Serving Naruto and Sakura
Submitted January 28, 2010 Updated August 25, 2012 Status Complete | My OC is forced to play servant to Naruto and Sakura. He must ignore his own dreams to see that Sakura and Naruto live happily ever after- either as a couple, or as the two strongest shinobi ever.
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Anime/Manga » Naruto series |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Arc 1, Chapter 1: Captured
Submitted: January 28, 2010 • Updated: January 28, 2010
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Chapter 2 - "Captured" Arc- Chapter 2
Submitted: February 2, 2010 • Updated: February 2, 2010
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Chapter 3 - "Captured" Arc- Chapter 3
Submitted: February 9, 2010 • Updated: February 9, 2010
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Chapter 4 - "Captured" Arc- Chapter 4
Submitted: February 17, 2010 • Updated: June 8, 2010
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Chapter 5 - 'Captured' Arc; Chapter 5
Submitted: February 23, 2010 • Updated: June 8, 2010
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Chapter 6 - 'Captured' Arc; Chapter 6
Submitted: February 27, 2010 • Updated: July 17, 2010
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Chapter 7 - 'Captured' Arc; Chapter 7
Submitted: March 5, 2010 • Updated: June 8, 2010
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Chapter 8 - Arc Iii: Comrades- Chapter 1
Submitted: March 15, 2010 • Updated: July 23, 2010
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Chapter 9 - Arc Iii 'Comrades'- Chapter 2
Submitted: March 19, 2010 • Updated: March 19, 2010
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Chapter 10 - Arc Iiii- 'Protect the Future' Chapter 1
Submitted: March 22, 2010 • Updated: March 22, 2010
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Chapter 11 - ArcIiii 'Protect the Future' Chapter 2
Submitted: March 27, 2010 • Updated: March 27, 2010
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Chapter 12 - Arc II: Love and Combat- Chapter 1
Submitted: April 1, 2010 • Updated: April 1, 2010
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Chapter 13 - Arc II: Love and Combat- Chapter 2
Submitted: April 5, 2010 • Updated: April 5, 2010
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Chapter 14 - Arc II: Love and Combat- Chapter 3
Submitted: April 12, 2010 • Updated: April 12, 2010
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Chapter 15 - ArcII: Love and Combat- Chapter 4
Submitted: April 16, 2010 • Updated: April 16, 2010
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Chapter 16 - Arc IIii- Internal Conflict: Chapter 1
Submitted: April 20, 2010 • Updated: April 20, 2010
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Chapter 17 - Arc IIii: Interal Conflict- Chapter 2
Submitted: April 23, 2010 • Updated: April 23, 2010
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Chapter 18 - ArcIIii: Internal Conflict- Chapter 3
Submitted: April 26, 2010 • Updated: April 26, 2010
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Chapter 19 - ArcIIii: Internal Conflict- Chapter 4
Submitted: April 28, 2010 • Updated: April 28, 2010
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Chapter 20 - ArcIIiii: Saving Grace- Chapter 1
Submitted: May 1, 2010 • Updated: May 1, 2010
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Chapter 21 - ArcIIiii: Saving Grace- Chapter 2
Submitted: May 6, 2010 • Updated: May 6, 2010
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Chapter 22 - ArcIIiii: Saving Grace- Chapter 3
Submitted: May 10, 2010 • Updated: May 10, 2010
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Chapter 23 - ArcIII: Seperation- Chapter 1
Submitted: May 17, 2010 • Updated: May 17, 2010
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Chapter 24 - ArcIII-Seperation- Chapter 2
Submitted: May 22, 2010 • Updated: May 25, 2010
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Chapter 25 - Arc III- Seperation: Chapter 3
Submitted: June 3, 2010 • Updated: June 3, 2010
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Chapter 26 - ArcIII: Seperation- Chapter 4
Submitted: June 7, 2010 • Updated: June 7, 2010
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Chapter 27 - Arc IV: Harsh Reality- Chapter 1
Submitted: June 15, 2010 • Updated: June 15, 2010
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Chapter 28 - Arc IV: Harsh Reality- Chapter 2
Submitted: June 22, 2010 • Updated: June 22, 2010
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Chapter 29 - Arc IV: Harsh Reality- Chapter 3
Submitted: June 26, 2010 • Updated: June 26, 2010
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Chapter 30 - Arc IV: Harsh Reality- Chapter 4
Submitted: June 30, 2010 • Updated: June 30, 2010
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Chapter 31 - Arc IVii: Deep Secrets-Chapter 1
Submitted: July 3, 2010 • Updated: July 3, 2010
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Chapter 32 - ArcIVii: Deep Secrets-Chapter 2
Submitted: July 7, 2010 • Updated: July 7, 2010
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Chapter 33 - ArcIVii: Deep Secrets-Chapter 3
Submitted: July 20, 2010 • Updated: July 20, 2010
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Chapter 34 - ArcIVii-Deep Secrets: Chapter 4
Submitted: August 2, 2010 • Updated: August 2, 2010
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Chapter 35 - Arc V: Broken- Chapter 1
Submitted: August 12, 2010 • Updated: August 13, 2010
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Chapter 36 - Arc V: Broken- Chapter 2
Submitted: August 23, 2010 • Updated: August 23, 2010
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Chapter 37 - Arc V: Broken- Chapter 3
Submitted: September 3, 2010 • Updated: September 3, 2010
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Chapter 38 - Arc V: Broken- Chapter 4
Submitted: September 13, 2010 • Updated: September 13, 2010
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Chapter 39 - Arc VI: Kyuubi Unleashed- Chapter 1
Submitted: September 22, 2010 • Updated: September 22, 2010
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Chapter 40 - Arc VI: Kyuubi Unleashed- Chapter 2
