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In The Shadows: Shadow Souls Pt 1

Draft 2 Coming Soon.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Engulfed In Darkness
Submitted: May 2, 2007 • Updated: June 2, 2007
Word count: 730 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 205

Chapter 1 - Asylum
Submitted: May 3, 2007 • Updated: September 19, 2007
Word count: 2115 • Size: 11k • Comments: 8 • views: 217

Chapter 5 - My Life As A Teenage Loser
Submitted: May 5, 2007 • Updated: May 5, 2007
Word count: 1565 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 194

Chapter 6 - Lunch Time
Submitted: May 5, 2007 • Updated: May 5, 2007
Word count: 604 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 152

Chapter 7 - Revenge of Dr. Connors
Submitted: May 5, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 682 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 141

Chapter 8 - The Steel Heart
Submitted: August 18, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 2710 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 138

Chapter 9 - Peacemaker
Submitted: May 13, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 594 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 140

Chapter 10 - The Mole
Submitted: May 13, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 102 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 105

Chapter 11 - Rise of The Shadow Ghost (Censored)
Submitted: May 16, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 1729 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 154

Chapter 12 - The Freakshow We Call Home
Submitted: May 17, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 618 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 129

Chapter 13 - Jenny's Path To Revenge
Submitted: June 2, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 289 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 116

Chapter 14 - Ashley & Adam's E Night (Heavily Censored)
Submitted: June 2, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 697 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 162

Chapter 15 - Obsessive Paranoia
Submitted: June 2, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 289 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 127

Chapter 16 - Forty Six & 2
Submitted: June 2, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 1871 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 198

Chapter 17 - Selling Your Spark To The Devil
Submitted: June 2, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 793 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 127

Chapter 18 - Storytellers
Submitted: August 18, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 3039 • Size: 15k • Comments: 0 • views: 129

Chapter 19 - The Bioforce
Submitted: August 18, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 3051 • Size: 16k • Comments: 0 • views: 127

Chapter 20 - Captors
Submitted: June 6, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 3048 • Size: 16k • Comments: 0 • views: 114

Chapter 21 - Final Breaths
Submitted: June 6, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 414 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 141

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HALOGUNNYSGT on June 8, 2008, 11:00:34 PM

HALOGUNNYSGT on (Chapter: 21)
HALOGUNNYSGTOMG Best story i have ever heard

dragonmaniac25 on July 12, 2007, 8:34:35 AM

dragonmaniac25 on (Chapter: 9)
dragonmaniac25i am da 500th reader! woo hoo!

sry, being so busy i really haven't had the chance to really sit down and read it, and now i cant stop!

(but i will soon cause i have a horseback riding lesoon to go to...again) bye! ^^

power9x on July 12, 2007, 8:38:31 AM

power9x on (Chapter: 9)
power9xYeah! 500! The prize is, well, I forgot. I was going to have a story request, but you already are an awesome writer, so I don't know if that'd be sutiable. I've faved your stuff, so I can't really do that, and I suck with art requests. Also, I'm broke, so I can't really buy anything. How bout, a :)? If you want a story request or trade seriously though, I'll do it. But, just saying my prizes don't really apply at the moment. Well, thanks for reading this story! Every view on this story is like a child to me, or something like that. Bye.

dragonmaniac25 on July 13, 2007, 9:10:54 AM

dragonmaniac25 on (Chapter: index)
dragonmaniac25hehe! (evil idea brewing) I believe you need more pictures so im going to request an art trade! actually whatever i draw is going to be for your contest for a scene in your story! (thnx 4 the (:) (: <3

power9x on July 14, 2007, 2:06:32 AM

power9x on (Chapter: index)
power9xCrap, I was too embarrased that I was asking for fanart of fanart that I got rid of the contest, though I'll bring it back just for you. Peace.

AnimeX on June 16, 2007, 4:57:55 PM

AnimeX on (Chapter: 1)
AnimeXoh...

power9x on June 18, 2007, 8:27:44 AM

power9x on (Chapter: 1)
power9xWhy did you "oh..."?

