Deus Ex Machina...
Submitted February 16, 2007 Updated April 8, 2007 Status Complete | A story that explains Blain's past... Fancharacters listed: Child of the Feral -Tala Saluki -Thunder -Ice -Magneto AngelicZero -Zero
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Chapter 1… Prologue
Submitted: February 16, 2007 • Updated: February 16, 2007
Word count: 527 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 164
Chapter 2 - Chapter 2... Conscious...
Submitted: February 16, 2007 • Updated: February 16, 2007
Word count: 2215 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 210
Chapter 3 - Chapter 3... F.U.B.A.R
Submitted: February 16, 2007 • Updated: February 16, 2007
Word count: 2108 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 164
Chapter 4 - Chapter 4... Truth and reconciliation
Submitted: February 16, 2007 • Updated: February 16, 2007
Word count: 2390 • Size: 12k • Comments: 2 • views: 178
Chapter 5 - Chapter 5... Spread the love...
Submitted: February 16, 2007 • Updated: February 17, 2007
Word count: 2686 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 162
Chapter 6 - Chapter 6... The 3rd generation...
Submitted: February 16, 2007 • Updated: February 16, 2007
Word count: 2446 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 168
Chapter 7 - Chapter 7... Clash of the Titans...
Submitted: February 16, 2007 • Updated: February 16, 2007
Word count: 2150 • Size: 11k • Comments: 4 • views: 210
Chapter 8 - Chapter 8... End of the beginning...
Submitted: February 18, 2007 • Updated: February 18, 2007
Word count: 2327 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 207
Chapter 9 - Chapter 9... The fourth guy...
Submitted: February 19, 2007 • Updated: February 20, 2007
Word count: 2174 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 161
Chapter 10 - Chapter 10... The great crusade...
Submitted: February 20, 2007 • Updated: February 20, 2007
Word count: 2505 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 169
Chapter 11 - Chapter 11... Defeated victory...
Submitted: February 21, 2007 • Updated: February 21, 2007
Word count: 2347 • Size: 11k • Comments: 4 • views: 165
Chapter 12 - Chapter 12... Apotheosis...
Submitted: March 4, 2007 • Updated: March 4, 2007
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Chapter 13 - Chapter 13... Deus Ex Machina...
Submitted: March 10, 2007 • Updated: March 10, 2007
Word count: 2434 • Size: 11k • Comments: 5 • views: 174
Chapter 14 - Chapter 14... Shadows of death...
Submitted: March 16, 2007 • Updated: March 16, 2007
Word count: 2082 • Size: 10k • Comments: 6 • views: 155
Chapter 15 - Chapter 15... Redeemer...
Submitted: March 18, 2007 • Updated: March 18, 2007
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Chapter 16 - Chapter 16... Depredation...
Submitted: March 19, 2007 • Updated: March 19, 2007
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Chapter 17 - Chapter 17... Avenger...
Submitted: March 25, 2007 • Updated: March 25, 2007
Word count: 2151 • Size: 10k • Comments: 5 • views: 169
Chapter 18 - Chapter 18... Beginning of the end...
Submitted: March 27, 2007 • Updated: March 27, 2007
Word count: 2262 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 220
Chapter 19 - Chapter 19... What goes around comes around...
Submitted: April 2, 2007 • Updated: April 2, 2007
Word count: 2820 • Size: 14k • Comments: 5 • views: 158
Chapter 20 - Chapter 20... My dearest Jasco...
Submitted: April 5, 2007 • Updated: April 5, 2007
Word count: 3091 • Size: 15k • Comments: 6 • views: 223
Chapter 21 - FAQ, Funfacts and Outtakes!
Submitted: April 5, 2007 • Updated: April 5, 2007
Word count: 829 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 176
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Boo810 on December 6, 2008, 9:32:07 PM
Minda on September 26, 2007, 9:50:48 PM
CURSE MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DAMN THE TOMBOY CURSE!!
DAMN THE EMO CURSE!!
DAMN THE GAMER CURSE!!!
DAMN MY LIFE!!!
