Only the tough survive
Submitted August 1, 2008 Updated June 29, 2009 Status Incomplete | One day when Blazestar is named leader of ShadeClan all goes wrong... Mean while Riverclaw is fighing for the right decison. Will he try to kill Blazestar or will he let his clan build up into a super clan with killing and violence?
Category:
Books » By Author Name » Erin Hunter » Fan Characters (OC's) |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 0 - PROLOGUE
Submitted: August 1, 2008 • Updated: August 1, 2008
Word count: 175 • Size: <1k • Comments: 44 • views: 702
Chapter 1 - STEALING
Submitted: August 1, 2008 • Updated: August 1, 2008
Word count: 352 • Size: 2k • Comments: 11 • views: 326
Chapter 2 - NEW CLAN MATES
Submitted: August 1, 2008 • Updated: August 1, 2008
Word count: 259 • Size: 1k • Comments: 11 • views: 316
Chapter 3 - The gathering
Submitted: August 2, 2008 • Updated: August 2, 2008
Word count: 475 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 354
Chapter 4 - THE PLAN
Submitted: August 2, 2008 • Updated: August 2, 2008
Word count: 339 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 302
Chapter 5 - THE NEW TERRITORY
Submitted: August 3, 2008 • Updated: August 3, 2008
Word count: 621 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 319
Chapter 6 - A NEW FRIEND AND MORE
Submitted: August 4, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 411 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 282
Chapter 7 - MORE FRIENDS
Submitted: August 4, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 525 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 296
Chapter 8 - DANGER
Submitted: August 5, 2008 • Updated: August 5, 2008
Word count: 483 • Size: 2k • Comments: 9 • views: 311
Chapter 9 - REMEMBER THE PLAN AND THE PROMISE
Submitted: August 6, 2008 • Updated: August 6, 2008
Word count: 359 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 309
Chapter 10 - MORE DREAMS AND NEW CAMP!
Submitted: August 7, 2008 • Updated: August 7, 2008
Word count: 590 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 296
Chapter 11 - BUILDING CAMP
Submitted: August 8, 2008 • Updated: August 8, 2008
Word count: 414 • Size: 2k • Comments: 7 • views: 315
Chapter 12 - THE STORY
Submitted: August 9, 2008 • Updated: August 9, 2008
Word count: 397 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 326
Chapter 13 - THE STORY part 2
Submitted: August 9, 2008 • Updated: August 9, 2008
Word count: 362 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 292
Chapter 14 - THE STORY part 3
Submitted: August 10, 2008 • Updated: August 10, 2008
Word count: 320 • Size: 1k • Comments: 7 • views: 318
Chapter 15 - THE STORY part 4
Submitted: August 13, 2008 • Updated: August 13, 2008
Word count: 487 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 272
Chapter 16 - THE STORY part 5
Submitted: August 14, 2008 • Updated: August 14, 2008
Word count: 521 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 287
Chapter 17 - NEW WARRIORS
Submitted: September 23, 2008 • Updated: September 23, 2008
Word count: 239 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 272
Chapter 18 - Begging the journey
Submitted: June 28, 2009 • Updated: June 28, 2009
Word count: 296 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 229
Chapter 19 - Squad 1 Patrol
Submitted: June 28, 2009 • Updated: June 28, 2009
Word count: 320 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 242
Comments
You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment
stealthpaw on July 20, 2009, 1:28:43 AM
stealthpaw on (Chapter: 19)
eep must read more!!!!!!stealthpaw on July 20, 2009, 1:25:08 AM
stealthpaw on (Chapter: 18)
oh no!!!! who's yelling at them!!!stealthpaw on July 20, 2009, 1:03:48 AM
stealthpaw on (Chapter: 10)
more!!!! must read more of this awesomeness!!!platypusluver on March 27, 2009, 11:42:29 PM
platypusluver on (Chapter: index)
That's sad!DancingWithFire on January 25, 2009, 5:27:18 AM
DancingWithFire on (Chapter: index)
i love it :]darkyoshi555 on September 24, 2008, 11:15:36 PM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 17)
oooo I like Rip's new name, Bleedingsoulhe's gonna find Clawpelt? AWESOME! can't wait 4 more
Falconlobo on September 23, 2008, 10:00:42 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 17)
coolredtail on September 14, 2008, 8:25:51 AM
redtail on (Chapter: 7)
nice storydarkyoshi555 on August 14, 2008, 8:15:15 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 16)
thats sad...a relationship with a father and son being torn apartgreat story :D it's getting very awesome!
icestorm on August 14, 2008, 9:55:39 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 16)
ya. =( Thanks!
