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The Quest of The Silver Crystal

After The Battle of the Nexes,All Nown Scouts Disapeared,Now 5 New Scouts will Face The Nexes and try 2 Save the Old Scouts By Useing the Silver Crystal,But ONLY A Air 2 the Moon Can Command Full Power Of the Crystal.Can They Defeat the Negaverse?READ ON!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - Who want's To Become A Sailor Scout?
Submitted: July 27, 2007 • Updated: November 4, 2007
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Chapter 1 - A Sailor Scout is Born
Submitted: August 1, 2007 • Updated: August 1, 2007
Word count: 2899 • Size: 16k • Comments: 13 • views: 564

Chapter 2 - Sailor Scouts, Cars, and Toxygen?!?
Submitted: August 2, 2007 • Updated: August 2, 2007
Word count: 2300 • Size: 12k • Comments: 9 • views: 461

Chapter 3 - The Pet Shop
Submitted: August 3, 2007 • Updated: August 3, 2007
Word count: 3019 • Size: 16k • Comments: 6 • views: 460

Chapter 4 - Sea Creep and The New Sailor Scout
Submitted: August 3, 2007 • Updated: August 9, 2007
Word count: 2670 • Size: 15k • Comments: 9 • views: 422

Chapter 5 - The Danger of the Silver Crystal
Submitted: August 8, 2007 • Updated: August 9, 2007
Word count: 3722 • Size: 20k • Comments: 16 • views: 453

Chapter 6 - The Spiritual Sailor Scout P1
Submitted: September 8, 2007 • Updated: September 8, 2007
Word count: 1461 • Size: 7k • Comments: 10 • views: 459

Chapter 7 - Sailors, Vote here!!! More poles here...
Submitted: September 8, 2007 • Updated: September 8, 2007
Word count: 202 • Size: 1k • Comments: 12 • views: 365

Chapter 8 - The Spiritual Sailor Scout P2
Submitted: October 3, 2007 • Updated: October 3, 2007
Word count: 1423 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 411

Chapter 9 - Aries, We Have a Problem!
Submitted: October 4, 2007 • Updated: October 4, 2007
Word count: 1344 • Size: 7k • Comments: 8 • views: 474

Chapter 10 - Danger in Love reveals it self
Submitted: October 7, 2007 • Updated: October 7, 2007
Word count: 1926 • Size: 10k • Comments: 9 • views: 465

Chapter 11 - The Purpose, The Destiny, The Evil Tacktics
Submitted: October 7, 2007 • Updated: October 7, 2007
Word count: 2135 • Size: 11k • Comments: 7 • views: 468

Chapter 12 - Sailor Crescent V.S Sailor Celestial
Submitted: October 7, 2007 • Updated: October 15, 2007
Word count: 2660 • Size: 14k • Comments: 5 • views: 470

Chapter 13 - The Preview... Season 2 Scenes included
Submitted: October 8, 2007 • Updated: October 8, 2007
Word count: 742 • Size: 4k • Comments: 18 • views: 406

Chapter 14 - The ol Switcha rew!
Submitted: October 9, 2007 • Updated: October 9, 2007
Word count: 1884 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 433

Chapter 15 - Catch That Crystal!!
Submitted: October 9, 2007 • Updated: October 15, 2007
Word count: 2773 • Size: 15k • Comments: 6 • views: 491

Chapter 16 - Hypnotic Stars
Submitted: October 12, 2007 • Updated: October 15, 2007
Word count: 1953 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 427

Chapter 17 - A Fight to remember...
Submitted: October 14, 2007 • Updated: October 15, 2007
Word count: 3537 • Size: 19k • Comments: 6 • views: 370

Chapter 18 - Truth Revealed, Tuxedo and Nova...
Submitted: October 15, 2007 • Updated: October 15, 2007
Word count: 1979 • Size: 10k • Comments: 6 • views: 366

Chapter 19 - Tuxedo Mini Mask- Secret identity
Submitted: October 15, 2007 • Updated: October 16, 2007
Word count: 1328 • Size: 7k • Comments: 7 • views: 474

Chapter 20 - A Crystal Clear Destiny
Submitted: October 16, 2007 • Updated: October 16, 2007
Word count: 2513 • Size: 13k • Comments: 8 • views: 510

Chapter 21 - Our Reluctent Princess *Finished*
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 18, 2007
Word count: 1822 • Size: 10k • Comments: 5 • views: 421

Chapter 22 - Tuxedo Mini Mask SAVES THE DAY!!! Or not...
Submitted: October 20, 2007 • Updated: October 20, 2007
Word count: 2314 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 362

Chapter 23 - It's All about Cat, Cat's and Silver Crystals
Submitted: October 23, 2007 • Updated: October 23, 2007
Word count: 1756 • Size: 9k • Comments: 7 • views: 450

Chapter 24 - Hazel Morns...New Powers... P1
Submitted: November 1, 2007 • Updated: November 1, 2007
Word count: 622 • Size: 3k • Comments: 9 • views: 310

Chapter 25 - Hazel Morns...New Powers... P2
Submitted: November 2, 2007 • Updated: November 2, 2007
Word count: 786 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 311

Chapter 26 - Hazel Morns...New Powers...P3
Submitted: November 2, 2007 • Updated: November 2, 2007
Word count: 2684 • Size: 14k • Comments: 11 • views: 363

Chapter 27 - Day of Destiny...P1
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 1314 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 324

Chapter 28 - Day of Destiny...P2
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 1403 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 364

Chapter 29 - Day of Destiny...P3
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 1663 • Size: 9k • Comments: 5 • views: 375

Chapter 30 - The Scouts of The Imperial Quest
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 1748 • Size: 9k • Comments: 6 • views: 490

Chapter 31 - Season 2 Scout Sign ups!
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 340 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 485

Chapter 32 - Movie- Celestial's Fear relized
Submitted: November 10, 2007 • Updated: November 11, 2007
Word count: 6293 • Size: 33k • Comments: 7 • views: 573

Chapter 33 - Back To the Future- Girls Celebrates New Enemy Rises P1
Submitted: November 17, 2007 • Updated: November 17, 2007
Word count: 769 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 424

Chapter 34 - Back To the Future- Girls Celebrates New Enemy Rises P2
Submitted: November 18, 2007 • Updated: November 18, 2007
Word count: 1319 • Size: 6k • Comments: 6 • views: 427

Chapter 35 - Back To the Future- Girls Celebrates New Enemy Rises P3
Submitted: November 22, 2007 • Updated: November 23, 2007
Word count: 3667 • Size: 19k • Comments: 15 • views: 462

Chapter 36 - A few updates
Submitted: November 23, 2007 • Updated: November 23, 2007
Word count: 216 • Size: 1k • Comments: 7 • views: 417

Chapter 37 - Star Over Load!!!
Submitted: November 30, 2007 • Updated: December 1, 2007
Word count: 4473 • Size: 23k • Comments: 10 • views: 488

Chapter 38 - A Chibi Desaster P1
Submitted: December 1, 2007 • Updated: December 1, 2007
Word count: 2024 • Size: 10k • Comments: 16 • views: 501

Chapter 39 - CONTEST-FallOutGirlAARHinder
Submitted: December 7, 2007 • Updated: December 9, 2007
Word count: 170 • Size: <1k • Comments: 19 • views: 562

Chapter 40 - The Chibi Disaster P2
Submitted: April 5, 2008 • Updated: April 5, 2008
Word count: 2765 • Size: 14k • Comments: 11 • views: 450

Chapter 41 - New Arrivals- Kimu, Kyuna, And Aqua P1
Submitted: April 5, 2008 • Updated: April 5, 2008
Word count: 1050 • Size: 5k • Comments: 13 • views: 426

Chapter 42 - New Arrivals- Kimu, Kyuna, And Aqua P2
Submitted: April 10, 2008 • Updated: April 10, 2008
Word count: 788 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 382

Chapter 43 - Song Contest!!!!
Submitted: April 10, 2008 • Updated: April 10, 2008
Word count: 532 • Size: 2k • Comments: 12 • views: 490

Chapter 44 - New Arrivals- Kimu, Kyuna, And Aqua P3
Submitted: April 10, 2008 • Updated: April 10, 2008
Word count: 1334 • Size: 7k • Comments: 6 • views: 405

Chapter 45 - New Arrivals- Kimu, Kyuna, And Aqua P4
Submitted: April 26, 2008 • Updated: April 26, 2008
Word count: 309 • Size: 1k • Comments: 7 • views: 396

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sailoraqua13 on April 26, 2008, 1:01:22 PM

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sailoraqua13Moonora, watever your doing stop it!

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 15, 2008, 7:34:09 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 45)
Symphoniaprincess101yea plz stop Moonora

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 6, 2008, 7:50:49 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101oh godO_O

Sasukesgirlfriend on May 18, 2008, 2:08:32 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendWHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN TO DK AND MOONARA AND HAZEL AND THE NEW SAILOR SCOUTS! OH SO THE DRAMA! And brain over-load...lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on May 18, 2008, 2:07:09 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendWHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN TO DK AND MOONARA AND HAZEL AND THE NEW SAILOR SCOUTS! OH SO THE DRAMA! And brain over-load...lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 26, 2008, 12:31:49 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 45)
Tuxedo_Mini_Maskreally short, but it's part 4 ^^'

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 26, 2008, 12:21:25 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: 45)
FallOutGirlAARHinderWHAT THE CRAP!!!!!!!!!!MOONARA STOP IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Leo...I told u...And I'll say it again...Hazel is a SLUT!

Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 12:40:18 PM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 44)
Symphoniaprincess101...so...many...flashbacksO_O

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 19, 2008, 2:23:03 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 44)
Tuxedo_Mini_Maskthere will be more ^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 26, 2008, 5:03:37 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 12:34:35 PM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 42)
Symphoniaprincess101ok...?_? i'm at a lost.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 19, 2008, 2:22:39 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask????? what would that be?

Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 12:26:14 PM

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Symphoniaprincess101o god,o god,o god!!!!!

Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 12:25:41 PM

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Symphoniaprincess101o god,o god,o god!!!!!

Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 12:18:38 PM

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Symphoniaprincess101O_O damn...

sailoraqua13 on April 15, 2008, 6:35:30 AM

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sailoraqua13Leo, I'm stressed out from Acttaps at my school. Could u please try and update tonight so I can wind down?

Starofwonder123 on April 13, 2008, 7:58:28 AM

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Starofwonder123I have lyrics, but I can't put it on youtube. My audacity recording program won't ever record, and I don't have a microphone. I'd love to join, But I just don't have the right materials.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 13, 2008, 8:29:24 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyou can add lyrics on the site. And someone else can make music for it. ^^ It would be best for you to join the Slideshow crew ^^

AlleyCat17 on April 12, 2008, 5:54:35 AM

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AlleyCat17wow nice chapter and can't wait for you to finish it and for the contest i don't think i can enter it cause i suck at the type of soft.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 12, 2008, 9:29:36 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwill enter as a slideshowesy. Submit a piccy to FAC about this story and that will at least give ya somethin ^^

swampertgirl0504 on April 11, 2008, 7:36:37 PM

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swampertgirl0504i really wish i could enter....but i can't. At least not with the Youtube bit. I can try just writing the lyrics and POSSIBLY the music, and put it upp as a pic on FAC if thats ok.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 12, 2008, 3:29:24 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThats great too. What ever YOU can DO to help is exceptable! Oh and BTW you are in the story. if You want I can PM to you who you are XD

well anyways.... If you wouldn't mind I would like to use some of the sailor moon pictures from your gallery in the slide show and possibly sign you up for the request crew??? IDK if that would be to much for you though XD

REPLY ASAP here or on my profile. where ever you are most comfortable ^^

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 10:45:59 PM

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sailoraqua13Cool! Next part please! :3

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:59:29 PM

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sailoraqua13Now Leo-kun, I can stay on for a bit longer so please try to get as much of the next part done as u can me and CC r counting on u! :3

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:54:09 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHey I love ya'll but I have 2 go. Night night, bu bi, love ya all! Leo add that chappy! Aqua amek sure he does so I can read it b4 school! I wont be here 2morrow night or Sat Morning or afternoon! I'm going to my cuz's


Night, love ya, bye!

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:55:50 PM

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sailoraqua13I will! *Salutes* And hey, new aggrement: Our school names and animes we like are all we'll know about each other's lives besides these computors okay? And yes, I'll make sure he adds! :3

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:57:23 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderthank u, well u know my real name

I just dont know urs


well i really have 2 go

bu bi!

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:58:31 PM

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sailoraqua13Ok, but I'm not allowed to say my real name let's just leave it at that! :3
Night CC See ya tommorow! :3

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:42:58 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder....*eyes r all teary* NOW U LEFT ME IN TEARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS BEAUTIFUL B- BU- BUT SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


*sniffs* now im never going to get over this....*sniffs* *crys into Jenny's shoulder again* IM SORRY DK!!!!!!!!!IM SORRY EVERYONE!!!!!!!!JUST KILL ME NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 12:44:52 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol wow... TY!

glad you liked it XD Will you be on for the next part to be posted?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:50:16 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderadd it 2night and ill read it b4 school 2morrow morning...cause i know u cant get it b4 my curfew

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:54:50 PM

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sailoraqua13Yeah, if I have to get off before u add it just add it tonight and I'll read it either before school or after school tommorow! :3

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:38:48 PM

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sailoraqua13Coolness! And if u have the next part ready, my mom said I could stay on till 10:45 or so so GET TO ADDIN!! Nice piccie by the way! And thanks for adding that part! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 12:39:40 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNP but what time is it now for you?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:43:35 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderyeah...thats something u kept a mystery to us also...

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:44:43 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:45:43 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHindersame here...9:45 my time...Leo is an hour ahead of us

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:46:23 PM

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sailoraqua13Ahhhhhh, ok so we may b able to make it! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 12:45:18 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask10:46 here

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:46:15 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderhey Aqua i never read that comment!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:32:09 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderok it looks like im gonnah ave to show u the freaky side of me



Honey, please hurry and add that chapter. Because I have so little time. Now please...for me?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 12:35:52 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol Don't call me honey it feels weird. You are starting to remind me of my friend paige XD. She says it all the time. lol and it's up, Well most of it. I had to cut some of it for Part 3 ^^' but you understand XD

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:36:46 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!but ill keep saying that cause its a southern girl thang...hehehe besides i like to tease u

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:39:19 PM

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sailoraqua13You live in the south?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:44:28 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderis there something wrong with that? At least my country accent isn't bad...well i barely have one ^^'''

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:46:01 PM

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sailoraqua13No prob it's just, it kind of sent a buzzer off for me! :3
Hey, for my next story I need a new school name, would u get in trouble or b goin against your values if u told me the name of your school?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:47:10 PM

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sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:48:35 PM

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sailoraqua13Yea, but u tell me yours first! Please, it'll make me feel a lot better if u tell me yours first! :3

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:52:14 PM

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sailoraqua13Good, thanks I'll probably use that in my next story! :3

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:54:35 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderur welcome

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:49:19 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 12:37:49 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyeppe -.-

Now read the chappy!

Moon_Princess on April 10, 2008, 12:14:38 PM

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Moon_PrincessYikes! O_O
I would join, but heres the problems...

A. I can't write lyrics...I'm horrible at it. >_< My friend Kay-chan rocks at it though. ^^
B. I NEVER sing in front of anyone or to the point where people can only hear me.
C. I can't write music...>.<

So yeah. @.@ I love music to death...but...I have no talent in it.. @w@;;
Good luck to all the people who join it though!! ^-^


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 12:21:38 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol There are many more prizes!!!

And I don't think you suck at lyrics. So Here's what I say

1. Submit some lyrics
2. Get your friend OVER HERE NOW
3. Put up some art of the story. Like maybe animation or screen shot. *I know your good at those*
4. Please join in as many ways as you can. No matter how bad you think you stink. I believe I Am the judge of that

Moon_Princess on April 10, 2008, 12:38:56 PM

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Moon_PrincessBut...I've never posted any lyrics. '_';
Lol, I'll see what I can do. XD


~Moon_Princess

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:18:08 PM

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sailoraqua13Boy, I know your workin hard but I have to get off soon so PUT IT UP FAST!!!! T_T

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 11:58:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHey, I am adding pictures so give me 10 minutes okay?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 12:00:35 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder*eye twitches* i dont mind u adding pics darlin but is this some kind of torture?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 11:07:40 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHey r u gonna be working on that other chappy for about 30 to 45 more minutes?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 11:09:21 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyes ^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 11:10:39 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*gives u lots of kisses on the cheeks* WHEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 11:14:25 AM

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sailoraqua13Yeah! My mom just said I could stay on until Leo added the chappie! :3

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 11:17:17 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY UR MOM ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now we can party until that time comes!!!!!!!!!As 8:53 P.M. on April 10, 2008!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


its the OCD and bad habit of having to know the time...besides I have that hidden uncontrollable power of mine that I hate...*shivers*

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 11:19:02 AM

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sailoraqua13Its ok, that's a useful skill! :3

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 11:20:11 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderThe only thing its useful for is making sure I'm not late for school...which my parents always fail to get me in time...or at least a minute before the bell rings.

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 11:33:42 AM

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sailoraqua13Hey, you're keeping better track of the time: How many more minutes until new chappie time?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 11:34:39 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder8 to 7 minutes at the least

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 11:36:45 AM

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sailoraqua13YEAH!! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 11:41:58 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskalmost done ^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 11:43:26 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5 more minutes!!!

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 11:44:54 AM

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sailoraqua13YES!!!!!!!!!! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 11:49:49 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskummm, give it like 10 more at the most. I need to add in the comedy ^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 11:50:56 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHUrerrerrerereyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 10:49:48 AM

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sailoraqua13Hey, I would join but even though I use my cuz's youtube profile, my mom won't let me submit anything using my voice or face (I don't even know how to anyway! :3) so, can I just submit the lyrics on here?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 10:54:14 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskdon't forget to sign up for the Slide show part!

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 10:56:21 AM

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sailoraqua13I won't! Cause that part I can handle! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 11:09:54 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol TY

I put you on the list.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 10:50:42 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYes you May ^^

But becuz of that Don't expect to be out singer ^^'

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 10:52:07 AM

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sailoraqua13Ok! :3

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 10:51:45 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderWhich pic did I do again...? Oh I cant do this cause we lost the camera and i havent really done anything with my youtube account

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 10:53:18 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYou can still submit Pictures and Lyrics.

You all have a beautiful voice, but you don't have to sing for it to be heard!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 10:54:19 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderill do lyrics...and maybe i can talk my cuz into doing it cause i sound deflicted on tape anyways...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 10:58:50 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol

Cool. Don't forget to draw MORE PICTURES for the slideshow ^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 11:01:29 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderCan I draw a Pegasus? Or a chalice...opps shouldn't of said that...but oh well! Wait its been so long since I've read those other chappies that I forgot all thats happened...^^'''


I'll draw Leo and Pegasus

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 11:06:00 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskcool ^^

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 12:46:41 AM

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sailoraqua13U didn't update Leo... -_-+

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 10, 2008, 8:48:39 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskBecuz Hazel was doing something And had trouble finishing SO I had to help her ^^

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 8:59:50 AM

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sailoraqua13Ahhhh, that I can understand! :3

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 10, 2008, 9:50:46 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindercause sadly im blonde...and red and black and brunette and grey and silver and white...IM A MUTT!!!!!!! with no IQ!

sailoraqua13 on April 10, 2008, 10:04:46 AM

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sailoraqua13Oh, we don't blame u CC, and your not dumb your smart! :3

sailoraqua13 on April 9, 2008, 8:44:45 AM

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sailoraqua13Ok this must b gettin annoying but since u said u'd update today soooo....ADD THE NEXT FREAKIN' CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 9, 2008, 9:19:03 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI will don't worry. there will be one up today

sailoraqua13 on April 9, 2008, 9:34:42 AM

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sailoraqua13...WHOOHOO!!! :3

sailoraqua13 on April 8, 2008, 7:31:50 AM

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sailoraqua13Hey Leo! I talked to CC, she has the info for the site now! Soooooo....WILL U PLEASE ADD A NEW CHAPPIE?!?!?!? TTTTTTTTTTTT__TTTTTTTTTTTT

sailoraqua13 on April 7, 2008, 9:05:55 AM

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sailoraqua13PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!! TTTTTTTTTTTT_TTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 7, 2008, 12:29:56 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masktomorrow there will be 2 chapters. Unless Hazel/Nikki Doesn't give in to my demands -.-...

sailoraqua13 on April 7, 2008, 12:37:36 PM

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sailoraqua13Good! Wait, what are the demands?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 7, 2008, 1:42:49 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskthat she join this one site.BUT she didn't SOOO Don't expect any chapters from me tomorrow. She broke her promise -.-

sailoraqua13 on April 7, 2008, 1:44:18 PM

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sailoraqua13Let me talk to her, I bet I can get her to join! :3

winxgirl21 on April 7, 2008, 5:50:32 AM

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winxgirl21awesome! I wonder what they're up to...?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 3:26:26 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderDarn newbies! I told u I cant trust strangers! Aris I hate u! I told u not to just trust strangers! Even if they r senshi!

Great chappy and im sorry i wasnt on but i had company.

sailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 2:42:33 AM

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sailoraqua13HEY!! One of those newbies is me! And just because we've gone Uranus and Neptune on u guys dosen't mean u can't trust us! T_T

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 6, 2008, 3:45:33 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderI'm just carrying out my role...*crys* Leo left!!!! HOLD ME!!!!!!!!!!!

sailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 4:49:40 AM

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sailoraqua13Oh it'll be okay *Hugs you*

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 6, 2008, 4:54:33 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder*sobs and embraces u* but--i--I told him...*sniffs* that I...I couldnt be both the Spiritual Leader and S-Spiritual Teacher while raising our child...*wailing* IT'S THE GUYS DUTY TO BE THE SPIRITUAL LEADER IN A FAMILY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!w-what was...h-he thinking?

sailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 6:21:04 AM

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sailoraqua13I don't know, but it'll all work out just u wait and see! :3

Moon_Princess on April 5, 2008, 2:48:29 PM

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Moon_PrincessAW! I wanna kick the can. D: *tear*
LOL! J/K. ^-^
Awesome chappie. Lol, I had to catch up a little. ^^;

Keep it up! :D This is great!


