Taboo
Submitted January 1, 2011 Updated June 2, 2011 Status Incomplete | A forbidden love. Teacher and student. Kakashi Hatake, so aloof and coldhearted, falls for the young Sakura Haruno. She has a dangerous choice to make. My OC is Sakura''s childhood friend and sole confidant.
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Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Couples/Pairings » Kakashi + Sakura |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Accusations
Submitted: January 1, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 2 - Stirring Feelings
Submitted: January 1, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 3 - Flustered Sakura, Flustered Kakashi
Submitted: January 3, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 4 - Meltdown
Submitted: January 4, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 5 - Friendship and Recovery
Submitted: January 4, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 6 - Visitors
Submitted: January 5, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 7 - Kakashi, You Dog
Submitted: January 8, 2011 • Updated: June 2, 2011
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Chapter 8 - Apologies
Submitted: January 8, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 9 - Distance, Self-Pity
Submitted: January 10, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 10 - Way Too Good at Pretending
Submitted: January 11, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 11 - Forced to Play Hookie
Submitted: January 12, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 12 - Enter - Mutakami Hisako!
Submitted: January 13, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 13 - Sakura Tells All
Submitted: January 15, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 14 - Girls' Night In
Submitted: January 16, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 15 - Realization, Denial
Submitted: January 19, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 16 - A Secret, A Hug
Submitted: January 20, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 17 - Problems
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 18 - Tenzo
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 26, 2011
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Chapter 19 - Surprise Visit
Submitted: January 26, 2011 • Updated: February 5, 2011
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Chapter 20 - Rainy Day
Submitted: January 27, 2011 • Updated: January 28, 2011
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Chapter 21 - Rain and Tears
Submitted: January 28, 2011 • Updated: February 1, 2011
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Chapter 22 - 3 Days
Submitted: February 1, 2011 • Updated: February 6, 2011
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Chapter 23 - Day 1
Submitted: February 6, 2011 • Updated: February 9, 2011
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Chapter 24 - Day 2
Submitted: February 9, 2011 • Updated: February 11, 2011
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Chapter 25 - Day 3
Submitted: February 11, 2011 • Updated: February 11, 2011
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Chapter 26 - Later That Night
Submitted: February 11, 2011 • Updated: June 2, 2011
Word count: 1946 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 297
Chapter 27 - Later That Night - Part 2
Submitted: February 21, 2011 • Updated: June 2, 2011
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Chapter 28 - Drugs and Affection
Submitted: February 25, 2011 • Updated: June 2, 2011
Word count: 1739 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 291
Chapter 29 - Gratitude
Submitted: March 10, 2011 • Updated: March 10, 2011
Word count: 1116 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 312
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aly_kat_199218 on June 2, 2011, 5:56:17 AM
lol you dog love it love it made me smile... you make me smile... yaaaaayyyyy!!!aly_kat_199218 on June 2, 2011, 5:48:13 AM
OK, I love the joke about the tree and the forest. I have to agree where did the courage come from to almost kiss her. I love old man Hokage he makes me smile!!! Its depressing that hes mentally unstable because of this but it is understandable.aly_kat_199218 on June 2, 2011, 5:30:15 AM
wow.. umm wooooooowwww.... Idk what else to say yup...lol good very good.aly_kat_199218 on June 2, 2011, 5:22:26 AM
wow I think its kinda depressing and scarry and true he could have died thats scarry but if he did no more chapters lol. very good you write like an artist. beautiful aly_kat_199218 on June 2, 2011, 5:16:41 AM
CUTE***aly_kat_199218 on June 2, 2011, 5:16:22 AM
wow!!!! OK i love it funny yet cut god i wish i had a sensei that hot. lolaly_kat_199218 on June 2, 2011, 4:59:33 AM
I love that Kakashi hesitated in the fight with Sasuke and how he threw Sasuke against the tree... I like it that Sakura had the Moment where she witnessed something beautiful it mad her cry.aly_kat_199218 on June 2, 2011, 4:56:43 AM
you portray sasuke and naruto very well. I love it!!!andr28a on March 17, 2011, 12:06:07 PM
Aahh. Blosiming love in it's purest form. SO sweet.nextguardian on March 10, 2011, 2:33:55 PM
This chapter is downright sweet. Love the deep introspection into the emotions flying around here. Very charming chapter in that way.nextguardian on February 26, 2011, 1:47:15 PM
Wow, way to think on your feet, Tenzo! And poor Sakura. Maybe some eki-kyabe will help that headache?andr28a on February 25, 2011, 11:22:04 PM
I wonder if Tenzo is wise to tell Neji that he's planning to ask Hisako out. But at least it was better then telling him what real reason he wanted to know her name i guessandr28a on February 22, 2011, 8:21:22 AM
Good thing Kakashi regaind himself in the nick of time. Hell would be to pay if things get too out of controlNow I think I read too many of NG's fics but Sakura when drunk is almost as sultry as Azami.