Falconlobo on August 14, 2008, 1:56:07 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 16)
awesome^^icestorm on August 14, 2008, 3:14:10 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 16)
Tank you!Falconlobo on August 14, 2008, 6:57:38 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
np^^miknart on August 14, 2008, 2:15:57 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 16)
Aww poor Shadestar his son is with the enemy :(Shadestar's son must be a good kitty to let her go XD
icestorm on August 14, 2008, 3:01:00 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 16)
ya! poor Shadestar! his is a good kittie!miknart on August 13, 2008, 1:22:01 PM
miknart on (Chapter: 15)
XDD Awesome.>.< Darkstar is also evil like blazestar and tigerstar >.<
icestorm on August 13, 2008, 3:16:47 PM
icestorm on (Chapter: 15)
ya! THankies! =Ddarkyoshi555 on August 13, 2008, 12:59:37 PM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 15)
sweetness!icestorm on August 13, 2008, 3:16:28 PM
icestorm on (Chapter: 15)
Thanks! ^^Falconlobo on August 13, 2008, 7:16:47 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 14)
coolicestorm on August 13, 2008, 8:39:00 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 14)
Thanks! ^_*Falconlobo on August 13, 2008, 8:51:11 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
npFalconlobo on August 13, 2008, 7:18:41 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 15)
awesome^^icestorm on August 13, 2008, 8:37:41 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 15)
Thank you! =DFalconlobo on August 13, 2008, 8:51:23 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
np^darkyoshi555 on August 12, 2008, 2:13:16 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 14)
oh no! i have a feeling that this is going to end by one of them being killed!eep...
icestorm on August 12, 2008, 2:21:15 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 14)
lol! I'll tell you this, you already now that one of thems going to die, but none of them will die at the gathering! but at the gathering there will be trouble!darkyoshi555 on August 12, 2008, 2:31:28 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 14)
okBlackSnowFire on August 10, 2008, 2:33:21 PM
BlackSnowFire on (Chapter: index)
This Story Is THE BEST lmao XPicestorm on August 11, 2008, 12:10:26 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
^///^ Why thank you! =Dmiknart on August 10, 2008, 3:07:02 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 14)
YAY NAMES X3 OMG O___O THEY'RE GOING TO DIE O___Oicestorm on August 10, 2008, 4:19:55 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 14)
Lol! One of them MIGHT die. >=Dshadowpiplup on August 10, 2008, 8:01:03 AM
shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
um...Icestorm?icestorm on August 10, 2008, 8:42:36 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
ya?shadowpiplup on August 12, 2008, 2:38:51 AM
shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
never mind^^shadowpiplup on August 9, 2008, 12:24:06 PM
shadowpiplup on (Chapter: 2)
OMG OMG! i cant wait for more i luv this story!icestorm on August 9, 2008, 12:27:42 PM
icestorm on (Chapter: 2)
Glad you like it! ^///^shadowpiplup on August 9, 2008, 12:28:35 PM
shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
glad you like my story's ^/////^Falconlobo on August 9, 2008, 11:55:36 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
cool story part oneicestorm on August 9, 2008, 12:26:48 PM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
Thanks! ^^Falconlobo on August 9, 2008, 12:33:56 PM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
you're welcome^^Falconlobo on August 9, 2008, 11:57:39 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 13)
neaticestorm on August 9, 2008, 12:26:23 PM
icestorm on (Chapter: 13)
Thank you!!Falconlobo on August 9, 2008, 12:33:33 PM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 13)
np^^miknart on August 9, 2008, 11:31:08 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 13)
cool *___* our OCs rocks lol =3
i like my oc's mindreading powers xD
i wonder whos evil o___o.....
and who's going to die o____o......
XDD THIS STORY IS MAKING ME ALL JUMPY XDD
icestorm on August 9, 2008, 11:34:45 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 13)
yup!! ^^You'll see who is evil and who dies SOON!!!
lol! XD
miknart on August 9, 2008, 11:37:07 AM
miknart on (Chapter: index)
the tension is peaking o___o..... i don't even know what that means but most people say it when stuff like this happen lol xDicestorm on August 9, 2008, 11:42:44 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
LOL!! XDdarkyoshi555 on August 9, 2008, 10:33:16 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 13)
wuh-oh...there gonna have to face something bad!icestorm on August 9, 2008, 10:40:42 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 13)
yup!! >=Ddarkyoshi555 on August 9, 2008, 10:42:02 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 13)
wuh-ohicestorm on August 9, 2008, 11:10:14 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
lol!darkyoshi555 on August 9, 2008, 3:14:57 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 12)
cool, one of them will be swallowed in darkness!is it mine? (oh wait, being swallowed in darkness is a bad thing...i think)
XD lol very good way to put our OC's right into the story like that!