Submitted: October 4, 2010 • Updated: October 4, 2010
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Chapter 41 - Arc VI: Kyuubi Unleashed- Chapter 3
Submitted: October 13, 2010 • Updated: October 21, 2010
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Chapter 42 - Arc VIii: Deep Inside- Chapter 1
Submitted: October 21, 2010 • Updated: October 21, 2010
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Chapter 43 - Arc VIii: Deep Inside- Chapter 2
Submitted: November 1, 2010 • Updated: November 1, 2010
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Chapter 44 - Arc VIii: Deep Inside- Chapter 3
Submitted: November 10, 2010 • Updated: November 10, 2010
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Chapter 45 - Arc VIii: Deep Inside- Chapter 4
Submitted: November 19, 2010 • Updated: November 19, 2010
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Chapter 46 - ArcVII: Still Human- Chapter 1
Submitted: November 29, 2010 • Updated: November 29, 2010
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Chapter 47 - ArcVII: Still Human- Chapter 2
Submitted: December 14, 2010 • Updated: December 14, 2010
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Chapter 48 - Arc VII: Still Human- Chapter 2
Submitted: December 25, 2010 • Updated: December 25, 2010
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Chapter 49 - Arc VII: Still Human- Chapter 3
Submitted: January 3, 2011 • Updated: January 3, 2011
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Chapter 50 - Arc VII: Still Human- Chapter 4
Submitted: January 12, 2011 • Updated: January 12, 2011
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Chapter 51 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 1
Submitted: January 21, 2011 • Updated: January 21, 2011
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Chapter 52 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 2
Submitted: January 30, 2011 • Updated: January 30, 2011
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Chapter 53 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 3
Submitted: February 6, 2011 • Updated: February 6, 2011
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Chapter 54 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 4
Submitted: February 14, 2011 • Updated: February 14, 2011
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Chapter 55 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 5
Submitted: February 23, 2011 • Updated: February 23, 2011
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Chapter 56 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 6
Submitted: March 2, 2011 • Updated: March 2, 2011
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Chapter 57 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 7
Submitted: March 8, 2011 • Updated: March 8, 2011
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Chapter 58 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 8
Submitted: March 16, 2011 • Updated: March 16, 2011
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Chapter 59 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 9
Submitted: March 26, 2011 • Updated: March 26, 2011
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Chapter 60 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 10
Submitted: April 4, 2011 • Updated: April 4, 2011
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Chapter 61 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 11
Submitted: April 13, 2011 • Updated: April 13, 2011
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Chapter 62 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh- Chapter 12
Submitted: April 28, 2011 • Updated: April 28, 2011
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Chapter 63 - Arc VIII: Death of the Flesh-Chapter 13
Submitted: May 12, 2011 • Updated: May 12, 2011
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Chapter 64 - Arc IX: In Demon's Hands- Chapter 1
Submitted: May 30, 2011 • Updated: May 30, 2011
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Chapter 65 - Arc IX: In Demon's Hands- Chapter 2
Submitted: June 20, 2011 • Updated: June 20, 2011
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Chapter 66 - Arc IX: In Demon's Hands- Chapter 3
Submitted: June 29, 2011 • Updated: June 29, 2011
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Chapter 67 - Arc X: True Form- Chapter 1
Submitted: July 21, 2011 • Updated: July 23, 2011
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Chapter 68 - Arc X: True Form- Chapter 2
Submitted: July 28, 2011 • Updated: July 28, 2011
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Chapter 69 - Arc X: True Form- Chapter 3
Submitted: August 7, 2011 • Updated: August 7, 2011
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Chapter 70 - Arc X: True Form- Chapter 4
Submitted: August 18, 2011 • Updated: August 18, 2011
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Chapter 71 - Arc X: True Form- Chapter 5
Submitted: August 24, 2011 • Updated: August 24, 2011
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Chapter 72 - Arc X: True Form- Chapter 6
Submitted: September 4, 2011 • Updated: September 4, 2011
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Chapter 73 - Arc X: True Form- Chapter 7
Submitted: September 19, 2011 • Updated: September 19, 2011
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Chapter 74 - Arc XI: Companionship- Chapter 1
Submitted: September 28, 2011 • Updated: September 28, 2011
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Chapter 75 - Arc XI: Companionship- Chapter 2
Submitted: October 8, 2011 • Updated: October 8, 2011
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Chapter 76 - Arc XI: Companionship- Chapter 3
Submitted: October 17, 2011 • Updated: October 17, 2011
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Chapter 77 - Arc XI: Companionship- Chapter 4
Submitted: October 28, 2011 • Updated: October 28, 2011
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Chapter 78 - Arc XI: Companionship- Chapter 5
Submitted: November 4, 2011 • Updated: November 4, 2011
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Chapter 79 - Arc XI: Companionship- Chapter 6
