me with Pancakes, the neighbors poisonous frog...I'm so scared they're going to kill themselves by forgetting to wash their hands. >.<TheBestDamnThing on August 4, 2007, 11:43:08 AM
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i understand *nod nod*winxgirl21 on August 4, 2007, 11:47:36 AM
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^-^TheBestDamnThing on August 5, 2007, 7:51:48 AM
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MOM BOUGHT ME RAMEN 2DAY!!!!winxgirl21 on August 5, 2007, 11:18:29 AM
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really? Awesome! yay, ramen!!TheBestDamnThing on August 6, 2007, 2:33:35 AM
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*dances around with ramen cup* ramen ramen come and get ur ramen....i make this tribute to the guy who invented ramen noodles ...who died reasonly...rest in peace noodle man..winxgirl21 on August 6, 2007, 5:22:12 AM
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yes, may he rest in epace. He contributed a very great thing to the world. RAMEN! lolz ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 6, 2007, 10:09:05 AM
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U girls are Spazzes it's funny^0^winxgirl21 on August 6, 2007, 11:05:03 PM
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Ya, I know ^o^ it's fun though, lolz!TheBestDamnThing on August 7, 2007, 5:48:36 AM
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ya beings spazzes are fun!!!!!!!lolz ya!!!!oh the comment thing is down again but i found a way to veiw ur comments...hit view all comments when ur on ur profile....try to tell all ur friendswinxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 5:52:17 AM
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ok, I def. will! Oh, btw, i just finished updateing Konoha high: the homecoming, and this one is next! ^-^1mangalover on August 2, 2007, 8:27:13 AM
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Sasuke + OOC = AWESOME!!! I luv it! *favz*1mangalover on August 2, 2007, 8:28:15 AM
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this is awesome, btw. sasuke isnt that OOC, but there are little bits and pieces... ^^winxgirl21 on August 2, 2007, 1:31:12 PM
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Thanks so much. ^-^uchihacrimson on August 1, 2007, 11:54:46 PM
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OOC?!?! NO! IT'S PERFECT x3 omfg I LOVE THIS STORYwinxgirl21 on August 2, 2007, 1:44:07 AM
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Thanks! It seems everyone thinks he's not OOc. That's good. ^-^ I'm glad tath yuo like the story so much ^-^. I'm hoping to update tonight if I have time.Symphoniaprincess101 on August 2, 2007, 4:32:20 AM
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY^^winxgirl21 on August 2, 2007, 1:33:38 PM
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Actually, it's going to have to be tomorrow, it's almost midnight here and i just got home...But I have the chapters finished, I'm just too out of it to put them up...>.<Symphoniaprincess101 on July 31, 2007, 9:27:26 AM
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u guys have to tell me what u think of my poem here:http://www.fanart-central.net/story-44871.htmlTheBestDamnThing on July 30, 2007, 10:16:54 AM
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ur the est writter you should start a career in it!winxgirl21 on July 30, 2007, 10:20:26 AM
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Oh, thanks! I really want to go into that field, but i'm not so sure i'll make it...PinkAngel101 on July 30, 2007, 1:54:27 AM
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SWEET ^^^ hey wat does OOC mean,..winxgirl21 on July 30, 2007, 7:11:19 AM
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Thanks ^-^ and yes, it means out of character, I'm always afraid I make the characters act unlike themselves ^-^'PinkAngel101 on July 31, 2007, 1:36:59 AM
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OOOOOOOOO ARIGOTOwinxgirl21 on July 31, 2007, 4:19:18 AM
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np ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on July 30, 2007, 9:52:04 AM
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no thier fine^^winxgirl21 on July 30, 2007, 10:02:37 AM
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thnx ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on July 30, 2007, 3:29:21 AM
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OOC means out of charecter.gaaralover1 on July 29, 2007, 11:20:14 AM
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FINALLY!! and STOP PICKING ON GAARA!!!!!! * Cries*winxgirl21 on July 29, 2007, 10:20:42 PM