MrGimp on September 27, 2007, 12:45:32 AM
eeh... wtf is your problem...? O_oMinda on September 21, 2007, 9:00:35 AM
DUDE NOT KEWL MY GUY WAS MADE BY EGGMAN!!!DAMN I HATE IT WHEN THIS HAPPENS!!!!
*dies*i hate when i make some one and find out someone made someone like them already-_-
kittyshootingstar on May 15, 2007, 1:44:00 PM
Woah. Amazing story. Amazing. Woah. I'm sorry, I really don't have words right now. Just wow.Flashthehedgehog on April 5, 2007, 11:07:25 PM
Ah that's some interested stuff. I'll have to use that FUBAR as a reference in school. I'm sad it ended to, every time the e-mail said "Mr Gimp has uploaded a new chapter" I was like YES!I just hope my story can give you some entertainment while it lasts
Flashthehedgehog on April 5, 2007, 11:02:22 PM
Ah man that is an awesome ending I actually read through it again! I can't believe you made my story fit in with yours as well. Awesome reference, Off goes Flash Sparrow to sail the seas. I'm overwhelmed. Brilliant mate.ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on April 5, 2007, 12:21:02 PM
The circle of life....some African words... XP Dude, had know idea you had scars! I got one on my right wrist, because I mess with my cat too much...he's fast too, like Stephan :D  nextguardian on April 5, 2007, 10:36:54 AM
Man alive, this should be published! Great stuff!AngelicZero on April 5, 2007, 7:40:23 AM
awesome gimp that was the best story ever you did a great job and i hope you come up with another good storyAngelicZero on April 5, 2007, 7:23:03 AM
halo...-kicks eggman away from the action figures and growls holding onto the flood figurines- grrr....lol nice jobShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on April 5, 2007, 5:53:48 AM
gorgeous ending. just plain gorgeous. The whole thing was gorgeous! Like a flower shop filled with the best top-notch flowers from all corners of the world! .....Similies are fun ^-^ I can't wait to se your next project. It never ceases to amaze me!      nextguardian on April 3, 2007, 11:44:53 AM
Great stuff!AngelicZero on April 3, 2007, 6:53:30 AM
cool @_@ my guy got captured but rescued by blain...ysy...thank god...i thought id be a rat bbq...anyways nice jobShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on April 2, 2007, 6:23:34 AM
........*scratches head*..........*whistles*...........*glares at computer* ALRIGHT!!! STOP TAUNTING ME!!! .......I honestly don't think there's any words that can describe this...besides awesome, but it's been used...*points below* I must join the battle field!*runs away* Flashthehedgehog on April 2, 2007, 5:32:35 AM
OMG so much action and tension. Awesome awesome AWESOME chapter.I helped kill a fat man. I've always wanted to do that
AngelicZero on March 28, 2007, 2:14:48 PM
-my kittens play in my hair while I type- ouch ow ow ow ouch yeow...oh doing great so far...good thing you didnt make amy yell at me or hit me...thank god...well keep it up man rootin for yanextguardian on March 28, 2007, 10:17:04 AM
I think this has been my favorite chapter so far. Great job, keep it coming!Flashthehedgehog on March 28, 2007, 2:55:06 AM
Oh wow. Again, this is awesome you can actually imagine yourself in there with them. Of course if it were me it'd be like.Everyone: CHARGE!
Me: Er..bye...*runs in other direction*
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on March 27, 2007, 9:31:32 AM
...I swear, I'm gonna wet myself...CLIFFHANGERS GIVE BRAIN CANCER!!!X_X..........er.....no words can describe the happy that I'm feeling ;D nextguardian on March 26, 2007, 1:23:33 PM
You have a way of describing carnage that is irreplicable. In other words, THIS IS GREAT!ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on March 26, 2007, 5:46:59 AM
...they did a hoo-ah... :D So the next few chapters are gonna be like, filled with actiony violence? Something resembling the final boss battle at the end of a video game!? ME CANNOT IMAGINE!!! Once again, it's awesome, purely awesome!AngelicZero on March 25, 2007, 6:17:51 AM
sweet ^_^ still awesome but one thing is for sure how could Dr.Eggman have all those nukes? oh well thanks for adding meh in the story -thumbs up-Flashthehedgehog on March 25, 2007, 5:38:14 AM
*gawps at screen in amazement*ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on March 21, 2007, 5:55:23 AM
¡No puedo tomarlo! ¡Es tan emocional!Â
...that says 'I can't take it! It's so emotional!'....I don't even take Spanish class, so that's worth wondering...What ever your doing, keep doing it and never EVER stop, like me, cause I stopped, and can't seem to start again!