~Moon_Princess

sailoraqua13 on April 5, 2008, 12:23:22 PM

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sailoraqua13Woh...AWSOME!!!! :3 PLEASE tell me your putting up part 2 tonight! If u aren't I can wait but PLEASE TRY!!! T_T

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 5, 2008, 12:54:13 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI can't tonight But tomrrow I will post it after I get done adding chapters to Dragonball- Artificial ^^

sailoraqua13 on April 5, 2008, 1:09:34 PM

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sailoraqua13Coolness! I can't wait! :3
But here's a little fact about Aqua you may need to know:
Every enemy she ever faces considers her the weakest princess and senshi of them all so their always trying to kill her first. That usually involves capturing one of her friends and using them against her. Even if her friends plead with her not to give up anything of hers they ask for, she'll even give up her crystal and her life to save her friends. I hope that can come up SOMEWHERE in the story! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 5, 2008, 1:17:44 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskoh it will ^^

I was going to have the enemy consider you the weakest anyways becuz you are the close to the youngest ^^

sailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 6:21:54 AM

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sailoraqua13That acutally makes sense! I like the way u think Leo!
And thanks for saying it'll b in the story! When do ya think the next chappie will b up?

AlleyCat17 on April 5, 2008, 12:38:01 PM

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AlleyCat17ohhhh me and cat were just going to have some fun anyway cool new people and i beat there the new sailors scouts.

AlleyCat17 on April 5, 2008, 11:28:01 AM

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AlleyCat17Finally you updated anyways awesome chapter but such a sad ending but i can't wait to read what happens next so i hope you add a new chapter soon please.oh and great song.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 5, 2008, 11:41:53 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTY I am almost finished with the next one ^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 11:29:10 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderbtw hes gonna add another chappy 2night...he promised me...hehehe

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 9:42:22 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderI LOVE THAT SONG AND I LOVE THAT ENDING!!!!!!!!!BUT IN A WAY I HATE IT!!!!!!!!


u promised u wouldnt leave me...dont let Chibi Chibi not have a father! I cant raise her on my own!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 5, 2008, 9:56:15 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskhehehehe....

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 10:44:02 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderu know im the Spiritual Teacher and ur the Spiritual Leader...

I'm so religious at times XD! But theres nothing wrong with that

sailoraqua13 on April 5, 2008, 9:44:42 AM

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sailoraqua13Woh...So beautiful but so sad! T_T :3 Hey, when will the "Shadowy Figures" finally reveal themselves? I'm just curious! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 5, 2008, 9:47:28 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNext chappy ^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 9:48:00 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderhey i changed my mind im not going yet

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 5, 2008, 9:57:04 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskcool ^^

I actually Feel like adding another chapter to this if you can stay for another hour XD

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 9:58:53 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderILL STAY ONE TILL THE END OF THE EARTH BABY!!!!!!!!!!!START ADDING THOSE CHAPPIES!!!!!!!

sailoraqua13 on April 5, 2008, 10:01:00 AM

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sailoraqua13Same here! I can't wait for the next chappie! Oh, and CC could u read the first chappie of my Kingdom Hearts story while we wait?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 9:47:28 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderi know...hehehe

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 9:30:40 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderGREAT CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!but that wasnt a sappy ending...BUT YAY UR OVER RINI!!!!!!!!! now start working on those other stories


oh i think u should try it with 'Because Of You' by Kelly Clarkson...it seems to fit it in some way

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 5, 2008, 9:38:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHere, check the newly improved sappy ending ^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on February 24, 2008, 11:58:20 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderhey i g2g


night night!!! bu bi!!!!!!!


ill write that chappy 2morrow

winxgirl21 on February 16, 2008, 5:15:11 AM

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winxgirl21Awesome story! I'm definately going to try to read all of the chapters so far! =)

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on February 16, 2008, 11:16:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskthanks ^^

AlleyCat17 on February 3, 2008, 2:02:01 AM

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AlleyCat17when are you going to update this story it's been like 2 months.and i miss reading this story :(

Sasukesgirlfriend on January 26, 2008, 6:24:28 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendUh...*tries to hold in laughter* Very drama f-f-fille-*burst out laughing* I'm sorry I couldn't hold it in <D. *coughs in trying to be serious* *comforts Hazel* *Slaps Rini* I'm on your side Leo! She probably got you drunk or something. Rini I hate you now *gleams evilly at her* HAZEL + LEO = HAPPINESS AND PEACE! RINI + LEO = EVIL AND MATH HOMEWORK! But that's just my opinon! *is all cheerful again*

You: *freaked out* Why can she got to Mad to happy just like that?!

Me: I have a question, dude! Uh you know the comment on the picture of DK and Nick? You said she wouldn't have a slim body for long. Well since he's dead who's going to be the dad with DK mom?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on February 1, 2008, 8:10:16 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol TY

You'll see...

Sasukesgirlfriend on February 4, 2008, 8:56:54 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendI MUST KNOW ALL POWERFUL KING!!!*BOWS*

lol

I have like 10% patience in find out, but that will hold out for maybe...a long time.lol BUT NOT TOO LONG!

JUST GIVE ME STEAK AND CHOCOLATE MILK!lol sorry mah friends and i were hyper today.lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on January 26, 2008, 6:27:05 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendUh...*tries to hold in laughter* Very drama f-f-fille-*burst out laughing* I'm sorry I couldn't hold it in <D. *coughs in trying to be serious* *comforts Hazel* *Slaps Rini* I'm on your side Leo! She probably got you drunk or something. Rini I hate you now *gleams evilly at her* HAZEL + LEO = HAPPINESS AND PEACE! RINI + LEO = EVIL AND MATH HOMEWORK! But that's just my opinon! *is all cheerful again*

You: *freaked out* Why can she got to Mad to happy just like that?!

Me: I have a question, dude! Uh you know the comment on the picture of DK and Nick? You said she wouldn't have a slim body for long. Well since he's dead who's going to be the dad with DK mom?

Sasukesgirlfriend on January 26, 2008, 6:11:21 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendAwesome chapters. =D

setolover on January 21, 2008, 1:03:25 PM

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setolovername: Jade Dayzu
 
age: 14
 
sailor scout name: Sailor Gemini
 
Element/Power: Darkness
 
Planet*if you have one*: N/A
 
Transformation Name: Gemini Darkness Power!
 
Transformation Description: she takes the power stick and stabs it through her chest, then she is enveloped in darkness, right after the darkness fades she is covered in dark red blood, all of the blood slowly drips down to the ground, then there's a flash of darkness and there's her outfit, glowing in the dark moonlit background with her long black scepter, and the blood red gem on the top of her scepter (just so that you know I'm not goth...)
 
Name of Attacks: Gemini Darkness Surround, Gemini Deadly Poison Blast, Gemini Healing Aid
 
Sailor Scout Outfit: like the rest of the sailor scouts she has ribbons in the back, shoes,gloves,tiara, and so on...but she has wings like sailor moons only black (actually the white part is black on her outfit along with everything else and the trimmings on every part of her outfit is blood red) ya i know...bad description...
 
Hair,Eye,and skin color: her hair is black, her eyes are blood red and her skin color is the same as sailor moons
 
Personality: acts like a emo most of the time but when it comes to fighting and relationships she cooperates with a heart warming attitude but if you anger her she'll kick you all the way to the next Galaxy.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on January 14, 2008, 5:28:13 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTaking a short break for midterms and holdidays Aswll as birthdays! XD sorry!

swampertgirl0504 on December 31, 2007, 5:21:43 PM

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swampertgirl0504if you do put trinity in this can you tll me plz?
Or, you could put my other OC in, sailor calisto (chloe) who is lita's sister.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on January 2, 2008, 4:33:36 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI will Be sure to tell you and she probably will be... BUT She Will Be Altared a BIT and will only be there for a short while ^^'... But It will be really cool how your character comes into the story XD

FallOutGirlAARHinder on December 29, 2007, 8:17:00 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderWHAT!?!?!?!?!?! None of ya'll r committed anymore!!!!!!!!! Whats wrong?!?!?!!?! Did ya'll have seizures and die?!?!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on January 2, 2008, 4:31:23 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskWell They Said that they read it but If they do read it then why didn't they read 'At least 6 of the 9 of you must comment' and comment??? *Smirk Appears on face* I love it when I'm Right ^^'

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 29, 2007, 8:26:50 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHopefully -.-...

The Following 2 are little LIARS and say they read the new chappy's but don't comment... BUT THE TRUTH IS THEY NOT ONLY DON'T COMMENT BUT DON'T READ IT EITHER!!!-
Sailor Black Hole
Sailor Triton

Little liars... I love ya Just you have been BUSTED!!!! XD

FallOutGirlAARHinder on December 29, 2007, 8:27:55 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderhow did u find out?

sailoraqua13 on December 7, 2007, 7:19:25 AM

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sailoraqua13Well, I found a scanner I could use so I'm entering!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 10, 2007, 6:34:19 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask=D COOL! did I mention one of the prizes will be a WHOLE CHRISTMAS SPECIAL ABOUT THEIR CHARACTER!

sailoraqua13 on December 10, 2007, 6:39:01 AM

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sailoraqua13SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :3

Kouni46892742 on December 9, 2007, 8:33:52 AM

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Kouni46892742Sorry! My scanners broken!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 10, 2007, 6:34:03 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 39)
Tuxedo_Mini_Mask=D COOL! did I mention one of the prizes will be a WHOLE CHRISTMAS SPECIAL ABOUT THEIR CHARACTER!

Moon_Princess on December 9, 2007, 11:32:00 AM

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Moon_PrincessA contest, eh?
Hmm...I'll have to think about it. Maybe I can join when I get a little less off my hands. ^^;

But it sounds interesting! :D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 10, 2007, 6:33:43 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 39)
Tuxedo_Mini_Mask=D COOL! did I mention one of the prizes will be a WHOLE CHRISTMAS SPECIAL ABOUT THEIR CHARACTER!

AlleyCat17 on December 9, 2007, 8:35:26 AM

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AlleyCat17sorry i can't enter even though i have a great scean to draw i just can't because i don't have the time to do it so m sorry.but i hope you update soon.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 10, 2007, 6:33:19 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 39)
Tuxedo_Mini_Mask=D COOL! did I mention one of the prizes will be a WHOLE CHRISTMAS SPECIAL ABOUT THEIR CHARACTER!

Symphoniaprincess101 on December 10, 2007, 6:16:28 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101A contest, eh?
Hmm...I'll have to think about it. i might join.sounds interesting though.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 10, 2007, 6:32:56 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 39)
Tuxedo_Mini_Mask=D COOL! did I mention one of the prizes will be a WHOLE CHRISTMAS SPECIAL ABOUT THEIR CHARACTER!

Symphoniaprincess101 on December 13, 2007, 3:13:54 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101cool^^

Moon_Princess on December 9, 2007, 11:33:07 AM

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Moon_PrincessWHEW!
Sorry it took me forever to comment. ^^;
I decided to throw everything into one comment since I missed a bunch of chappies. ^^;

AWESOME job! It keeps on getting better! ^^
I have fun picturing this as an actual Sailor Moon episode. :D

Keep it up, okay? ^^


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 10, 2007, 5:46:58 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskREALLY!?!? Thanks ^^, it makes me glad to hear you say that! I was just wondering if you all could understand what I was saying! THANKS! ^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 10, 2007, 5:45:16 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask2 more people and that'll make 6 so I can add a chapter ^^ but untill than, YOU'RE OUT OF LUCK! I'M ON STRIKE!

AlleyCat17 on December 9, 2007, 8:37:24 AM

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AlleyCat17in other word to much to do right now.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 9, 2007, 8:22:59 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask1 COMMENT?!? OUT OF 9 PEOPLE! THAT'S IT! UNTIL AT LEAST 6 OF YOU COMMENT I'M NOT ADDING A CHAPTER!

Symphoniaprincess101 on December 1, 2007, 3:16:11 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101awsome^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 4, 2007, 5:52:14 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on December 2, 2007, 3:39:48 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderCHAPPY B AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But man who lets their child try and rape some1 and let them get away w/ it?!?!?! Yet Chibichibi is MINE! MINE I TELL U!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Hazel- *evil look* Rini run...

Rini- Its not what it seems Hazel...*sweat drop* Cant we compramise...?hehehehe

Hazel- *rips her head off* Nope...LEO! CHIBICHIBI!!!!!!!!



I wovers d chappy^^ I'm sorry i didnt comment earlier...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 3, 2007, 8:29:23 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 38)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskWell She is A princess ^^'

Lol Leo did nothing but think of ChibiChibi! and Try to Break up with Rini 3 different Times ^^'

Oh and Thanks!

sailoraqua13 on December 1, 2007, 10:36:20 AM

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sailoraqua13Aqua: But ChibiChibi was just playing wit me! *looks frantically around for her*
Me: Um, u fell asleep she msut've gotten ahold of the Polar Pen (Polar Pen: Let's her transform into anything she wants to and is also a teleporting device! :3)
ChibiChibi: ChibiChibi! *Holds up pen*
Aqua: THAT'S IT U LITTLE BRAT YOUR SO DEAD! *starts chasing her for the pen*
Me: I have a lot of work to do... *Starts following them*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 3, 2007, 8:27:15 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL! Thank! and CHIBICHIBI! You Can't Hold Sharp Objects! *Snatches it away from her*

Aqua: YAY!!! =D

ChibiChibi: WAAHH! D=

Me: Here, *Puts a rubber Cap on the End* Much Better! =D

Aqua: WAAAHHH!!! D=

Me: ^^' What I Do Wrong?!?

sailoraqua13 on December 3, 2007, 8:30:16 AM

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sailoraqua13Me: Heeheee! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 3, 2007, 8:31:24 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL XD

AlleyCat17 on December 2, 2007, 2:53:10 AM

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AlleyCat17that chapter was very shocking and awesome.i hope you update soon.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 3, 2007, 8:25:02 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL!!! THANKS XD!

Symphoniaprincess101 on December 1, 2007, 9:25:18 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101you are evil tux DX poor hazelTT^TT*hits leo on the head hard*><*gose to try and confort Hazel*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 3, 2007, 8:24:23 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 38)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYou Shouldn't Hit People! lol XD

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 1, 2007, 9:05:49 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskFear my drama

AlleyCat17 on November 30, 2007, 11:49:38 PM

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AlleyCat17wow really awesome chapter and i can't wait to see what happens next.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 1, 2007, 1:47:17 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTHANKS! Oh and I thought your idea about Jaden was awesome =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 30, 2007, 12:41:27 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderKAWII!!!!!!!!!!!HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NO INTERUPTIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I GOT A NEW POWER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WOOT WOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I WOVS U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


This is 1 of my fav chappies in the story!!!!U have the power of awesomeness!!!!!!!! Great chappy!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey I'm getting kind of tired so i'm not gonna stay on because *yawns* Its been a tiring day. *yawns more* And 2morrow is gonna be a long day.

Also 2morrow i got somthin 2 tell u...so Night Night!!! And bu bi!!!!!!! May this Princess dream of what she wants 2 and doesnt lose her power! Night night Leo...c u sometime this weekend...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 1, 2007, 1:46:11 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskReally? Thanks =D umm what did you wana say?

sailoraqua13 on November 30, 2007, 12:11:17 PM

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sailoraqua13Coolness! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on December 1, 2007, 1:44:31 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks =D

sailoraqua13 on December 1, 2007, 4:21:53 AM

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sailoraqua13yous welcome! :3

AlleyCat17 on November 30, 2007, 6:28:22 AM

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AlleyCat17hey i have un idea how you can introduce jaden's mask self.one day jenny gets really sick with a high fever so she has to say home with globe looking after her later some bad guys attack the other girls and they are losing and need jenny's help but they know she can't come because she is too sick but she finds out they are in danger so she gets up from bed even thu globe trys to stop her but she said she just can't just live her friends to get killed so she changes to sailor nova go's to her friends and trys to fight the bad guys but she can bearily stand with blirry eyes none the less fight.then one of bad guys hits her and sents her to the ground and know she can't get up because she is too weak to stand and the other girls are drined of power to help her and just when she was about to get again and get killed mask jaden(or what ever you name his mask self) come and save her and cairrys her in his arm bridelstly and while in his arms she just looks up at him and see's how handsome he is and blushes a bit but you can't see because of her fever and then she pass out.then he brings her to safty and finsh off the bad guys and then he disapaires and the other girls get their powers back and they bring jenny back home.so what do you thing of the idea.oh and can jenny have a pet female black and white dog name daisy after my dead dog.

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 29, 2007, 7:31:51 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder*flames come out of mouth between words* WHERE'S THE NEW CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????


*sweet innocent smile appears on face* Sorry^^'' I think im Bi Polar....dont ask...

sailoraqua13 on November 27, 2007, 8:36:26 AM

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sailoraqua13Hey, I have a question:
IS this like the last chappie or are u going to continue the story line cause I need somethin new to read and your stories r really cool to read! Oh, and the way my character and the other 2 with me were acting: Did I read a hint of how sailors Uranus and Neptune acted about the whole "Pure heart crystal" thing?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 27, 2007, 10:13:55 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNo, There will not be a new story! I will consult the Assistant Writer, if she says no, then you can bet it's a thumbs down. Lol and Like I would have enough room to make a new story with the Name "The Quest of The Silver Crystal- 2" LOL! LONG TITLE!!!

And to Answer your Other Question... YES you did! But they all have 3 different Personalities!

Crimson Sun- Forced to play the Mother role in the group, She has to keep everything in order, but is still so Sweet and funny and full of life
Polaris- Can Be a Cry Baby but she has a Big Heart and has trouble hurting even the smallest Animal. But She Does have a Bad Side that Comes out when Fighting with Ursa
Ursa- Very Confident, FUNNY! Sarcastic... Can be Shy in Public...

All 3 make a Great team despite Their Fate... Yes there is a Hint and a Dash of Uranus and Neptune! But still a Bucket of... Sugar, 3 BIG HEARTS, and 3 Sweet Girls!

sailoraqua13 on November 27, 2007, 10:57:16 AM

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sailoraqua13heehee, that sounds like Polaris completly! And I hope the assistanr writer gives the ok cause I wanna know wat happens next!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 27, 2007, 11:12:57 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskO.O Why wouldn't you Know?!? I'm still adding to it! it's not over! Why wouldn't you KNOW!!! lol seriously! why?!? Aren't you gona keep reading?!?

sailoraqua13 on November 27, 2007, 10:34:20 PM

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sailoraqua13Heehee, of course I am! I'm just on a LOT of sugar and candy and when that happens I like to ask stuff like that to see their reactions! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 27, 2007, 11:18:56 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI'm still continueing the story line, I'm just not Making a new Story to put it in probably... All the Chapters will be here, The new chappy is taking a while *My sister is having to do shows! so I have to go to those! AND keep up my grades!* Tomorow I wil probly add a chappy, Unless we decide to move the Story to a new page, WHICH WON'T HAPPEN UNLESS The Assistant Writer says, Yes...

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 25, 2007, 7:17:59 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101omgO_O that's all i got is"omgO_O"

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 24, 2007, 12:31:10 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101i'll be looking foward to the updates^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 24, 2007, 5:53:22 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYEAH! did you finish reading that last chappy? =D

AlleyCat17 on November 23, 2007, 11:08:59 AM

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AlleyCat17great chapter.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 11:12:56 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks and sorry about your dog!

AlleyCat17 on November 23, 2007, 11:10:30 AM

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AlleyCat17i'll be waiting for the updates.

sailoraqua13 on November 23, 2007, 10:56:17 AM

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sailoraqua13Ok, I shall search for the updates! *has hunting gear* Heehee

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 10:59:11 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol! you do that and take the rest of the fans with you!

sailoraqua13 on November 23, 2007, 12:50:21 PM

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sailoraqua13Ok, COME ON FANS! *Crowds of fans come*
Now, ONTO OUR SEARCH FOR THE UPDATES! *leads them off in a random direction with Aqua fallowing uncertiantly.
Aqua: This is bound to be trouble

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 23, 2007, 10:43:34 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderi feel insulted..-_- WELL AT LEAST I DID SOMETHING 2 MAKE THE WORLD HAPPY!!!! But thanks 4 tellin the others 4 me^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 22, 2007, 11:40:02 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderTELL UR CUZ 2 LET U FINISH OR HE OR SHE WILL BE ON MY LIST LIKE RINI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great chappy though!^^ Now go finish the movie premiere! U'll love the end but I need to edit it i think...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 9:58:02 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwell read it again cuz it's finished! lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 8:08:34 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks and I'll try to finish the chappy tonight if Not then I'll try tomorrow! Lol cuz I'm kind of tired and I might not be able to finish the chappy tonight, but still hope!

and I'll try to finish it Right after I finish this chapter *When ever that might be*

sailoraqua13 on November 22, 2007, 11:12:07 AM

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sailoraqua13Oh bad that your cuz had to stop your typing but: I'M AWSOME!!!!!!!! KEEP FREAKIN GOING ONCE U CAN IT'S TO GOOD TO STOP HERE!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 9:57:38 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwell read it again cuz it's finished! lol

sailoraqua13 on November 23, 2007, 10:20:55 AM

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sailoraqua13OH! OK! I'll WAIT PATIENTLY FOR THE NEXT UPDATE WETHER IT BE ON THIS 1 OR A NEW 1 CAUSE I HOPE THERE'S A SEQUEL!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 10:38:08 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwhat?!? you've confused me? The rest of the chappy is in that chappy =D

Sequel to what? You've confused me lol

sailoraqua13 on November 23, 2007, 10:52:46 AM

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sailoraqua13SRRY! I am running on sugar energy so I got myself confused!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 10:55:03 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol it happens to all of us *Sigh* lol read the new "Update" Chappy, it says important things

sailoraqua13 on November 23, 2007, 10:57:10 AM

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sailoraqua13I just did!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 8:07:01 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks and I'll try to finish the chappy tonight if Not then I'll try tomorrow! Lol cuz I'm kind of tired and I might not be able to finish the chappy tonight, but still hope!