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Sorry! *gives you whole package of Gaara shaped cookies* That's just how I ned him to be for the story. Believe it or not, but my two favorite characters are Sakura and Gaara. I think Gaara's one of the best characters...Symphoniaprincess101 on July 29, 2007, 10:05:04 AM
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I agree with Sasukeschick and sasukeXsakuraforever awsome =^_^=winxgirl21 on July 29, 2007, 10:19:03 PM
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Thanks! I'm really glad that you think so! ^-^waterbender00 on July 29, 2007, 10:00:31 AM
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The SasuSaju Moment was SOOO CUTEwinxgirl21 on July 29, 2007, 10:18:30 PM
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Thanks! ^-^ Glad that you think so!TheBestDamnThing on July 29, 2007, 4:16:52 AM
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He doesnt neccecarily but maybe he needs to be just a lil bit more ...u know...smooth talking.but this is a great chappie i deffinatly love this one.Poor sasuke ...he knos he loves her!winxgirl21 on July 29, 2007, 6:34:18 AM
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Thanks for the suggestion. I'm pretty much afraid to put too much in there with them cuz I'm afraid it'll make him seem too OOC >.< *sigh* Yes, hge does know that he loves her. When he realizes that he knows it will be the good part. ^-^TheBestDamnThing on July 29, 2007, 6:40:09 AM
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yes very good!i cant wait i love this story along with konoha high!!!sasuke is gonna go storming through the doors of the chaples screaming"I OBJECT!!!". lOlz yea....winxgirl21 on July 29, 2007, 6:46:49 AM
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lolz, hmm...'m not sure what he's gonna do just yet...Thanks so much! I'm glad that you like them! ^-^TheBestDamnThing on July 30, 2007, 6:28:33 AM
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ur very welcome!i will be looking for u on the teen choice awards as best teen author!winxgirl21 on July 30, 2007, 7:13:11 AM
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o, thanks so much! But i doubt I'll make it that far. My story ideas don't really go very far, lolz ^-^SasukesChick on July 29, 2007, 3:50:33 AM
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, that's adorable.......SasuSaku!!!!!!!!!!! ^__^ Thank you, and continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_____^winxgirl21 on July 29, 2007, 3:52:52 AM
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Thanks! Don't worry, I'm def. going to continue! ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on July 29, 2007, 2:52:35 AM
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aww! Sasuke's not OOC'd at all. I love it that way! Very nice SasukeSakura moment there. Very cute!^^winxgirl21 on July 29, 2007, 3:46:17 AM
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Thanks! ^-^AmmyK on July 28, 2007, 3:08:41 PM
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goooooood!winxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 11:39:28 PM
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Thanks ^-^!NightWing101 on July 28, 2007, 2:20:11 PM
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ooooooooo nice!!!winxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 11:38:51 PM
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Thnx! ^-^xxYaoiNinjaGirlxx on July 28, 2007, 1:39:31 PM
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very good!winxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 11:38:16 PM
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Thanks! ^-^jdoneoftwo on July 28, 2007, 12:02:25 PM
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lol!!winxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 12:04:04 PM
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^-^TheBestDamnThing on July 25, 2007, 9:45:24 AM
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Tamari a princess? heh.well in storys that im thinkin about righting i think i will base tamari o my friend callie.she is always going around sayin hell ya im the mother f****** princess.some times the song girlfriend gets oldwinxgirl21 on July 25, 2007, 10:37:21 AM
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Yea, i know what ya mean. It does get old. Lolz, I walk around saying i'm a pirncess all the time. Actually, right now i'm wearing my princess necklace XDTheBestDamnThing on July 26, 2007, 2:01:29 AM
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lolz now that is funny!!im wearing myprincess/rockstar jeans!!winxgirl21 on July 26, 2007, 2:14:08 AM
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lolz! ^-^TheBestDamnThing on July 26, 2007, 5:22:58 AM