icestorm on August 9, 2008, 3:16:12 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 12)
lol, thanks! Well swallowed in darkness like turn evil!darkyoshi555 on August 9, 2008, 3:17:24 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 12)
hehehehe in that case...i hope its mine! >=] i like evil things!miknart on August 9, 2008, 2:36:38 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 12)
AWW SO CUTE =3 I MEAN RIVERCLAW AND FLOWER THAT IS XDOMG one of our OC's o___o........ NOOO o____o.......i wonder which one o___o......
o right COOOOLLLL XD OUR OC's ARE SISTERS XDD
can't wait until the next chapter =3
icestorm on August 9, 2008, 3:10:26 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 12)
I have already decied who will become EVIL. >=D MWHAHAHAHAHA!!icestorm on August 9, 2008, 1:49:29 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 12)
The three cats are based off of my OC, Miknarts OC, and Darkyoshi555's OC.shadowpiplup on August 9, 2008, 12:44:08 AM
shadowpiplup on (Chapter: 1)
AWESOME!icestorm on August 9, 2008, 1:12:27 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
Thanks! ^^darkyoshi555 on August 8, 2008, 4:32:57 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 11)
getting better and better and BETTER!!!SO can't wait for more!
icestorm on August 8, 2008, 6:37:51 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 11)
LOL! Thanks! =DDdarkyoshi555 on August 8, 2008, 7:50:18 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: index)
you're welcome! XDFalconlobo on August 8, 2008, 4:13:10 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 11)
awwwicestorm on August 8, 2008, 6:37:36 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 11)
Thankies! ^^Falconlobo on August 8, 2008, 6:56:05 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
you're welcomemiknart on August 8, 2008, 2:32:58 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 11)
XDDD AWESOME =] Rose and Rip are so cute =] o o maybe they'll be in love =DDD Riverclaw and Flower are so cute in the beginning espcally Flower XDD
o___o is riverclaw seening things
icestorm on August 8, 2008, 4:00:33 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 11)
lol, mabeyya ^^
ya, oooooo
miknart on August 8, 2008, 4:01:44 AM
miknart on (Chapter: index)
XDDDmiknart on August 8, 2008, 2:33:08 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 11)
seeing*darkyoshi555 on August 7, 2008, 8:09:03 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 10)
oh my...Blazestar really is PURE evil! even as a child!aaawwwwww.....love
icestorm on August 7, 2008, 8:33:17 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 10)
lol! yup!miknart on August 7, 2008, 2:26:29 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 10)
AWWWWWWWWW SOOOO CUTE THEY'RE IN LOVE XD Maybe that's why Blazestar is so Angry all the time, hehe cause he's go no love 0___oPoor Blazepaw and Riverpaw when they were younger ;____; >3< stupid bullies..... i wonder which warriors they were o___o..... unless they already killed them o___o.....
icestorm on August 7, 2008, 2:28:08 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 10)
The cats that bullied them are long gone. They either were killed or they ran away.Falconlobo on August 7, 2008, 2:21:03 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 10)
awwwicestorm on August 7, 2008, 2:22:00 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 10)
Thanks! ^^Falconlobo on August 7, 2008, 2:30:20 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
you're welcome^^miknart on August 6, 2008, 12:57:49 PM
miknart on (Chapter: 9)
OMG BLAZESTAR'S PURE EVIL EVIL I TELL YOU O______o I can't believe they did that >.< I CAN'T BELIEVE RIVERCLAW IS FOLLOWING BLAZESTAR JUST BECAUSE OF A PROMISE O_____o though that pretty much means he's really really REALLY LOYAL O____O He must really love his brother then XD
icestorm on August 7, 2008, 12:38:22 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 9)
yes Blazestar is really EVIL! Yes Riverclaw does love his brother but he can't bring up the courage to no. Riverclaw hopes one day that Blazestar will see what he's doing but that is hopeing.-___- Blazestar is blinded by his ANGER. I'm gonna mention this in the next book, as apprentices some cats picked on them (they were smaller than most) so they decided to take out there anger on everyone and get power so no one could bully them.miknart on August 7, 2008, 2:15:28 AM
miknart on (Chapter: index)
OMG o____oFalconlobo on August 6, 2008, 7:50:06 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 9)
whoa he's very evilicestorm on August 6, 2008, 11:10:49 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 9)
Ya!!Falconlobo on August 6, 2008, 11:24:55 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
yupdarkyoshi555 on August 6, 2008, 2:46:16 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 9)
omg!that was a horrible plan!