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 23, 2007, 12:24:05 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101i'm with FallOutGirlAARHinder on this one awsome chappter^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 9:57:05 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwell read it again cuz it's finished! lol

AlleyCat17 on November 23, 2007, 9:07:25 AM

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AlleyCat17yeah awesome chapter.and sorry i did not comment on it sooner but my dog die yesterday nov,22.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 23, 2007, 9:56:33 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwell read it again cuz it's finished! lol

sailoraqua13 on November 18, 2007, 11:44:28 AM

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sailoraqua13Write more chappies I wanna see wat Hazel does to Rini! And wat chappie will the new scouts come in?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 22, 2007, 6:39:44 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask-.- Why are you people so impatient? they will be in here ASAP probly in the next episdoe , at the first attack by the new enemies... lol

sailoraqua13 on November 22, 2007, 6:43:59 AM

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sailoraqua13Yea! I am impatient bcause I am!

sailoraqua13 on November 20, 2007, 3:12:04 PM

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sailoraqua13I have a question: HOW ON EARTH DID U GET PICCIES IN YOUR CHAPTERS?!?!? I WANNA TRY THAT IDEA ON MY HP STORY SO PEOPLE WILL KNOW AT I'M FREAKIN' TRYING TO EXPLAIN MOST OF THE TIME! Oh, and 1 more thing: WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 22, 2007, 6:36:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyour just now noticing I have Piccies in my chappies?!? lol well anyways, I use Photobucket and I will add a Chappy ASAP

sailoraqua13 on November 22, 2007, 6:43:28 AM

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sailoraqua13Thanks for telling me that and FINALLY!

Kouni46892742 on November 21, 2007, 7:26:20 AM

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Kouni46892742Can I change Kyuna's personallity though? Can I make her more of the shy and quiet type instead of bouncy and loud?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 22, 2007, 6:33:43 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskIll try

Kouni46892742 on November 18, 2007, 8:42:57 PM

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Kouni46892742When do the new scouts come in?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 21, 2007, 7:17:56 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNEXT CHAPPY =D

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 20, 2007, 5:16:16 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101O_Oawsome^^

AlleyCat17 on November 19, 2007, 6:20:37 AM

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AlleyCat17wow awesome story and poor hazel im sure she and leo will get together on day and i wounder who the new bad guys are looking for.anyways i hope you update again soon.

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 18, 2007, 11:29:21 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderDUDE A MOTORCYCLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

right now i just wanna kill Rini...*evil laugh* RINI WILL DIE TONIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but im making that story about Hazel and Leo. and the others r in it but DK and Nikku r 2gether in this 1

but its like dream with what everyones fav couple looks like!!!

ill give u a hint where they r...just not a detailed hint...'Ball'

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 18, 2007, 11:34:44 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL! CAN'T WAIT! THANKS!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 18, 2007, 11:51:23 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderhey i gotta go

but the movie premiere may be up 2morrow or the next. Hopefully before Thanksgiving break. Though its short...-_-

Night night and bu bi Leo!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 18, 2007, 11:37:13 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindertrust me its gonna be extremely hot...

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 18, 2007, 6:45:09 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderhwy i gotta go 2 church soon so add a chappy and when i get back ill read it then comment then take a shower then get on


but if u think u can get it done soon then i can read it before church

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 18, 2007, 4:51:23 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101awsome new chapter^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 17, 2007, 10:39:24 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderDUDE DO WE HAVE ANY FIRE SENSHI IN THIS SEASON!!!!!!!!!!!we need a fire senshi

and if u dont have any u can use Deity and CSS(Crimson Sun Star with permission from her owner) if u want

but Deity doesnt really have a personality yet but im gonna make it serious and mature though bad grades

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 18, 2007, 4:43:39 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskUm, Yeah We have 1 =D

Sailor Crimson Sun Signed up =D

So Yeah we won't be using Diety. The 3 new scouts will be a Team all of there Own! So We Are not in need of Any new Scouts lol *I'd have to re-write the Whole Plot XD* how funny! Well i HOPE to be writing a New chappy tonight *If all goes as planned, which often it doesn't*

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 17, 2007, 10:37:38 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderdude is my sis Hotaru and other mom Setsuna-mama coming in this also?

yeah the outers r my family...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 18, 2007, 4:37:31 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskumm They are not your BIOLOGICAL FAMILY in this, but they are close friends =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 17, 2007, 10:30:07 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderT_T Rini....

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!HARUKA-PAPA AND MICHIRU-MAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I GET 2 C THEM AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


oh just 2 let u know Omara isnt spelled like that its either spelled Amora or Haruka

and Mitchel is Michelle or Michiru

but i cant wait 2 find the knew enemy!!!there r so many emo's in me right now!!!!Happiness, love, hate, depression!!! i have 2 follow the yellow brick road 2 get out of this 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 18, 2007, 4:35:58 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL yeah! Oh I knew that, About Omara and Mitchel =D I just like the english Names better XD

AlleyCat17 on November 17, 2007, 10:17:25 AM

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AlleyCat17wow that was a great chapter and i can't wait for the next chapter.

sailoraqua13 on November 17, 2007, 9:56:54 AM

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sailoraqua13Oh my freakin gosh thats awsome write more more MORES!!I wana see my character come in I'm filled to brimming with exicitment!!!

sailoraqua13 on November 15, 2007, 9:16:13 AM

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sailoraqua13WHEN IS THE SECOND STORY STARTING?!?!?!?!I WANT TO KNOW WAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 15, 2007, 10:19:42 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskIt already Started but unfortunately the Site Went all "error" on me and the chapter that I spent an hour of my life on *Tear* IS GONE FOR EVER! lol so yeah I plan to update BIG TIME this weekend!!! so, don't panic, I have not for gotten about Y'all! SO I'M SORRY *Even though it's the Sites Fault*

THANKS FOR BEING PATIENT!

sailoraqua13 on November 15, 2007, 10:22:43 AM

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sailoraqua13good, the waiting is driving me nuts here!Speaking of which, does Aqua come in first or do some more new scouts come in before her?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 15, 2007, 10:28:26 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThey All come in together as a Team. they are one little group =D

sailoraqua13 on November 15, 2007, 11:18:07 AM

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sailoraqua13yea!!!

Moon_Princess on November 11, 2007, 8:01:54 AM

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Moon_PrincessWhoooaaaaahhh! That was AWESOME!! X3 YAY!
I loved it!!! ^-^ Thanks!!


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 13, 2007, 7:54:28 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNP, I just thought your character needed more attention

AlleyCat17 on November 11, 2007, 6:16:42 AM

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AlleyCat17that was awesome and i so love this moive chapter and i can't wait for the seaond season to start.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 11, 2007, 5:51:06 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHEY! Tomorow or tuesday I will be writing the First chappy to the 2nd Season =D

Well Night, I might be back on... Doubt it though lol

NIGHT SCOUTS! SEE YOU IN THE MORN!

AlleyCat17 on November 11, 2007, 5:44:05 AM

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AlleyCat17ok here is a better profile on jenny/nova.because the first one was all over the place.

Name : Jenny Hikari

Gender : Female

Sexuallity : She likes boys (aka Jaden the most)

Sailor Scout Name : Sailor Nova

Element/Power : A Supernova

Planet *if You have one* : She just lives on earth but in the future she lives on a planet(you can name it if you want) which only can be found in a Supernova.

Transformation Name : Nova Planet Crisis Power!!!

Transformation Decription : She is just floating in space and the then a bright yellow 8 sided star flys all around her and then it stops right in front of her chest.then a super nova come out of it and while it all around her.and then she just has her outfit on her.

Name of Attacks (2) : Nova... Dworf Star!!! *She Held up Her Hand up and Creative A Ball that looked like a Mini Planet. She Threw the Planet as it ripped threw the ground and thru the crystals* COMBUST!!!,

Nova Bow - well she holds up her left arm like she is holding a bow then a dark blue bow apairs with a yellow 8 sided star on both sides of the top and bottom of the bow(hope you know what i mean) then she pulls back the string with her right hand/arm and a purple and dark blue glowing engey type arrow apairs and the then she calls out "NovaBow" and shoots it,

Super Nove Blast - She holds up her hands up above her head and a Minny Super Nova Apaires the size of a bastketball flots above her hands.then she throws it at the bad guy and it explose in to a big blast.(she only uses it on really strong bad guys).

Nova Wave -is a dark purple,dark blue blade like wave that comes from right hand when waves it.

Sailor Scout Outfit : pretty much the same as the real sailor scouts but the skirt is dark blue and her bow on the back is a little longer and dark purple, the bow on the chest is dark purple.she also has the same shoe's as sailor Venus but they have a little yellow star on both straps of her shoe's which the shoe's are dark blue and her skirt is dark purple.and her choker on her neck is dark blue with a small yellow star in the middle and she has small yellow star earrings.and in the middle of the bow on her chest is a yellow 8 sided star broach with a chapbile "N" in the middle of it.the broach did come form the bright yellow 8 sided star from earlier.which trun into that broach with that "N"in the middle.

Hair Style and Color : Dark brown and in a long brade that go's all the ways down her back just above her waist.

Eye color : Blue.

Skin color : Peach.

Personality : starm,nice,kind,friendly,hate bad guys,and loves to kick but,strong,loves to make new friends,she loves to draw/paint alot of things which she is really good at and loves to sing,and loves animals like cat's,dog's etc,she is good at school usely gets A's or B's and some time's A plus,loves waching movie's (not horrir movie's she hates them),and she loves to read a good novle when she has time to read and she has a really bad tempter when piss off(manily bad guys).

Age : 15

Other Info : Dream(s) - to become a famiest singer.
Fear(s) - spiders,lightning/thunder,horror/scary movies.
Sign - 8 sided yellow star.
Birth Stone - Citrine
Birthday - November 6
Ideal plant/fav flower - blue lilys
Fav Color - yellow,light blue,light green,light organ,light pruple.
Fav Food - pizza(pepperoni pizza),strawberry ice cream.
Least Fav Food - liver,and other gross meat like that.
Ideal Animal/fav animal - white tiger.
Ideal Myth Creature/fav myth creature - Griffin.

Jenny lives in apartment by her self.her parntes live some where else.
jaden he can also be from the futuer and he can be like a prince like leo and have power too.and he can back to the past to protect nova because they were both boyfriend and girlfriend.that is way he is so attach to jenny/nova and the same for her.but he don't find out jenny is nova until later.and he don't know he has powers yet until later after he fell in love with her.and he get's very protected of her and also they both find out they were together in the futuer.you know something like that and you can make up what he is a prince of.

wow that was a really long profile.

AlleyCat17 on November 11, 2007, 3:14:24 AM

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AlleyCat17wow this is a awesome last chapter and i can't wait for season 2.

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 10, 2007, 10:11:23 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHOT HOT HOT I TELL U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE KISSIN SCENES BUT PLEASE QUIT LETTING PPL INTERRUPT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 11, 2007, 12:32:23 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYes many, lol but in the next season more than half will be between Rini and Leo

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 10, 2007, 10:05:22 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderplease tell me that wasnt the real kissing part of Leo and Hazel...


but the movie was...HOT

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 10, 2007, 11:49:49 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNo, that was just an extra bit for the movie =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 10, 2007, 10:01:50 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderO.o HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I CANT EVEN FEEL THE COLDNESS FROM THE SNOW AND THE LAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ITS FAR FROM ANY KIND OF HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



that was real real hot! My feet are burning up LITERALLY!!!!!!!!!!!and the rest of my body!!!!I cant find any other word besides HOT for this!!!!Its indescribable!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 10, 2007, 11:49:07 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol really? I couldn't resist putting a dash of "Hot" in there

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 10, 2007, 12:06:17 PM

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Symphoniaprincess101O_OAWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^

sailoraqua13 on November 10, 2007, 10:01:12 AM

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sailoraqua13HOW SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOW ONTO STORY 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 12:18:52 PM

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sailoraqua13um, just a question:WHEN IS THE 2ND STORY STARTING?!?!?I CAN"T STAND WAITING AND I WANNA KNOW WAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 8, 2007, 10:56:48 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskUmmm... I'd Say MAYBE monday or Sunday =D
Depending on when the Movie event comes out! it'll take me only like 4 hours to make it!

Note to Sailor Celestial- Remember how I told I I have something majorly planned for your character... well here it is!!! you're gona love it!

sailoraqua13 on November 9, 2007, 5:35:36 AM

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sailoraqua13YEAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mew54 on November 5, 2007, 6:28:16 AM

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mew54but i asked to be a water scout.can iplease tux*dog eyes*please

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 8, 2007, 10:47:21 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNO!!! lol no more water Ice or wind! I'm sorry but no. And I can not accept your info... READ THE RULES!!! U didn't copy and paste, So I have no idea what you are saying! look at how all the other girls id theres... oh and just to tell you, your kind of late for sign ups... It said on the thing only 3 will be accepted, or maybe a group of 5 but... Unless you can find a fih person you can't be in it... *God if you find you more people I might not have the strength to give them ALL the nessasary attenion...*

mew54 on November 1, 2007, 10:18:54 AM

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mew54howd bout her name is lalia and when she turns into a sailor scout her name is sailor sun!

mew54 on November 5, 2007, 6:34:14 AM

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mew54you didnt have the chapter on then and i didnt know!!!i dont know her name and besides im doing this cause your my friend and i want to represent your story!!!!!so i didnt know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i dont want to be in it and i dont have a name for her so i guess i cant be in it!!!!!!!!!!so bye!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 1, 2007, 10:46:48 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNO!!! lol NO SAILOR SUNS!!! if you would have read the story you would have read that Tuxedo Mini Mask IS the prince of the Sun -.-

AND I AM NOT TAKING SCOUTS UNTIL LATER THIS WEEK! lol sorry, wait a while lol

mew54 on November 5, 2007, 6:28:35 AM

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mew54water and leaf!rank!i dont know.apperance!hmmmmmmm!tidal wave.gender:femaleall cinds cant name emm.eyes dark blue skin tan.funny.good around guys.BUEATIFUL!duh!F

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 10:43:31 AM

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sailoraqua13Name:Aqua Kurosaki

Gender:Female

Sexuallity:She likes boys

Sailor Scout Name:Sailor Polaris

Element/Power:Ice

Planet *if You have one*:Does the South Pole count?

Transformation Name:Aquarius Prism Power!

Transformation Decription:She taps the center of her silver heart-shaped brooch and throws it into the air. She starts hovering under it and a crystal of ice surrounds her then shattters to form her bodice, crystals of ice surrounds her arms and legs and forms her gloves and boots, ice crystals shoot at the back of her head and shatter on contact forming the ribbon in her hair, little ice crystals float to her ears and form her crystal eight-pointed star shaped earrings, then her brooch coneccts itself to her chest and her ribbon and collar appears. She opens her eyes, smiles, and makes a pose.

Name of Attacks (2):Polaris Freezing Lady Kiss! She kisses 2 of her fingers and shoots a ice heart at the enemy.
Polaris Cosmic Star Smash!She holds her hands out to her sides, pulls them up above her and 2 shooting stars start hurrdling toward her, then she swings her arms in fromt of her and sends the shooting stars at the enemy.

Sailor Scout Outfit:Pink gloves with blue edging, pink bodice, blue skirt, ribbon, and collar, pink ribbon and boots.

Hair Style and Color:Ice blue in Sailor V's style except with a pink ribbon.

Eye color:Ice blue

Skin color:Same as Sailor Moon's!

Personality:Very Happy-go-lucky. She's extremely hyper often times but usually only when she's had Strawberry Pocky, her favorite treat. Other than that she's a very caring and understanding person and that's why all the scouts always go to her when they need comforting or advice! She's also best friends with Sailors Moon and Venus!

Other Info: Her favorite thing to wear is a pair of blue jeans with flowers and butterflys bordering up the left leg and a bright pink shirt with brown boots. Her favorite music is hip-hop.Her hobbies are singing, drawing, and writing stories. Her favorite song is children of the night. Her favorite food is Baked Chicken and STRAWBERRY POCKY! Her favorite items are her pink mp3, her music box that plays children of the night when you open it, a locket wiith a picture of her, sailor jupiter, and sailor mars in it, and a stuffed ice blue tiger with a pink ribbon around it's neck givin to her by her boyfriend Damian Toshi (Her future husband!). Her favorite colors are:Ice blue and pink obviously! And her favorite saying is, "Sometimes the best thing to do is to do nothing at all!"

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 11:02:54 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol I love it! Welcome to the Team! *But just to let you know I will be adding more attacks* Especialy the transofmration! it was very original! WELCOME TO THE TEAM SAILOR POLARIS!!!! =D

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 11:56:28 AM

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sailoraqua13THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aqua:YEAS!!I MADE IT IN! II MADE IT IN!

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 10:46:40 AM

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sailoraqua13And u don't have to mention Damian if u don't want to, I just figured u would want to know how she got it. She's also Sailor Moon's cousin if that's alright!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 11:05:25 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHow about Serena's Nease *From the Brother Known As "Sam" in the series* =D

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 11:57:32 AM

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sailoraqua13That's fine to!I love it!LOL the daughter of Serena's hated brother it's perfect!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 8, 2007, 10:48:44 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskcool I thought you would like it =D

Moon_Princess on November 4, 2007, 7:51:41 AM

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Moon_PrincessYay! Jenny doesn't have to move away! X3 *dances* Off to the next chappie! :D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 9:01:25 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks =D

Moon_Princess on November 4, 2007, 7:45:42 AM

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Moon_PrincessYay! Another awesome chappie! ^.^
Although I've always wondered...Who IS Sailor C? o_o;?


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 8:48:27 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskSailor Crescent Moon =D lol

Kouni46892742 on November 4, 2007, 3:45:53 AM

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Kouni46892742Name: Kyuna Mikawa

Gender: Female

Sexuallity: Unsure

Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Ursa

Element/Power: Nature and healing

Planet *if You have one*: Pluto

Transformation Name: Ursa power! Time to shine!!

Transformation Decription: Um...I really dunno...can you help me with this?

Name of Attacks (2): Ursa arrow and Cosmic fire

Sailor Scout Outfit:Gloves are white with teal borders,boots are white with teal borders and have little bear paws on the borders,bows are white,skirt is teal.

Hair Style and Color: Tawny brown with blue streaks

Eye color: Emerald green

Skin color: Slightly tanned

Personality: Happy go lucky and fun

Other Info: Loves animals and sings when people aren't around

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 8:43:31 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol what does ursa meen? lol and Sure I'll help with the transformation, I usually end up changing most of it anyway lol

Kouni46892742 on November 4, 2007, 8:56:15 AM

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Kouni46892742Ursa is bear in greek/roman/latin whatever, and it's a constellation of a bear. The north star makes up it's nose.
 
But I can't think of a transformation thingy, so if you wanna be creative with it, be my guest

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 9:04:55 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOhh cool =D I love it!!! I have the PERFECT transformation for you! wana here it ? lol

Kouni46892742 on November 4, 2007, 9:07:42 AM

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Kouni46892742Okies!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 9:47:39 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol okay here it is...

Kyuna: Ursa Star Power!!!

She Held up her wand and she started to Glow! She Twisted the Wand all Around her, As a Trail Of Blue Sparkles Followed it...As She Continued spinning, She Rapped herself in a coocoon, The Sparkels above the coocoon FLASHED and we see what looks like the mouth of a bear swallowing her, The Image of the Bear BITS DOWN the second she opened her eyes. She Was released from the coocoon with her Sailor Uniform on.

I'll add the detail later... Sorry it took so long... I was watching american idel and herbi at the same time lol

Kouni46892742 on November 4, 2007, 9:53:54 AM

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Kouni46892742Awesome!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 10:05:11 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol COOL! then we're all set, Welcome to the team =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 4, 2007, 3:20:12 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 8:26:53 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHAZEL IS STAYING STRAIGHT! lol don't even, EW! I only puit that for the new people, everyone doesn't have to redo theres... -.- look was you did lol

Moon_Princess on November 4, 2007, 7:47:32 AM

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Moon_PrincessAHHH! JENNY! DON'T GO TO ALASKAAA! >.<;

Lol Great chappie! ^.^


~Moon_Princess

Moon_Princess on November 4, 2007, 7:43:59 AM

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Moon_PrincessLol, Yay! I finally finished it! ^.^

That was awesome! :3
Awesome job! I'm going to read the next. XD


~Moon_Princess

Moon_Princess on November 4, 2007, 7:41:50 AM

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Moon_PrincessAck. I need to catch up with the chapters. >.<;

I guess this is just an update. lol

Name: Cat Tsuru

Gender: female

Sexuallity: Straight

Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Celestial

Element/Power: U know it

Planet *if You have one*: All the moons (You came up with that idea. XD)

Transformation Name: U know it

Transformation Decription: U know it

Name of Attacks (2): U know it

Sailor Scout Outfit: U know it

Hair Style and Color: U know it

Eye color: U know it

Skin color: Pale

Personality: U know it

Other Info: Sings, horrible cook, you know the rest. lol

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 4, 2007, 1:14:41 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101here is mine:
Name:Kimu Uchiha

Gender:Female

Sexuallity:I can't belive you put that><gross><

Sailor Scout Name:Sailor Platinum Comet

Element/Power:fire,earth,ice,healing powers

Planet *if You have one*:Comets

Transformation Name:Platinamu Comet Power!!!Make Up!!!!!

Transformation Decription:She holds her hands up and starts glowing.She is standing in space when comets are all of a sudden shooting near her.One hits her on the arms and her gloves apper.Another hits her legs and her boots apper.Two hit her stomach and chest and her skirt and bodysuit apper.her bows apper when the bodysuit and skirt apper.the bow on her chest has a comet shaped satphier jem on it.She stops glowing as one last comet hits her forehead and her tiara appers with a comet shaped satphier jem in the middle.She turns and poses.