Submitted: November 9, 2011 • Updated: November 9, 2011
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Chapter 80 - Arc XII: Devastated- Chapter 1
Submitted: November 19, 2011 • Updated: November 19, 2011
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Chapter 81 - Arc XII: Devastated- Chapter 2
Submitted: November 28, 2011 • Updated: December 5, 2011
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Chapter 82 - Arc XIIi: What If?- Chapter 1
Submitted: December 6, 2011 • Updated: December 6, 2011
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Chapter 83 - Arc XIIi: What if?- Chapter 2
Submitted: December 15, 2011 • Updated: December 15, 2011
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Chapter 84 - Arc XIIii: What If?- Chapter 1
Submitted: December 21, 2011 • Updated: January 1, 2012
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Chapter 85 - ArcXIIii:What If?- Chapter 2
Submitted: December 30, 2011 • Updated: December 30, 2011
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Chapter 86 - ArcXIIii: What If?- Chapter 3
Submitted: January 9, 2012 • Updated: January 9, 2012
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Chapter 87 - Arc XIIiii: What If?- Chapter 1
Submitted: January 18, 2012 • Updated: January 18, 2012
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Chapter 88 - Arc XIIiii: What If?- Chapter 2
Submitted: January 27, 2012 • Updated: January 27, 2012
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Chapter 89 - Arc XIIiii: What If?- Chapter 3
Submitted: February 6, 2012 • Updated: February 6, 2012
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Chapter 90 - Arc XIIiii: What If?- Chapter 4
Submitted: February 16, 2012 • Updated: February 16, 2012
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Chapter 91 - Arc XIIiii: What If?- Chapter 5
Submitted: February 28, 2012 • Updated: February 28, 2012
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Chapter 92 - Arc XIII: The Real World- Chapter 1
Submitted: March 12, 2012 • Updated: March 21, 2012
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Chapter 93 - Arc XIII: The Real World- Chapter 2
Submitted: March 21, 2012 • Updated: March 21, 2012
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Chapter 94 - ArcXIII: Real World- Chapter 3
Submitted: March 30, 2012 • Updated: March 30, 2012
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Chapter 95 - ArcXIV: Uchiha Legacy vs. Heaven's Temper- Chapter 1
Submitted: April 7, 2012 • Updated: April 7, 2012
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Chapter 96 - Arc XIV: Uchiha Legacy vs. Heaven's Temper- Chapter 2
Submitted: April 9, 2012 • Updated: April 9, 2012
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Chapter 97 - FINAL ARC: Part 1
Submitted: April 21, 2012 • Updated: April 21, 2012
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Chapter 98 - FINAL ARC: Part 2
Submitted: April 30, 2012 • Updated: April 30, 2012
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Chapter 99 - FINAL ARC: Part 3
Submitted: May 10, 2012 • Updated: May 10, 2012
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Chapter 100 - FINAL ARC: Part 4
Submitted: May 14, 2012 • Updated: May 14, 2012
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Chapter 101 - FINAL CHAPTER
Submitted: May 18, 2012 • Updated: May 18, 2012
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Chapter 102 - "After" Arc- 1
Submitted: May 27, 2012 • Updated: May 27, 2012
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Chapter 103 - 'After' Arc- 2
Submitted: May 31, 2012 • Updated: May 31, 2012
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Chapter 104 - 'After' Arc-3
Submitted: June 8, 2012 • Updated: June 8, 2012
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Chapter 105 - 'After' Arc- 4
Submitted: June 17, 2012 • Updated: June 17, 2012
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Chapter 106 - 'After' Arc- 5
Submitted: July 3, 2012 • Updated: July 3, 2012
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Chapter 107 - 'After' Arc- 6
Submitted: July 16, 2012 • Updated: July 16, 2012
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Chapter 108 - 'After' Arc- 7
Submitted: August 2, 2012 • Updated: August 2, 2012
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Chapter 109 - 'After' Arc- 8
Submitted: August 14, 2012 • Updated: August 14, 2012
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Chapter 110 - FINAL
Submitted: August 25, 2012 • Updated: August 25, 2012
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YunieXTidus on August 28, 2012, 5:25:20 PM
Love this ending! Happy tears right now. I loved reading this. andr28a is right, a LOT of things changed, but it all worked out for the best! Loved it. Brilliant work, my friend. :)YunieXTidus on August 28, 2012, 5:12:30 PM
Aww. Poor Shiroko...YunieXTidus on August 28, 2012, 5:07:09 PM
This is getting intense.YunieXTidus on August 28, 2012, 5:00:26 PM
YAY YUJI! Got all giddy and excited for him at the beginning. :3 This sounds like an interesting battle, as well...YunieXTidus on August 28, 2012, 9:31:36 AM
Lovers can't catch a break, eh? Damn.YunieXTidus on August 28, 2012, 9:22:15 AM
This is certainly something.andr28a on August 26, 2012, 10:37:18 AM
T_T I can't believe it's all over. A hell of a lot of things changed during the course of this story. Some good and some bad. But I will say this; I enjoyed the heck out of reading this.andr28a on August 20, 2012, 6:43:28 AM
I dread reading the next chapterandr28a on August 4, 2012, 12:45:31 AM
I still get the sense that something... bad... will happen soon.andr28a on July 18, 2012, 10:41:34 AM
Oh where will this go...? Keep it upandr28a on July 4, 2012, 10:46:08 AM
Kaname! Don't tell me he's a double agent! All this sneaking and plotting is so nerve racking. You've got the this tension thing going thats for sureandr28a on June 18, 2012, 3:51:01 AM
FINALLY! Although it was somewhat ruined, Yuji finally had his moment with his lover.YunieXTidus on June 17, 2012, 1:36:53 PM
This is really interesting. Poor Kuroko.YunieXTidus on June 17, 2012, 1:30:34 PM
Hmm.YunieXTidus on June 17, 2012, 1:25:19 PM
Lee... Gai... T_TGreat ending though!
