Sutaru

*they fly back and hit the wall*


Brett:hehe hello kira.....

i know i hardly know you, but ihave been dieing for someone to read this. and iwas wonding if you would. i couldnt get it on the story thing beucase it was to many letters. and i didnt want to have to writ it agian.

Chapter one.
Sneak.


Dark, foggy and damp outside it was, not to mention cold and eerie. Mary, a beautiful flower maiden sat upon her seal just staring out into the Halltree forest. The dark woods was better known for it. No one ever called it by its true name but by its rightful name. that’s where the Raven elves lived. Every one feared them, even the maidens did, though they never attacked their village they were still know for sneaking around on their grounds. No one new what a Raven elf looked like only that they must have been grotesque, with slime and long pointed fingernails and pointy canine teeth with pale vanish bodies. Mary however did not see them that way. Even though she had never seen one before she had a different picture in her mind. Mary was tremendously beautiful. She had chopped black hair and blue eyes, with Rosie-red cheeks and peachy white skin and she wore a long flow-white dress that went all the way to the ground to where it dragged. Over in the corner a plump woman who was knitting rocked back forth just humming a tune. “you have been staring out that window for far to long now, Mary. Is something on your mind my child?” the plump woman asked. A sigh came from Mary. “The Raven Elves that’s what, I don’t know why but think of them all the time. I guess it might be because my room faces the Halltree forest.” She heard the woman scoff with vex. “You better get them off your mind, no good will come from it. They are monsters! Why even think of them!” She Snarled. Mary looked at her then faced the window again. “But what if they are not monsters, what if they are gentle creatures. I mean they never attack us… “but they do enter our castle while we sleep. You never see them because they are as quiet as a mouse and as fierce as a dragon. Monster is all they are and all they ever will be.” Mary just stopped talking her mind wondered off again. She felt different about them. She knew that if they were harmful beasts wouldn’t they’ve killed them.
Mary felt deep down that there was no such a beast. Only a misunderstood creature.

Nina:....*picks him up and slings him over her shoulder*

Kira:..*sobs*.....


*the door knock down showing a hedgehog*

Brett:heheheheheh

I like your jumping avitar its just this, Big...Bubble...of...of jumpyness! :D

KirA;..no....*sobs*...all of u go! i had unfinished buisness with him..........that bastard put this demon in me..and he killed everyone i loved......hes mine......

Kevin:...

Nina: I won't kill you....not now...

Kira:*gets up*


Inix:*has sutaru*..here...guys..go hide..take kira with u.....

Mira:oh no..

Kira:*whines a lil*

Inix;*bursts nto the house*THEY R BACK!!

Kira:........?