Name of Attacks (2):Star Shooter and Comet Explosion.

Sailor Scout Outfit:Gloves are silver with blue borders,boots are silver with blue borders and have little comets on the borders,bows are silver,skirt is silver.

Hair Style and Color:hair is so long it gets behind her knees and is loose no pony tail or anything and the color is black and magenta.

Eye color:black and emerald

Skin color:tan

Personality:tomboyish,loves to help out,gets ticked of easyly,acts a bit like a show off sometimes.

Other Info:plays violin,sings,draws,is known all over japan for her voice,violin skill,or artistic drawings.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 1:34:34 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOKAY!!!

Now it's time to critque *Don't feel sad I do it to everyone*

Sailor Platinum Comet? lol thats really hard to say and spell! And She controlls all elements and can Heal?!? She really is super... So super she could butcher all the ther sailor scouts COMBIND! lol And whats her Sexuality?!? I was serious... Lol, Straight gay or Bi?!? Okay here are my suggestions, I promise I will comprimize if you really want it like this but, I'd rather you change the name and Powers... I had a list of Names and as for powers, We Have several not being used...

Desert
Fire
Lightning
Ground
And much much more!

lol sorry. I just HAVE to give critques to everyone.

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 4, 2007, 6:29:09 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101i desided to change from "Crinsom Sun Star" To "Platinum Comet" for your story ok if that's not posible i'll stay as "Crinsom Sun Star".

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 10:08:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYAY!!! welcome to the team Sailor Crimson Sun!!!

oh yeah, did I mention you would have to be my *Half* sister? oh well! lol Welcome!!!

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 5, 2007, 1:09:51 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101that's fine with me^^you can put me either "Crinsom Sun" or "neon sun"but my transformation is different.Transformation Decription:She holds her hands up and starts glowing.She is standing in space when mini suns are all of a sudden explodeing near her.One explodes near her on the arms and her gloves apper.Another explodes near her legs and her boots apper.Two explode near her stomach and chest and her skirt and bodysuit apper.her bows apper when the bodysuit and skirt apper.the bow on her chest has a sun shaped satphier jem on it.She stops glowing as one last sun explodes near her forehead and her tiara appers with a sun shaped satphier jem in the middle.She turns and poses.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 8, 2007, 10:52:53 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskCool =D I might alter it a BI, becuz I have something really cool planned for you 3 new scouts =D

AND YAY!!!

WELCOME TO THE TEAM SAILOR CRIMSON SUN!!!

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 9, 2007, 2:57:58 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101ok^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 2:31:08 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOh and Sailor Crimson *I prefer Neon* Sun Was Aproved, but you'd have to be my sister. Sailor Neon Sun Sounds good to me =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 2:26:14 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskA note to everyone entering... we will have to go thru the 3 C's for you to be in it...

Critque
Comprimize
Congratulate

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 2:11:36 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOkay you guys, Sorry for all the critequing but I've gota to ggo, please take what I said into considoration, I'm just loking out for this stories well being =D

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 1:51:02 AM

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sailoraqua13Name:Naoko Tomeo

Gender:Female

Sexuallity:??WAHH?!?!?!

Sailor Scout Name:Sailor Shadow

Element/Power:Ghosts and Shadows and partially darkness

Planet *if You have one*:Saturn and PLanet X (Also known as the unknown planet)

Transformation Name:Shadows Of The Night, Transform Me!

Transformation Decription:She holds out a black orb with a bat on it and throws it into the air. Shadows and bats swirl around her body and create her bodice, ghosts swirl around her arms and legs and form her gloves and boots, 2 bats float to her ears and make her bat-shaped earrings, then her glaive floats out of the air and she grabs it and makes a pose.

Name of Attacks (2):Silence Drain Surround!She swings her glaive around her head and sends a blast of black and silver energies out of her glaive at her enemies.

Ghosts and Shadows of the night, come to my side to defeat my enemies!She pulls her glaive into the air and bats and ghosts start swirling around her and she pushes her glaive forward and sends them all at her enemies at once.

Sailor Scout Outfit:Looks like Sailor Saturns' but it's black and silver and she has bat-shaped wings.

Hair Style and Color:She has black hair down to her knees that she keeps in a braide down her back.

Eye color:Her eyes are purple

Skin color:The same as Saturns'

Personality:She is usually a loner unless she is around the scouts then she's a very happy person.She's a brilliant fighter and she has some of the best confidence there is so if it looks like a battle is hopeless she always gives them the strengh and hope to carry on.

Other Info: Her favorite music is hip-hop, her favorite food is baked chicken, shes a straite A+ student, her favorite color is lavender, and her best friend is Sailor Saturn who is also her little sister and she's 14.

That should cover what you need!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 1:57:34 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskSailor Shadow -.-? Try again... It's to plan...READ THE NAMES I LISTED BELOW! I really want some of those scouts in this story! And dangit I shouldn't have said ghosts. I really would rather not have a Ghostly sailor scout, but if you want it, FINE BUT CHOOSE A DIFFERENT NAME PLEASE! lol it's Almost like Having a "Sailor Leaf" for a scout of nature... TO PLAIN AND EARTHLY! TRy to make it have to do with astronomy and Space lol

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 2:00:25 AM

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sailoraqua13OK then!

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 2:02:21 AM

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sailoraqua13What about:Sailor Constellation?

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 2:03:01 AM

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sailoraqua13If that name is alright then the WAY she summons the ghosts in her attack is by aligning the planets.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 8:46:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOh guess what? If you want, I was going thru in in my mind and I guee it would be cool to have a STRICKLY ICE ELEMENT scout =D if you want Sailor Aquaries.... But it would have to be Sailor Polaries, Why? becuz people would thin it was the Zodic and Aquaries is are to spell XD lol

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 10:19:11 AM

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sailoraqua13Yea!Thank u SO MUCH!I'll go repost her! *Dances off to get ready*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 10:32:28 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks =D lol

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 10:48:34 AM

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sailoraqua13Yous welcome! :3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 2:33:44 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskoh and it's not just you new ones... I did it to everyone else too... Check the bottum paige =D

Well GTG bye remember that =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 2:09:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHow about Sailor Milky Way? I've been wanting one of those sence the Begening =D. And Her Attacks could be like "Star Avalanche" or something like that =D

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 2:12:53 AM

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sailoraqua13OK that's perfect!Do what u think is best for her!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 2:29:10 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol no, not uness you want it. Remember the 3 C's, I WILL COMPRIMIZE WITH YOU =D lol

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 2:37:47 AM

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sailoraqua13I'm fine with it!Do what u think is best after all it's YOUR story!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 2:04:23 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskcool =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 1:59:31 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskSexuallity... What is it? does your character like boys or girls or Both... =D

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 1:59:52 AM

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sailoraqua13Ok, she likes guys!

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2007, 2:21:49 PM

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sailoraqua13Ok, here's the info:
Name:Aqua Kurosaki

age:14

Hair color:Ice blue

Eye color:Ice blue

Hair style:Like Sailor V's but with an orange ribbon.

Scout Name:Sailor Aquarius (Also South Pole Star,NOT zodiac!)

Tranformation phrase:South POle Crystal,transform me!

Tranformation sequence:She taps the center of her silver heart-shaped brooch and tosses it into the air and hovers under it. A pillar of ice forms around her and shatters to make her bodice appear,snow flys around her arms and forms her gloves,snow swirls around her legs and forms her boots,an ice shard falls on the back of her head and bursts to form her ribbon, her brooch then floats to the center of her chest and attaches itself and the ribbon weaves out of it and the collar appears.Then, she makes a pose.

Scout Fuku:Pink bodice,blue skirt,pink boots,blue gloves with pink tips,belt and ribbon are orange.

Attacks:Venus Moon Cosmic Ice Clash!Ice swirls around her and she sends 1000 ice shardds out of her hands.

Aquarius Freezing Lady Kiss!She kisses two fingers then sends a frozen eight-pointed star out at the enemy, her more common attack.

Sexuality:Female of course!

Personality:Very Happy-go-lucky. She's extremly hyper often times but usally only when she's had Strawberry Pocky, her favorite treat. Other than that she's a very caring and understanding person and that's why all the scouts always go to her when they need comforting or advice!She's also best friends with Sailors Moon and Venus!

Favorite activity:Writing stories and drawing pictures.

That's about it. If you need anything else be sure and let me know!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 1:16:08 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskpolaris is another good name for the north star if you insist on that being you name... Aquaries is hard to spell and say for that matter. I like to read my stories aloud when I finish them, to see if they are on the beat with the music =D

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 1:35:55 AM

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sailoraqua13Ok, I'm just going to use my ghost senshi then!She's even more awsome!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 1:38:54 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskcool... lol Oh great another emo scout -.-

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 1:53:41 AM

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sailoraqua13She isn't emo!Just read the description of her and you'll see!!!!!

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2007, 2:27:27 PM

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sailoraqua13OOPS!I MISSED THE COPY AND PASTE PART I AM SO SORRY!PLEASE STILL CONSIDER ECAPPTING IT I REVAMPED MY OC JUST FOR THIS SO DON'T NOT ACCEPT IT JUST FOR MY BAKA MISTAKE! *CRIES SM STYLE HUDDLED IN A CORNER*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 1:04:22 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI might except Ice, but she wouldn't be able to have ANY water attacks. I would Appriciate it though if her Power Wasn't Ice lol. There are so MANY OTHERS not being used! I can name 5 off the top of my head!

Desert
ghost
Ground
fire
Lightning

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 1:32:15 AM

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sailoraqua13Ok, I'll use another of my senshi but, how do I sned it to you?

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 1:33:13 AM

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sailoraqua13Ok, I just saw how to do it, ok!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 1:36:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskCool can't wait =D

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2007, 1:59:00 AM

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sailoraqua13I SENT IT!!!!!!!!!Go read and critiuqe please!
Sailor Shadow:I'm nervous Aqua-san, what if I don't make it in?
Me:Then you'll still have my stories where you were created!
Her:YEAS!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 4, 2007, 1:00:15 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskSorry, Youll have to re do it, I'm having trouble readin it lol... Copy and Paste and Sorry no more Ice/water or wind Scouts Aloud, We already have like five. Sorry lol

JUST copy and paste it and re fill out the info, Or i won't be able to accept it.

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2007, 2:29:07 PM

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sailoraqua13And her gender is female.Typo Gomenasai and she dates boys (Has a cute husband in her future for that matter!)

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2007, 2:25:15 PM

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sailoraqua13Looks like I missed a few things HeHe:
Skin tone:the same skin tone as SM!

Element:Ice and Light

Planet:Does the South Pole count?

And adding to other info:Her fav music is hip-hop, her fav type of book is mystery, and her favorite flower is the Sakura Blossom (Cherry Blossom in case you didn't know)

Now THAT should cover it,hopefully!

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2007, 2:08:18 PM

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sailoraqua13Ok, I'm not going to say I hate Chibiusa-chan but I AM going to say that she's got me really mad right now for ruining the moment!Neway, let's go to your sign-up Aqua!
Aqua:Why?Isn't your story enough?
Me:NO!We need u in as many SM stories as we can!So COME ON!
Aqua:Oh great, I'm doomed.

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:08:09 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderthis may be random but u need a homosexuality person in her girl or boy...it doesnt matter


oh u know my friend witch_13888 aka Evon on here is Bi


i dont care what ppl think but bi ppl need friends to but they have lots of friends...y idk

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:10:07 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol thats What i thought lol We need like a lesbo NO GAY MEN THOUGH!!! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:12:19 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderthen who??

we need to throw a party in it and we get drunk!!!!or somthing bad happens....like someone gets pregnant...but not Rini

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:22:56 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHEy I'm Going to bed, My mom is yelling and my eyes need to rest, I'll try my best to get on tomorow =D

And don't worry the scene will be VERY INTENSE!!! turst me, even the Title will make you sweat! lol well maybe not but it still will be hot, Notice the SX sign beside the title... THEY CREATED THAT JUST FOR THIS CHAPTER!

Ohh and also At the end of Season 3 THERE WILL BE MAJOR MAJOR MAJOR MAJOR HOT HOT HOT SCENE!!! let's just say... it's the making of ChibiChibi!

Lol well Night Niks! =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:24:52 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHindernight Leo....i cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:16:06 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYeah they're will be a Ball, lol but not so old fashion! and SOMEONE'S ALREADY PREGNET!!! *Cough*D...K*Cough* I'll give you a hint... Her Partner's Eyes Kept Glowing Bright Purple for a reason! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:18:38 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderNIKKU WILL BE BACK!!!?!?!????????!!!???NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


DK please be careful make sure hes wearin a glove!!!!!!!!!!!


wait u said shes ALREADY pregnant! DK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ILL KILL U!!!!I wasnt ready to be a God-mother!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:27:31 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol... thats how his race breads when they don't want sexual intercoarse yet... He sends his Stuff into her... FEAR THE PURPLE GLOW!! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:01:55 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHEY WE HAVE A SAILOR SHOOTING STAR ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thats just fyi....i didnt mean to outburst....


im gonna make u mad because i wov 2 tease u so....

Name: Hazel Tenou

Gender: female

Sexuallity: ???wha???

Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Crescent

Element/Power:wind and sea

Planet *if You have one*:Uranus and Neptune

Transformation Name: Crescent Crisis Power!

Transformation Decription: u have it

Name of Attacks (2): u have them

Sailor Scout Outfit: u know it

Hair Style and Color: Black but i died my blond lo lites to purple lo lites

Eye color: Hazel (pearl green when calm, pearl grey when sad, and pearl blue when mad)

Skin color: dark dutch skin tone

Personality: tomboy, loving, friend, u know the rest

Other Info: Plays violin, draws well, dances, sings, just talented


sorry i had to make u mad^^''' besides the hair thing needed to be changed...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:03:59 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol okay -.- POINTLESS! lol and Yeah but she hasn't joined this story so the name is up for grabs lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:05:05 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderyeah she hasnt been on since before my B-day this year...

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 12:17:22 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderT_T its finally over...this season...with a new one to come^^!!!...but Rini....she ruined the moment..........I HATE U RINI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Now i have to go a season with her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..................O.o its gonna be a long season...T_T Rini u suck.....*eyes turn crimson blood red* U CAN RUN BUT U CANT HIDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*rips her head off* NEVER RUIN THE MOMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Its the wrong thing 2 do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 12:23:31 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYAY!!! LOL! yea it would have been perfect if she hadn't ruined it! lol WHAT AM I SAYING?!? I wrote it lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 12:47:13 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderr u gonna save the world or not...u know everyone has been waiting 4 the deep detailed kissing scene of Hazel and Leo that makes them sweat....

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 12:59:17 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskbut I won't be re-writing it just becuz you dispize her lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 12:57:14 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL! I'll save it, I still have to add some lost Episodes lol

AND in about the first 5 chapters there is an intense Kiss Scene lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 12:58:22 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderwhich one is in it *refusing but says it* Rini or :D Hazel!?!?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:01:55 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol he Has several intense scenes with Rini but one VERY intense Scene *that I'm sure will give me chills spiraling thru my spine!* with Hazel lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:04:22 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderTHAT SCENE WHERE HAZEL KISSES LEO AND RUNS OFF CRYING BETTER NOT BE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THERE BETTER BE SOMETHIN BETTER A DETAILED!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:12:49 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol yeah it will!!!

The chappy your Talking about is like chappy 3, Where hazel Runs off...

But the Passionate Scene comes like chappy 5-6...I think I might be sitting in Ice while I right that one lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:14:58 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHindervery funny Leo...very funny...but the world will love it...so thats the best part...

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:03:30 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHindershe'll be jealous that my lips r the best!!!*fire roars behind me as u cowar behind a pebble* *evil laugh* DIE RINI!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:08:37 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskAAAHH!!! RINI RUN!!!

Rini: Get off my man b!tc#

Hazel: Gladly once you get off this planet!

Rini: Maybe I will, once you get Your Own!

Hazel: I know you didn't! *Slapped Rini*

Leo: STOP IT!!! You both scare me...O.o

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:11:02 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHazel- THIS CHICK BARGED IN ON OUR SCENE THE WORLD HAD BEEN WAITING FOR!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rini- SO I FOUND HIM FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!

Leo- STOP IT!!!!!!!!!

*scratched cd part plays then silence*Hazel- *rips Rini's heart out* DIE!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:18:30 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLeo: -.- *Takes heart and puts it back in rini* not good...

lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:21:41 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHazel- Shes already dead!!!*evil laugh* *lush tone* Now ur heart belongs to me...Leo..Lovely....

Leo- *gulps* Who r u and what have u done with Hazel...?

Hazel- *steps on Rini's body* Oh I am Hazel...

Leo-...scary...bloody scary...

Hazel- Ill give u time to mourn 4 her... after al ur been with her 4 how long..?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 1:25:00 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLeo: O.O

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 12:26:18 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderwell edit and make it longer then...U CAN SAVE THE WORLD BY DOING THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!just do that and make it another day when she comes back in the chappy. But use deep detail in the scene so everyone is happy. *sad cat face*pwease.......in the next chappy of whatever i do ill put girl on girl action 4 u

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 12:19:21 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder...........rini sucks.........i hate her................T_T y did she spoil the moment..........? Y!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*now dramatic and crying* y....y....Y did we have to free her...?Y!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?

AlleyCat17 on November 3, 2007, 9:51:19 AM

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AlleyCat17yeah im alive agine along with the others too and this chapter was so awesome i just love it so much.and i can't wait for the last chapter if theres is one.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 9:59:26 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskoh there is! =D and wait, Did you comment on the other chappies, lol, IT CONFUSES ME! lol it makes me think you skipped chappies *Not you individualy just everyone in general* lol

AlleyCat17 on November 3, 2007, 10:09:12 AM

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AlleyCat17oh no i didn't skip any chapters i just didn't want to comment on a chapter when you just added a new chapter so i will comment on that one for the ones i miss.oh and im thinking of making 2 new attacks for nova i got one so far i just need one more it that's ok with you that i add new attacks.anyways i caled thiers one more chapter after this befor the 2nd season.i can't wait for season two.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 10:14:47 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskMe Either =D!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 9:32:30 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I DID IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*dances* One last chappy i think then....THE NEW SEASON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!There is no word that can discribe this chappy...u so put me in a better mood!^^ *dances* right now im considered deadly because of my awesome power of dance!!!!*judes Len, Bruno, and Karian from Dancing With The Stars appear and give me scores which turned out a perfect score of 30!* ya'll will need to take a cold shower by the time im done dancing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 9:38:58 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL!! THANKS!!! ROFL!! yeah it's 1 more chappy till the season's over!!! =D I guess that meens that chappy is the Season Final =D lol

ROFL XD COLD SHOWER!!! lol they were in it before you started! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 9:41:23 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder:D they tried to cool down but they failed because im just dancin like crazy...its better than that day(i think the 6th week on Dancing With The Stars* that was considered the hottest night!!!!*dances even harder* though im not gonna pass out like Marie Osbourn!!!!*dances more*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 9:49:28 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL XD!!!

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2007, 9:08:04 AM

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sailoraqua13AWSOME!Now, to prepare Aqua for her chance to be in the 2nd one *turns to Aqua*
Aqua:Oh Shisnet,AAAHHHH!!!!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 7:22:26 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderTTTTTTTTT_TTTTTTTTTTTTTTT*floods negaverse* i know where u got this chappy from...SAILOR MOON THE FIRST MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



2 tell u the truth ever since i was brought home 2 days after birth i started watching Sailor Moon. So since day 3 ive been watching it!


Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!But sad TTTTTTTTTTT_TTTTTTTTTTTTTTT its to sad for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ELDER NEXES IS GOIN DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i wish Triton wouldnt have 2 leave......along with the others..........TTTTTTTTTTTTTTT_TTTTTTTTTTTT its to much....TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT_TTTTTTTTTTTT Y THEM!?!?!??!?!?! TAKE ME INSTEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


*rocks back in forth* to many burdens...

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2007, 7:03:36 AM

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sailoraqua13NO!!!!!!!!!!!NOT THEM IT CAN"T BE! *Cries over them and all the scouts from when they died*

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2007, 5:16:25 AM

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sailoraqua13Cool!They can't die though I'll b upset if they do!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 4:57:41 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 5:06:20 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskahhh!!! thanks but I'm gona delete that LONG comment, it make me lag! lol

sailoraqua13 on November 2, 2007, 2:00:23 PM

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sailoraqua13COOLNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1ST COMMENT ON THIS CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 3:26:48 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol thanks =D

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2007, 3:41:15 AM

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sailoraqua13Yous Welcome!!!!!!!

AlleyCat17 on November 2, 2007, 11:52:13 PM

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AlleyCat17yeah i love this chapter and omg he just kiss me sweet.i have un idea for jaden he can also be from the futuer and he can be like a prince like leo and have power too.and he can back to the past to protect nova because they were both boyfriend and girlfriend.that is way he is so attach to jenny/nova and the same for her.but he don't find out jenny is nova until later.and he don't know he has powers yet until later after he fell in love with her.and he get's very protected of her and also they both find out they were together in the futuer.you know something like that and you can make up what he is a prince of.but anyways this is just an idea so you don't have to use it if you don't want to use it if you don't to.anyways awesome chapter and i glad im staying and you do know that jenny's dream is to become a famest singer.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 3:25:17 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThats what I was thinking!!! lol you must be inside my mind! and yeah I no she want's to be a Singer too =D, I didn't thro inthere that she wanted to be famous so it would boost her singing carrier... lol

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 3, 2007, 1:11:49 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101yay Jenny stays^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 3:20:43 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTHANKS!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:09:29 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder4 MORE CHAPPYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UNTIL THE NEXT SEASON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1



but Rini will be in it....*disgusted face* i oughta scratch her eyes out then rip out her skull and use it as a dish then rip out her heart and feel the last beat...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 3:19:36 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol I'm actually Splitting 1 chapter into 3 so It will take up more space =D and don't worry it's a REALLY long chapy! lol and then the closing =D... I'lll be adding those 3 today, or maybe just 2... It depends on if you ALL can read it before I add the new one

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 4:38:56 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderI can read it all i have nothin else 2 do 2day anyway!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 3:23:18 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskjustlike I did with this one

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 3, 2007, 1:07:52 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderKOOLIE BEANS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...what was up with that...?


