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Death Note: An Alternative

This is basically the same story (with a focus on the anime rather than the manga) as the real thing but with the focus on a character I added in.

Remember this focuses on my OC, you need to know the original story to fully understand this.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Introduction
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 552 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 273

Chapter 2 - History
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: August 25, 2008
Word count: 893 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 253

Chapter 3 - Arrival
Submitted: August 26, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
Word count: 717 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 204

Chapter 4 - Questions
Submitted: August 28, 2008 • Updated: August 28, 2008
Word count: 542 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 205

Chapter 5 - Discovery
Submitted: August 30, 2008 • Updated: August 30, 2008
Word count: 586 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 214

Chapter 6 - Meeting
Submitted: September 11, 2008 • Updated: September 11, 2008
Word count: 645 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 227

Chapter 7 - Conflict
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: October 26, 2008
Word count: 470 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 192

Chapter 8 - Partners
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 769 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 204

Chapter 9 - Broadcast
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 703 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 227

Chapter 10 - Information
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 459 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 170

Chapter 11 - Memories
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: August 12, 2009
Word count: 988 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 140

Chapter 12 - Answers
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: May 7, 2010
Word count: 1010 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 153

Chapter 13 - Preparation
Submitted: May 29, 2010 • Updated: May 29, 2010
Word count: 588 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 139

Chapter 14 - Unfolding
Submitted: June 1, 2010 • Updated: June 1, 2010
Word count: 944 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 151

Chapter 15 - Alone
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 2, 2010
Word count: 1241 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 158

Chapter 16 - Deceit
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 751 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 154

Chapter 17 - Outcome
Submitted: June 4, 2010 • Updated: June 4, 2010
Word count: 963 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 149

Chapter 18 - Compromise
Submitted: June 6, 2010 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 1275 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 143

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KelekiahGaladrian on June 9, 2010, 2:00:09 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 18)
KelekiahGaladrianOoh, more long chapters, hehe!

Oh dear, Zach was discovered kinda by some random maid!

Wow, Rek is pretty useless.

CLIFFIE!! NO!! *falls over* That's so mean TT_TT

I wonder what this deal is. . . .

KelekiahGaladrian on June 9, 2010, 1:55:24 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 17)
KelekiahGaladrianOoh, another long chapter. I like long chapters ^^

Zach sounded a little creepy with his laugh right there at the end, but that's cool. I like creepy when it comes to this kind of stuff :P

Again, the way Zach talks to Rek and Rek's complaining make me laugh. Absolutely beautiful ^^

KelekiahGaladrian on June 9, 2010, 1:53:50 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 16)
KelekiahGaladrianYay for Zach's awesome theories and Matsuda's enthusiasm. ^^ Matsuda is HILARIOUS. I LOVE him.

Oh, and love L, too. L's AWESOME.

I love this chapter, too. It's EPIC.

KelekiahGaladrian on June 9, 2010, 1:52:05 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 15)
KelekiahGaladrian*laughs* Dude, you are a GENIUS. I don't think I'd be able to work something like that for killing people that way. Zach is AWESOME.

And I love the way he talks to Rek, again. That's just funny.

MATSUDA!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE MATSUDA!!!!! And I love how you worked the scene with him. That's just great ^^

KelekiahGaladrian on June 9, 2010, 1:50:31 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 14)
KelekiahGaladrianWow. The chapters are getting longer! Hehe!!

I love how Zach talks to Rek. It makes me laugh ^^

And yay for Ryuk!!

I really like the way the story is "unfolding" ^^ I like that word. It's a nice word ^^

bookworm369 on June 1, 2010, 11:02:25 AM

bookworm369 on (Chapter: index)
bookworm369i like that word "unfold"
and here i was having trouble thinking of a chapter name =P

KelekiahGaladrian on May 31, 2010, 1:54:09 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 13)
KelekiahGaladrianDon't worry about it being extremely late. It happens sometimes.

I think that turned out really cool. It's interesting to see how the story unfolds.

. . . . Zach is EPIC.

I just barely realized how much I missed this fic. ^^

bookworm369 on May 29, 2010, 4:19:23 PM

bookworm369 on (Chapter: 13)
bookworm369I'm sorry for chapter 13 being so long overdue, and being incredibly short on top of that. had to get some kind of filler chapter in though, i promise it'll get better at the end