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Semper Fidelus

The final story of Blain and Nicole...

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Once upon a time...
Submitted: May 2, 2008 • Updated: May 2, 2008
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Chapter 2 - Back in action
Submitted: May 2, 2008 • Updated: May 2, 2008
Word count: 3012 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 232

Chapter 3 - Fare thee well...
Submitted: May 4, 2008 • Updated: May 4, 2008
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Chapter 4 - The way things are
Submitted: May 5, 2008 • Updated: May 5, 2008
Word count: 3118 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 267

Chapter 5 - Break the silence...
Submitted: May 12, 2008 • Updated: May 12, 2008
Word count: 3448 • Size: 17k • Comments: 1 • views: 214

Chapter 6 - Waiting for an explanation that will never come...
Submitted: May 16, 2008 • Updated: May 16, 2008
Word count: 3336 • Size: 16k • Comments: 2 • views: 206

Chapter 7 - Lead the way...
Submitted: May 24, 2008 • Updated: May 24, 2008
Word count: 3967 • Size: 20k • Comments: 2 • views: 238

Chapter 8 - You would've known...
Submitted: May 25, 2008 • Updated: May 25, 2008
Word count: 3240 • Size: 16k • Comments: 2 • views: 215

Chapter 9 - Bubblegum, sunglasses and bottles of water...
Submitted: May 26, 2008 • Updated: May 26, 2008
Word count: 2595 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 254

Chapter 10 - The truth about you...
Submitted: June 1, 2008 • Updated: June 1, 2008
Word count: 2693 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 238

Chapter 11 - Sunblock...
Submitted: June 3, 2008 • Updated: June 3, 2008
Word count: 3312 • Size: 16k • Comments: 3 • views: 217

Chapter 12 - Caldish, Caldish...
Submitted: June 16, 2008 • Updated: June 16, 2008
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Chapter 13 - The voice of reason...
Submitted: June 23, 2008 • Updated: June 23, 2008
Word count: 3379 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 220

Chapter 14 - Pink...
Submitted: June 26, 2008 • Updated: June 26, 2008
Word count: 3813 • Size: 18k • Comments: 2 • views: 183

Chapter 15 - A bridge too far...
Submitted: June 29, 2008 • Updated: June 29, 2008
Word count: 2685 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 213

Chapter 16 - Why...?
Submitted: July 2, 2008 • Updated: July 3, 2008
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Chapter 17 - He loved me...
Submitted: July 11, 2008 • Updated: July 11, 2008
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Chapter 18 - Irene...
Submitted: July 21, 2008 • Updated: July 21, 2008
Word count: 2846 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 210

Chapter 19 - Preventing the biggest mistake...
Submitted: July 25, 2008 • Updated: July 26, 2008
Word count: 2799 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 230

Chapter 20 - Turn the tide
Submitted: July 27, 2008 • Updated: July 27, 2008
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Chapter 21 - You only live once
Submitted: July 29, 2008 • Updated: July 29, 2008
Word count: 2699 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 238

Chapter 22 - Pandemic...
Submitted: August 4, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 1932 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 207

Chapter 23 - The best friend I've ever had...
Submitted: August 11, 2008 • Updated: August 15, 2008
Word count: 4345 • Size: 22k • Comments: 1 • views: 232

Chapter 24 - Believe...
Submitted: August 18, 2008 • Updated: August 18, 2008
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Chapter 25 - Who is like you, who was and who will be...?
Submitted: August 21, 2008 • Updated: August 21, 2008
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Chapter 26 - The deal...
Submitted: August 26, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
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Chapter 27 - No one...
Submitted: September 1, 2008 • Updated: September 1, 2008
Word count: 5931 • Size: 29k • Comments: 2 • views: 194

Chapter 28 - The Marksman Creed
Submitted: September 11, 2008 • Updated: September 21, 2008
Word count: 4508 • Size: 22k • Comments: 1 • views: 388

Chapter 29 - Someone to talk to...
Submitted: September 21, 2008 • Updated: September 21, 2008
Word count: 7237 • Size: 35k • Comments: 1 • views: 186

Chapter 30 - Welcome back...
Submitted: October 2, 2008 • Updated: October 2, 2008
Word count: 6449 • Size: 31k • Comments: 1 • views: 180

Chapter 31 - Unforgotten burdens
Submitted: October 5, 2008 • Updated: October 8, 2008
Word count: 6205 • Size: 30k • Comments: 1 • views: 229

Chapter 32 - My hero...
Submitted: October 12, 2008 • Updated: October 12, 2008
Word count: 5174 • Size: 25k • Comments: 2 • views: 177

Chapter 33 - Cherished memories
Submitted: October 15, 2008 • Updated: October 15, 2008
Word count: 2522 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 235