AWESOME CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Cant wait till the next and then...1 sec i need 2 c how many chappys until *holds excitment...* THE NEXT SEASON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 3, 2007, 3:13:09 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTHANKS!!! =D

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 3, 2007, 12:57:30 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101oh boy...awsome^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on November 3, 2007, 12:53:19 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101awsome and Jenny is a hotheaded person in this chapter.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 2, 2007, 1:36:51 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOKay, 4 More chappies! and 3 will be 1 chapter split... Well See ya, Night time here... NIGHT!!!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 2, 2007, 12:36:18 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY!!!!!! Koolieo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait till the next but im real tired so i want be on...sorry...the thing ma jig wore me out...-_- im very very tired....


Ill take a shower then get on!!!!:D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 2, 2007, 1:20:55 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks =D and I hope you can read the new chappy =D

sailoraqua13 on November 2, 2007, 11:02:51 AM

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sailoraqua13Coolness!

AlleyCat17 on November 1, 2007, 12:52:31 PM

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AlleyCat17yeah i love this chapter alot and you finally wrought about her changing thing that was so cool.OMG I'M GOING TO BE IN A MOVIE AND A MOVIE STAR AWESOME I CAN'T WAIT(star's in eyes) *-* . aww so many people don't want to leave oh well i can't help that its up to you the Arthur.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 2, 2007, 7:54:11 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks I'm glad you liked it... and Don't worry it'll all be fine =D

sailoraqua13 on November 1, 2007, 12:01:52 PM

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sailoraqua13AWSOME!But Jenny can't leave she's a great character! *Cries* when will auditions for book 2 come?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 2, 2007, 7:51:49 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskCan't tell you, but I can tell you I will be excepting 3 people... Unless there is five wanting to be in it, then it'll be five, BUT NO MORE and NO LESS and NO FOUR!!!

oh and thanks =D

sailoraqua13 on November 2, 2007, 8:02:05 AM

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sailoraqua13You welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 1, 2007, 11:53:32 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindero.O JENNY CANT LEAVE!!!!


this chappy seemed short but it was somethin!!!BU BI!!!!!!!!!GREAT CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 2, 2007, 7:50:08 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on November 2, 2007, 7:55:04 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindersorry i want be on till late 2night because my grade in band r gonig to be in the stands with the marchin band 2night. so yeah im performing...^^ add a chappy and ill read it when im home 2night then ill talk 2 u

BU BI!!!!!!!!!!!!!Wish me good luck!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 28, 2007, 5:41:21 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHEY!!! Important Message!!! I Am Sorry I have not Updated Like Planned But I Forgot I had Finals and Projects For School And Not to Mention Just trying to Pass math! I'm Sorry,I Will Add a Chapter today and Tomorrow. I REALLY Want this to Be Done By Halloween... Well Anyways, I Am Sorry For everything. STILL LOOK FOR THOSE CHAPTERS =D

-Happy Halloween *Muahahahaahahahahahahahaha!*

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 27, 2007, 10:05:38 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101awsome^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 24, 2007, 6:48:24 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101sign me up for seson 2 tux^^you already know my caracter but just to refreash your memory(the info i'm giveing you is the same i gave to FallOutGirlAARHinder):

Name- Kimu Uchiha

Sailor Scout- Sailor Crinson Sun Star

Scout Transformation- Just like sailor moon

Personality- Loves to help out,gets ticked off easyliy,can be a bit of a show off

Age- 13 1/2 years old

Parents If They Were Sailor Scout(s)- i can't remember

Planet- Sun

Element- wind,water,fire,earth,darkness,light,and healing powers

Birth Stone- Satphire

B Day- 12/10/93

Flower- tuluip

Sailor Outfit- gold skirt,silver boots with aqua borders,ribbons are crinson red,gloves reach an inch before the shoulders and borders are gold.

Transformation Info- her transformation is just like sailor moon but instead of little moons come out after the ribbons disapper little suns come out.

Job- singer,artist,and writer

Other Info- has 7 sisters 4 brothers,parents died when she was five so her oldest sister and her sister's twin Brother took care of everyone,her boyfriend,Kouji,knows she a sailor scout and he happens to be her helper as Tuxedo Cosmic Mask,her hair is black and magenta and it reaches behind her knees.

Dream- to be the best scout she could be so she can protect all thouse she cares about.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 25, 2007, 9:00:59 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks but thisn't the Info I'll Be needing for the NEw scouts, and I Won't be taking THose YET

0.- =D

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 26, 2007, 12:57:50 PM

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Symphoniaprincess101got ya.

AlleyCat17 on October 24, 2007, 8:51:36 AM

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AlleyCat17OMG i turn in to a cat that is so cute and we are almost all cat so cute.and the two cats turn it to people.anyways i can't wait to see the next chapter i hope it will be up soon.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 25, 2007, 8:58:56 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol =D

sailoraqua13 on October 24, 2007, 11:49:22 PM

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sailoraqua13Siqn me up for book 2 as well! The desxiption is on my profile and her husband from the futures name is Damian and her daughter from the futures' name is Mitsuki and She's Sailor Chibi Aquarius and she looks just like Rini but has blonde hair and blue eyes.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 25, 2007, 8:58:02 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI'm Not taking New scouts YET

sailoraqua13 on October 25, 2007, 12:15:26 PM

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sailoraqua13Man!But I'll b patiant! *sits in front of computor and watches SM to wait*

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 24, 2007, 7:53:35 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendDK: Stupid boy (Nick)

Real Me: Stupid RP (DK)

Moon_Princess on October 23, 2007, 12:27:31 PM

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Moon_PrincessWHOOAAHH! O.O
Everyone turned into cats! *pets them* Awww, so cute! ^.^

I can't wait to read the rest! Update soon, kk? ^^



~Moon_Princess

Moon_Princess on October 23, 2007, 12:25:21 PM

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Moon_PrincessYay! Great chappie!! X3
Lol, *shifts eyes* I'm in disguussseeeee. >:D

Great job! ^^ I'm off to read the next chappie!


~Moon_Princess

sailoraqua13 on October 23, 2007, 11:39:45 AM

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sailoraqua13YEAH!I FINALLY FINISHED IT SO FAR!QRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 23, 2007, 11:02:14 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101that was awsome^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 23, 2007, 10:51:25 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101imma slap the crap out of nick if he dose that again><awsome^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 23, 2007, 10:36:35 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101lol tis chappter craked me up^0^

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 23, 2007, 10:31:10 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101awsome^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 23, 2007, 10:12:26 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101cool^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 23, 2007, 10:28:09 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskthanks =D

sailoraqua13 on October 22, 2007, 12:04:33 PM

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sailoraqua13Cool!I'm coming into the story a little late.I know it's a BIG request considreiing how far you are into the story but,could my oc be in your story?If you decide to let her go to my profile for a description of her.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 23, 2007, 10:11:14 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 1)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskMaybe... We will be having new Sign ups Soon So, If you Keep checking for updates then You'll Know when to sign up BUT I'm Only excepting 2 or 3 felmales and 1 Male for Season 2, SO... I'D BE ON MY TOES LOOKING FOR THAT UPDATE!!! =D lol

sailoraqua13 on October 23, 2007, 10:24:45 AM

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sailoraqua13OK I WILL!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 20, 2007, 11:29:28 AM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: 22)
FallOutGirlAARHinderI WON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


but y did that monster take u AGAIN...?T_T dont leave...TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT_TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

im so sad

y did u leave me again


DK BREAK UP WITH THAT THING CALLED NIKKU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I HATE HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey i am able 2 talk 2 u 2night

but not 2morrow

SO GET TO TALKIN!!

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 23, 2007, 9:40:49 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 22)
SasukesgirlfriendDK: NO!

Real me: -.- I'm staying out of this.

lol sorry for butting in.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 20, 2007, 1:21:12 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 22)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol yes you won lol and he took Him away so he can be Brain washed again and again lol and Thanks... COOL!!! I hope your still on lol

DavisJes on October 21, 2007, 7:51:05 AM

DavisJes on (Chapter: 1)
DavisJesDid not finish reading it yet.
This has an interest plot.
It is hard to concentrate becuase it is written more like a script for a play or movie.
Try writing it more like a story.

Just a suggestion:
"AAHHH!!!!!" said Hazel as she jumped out of bed. She looks at her alarm clock While she’s getting dressed and said "I’M GOING TO BE LATE!!!" She ran down stairs to the Kitchen and grabbed a piece of toast. "BYE MOM!!! BYE DAD!!!" she yelled.

"Wait! Don’t you wana finish your Breakfast?" asked her mom.

"NO TIME NO TIME!!!!! I’m Gona be late for school!!!" yelled Hazel as she began to run toward the door.

"Hazel! Don’t forget your lunch!!!" yelled her mom.

She turns back around grabs the lunch from her mom and as she runs out the door she yells "THANKS MOM!!!"

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 21, 2007, 9:44:56 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 1)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYeah, I thought About that, but sadly I don't Have time for the More detailed version, Because people are asking for Updates like crazy! lol and Yeah Your Right it is hard to Consentrate because How it's written! But yeah, I did plan for it to be written like a script In the beggining ^^

But like I said People want Updates at least once a week and I Have several Stories I am working on and not to mention The Musical I'm forced to write for school before Christmas, OH and I have Highschool *What a drag -.-* I never have time for it unless it's faster and LESS detailed then it can be. I would love to write in full Detail with every story...But I just Can't. But if you want Detail then Check out my Story "Lit: How to Reverse a Starlit Curse" It will be very Detailed, Becuz the only reason I'm WRITING it is because Soon I Will Be DRAWING it as a Manga and I want everything Clear about it ^^!
OHH AND THANKS!!! ^^ your awesome

DavisJes on October 21, 2007, 11:08:23 AM

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DavisJesRushing a story is never a good idea. You should not just put something up becuase people are demanding a new chapter every week. Take time on the chapter you are writing.

I will read this when I get time becuase I am very interested in it.
Also I am writing a Sailor Moon fanfic.
I saw you read the prolouge of my fanfic.

If you are a member of DA you can read it herehttp://davisjes.deviantart.com/journal/12309766/
OR
For everyone else you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3721964/1/Dark_Senshi
Jess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 21, 2007, 11:51:22 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTHANKS!!! I really like your story, Lol it mad me sad to think of Darian and Serena Being Split becuz of that Dark Scout!!! lol I will continue Reading it... And you should Pass out a link to all the fans of this story, becuz I know that they would just love it to =D!!!
And I Agree, Detail show always be used if useable! lol

Well thanks, you've been a great help! and THANKS FOR THE INTREST IN THIS STORY! lol

DavisJes on October 21, 2007, 11:11:09 AM

DavisJes on (Chapter: index)

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 21, 2007, 11:45:21 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYeah -D Thats me =D to bad I recentaly lost my past word lol... and I can't read my E-Mail to read my Password

DavisJes on October 22, 2007, 3:46:08 AM

DavisJes on (Chapter: index)
DavisJesWhy can't you read your email?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 22, 2007, 6:24:36 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol becuz my computer is crap and it will freeze once I open my email lol

DavisJes on October 22, 2007, 1:36:18 PM

DavisJes on (Chapter: index)
DavisJesHave you tried another computer?
Like your parents computer or going to the libaray and using the computer there?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 23, 2007, 10:27:32 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyes lol it's just my area or internet or somethung lol =S

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 20, 2007, 11:51:49 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 5)
Symphoniaprincess101cool^^that was close for the sailors

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 21, 2007, 5:27:59 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 5)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThank you so much!!! especialy for all your comments

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 23, 2007, 10:06:51 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
Symphoniaprincess101Hey your an awsome writer just like your online sister^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 23, 2007, 10:12:05 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTHANKS! =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 20, 2007, 11:38:48 AM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: index)
FallOutGirlAARHinder8 CHAPPIES AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UNTIL THE NEW SEASON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 20, 2007, 1:27:08 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol actually it's more like 4... lol I'm Not going to 30 unless I have to, lol it's just alot of work writing when you know the end lol I origanly planned to go till chappy 26 but I can't think of 4 extra missions lol it would drive me crazy!!! lol then I would have to wait untill I got those missions out... Lol You know you just gave me an idea... lol this way it will end at 30 lol BUT it's not going to be more text I'm Just going to Split it up... lol the chappy before last can be split into 4 new chappys lol

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 20, 2007, 11:36:44 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 4)
Symphoniaprincess101this chapter ROTFLOLLMAO^0^

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 20, 2007, 11:25:26 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 3)
Symphoniaprincess101cool^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 20, 2007, 11:11:38 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 2)
Symphoniaprincess101Lol the end was funny^0^

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 20, 2007, 11:01:23 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 1)
Symphoniaprincess101cool^^

mew54 on October 20, 2007, 5:10:42 AM

mew54 on (Chapter: index)
mew54...fun to hang out with.hair color is dark orange

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 20, 2007, 5:19:55 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol Thank you, but we still have a few more chapters Before we except Aplications for New scouts =D lol but Don't worry, I say About... Monday or Tuesday befor etake New scouts.

Cooly See ya then!!

Oh And Try to Just Copy and Paste the info on Chapter 0 and fill it out that way or I won't know which info goes where lol... And please try to make your Scout have something to do with Space...

mew54 on October 21, 2007, 10:03:15 AM

mew54 on (Chapter: index)
mew54your evil!

mew54 on October 20, 2007, 5:08:28 AM

mew54 on (Chapter: index)
mew54water and leaf!rank!i dont know.apperance!hmmmmmmm!tidal wave.gender:femaleall cinds cant name emm.eyes dark blue skin tan.funny.good around guys.BUEATIFUL!duh!F

mew54 on October 20, 2007, 5:01:00 AM

mew54 on (Chapter: index)
mew54name before:Lalia

sailor scout:sailor Lalia

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 1:12:58 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: 21)
FallOutGirlAARHinderT_T Leo...i did my best...T_T

2 MANY EMOTIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOW IS ONE OF THOSE TIMES IN A STORY WERE MY OC IS DEPRESSED!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 1:16:12 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 21)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol you think she's depressed now? just wait and see lol!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 1:02:29 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: 20)
FallOutGirlAARHinderO_O T_T o.O


what emotion am i supposed to feel right now..?

U CANT DIE!!!!!!!!!!

U FINALLY REVEAL URSELF!!!!

SO MUCH DRAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

DIE NIKKU!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 1:07:47 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 20)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol Many emotions...

I know, such a said fate... Very Ironic lol

Lol Nikku is very EMO right now... lol just wait till you all find out what he did to DK while he was kissing her O.O

lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 1:09:22 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: index)
FallOutGirlAARHinderNIKKU EVEN THOUGH YA'LL LOVE EACH OTHER I AMK PRINCESS AND I COMMAND YA'LL 2 BREAK UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ITS 4 HER OWN GOOD!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 1:14:45 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol i don't think he's gona listen...trust me, now that-

Hey no more info out of me, NUH UH!!! lol go back to reading! lol

Oh and BTW I drew Sailor Crescent again =D lol you can't really see her low lights or her 2 crescent moons on the tiara lol but still good =D lol

and I also drew A scene from this story, you'll see which one once it's posted =D lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 1:23:05 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: index)
FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY!!!!

right now im finishing checking my mail and reading other chappys that im in so yeah...

I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPPY!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 1:24:18 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNor Can I =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 12:46:28 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: 19)
FallOutGirlAARHinderYEAH U SHOULDN'T EVER EVER TICK ME OFF!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 12:47:47 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 19)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol wouldn't dream of it!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 12:48:40 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: index)
FallOutGirlAARHinderu shouldnt its worse than Pluto's bad side in the morning...very scary 2*glares* dont think of it...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 12:51:06 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol Pluto? never heard of her morning temper... lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 12:52:13 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: index)
FallOutGirlAARHindertrust me its there...

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 12:38:23 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: 18)
FallOutGirlAARHinderCHOCO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SUGAR RUSH!!!!!!!!!!!11

GREAT CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!

and i cant believe ur moving to California

as long as we keep in touch u can move!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 12:40:14 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 18)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks! and lol yeah I just had to give you a sugar rush! lol

and yeah, Don't worry my mom said I can Take my computer so yeah it's all good =D lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 12:41:04 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: index)
FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PC GOES W/ LEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 12:43:06 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_Maskof coarse, I could'nt leave with out it! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 12:43:46 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: index)
FallOutGirlAARHinderi dont think i could live with out it!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 12:44:44 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol me either lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 12:27:07 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: 17)
FallOutGirlAARHinderTO BAD MOONARA AND CAT!!!!!!!!!!


lol great chappy

but there should be more kissy scenes...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 12:32:01 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 17)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol I know there will be 10 times more in season 2 lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 12:12:51 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: 16)
FallOutGirlAARHinderTHE NEGA VERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i got a lot more to read

i cant help but get grounded-_-

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 12:24:27 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 16)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol you were grounded! lol what for this time? lol well read up =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 19, 2007, 12:26:02 PM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: index)
FallOutGirlAARHinderbad grades...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 12:28:22 PM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_Maskohh... lol my mom wouldn't ground me for that... Lol besides with work along with this... School seems hardly worth it and besides I'm moving to californa in a few months lol and colledge is free there so i won't be working and my grades will go up =D

Moon_Princess on October 19, 2007, 7:51:32 AM

Moon_Princess on (Chapter: 21)
Moon_PrincessAwesome chapter!
Poor Leo. x.x

Keep it up, alright??


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 19, 2007, 8:44:06 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 21)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol THANKS!!! and Don't worry I will... Lol But I'm still wondering where FallOutGirlAARHinder *Hazel* is! lol

AlleyCat17 on October 17, 2007, 4:58:52 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 21)
AlleyCat17wow that was a very good chapter and it was a little sad when Leo was taking and now is going to be truns evil.anyways for nova bow - well she holds up her left arm like she is holding a bow then a dark blue bow apairs with a yellow 8 sided star on both sides of the top and bottom of the bow(hope you know what i mean) then she pulls back the string with her right hand/arm and a purple and dark blue glowing engey type arrow apairs and the then she calls out "NovaBow" and shoots it.ok i hope that help alot and if you need more help or info just ask me ok.oh and i can wait for you to add more chapters soon please.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 16, 2007, 8:37:14 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 19)
Tuxedo_Mini_Maskohh and btw if you wana learn more about hazel check out falloutgirlaarhinder's gallery she has tons of storys that relate to this one lol

AlleyCat17 on October 16, 2007, 8:16:29 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 20)
AlleyCat17that was a awesome chapter and funny thing sunshine is my nickname my teacher gave me in school but im not that much of a sunshine i don't even smile a whole lot in school oh well.and i forgot to tell you jenny/nova dose
have a temper when she is pisst off which is once in a while.and i so new that she was the princess.anyways i can't wait for when you add a new chapter.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 16, 2007, 8:21:16 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 20)
Tuxedo_Mini_Maskthanks and yeah thats nice to know lol

AlleyCat17 on October 16, 2007, 8:07:04 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 19)
AlleyCat17kool chapter and i got to more about him.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 16, 2007, 8:09:34 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 19)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol thanks!!!

and if you want to , check out my other story Solor System Outcasts =D lol

AlleyCat17 on October 16, 2007, 8:04:46 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 18)
AlleyCat17wow awesome.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 16, 2007, 8:06:00 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 18)
Tuxedo_Mini_Maskthanks =D lol

Moon_Princess on October 16, 2007, 7:31:33 AM

Moon_Princess on (Chapter: 20)
Moon_PrincessWow! Lol, she's the princess. ^.^ Kewl!

Great job!


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 16, 2007, 7:39:36 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 20)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol!!! Thanks, Kind of obvious wasn't it? lol

And Don't worry you Guys, Hazel isn't gona steal all the attention! lol i'v got Something for each and everyone of you before the season Ends! so don't think that it's just about Hazel, Although Hazel is a very big part, she's not the only star lol...

And right at the end of the season, I will reveal the Lost episodes =D...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 16, 2007, 7:20:31 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 20)
Tuxedo_Mini_Mask6 more episodes! and then season 2 Begins lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 16, 2007, 7:24:34 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 20)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI'm so Happy! lol

Moon_Princess on October 15, 2007, 11:36:11 AM

Moon_Princess on (Chapter: 19)
Moon_PrincessWhoot! Great job!
We learned a lot about Leo! ^^
It was awesome!


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 15, 2007, 11:40:24 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 19)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol thanks! and if you all want to learn More about Leo You can check out my story Solor System Outcast's Most of the Info in that story is accurate just a few little things but for the most part, he's the same person =D lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 14, 2007, 3:00:39 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 13)
Sasukesgirlfriendme: EVERYONE GETS A KID BUT ME!

Rini, Hazel, and you: *smacks head*

LOL

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 15, 2007, 11:06:01 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 13)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol Oh you get a kid alright... Lol a little earlier then everyone else lol scratch that other comment I was thinking of someone else lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 14, 2007, 5:18:15 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 13)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL!!! you get a kid in the VERY END lol right when The Series ends lol

Moon_Princess on October 15, 2007, 7:12:20 AM

Moon_Princess on (Chapter: 18)
Moon_PrincessXD Hazel had a SUGAR RUSH! LOL

Great chappie! ^^


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 15, 2007, 7:46:52 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 18)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol thanks =D

AlleyCat17 on October 15, 2007, 5:50:45 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 17)
AlleyCat17wow that was so awesome and yeah im finily in it and great attack you came up for me and just when i was trying to come up some more.just make sure you uses the other two attacks of hers ok. and yeah i got a cat of my own thank you so much,remember she only thinks tuxedo is good looking but she love's jaden more you know the guy she love in her school who also love's her back.oh and i loved the end of the chapter it was so sweet.anyways i can't wait for you to add a new chapter soon so i can't join the team.until then see you.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 15, 2007, 6:12:37 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 17)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOh Yeah =d of coarse... I'm Making Jaden transfer to your school so then it'll be like a love at first sight thing =D!!!