nextguardian on February 21, 2011, 1:14:30 PM
Oh wow, Sakura's in for one hell of a hangover. I loved this chapter. Points to Kakashi for being able to resist at all. Sakura was one alluring kunoichi in this chapter. I loved her little game with him at the bar. Great use of her feminine wiles there and at the end, too.Kakashi, give it up. She OWNS you, man!
andr28a on February 12, 2011, 9:41:55 AM
I knew something like this was gonna happen. Didn't expect how though.I agree this is an awesome chapter. Got me the angry shakes from it.
andr28a on February 12, 2011, 9:30:03 AM
Why do I get the feeling that something bad is about to happen?nextguardian on February 11, 2011, 12:46:05 PM
Holy! Can't say I saw that coming at all. I'm with Tenzo on that one; I want to rip those disgusting pigs apart myself! Sick freaks like that...That's a great chapter. If it got me to raise my hackles like that, it's definitely believable and well-written. Very nicely done!
nextguardian on February 11, 2011, 12:40:40 PM
Gotta love Hisako's friendship with Sakura. Taking care of her the way she does. Loyalty is one of my favorite traits in characters. And lol at Kakashi telling Sakura to wash her mouth out with soap XDandr28a on February 11, 2011, 4:29:18 AM
Yes Hisako needs a friend to be there for her. With the way her mother is... well its self explanitory. That reminds me. Who and where on earth is Hisako's dad?nextguardian on February 10, 2011, 12:31:13 PM
Lots of emotion going around in this chapter. Man, the frustration on the involved parties is practially bleeding through onto my screen.Classic work, as usual :)
andr28a on February 7, 2011, 1:34:38 AM
I second NG'S comment of this chapternextguardian on February 6, 2011, 3:36:43 PM
There is so much I love about this chapter. I freely admit that the PMS thing made me lol literally, as I genuinely did not see that coming.And awesome that Ryouko and Hisako finally meet! I loved Ryouko's reactions to Hisako- not to mention Hisako's relentless barrage of comments!
Great update. Can't wait for more :)
andr28a on February 2, 2011, 3:42:17 AM
Well that was an... interesting meetingnextguardian on February 1, 2011, 12:17:49 PM
Can't blame Kakashi for sticking to porn for three days. lol. Pushing away someone you really like does indeed suck. I really like his genuine reactions even as he stays in character in this chapter.Good update!
andr28a on January 29, 2011, 12:09:44 AM
Well that turned into a train wrecknextguardian on January 28, 2011, 11:39:42 AM
Wow, points to Kakashi for manning up and managing to ignore his screaming instincts!Points to Sakura for being adorable in this chapter.
I will admit a certain jealousy welled up within me in this chapter when Kakashi got the kiss, lol.
Good work!
andr28a on January 28, 2011, 8:10:02 AM
Just a simple day to get groceries, nothing suspicous or wrong with that... right?andr28a on January 28, 2011, 8:03:40 AM
Restrain yourself Kakashi. Good things come to those who wait.nextguardian on January 27, 2011, 12:37:10 PM
There's a nice, underlying sweetness to this chapter. Despite Kakashi's carnal desires, he's keeping himself in check, which is a cool romantic element imho.I can't imagine Tenzo will have room to criticize for long. lol.
Good chapter!
nextguardian on January 26, 2011, 1:26:00 PM
lmao, the yogurt thing! That was hilarious! I can just picture poor Kakashi going slowly insane. That was definitely my favorite part, although I loved the whole chapter. The tapping at the window and the 'kunoichi flexibility' also had me chuckling. Good work!nextguardian on January 22, 2011, 12:29:40 PM
Good for Hisako. She sounds cute when she's asleep. Good for Tenzo, maintaing his composure, too.Good chapter; love the mix of emotions here :)
andr28a on January 21, 2011, 11:09:04 PM
This indeed will be interestingandr28a on January 21, 2011, 10:57:06 PM
Something tells me that creep in Hisako's house will be alot more trouble later on.Youruichi on January 21, 2011, 11:29:40 AM
I LOVE HISAKO!!!!! :D Although, her mom is an IDIOT!!!! Poor Hisako, not having a real mom!:( AND THAT GUY!!!! WAY TO GO, HISAKO on taking care of business!!! WOOT WOOT!!! And I cannot believe that SHE SNUCK UP on KAKASHI!!! WTH!!! BEST CHAPTER YET!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!! Youruichi on January 21, 2011, 11:16:41 AM
First, "Hisako’s mother looked up, startled, and peeled herself off the lap of a man...Sakura pointedly looked away from the man who was shamelessly taking his time zipping up his pants" and "Actually, the preferable thing to do would be to go find Sakura, locate the nearest bed, and ravish her for hours upon end." were the best phrases/statements/sentences I have read in my life!!! MAJOR LOL :D!!! Second, now that they have touched each other they will want to do it again!!! Icha Icha!!! >:Dnextguardian on January 21, 2011, 10:05:09 AM
It's a good thing Hisako has a good head on her shoulders. I love her unshakeable personality. That whole 'go with the flow' thing is really impressive.Poor Kakashi. He just can't catch a break. Maybe he should train more, so he doesn't run into people or get snuck up on so easily.