Chapter 34 - Heartbeats...
Submitted: October 24, 2008 • Updated: October 24, 2008
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Chapter 35 - Ashes to ashes, we all fall down...
Submitted: November 3, 2008 • Updated: November 3, 2008
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Chapter 36 - No alternative...
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 11, 2008
Word count: 3446 • Size: 16k • Comments: 2 • views: 207

Chapter 37 - Sugar, we're going down...
Submitted: November 23, 2008 • Updated: November 23, 2008
Word count: 3622 • Size: 18k • Comments: 1 • views: 209

Chapter 38 - Bloody tears...
Submitted: November 25, 2008 • Updated: November 25, 2008
Word count: 5174 • Size: 25k • Comments: 1 • views: 209

Chapter 39 - Never be afraid again...
Submitted: November 27, 2008 • Updated: November 27, 2008
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Chapter 40 - And they all lived happily ever after...
Submitted: November 27, 2008 • Updated: February 8, 2009
Word count: 3824 • Size: 18k • Comments: 1 • views: 256

Chapter 41 - Faq, funfacts and bloopers
Submitted: November 27, 2008 • Updated: November 27, 2008
Word count: 2968 • Size: 15k • Comments: 2 • views: 301

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on November 22, 2008, 7:20:38 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 36)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Oh god, the emotion from this chapter is marvelous. I can honestly say I can feel they're pain. I'm so sad I didn't get the chance to read this sooner. Well, I'm glad to have read it at all! Good job as always dude!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on October 26, 2008, 2:42:21 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 34)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Who the hell is Jenny? XD That was worthy lol right there!
SPLEEE KITTENS!!! XDDDD
kittens are luff :3 I still call my cat a kitten, even though she can fit in the bathroom sink perfectly xD Such a heartwarming chapter you have here ;D I lovez it lotz!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on October 12, 2008, 9:05:22 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 32)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Oh my god, that was depressing ;_; But the fact it was so well-written makes up for that. I really hope they can make things work, it'll be so sad if they can't *sob* BWA, the sadness rains upon us this chappie :<

And yet I'm anxious to read the next one 8D

nina94 on October 9, 2008, 3:46:21 AM

nina94 on (Chapter: index)
nina94DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANG!!!!!!!!!!! EVEN I CAN'T DO THAT!!!!! AND IT'S...119,288 WORDS?!!! *faints*
...

I declare this story (not saying this in a bad way), the longest story in the history of stories.^^ *SUPER faves*

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on October 8, 2008, 7:16:18 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 31)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0I got confused, due to reading the beginning beforehand :D
ANYWAYS, this was really deep man. The ending is a stunner! I DON'T KNOW IF SHE DIED OR LIVED D8<

And that's the best way to end a chappie ;D Woo, can't wait for mooooorrrrreee XD You always make this story worthwhile!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on September 1, 2008, 1:36:40 PM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 27)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Ack, a twist! You lied, and yet I benefited from it XD Very, very surprising, I really didn't see that coming. Also, drunk Lattei is drunk :3 Just needed to point that out or I would have exploded. I applaud how well you've written Axel! It makes me sqee with happiness X3 Magnificent chappie, and...Azerbaijan is a real place D8 I freaked out when Wikipedia accidentally revealed that during one of my random research moments!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 28, 2008, 1:19:40 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 26)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Lulz guy humor XD A a girl, I found it funny anyway 8D Wonderful chapter(as always!) Hopefully Scyth will not squeal....then again if he does, MOAR ACTION >8D *is loving teh actionz* Next is Nicole's side, so naturally, I cannot wait to se what's in store!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 21, 2008, 8:13:01 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 25)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Oooh, that was spiritual X3 I really like this chapter. I'm not crazy about religion, but I feel this is the way they should teach it. These days, people seem to be diconnecting and falling over themselves, it's sad too see. Dah, I talk to much 8D Wonderful, wonderful chappie, I couldn't ask for anything better!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 12, 2008, 6:06:21 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 23)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Hooray it's here 8D It's as lovely as I imagined X3 And of course I loved the bit for Axel c: I have also aquired info on a weapon called 'ballistic knife'...
It's a knife you can shoot! How wondorous XD Axel is good enough with out though lol
I will be waiting for the next chappie as always. Talk to you soon dude!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 6, 2008, 4:00:49 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 22)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0CLIFF HANGER DX So now everyone's diseased? Lol, ish teh evalness again c: Wonderful chappie, I wasn't expecting this at all!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 2, 2008, 6:22:46 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 21)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0This was like really, really, REALLY deep man. All these emotions, you capture them so well, it's almost scary o.o lol but awesomely scary, that kind of scary when you sit front seat on a rollercoaster 8D
I TALK TOO MUCH...I luff this chappie, just like every other chappie :3 And lol to Axel sitting by himself XD He's all anti-social :>

