A Story of a Girl
Submitted September 20, 2007 Updated June 21, 2008 Status Incomplete | This is the story of Akara, the Red Demon of Kiri, her life as a new Suna nin, and the demon she fell in love with. ChaosShipping, IgenShipping, YakusokaShipping (MariaKabuto), HyperShipping
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - The New Arrival
Submitted: September 20, 2007 • Updated: February 7, 2008
Word count: 334 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 176
Chapter 2 - Initial Reactions
Submitted: October 5, 2007 • Updated: February 7, 2008
Word count: 470 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 127
Chapter 3 - My First Impression...
Submitted: October 15, 2007 • Updated: October 16, 2007
Word count: 597 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 123
Chapter 4 - Meddling Sisters
Submitted: October 18, 2007 • Updated: October 19, 2007
Word count: 880 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 144
Chapter 5 - The Unlikely Houseguest
Submitted: October 22, 2007 • Updated: December 9, 2007
Word count: 830 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 136
Chapter 6 - Discussion and a Revelation
Submitted: October 24, 2007 • Updated: February 7, 2008
Word count: 1250 • Size: 7k • Comments: 7 • views: 149
Chapter 7 - What The?!
Submitted: November 5, 2007 • Updated: December 9, 2007
Word count: 466 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 134
Chapter 8 - I Need New Friends...
Submitted: November 13, 2007 • Updated: February 11, 2008
Word count: 1116 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 140
Chapter 9 - Kazekage Mishaps
Submitted: November 22, 2007 • Updated: February 22, 2008
Word count: 2199 • Size: 11k • Comments: 4 • views: 258
Chapter 10 - Festival of Love
Submitted: November 26, 2007 • Updated: April 8, 2008
Word count: 3703 • Size: 20k • Comments: 7 • views: 403
Chapter 11 - This Is Why I Hate Memories...
Submitted: December 2, 2007 • Updated: December 9, 2007
Word count: 862 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 114
Chapter 12 - I Don't Wanna Be In Love
Submitted: December 4, 2007 • Updated: December 9, 2007
Word count: 1037 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 119
Chapter 13 - Striving To Forget, Seeming To Remember
Submitted: December 9, 2007 • Updated: December 9, 2007
Word count: 1973 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 127
Chapter 14 - Preparations
Submitted: December 22, 2007 • Updated: December 27, 2007
Word count: 1320 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 119
Chapter 15 - Fancy Dinner Party
Submitted: December 27, 2007 • Updated: December 28, 2007
Word count: 2123 • Size: 10k • Comments: 6 • views: 141
Chapter 16 - Realize
Submitted: January 18, 2008 • Updated: April 13, 2008
Word count: 1404 • Size: 7k • Comments: 6 • views: 135
Chapter 17 - Secret Agent Man (or, um, Woman?)
Submitted: February 7, 2008 • Updated: February 11, 2008
Word count: 1657 • Size: 9k • Comments: 9 • views: 118
Chapter 18 - Think of It As a Vacation
Submitted: February 13, 2008 • Updated: February 13, 2008
Word count: 1122 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 118
Chapter 19 - Madness? This...Is...A...SLUMBER PARTY!
Submitted: February 15, 2008 • Updated: February 15, 2008
Word count: 2995 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 130
Chapter 20 - Another Day At the Office
Submitted: February 18, 2008 • Updated: February 18, 2008
Word count: 1075 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 103
Chapter 21 - Mobilize: Sound Prepares to Attack!
Submitted: March 15, 2008 • Updated: March 15, 2008
Word count: 668 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 116
Chapter 22 - Dinner and a Threat (pt1)
Submitted: March 21, 2008 • Updated: March 21, 2008
Word count: 526 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 98
Chapter 23 - Dinner and a Threat (pt2)
Submitted: April 18, 2008 • Updated: April 18, 2008
Word count: 686 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 85
Chapter 24 - Screw the Plan, This is War!
Submitted: April 18, 2008 • Updated: April 18, 2008
Word count: 474 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 108
Chapter 25 - Abduction! Akara Captured!