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funny i kno but i love them meh mom hates em cus they have wholes in em!so when shall the next chappie be up for this story?winxgirl21 on July 26, 2007, 6:22:59 AM
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It should be up day after tomorrow,I hope. I just got the internet taken away, my moms only letting me on cuz someone I know has questions about school....>.<TheBestDamnThing on July 28, 2007, 2:13:39 AM
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nice plez get on and post it!!!!winxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 4:24:36 AM
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lolz, don't worry, I'm going to post it when I get back tonight, i don't have enough time to do everything i need to do now, since we're leaving in a few minutes for dinner. ^-^TheBestDamnThing on July 25, 2007, 9:21:11 AM
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O___O gaara a prince!NARUTO A STABLE BOY!!WHATS HAPPINING TO THE WORLD!!!???!?!?!winxgirl21 on July 25, 2007, 10:34:38 AM
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the world is coming to...i don't quite know what...sasukeXsakuraforever on July 25, 2007, 5:25:44 AM
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Gaara! You butt! lolz. Ok, ok. I am sooo ganna read the next chapter as soon as it comes out!!! ^_^winxgirl21 on July 25, 2007, 7:17:33 AM
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Thanks so much! The next chapter should be up on saturday! ^-^PinkAngel101 on July 25, 2007, 2:08:35 AM
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sweet chapter winx ^^winxgirl21 on July 25, 2007, 7:12:50 AM
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Thanks! ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on July 24, 2007, 3:06:57 AM
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cool plz put some more sasusaku but other then that 20 cookies for u^^winxgirl21 on July 24, 2007, 9:32:38 AM
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Tyanks! And don't worry, there will be more SasuSaku in a chapter really soon. Maybe not next chapter but the one after that...I already have that part planned out...Symphoniaprincess101 on July 25, 2007, 1:54:27 AM
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Sweet yay^^Wait What are u planing?_?winxgirl21 on July 25, 2007, 7:11:15 AM
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the sasusaku part. I don't think it'll be very good, but I have a part I'm going to put in the story soon....>.<Symphoniaprincess101 on July 28, 2007, 10:20:41 AM
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oh hurry i'm anxious><winxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 11:57:35 AM
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lolz, i just updated with it >.<SasukesChick on July 23, 2007, 10:39:06 PM
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awsome....poor Gaara-kun, being talked about like that by his own relative..... :(More SasuSaku, please!!!
until He comes again,
KY
winxgirl21 on July 23, 2007, 10:45:12 PM
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Don't wory, there's SasuSaku coming up soon, although i don't know how good it will be...Thanks so much for reviewing!gaaralover1 on July 23, 2007, 10:25:26 AM
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Gaara yells and sreams a lot?? * sniff* * Sniffle* He's hostile??? * Sob* HOW COULD YOU BE SO MEAN!!!?? HE'S JUST SOMEONE WHO'S MISSUNDERSTOOD!!!winxgirl21 on July 23, 2007, 10:28:37 AM
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sorryness...that's just how i needed him to be portrayed in this story...*gives you cookie shaped like Gaara to make you feel better*Symphoniaprincess101 on July 24, 2007, 3:10:51 AM
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we all know he's misunderstood the only person who dose understand him is Naruto*gives gaaralover1 a huge garra shaped cookie to help make her feel better*^^crazicat06 on July 23, 2007, 10:12:30 AM
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Wooo!!!! Yay!lol
No Shukaku? Kidding
winxgirl21 on July 23, 2007, 10:13:43 AM
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nah,not in his ancestor at least :P lolz!crazicat06 on July 23, 2007, 10:14:51 AM
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lolzwinxgirl21 on July 23, 2007, 10:21:22 AM
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^-^finalfantasy on July 23, 2007, 10:10:32 AM
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pretty cool story! keep it up!oh, yea, and what does dobe mean? ppl keep saying that and i dont know what it means...=]
winxgirl21 on July 23, 2007, 10:12:22 AM
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I think that it basically means idiot, or that's what someone told me...finalfantasy on July 28, 2007, 10:18:11 AM