And Your other attacks will be used, Just not all at once.
For example, Super Nova Blast ins't going to be Used Untill The end of season 1, Because it's kind of a stronger attack... And use only use it when you Have to

Moon_Princess on October 14, 2007, 9:42:04 AM

Moon_Princess on (Chapter: 17)
Moon_PrincessXD Great chapter!

*snickers* That was kinda funny with the Hercules song and all. Lol! XD

Great job! ^^


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 14, 2007, 10:01:55 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 17)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks =D lol I thought it was funny 2 lol

Moon_Princess on October 12, 2007, 2:58:09 PM

Moon_Princess on (Chapter: 16)
Moon_PrincessWhoot! Awesome chapter! x3 Lol

This was great! ^^ Can't wait till the next one. :D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 14, 2007, 5:24:37 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 16)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTHANKS!!!

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 13, 2007, 2:46:33 PM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 13)
SasukesgirlfriendWhat heart wounds? Did DK suffer a heart break?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 14, 2007, 5:15:34 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 13)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYes, Nikku *Lol you end up killing him*

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 13, 2007, 2:39:48 PM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 11)
SasukesgirlfriendWAAAAHHHHHHH?!

I'M MAKING OUT IN AN ALLEY?! I MEAN DK! AT LEAST AT A LAKE OR IN A CONCERT!LOL DK AND I WOULDN'T GO THAT THAT LOW!


You: *snorts* Yay right!

DK and Me: WHAT'S THAT SUPPOSE TO MEAN?!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 14, 2007, 5:14:09 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 11)
Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol Well lol he was showing you the picture on the wall in the alley so its not that trashy but still kind of is lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 13, 2007, 1:05:54 PM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 13)
SasukesgirlfriendWHOS PARIS?! IS IT THE PLACE PARIS!? WHAT?!
I ORDER YOU TO TELL ME!LOL I mean please tell me.


Pai: *has a sign on her* *says: Fashion Freak*
Rose: *has a sign on her* *says: Preppy Smart*
Brook: *has a sign on her* *says: Confused Spazz*
Me: *has a sign too* *says: Stupid yet Innocent* TT^TT

Everyone: It fits you -3-

Me: What are we talking about? .3.

Everyone: Like we said >.>';...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 14, 2007, 5:12:18 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: 13)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskParis the Place =D lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 14, 2007, 12:28:49 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 13)
SasukesgirlfriendI AGREE WITH FALLOUTGIRLAARHINDER! WHO DO YOU LOVE?!
RINI OR HAZEL?!

IS PARIS...NO WAY IT CAN'T...
I don't know really.lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 14, 2007, 12:35:33 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 13)
SasukesgirlfriendMe: NOW I KNOW WHO PARIS IS!

You: Okay, who?

Me: SHE'S MAH NIECE!

You: -.-';

LOL (I'm that dumb!)

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 14, 2007, 5:16:49 AM

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on (Chapter: index)
Tuxedo_Mini_MaskParis the PLacr and I can't tell you who Leo Loves lol

AlleyCat17 on October 9, 2007, 12:14:51 PM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 15)
AlleyCat17wow very great chapter and i have some more info for you --

Transformation Name : nova power or super nova power.

Transformation Description :she is just floating in space and the then a bright yellow 8 sided star flys all around her and then it stops right in front of her chest.then a super nova come out of it and while it all around her.and then she just has her outfit on her.

Sailor Scout Outfit:pretty much the same as the real sailor scouts but the skirt is dark blue and her bow on the back is a little longer and dark purple, the bow on the chest is dark purple.she also has the same shoe's as sailor Venus but they have a little yellow star on both straps of her shoe's which the shoe's are dark blue and her skirt is dark purple.and her choker on her neck is dark blue with a small yellow star in the middle and she has small yellow star earrings.and in the middle of the bow on her chest is a yellow 8 sided star broach with a chapbile "N" in the middle of it.the broach did come form the bright yellow 8 sided star from earlier.which trun into that broach with that "N"in the middle.

Dream(s) - to become a famiest singer.

Fear(s) - spiders,lightning/thunder,horror/scary movies.

Sign - 8 sided yellow star.

Birth Stone - Citrine

Birthday - November 6

Ideal plant/fav flower - blue lilys

Fav Color - yellow,light blue,light green,light organ.

Fav Food - pizza(pepperoni pizza),strawberry ice cream.

Least Fav Food - liver,and other gross meat like that.

Ideal Animal/fav animal - white tiger.

Ideal Myth Creature/fav myth creature - Griffin.

she live on her own in a apartment.and she has a crush is a handsome boy with blond hair and sky blue eyes.who is name jaden who is also crushing on her but she don't know and he don't know she is crushing on him.they even got to the same school and have all of the same classes together.anyways i'll tell you more about him later on.

ok so this is just a bit more info for her and more discreped of some thinks.anyways i hope this help's you more ok. bye i gtg to bed it is oh most 12:00am midnight here where im at .BYE.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 9, 2007, 12:47:51 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskthanks it really helps lol =D

Moon_Princess on October 9, 2007, 11:21:17 AM

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Moon_PrincessAwesome chapter! :D

I must see what happens next! x3


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 9, 2007, 11:27:34 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskthanks, *thinking* I can't wait what I decide to write either lol

Moon_Princess on October 9, 2007, 11:16:36 AM

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Moon_PrincessThese sound interesting! :D

I got a date with Bryan? O.O LOL! XD

I can't wait to see what the 2nd season has in store. ^-^
It kind of sounds like Sailor Moon R.


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 9, 2007, 11:25:25 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks!!! and I know, I tried to make it that way a little bit =D lol but just so EVERYONE knows... This story will not got past Season 3 I might start a series bouncing off this on...

THANK YOU FOR READING UNLIKE SOME PEOPLE!!! lol thanks

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 9, 2007, 10:31:46 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindershower time already...

T_T *crys while almost flooding the earth* I WANNA TYPE MORE SO U CAN C THE SUSPENSE I HOLD!!!!!

Great chappy Leo*winks* ill do my best to go fast in my shower...those stupid thinks...even though relaxing...can drive me nuts when i got things to do


i cant wait till the next though!!!

i have to c what we do to Nikku *cough*Nick*cough*

well BRB

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 9, 2007, 10:35:29 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL XD!!! okay see ya after your shower can't wait! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 9, 2007, 10:49:32 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderIM BACK!!!!!!!!!!!

Moon_Princess on October 9, 2007, 8:33:21 AM

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Moon_Princess...WoW...XD LOL
I was a soda. :3 Yum. XD

Awesome chappie! XD


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 9, 2007, 10:08:49 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskthat would be chappy 13... Lol I worked hard on finding the pictures and editing them lol so please EVERYONE read it, Only 1 person has and I'm becomeing impatient lol *I'm not very patient at all lol*

So please ya'll read it

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 9, 2007, 8:34:15 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskDon't forget about the preview for season 2, lol

AlleyCat17 on October 9, 2007, 10:03:19 AM

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AlleyCat17sweet chapter and funny too.keep up with the great chapters.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 9, 2007, 10:05:20 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThanks... DON'T FORGET TO PLEASE!!! Read chapter 13 or I will bug you guys about it lol...

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 9, 2007, 7:42:32 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderFEAR ME,HAZEL, AKA SAILOR CHOCO!!!!!!!!!!!

I SHALL PUNISH U WITH MY...!!! CHOCO TALK ALOT POWER!!!!



LOL great chappy and it is about time those two work 2gether...their fighting was driving me nuts...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 9, 2007, 7:47:24 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol thanks!!! lol I ate your chocolate bar!!! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 9, 2007, 7:53:50 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderU SUCK!!!


but where'd u come from?

PunkWolfGirl on October 9, 2007, 1:59:24 AM

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PunkWolfGirl>=O NAUGHTY NICK!!!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 10:58:05 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderwell here it is...my info so u dont have it confused...in the next season...

Name- Hazel Tenou

Parents- I was adopted as a infant from Michiru Kaioh, Setsuna Meioh, and Haruka Tenou by (whatever their names r)

Siblings- Adopted older sis is Hotaru Tomeo and by the family I live with is Sam (whatever his last name is) and also whoever Sailor Uranep is. Also Rini...(that sucks)

Sailor Scout- Sailor Crescent

Sailor Transformation Saying- Crescent Crisis Star Power!!!Make Up!!!

Transformation-(of course its coming from the story) She through up her hand and she started to glow! All of sudden she started floating, and spinning as her long beautiful hair swirled around with her…Crescent Moons went everywhere…Once the Crescent Moons pasted, there were 2 beautiful colored ribbons. One was black and the other was gold. These ribbons burst out of her golden jewel on her chest, and rapped around the rest of her torso. The ribbons flashed as more Crescent Moons went everywhere, and behind the Crescent Moon, was a beautiful white torso, with a black ribbon with the golden jewel on top of it. As she was spinning ribbons started to come out near the bottom of the torso, at the waist. The ribbons flashed as once again Crescent Moons went everywhere, and a lovely yellow skirt appeared. She held her hands up and ribbons went up and down her arms, the ribbons flashed as Crescent Moons went everywhere. She then had white long gloves on. Then she did a flip as ribbons went down her legs and burst into Crescent Moons, and once the moons past, she was wearing black boots with a crescent moon on the top of each boot. Her forehead had a yellow glowing crescent Moon on it. Sparkles went everywhere as her forehead gained a tiara with a black jewel on it, as well as 2 small Crescent Moons, one on each side of the jewel. Her neck gained a black choker with a Crescent Moon on the front of it. Lastly her ears gained ear rings with long Crescent Moons on them. She then turned around and posed.

Dream(s)- To be the best violinist, sketcher, racer, F-1 racer, friend, writer, actress, zoologist, Sailor Scout, Photographer, and Swimmer(Even though I am as good as Michiru)

Personality- My guardian is Aries
Im tomboy
Im easily depressed
I have good grades in certain classes
I have a need for speed
I love to swim
I love music
I love (everything my dreams consist of)
I'm Christian
I protect my friends and family
I can be overprotective
Im testy(easily ticked off)
I love animals

Other Info- I search for my adopted family even though I dont know them and they really are dead.

Fear(s)- Confessing, death, eating and drinking plain dairy's, the unknown and losing a friend

Sign- The Crescent Moon

Gem Stone- amynesty

Birth Stone- Pearl

Bday- June 8

Age- 15

Ideal plant- rose(any color mostly white and purple)

Fav Color- Gold

Fav Food- Soup

Least Fav Food- Mushrooms

Ideal Animal- Panther

Birth Parents- Neo Queen Serenity and I'm guessing Darin since Uranus and Neptune were looking for an air to both thrones... yet I'm not sure if their dead...

Hair- Wavy and curly when not straightened. Black with gold hi and lo lights.

Eyes- Hazel (consist of pearl green when in a good mood, perl grey when calm, and pearl blue when in bad and depressing mood)

Ideal Myth Creature- Angel(even though real)

Skin Tone- Olive(Dutch)




i hope this refreshed u a bit...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 11:51:11 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOkay, but in the story, U never knew that rini was your sister and you don't say crisis power untill the second season... lol alot in that season isn't there??? HOMEWORK sorry I'll try to finish and add a chappy

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 11:52:30 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderok just remember i have curfew at 10 my time...

besides ive been on since uve added that chappy

so yeah ill be on until its bed time

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 12:12:47 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskdangit lol I wish I didn't have homeowrk... I'm sorry I won't be abel to add a chappy today BUT, First thing tomorow so, if I get home early from school tomorow you might have a chappy update as soon as you get back from school =D lol *Lets hope* lol

See ya!!! NIGHT NIKS!!! *I like that nick Nam... Niks lol ohh wel NIGHT!!!*

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 12:14:16 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderNIGHT NIGHT!!!AND BU BI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i look forward to the chappy


also i dont mind the nick name

u havent even givin me 1 yet

night night and bu bi^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 11:51:10 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOkay, but in the story, U never knew that rini was your sister and you don't say crisis power untill the second season... lol alot in that season isn't there??? HOMEWORK sorry I'll try to finish and add a chappy

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 11:51:10 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOkay, but in the story, U never knew that rini was your sister and you don't say crisis power untill the second season... lol alot in that season isn't there??? HOMEWORK sorry I'll try to finish and add a chappy

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 11:51:09 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOkay, but in the story, U never knew that rini was your sister and you don't say crisis power untill the second season... lol alot in that season isn't there??? HOMEWORK sorry I'll try to finish and add a chappy

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 10:36:45 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThere are also some final scenes from Season one in there, There is episode that is in this like 3 times and it's at the very end of season 1 so don't be confused if you see some things in season one you all saw from this =D lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 10:42:09 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderok

wonder which 1

i know the Crystal Tokyo things(Rini, Chibichibi, Neo Queen Serinity, and Darin) r in the next though

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 10:38:59 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderWHO DO U LOVE!?!?!?!?!?!?!RINI OR HAZEL!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?



but give me a sec i wanna make something so u can have it fresh on ur brain

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 10:11:05 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderCOME ON!!!!!!!I WANNA NEW CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!!!!!!!!!

im gonna take me a shower...to get my teenage stinch off...of course...so u know what thats means...I WANNA NEW CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CHAPPY CHAPPY CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!

i cant believe i have a sister called Sailor Uranep! I thought Mini Moon was my only sister...also i thought my planets/moons/stars were Uranus and Neptune and Moon...?O.o wow so much DRAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!its better than GH(General Hospital)

yes i watch soaps...DONT MAKE FUN OF ME!!!

ill be on later

ADD THAT CHAPPY!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 10:26:39 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskWell she's not your Bio Stister... But Rini Is!

lol and Your Powers Change in the future, to were your Moon Powers are stronger... And eventualy in the end there comes a point where you have to decide to be the Queen of Neptune,Uranus or the Moon... And not even i have decided which one you choose lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 10:31:07 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderUranep want take my spot!!! I shall be the Queen of Uranus!!!But I also wanna be the Queen of Neptune!!! But Uranus is for me!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 10:42:15 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol I wana tell you what happeneds at the end of Season 2... But I just Can't!!! lol its a really good ending though... lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 10:34:04 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderbut yay im not full blooded related with Rini...what a relief...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 10:40:24 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol... You... kind of are lol... You'll find out the last episode of the season =D lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 10:42:51 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderGREAT!!!!Y HER?!?!?!?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 10:07:53 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderO.o so much drama...Black Hole dies...NICK AND DK R FINALLY OVER!...Nova appears...me and u r 2gether...RINI'S BACK!!!, so much drama...


I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!


MAKE A NEW CHAPPY NOW!!!!!!!!!!!I WANNA GET TO THE NEXT SEASON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


but i dont want u to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and whats up with Leo and TMM being...mixed up...*screams with joy*AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 10:22:03 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol THANKS!!! And I will after i do my home work *BLAH math...*


And Hazel and leo aren't Dateing but Leo is foe sure Thinkin bout it... Lol and TMM was at the same plave LEO was... So maybe you all are wrong... AND don't forget about your darling daughter lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 10:33:13 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderno ur body split into 2!!!im not wrong!!!

how could i forget about my darlin daughter...?

Hazel- ChibiChibi...

Chibichibi- chibi chibi?

Hazel- Wanna go see daddy?

Chibichibi- Daddy daddy!!!

Hazel- I havet figured out how he is yet...^^''''but i think i know...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 10:58:42 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLo I know!! lchibi chibi is so CUTE!! lol I can say -.- Cute... lol I'm perfect I can say anything... But I'm also a guy so... Lol I don't know but she is! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 11:01:04 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindershe likes candy like me...that must be my child*gulps* uh oh... i gotta run from Hika's spirit

i can hear her say 'YOU IDIOT UR NOT SUPPOSED TO HAVE CHILDREN YET!!! UR NOT EVEN MARRIED!!!!WAIT UNTIL I TELL THE OTHERS!!!!'

O_O scary...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 11:58:05 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol DOn't worry I can tell you that Chibi Chibi is from Future Crystal Tokyo =D lol alot of time traveling in this next week or so lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 8, 2007, 11:59:16 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderjust like in 'Solar System's Outcasts'...-_- at least i understand...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 12:15:39 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol YEAH!!! and I believe right now some people are still stuck in time travel.. Lol well might as well tell you... In the Story you were gona be pregnet by Some Nega-Monster and everyone thought i did it lol... I still have the written chappy... lol well anyways NIGHT!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 10:05:02 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskAdded =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 9:58:42 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOops, Sorry i forgot one scene lol!

PunkWolfGirl on October 8, 2007, 3:19:12 AM

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PunkWolfGirlLMAO.

Awesome Chappy! [:

Bwaha

That Is So Moonara! xD

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 6:34:36 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol!!! XD!!! Don't forget to read the other chapters... And Comment so I know you read them =D lol

Moon_Princess on October 7, 2007, 4:02:32 PM

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Moon_PrincessO_O;
She turned me into ice...*whimper* How mean. o_o

But I was introduced! Yay! ^-^
Great job!! I love it! :D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 6:33:01 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYeppies!!! lol Just to let you know... your Character is going to be alot like Sailor V along with Sailor Nova =D

GOD I'v got to add 3 Chapters before I can put her in there... The origanle plan was to not add you untill Nick Was killed. but I decided to Speed things up abit becuz I'M DIEING TO GET TO SEASON 2!!! lol DIEING!!!

But yeah it was supposed to be just the 3 for about 3 more chappyies and then you would have came along... but Ya know how it is when your on a tight Schedule =D

Moon_Princess on October 7, 2007, 3:57:40 PM

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Moon_PrincessThis chapter was AWESOME! ^_^
Rainbow Scouts? Awesome! :D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 6:27:54 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol Rainbow "Crystal" Scouts... lol the reason I created them was because, everyone is starting out like the Origanal Sailor Scouts... But Not even all of them as their Eternal Sailor Scouts forms could beat the Nexes... So I had to throw in some logic by adding a little help =D

and Thanks! =D lol

Moon_Princess on October 7, 2007, 3:54:52 PM

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Moon_PrincessOooh, Bad Nick. >:O *slaps him around* >.<
lol, Great chap.! ^^



~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 6:25:24 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol thats cool so do I!!!

Thanks!!! =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 6:36:06 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskhave a pale friend and I would slap him too.. except I'm a guy... and guys doon't slap lol

Moon_Princess on October 7, 2007, 3:51:03 PM

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Moon_PrincessGreat chappie! ^^ I'm off to read the rest now. :D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 8, 2007, 6:24:19 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTHANKS!

Moon_Princess on October 7, 2007, 3:51:57 PM

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Moon_PrincessLol, I have a friend that's really pale. XD

Awesome chappie! ^^


~Moon_Princess

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:28:38 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderWHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'm confused... y am i being mean to Cat?

oh well i guess i still get to keep the crystal

aint no one taking it from me!!!*hisses as everyone crowds around me* BACK OFF!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:33:35 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskand Celestial is kind of being a stub but not really... she's just trying to be excepted at the begining but later on she grows to be like Sailor Venus as Does Sailor Nova =D

lol we need a few girly cluts to balance the story out lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:35:15 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHindervery funny Leo...

but i understand now


ppl just do it to get their reputation up

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:40:11 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyep... they are both very shy at the begining but become very outgoing in the end. they will be like sailor v, except sailor nova is like sailor pluto uranus and neptune becuz she has alot of power and she trys to be mysterious at the beging

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:42:05 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderyeah but u know that Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto r my Haruka-papa, Michiru-mama, and Setsuna-mama in the other stories

but in this one

also that im JUST like Uranus and Neptune(just not lesbian)

talents and all

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:43:38 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyes you are =D lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:44:28 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderty!!!

so r u!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:31:07 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol Your not mad at her, During the first battle you 2 have to act like you are enemys

and in the 2nd you are trying to put on a show for aries who just said that Celestial was better than you to scar to so that you would work harder. and then in the end you tell her you knew it all along lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:34:21 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderoh!!! then y am i leaving Cat there frozen?!?!?! Beides i knew i was the strongest scout...


Hazel-besides *runs after AriEs with axe* GET BACK HERE ARIES OR ILL BACK YOUR DEATH SLOW AND PAINFUL!!!!!!!!!!

Aries- WHAT I DO TO U!!!!!!!!!?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hazel- DONT EVER CALL ME WEAK!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:37:07 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol You did it just to be a show off lol

your thing is you don't need to work hard to be good and thats why aries trys to scare you into working harder lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:38:49 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderstupid cat... whens *u know the other name of the cat but i dont want to let it out so others know* u know who come in? He'll be nice to me...unlike Aries!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:41:41 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol they'll adore you!along with sailor nova *it's owner*

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:43:24 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderi cant wait until Jenny comes in it will be fun


but in the chappy im making

well lets just say there will be a HUGE surprise in it

TWO really

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:44:19 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol i can't wait =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:45:25 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHindertrust me it will keep u up all night

and im gonna try and finish it before 10

which aint gonna happen since thats 15 minutes

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 11:38:16 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderTHE RAINBOW SCOUTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THEY CANT TAKE MY SPOT LIGHT SPOT ON STAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well at least DK aint mad...i think...oh well


Awesome chappy Leo! Cant wait till the next!!!

and when DK gets a REAL bf...*evil grin* then i can tape er and Bryan making out and give it to ppl in the school...and spy on them...and poison his drink


it will be so much fun!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:13:39 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol cool and thanks! lol rainbow scouts are your friends not food! lol *don't ask*

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:16:45 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHazel-awe man!!! but *licks Moonara's and DK's arms* they taste like chocolate!!!

Moonara-*grabbing arm* Chick Chill!!!!

DK- *does same* I know I taste good!!!But still I'm leaving that for Bryan!!!