Submitted: May 13, 2008 • Updated: May 13, 2008
Word count: 788 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 118
Chapter 26 - Blinding Flash of the Obvious
Submitted: June 21, 2008 • Updated: June 21, 2008
Word count: 634 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 99
Chapter 27 - Recon: Gaara's Guilt
Submitted: June 21, 2008 • Updated: June 21, 2008
Word count: 779 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 108
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SnowKitty on July 4, 2008, 8:13:22 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 27)
AAHH! I don't want her to bite my head off! Okay, funniest part of the chappie has gotta be, "Sasuke, you seriously need some people skills." That line made me laugh a lot for some strange reason. Well, great chappie!FluffysPrincess2968 on June 22, 2008, 8:24:41 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 27)
Yay, Akara struck a nerve. ;3Poor Akara-chan. D: her story always makes me want to cry. D:
setokaibaslittlesis on June 21, 2008, 12:19:08 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 27)
Oh, we wouldn't want Akara-samma being mad, would we?XD
Luvers the update! Thanks for it!
...I really should fave this story. Why haven't I already done so?
setokaibaslittlesis on June 21, 2008, 12:15:54 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 26)
ThatWas
AWESOME!
w00t! Appearance by Selina-Chan! <3
hflp on June 21, 2008, 11:19:09 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 27)
-_-'. Oh great. Now they're having a contest of who's ahd it worst. Maybe he'll realise now he didn't have it so bad and stop doging. Awesome update by the way.hflp on June 21, 2008, 11:09:36 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 26)
Good update.SnowKitty on May 15, 2008, 9:59:46 PM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 25)
Wow, it seems that everyone had their 'Oh, shoot' moments. The ones I remember in particular are Sasuke's, Maria-sensei's, Gaara's, and Akara's. Yep, things sure do suck for these guys. Great chappie! ^^setokaibaslittlesis on May 13, 2008, 11:17:16 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 25)
Dude, that was awesome.Glad to see an update; I was beginning to think you were gone.
hflp on May 13, 2008, 9:57:39 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 25)
Whoa. Sasuke nearly pissed himself. Well I'd hate to be anyone to get in Gaara's way now. Keep this going.FluffysPrincess2968 on May 13, 2008, 8:52:44 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 25)
âBeing a teacher sucks.â --- something Ishi-chan would say xDSasuke stiffened. frack.
âIâm in deep shoot.â ---- ALSO something she would say
--
All of these=hilarious and awesome. :P something I might've written. xD
---
âWhat are you?â
Akaraâs claws extended, and a hellish aura surrounded her.
âYour worst nightmare.â
---
This was supposed to be serious, I know, but I couldn't resist. I fell over laughing as my thoughts drifted to Mushu from Mulan. xD
FluffysPrincess2968 on April 19, 2008, 5:09:03 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 24)
worth the wait! :D .. yeah, thats the only snappy thing i can think of right now....LOL WUT?
This is SO not like me. xD
setokaibaslittlesis on April 19, 2008, 3:06:53 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 23)
I ish confused.Why would we yell at you for this?
*flounces off to finish English project*
SnowKitty on April 19, 2008, 1:15:30 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 24)
Yayz for the updates! From that last description of Sasuke, I find him to be very . . . what's the word I'm looking for here, um, demented? Deranged? Psychotic? Or maybe demangtic? Cool! I just came up with a new word! Anyhoo, nice updates! XDhflp on April 18, 2008, 3:25:07 PM
hflp on (Chapter: 24)
Nice. This was well worth the wait.FluffysPrincess2968 on March 23, 2008, 1:19:26 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 22)
xD AH GAWD WATZ SAUCE-GAY GONNA DO?xD
Anywho, imma send u a PM. check ur box soon. :D
hflp on March 21, 2008, 10:28:32 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 22)
LOL. I knew that would make a funny scene in your story.hflp on March 21, 2008, 2:08:40 PM
hflp on (Chapter: 22)
Look at pandachan21's profile to understandSnowKitty on March 21, 2008, 12:52:02 PM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 22)
That's funny. The last line was the best! Great chappie! ^^setokaibaslittlesis on March 21, 2008, 12:03:08 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 22)
Very nice. =Dsetokaibaslittlesis on March 19, 2008, 2:00:38 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 21)
Of course, you WOULD update while I was gone!Luffely update, rather unexpected turn of events.
hflp on March 16, 2008, 7:27:42 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 21)
Cool Chapter, can't wait for what's next.SnowKitty on March 15, 2008, 7:31:30 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 21)
I really enjoy the fact that Gaara cannot handle a girl that's crying. That's funny! ^^ Great chappie!SnowKitty on February 18, 2008, 9:05:36 PM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 20)
Funny chappie! ^^FluffysPrincess2968 on February 18, 2008, 8:21:49 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 20)
lawl. xDgod i got a good laugh out of that. nya, i already finished mah homework. :P
hflp on February 18, 2008, 8:17:16 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 20)
That was great. Always good to add a little humor to a story.setokaibaslittlesis on February 18, 2008, 6:39:44 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 20)
Wee!That was great. =D
Now to maybe possibly hopefully write another chapter of my story.