AnimeX on June 18, 2007, 1:53:25 PM

AnimeX on (Chapter: index)
AnimeXoops1 that's weird what happen to the rest of my comment!?
ah.. what i originally typed was "Oh.. that's a very interesting story..nice job"
sorry 4 the oh.. thing idk what happen :I
um.. suggestions!? I would say spacing out the lines(makes it easier to read
i think) other then that.. it's well written! Great job

power9x on June 11, 2007, 2:34:44 AM

power9x on (Chapter: index)
power9xI'm honored that I have so many views on my story! Though, this story is in the MLAATR universe, and most people here are anime fans, not cartoon fans. Also, since Nick messed with the timeslot alot, not many people have seen it. I don't want to sound beggy, but it would help your reading experience if you fall under one of the below catagories, to
follow those instructions:

For people who have never watched MLAATR: Goto: www.teenagerobot.tk. Has the whole series. Episodes I suggest to watch to understand: It Came From Next Door(NEED TO WATCH! First episode. Sets up entire series), Mist Opportunities (For best insight on the Misty vs Jenny battle later in the story), Attack of the 5 1/2 Foot Geek (For knowledge of Sheldon, which is in the story), and finally, Escape From Cluster Prime (The movie, shows the Cluster Empire)

For MLAATR haters: From experience, you don't have to like a show to like the fanfictions (I didn't like MLAATR when I started reading MLAATR fanfics, which got me hooked on it in the first place. Also, I hate Naruto, not to offend Naruto fans, I just think he's annoying, yet I read Naruto fanfics, and I still enjoy them.), so you should read it anyways. Though, if you've only seen one or two episodes, watch the ones above also for a bit more insight.

For people gaping at the 31 chapters above, or just are too lazy to read the entire story: Read the whole thing! Don't just read one chapter! It starts out slow, but it really gains pace. Read the entire thing, it's not severely long per chapter. You don't have to read it in one sitting, but read it all before you say "wow" and are done with the story. I'm not bashing comments if you read the first chapter, I'm basing people that read the first chapter it say "wow" and move on. Read it all or atleast read some of it. Plus, skipping chapters to speed through it may lose some of the story. Read it all.

People that don't criticize: I want to become a great writer, so please, tell me what's bad about it along with the good. If you can't say anything nice, say it but don't flame it.

Spammers: Get out. Now.

little_idiot on June 9, 2007, 9:22:22 AM

little_idiot on (Chapter: 1)
little_idiot... wow

power9x on June 9, 2007, 10:49:37 AM

power9x on (Chapter: 1)
power9xKeep reading, it gets even better!

KidRaccoon on June 9, 2007, 6:23:04 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 3)
KidRaccoonCool...

KidRaccoon on June 9, 2007, 6:15:39 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 2)
KidRaccoonA killer baby!!!!!!!! ^^

power9x on June 9, 2007, 6:17:54 AM

power9x on (Chapter: 2)
power9xThoust be thy powern o theeeth OC.

KidRaccoon on June 9, 2007, 6:12:46 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 1)
KidRaccoon...

power9x on June 9, 2007, 6:15:15 AM

power9x on (Chapter: 1)
power9xWas is really bad, in your opinion?

KidRaccoon on June 9, 2007, 6:17:43 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonNo, I like it. I just don't completely understand cuz I don't watch "My Life As A Teenage Robot" so I'm just working it out in my head. ^^'''

power9x on June 9, 2007, 6:21:45 AM

power9x on (Chapter: index)
power9xHere's a little breakdown:

Jenny Wakeman, otherwise known as XJ9, is a superhero crime fighting robot with amazing powers and gadgets, but was designed as a teenager. The entire series is about her adventures and stuff with friends, saving the world, school, and other things.

If you want to get aquantied with the series before you read it, goto www.teenagerobot.tk. It has the entire series.

KidRaccoon on June 9, 2007, 6:24:31 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonThnx, I think I get I get it now. ^^

roxie556 on June 7, 2007, 3:53:06 AM

roxie556 on (Chapter: 29)
roxie556wow why did she kill her

power9x on June 7, 2007, 6:33:34 AM

power9x on (Chapter: 29)
power9xWho kill who?
Jenny Vs Misty: Jenny went crazy with rage. It was her hatred of the fear and anger she felt that she took out on Misty, with a violent ending.
Ashley Vs Jenny: Ashley had to do it, before Jenny killed Adam, her love and companion. It was hard, but she needed to do it in order to save the world. Unfortunately, she didn't defeat her dad in time, and the world was plunged into the chaos that makes the setting for Path To War.

roxie556 on June 7, 2007, 11:09:07 PM

roxie556 on (Chapter: index)
roxie556oh wow on jenny vs misty one that one was great but extremly vilont

power9x on June 8, 2007, 11:24:43 AM

power9x on (Chapter: index)
power9xSort of a style that it's. The violence shows how much Jenny's gone evil. The darkness calls for violence. Thanks for the comments!

roxie556 on June 8, 2007, 1:49:36 PM

roxie556 on (Chapter: index)
roxie556no problem anytime and this is a made up story right lol

power9x on June 2, 2007, 6:56:41 AM

power9x on (Chapter: 1)
power9xI've rewritten the intro, so if you've read the intro before, read it again!