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hehe, ok, thanxwinxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 12:00:32 PM
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np, but don't go only on what i say, i tend to get things mixed up a lot ^-^' You might want to try asking some people who know a little more than i do.uchihacrimson on July 23, 2007, 3:55:16 AM
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OMFG UPDATE THIS STORY 8DI LOVE IT
winxgirl21 on July 23, 2007, 7:43:41 AM
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Thanks! I'm hoping to update later tonight! ^-^NightWing101 on July 23, 2007, 2:13:57 AM
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oh my gosh!!! what will happens!!! I hope that what sakura chooses is the best.winxgirl21 on July 23, 2007, 7:42:37 AM
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Thanks so much for reviewing! The next chapter should be up a little bit later today, but her decision won't be in it just yet. ^-^gaaralover1 on July 21, 2007, 8:45:53 AM
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When's the next chapter going on?winxgirl21 on July 22, 2007, 1:39:08 AM
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it should be up tomorrow ^-^gaaralover1 on July 18, 2007, 7:50:08 AM
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Cool... Nice theary sakura..winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 10:27:25 AM
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Thanks for reviewing! ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on July 18, 2007, 3:37:41 AM
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What's Sakura going to do?Will Sasuke be happy if she runs away with him and the rest of the team?!I'M ANXIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^30 more cookies for u^^winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 6:46:30 AM
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lolz, yay cookies!! ^-^ You'll have to wait and read! Expect the next chapter around monday!AlleyCat17 on July 18, 2007, 3:26:38 AM
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great chapter and i hope she makes the right decisions.winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 6:45:27 AM
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You'll just have to wait and see what she decides! ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on July 18, 2007, 2:23:29 AM
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Oh no! Whats Sakura going to do?! Awesome way to keep me on the edge of my seat again! Can't wait to read more!^^winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 6:44:24 AM
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Thanks so much for reviweing! You'll just have to wait and find out, lolz! ^-^SasukesChick on July 17, 2007, 11:03:40 PM
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Great. Please continue...this is really interesting now.winxgirl21 on July 17, 2007, 11:05:31 PM
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Thanks! ^-^eelchic on July 16, 2007, 1:18:00 PM
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awsome!!!!!!!!winxgirl21 on July 16, 2007, 10:05:04 PM
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^-^SasukesChick on July 15, 2007, 10:49:45 PM
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Yays, that was the awesomeness.....continue!!!!!winxgirl21 on July 16, 2007, 8:54:05 AM
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Thanks! I'm hoping to update around wednesday ^-^gaaralover1 on July 15, 2007, 1:34:42 PM
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Do more chapterswinxgirl21 on July 16, 2007, 8:53:33 AM
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Don't worry, I will! ^-^NightWing101 on July 13, 2007, 12:46:51 PM
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THat is totally shikamaru! That was an awsome chapter!winxgirl21 on July 13, 2007, 10:37:12 PM
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lolz, thanks! ^-^AlleyCat17 on July 13, 2007, 4:51:54 AM
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wow great chapter.winxgirl21 on July 13, 2007, 8:51:34 AM
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thanks! ^-^gaaralover1 on July 12, 2007, 2:50:10 PM
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Well Shikamaru could easily go outside or look out a window couldn't he?? Or are there no clouds in this story?? Anyway good chapter.. I lied the last better though.. * Chanting Gaara's a prince over and over again*winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 11:45:31 PM