YunieXTidus on June 17, 2012, 1:12:30 PM
The ending of this chapter was great, but WHAT. THE. HELL!!!YunieXTidus on June 17, 2012, 1:01:56 PM
Nice! This unfolds in my head just beautifully.YunieXTidus on June 17, 2012, 12:51:02 PM
Love this. Still want to punch Sasuke in the nads though.andr28a on June 9, 2012, 9:15:02 AM
Is Yuji forever going to be the plaything of destiny, or fate. He is always being pushed towards something, I find it rather tragic. Great update, keep it up.andr28a on June 3, 2012, 5:59:30 AM
Ohh the mystery of the Ten no Kishootsu is begining to show itself, at last.YunieXTidus on May 30, 2012, 10:56:29 AM
Loving this. Poor Yuji. Never appreciated for the great work he does.YunieXTidus on May 30, 2012, 8:05:57 AM
Wow. Feeling right proud of Yuji now! It'll be interesting to see how this pans out.YunieXTidus on May 30, 2012, 7:59:19 AM
This is great! Not looking good for Sasuke.andr28a on May 28, 2012, 8:22:49 AM
0_0 Well for a start why did Shiroko do that, and second, what on earth just happend.For an aftermath, this is a rather ominous way to continue
andr28a on May 18, 2012, 8:09:01 PM
Well that was an unexpected way to end. I thought the 7th pain would use the Rinne rebirth thing, but I guess not. But all in all a very bitter sweet way to end the story. Been a great read.andr28a on May 15, 2012, 4:15:47 AM
YUJI!!! T-T Damn... not just him but the others as well. This is cruelandr28a on May 11, 2012, 7:26:37 AM
Good move on Yuji's part with the Genjutsu, very clever. This is a truely chaotic fight.andr28a on April 30, 2012, 8:50:22 PM
The battle against the paths of Pain. Let's see what outcome can be drawn with Team Kakashi unitedandr28a on April 22, 2012, 5:09:26 AM
The gears of fate are starting to slow I think. Let's see what happens now.Starting to worry about the chapters, is there not a limit on them? I remember there was at one point.
nextguardian on April 22, 2012, 10:42:29 AM
150 is the limit, I think. At least, that's where my longest fic got halted.andr28a on April 10, 2012, 12:27:29 AM
Never have I seen Sasuke so... broken. I hope this works well in the endandr28a on April 8, 2012, 6:50:21 AM
Go Yuji go. Very impressiveYunieXTidus on March 30, 2012, 11:06:20 AM
Can't wait for the next installment!andr28a on March 30, 2012, 8:52:35 AM
And so it beginsYunieXTidus on March 24, 2012, 10:10:17 AM
I get the feeling that more shoot is about to hit the fan! This is intense.YunieXTidus on March 24, 2012, 8:18:22 AM
Poor Yuji. No matter what he does, he can't catch a break.andr28a on March 22, 2012, 5:25:43 AM
War on Sasuke? I hope Yuji knows what he's doingandr28a on March 12, 2012, 10:10:09 PM
Damn it, Yuji's curse of being sinlge strikes again.YunieXTidus on March 5, 2012, 1:45:20 AM
xD Oh Yuji... Great work here.
andr28a on March 2, 2012, 6:14:40 AM
Even in death the Lord Third still has some strings to pull in the village. Well doneandr28a on February 18, 2012, 7:59:11 AM
Never underestimate the power of the female bodyYunieXTidus on February 16, 2012, 12:45:53 PM
I like this! I love how ino just strips and bosses Yuji around when he's powerless to protest. xDYunieXTidus on February 10, 2012, 4:30:36 PM
Well. I was all smiles and grins throughout this until Naruto decided to stir the shoot-pot. Ino and Yuji make a great couple. I can't wait to see how this will play out.YunieXTidus on February 10, 2012, 4:20:53 PM
I love this. I remember the Yuji/Ino pairing you did for a one-shot, and this seems to be more of the same awesomeness. Can't wait to read more!andr28a on February 8, 2012, 6:08:12 AM
Uh oh, I hope Yuji knows what he is doing... going against Naruto can be unwiseandr28a on January 29, 2012, 8:18:11 AM
Hrm well this could turn out to be an interesting couple.andr28a on January 19, 2012, 6:45:54 PM
Rage is the most powerful and most dangerous emotion of all. Anger begets anger and the cycle contionious getting worse. Seeing Yuji lose his cool like this is quite the interesting treatYunieXTidus on January 18, 2012, 2:16:35 PM
This gave me cold chills. Poor Yuji.YunieXTidus on January 18, 2012, 2:09:54 PM
This is absolutely beautiful. It actually brought tears to my eyes.YunieXTidus on January 18, 2012, 2:02:17 PM
Love it.YunieXTidus on January 18, 2012, 1:55:31 PM
I really like this. In a way, I almost like miko and Yuji better than azami and Yuji as a couple. There's just something so simple, so innocent about their relationship, even as lovers. It's refreshing.YunieXTidus on January 18, 2012, 1:46:22 PM
Fast paces, but great. For a moment, I really thought we lost Yuji!YunieXTidus on January 18, 2012, 1:35:12 PM
Interesting, indeed.andr28a on January 12, 2012, 2:53:42 AM
I like this, I like this very much. I think this portion of the story desires expanion. As in having this what if be a new story entirely. Yuji being... wel... older and such.andr28a on December 31, 2011, 9:24:54 PM
Again very cool. I think it should be what if ch4 thoughnextguardian on January 1, 2012, 8:45:19 AM
Oops. I screwed up the order, but in a different way. The previous chapter should have been '1', not '3'. My mistake.andr28a on December 22, 2011, 8:26:37 AM
Ohh ho ho, that was very near the border my friend, very near. But you did a good job in 'containing' what you were going for in this chapter.andr28a on December 15, 2011, 2:24:03 AM
Don't have much to say, other then I love this. A different speed then your usualandr28a on December 9, 2011, 3:48:07 AM
Oh ho now this is a scenario that I likeandr28a on December 4, 2011, 6:42:02 AM
Geez that was pure crazyness on Yuji's part. But I am curious as to what the other self would do to the world if he was in control...andr28a on December 4, 2011, 6:29:26 AM
What was behind Sasuke's double doors I wonderYunieXTidus on November 28, 2011, 1:47:55 PM
:O *hits Yuji with something large and heavy* Stupid boy!hmm... This is going to be interesting.