Flashthehedgehog on March 21, 2007, 3:54:37 AM
Wow I feel sorry for Blain. I would probably be like that if my arm was in a bionic state. Well actually I would be like "cool!" and impressed, but I'd also be like Blain. I'm just rambling now, so I'll shut up and say that was an awesome chapter. I wonder what Robotnik has in store?nextguardian on March 20, 2007, 1:48:25 PM
Yikes! No anesthesia (sp) even! Boy I bet that hurt!Blain's reaction: Kills me
AngelicZero on March 19, 2007, 1:30:00 PM
sweetness cool im still to comment first!!! good so far and always willFlashthehedgehog on March 19, 2007, 5:13:22 AM
Oh wow great chapter, so many twistsnextguardian on March 18, 2007, 1:12:38 PM
Looking forward to more!nextguardian on March 18, 2007, 1:08:50 PM
Whoa...I can honestly say I didn't see that comingChild_of_the_feral on March 18, 2007, 7:36:03 AM
Woah. Nice chapter!!! Very dramatic.I can't wait for number 16. ^_^
AngelicZero on March 18, 2007, 7:16:42 AM
oh also if you want you can add my character if you want too its all up to you ^^AngelicZero on March 18, 2007, 7:14:32 AM
woot first to comment!!! wow it seems deep in detail...I like stories like this your very talented gimp let me know if theres moreShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on March 16, 2007, 11:05:57 PM
OMFG! THEY KILLED BLAIN!!!*pulls big friggin gun* That's it! I'm going in!*runs into explosions, only to tripped by a rock* ...Ow...Â
Awesomeness is unbearble! I can't imagine what will happen next!
Flashthehedgehog on March 17, 2007, 3:20:48 AM
lmao!Flashthehedgehog on March 17, 2007, 3:20:25 AM
Ah balls! Well obviously I'd be swearing a lot more than that but you know....kids and stuffWonderful setimental chapter, you don't mind if I use this as a reference in my story do you?
AngelicZero on March 16, 2007, 6:35:37 PM
woah...nice so far keep it goingnextguardian on March 11, 2007, 1:51:47 PM
...This story needs an award. Brilliant work.ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on March 11, 2007, 12:43:24 AM
Damn, I'm gonna cry too...That was just magnificent man. The graphic description for Talon's death then Tala getting hanged, I was never expecting it! Truly awesome, keep it up!Flashthehedgehog on March 10, 2007, 7:36:45 PM
O.M.G such emotion. I love it, keep up the amazing work!Child_of_the_feral on March 10, 2007, 6:07:57 AM
Ooer!! Tala ish teh.... Dead o.OPoor Jasco!! TT_TT *Huggles him*
nextguardian on March 5, 2007, 10:28:49 AM
lol, this stuff never fails to be entertaining!Flashthehedgehog on March 4, 2007, 1:58:29 AM
Lol, some funny stuff in there and obviously some dramatic stuff. Another victory for Blain and youShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on March 4, 2007, 1:36:17 AM
I just got lost at the end, flippin quotes, never know if you're saying them right! Good chappie! I'll wait silently in the bushes for more!*hides in bushes*nextguardian on February 23, 2007, 11:47:52 AM
Great work man! RIP CyrusFlashthehedgehog on February 23, 2007, 5:11:40 AM
sad story man, great enough to be in a movie. You sure do like saying "run like hell" a lot though.Flashthehedgehog on February 22, 2007, 3:25:00 AM
Absolutely awesome chapter. Nuf saidShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on February 21, 2007, 8:39:13 AM
Aww, I liked Cyrus, now he's dead...*holds a lighter in the air*Â
Me and Blain have the same nervous shaking problem ^-^ Good chapter! Can't wait for the next!