Hazel- Bryan sucks!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:27:27 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol are you still reading the new chapy

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 12:27:54 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderi just got done!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 12:21:15 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL!!! LMAO!!!

AlleyCat17 on October 7, 2007, 7:07:04 AM

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AlleyCat17great chapter and i hope that nick guy get's moon dusted soon.and i can't wait for when im in it but i can wait.and im will probily be last in it because that is the way the i joined last and you are doing it order but i don't mind at all and can my OC have a cat to like hazle because she is the last and she do'es love cat's.if not i do't mind.anyways good chapter and i can't wait for you too add a new chapter soon.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 7:31:33 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYes she does have a cat =D and Did you read the other chappys? lol i don't want you to get confused

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 6:11:30 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderWHAT HAPPENED TO ME BEING TOMBOY!!!!!EVEN THOUGH THE GIRL IN ME COMES OUT EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ITS NOT THAT BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but at least i hate Nick


now DK needs to calm down and pay attention that i wouldnt do that to u

NICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'LL KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

as for DK...at least Moonara is on my side...*evil grin* i'll show u that i can get a date and that Nick's a fake...


*evil laugh*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 6:16:40 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYou were a girly girl?!? Lol I didn't notice, Besides you drooling over nick, lol I didn't notice... Lol Ohh well! Thanks for the comment and I'm Gona Add another chappy so Hold on tight, it's gona be a LONG ride today with not 1 but 2 chappys! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 6:19:57 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

besides i got school 2morrow and yes u made me aa girly girl in that because i was calling Nick a hunk and cutie and drooling and dazing at him in it



try and make it before church please

also my God Bro is over so i will hardly be able to talk

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 7, 2007, 6:26:26 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOKay cool, I'll add that chappy now lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 7, 2007, 6:27:18 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*voice echos as the world hears and screams with joy*^^'''

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 4, 2007, 12:28:27 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!im sorry(i am P.M.Sing) but she can be pale*hides behind DK* DONT KILL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but TMM ISNT perfect...*turns nose up* until that chappy comes...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 4, 2007, 12:31:09 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL!! Not fair!! He's always and totaly 110% Perfect and thanks =D and your PMSing right now? lol oh god!!! RUN FOR COVER!!! lol JK

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 4, 2007, 12:33:11 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderits not that bad(i started Mon. but good thing im happy go lucky during that time) DONT MAKE FUN OF ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

all u guys got to worry about and protect his ur jewels

chicks go through labor, P.M.Sing, emotions, etc.

FEMALES R STRONGER THAN GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AND U CANT ARGUE THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 4, 2007, 11:13:57 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendNice chappie!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 4, 2007, 11:39:36 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol don't forget to read #8 lord child! your skipping chapters and you might get lost! shame shame! lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 4, 2007, 11:49:09 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendI read that chapter. So shame shame on you!lol I'm going to my desk now -.-*sleeps on a desk* *has a dream about me flying*

Dream Me: I CAN FLY! MWHAHAHAHA!

Real Me: Fly. I. *snore*

lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 4, 2007, 12:02:29 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL!!! I hurt to burst your bubble, Oh wait who Am I kidding =D *Pops dream Bubble and you come crashing down* Heheheh...

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 4, 2007, 12:16:13 PM

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SasukesgirlfriendReal Me: Your mean Leo! *starts to cry*

You: Your mody today. Sorry.

Dream Me and Real Me: GOT YA! *sticks out tong* *laughs*

You: I'm going to get you for that!

Dream Me and Real Me: Uh oh...*starts run away*

5 mintues later...

You: Darian has a lot of energy to day. *walks in a room*

Me: Hehe he...

You: Come out here! I know your here!

Me: I know. BUT WHERE?

You: I'm guessing in that...HOT DOG STAND?! Oh well *walks over there*

Me: *throws a paper ball at you* It was so funny. he he

You: You had sugar today, didn't you?

Me: *nods raptly*

You: And COFFEE?!

Me: Yesh, capytin.

You: I see. *pulls a string* Merry Christmas. *Math homework like really hard homework falls on me*

Me: I hate this 3:<!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 4, 2007, 12:22:56 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL and thats why I'm failing Math lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 4, 2007, 12:28:39 PM

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SasukesgirlfriendI see -.- *shoves cookie down your throat* The magic cookie -.-...Grants 3 wishes...(THAT WAS FRICKN' RANDOM!LOL)

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 24, 2007, 1:16:16 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderim re doing my votes. here they r



Pole 1- E. Leo

Pole 2- A. Bryan

Pole 3- A. Hazel (only because shes my character)



also heres what u got so far on answers

Pole 1- 5 for E. Leo

Pole 2- 1 for some evil monster
3 for Bryan
1 for Zingy

Pole 3- 2 for Hazel (it could be me. though idc.^^)
1 for Moonara
1 for Emily


well thats what u got on ur votes^^ i wish though u would add another chappy

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 3, 2007, 11:46:40 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol Sorry I axeldently deleted your comment when trying to reply, lol well anyways... THANKS! =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 3, 2007, 11:53:21 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindercan we get DK and Bryan hooked up in the next chappy or at least us (since we had the most votes) i cant wait to c how the dating in the story goes!!!


DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 3, 2007, 11:57:43 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol!!! you'll see

And My votes would make it all wierded out lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 3, 2007, 11:59:07 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderSO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on October 3, 2007, 11:55:21 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderwhat about ur votes


u have to vote

so dont be ashamed

VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U WANT HURT ANYONE'S FEELINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE FOR PEDRO VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sasukesgirlfriend on September 9, 2007, 6:03:09 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendA LOT OF PEOPLE WANT DK TO BE WITH BRYAN XDDD! I DON'T BLAME UM'!

DK: Are you saying I can't love him?

Me: No I'm not saying that I jus-

DK: I HATE YOU!

Me: -.-';...

lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 9, 2007, 7:38:53 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol thanks for likeing it so much. and yeah, just becuz your character likes him so much lol.

Sasukesgirlfriend on September 9, 2007, 8:26:08 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendSEE DK HE'S AGREEING WITH ME AND YOU!lol

PunkWolfGirl on September 9, 2007, 5:09:30 AM

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PunkWolfGirlPics Would Defo Make It Alot Easier!

Pole 1: Leo!

Pole 2: Some Evil Monster!!! xD Lmao Nah... Um... Bryan!

Pole 3: Moonara, Heads Down! (Just Cuz She's My Character) =P

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 9, 2007, 7:35:01 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol Everyone thinks it's leo! lol cool, I'm glade you liked it! lol!!! you want Leo to date Moonara! Thats a new one! XD lol we have all different answers for that one! lol

PunkWolfGirl on September 12, 2007, 2:59:23 AM

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PunkWolfGirlAha. Buuut. Who Do YOU Think Should Date Leo? xD

Sasukesgirlfriend on September 9, 2007, 5:58:44 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendI never broken a bone in my life until now in this RP story of someone I made up ._.*nods*lol Me likie chapter! I want one of those love charms!LOL XDDDD Don't ask why but I do :)*nods*!

PunkWolfGirl on September 9, 2007, 5:04:45 AM

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PunkWolfGirlYAY! =D Awesome Chapter!!! =D

Lol! I Like Leo <3 =3

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 9, 2007, 4:16:04 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskEveryone thinks that Leo is TMM... lol this is going to be good =D

Sasukesgirlfriend on September 8, 2007, 7:49:59 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendPole One - E
pole Two - A or C
pole Three - C

there are my vote ^3^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 2:21:30 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol cool, did you read chappy 6?

Sasukesgirlfriend on September 9, 2007, 6:00:01 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriendno I didn't 0xo';. I'M GOING TO READ IT NOW!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 8, 2007, 7:22:00 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderAND YES WE NEED PICS!!!!!!!!!! BUT I DO KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i can imagine it all in my head

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 7:34:26 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol okay, thats 2 for piccys!

2 for TMM being Leo

1 for hazel and TMM

1 For the winner of the bet and TMM

1 for DK and Bryan

1 for DK and Zingy

AlleyCat17 on September 8, 2007, 7:16:56 AM

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AlleyCat17great chapter.and they can be so clueless about who he is.which is so easy to tell.anyways i hope you add a new chapters soon please.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 7:32:17 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol I'll try and add it tomorow =D

Moon_Princess on September 8, 2007, 7:11:57 AM

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Moon_PrincessHurray! You got another chappie up! :3 It was great!

Lol, Hazel and D.K are so clueless...

I look foreward to the next chapter! :D


-Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 7:30:11 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyes they are! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 8, 2007, 7:20:00 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderI KNOW WHO MOONARA IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^


sorry i havnt been on

but i cant i have serious reading to do for school

i have AR points to get

GREAT CHAPPY^^!!!!!!!

i wish they really did make smart charms

i need them

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 7:28:21 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 8, 2007, 7:24:11 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderi added my Sailor Crescent pic but it was rejected

right now im going to start reading

bu bi

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 7:27:35 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI hate that new croping rule -.- lol

Moon_Princess on September 8, 2007, 7:15:55 AM

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Moon_PrincessHmmm...Pictures of the scouts WOULD make a lot easier to see in our heads.

And I'm pretty sure that Leo is T.M.M. lol

And the dating questions...*shrugs* I don't know...^^;;


-Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 7:24:13 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskcooly!

1 For Piccies

and 1 for TMM being Leo lol

AlleyCat17 on September 8, 2007, 7:21:43 AM

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AlleyCat17well i gusse adding pic would make it better see what their doing.

Pole 1 - E : Leo

Pole 2 - A : Brayn

Pole 3 - A : Hazel

well i hope that helps.

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 8, 2007, 7:23:27 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderwhich scout r u again Triton or the new one coming in? i forgot i think ur the new one

but im Hazel in it

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 7:27:06 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskAlso known as Sasukesgirlfriend AKA DK lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 7:26:02 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask*shakes head in disapointment* lol Triton is DK... lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 8, 2007, 7:21:09 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderP1: Leo

P2: Zingy

P3: ??? whoever wins...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 8, 2007, 6:55:42 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwhat no commments???

Moon_Princess on August 18, 2007, 9:55:32 AM

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Moon_PrincessYou need to update soooooonnnn....I'm dyin' to know what happens next! X_X;;


~Moon_Princess

PunkWolfGirl on August 9, 2007, 7:41:26 AM

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PunkWolfGirlKool! Buuuut When Does My Character Come In? D; -Likes To Be Center Of Attention- Btw, My Character's Skin Colour Is Very Pale. And Shes Quiet And Emo =3

PunkWolfGirl on August 10, 2007, 5:47:59 AM

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PunkWolfGirlI Do Happen To Be Emo.

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:15:48 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderr u really emo



if so i feel less alone on here *black broken hearts appear*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:26:06 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol When you say emo you don't meen you cut your wrists do you??? and if you do STOP lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:27:33 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderO.o maybe back then

but tomboys call me a punk these days

so no worrys im in good conditian

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:29:10 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYAY!!! =D lol I don't want you hurting yourself, it's very bad for you! Not just physicaly but mentally too =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:30:39 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderi can be depressed a lot

thats y i based my character like me

like every other character i have

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:41:19 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol don't be depressed, if you do get depressed then TALK to ME =D lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:42:48 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderyeah when i talk to u i feel better all the time

but in school i hide it

i dont like burdening my peeps

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:46:33 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol, well everyone does that sometimes... Lol My sky is brown right now lol wierd huh?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:48:20 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderyeah O.o

i dont even get it unless it means that ur friends r burdening u

im going to make a new comment so the pcs dont lagg

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:09:15 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol Soon and thanks

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:56:10 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderso i can refreshen ur memory

Name: Hazel Tenou

Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Crescent

Element/Power: Wind and Sea

Planet *if You have one*: Uranus and Neptune

Transformation Name: Crescent Crisis Power

Transformation Decription: (U already know that)

Name of Attacks: (U know them also)

Sailor Scout Outfit: (U know that also)

Hair,Eye,and Skin color: Hazel eyes, Jet Black hair and blond hi lites, and dutch(olive) skin tone

Personality: Tomboy, emo, loves to make friends, Miss Independant, Spoiled, Loves food expecially ramon, gos nuts over ramon, hates girly girl things, hates jerks, protective, usually depressed, hates school, will flirt on occasion, makes very very bad grades, daydreams during school, and loves music

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:58:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol thanks lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:59:38 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderhave u read the latest chappys on 'WSWFSG'???

u'll like the latest one i think

but ur not perverted

but i felt like it when i wrote it

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 11:01:16 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol I'm in it??? and no I haven't but I will when you get off to go eat dinner or take a shower or something lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 11:23:51 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderim back

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 11:03:36 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderive eaten dinner

but know im talking about the real u not ur oc Leo

im not even in it

it seems perverted

like the latest 'NALFETL' chappy

but speaking of showers i do need to go and take 1

so ill let u read the chappys while i take a shower

so brb

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:58:39 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderso u dont forget^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:50:10 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderheres the new comment

NO LAGGING PCS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CHAY CHAY HATE LAGGING PCS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:56:36 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHow do you know there is a sailor Black hole...? Chapter 0 might be a a hunk of lies! you never know!!! lol *I love messing with your head* lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:58:09 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderive already told u


i can read... comments

because im special

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:55:39 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol yay!

AlleyCat17 on August 9, 2007, 7:53:56 AM

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AlleyCat17yeah awesome chapter and i hope you update soon please.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:14:53 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyeah probly tomorrow if not the most deffently the next day *I hope ^^;* lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:17:04 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderit better be today Leo....

even though 2morrow i will have more time i hope

i dont want to go anywhere this weekend

i want to spent it in my room and listening to my music

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:33:23 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol it's probly gona be tomorrow I'm not even sure on what the chappys gona be about for most of the part... lol all I know is that we're going to have a new sailor scout, and a temple and I'm Going to start it out at the end of a battle...lol thats all I know lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:35:03 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderT_T im so impatient

oh leo

i know somthing u can use in the story


but i want to hear u beg to know

only since u make me beg *evil grin*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:39:12 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol fine, PLEASE tell me!!! PLEASE =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:41:52 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderon my thing called 'FallOutGirlAARHinder's Oc's' it has a bunch of oc's

Juno and if there if Violet r other ocs not the ones in my story called 'WSWFSG'

so u can use them except those in storys and those with long info

Neowa though was a oc i made in 5th grade so ill think about letting u use her

theres like 35 or more so u can use them in the story as guests if u want

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:48:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol I might just use that ;D lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:49:28 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderthere r lots of them

but ingore the school thing on it

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 7:05:05 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderI WAS RIGHT!!!!!!! I WAS RIGHT!!!!!!!


of course i was right

but i was a *twitch twitch* girly girly

that word shouldnt even be said of!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-_-

im such a tomboy


but poor Rick (not) hes in a comma....


great awesome ludicrous chappy bro^^ =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:13:32 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol you don't know that lol ;D and thanks

Lol I made you a girly girl O.o lol tell me where, I was Trying to be SO careful with that...ohh well lol lets hope that doesn't happen with the new scout comming in XD lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:33:49 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderyes u did leo

it was every where
like 'FIRST ONE TO FIND OUT WHO TUXEDO MINI MASK GETS HIM' DK and me said that


and i called that stupid Bryan dude hot in it

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:15:02 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderwhens that??????!!!!!!!!!!!???????!!!!!!!!!

in the next chappy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????!!!!!!!!!! who is it it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!???????????


and what dont i know????????? O_O?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:22:02 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYou don't know what you think you knew! lol and I can't tell you who it is But I can Tell you that They are VERY Psychic and you meet her at the Southern Temple... It's funny how it worked out! We needed someone to be the "Rei" of the group and We Got Her =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:23:40 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderis it PunkWolfGirl????????? i bet it is

because in 1 of her comments it says she has pale skin

so it is

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:27:48 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskmaybe... =D lol I love it when your begging XD

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:29:09 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindershut up

i hate it when i beg

and i know its PunkWolfGirl because she was right behind Sailor triton

so Sailor Black Hole will be next

im not stupid like ppl say arnt i??????????? arnt i?????O.o dont look at me like that

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:37:38 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol it might be Black Hole... Maybe it is, and I might not being going in order, it's just the Rainbow scouts, you and Triton were the one's that inspired the idea of the story

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:38:55 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderO.o

i know its Sailor Black Hole

u cant trick me

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:45:04 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL!!! well... Maybe I don't need to maybe It's true that I'm going to use Sailor Milkyway...*Sounding over dramatic* Ooops I said to much

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:47:03 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderLAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UR LIEING!!!!!!!!!

U CANT TRICK ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNOW IT WILL BE SAILOR BLACK HOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I KNOW SAILOR MILKY WAY MAY COME LAST OR AFTER SAILOR BLACK HOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M NOT STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 10:54:45 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHow do you know there is a sailor Black hole...? Chapter 0 might be a a hunk of lies! you never know!!! lol *I love messing with your head* lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 9, 2007, 10:57:15 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindercause i read...

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 9, 2007, 4:21:10 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendWHO'S RICK?!LOL BUT NICE CHAPPIE!!

DK: I KNOW WHO TUXEDO MINI MASK IS!!
YOU: Uh huh 0.o';...
DK: IT HAS TO BE BOB!
YOU: Phew =)

LOL

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 4:31:05 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol Did you like the music??? At the end of one of the up coming chapters I'm Gona Play "Umbarella" lol XD

AND In one of the upcoming chapters Someones gona join a famous Pop star Boy Band XD lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 9, 2007, 4:42:33 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriend*nods* (lol)

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 4:26:27 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskXD!!! LOL

Oh and rick is just a guy in your class =D Lol I made him up for the sake of the story... lol

And thanks =D

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 9, 2007, 4:40:55 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriendoh lol!

Moon_Princess on August 8, 2007, 2:39:55 PM

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Moon_PrincessGreat chapter! ^.^
You hadn't updated in a couple of days so I was starting to wonder when the next chapter would come up.
Great job! I loved it.
Update soon, okay? :D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 4:28:54 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol did you like the music? I felt imspired so I put it in there lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 9, 2007, 3:45:34 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYeah I had writers block =D lol but it was cleared =D and the next chappy might be tomorrow But I'm really busy preparing for school -.- and I still got to add a chapter to "The Journey" but I can't even do that right now... lol I hope I can write a chappy tomorrow a new sailor scout "might" be added ;)

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 6, 2007, 10:30:27 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendSorry i didn't comment on here TT0TT. It was a really good chapter.

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 5, 2007, 12:07:09 PM

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SasukesgirlfriendOH GAWD...I hate rumors it's like a small sample of hell -_-. AND YESH I APPEAR! But where's my Tony?lol (Tony my puppy?) But that's okay!

AND I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I COULDN'T BREATH!LOL

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 5, 2007, 12:43:23 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYAY!!! tomorrow if I'm on I'll try to add a chappy for this =D and sorry about tony, I couldn't find a place to put him

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 6, 2007, 1:28:23 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendIt's okay Leo =3

PunkWolfGirl on August 4, 2007, 10:14:30 PM

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PunkWolfGirlOh, Yes.

Age: 13
Hair Colour: Blonde With Black Streaks
Eye Colour: Brownish Reddish Colour

AlleyCat17 on August 4, 2007, 2:26:18 AM

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AlleyCat17yeah a new sailor scout and a awesome chapter.and i hope you update soon please :3

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 3, 2007, 8:56:31 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderhow many times do i got to tell ppl this thing...??? WERE NOT LOVE BIRDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!


and who is the owner of DK aka Sailor Triton????


oh well


IM GLAD UR NOT DEAD THOUGH AND THAT I GOT A PARTNER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^ =D

GREAT CHAPPY BRO!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 3, 2007, 9:29:36 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskif you wana chat go to my story "Hey carlos it's me Tuxedo_Mini_Mask" it's a story i started so that when my friend carlos joineed he would have an easy way to reach me :)

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 3, 2007, 9:32:46 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderok

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 3, 2007, 9:00:54 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskWhy don't you ask Sasukesgirlfriend and thanks I'm glad you liked it =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 3, 2007, 9:05:58 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindershes my first partner?? AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i guess who became a sailor scout before the others gets to show up before the others ^^ i guess later in the story Sailor Celestial comes up because there was a trial for what Moon_Princess's scout is called

if not because it took so long to get her up there it will be Sailor Black Hole^^ idc whos my next partner though

but i hope rumors stop soon T_T

emily, lily, etc. will stop


but whos Tuxedo_Mini_Mask???? O_O it cant be u unless......*goes into thought and thinks it out* I GOT IT ILL JUST BE QUIET UNTIL EVERYONE FINDS OUT FOR THEMSELVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 3, 2007, 9:12:37 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYeah let them find out for them Selfs ;)
LOL!!! The true Tuxedo Mini Mask is... YOU!!! LOL JK

But I honestly Can't decide... lol... JK I know who it is but I'm Not tellin lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 3, 2007, 9:14:11 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder*takes deep breath and talks fast* ijustgottawaituntiltheclimaxofthestorysotheycanfindoutandiknowimright

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 3, 2007, 9:18:51 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol... Long confoe, time for you to start a new one lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 3, 2007, 9:19:55 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindertry and split the words up and u'll c what it says u just got to look closer

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 3, 2007, 9:24:17 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI know, lol I read it, I meen that This confoe we're making is 2 long, make a new comment so that The commputers do lagg as much lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 3, 2007, 9:14:39 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderthats going to be hard 4 u to read^^

Moon_Princess on August 3, 2007, 8:47:59 AM

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Moon_PrincessGreat chapter! Hurray, a new scout! ^.^
Update soon, okies? =D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 3, 2007, 8:54:52 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskGlad you liked the new chapters =D and There should be an update tomorow unless I am to busy, Which I highly dobt that lol

Moon_Princess on August 3, 2007, 8:40:33 AM

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Moon_PrincessExcellent Chapter! ^^ I loved it! Keep it up!