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YEa, there are clouds, but he wouldn't get paid for watchign them. Since he's the astronomer, he gets money and lives and the castle and stuffs. Thanks for reviewing! ^-^ And don't worry, tehre will be more chapters with Gaara in the future. Maybe not the next chapter, but I'm hoping to get to it soon...gaaralover1 on July 12, 2007, 2:43:56 PM
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YEEEEE! GAARA'S A PRINCE!!!winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 11:44:15 PM
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yes! lolz, thanks for reviewing!sasukeXsakuraforever on July 12, 2007, 12:09:42 PM
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Ha, another perfect place to stick Shikamaru! Heh, you know your stuff! ^_~ Can't wait ti'll next chapter!^^winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 11:41:01 PM
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Thanks! It wasn't too ahrd to place him! lolz. The next chapter should be up around wednesday ^-^waterbender00 on July 12, 2007, 10:49:20 AM
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Cooliness and first comment, yeahwinxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 11:39:29 PM
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lolz, thanks for reviewing! ^-^waterbender00 on July 12, 2007, 10:49:53 AM
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Never mind to the first comment. *sweat drop*Symphoniaprincess101 on July 12, 2007, 10:43:56 AM
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awsome i can't wait to fin out what hapens next^^winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 11:39:01 PM
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Thanks! The next chapter should be up around wednesday! ^-^blueeyesgirl3 on July 11, 2007, 7:10:19 PM
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well...what they all are it sure suites them.^^ i think it will be gaara,like everyone else's guess.winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 4:36:24 AM
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Thanks! And as soonas you get to the next chapter you'll see who it is! ^-^blueeyesgirl3 on July 11, 2007, 7:04:57 PM
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good story so far.^^ iv'e got a cat and she's always gettin' sick. sorry about yours...:[winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 4:35:49 AM
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Thanks, she's in a better place now :').NightWing101 on July 9, 2007, 5:31:18 AM
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AWSOME!!!winxgirl21 on July 9, 2007, 7:55:41 AM
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thnx! ^-^SasukesChick on July 8, 2007, 9:52:26 PM
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YAYs! I was right.......and very late with a comment. heh heh. Anyway, awesome chapt. Sasuke-kun's ancestor tried to court Sakura!!!!!!! ^^winxgirl21 on July 8, 2007, 11:51:23 PM
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Thanks! And yup, he did! ^-^SasukesChick on July 8, 2007, 9:45:26 PM
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Suna!? Gaara-sama! ^^ Sasuke-kun is a knight! YAYs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome where you put everyone. ^^ Continue!winxgirl21 on July 8, 2007, 11:50:53 PM
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Thanks! ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on July 8, 2007, 5:43:46 AM
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yay, I was right! Woot! I was also right about how gaara wants to court Sakura (I wouldn't say want, but you get my point). This is getting very interesting. I've always wanted to read a fanfic of how they go back in time. very exciting indeed!^^winxgirl21 on July 8, 2007, 8:31:31 AM
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Thanks! I've read a couple on Fanfiction, but I wanted to write one of my own, adn I'm really having fun writing it ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on July 8, 2007, 2:37:49 AM
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i'm slow on guessing who it was so i just figured it out this chapter was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^10 more cookies!!!This so feels like a sasuXsaku love story^^winxgirl21 on July 8, 2007, 8:30:35 AM
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lolz, thanks! yay, more cookies! And yup, taht's what it is! ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on July 9, 2007, 8:29:17 AM
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i knew it yay^^winxgirl21 on July 9, 2007, 8:40:49 AM
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^-^waterbender00 on July 7, 2007, 10:27:41 AM
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Nice. Please don't stop this. (0)_(0)winxgirl21 on July 7, 2007, 10:58:47 AM