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on February 20, 2007, 10:44:37 PM
I need more! I can't even think of actiony stuff like this myself! Keep going man!nextguardian on February 20, 2007, 9:36:09 AM
Oh man, this is the best one yet!Flashthehedgehog on February 20, 2007, 12:37:42 AM
Oh wow I wasn't expecting that, talk about a way to surprise me. Thanks a lot for putting Flash in dude!nextguardian on February 19, 2007, 9:23:26 AM
Poor Jasco, no respect!Anyway, great chapter!
Flashthehedgehog on February 19, 2007, 2:01:46 AM
Er...ok quite confusing and a little Aladdin speech there. Great chapter though, you really feel as if you're in the action.MrGimp on February 19, 2007, 6:39:29 AM
Heh, so thats where its from! I've heard it somewhere before, but couldnt place it... But, ah well... ^^Thanks for the comment!
Flashthehedgehog on February 19, 2007, 1:43:30 AM
Gotta...read...more!nextguardian on February 18, 2007, 9:27:59 AM
I've gotta agree with ShadowsGirlfriend. Poor Blain gets no respect!ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on February 18, 2007, 3:08:56 AM
Wooo! Such action! I love what Blain says when Jasco opens up the doors. Pure genius! Now I'll go sit in a corner and wait for the next chapter!*flies away*nextguardian on February 17, 2007, 12:28:33 PM
Great! Looking forward to more!Flashthehedgehog on February 17, 2007, 4:36:46 AM
go JascoSaluki on February 17, 2007, 3:40:24 AM
MrGimp on February 17, 2007, 4:25:57 AM
Oh crap! Thanks for noticing, i'll go change now! ^^ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on February 16, 2007, 11:53:12 PM
HOO-AH!!!*gets shot* I love the part where everyone was acting like prisoners...Sonic was in agony... :) Another good chapter! Keep it going!Flashthehedgehog on February 16, 2007, 8:11:09 PM
Great chapter, once again. I forgot to mention earlier, well done for adding Jasco inFlashthehedgehog on February 16, 2007, 8:00:47 PM
bloody awesome. Good enough to be in a hollywood movie for sure.Flashthehedgehog on February 16, 2007, 7:50:31 PM
Wow awesome gory details and all! Great workFlashthehedgehog on February 16, 2007, 7:39:05 PM
wow! Just wownextguardian on February 16, 2007, 7:10:06 AM
Jasco: Ssh, ssssssh, donât cry! Heâs just asleep⦠Thatâs all⦠Maybe I'm a jerk, but this really cracked me up!
and the scrabble thing...
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on February 16, 2007, 6:59:48 AM
....your excellency makes my brain fizzle with delight! All of your stories, so well written with war tactics and weaponry! How do you do it!? Do you know some one who was in a war? WERE YOU IN A WAR!!! ....o_O....don't mind me, just a silly little kid with to much info in her head!^-^ You must continue! Then I'll go call some movie contractors and really get this party started! nextguardian on February 16, 2007, 6:45:11 AM
Great intro!Child_of_the_feral on February 16, 2007, 6:45:07 AM
Awwww... Jasco's such a sweet-heart. ^_^Child_of_the_feral on February 16, 2007, 6:34:08 AM
Heh. Aw. Tala got a huggle. ^w^ How uber kawaii!!Tala: STFU!!! *Bites Feral's arm off*
Rebel2: It was all George!!!
Rebel3: The hell it was!! I was guarding the windows!!!
Rebel2: Who gives a shoot about the windows?!!!
Rebel: Will somebody fracking chase them!!!
Rebel2: We’re on break! Let Stephan get to chase them!
Rebel: STEPHAN IS DEAD!!!!
Rebel3: I don’t care, he’s fracking fast!"
lol hilarious! raoflmao! XD