so thats how Blazeclaw became Blazestar?
can't wait for more!
icestorm on August 6, 2008, 2:47:30 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 9)
ya! ANd ya thats how Blazestar became leader with his brother as deputy.darkyoshi555 on August 6, 2008, 2:48:32 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: index)
yep...i can't believe Riverclaw promised to do such an awful thing with his evil brother!icestorm on August 6, 2008, 4:01:40 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
ya, he didn't relize th HUGE mistake he made.Falconlobo on August 5, 2008, 7:05:47 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 8)
coolicestorm on August 5, 2008, 7:35:14 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 8)
Thankies! =DDDFalconlobo on August 5, 2008, 7:38:37 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 8)
you're welcome^darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 6:35:04 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 8)
sweetness!o poor little Furyeyes...uh oh, what's Blazestar gonna do to Riverclaw? i hope not anything bad!
icestorm on August 5, 2008, 6:40:22 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 8)
Well Blazestar see's Riverclaw as a loyal cat to him and him alone. He knows(thinks) he can trust him. So he won't kill him.darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 6:41:58 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 8)
that's true, but he might get mad...icestorm on August 5, 2008, 11:57:54 PM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
Well no theres a huge secret that has somthing to do with both of them that no other cat knows but them. It will be mentioned later in the story!miknart on August 5, 2008, 6:07:19 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 8)
aww poor Furyeyes ;__; he's all beaten up, i wonder what blazestar is going to do next o___o Riverclaw should've been leader >__<!!!icestorm on August 5, 2008, 6:11:20 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 8)
ya! Blazestar is MEAN!! Riverclaw is the deputy so he will be leader....miknart on August 5, 2008, 6:12:46 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 8)
i say they should kill blazestar o___o......icestorm on August 5, 2008, 6:19:24 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
WEll there afraid of him so they obey, if they don't obey they are killed. If Blazestar thinks some one is plotting aagainst him there dead. Thats why Riverclaw said in the first chapter that they needed more cats.miknart on August 5, 2008, 6:20:48 AM
miknart on (Chapter: index)
oo o___o..... XDDdarkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 12:47:51 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 7)
wow, i can't believe that all these cats just keep on joining without hesitation!well Rip did kind of...but whatever
this is getting really good!
icestorm on August 5, 2008, 3:41:18 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 7)
Thats cuz they are loyal friends of Flower and Dust! thank you! ^^miknart on August 4, 2008, 11:25:42 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 7)
XDD yay new kitties too bad that's a bad thing o_____o..... XDDD but yay more kitties XDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!icestorm on August 4, 2008, 11:32:02 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 7)
lol!Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 10:31:54 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 7)
coolicestorm on August 4, 2008, 10:34:11 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 7)
Thanks! =DDFalconlobo on August 4, 2008, 10:35:20 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 7)
np^^kaitlin_mckitrick on August 4, 2008, 10:21:37 AM
kaitlin_mckitrick on (Chapter: index)
Wow! Really good story! FAVS!icestorm on August 4, 2008, 10:32:13 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
Thank you!! =DDFalconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:34:02 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 6)
coolicestorm on August 4, 2008, 3:48:40 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 6)
Thanks! =DFalconlobo on August 4, 2008, 3:49:08 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 6)
npFalconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:32:03 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 5)
poor flower doesn't know what she's in foricestorm on August 4, 2008, 3:47:54 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 5)
ya! Dun Dun DUN!Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 3:48:50 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 5)
yehdarkyoshi555 on August 4, 2008, 2:25:40 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 6)
hooray! Clawpelt's okay!icestorm on August 4, 2008, 2:30:03 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 6)
yup! ^^Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:29:45 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 4)
evillllllllmiknart on August 4, 2008, 2:02:42 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 6)
O____o Riverclaw gets to see his old buddy XDDD Yay!!!!icestorm on August 4, 2008, 2:29:43 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 6)
lol! Mabey! DON'T TELL ANYONE!miknart on August 4, 2008, 2:30:44 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 6)
lol xDFalconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:27:57 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 3)
dangicestorm on August 4, 2008, 2:28:25 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 3)
lol!Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:34:22 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 3)
hehmiknart on August 4, 2008, 1:54:05 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 5)
XDD AWESOME o____o the evil plan is planning along great, too bad that's a bad thing XDDXD OMG Thunderclaw XDD lol that's the name of my OC XDD
icestorm on August 4, 2008, 1:56:29 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 5)
yup! Lol! Thats funny!darkyoshi555 on August 3, 2008, 5:39:22 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 5)
cool, a new member!can't wait 4 more!