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Thanks! And don't worry, i'm definately going to continue this one ^-^eelchic on July 7, 2007, 9:25:27 AM
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that waz the best chapter yet!!!winxgirl21 on July 7, 2007, 9:28:29 AM
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Thanks! ^-^crazicat06 on July 7, 2007, 5:44:32 AM
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lol, awsome!winxgirl21 on July 7, 2007, 8:21:28 AM
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thanks! ^-^PinkAngel101 on July 7, 2007, 4:00:29 AM
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WHO THE HECK IS DA PRINCE I WANNA NO GIMMI A HINT LOL ^^winxgirl21 on July 7, 2007, 4:01:32 AM
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Don't worry, I'm going to update in a couple of minutes! ^-^PinkAngel101 on July 6, 2007, 6:49:34 AM
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*crys* im so srry D=winxgirl21 on July 6, 2007, 8:07:04 AM
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So sorry, about what? Zoe? She's in a better place now... :')PinkAngel101 on July 7, 2007, 3:58:36 AM
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Thats nice to no =)winxgirl21 on July 7, 2007, 4:00:57 AM
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yea ^-^PinkAngel101 on July 6, 2007, 3:01:58 AM
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AWESOME CHAPPYS ^^winxgirl21 on July 6, 2007, 3:29:24 AM
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Thanks ^-^NightWing101 on July 5, 2007, 4:36:31 PM
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OH MY GOSH PLEASE TELL ME WHEN U UPDATE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! ITS AWSOME!!!winxgirl21 on July 5, 2007, 10:14:30 PM
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Thanks! And ok, I will!PinkAngel101 on July 5, 2007, 4:34:44 PM
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AWESOME ^^(srry about ur cat =( )
winxgirl21 on July 5, 2007, 10:13:48 PM
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Thanks! And thanks :') She's not suffering anymore, and I'm glad she isn't. I still miss her, thoguh....\Symphoniaprincess101 on July 5, 2007, 9:35:02 AM
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i'm stumped on who the prince of suna is no really i am.OMG i saw what Sasuke would look like as a knight whao awsome^^i fee; kind of bad for Naruto though but i just have to say this:Sasuke and Sakura sitting in a tree K.I.S.S.I.N.G first comes love then comes marrage then comes Sasuke with the baby carrage^0^i couldn't resit ;P 30 more cookies^^winxgirl21 on July 5, 2007, 10:57:32 AM
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Yay! More cookies! Lolz, yea, that's so true!AlleyCat17 on July 5, 2007, 6:39:03 AM
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this is a great chapter and it was a bit funny about the naruto thing and sauske is perfect to be a knight.and i think everyone knows who is the prince of suna.winxgirl21 on July 5, 2007, 7:08:53 AM
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yea, it's really obvious, lolz! Thanks!crazicat06 on July 4, 2007, 1:37:47 PM
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Hmmm.... Prince of Suna.... Umm... I dont know the villages correct name... But its Gaara isnt it?winxgirl21 on July 4, 2007, 10:26:38 PM
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you'll have to wait and see! ^-^crazicat06 on July 5, 2007, 10:04:26 AM
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XDwaterbender00 on July 4, 2007, 10:52:36 AM
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MUST. READ. MORE. This is AWWWWWEEEEESOOOOOOOMMMMMMME. *says in surf bum lingo*Ehem, Please write more.
winxgirl21 on July 4, 2007, 11:53:55 AM
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lolz, thanks! Don't worry, I'll definately be writing more! ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on July 4, 2007, 10:08:41 AM
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OMG the prince of Suna... heh, I think I have a pretty good guess! .... OMG I have a hunch of what might happen.... <.<\ Anywho, great place to put Naruto and Sasuke. They go perfectly with their surroundings. Naruto picks up horse dropping while Sauske is the shining knight in armor. Perfect! Woot, can't wait for the next chapter!^^winxgirl21 on July 4, 2007, 10:10:54 AM
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lolz, thanks! We'll just have to see if what you think happens..o.o and yea, i tried to place them where I thought they would go, guess I'm not the only one who thinks it fits! ^-^crazicat06 on July 2, 2007, 8:32:34 AM
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Awsome chappie!Aw... Poor kitty.... I feel your pain. My doggie was put to sleep in 05.
winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 8:35:14 AM
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thanks ^-^ it's good to know that she's in a better place. Yea, i never realized how hard it is, but it's extremely hard. Especially since she was only 4 yrs old...^-^crazicat06 on July 2, 2007, 1:15:07 PM
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Aw..... My doggie was seven. He died young too.winxgirl21 on July 3, 2007, 5:00:54 AM
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aww...I hate it when animals die young...crazicat06 on July 3, 2007, 5:07:34 AM
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*nods*SasukesChick on July 2, 2007, 6:52:35 AM
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Awesome chapter. Very Interesting. I'm so sorry about your cat. It is good she isn't suffering and is in a better place.winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 6:56:29 AM
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thanks! And, yea, I'm just glad to know that she lived a good life.Symphoniaprincess101 on July 2, 2007, 5:23:13 AM
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The story is mega awsome so far keep up the Awsome work on all your stories^^Whaaaaaa the kitty had to be put to sleep?!?!?!?!?!?!I hope my dog Titina is watching out for me and i hope your kitty will be too TTT^^TTT now if u'll ecuse me i gatta go pray^^Symphoniaprincess101 on July 2, 2007, 5:24:23 AM
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Btw 20 more cookies^^winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 5:30:43 AM
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Yea, she did. Adn yea, I'm sure thy're watching over us, and they know that we loved them. I was just praying a couple of hours ago. ^-^, oh and thankies for the cookies! ^-^waterbender00 on July 2, 2007, 5:17:43 AM
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This story is gonna be awesome. I like it already. ----
And about your cat. I'm sorry for your loss. I too have lost a pet. My parents had to put my dog Tia to sleep a few years ago.
winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 5:19:45 AM
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Thanks ^-^ And, yea, it's really hard, I've lost two rabbits, but it didn't hit me as hard as this. Thanks ^-^AlleyCat17 on July 2, 2007, 5:10:49 AM
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hey i would like to know how old are they ?are they 12-13 or are they 16 you know when there older and stronger.anyways i think they should be older.winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 5:14:13 AM
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hmm..I think they're around 15 in the story.Symphoniaprincess101 on July 2, 2007, 4:54:45 AM
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Coolness^^20 cookies already for this story^^winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 5:13:44 AM
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Thanks! ^-^ yay, more cookies!AlleyCat17 on July 2, 2007, 4:35:03 AM
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omg that is a awesome story and i love this chapter so much you got to tell me when you up date it ok.and i love reading naruto storys like this they are so fun to read.oh and i so sorry about your cat.because i love cats and i have a dog that has some prombles too and it's only a matter of time when the vet said's to put her down.when she do get put down im going to very said but until then im just going to love and play with her alot until she's gone.winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 4:41:44 AM
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yea, that's the best thing to do. I'm going to remember my cat from when we played on Friday, which is the day before she went to the hospital. We were in the hallway and I was shooting ponytails down the halla dn she was chasing them. that was her favorite thing to do ^-^. I'll definately let you know when i update.sasukeXsakuraforever on July 2, 2007, 3:53:39 AM
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Ohhh! Yay! Thankgoodness Kakashi knows whats going on! Or else that would have turned out bad. Gr8t chapter!About your cat, I give you my deepest sincerity. I am so sorry about her. Your right, as long as she isn't suffering anymore. She's in a better place a presume, happy little kitty! I hope you feel better, I know what your going through.^^
winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 3:57:11 AM
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Thanks, yea, she is in a better place, and I have good memories with her. ^-^SasukesChick on July 1, 2007, 10:29:33 PM
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Awesome. vU should really continue with this so.....CONTINUE!!winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 10:47:27 PM
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Thanks!lolz, I will!waterbender00 on July 1, 2007, 9:54:10 PM
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This is gonna be awesome. ^^winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 10:47:09 PM
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thanks! ^-^sasukeXsakuraforever on July 1, 2007, 12:25:59 PM
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Oooooh! Now this is interesting!!! I always loved Naruto fanfics that goes back into the past... or possibly the future... I dunno, its a cliffhanger, I always guess at these things. You should continue! Accually... you NEED to continue!! It's very exciting!! ^_~winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 10:46:26 PM
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THanks! I'm going to put the next chapter up later today! ^-^crazicat06 on July 1, 2007, 12:22:22 PM
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Cool so far.winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 10:45:16 PM
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thanks ^-^