But don't get your hopes up.
-lazy-
setokaibaslittlesis on February 17, 2008, 10:30:22 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 19)
-looks both ways-Omigosh, it's Shikamaru!
-tackles Shikamaru and steals him away from the party before anyone notices-
>D
By the way, loved the Lee line. SO Lee.
FluffysPrincess2968 on February 16, 2008, 11:30:02 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 19)
xD that. was. AWESOE. xD (ps, read ur pm's)FluffysPrincess2968 on February 16, 2008, 11:20:35 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 18)
WEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! SHOJO FACE!!! xDThats how I get my brother. XD
FluffysPrincess2968 on February 16, 2008, 11:16:58 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 17)
XXXXXXXXXXDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!1*passes out from lack of breath*
AIRHORN OF EEVVVVVIILLLLLLLL!!!!!
homijesus, I'm soooooooo fricken' behind on this story, haven't had time to read the new chappies. DX
ah well. xD
SnowKitty on February 16, 2008, 3:15:20 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 19)
Great chappie! I really enjoyed the kareoke! ^^hflp on February 15, 2008, 11:49:34 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 19)
Awesome Chapter. I love it when Naruto characters do karaoke.SnowKitty on February 14, 2008, 9:40:31 PM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 18)
Very nice chappie!PandaChan21 on February 15, 2008, 8:23:26 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 18)
Thank you, Ki-chan!KionaKina on February 14, 2008, 11:10:44 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 18)
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hflp on February 13, 2008, 10:40:16 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 18)
Nice. Keep up the good work.SnowKitty on February 8, 2008, 9:17:45 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 17)
Ah! The air horn of DOOM! Great chappie!PandaChan21 on February 8, 2008, 11:20:10 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 17)
And a thank you to you too, KiKi.KionaKina on February 8, 2008, 9:13:46 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 17)
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setokaibaslittlesis on February 8, 2008, 5:14:58 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 17)
Yay!-clapclapclapclapclap-
Amaaaaaaazin'!
(You're totally helping me with what to do with Akara-post-time-skip.
Fweee!
Off to cello lessons now!
-flies away-)
PandaChan21 on February 8, 2008, 11:18:23 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 17)
Well, you're welcome!hflp on February 7, 2008, 10:23:44 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 17)
Great update. I can't wait for the next update.PandaChan21 on February 8, 2008, 11:18:00 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 17)
Thanks! ^ _ )lFluffysPrincess2968 on January 19, 2008, 12:29:50 PM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 16)
WEWT!!! :DI can't wait for the next chappie! :D (srry it took me so long to comment, i was on the robotics trip :D)
PandaChan21 on January 20, 2008, 9:46:48 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 16)
Heh...glad you liked it.KionaKina on January 19, 2008, 6:15:14 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 16)
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PandaChan21 on January 19, 2008, 6:30:54 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 16)
Glad you like it.SnowKitty on January 18, 2008, 11:18:14 PM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 16)
Yay! I'm first to comment the chappie! It was very nice. ^-^PandaChan21 on January 18, 2008, 11:43:09 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 16)
Thank you Ki-chan! *gives First Comment cookies*hflp on January 18, 2008, 2:36:05 PM
hflp on (Chapter: index)
This story is awesome. I can't wait for future chapters.FluffysPrincess2968 on January 1, 2008, 5:42:15 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 15)
OMG DON'T THROW TOMATOES AT HER!!! SASUKE WILL EAT HER!!!!BTW... where the hell did that come from anyway? Is it in an episode or something?