icestorm on August 3, 2008, 5:43:48 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 5)
yup! There will be more soon!darkyoshi555 on August 3, 2008, 5:45:06 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 5)
yus!miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:55:19 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 4)
o____o...... EVIL PLAN!!!!! BlazeCLAW TigerCLAW XDD both claws X3 and now both stars o____o XDCan't wait till the next chapter o_______________o
icestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:58:39 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 4)
oh yeah!!! I didn't notice that!! XDmiknart on August 3, 2008, 3:49:53 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 3)
>.< Blazestar i hate you XDD lolicestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:52:54 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 3)
lol! I hate blazestar too!miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:46:16 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 2)
>__< Riverclaw is being too Obeident >__< Riverclaw should've just yelled back like he did to Bloodclaw >.<icestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:49:00 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 2)
lol! He's afraid! But somtime he will yell back! Opps! I said to much well you got a hint about what he'll do. kinda.miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:50:39 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 2)
XDD hehe..... =Pmiknart on August 3, 2008, 3:40:33 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 1)
;___; poor Mountainclan Kitties, they should take out Blazestar >__<icestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:41:46 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
lol! They are MoonClan kits!miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:44:03 AM
miknart on (Chapter: 1)
oops XD sry XD i had bad memory XPicestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:42:08 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
and apprentices!miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:37:44 AM
miknart on (Chapter: index)
;___; poor Clawpelt o____o >_< BAD BLAZECLAW err BLAZESTAR XDicestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:38:51 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
ya! Blazestar is MEAN!!!darkyoshi555 on August 2, 2008, 9:40:10 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 4)
o no...this is going to end in violence...i have a feelingwow this is really getting good!
icestorm on August 2, 2008, 2:15:09 PM
icestorm on (Chapter: 4)
It might! Thank you!darkyoshi555 on August 2, 2008, 1:57:27 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 3)
okay good, Blazestar didn't tell...neither did Riverclaw...hey this is getting really good!
icestorm on August 2, 2008, 2:02:11 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 3)
Thank you!I'm gonna put more up somtime today!darkyoshi555 on August 2, 2008, 2:04:14 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 3)
YAY!!! i will for surely read it!Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 9:37:56 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 2)
what's a vole and a magpieicestorm on August 1, 2008, 11:17:38 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 2)
A vole is knda like a mouse and a magpie is a birdFalconlobo on August 1, 2008, 11:35:39 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 2)
oh okay^^Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 9:36:24 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
that's so wrongicestorm on August 1, 2008, 11:16:58 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
What? That they stole cats. yes it is wrong!Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 11:35:54 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
yes that^^Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 9:34:40 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
blazwclaw blazestar?^^icestorm on August 1, 2008, 11:16:03 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
Blazeclaw becomes BlazestarFalconlobo on August 1, 2008, 11:36:06 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
oh^^darkyoshi555 on August 1, 2008, 9:00:22 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 2)
REALLY COOL!!!can't wait for more! *faves*
icestorm on August 1, 2008, 9:01:57 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 2)
lol! There will be more somtime tommorow! Thanks! ^///^darkyoshi555 on August 1, 2008, 9:02:38 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 2)
YAY!!!darkyoshi555 on August 1, 2008, 8:47:14 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 1)
o u were right there is one cuss wordo well, cool!
icestorm on August 1, 2008, 8:48:14 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
yea. Sorry bout that. Thank you! =DDdarkyoshi555 on August 1, 2008, 8:43:04 AM
darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: index)
o noes! he's leaving!cool story
icestorm on August 1, 2008, 8:47:40 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
yup! Thanks! =DDicestorm on August 1, 2008, 7:19:50 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
The Characters are on my BLOG on my profile. So if you want go read them.icestorm on August 1, 2008, 3:16:26 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
Comment Deleted
shadowpiplup on August 1, 2008, 7:00:40 AM
shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
can you read my story? it's named "The big fantasey war"icestorm on August 1, 2008, 7:17:51 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
sureshadowpiplup on August 1, 2008, 6:59:40 AM
shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
cool!...luv it!icestorm on August 1, 2008, 6:57:19 AM
icestorm on (Chapter: index)
Okay its working now!!!