YunieXTidus on November 28, 2011, 1:47:23 PM
This is seriously intense. Poor Yuji. He really can never catch a break.YunieXTidus on November 9, 2011, 11:45:06 PM
I really love this! It's about damned time!!!And nice cliffhanger ending. No warning at all, just poof. (Caught up now, Mr. Impatient!)
andr28a on November 10, 2011, 6:17:21 AM
Anout time Yuji got some, he needs it more then anyone.And where did said man vanish of to
YunieXTidus on November 9, 2011, 11:38:13 PM
This is a really cute chapter. I liked the light tone of it compared to the dark foreboding of the previous chapters. It's a nice break, and well-suited.YunieXTidus on November 6, 2011, 9:26:52 AM
Lol I love this! It's bout time Yuji got some play.andr28a on November 5, 2011, 10:56:20 PM
Aww how adorableandr28a on November 3, 2011, 7:29:32 AM
Turn around victory coming right up. Wish I had that kinda luckandr28a on November 3, 2011, 7:10:37 AM
I feel that same pain Yuji is going through, it's annoying as heck.YunieXTidus on October 17, 2011, 1:57:36 PM
Love this chapter! Poor Yuji, having to meet his replacement. You gotta love Sakura, rising to all sorts of occasions!andr28a on October 9, 2011, 6:27:56 AM
Wow, Sakura has gotten rahter... bold... in the sex drive deparment. She might even give Azami a run for her money if she keeps that up... maybeYunieXTidus on October 8, 2011, 1:52:11 PM
Interesting...andr28a on September 30, 2011, 7:18:48 AM
Damnit Azami!!!! Agh I just want to strangle that girl right now! What are you doing?Sad thing is I just went through something of the same experience 2 weeks ago T_T
YunieXTidus on September 28, 2011, 2:35:45 PM
Nice chapter. Finally, letting us off the cliffhanger! Can't wait to see what you do next.
YunieXTidus on September 25, 2011, 1:46:30 PM
Very nice chapter. I agree with andr28a. More!!! Immediately!andr28a on September 20, 2011, 12:51:06 AM
Damn you cliffhanger endingsandr28a on September 18, 2011, 2:30:00 AM
Seriously who was the first Ten no Kishootsuandr28a on September 18, 2011, 2:19:29 AM
I think you should start being a romance novalist. The ending with Naruto and Sakura was brilliantandr28a on September 18, 2011, 2:04:55 AM
No, no stay happy Yuji. You were doing well there keep goingYunieXTidus on September 4, 2011, 4:49:50 PM
Love this! It's good to see Yuji with some sort of confidence, finally. xDYunieXTidus on August 24, 2011, 1:54:45 PM
I loved that little bit with Naruto and Sakura at the end. Really sweet, tender moment right there.Do I detect a future cat-fight between Azami and Asuna?
YunieXTidus on August 21, 2011, 2:06:17 PM
Aww, of COURSE Yuji doesn't get any. You're really horrible to that poor kid.andr28a on August 17, 2011, 6:41:48 AM
I predict a cat fight between Azami and this new girl.andr28a on August 17, 2011, 6:28:16 AM
This is going to be a whirlwind battle of emotionsandr28a on August 17, 2011, 6:18:27 AM
Yuji just get with Azami already, she's good for it... even if you do pass out for awhile though...andr28a on August 17, 2011, 4:06:59 AM
Yuji vs Sasuke? Oh hellYunieXTidus on August 15, 2011, 2:04:58 PM
Fight scene = awesome! I look forward to seeing how Shoki develops.YES! Finally, Yuji can get some action!