PandaChan21 on January 4, 2008, 6:15:42 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 15)
It's in the Official fanbook. It says that he likes tomatoes...I know, i don't get it either...SnowKitty on December 29, 2007, 11:10:46 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 15)
Hee hee. That's so true. Sasuke probably would eat them! Great chappie!FluffysPrincess2968 on December 28, 2007, 11:05:05 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 15)
I know u said not to comment, but...OMG THATS MY FAV SONG OF AAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLL TIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIME!!!!
PandaChan21 on December 29, 2007, 4:48:38 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 15)
Same here!SnowKitty on December 23, 2007, 11:13:26 PM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 14)
. . . . . . . Huh. I wonder how this will turn out. I just don't know right now. I'm looking forward to the next update.KionaKina on December 22, 2007, 8:46:41 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 14)
oh...my...God...how will this end well? O_OPandaChan21 on December 22, 2007, 2:17:43 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 14)
It prolly won't...setokaibaslittlesis on December 22, 2007, 12:01:00 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 14)
Bwahahaha.Only one bed.
=3 That IS amusing!
PandaChan21 on December 22, 2007, 2:33:17 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 14)
Isn't it?setokaibaslittlesis on December 17, 2007, 5:47:56 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 10)
That was really very nice. =)setokaibaslittlesis on December 17, 2007, 5:31:12 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 7)
-eyetwitch-.....
-eyetwitch-
..Uh...
-shakes head and walks off-
setokaibaslittlesis on December 17, 2007, 5:29:34 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 6)
Omigosh.Those were the BEST VERBAL FIGHTS I HAVE EVER READ.
That made me laugh.
setokaibaslittlesis on December 17, 2007, 5:26:14 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 5)
Bwahaha.I love the way you characterize Kankurou.
setokaibaslittlesis on December 17, 2007, 5:24:13 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 4)
=333This is a very nifty story, yessirree.
KionaKina on December 10, 2007, 11:10:36 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 13)
YES! Oh yeah, Temari and i tag team HELL YES!!This is what I live for. But...Gaara is baging his head to a-...wow...
UPDATE!!! XO
PandaChan21 on December 14, 2007, 4:52:31 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 13)
I will, just give me a few minutes, Kay!setokaibaslittlesis on December 11, 2007, 10:34:15 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 13)
Bwahaha.That was very good.
Now, of course, I have to read the rest.
BUT FIRST I HAVE TO FINISH THIS FREAKING CHAPTER I'M WRITING IN 26 MINUTES!
Ahhhhhhhh!
FluffysPrincess2968 on December 10, 2007, 7:50:05 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 13)
LOL XDI agree with SnowKitty. I can completely see Gaara banging his head against the wall. XD
PandaChan21 on December 10, 2007, 8:27:24 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 13)
*laughes* yeah, I thought you would...FluffysPrincess2968 on December 10, 2007, 7:37:36 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 11)
*sniff* Th-that was s-so.......SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!TT_TT *cies*
PandaChan21 on December 10, 2007, 8:26:58 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 11)
Don't cry, please!!!SnowKitty on December 10, 2007, 7:18:18 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 13)
lol. I can just picture perfectly Gaara banging his head against a desk/wall. This is probably mostly because he's an ex-insomniac, and I can just imagine insomniacs banging their heads, mostly to keep themselves awake. But I know that's not the case for Gaara. Still, very entertaining chappie! I liked it tons! ^-^PandaChan21 on December 10, 2007, 8:26:37 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 13)
Only you and maybe a few others can, Keek...only you and a few others can...KionaKina on December 4, 2007, 9:14:25 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 12)
I...love...that...song!!!!Maria is gonna let me borrow the CD with it. IT'S HARDCORE!! But I cant's imagine a girl singing it, sorry. It's still awesome
Oh my dear Akara-sama *Hugs her* That's so great! I love the way the ending was written.
Ahh... ^_^ So awesome, made me happy. Update please
PandaChan21 on December 4, 2007, 1:08:30 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 12)
I'm glad you're happy, Kay-chan. You are honestly one of my most faithful reviewers.SnowKitty on December 4, 2007, 8:01:53 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 12)
WOOHOO! I'M FIRST TO COMMENT THIS CHAPPIE! XDAnyhoo, great chappie! I wish I could say more, but I feel lazy right now.