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on July 26, 2008, 8:28:27 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 19)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0I squeed X3 I know I've said this before, but I absolutely love Nicole's character. Every deatila a bought her, it inspires me! Now I'm sucking up lol, anyway I obviously adored this chapter, you have a real talent :D

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on July 21, 2008, 10:40:00 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 18)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Lol Tavish puke in dah helmet XD Ending sentence was unexpected! Blain did not want his helmet taken away, I love it :) Sorry I missed the chapter before this, I read both just now, but commented here instead. I equally enjoyed both though 8D

Evilman on July 9, 2008, 7:12:37 PM

Evilman on (Chapter: index)
EvilmanGreat man ;) :D

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on July 2, 2008, 12:11:55 PM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 16)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Lol that was the most accurate headshot EVAR XD It's too bad the Cap'n had to make such a decision. They all could have been best friends forever! But then, the headshot would have never happened, so nevermind :D

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on June 29, 2008, 10:25:48 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 15)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0D:< Evil wolves, they steal piggies houses, and your supplies too XD Axel has made an appearance! lol Finally :D And as usual, you do an awesome job with other people's characters and your own. I especially loved the fight seen this time round. So vivid, and pirate-like :3

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on June 26, 2008, 12:14:25 PM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 14)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Oh my god, I justed started tearing up at the end...That was way to shocking to put into words, I can't think straight now :) Well, all I know is that only one think can happen now, being that Blain always has the BEST plans :D

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on June 23, 2008, 10:20:11 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 13)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0o.o.......that was deep..Very, VERY well written too. I can feel the emotion seeping from my mouse..*wipes hands* The little boy being dead and all, totally caught me off gaurd. You always do that! :D Love reading this, each chapter is a new experience!

kittyshootingstar on June 9, 2008, 1:36:13 PM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 11)
kittyshootingstarThose were extraordinarily lame jokes. Funny, but lame.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh, and if I forgot to mention it before, I faved the story.

kittyshootingstar on June 9, 2008, 1:30:06 PM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 9)
kittyshootingstarDoggy biscuts... LOL you always find a way to put humor in even the bleakest situation. Awesome.

kittyshootingstar on June 9, 2008, 1:26:48 PM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 8)
kittyshootingstarWoah. This story is powerful. I haven't cried reading a story like this in a long time, and now I about shorted out my keyboard with all of the water!

Thanks for putting Kitty in there.

kittyshootingstar on June 9, 2008, 1:18:38 PM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 6)
kittyshootingstarSheesh, both of them think the other's dead. That's gotta stink.

kittyshootingstar on June 9, 2008, 1:12:19 PM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 4)
kittyshootingstarGeez... I got two thoughts about this one. First, you're a very descriptive writer. Second, why do you have to be so darn descriptive!!! I mean, it's like I'm there! For the good and the bad... XP Still, looking forward to seeing what happens next.

kittyshootingstar on June 9, 2008, 1:04:15 PM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 2)
kittyshootingstarWoah, this is starting to get good! Can't wait to read more!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on June 3, 2008, 5:36:25 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 11)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0wtf...Hitler-Mart? XDDD Wouldn't mind going there one day to make fun of his 'stache :D Those jokes were horribly good too! Sunblock....DAHAHAHA, I get it now! Awesome chapter, very creative!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on June 2, 2008, 6:06:32 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 10)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Damn, that was epic.
I also forgot what the A in FUBAR stood for...
I remembered all the other intials just not that one :P Brilliance is another good word to describe this :3 Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

MrGimp on June 2, 2008, 7:42:15 AM

MrGimp on (Chapter: 10)
MrGimpFUBAR: Fudged Up Beyond All Recognition

XD

Thanks for the comment! >w<

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on May 28, 2008, 6:08:00 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 9)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0woot Doggy biscuits XD I tasted cat food.....it was very bad idea, I know how terry feels :) Wonderful details, you may out write my skills man! Glad to read this chapter, and I can't wait for the rest :D

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on May 25, 2008, 12:23:03 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 7)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0ha lol'd at the spitting. That's something me and my friends at school would do. Overall chapter was awesome, there's a lot to think about here. That's why I love stories with background and theories, there's always a possibility of something totally out of the ordinary happening :D 

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on May 6, 2008, 10:38:56 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 4)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Hot potatoes! That's extreme stuff right there *nods* At first I was like, "WHO ARE ALLTHESE PEOPLE HE IS NAMING!?", but then they all died, so now it's like "aw man, I never got to ask them their favorite colors..."
 
Shifty, I picture him as a misquito for some reason...I have no idea why XD Good work so far, I'm loving where this is going! 

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on May 2, 2008, 10:58:40 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on (Chapter: 2)
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Dropping the soap is a very common term over here XD I have't heard it in a while, so that was extremely funny for me. Also the sandwhich, had me rofl :3 I fudgin love it already, and it is only the start! Can't wait to see what comes next
 
 
 
 
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