andr28a on January 21, 2011, 8:16:56 AM
I have a bad feeling about that man that Hisako's mother brought home.nextguardian on January 20, 2011, 3:04:40 PM
Man, Hisako's mom is a trip! I lol'ed at that scene in spite of myself, actually.Poor Kakashi. He runs headlong into his crush (or vice-versa), and he doesn't get to keep her. Not fair!
Good chapter!
andr28a on January 20, 2011, 7:59:23 AM
Hisako looks like a tough cookie. Looking forward to morenextguardian on January 19, 2011, 2:21:21 PM
This is getting really deep. I love all the hidden affection here. And really good description of Tenzo, too. It's good to see the kind of loyalty you illustrate in this chapter ^^Youruichi on January 19, 2011, 12:17:02 PM
LOVE IT !!! And I love how Hisako has finally captured someone's attention!! (tough girls have to have each others back!!! ;D) I can't wait for more! I hope Kakashi and Sakura end up where I want them! (Icha Icha!!! >;)) andr28a on January 17, 2011, 8:27:19 AM
Way more info on Hisako.Correction: Sakura is 12-13 in Naruto part one. 15-16 In Naruto part two.
andr28a on January 18, 2011, 7:33:48 AM
Opps I worded that wrong.Yay more info on Hisako was what I meant to say
nextguardian on January 17, 2011, 4:21:42 AM
Nice description here! I loved Hisako's self-description particularly. The whole "she was better developed in the chest than Sakura, but then who wasn't" part made me lol.Good work! Looking forward to more :)
nextguardian on January 15, 2011, 10:29:26 AM
Solid work here. I love Hisako's personality. Especially the "I'm gonna kill Ryouko!" part! It's good that Sakura has someone watching her back. And I always get a kick out of the 'girl time' thing. Since it's not something that I've ever witnessed in rl, it holds a strange fascination for me in fiction. Wait, does that should perverted? Hope not; didn't mean it that way.Anyway, nice chapter!
andr28a on January 15, 2011, 9:03:45 AM
Hisako... needs a character description soon.nextguardian on January 14, 2011, 12:39:31 PM
Hisako sounds like she's going to be a lot of fun. My only comment is to talk a little more about her physical description. But you did a really great job on her personality and the like :)Good chapter; can't wait for more!
andr28a on January 14, 2011, 8:22:17 AM
I wonder what things your OC is capable of... I will watch Hisako's progress with great interest.On a negatvie note, the clone jutsu that I think your OC performed (Since crossing her fingers is a big sign) is actually a shadow clone jutsu. Naruto may make it look like nothing becuase of the fox inside him, but that jutsu is a killer in its chakra consumtion and how advanced it is to a regualr clone jutsu.
nextguardian on January 12, 2011, 10:41:05 AM
Oh boy, girl talk! A rare behind the scenes look! I'm seriously rooting for these two now!Good job with Sakura's mom, too. We don't see her a lot, but I think you've got her personality down.