PandaChan21 on December 4, 2007, 8:58:37 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 12)
Thank you Ki-chan.KionaKina on December 2, 2007, 1:37:15 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 11)
Wow, that was so sad... *Hugs Akara* There there, lovey, it's ok. (I am saying that in comments sometimes, not sure why 8Shrugs*)Great chappie, Tori. Your fic is beautiful
PandaChan21 on December 2, 2007, 12:52:35 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 11)
Aw, thank you Kay! You and Temari begin plotting in about two chappies...so prepare for matchmaking fun...KionaKina on December 4, 2007, 9:14:59 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: index)
WHOO-HOO!!!I love you Panda-chan! You ish tres awesome!!!!
I get to matchmake. *Dances*
KionaKina on November 28, 2007, 10:25:34 PM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 10)
O_O I...friggin...am...in...love...with...your....updateIT'S AWESOME! I LOVE MY KIMONO! And I got to meet Hinata-chan and Ki-Ki had the CUTEST moment with Lee and oyu put in Mamaha YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PandaChan21 on November 28, 2007, 10:45:15 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 10)
Kay, calm down...I'm glad you like it tho...FluffysPrincess2968 on November 28, 2007, 7:39:53 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 10)
*throws rabid squirrels*JK JK!! XD AWESOME chap! :D Can't wait 4 the next one! :D
PandaChan21 on November 28, 2007, 12:54:57 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 10)
Glad u liked it!SnowKitty on November 28, 2007, 7:31:19 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 10)
SWEET! I'm first to comment! That is one awesome festival! How you had the time to think all of this through, I'll never know. I liked it a lot, though. Great job! And yay for me and Lee-kun! XDPandaChan21 on November 28, 2007, 12:54:33 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 10)
Thanks, Ki-chan...FluffysPrincess2968 on November 27, 2007, 7:06:53 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: index)
XD I luved it. XD Fangirls... psh... *is hit in head with brick*BFF: AND UR ONE 2 TALK!!!!!!
PandaChan21 on November 28, 2007, 2:01:36 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: index)
Fangirls are very troublesome at times...*is smacked in head by Shikamaru*Shika: YOU STOLE MY LINE!!!!
musicismylife on November 26, 2007, 9:39:24 PM
musicismylife on (Chapter: 1)
yay!!!! i likes it woot!!!PandaChan21 on November 26, 2007, 10:20:09 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 1)
Heh, thank you. You're funny...musicismylife on November 27, 2007, 7:48:14 AM
musicismylife on (Chapter: index)
thx! ^^SnowKitty on November 26, 2007, 9:45:34 PM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 9)
Whoa, you scared off the fangirls. Good job! Great chappie! ^^PandaChan21 on November 26, 2007, 10:19:25 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 9)
Thank you, Ki-chan...KionaKina on November 26, 2007, 10:17:47 PM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 9)
Poor Akara...fangirls suckI mean, dude...Kay needs to be harrassed by fangirls now
PandaChan21 on November 26, 2007, 10:19:07 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 9)
Yeah...you guys come back in in the next chapter, I promise...KionaKina on November 27, 2007, 8:43:31 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: index)
I meant that for my own story, not yours. But aweosme! i feel loved!!justme93 on November 16, 2007, 10:25:42 AM
justme93 on (Chapter: index)
ahh!!! i cant wait!!!FluffysPrincess2968 on November 14, 2007, 6:43:40 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 8)
YAY!!! :D WRITE MORE SOON!!!!! XD damn hormones... XDDDDDPandaChan21 on November 15, 2007, 11:53:02 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 8)
Glad you like it, Fluffy-chan!gaaralover1 on November 14, 2007, 10:29:03 AM
gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 8)
coolPandaChan21 on November 15, 2007, 12:28:01 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 8)
Arigato! Thank you for commenting! (love the penname, by the way...)justme93 on November 14, 2007, 7:52:12 AM
justme93 on (Chapter: index)
when r u going 2 update? its really good! XDSnowKitty on November 14, 2007, 7:14:08 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 8)
Great chappie! Can't wait for your next update! ^^gaaralover1 on November 6, 2007, 9:47:34 AM
gaaralover1 on (Chapter: index)
COOL!! You have to write more!FluffysPrincess2968 on November 5, 2007, 6:27:42 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 4)
LOL!! I hate the doctor to! and math... but i have pre-algebra... -_-PandaChan21 on November 6, 2007, 12:29:31 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 4)