YunieXTidus on August 2, 2011, 3:05:43 PM
I can't wait to see this. (SEEEE? Still reading!!)YunieXTidus on August 2, 2011, 2:58:36 PM
xD Azami is quite right about Yuji, I'm afraid. Poor kid. Seeeeee? I'm reading!YunieXTidus on June 29, 2011, 3:23:38 PM
Whoa! This is gonna be good. Yuji and Sasuke... that's like, his worst self-esteem nightmare!YunieXTidus on June 25, 2011, 1:36:03 PM
This is getting thicker and thicker. I can't wait to see where this goes next. Great chapter!andr28a on June 21, 2011, 8:55:49 AM
The plot now thickining is all I can say.andr28a on June 1, 2011, 8:04:04 AM
A gang of blood craving undead. This will be a challenge and a halfYunieXTidus on May 31, 2011, 1:31:41 PM
Of course he would walk into the middle of an immortal army. xD Yuji's got some damn rotten luck.andr28a on May 12, 2011, 10:37:32 PM
How cruel are you going to be to Yuji in this story? So tragic hereYunieXTidus on May 12, 2011, 12:16:31 PM
Poor, poor Yuji. It's really one thing after another. I just wanna hug the poor guy. Although that might add to his stress! xD This chapter really tugs at your heartstrings.andr28a on May 2, 2011, 5:55:50 AM
Gah what at the end? You can't leave me hanging like this? This is intenseYunieXTidus on April 29, 2011, 1:34:44 AM
Wow, man. This is one intense chapter. Things just seem to be getting more and more dire. I can't wait to see how this turns out! Great work here.andr28a on April 18, 2011, 4:45:56 AM
Somewhat a macabre chapter due to the disection on the several pains but a good oneYunieXTidus on April 13, 2011, 10:23:48 PM
Very nice update! This is sooo not good.andr28a on April 6, 2011, 3:46:51 AM
This has turned into an epic battleYunieXTidus on April 4, 2011, 7:51:37 AM
Very dramatic, suspenseful chapter. Good work here.--
Note, though, 'firey' is 'fiery.' It seems like it would be spelled the other way, but it isn't. The english language is weird. xD
andr28a on March 27, 2011, 9:26:26 AM
I feel the fristration of having a younger generation beat you in things. I know the annoyance indeed.Ohh whats going on at the end? Pain?
YunieXTidus on March 26, 2011, 1:31:30 PM
I totally understand Azami's and Yuji's frustration. The next generation is surpassing them. Nice, suspenseful ending. Good work here.
andr28a on March 17, 2011, 11:56:03 AM
I found this a relaxing chapter to read. I loved the detail of the ritual, very peaceful.It only stopped being peaceful when you laid out that bombshell at the end!!!!
YunieXTidus on March 16, 2011, 1:58:21 PM
O_Oandr28a on March 9, 2011, 8:04:07 AM
Yay Azami's back at the forefront again.I've just noticed something in this chapter. Azami's mindset over her guilt is similar to how Yuji's mind works over... well pretty much alot of things.
Great chapter by the way
andr28a on March 3, 2011, 8:30:59 AM
He should get the guts needed to make himself happy. He needs to realise that.YunieXTidus on March 2, 2011, 1:19:36 PM
Finally, an emotional outburst. They're usually embarrassing, but healthy as hell! Poor, poor Yuji. He always gets the shortest of the short end of the stick.andr28a on February 24, 2011, 1:41:49 AM
I wonder what Naruto will do... so far he's been trained by others to become strong, so I'm curious as to what he could do by himself.Neutrel chakra huh? This proves interesting
YunieXTidus on February 23, 2011, 9:59:10 AM
Another woman for Yuji! For somebody who's so girl-shy, he certainly seems to have a lot of suitors. xDNice chapter here.
andr28a on February 14, 2011, 8:09:10 AM
Was wondering when Uzume (Or should I say now Miko) told Shoki about his past. Excelent chapterYunieXTidus on February 14, 2011, 7:26:39 AM
Nice chapter. I liked hearing about Uzume's past (and Shoki's.) Can't wait for the next update!andr28a on February 7, 2011, 1:05:02 AM
Phew everything is not as bad as I inititally suspectedYunieXTidus on February 6, 2011, 1:37:13 PM
Awww, Yuji! He's always alone. :(andr28a on January 31, 2011, 2:07:15 AM
If this is Hidan then we're in big trouble. Is Uzume planning to kill herself?YunieXTidus on January 30, 2011, 10:42:41 AM
Wow. You know, I've also warmed up to 'SakuNaru' lately. Even though, in my heart, there's only room for KakaSaku. But this is a great chapter, I can't wait to see more!andr28a on January 21, 2011, 11:24:05 PM
nextguardian on January 22, 2011, 12:15:59 PM
"Have you been watching SOul Eater recently? Ryouko's insane halucinations and actions are similar to that of people infected with Kishin Asura's madness wavelength.Great chapter "
Honestly, I haven't. Those were ideas I randomnly came up with.
Just deleted your comment by mistake. Damn. Quoted above for posterity.
YunieXTidus on January 21, 2011, 10:31:48 AM
Wow! Things are getting really intense. I can't believe you left it on THAT cliffhanger. D: Great chapter, though.
andr28a on January 13, 2011, 1:56:17 AM
Yuji? Dying? Well he comes close to it 90% of the time. But still... Dying?YunieXTidus on January 12, 2011, 11:21:40 AM
Say WHAT? And Yuji's despair is tangible! It actually brought tears to my eyes.
YunieXTidus on January 4, 2011, 1:30:08 PM
Poor Jaraiya, being hated for doing something he felt he had to do.Poor Ryouko! It's a wonder his spirit isn't totally broken. I just wanna hug the poor guy!
