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Submitted September 1, 2005 Updated January 20, 2007 Status Complete | The Titans are confronted by a new super powered teen who wishes to hlp them revive Terra (Please comment)
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Promises
Submitted: September 1, 2005 • Updated: September 1, 2005
Word count: 443 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 263
Chapter 2 - Searching
Submitted: September 2, 2005 • Updated: September 2, 2005
Word count: 291 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 246
Chapter 3 - Erika
Submitted: December 9, 2005 • Updated: December 9, 2005
Word count: 492 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 261
Chapter 4 - Trustme...not
Submitted: September 1, 2005 • Updated: September 1, 2005
Word count: 604 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 210
Chapter 5 - The Story
Submitted: September 1, 2005 • Updated: September 1, 2005
Word count: 730 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 243
Chapter 6 - Friends and Enemies
Submitted: September 1, 2005 • Updated: September 1, 2005
Word count: 1111 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 281
Chapter 7 - Communication at last
Submitted: September 1, 2005 • Updated: September 1, 2005
Word count: 685 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 216
Chapter 8 - Red X
Submitted: September 1, 2005 • Updated: September 1, 2005
Word count: 1006 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 253
Chapter 9 - Robin's Dream
Submitted: September 1, 2005 • Updated: September 1, 2005
Word count: 995 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 239
Chapter 10 - Meeting in the Storm
Submitted: September 1, 2005 • Updated: September 1, 2005
Word count: 868 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 245
Chapter 11 - Paranoia,Nerves,and The Mask-Reavealed
Submitted: August 21, 2006 • Updated: August 21, 2006
Word count: 1495 • Size: 7k • Comments: 1 • views: 259
Chapter 12 - Her True Feelings
Submitted: August 31, 2006 • Updated: August 31, 2006
Word count: 1045 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 243
Chapter 13 - Missing!
Submitted: September 21, 2006 • Updated: September 21, 2006
Word count: 1205 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 245
Chapter 14 - Escape
Submitted: October 24, 2006 • Updated: October 24, 2006
Word count: 2095 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 233
Chapter 15 - Return to the Dark Side
Submitted: November 9, 2006 • Updated: November 9, 2006
Word count: 1278 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 225
Chapter 16 - Training
Submitted: November 23, 2006 • Updated: November 23, 2006
Word count: 2481 • Size: 13k • Comments: 2 • views: 226
Chapter 17 - Memories From a Forgotten Past
Submitted: December 6, 2006 • Updated: December 6, 2006
Word count: 2364 • Size: 12k • Comments: 2 • views: 241
Chapter 18 - Not Meant to Be
Submitted: December 28, 2006 • Updated: December 28, 2006
Word count: 2127 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 219
Chapter 19 - Sacrifice
Submitted: January 16, 2007 • Updated: January 16, 2007
Word count: 2985 • Size: 15k • Comments: 4 • views: 258
Chapter 20 - Epilouge: Final Farewell
Submitted: January 20, 2007 • Updated: January 20, 2007
Word count: 1158 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 243
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Rhia24 on January 20, 2007, 8:15:04 PM
Awwww....very cute. So, the letter finally came in, and now it's all over. Good job wrapping this one up!Rhia24 on January 18, 2007, 6:17:51 AM
That is NOT the end! No, you didn't mention a letter or anything! I guessed what the letter's about now, but....well, I did it first. Keiryi died before Erika, and you stole my idea, Rae! No fair!Really, this chapter was actually well-written, and I liked the battle scene, but the end was corny, just like you warned me. Please write another chapter to clear up any confusion.
Peace, Love, and Peace OUT!
~Rhia
Raven_of_the_underworld on January 19, 2007, 7:25:37 AM
And I didn't steal ur idea Erika was supose to die from the very start. See her consiouns played a huge part the whole time. She just couldn't let Robin die. However I do have one confession, I wish I would've killed Gypsie off too, oh well nobody's perfectAlice
Rhia24 on January 20, 2007, 8:10:38 PM
Srry, I wasn't serious about the whole stealing thing. Just seemed kinda weird that mine happened, and then yours happened. I'm still waiting to see that letter though!Peace, Love, and Peace OUT!
~Rhia
Raven_of_the_underworld on January 19, 2007, 7:22:13 AM
Don't worry there is still more to come I know the ending was a little dissapointing but thats not it. Again the letter doesn't come in till after this don't freak out Im not finished yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ali
Raven_of_the_underworld on January 16, 2007, 10:03:03 AM
YaY for the few people who actually read this I finally got the box thing fixed!!!!!!!!!!Ali
Rhia24 on December 29, 2006, 10:26:10 PM
Oh crap, oh crap, oh crap! Kinda saw that coming, but ouch! My big grammatical beef was a few really long sentences, but you could pick some of them apart to vary sentence length. Like this--ha ha! Fix one or two run-on sentences and this baby's good to go!FirestyleJutsumasterUchiwagirl on December 11, 2006, 3:27:36 AM
YaY evil plan Evil planI know I already know whats gunna happen but i still like to read!!!!!!!!!!! Awesomeness
Dont forget to tell me
Rai
(Sasuke rocks my socks & Itachi rules way more than school)
Rhia24 on December 8, 2006, 6:34:50 AM
Yay! So Collin's not totally evillized like I thought, but hey! It's starting to build, and you're making me really frustrated here, wondering how it's going to end. Still don't get how the cover relates to it all.....oh well, see ya round!FirestyleJutsumasterUchiwagirl on November 27, 2006, 2:46:15 AM
Ha Ha Ha Collin is very awesome, once again I luv Erika, She's funny. And Totally evil, although i have to agree with her, cute guys falin out of the sky that is!!!!!!!! remember if ya add more tell meRai
(Sasuke rocksmy socks and Itachi rules way more than school)
(not that I would know what schools like)
Rhia24 on November 23, 2006, 10:43:56 AM
OMG, she found a cute guy literally falling from the sky and she just had to turn him evil! Why?! One thing I noticed you kinda slipped into was starting all your sentences with the same part of speech, like "The.....The....Erika....That..." Vary your sentence structure and it'll make things more interesting, mmmmkay?Peace, Love, and Peace OUT!