YunieXTidus on January 12, 2011, 10:42:40 AM
BTW - Hisako is my OC. I decided to try it out.andr28a on January 12, 2011, 9:42:52 AM
This should be interesting.andr28a on January 12, 2011, 9:40:10 AM
LOL at the Sexy Jutsu Sakura stylenextguardian on January 11, 2011, 1:23:48 PM
Wow, Sakura reading that stuff had to be a dream come true for Kakashi! I'm sure that dominant part of his mind wanted to act it out, too. Good twist here. I didn't peg Sakura to be a reader of such...fine material. lol. You're doing a great job of getting into Kakashi's mind will keeping him with character :)nextguardian on January 10, 2011, 11:16:28 AM
Self-pity is a totally viable option! It sucks to see the girl and not be able to have her. And likewise for Sakura, I'm sure. This is really catchy. I'm usually rooting for my own OC to get Sakura, but this fic is making me vote KakaSaku!andr28a on January 10, 2011, 8:13:10 AM
Absence makes the heart grow fonder. Or so they say at leastnextguardian on January 8, 2011, 10:04:54 AM
Man, that's one nice dream Kakashi had there. Tasteful, yet passionate. lol, Kakashi-sama the dog. I like that. Another great chapter here :)nextguardian on January 8, 2011, 10:03:53 AM
I'm glad to see that Ryouko can still be her friend after his little blunder. That apology was definitely true to form for him, too! lol.Anyway, really great job here, too.
andr28a on January 7, 2011, 10:55:54 PM
Things seem to be shaping up now.andr28a on January 6, 2011, 8:43:28 AM
I've caught up on reading your fic and I have to say I'm impressed. But I do have to question your timeline a little.YunieXTidus on January 6, 2011, 9:08:01 AM
This story is based before the Third Hokage was killed.andr28a on January 6, 2011, 9:10:23 AM
That I noticed. But Sakura only became interested in medical jutsu after both Sasuke left and Tsunade became Hokage. So I'm a little lost on that point.YunieXTidus on January 6, 2011, 12:51:01 PM
Okay, I hadn't thought of that. Well, it is a fanfic after all. :p Gosh, now I feel bad. XDI just thought it went well with the storyline.
andr28a on January 6, 2011, 10:24:59 PM
It's a good fic. I just pointed out a little opps in tearms of what Sakura is capable of at this point. But you're right it is a fanfic so I'll just shut up about that.YunieXTidus on January 6, 2011, 10:43:35 PM
Thanks, and my bad. I wasn't thinking about that.nextguardian on January 5, 2011, 3:05:34 PM
Wow! This fic just gets better and better! Besides the usual compliments, really awesome work with Ryouko. Absolutely dead-on reactions, expressions, and pitiable demeanor :) Love this fic; keep it up!nextguardian on January 4, 2011, 1:12:58 PM
You nailed Ryouko's personality, absolutely dead-on. I like the range of emotions this chapter has. Another really well done chapter.And thanks for including Ryouko! :)
YunieXTidus on January 4, 2011, 1:20:02 PM
I'm so glad! It seemed like something Ryouko would do. Also, I'm hoping to have him be a key part of this story. Kakashi's new best friend and go-to guy, maybe? I'm loving writing this story.nextguardian on January 4, 2011, 1:09:28 PM
00' Wow, lucky that was a tree he hit and not a person. Poor guy. That's got to be the worst kind of frustration. On the other hand, it's really great he cares about he so much. At least enough to think about what he's doing.Good chapter.
YunieXTidus on January 4, 2011, 1:18:59 PM
I was actually worried that this chapter might be too much. Kakashi never shows that much emotion, so I was afraid it wouldn't feel like 'him,' if you know what I mean. I'm glad I was able to pull it off.nextguardian on January 3, 2011, 3:42:17 PM
"his silky voice disarming her". That is my favorite line. It fits Kakashi's smooth-talking nature so well! The scream part made me lol, actually. Poor Kakashi, though, feeling so guilty over the whole thing.Really great chapter :)
YunieXTidus on January 3, 2011, 3:48:43 PM
Thanks. Well, I listened to both the japanese and the english dubs today, and his silky voice disarms ME! I could totally see something like that happening to Sakura in the show, though, right? It's just something that happens to girls like her. lol.
I almost had Naruto walking by when she reached out to shut the window, but I don't think any murders would work well in this chapter. Not sure who'd kill him first, Kakashi, or Sakura.
But yeah, Kakashi's in a really bad position.
nextguardian on January 3, 2011, 9:36:21 AM
You do a really stellar job of getting personalities down. The mood of this chapter was spot-on, too. Nervous tension, coupled with Naruto getting bullied. It just realy feels like Naruto, you know? I don't think I could give a higher compliment than that, because getting the 'feel' of Naruto down is difficult. Good work so far! I can't wait for more!YunieXTidus on January 3, 2011, 9:37:44 AM
Thank you! High praise. I started writing more during class today- ironically, Chemistry. I may have another chapter or two up later tonight.nextguardian on January 3, 2011, 9:32:56 AM
Kakashi is the master of dodging questions. You did a really good job of capturing the guy's personalities in this chapter :)YunieXTidus on January 3, 2011, 9:36:35 AM
Thanks. I could totally see him doing something like this.