Death Note: An Alternative
Submitted August 25, 2008 Updated June 6, 2010 Status Incomplete | This is basically the same story (with a focus on the anime rather than the manga) as the real thing but with the focus on a character I added in. Remember this focuses on my OC, you need to know the original story to fully understand this.
Category:
Anime/Manga » Death Note |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Introduction
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 552 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 372
Chapter 2 - History
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: August 25, 2008
Word count: 893 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 344
Chapter 3 - Arrival
Submitted: August 26, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
Word count: 717 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 291
Chapter 4 - Questions
Submitted: August 28, 2008 • Updated: August 28, 2008
Word count: 542 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 296
Chapter 5 - Discovery
Submitted: August 30, 2008 • Updated: August 30, 2008
Word count: 586 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 306
Chapter 6 - Meeting
Submitted: September 11, 2008 • Updated: September 11, 2008
Word count: 645 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 321
Chapter 7 - Conflict
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: October 26, 2008
Word count: 470 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 283
Chapter 8 - Partners
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 769 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 300
Chapter 9 - Broadcast
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 703 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 339
Chapter 10 - Information
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 459 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 257
Chapter 11 - Memories
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: August 12, 2009
Word count: 988 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 230
Chapter 12 - Answers
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: May 7, 2010
Word count: 1010 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 244
Chapter 13 - Preparation
Submitted: May 29, 2010 • Updated: May 29, 2010
Word count: 588 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 224
Chapter 14 - Unfolding
Submitted: June 1, 2010 • Updated: June 1, 2010
Word count: 944 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 241
Chapter 15 - Alone
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 2, 2010
Word count: 1241 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 266
Chapter 16 - Deceit
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 751 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 240
Chapter 17 - Outcome
Submitted: June 4, 2010 • Updated: June 4, 2010
Word count: 963 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 240
Chapter 18 - Compromise
Submitted: June 6, 2010 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 1275 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 237
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KelekiahGaladrian on August 31, 2008, 11:52:10 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on August 31, 2008, 11:50:21 AM
I should probably check this every day so as to make sure I'm updated with your updates 'cause I don't get story alerts. FAC kinda sucks sometimes. Okay, almost all the time. Anyway....To start off, I'm gonna say that I think Zach is a very smart kid. We'll see just how smart when he most likely comes across issues later on.
Ugh, cameras. I hate cameras. Whether or not it's recording or just pictures or surveillance cameras. Either way. I hate them. They should all die....
Awesome job! Maybe I should mark this story in my favorite web pages so I remember to check it everyday.... Hmm....
blacksheeppoet on August 31, 2008, 7:09:45 AM
Interesting.... I must say that you've done a good job on this.I'll make sure to read more of your story as much as I can XD
WaterLilly on August 30, 2008, 2:55:15 PM
Zach is smart, he figured something out about the death note the death god didn't know..impresive..anyways.. can't wait for the next chapter!
Blackwolfmoon on August 29, 2008, 3:48:12 AM
who's zach gonna kill with the death note? o.o and not with thje cameras again >.<next chapter plz! ^^
DeathNoteSurvivor on August 29, 2008, 6:11:25 AM
again? its the first time o0YoriXYamiForever on August 28, 2008, 1:10:52 PM
Short but kool ^^ Oh boy... Zach's gonna use the Death Note. Does he start with criminals too? The cameras in his room was one of my favorite parts for light. The chip bag camera was pure genius!!
Can't wait for more ^^
KelekiahGaladrian on August 27, 2008, 9:07:54 AM
I can imagine how... problematic things could get for Light in this story, and probably will too. I love it! Suspense is totally awesome and definitely keeps me going, even if it's only small and just starting out. Awesomeness! I hope I get an alert for the next time you upload a chapter. If not, you might have to let me know 'cause FAC can suck really bad sometimes.... Anyway, great story. I love how it's going so far. ^^KelekiahGaladrian on August 27, 2008, 9:03:10 AM
Hehehe, electrical current. Hehehehehehehehe.Okay, so I'm a little crazy, but whatever. I like it, definitely AWESOME. Vacations and Death Notes and attitudes and shut ups and zip its and secrecy and death. That sounds like fun. Sort of. Hehehehehehe. *thumbs up* Awesome!
KelekiahGaladrian on August 27, 2008, 8:58:59 AM
I have done what I said I would do. I finally finished going through comments and managed to make my way over here to read this. Yay! Interesting beginning. I like it. *thumbs up* Awesome. ^^Blackwolfmoon on August 26, 2008, 9:54:38 PM
sweet chapter! x3 i love this story so far!
So Zach wants to meet Light. That'll definitely be an interesting scene....
Hehe, Rek doesn't seem to be very smart and up-to-date. That's funny. Hehe.
Awesome job JT-kun! ^^