andr28a on January 3, 2011, 11:44:03 PM
Okay so maybe Ryouko's life is a bit harsh and depressing and painful... but look on the bright side... wait... in his mind... there is on bright side...YunieXTidus on January 3, 2011, 3:14:37 PM
Poor, poor Ryouko. He just can't get a break! This is definitely getting intense. Can't wait to see what happens next.YunieXTidus on December 26, 2010, 11:51:32 PM
This is getting intense. I can't wait for the next chapter!andr28a on December 25, 2010, 8:11:58 PM
All hell is about to break loseandr28a on December 15, 2010, 2:00:12 AM
What's going to happen next? I can't wait.YunieXTidus on December 9, 2010, 8:33:38 AM
Very interesting. Can't wait to read more!YunieXTidus on December 9, 2010, 8:28:30 AM
nice chapter. i like being able to see some of ryouko's back-story.YunieXTidus on December 9, 2010, 8:19:33 AM
Very intriguing, indeed.andr28a on November 30, 2010, 2:21:22 AM
It's been awhile since I've seen anything related to the Land of waves. Good jobandr28a on November 19, 2010, 4:21:44 PM
A very touching chapterandr28a on November 14, 2010, 2:30:44 AM
WOW That was a revelation and a half.YunieXTidus on November 2, 2010, 11:54:05 AM
I find the two Ryouko's to be fascinating. it's a great story-telling method. Keep up the good work!andr28a on November 1, 2010, 9:13:07 AM
Uzume's back story, nice. First time we ever hear about herself.I enjoyed this
YunieXTidus on October 30, 2010, 1:37:14 PM
Interesting. I wonder how Shoki will react to Ryouko's 'secret.'YunieXTidus on October 30, 2010, 1:29:44 PM
You are absolutely brilliant. I love this story.andr28a on October 22, 2010, 8:59:04 AM
Shoki will be a powerful shinobi once he masters his powers and learn not to be a social hermitandr28a on October 14, 2010, 7:46:11 AM
Good lord that was chaotic.Nice one
YunieXTidus on October 5, 2010, 2:59:34 PM
Lol i love the ending. But this is good, I can't wait for the next installment. :3andr28a on October 4, 2010, 8:36:28 AM
Lol at the end, poor Sakura.If Naruto and Ryouko keep going like this, Sakura and the others won't have anyone left to help.
This is getting more crazy by the minute
andr28a on September 23, 2010, 7:26:00 AM
INTENSE. Naruto is relentless and he isn't even in fox state one yetandr28a on September 17, 2010, 2:10:44 AM
Not good, Naruto has lost it.YunieXTidus on September 16, 2010, 1:18:10 PM
Oh, dear. He was poisoned! I'm so horribly impatient. :(YunieXTidus on September 7, 2010, 12:35:23 PM
Nice addition to a nice story. So, when/how did you first decide to start writing a fanfic? What got you inspired? :Pnextguardian on September 7, 2010, 2:17:12 PM
It's been a long time, actually. I've written a lot of fics. This particular one, however, I wanted to be different. I always try to make Ryouko a sympathetic, identifiable character. The unsung hero who never gets what he deserves through his own actions. I wanted a story with an underlying romantic concept, but with a completely Naruto premise. Hope that makes sense :)My inspiration came from reading Naruto Shippuden, and a good deal from some real life experiences, actually. Although my experiences are definitely not as dynamic as Ryouko's.
andr28a on September 4, 2010, 9:40:15 PM
Loved the ending here, very touching.YunieXTidus on August 30, 2010, 12:37:36 PM
Great addition. I just love this book. I'm watching the entire Naruto series because of this book. I'd seen a few episodes here and there. I'd forgotten how much fun it is so watch Naruto and Sasuke and Sakura mature and form bonds with one another. Not to mention Kakashi is fiiiiiiine.I started 4 days ago and I'm already on episode 70. Needless to say, I haven't been getting much sleep. :3
andr28a on August 23, 2010, 8:47:29 AM
Prophecy... Must Ryouko fulfil it? Since he's been trying to achive it, he's been through Hell and beyond.Great chapter
YunieXTidus on August 19, 2010, 2:34:11 PM
Indeed. Can't wait to see how this turns out.andr28a on August 13, 2010, 2:46:22 AM
I think Azami is meant for Ryouko. THey balance each other out.Great chapter
andr28a on August 2, 2010, 9:04:38 AM
While one problem is dealt with another takes it's placeNeopetgirl on July 21, 2010, 2:30:14 PM
The whole scene with Ryouko and Azami interested me. ...Azami really is intriguing, and I would like to find out more. I'm also aching to find out how the fight is going to turn out. Eep! For some reason, I'm kind of scared. All in all, great job. You really know how to tug us right from our seats! It's tense!
andr28a on July 21, 2010, 4:11:19 AM
"One Pain isn't enough" I shudder to see what happens nextThe plot in against suna seems to be falling into place. Or could it be falling apart. I'll have to wait and see.
Neopetgirl on July 17, 2010, 2:58:44 PM
I'm literally going "Aw..." at the moment. Ryouko's situation and how he feels through it, really does affect me as I read it. The emotion's incredibly strong here, and I can't say it's only this fic, I really feel it whenever I read anything from you. But dang... you're making me want to cry! Only in the third chapter- already? Well, good job! I'm going to read the next, which is the sixth, right? Seee, I remember XDNeopetgirl on July 16, 2010, 3:49:10 PM
She was trying to pickpocket Ryouko! Well, that was a turn of events, I wasn't expecting it. For some reason, before you revealed her identity I just had a feeling it was Azami, but when you described her I knew for sure.Also, I just love to read about Ryouko and Lady Tsunade challenging each other. I just do. XD
Well, very nice work! I can't wait to continue reading more. You're great at catching attention with your writing, I must say. It just pulls you right in. :D
Neopetgirl on July 13, 2010, 2:30:57 PM
Well, first off, I'd just like to say that I absolutely adore your writing style. And you may assume I'm just sugar-coating that statement, but I am in no way exaggerating, honestly. I can already tell I'm going to enjoy where this is headed. And let's face it, you really deserve the recognition and praise, and tons of it.I've always found your stories to have amazing depth, no joke. I love your character, for a number of reasons, and one, he's so real, imho. I really feel and buy it- his emotions- you know? So, in short, I like it. And I do intend on at least trying to read a chapter a day :) Nice job, kay?