~Rhia
FirestyleJutsumasterUchiwagirl on November 12, 2006, 9:20:28 AM
Hey!!!!!!!!!!Awesome new chapter!! I like Evil Erika way more and Gypsie!!! YAY!!!!! well I know that I already basicaly knew what would happen cause well I won't bring that up again, but any ways great chapter!!! I have another Turney so if u post email me and ill look at it, well once again great!!!
Rai
(Sasuke rocks my socks & Itachi rules way more than school)
(They don't have my fave color so it'll have to do)
Rhia24 on November 11, 2006, 7:58:32 AM
I loved this chapter! Yay, we're back to DS Erika! Not a whole lot to criticize here. The pace is actually moving pretty well, and the grammar's just fine.Luv Ya!
~Gabz
FirestyleJutsumasterUchiwagirl on September 24, 2006, 11:45:25 AM
Hey chica!!! Great Chapter same as last time!!! kinda !!! I'm lost!!!! Well good job any waysRai
(Sasuke rocks my socks and Itachi rules WAY more than school-I luv him)
Rhia24 on September 22, 2006, 8:49:55 AM
Oooo, suspicious. Yes, I think so. Honestly, I love what you're doing with Erika. She's so much more complex than what you started out with, and it's becoming a really good story. Kudos on this chapter. Nice description, language, etc.Peace, love, and peace out,
~Gabz
Rhia24 on September 2, 2006, 11:49:56 PM
EEEEEEK! I think this is the first big romance scene I've seen you write....may I say a job well done? I'm so proud of you*tear*! This was a great chapter, and I can really see this story is developing you as a writer, although you don't update very often ;P. That scene was so kawaii! Much love for a really good chapter!~INfinite HEarts,
You-Know-Who(Celina does too;P)
FirestyleJutsumasterUchiwagirl on August 31, 2006, 11:14:16 AM
Hey long time no see!!! Great chapter!!! I luved it!!!! So ok I Already know how the guy who took Erika was but it's still a great way to end the chapter!!!! Keep it up!!!Rai
(Sasuke rocks my socks & Itachi rules way more than school)
Rhia24 on August 22, 2006, 11:38:58 AM
Hey, great chapter. Sort of filler-ish, but still moving things along. Erika's an evil little vixen, but her crush on Robin is so cute! Glad you got over writer's block, and I missed this story. Keep writing, and I hope you get the block thing fixed soon.Peace, Love, and Peace Out,
~You-Know-Who
FirestyleJutsumasterUchiwagirl on July 25, 2006, 9:18:02 AM
Hey awesome story.It rocks.At first I felt sorry for Erika but then I read more and I didn't anymore. well I can't wait for more.I luv it and thanx for the entertainment!!!Rai
(Sasuke rocks my socks!)
Rhia24 on July 20, 2006, 11:09:03 PM
'Allo! This was a cool chapter, and I see you're finally unveiling Erika's....well, you know what I mean. Cool chapters, and I love how manipulative Erika is. Keep writing, Rae-chan!~You-know-who
Raven_of_the_underworld on July 20, 2006, 4:54:16 AM
Ok every one I'm not really sure what's going on with the box's i know it's distracting but I dont type it that way!!Ali & DS Ali
Rhia24 on July 18, 2006, 1:46:26 AM
Hey! Good chappa-ter, and I'm glad to see this story is finally going somewhere. Just be careful not to use someone's name too often in a paragraph(you did that last chappie), and otherwise, your spelling and grammar are doing alright. Felt really bad for Erika....Lata!
~Gabz
Raven_of_the_underworld on July 16, 2006, 3:45:33 AM
Thank you all for the your comments. All comments good and bad help me improve the quallity of my story. I look forward to your future opinions!-Ali & DS Ali-
Rhia24 on July 16, 2006, 12:34:46 AM
Hey! I know I kinda read this already, but it was a good chapter. There were some spelling and grammar issues, but otherwise, the people were all pretty much in-character. I can only imagine the awkward silence....heh heh...~Rhia(you-know-who)
Rhia24 on February 26, 2006, 9:23:56 AM
Hey! Not bad. I can't wait to see where it's going!~Gabz
spaZzgirl8 on January 11, 2006, 2:12:46 AM
NOOO keep going!spaZzgirl8 on January 11, 2006, 2:10:07 AM
Robin is really determined you captured his personality! And that can be hard to do Raven_of_the_underworld on September 8, 2005, 9:20:06 AM
Coments any one?