Doctors ask too many questions...it scares meh...FluffysPrincess2968 on November 5, 2007, 6:39:42 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 7)
YAY!!! WRITE MORE SOON!PandaChan21 on November 5, 2007, 9:49:16 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 7)
Okehs...KionaKina on November 5, 2007, 10:18:44 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 7)
It's Kaori! ^_^Yeh, I'm happy....I guess? ^_^
FluffysPrincess2968 on November 5, 2007, 6:37:41 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 6)
LOL all the way to The Land of Waves. Naruto can be a complete baka at times... XD
FluffysPrincess2968 on November 5, 2007, 6:31:24 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: 5)
OMFG THAT SONG ROX!!! :D I'm lovin this!FluffysPrincess2968 on November 5, 2007, 6:17:09 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: index)
OMFG can my shipping be in ur story!?SnowKitty on November 5, 2007, 2:00:50 AM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 7)
Yay for the new chappie! I finally came into the story. Huzzah! Great job! ^^PandaChan21 on November 5, 2007, 3:32:17 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 7)
Glad to see you're happy Ki-chan! At least somebody bothered reading it!SnowKitty on October 30, 2007, 11:39:57 PM
SnowKitty on (Chapter: 6)
That was a funny chappie! Ha, Naruto can be such an oblivious idiot sometimes. That is entertainment right there. Well, good luck with your next chappie! ^^PandaChan21 on October 31, 2007, 11:12:34 PM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: 6)
Yeah...*reminices on good times*Kouni46892742 on October 25, 2007, 12:40:33 AM
Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Ooh! Kay told me about this! This is great!!!PandaChan21 on October 30, 2007, 4:35:42 AM
PandaChan21 on (Chapter: index)
thank you... thank you very much...glad to see SOMEONE likes it...KionaKina on October 30, 2007, 4:11:17 AM
KionaKina on (Chapter: 6)
I LOVE IT!Dude, Naruto was bloody hysterical. I mean "dattebayo"
GENIUS! I'm so happy you used it.
Sweetness, love it, land of the waves... *Snicker* Gaara ish dead
PandaChan21 on October 30, 2007, 4:35:05 AM
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he ish VERY dead...KionaKina on October 30, 2007, 9:52:07 AM
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yesPandaChan21 on October 30, 2007, 11:18:58 PM
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Indeed...KionaKina on October 22, 2007, 11:00:37 AM
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ooooohhhh, he liked your cooking. That means it's love!PandaChan21 on October 23, 2007, 10:44:09 PM
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No, it just means he was really hungry...SnowKitty on October 22, 2007, 3:02:07 AM
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Very nice chappie, and OMG I know that song! I LOVE that song! As I said before, great job! ^^PandaChan21 on October 22, 2007, 4:33:19 AM
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lolz, Ki-chan, I love your comments.KionaKina on October 19, 2007, 10:05:02 AM
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LOL! I agree, the fun IS beginningPandaChan21 on October 22, 2007, 4:30:52 AM
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Yes it is. ^_)lSnowKitty on October 20, 2007, 3:03:22 AM
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Hm. . . things are gonna get interesting. Great job! ^^xkaitlyn25x on October 18, 2007, 7:02:39 AM
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update soon!!!PandaChan21 on October 18, 2007, 11:19:37 PM
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Thanx!KionaKina on October 15, 2007, 11:19:52 PM
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lol "do those come in red?"That's so funny, Tori
I loved it, great fight sign, you ish tres awesome
PandaChan21 on October 16, 2007, 1:16:55 AM
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Yesh...KionaKina on October 15, 2007, 11:31:15 AM
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O_O This...will...be...AWESOMEKionaKina on October 6, 2007, 3:34:35 AM
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Oh my...THIS is gonna be good. Update, Tori. Update. And look into my stories, I'm starting a new one and you will be in itSnowKitty on September 20, 2007, 11:18:59 AM
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Okay, Tori. The evil laugh is kinda creeping me out! Great first chappie! Please update soon! Oh, and one more thing. Yay! I'm the first commenter! :DPandaChan21 on September 21, 2007, 4:39:08 AM
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Yesh...yesh you are...PandaChan21 on October 5, 2007, 12:28:01 PM
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Ha ha...now that Kay changed our avatars to Gaara and Lee, I see the irony...