~Moon_Princess

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 3, 2007, 8:15:44 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderO_O u stayed at my house...

and im like my friend Autumn we dont ware makeup but we look alright without it

but we have our reasons

BUT I GOT A BRO!!!!!!!!!! A LIL BRO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


oh well great chappy

hope 4 more

and now everything is unraveling and soon ill get my partner *holds in excitement*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 3, 2007, 8:40:02 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOhh Yeah, lol well I forgot to add the Line

Hazel: First of all, I don't Wear Make up, I don't Need it *Goes into Daze* I'm a Natural Beauty...

Max: *Laughing* Yeah right, just take off that mask your wearing and we'll see if your telling the truth

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 3, 2007, 8:42:16 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder*mouth drops* i will kill him..O_O ill show him whos wearing a mask when i rip his face off then rip out his skull and heart


he'll need big time plastic surgrey so he'll be buried and ppl will come and c him *steam blows out of head*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 3, 2007, 8:45:49 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol

AlleyCat17 on August 2, 2007, 9:23:16 AM

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AlleyCat17wow great chapter and i can't wait tell im in it but i can wait.

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 2, 2007, 8:48:03 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendNICE! NO POOR ARIES!LOL

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 9:20:49 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOHHHH you ment when Hazel stepped on her!!! lol I loved that part lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 2, 2007, 9:23:53 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendBOTH PARTS WE'RE FUNNY AND MAKING ME CRY!LOL =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 3, 2007, 10:55:10 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI added 2 chapters hello??? lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 8:59:40 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYeah, thank goodness she had that Moon Protective macinisum to keep her safe lol, I'm glad you liked it =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 8:34:50 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderO_O awesome......... im speechless

speacking of homewrk i got to finish mine ^^''''

Mr. Clark will get mad if i dont bring it in tomorrow finished

i got like 2 left then i have to write somthin down on it so add more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 9:05:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol I'll work on it But I don't think it'll be finished lol it took me like 2 hours at the least to write this one lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 9:11:41 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderman thats a long time O_O

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 9:53:37 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol I know, I was half asleep during the whole thing, so I can barely remmeber what I wrote about lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 10:44:34 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderread it then

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 8:36:48 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderwow i sound like Electra from the movie in this^^ red hot leather clothes o yeah^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 9:02:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol YEAH!!! I forgot to add that your blonde highlights changed to red during that but oh well lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 9:04:46 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderthats hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for me though

remember im straight

dont get the wrong idea

i dont get drunk and make out with Hika like in the other story T_T that was weird but hilarious

i think im gonna go read that one again along with the one before it=D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 9:07:12 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol i Know, just like guys can tell if other guys look good but we're still straight =D lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 9:08:05 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderyes u didnt think wrong of me *wipes sweat off*

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 2, 2007, 8:51:01 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendI'm almost there! I'm almost in the story!lol Tuxedo Mini Mask is making it over heated over here!LOL

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 9:00:22 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol!!! yeah your almost there =D

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 2, 2007, 9:11:55 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriend*glittery eyes* *goes in a Gai pose* I'm almost there -^.^-! (LOL)

Moon_Princess on August 2, 2007, 8:28:28 AM

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Moon_PrincessGreat chapter! ^^
I'm looking forward to reading the next one! :D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 8:34:47 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYeah lol I think I MIGHT write another on tonight lol I have ALOT OF FUN writing these chapters

And For everones info. The Next chapter of the next will Have Our very first Sailor Scout *Besides Sailor Crescent* will be in it!!! =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 8:55:58 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderwho it is!!!????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tell me please T_T who will be my first partner??? *begging tone* who is it???????? T_T tell me

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 9:01:40 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol I'm glad I got you begging lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 9:02:49 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderwell its not common

in fact its really really really rare to get me to beg

unless u chicken wing me

that hurts though

AlleyCat17 on August 2, 2007, 2:06:18 AM

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AlleyCat17wow great chapter and i can't wait to see what happens next.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 8:24:53 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol well now ya can, new chappy's up =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 7:00:11 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderWOW...O_O u made me girly a bit

remember i also hate skirts (which i deal with in the story), scorts, long skirts, of course i hate dresses.

but u got everything right^^ that was a hilarious chappy bro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^ thanks for coming to my rescue

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 2, 2007, 7:00:41 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderor who ever came to my rescue

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 8:24:06 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MasklolYeah *wink wink* Who Ever came to your rescue... We thank you *Wink wink* lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 2, 2007, 8:22:16 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYeah, I didn't know what to do since you are not Girly Girl, so I just said the dress turned into a TB outfit lol

Moon_Princess on August 1, 2007, 2:13:34 PM

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Moon_PrincessThis was an awesome chapter! :D
It's just like the anime. ^^ XD Now I gotta go watch it.

Great job! ^^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^-^


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 1, 2007, 2:18:22 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyep, I tried to make it very simular =D lol Infact I was watching the first episode when I wrote it *I'v got the DVD's lol*

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 1, 2007, 1:21:39 PM

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SasukesgirlfriendDangit...I'M THE YOUNGEST SAILOR SCOUT ON HERE! WAAAHHH! *falls over dead* lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 1, 2007, 1:26:44 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol Ohh well, lol I'm gona put you in the 8th grade, that way you'll have 3 people in your class lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 1, 2007, 1:34:17 PM

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Sasukesgirlfriendokay mr.boss leo dude -^3^-!

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 1, 2007, 1:20:06 PM

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SasukesgirlfriendTHERE'S SOMETHING WRONG....THERE'S NO THEME SONG! LOL LOL LOL LOL! XDDDDD JUST KIDDING! JUST KIDDING! *stops laughing for a second and burst out laughing again* I'M SO SORRY! I CAN'T HELP IT! XDDDDDDDDDDDD

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 1, 2007, 1:23:38 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL!!! Thats what I was thinking!!! but I couldn't think of one lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on August 1, 2007, 1:33:11 PM

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SasukesgirlfriendIf I was in your shoes I couldn't make one up either!lol

Gigi bad song writer >3>

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 1, 2007, 2:03:12 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol I can make songs but only if I want to lol

AlleyCat17 on August 1, 2007, 5:09:33 AM

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AlleyCat17k her age is 15 ok.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 1, 2007, 5:22:24 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskCool lol we have two 15 year olds one 13, and one 12... and Punky hasn't told us yet, but yeah, it's good We have a very good age group =D

and Tuxedo Mini Mask's Age is Kind of unknown

Moon_Princess on August 1, 2007, 4:05:39 AM

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Moon_PrincessMy OC's age?
15 :D


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 1, 2007, 4:42:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskglad ya told me that, I was about to make it 13 lol =D


BTW I'm about to write the first chapter to EVERYONE stay on the look out =D

AlleyCat17 on July 31, 2007, 11:27:21 AM

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AlleyCat17hey sorry it tock me so long but my dad went to the hospalbe yeaterday and my sister is going to have a baby any day now so i just been busy so here is her profile.(sorry for the bad spelling the spell cheaker is not working right now)


Name:jenny Hikaru

Sailor Scout Name: sailor super nova/ sailor nova

Element/Power:a supernova

Planet *if You have one*: just live's on earth

Transformation Name: nova power

Transformation Decription:well she is like she is in space and she is floating in space and a supernova apiears all a round her and she then has her outfit on.

Name of Attacks: Nova Bow(a dark blue bow apires and she use's and then pulls on the strin and makes a arrow apire and calls out super nova arrow)and she can use Super Nove Blast(that comes from her hands which she get's from a supernova from space).

Sailor Scout Outfit:pretty much the same as the real sailor scouts but the skirt is dark blue and her bow on the back is a little longer and dark purple and the bow on the cheas is drak purple but in the middle is a broch shape like a yellow star with a black "N" on it.

AGE:18

GENDER: female

Hair color: dark brown and in a long brade that go's all the ways down her back.(and has her bangs down).

Eyes color: blue

skin color : peach

Personality: starm,nice,kind,frindly,hate bad guys,and love's to kick but,strong,love's to make new friends,she love's to draw/paint alot of things which she is really good at amd love's to sing,and love's animals like cat's,dog's etc,she is goos at school usealy gets A's or B's and some time's A plus,love's waching movie's (not horrir movie's she hate's them),and she love's to read a good novle when she has time to read.

oh and i might draw a pic of the so you now what she look's like but it will lool really bad.and if you need any more info just ask me ok.and i hope her profile is ok for you.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 31, 2007, 12:52:45 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskSorry, *I knew I was forgeting something* You age please? it can't be Younger then 11 or older then 15, lol sorry! ^^;

Moon_Princess on July 30, 2007, 12:10:58 PM

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Moon_PrincessName: Cat Tsuru

Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Celestial

Element/Power: Light

Planet *if You have one*: Moon

Transformation Name: Celestial Power!

Transformation Decription: She holds up the power stick and a ribbon of light shoots out and covers her body and when it disappears, her scout uniform is there.

Name of Attacks: "Moonlight Flair!" and "Pure Light Beam!"
(The light isn't gold, it's either silver or pure white)

Sailor Scout Outfit: The same look as one of the inner scouts (Mars, Mercury, Venus, ect)
But the skirt and the ribbon and sailor...thing on their shoulders and the end of the gloves are all silverish blue and she has boots like Sailor moon's only silverish blue.
The jewel in her tiara is blue and she has a blue ribbon holding up her ponytail.

Hair,Eye,and Skin color: Skin: White Eyes: beautiful blue and Hair: Brown and hair in a ponytail and split long bangs. (Just look at a picture of my OC in my gallery to get an idea)

Personality:
Very kind and sweet, but shy.
She's pretty innocent, but brave and tough when she needs to be.
She's somewhat of a crybaby and klutz and mostly a quiet person.
She always wears a silver cartouche around her neck because it was a family heirloom.
She's also an awesome singer and athletic and loves tennis and swimming.
Shes not all that great at school and likes to sleep in.
She loves all her friends.


(Is this information okay? Is there anything else you'd like/need?)


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 31, 2007, 12:51:00 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOhh, And whats your OC's Age??? it can't be older then 15 and no younger then 11 =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 30, 2007, 2:09:24 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskUmmm I tried to look at your OC but I couldn't find it =( lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 30, 2007, 12:51:19 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask0.0 *Burst out in Happyness* YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!! YAY!!!!! You got your info in!!! OKay before I can Start the Story... I need to run something past you. Is it okay if you are the Sailor Scout of All Of the moons? Here check this description out...

Sailor Celestial is The Deffender of all the Moons. Normally, She would Never even Think About coming into Our galaxy To check up on our Moons Becuz, This is here Neo Queen Serenity Rules, and all is normally Right...But when her Power stick began to Vibrate Toward Our Solor System, she Followed her instinks and ran to the Newly astablished Moon Kingdom to see what was wrong. Forunatly she was right, Something was terribly wrong... The Nexes Had Captured the Sailor Scouts of the Past, And Of coarse Everyone Knew this becuz it was the 31st centuary, they then knew what they had to do... 5 Sailor Scouts Of the 31st Centaury Were Preborn into the past *With out their Memorys of the future* and well She was one of those Valentared Scouts to Go back in the Past...

What do ya think?

Moon_Princess on July 30, 2007, 3:32:37 PM

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Moon_PrincessReally? You couldn't find one of her? o.O
Lol, she's all over the place. XD But here. I'll put a pic up:


This is a pic of her I did recently. This is what she looks like.

I usually use her only as my Yugioh OC, but since I can't really think up a new character really fast, I'll use her. ^^


And yeah! I liked the background info. ^^


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 31, 2007, 6:53:43 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOhhh, okay, I like the picture BTW, I really couldn't find it! lol ohh well... I'm glad you like the backround info =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 27, 2007, 9:59:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskName: DK or Darian(don't prefer)

Sailor Scout Name Choices:
Sailor Sea, Sailor Water Star

Age:12

Element/Power: Water, Light, and Music

Planet: (if for Sailor Sea)Earth*under water (If for Sailor Water Star) a small planet that reveals(or howeva ya spell it) around Mercury

Name of Attack: Water Chamakras Slice

Transformation Name: Sea Sunlight (same for both names)

What Happeneds in your Transformation: star and moon charms float around with lights sparkling ever where and turns into Sailor Sea/Sailor Water Star

Other Info:
-Her weapon is two blue chamakras *big rings that are sharp enough to cut through anything*

-She has a German Shepered and Grey wolf mixed puppy that has a moon crescent but has markings of water on the upper part of the crescent that is her guardian Named Tony

-She once worked for The Negaverse by being controlled and lost all her memories of being Sailor Sea/Sailor Water Star even her friends and family by being defeated by her cousin Sailor Mercury(Amy) in battle. She later on regained memory when her friends Pai, Rose, and Ryan were attacked by a monster.

-Met her mother's younger self and she became Sailor Dawn but went back to her time and could never be Sailor Dawn ever again

-Was killed in combat but her friend Pai's cry and tears some how revived her; They say her strong friendship with her since preschool and now was the only thing to wake her up or maybe more...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 30, 2007, 10:55:41 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOhh and just for the record her sailor name is Sailor Triton NOT sailor Water star =D

Sasukesgirlfriend on July 28, 2007, 3:03:01 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendLeo can I add two more attacks, please?

Here they are:
Song Charm - People fall asleep when the here the song.
Burning Light - When I touch or throw something using this power at the foe the start to burn like acid

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 30, 2007, 2:34:51 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYou should also add what your Outfit Looks like for the People that don't know ;D

Sasukesgirlfriend on July 30, 2007, 3:17:43 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendAlright.

Sailor Scout Outfit: baby blue skirt attached to a neon blue tube top with a baby blue ribbon hanging over the tube top with the sailor thing on the back and boots that just go over my knees. Has dark sea blue hair that goes to her caves. And has purple eyes. And has a necklace

Normal Out fit: Serena's school outfit (not her's but same style) When she's not wearing that she wears pants with a ripped hole in the left and wears a tank top with a panda on it that says "I might be cute but I THINK I'M HOT!".(LOL) And wears mortcycicel boots.

I want to also add something (Sorry ^^';):
She is a semi-famous artist and is a spazz around friends but shy around everyone else.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 30, 2007, 10:14:12 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThats great, and thanks for adding that one thing! it gives me an idea of your personality! lol even though I know you well enough not to need it lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on July 30, 2007, 10:50:33 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriendthat's good to know lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on July 30, 2007, 3:19:21 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriendher hair is dark brown with yellow highlights. and eyes are hazel blue

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 29, 2007, 8:40:25 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskcool =D

Sasukesgirlfriend on July 29, 2007, 8:47:06 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendI'm guessing "Yes"?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 29, 2007, 8:47:55 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYou got it dudett ;D

Sasukesgirlfriend on July 29, 2007, 8:49:48 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendALRIGHT SWEET DUDE =3!

Moon_Princess on July 30, 2007, 4:28:19 AM

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Moon_PrincessActually, I like Sailor Celestial. :D

I'll go with that. ^.^

Now I'm off to figure out the info. ^^


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 30, 2007, 10:17:15 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYAY!!!! hurry becuz in a few days I will be Adding the first real chapter soon =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 30, 2007, 2:33:15 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHere is FallOutGirlAARHinder's OC in this =D and DK *darian* was Sasukesgirlfriend's OC, and Tuxedo Mini Mask is an OC that Belongs to... Ohh wait I can't tell you that either ;)... Well here it is

Name: Hazel

Sailor Scout Name Choices: Sailor Crescent(what else would I get)

Age:*11 at the Least 15 at the Most* 15

Element/Power: Wind and Sea (mostly wind)

Planet*if you have one*: Uranus and Neptune (mostly Uranus)

Name of Attack: Cupids Arrow, Love Hurts, Feather Dance, Angel's Call, & Shatter

Transformation Name: Crescent Crisis Star Power

What Happeneds in your Transformation: Angel wings grow as the feathers pull off and the wings disappear as the feathers go im in the white part as black and gold ribions make the rest of the uniform. also the tiara comes from the moon

Other Info: I'm a need for speed, ants in ur pants, wacky immature chick. Im also a tomboy that loves the wind. Even I love to swim. Even though i can be a rotten mean brat and silly around my friends i like to be alone when i get the chance. Thats when im real deep and emo. Also im under a lot of depression

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 30, 2007, 2:45:09 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHere


Eyes, Hair, and Skin: her eye color is hazel. it is mostly pearl grey at the time. sometimes its pearl green then partliy pearl blue. but the hair is black

Outfit: Sailor Scout Outfit with the Colors of Yellow and Black. When she transforms Her Hair Gains Yellow/Blonde Highlights...

I think thats It for her, Tell me if I got anything wrong ;D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on July 30, 2007, 11:03:29 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderno its always black with lbonde lowlites but im glad that ppl r volinteering for this real fast

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 30, 2007, 12:03:55 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol yeah =D lol

PunkWolfGirl on July 27, 2007, 9:16:24 AM

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PunkWolfGirlName: Moonara Pendragon

Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Star

Element/Power: Darkness/Ice

Planet *if You have one*: Earth xD

Transformation Name: YinYang Power!

Transformation Decription: The Power Stick Is Held Firmly In A Diagonal position. The Tip of It Turns Into A Shining Star But Within Seconds, The Star Is Consumed In Darkness, Which Covers Moonara's Body. The Black Smog, Soon Disappears, leaving her With A Sailor Scouts Outfit On Her.

Name of Attacks: 'Dark Star!' 'Oblivionizer!' And 'Moonlit Death!'

Sailor Scout Outfit: All Gems And Such ARe Red. Same Uniform As Sailor Moon's Basically, But On Sailor moon's What is White Is Black, on Sailor Star's.

If your Parent's Are Sailor Scouts, What Were their Names:

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 29, 2007, 11:39:35 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskohhh I am soo Freakin stupid, I forgot to ask...

Hair, Eye, and Skin Color:

PunkWolfGirl on July 27, 2007, 9:54:21 AM

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PunkWolfGirlSailor Black Hole Sounds Good! ^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 27, 2007, 11:42:32 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol YAY!!! I really wanted someone to pick that name! lol

PunkWolfGirl on July 27, 2007, 9:31:41 AM

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PunkWolfGirlYeah Lol..... I DUNNO =S Help Meeee. xD

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 27, 2007, 9:40:39 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskSailor Milky Way? Black Hole? Big Dipper? Crater? Little Dipper? lol Anyone Can use those if they'd like, I like all of those names =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 27, 2007, 9:23:14 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskSorry =( Your Sailor Scout Name can't be sailor Star BEcuz there is a sailor star all ready, Lol there is 3 of them! lol could you pick a different name?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 29, 2007, 11:38:21 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskName: Can't tell ya who he is!

Sailor Scout Name: Tuxedo Mini Mask

Element/Power: The Power of the Sun, Not Fire

Planet: The Sun

Name of attacks: Golden Bullet, Sun Blade, Star Bolts, Sun Barrier, Sun Crystal Power!

Transofrmation: Sun Crystal Power!!!

Transformation Description: I pull Out my Sun Crystal. The Crystal Glows a Bright Yellowish Gold. The Crystal Sprouts White Wings and Flutters All Around Him Followed by a Trail of Golden Star Dust. The Crystal Circles all Around his Chest as The Dust Forms Glowing Golden Armor on his Torso. The Armor Flashes a Bright Golden color And when the flash Fades his Armor is now a Golden Tuxedo!!! His Sun Symbol on his forhead glows, and His Hair goes from blonde to Gold!!! as He grabs the Fluttering Crystal and places it over his eyes and he turns around and it's his mask!

Outfit: A Golden Tuxedo with a Winged White Mask With the Sun Crystal in the Center of it

Other info: N/A

There is his profile =D!!!

Moon_Princess on July 27, 2007, 1:59:08 PM

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Moon_PrincessHmm...okay.
Would "Sailor Selene" be okay?
Or "Sailor Tsukiko?"
Or "Sailor Full Moon"

They all moon related. :p lol.


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 29, 2007, 8:55:43 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHere what about Purnima! It meens Full moon Too!!! lol So pic one and give me your info ASAP, I really wana start this thing =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 29, 2007, 8:30:12 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskUmmm... *Goes into deep thought* Well... I would Let you use Full Moon EXCEPT, it sounds TO plain... ANYONE Know a word that meens Full Moon? Cuz IF anyone can find a word then Thats Meens, Moon Princess's OC will Be FalloutGAARHinder's OC Little Sister... WHY little sister? Becuz the Cresent Moon Comes Before the Full Moon =D

Moon_Princess on July 27, 2007, 9:35:37 AM

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Moon_PrincessLol, so is it okay? Or do I need to change it? ^^

If I need to change it you'll need to give me a little time to think, cuz I g2g for today. ^-^


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 27, 2007, 9:43:11 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskNope but You can have anything else that isn't already taken or has to do with natur or the earth we live on =D

Moon_Princess on July 27, 2007, 8:48:29 AM

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Moon_PrincessSure, I'd love to join. ^^ But you'll need to give me some time to think out all the info.
Would the name, "Sailor Luna" be okay? ^^


~Moon_Princess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 27, 2007, 9:05:14 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskWell it would be... But their is already a Sailor Luna IN the Game Version and Some what the Manga Version Of Sailor Moon. lol Luna the Cat is a scout, lol Who knew?

AlleyCat17 on July 27, 2007, 8:31:29 AM

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AlleyCat17hey i want to be a sailor scout but befor i tell you my info can you tell me what is a Transformation Name and Transformation Decription and give me a example ok.then i'll give my info when i can come up with more info ok.which should be by monday or sooner.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on July 27, 2007, 9:00:49 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskTransformation Name is what you Shout Before you Transform

And transformation Description is A Description of what happeneds when you transform... Example, I'll Just Randomly Pick something... YOU CAN BE IT, IF you want, But this is just to give you an example... Actually I would Really Like A sAilor Black Hole lol

Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Black Hole

Transformation Name: Black Light Power!

Transformation Description: The tip of the Power Stick is Up againist Her Chest and The Tip Of the Power Stick begens to Mimic A Black Hole and Sucks A Glowing Armor on her and Stars Burst Everywhere and the Glowing Armor Appears To Be A Sailor Scouts Outfit.