P.S: It was so fun imagining all these things going in my head! That's a great sign when you're reading a story.
andr28a on July 8, 2010, 7:51:51 AM
Uzume is one tricky girl to deal with. Manually forcing the Amaterasu? That insane skillandr28a on July 4, 2010, 3:42:15 AM
Pein is here? Oh boy thats not good.andr28a on July 1, 2010, 2:51:32 AM
I like the idea of the water users in Suna. Makes sense in what role they play in it, but also makes Suna more interesting.YunieXTidus on June 30, 2010, 3:07:35 PM
well written! more, more, more!!!YunieXTidus on June 28, 2010, 7:59:32 AM
this is really really good. i can't wait to see what happens next!YunieXTidus on June 27, 2010, 1:10:02 PM
This is really good! I don't usually have time for fanfics. I'm glad I decided to click on this on a whim. :Pandr28a on June 27, 2010, 10:03:26 AM
Ryouko is not the only one intrigued about hearing Azami's little storyandr28a on June 23, 2010, 4:05:29 AM
Wow that was brave of Ryouko to kiss Azami out of the blue like that. Very rare for him to do that.andr28a on June 14, 2010, 9:03:03 PM
Ryouko's training is painful. His ever growing burns are bad enough, but when you include the sun and Azami, things become torture.Great chapter as always
andr28a on June 6, 2010, 9:07:15 PM
Ryouko and Azami training together? This will be fun.andr28a on June 4, 2010, 12:09:57 AM
It's good to see Azami again. Wonder what madness she'll bring to the table.andr28a on May 21, 2010, 9:29:54 PM
And so the mental torment continues.andr28a on May 18, 2010, 8:50:24 AM
Ooh I can't wait to see how things will develop now.Nice work
andr28a on May 11, 2010, 9:24:11 AM
You have a way with words, you know that? Itachi's words certainly bring cause of concern.andr28a on May 6, 2010, 9:37:50 PM
The Akatsuki, great, more trouble in this time of chaos.andr28a on May 2, 2010, 3:46:45 AM
Hrmm this will be interesting.andr28a on May 1, 2010, 1:49:06 AM
This is so unlike you, making small chapters like this. But it's a craker of one. Can't wait for the next.nextguardian on May 1, 2010, 12:04:08 PM
yeah, I know. This is one of those cases where I would have made Ryouko look too strong if I made the chapter longer. Plus, I miscalculated how many pages until the next arc. But, it worked out. Short and powerful, hopefully :)andr28a on April 26, 2010, 11:53:26 PM
Ohh things are goona turn chaotic. I love it.andr28a on April 23, 2010, 10:35:44 PM
Danzo. The sneaky old rat.andr28a on April 21, 2010, 12:05:10 AM
Very profound, is all I can sayandr28a on April 16, 2010, 11:08:53 PM
THat is a very high price to pay in order to gain great power. He nearly died from his body opening up.Great chapter
andr28a on April 13, 2010, 12:30:06 AM
Great chapter. But I'm a bit confused about what happened at the end, the chain thing. Do you mind explaining that part?nextguardian on April 13, 2010, 2:56:57 AM
There will be more to it later. Right now, it's kind of Ryouko's thoughts. But it has a connection with his new ability, so it'll become more clear soon.andr28a on April 6, 2010, 12:23:07 AM
I was starting to get worried that his story will have to go to the "Other site". Now the fight begins, can't wait to see how this goes.nextguardian on April 6, 2010, 3:39:09 AM
You're giving Ryouko too much credit! He'd never get that lucky! lol.andr28a on April 1, 2010, 11:03:21 PM
I was expecting a big fight but never expected this. WOW that certainly turns your head around.andr28a on March 28, 2010, 3:44:55 AM
Hrm very thought provoking. I'm curious to see what happens to power Ryouko has and when he HAS to use it.andr28a on March 23, 2010, 12:04:38 AM
Intense. I knew had a feeling bad things would happen (They always do when Ryouko is concerned) but I never expected this. Great Jobandr28a on March 20, 2010, 10:02:25 AM
Great chapter, I'm very interested in that clairvoyant's reading. Wonder what will happen.andr28a on March 14, 2010, 11:22:19 PM
Got a little confused to the sudden battle at the begining but it did make sense when I continued reading.Good chapter though
andr28a on March 5, 2010, 8:52:09 PM
Sakura = CuteAzami = Sexy
Which is better? Even I can't decide. Looking forward to the second arc.
andr28a on February 27, 2010, 9:18:01 PM
Azami is certainly a character.Great chapter
andr28a on February 23, 2010, 7:41:02 PM
I have underestimated Azami. She seems to just as cunning as or even more cunning then RyofuIf this is the Azami that will end up in the Co-op fic then the interaction between her and Ryofu will be well interesting
andr28a on February 18, 2010, 12:28:42 AM
A very.... um interesting battle *Clears throat* Good chapter.nextguardian on February 18, 2010, 1:22:47 PM
lol. I DID say this would be a more mature story.andr28a on February 9, 2010, 10:13:47 PM
Um you do realise that this chapter is an extention of you previous don't you?But whatever. I still enjoyed the parts you added in.
nextguardian on February 10, 2010, 11:30:52 AM
#*&$! I copy/pasted too much! Blagh. Oh well. So, an extra-long bonus chapter! lol.andr28a on February 3, 2010, 1:54:47 AM
Again another nice piece of work. Looking forward to reading more.andr28a on January 29, 2010, 12:03:35 AM
I like this story. Keep it going.