Naruto's Dream: One Year of Training
Submitted August 4, 2007 Updated November 23, 2007 Status Incomplete | my first story! this is Naruto OC wonderland, if you have an OC tell me!
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 0 - The Stranger
Submitted: August 4, 2007 • Updated: August 4, 2007
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Chapter 1 - The Suprise
Submitted: August 14, 2007 • Updated: August 14, 2007
Word count: 729 • Size: 3k • Comments: 13 • views: 578
Chapter 2 - The weird reunion
Submitted: August 14, 2007 • Updated: August 14, 2007
Word count: 1025 • Size: 5k • Comments: 9 • views: 522
Chapter 3 - The Man
Submitted: August 14, 2007 • Updated: August 14, 2007
Word count: 1221 • Size: 6k • Comments: 12 • views: 504
Chapter 3 - thanks lotz people
Submitted: August 15, 2007 • Updated: August 15, 2007
Word count: 101 • Size: <1k • Comments: 12 • views: 507
Chapter 4 - Pirates!
Submitted: August 15, 2007 • Updated: August 15, 2007
Word count: 1308 • Size: 6k • Comments: 11 • views: 546
Chapter 5 - Pirates! Part 2
Submitted: August 16, 2007 • Updated: August 16, 2007
Word count: 1424 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 512
Chapter 6 - Dreams and Thoughts
Submitted: August 16, 2007 • Updated: August 16, 2007
Word count: 1551 • Size: 9k • Comments: 10 • views: 515
Chapter 7 - The Arrival
Submitted: August 21, 2007 • Updated: August 21, 2007
Word count: 2104 • Size: 11k • Comments: 12 • views: 520
Chapter 8 - A New Home
Submitted: August 24, 2007 • Updated: August 24, 2007
Word count: 2952 • Size: 15k • Comments: 7 • views: 511
Chapter 9 - Blood Line Limits
Submitted: August 25, 2007 • Updated: August 25, 2007
Word count: 1810 • Size: 9k • Comments: 7 • views: 494
Chapter 10 - Enter the Hidden Sparks Team
Submitted: August 26, 2007 • Updated: August 26, 2007
Word count: 1903 • Size: 9k • Comments: 12 • views: 518
Chapter 11 - Pranks, Rivals, and Love
Submitted: August 29, 2007 • Updated: August 29, 2007
Word count: 2576 • Size: 13k • Comments: 9 • views: 531
Chapter 12 - A Feast Fit For Kings (and some Karaoke)
Submitted: August 31, 2007 • Updated: August 31, 2007
Word count: 2394 • Size: 13k • Comments: 11 • views: 511
Chapter 13 - The Tournament
Submitted: September 1, 2007 • Updated: September 1, 2007
Word count: 2087 • Size: 11k • Comments: 13 • views: 463
Chapter 14 - The Tournament Prt. 2
Submitted: September 2, 2007 • Updated: September 2, 2007
Word count: 1500 • Size: 8k • Comments: 13 • views: 706
Chapter 15 - Flying Leaves, Shifting Sand and Nine Tails
Submitted: September 4, 2007 • Updated: September 5, 2007
Word count: 1777 • Size: 9k • Comments: 13 • views: 737
Chapter 16 - The Escape
Submitted: September 12, 2007 • Updated: September 12, 2007
Word count: 2770 • Size: 15k • Comments: 14 • views: 729
Chapter 17 - The Return of Sasuke
Submitted: September 17, 2007 • Updated: September 17, 2007
Word count: 2223 • Size: 11k • Comments: 13 • views: 757
Chapter 18 - Training Finally Begins!
Submitted: September 21, 2007 • Updated: September 21, 2007
Word count: 1508 • Size: 7k • Comments: 17 • views: 696
Chapter 19 - Training Gets Tough
Submitted: October 3, 2007 • Updated: October 3, 2007
Word count: 1992 • Size: 10k • Comments: 12 • views: 673
Chapter 20 - Dinner Talk
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 1873 • Size: 10k • Comments: 12 • views: 721
Chapter 21 - New Techniques
Submitted: October 18, 2007 • Updated: October 18, 2007
Word count: 1604 • Size: 8k • Comments: 9 • views: 510
Chapter 22 - New Techniques Part 2
Submitted: October 21, 2007 • Updated: October 21, 2007
Word count: 2461 • Size: 12k • Comments: 13 • views: 704
Chapter 23 - Tyrone's Training Part 1
Submitted: October 27, 2007 • Updated: October 27, 2007
Word count: 1456 • Size: 7k • Comments: 8 • views: 521
Chapter 24 - Tyrone's Training Part 2
Submitted: October 28, 2007 • Updated: October 28, 2007
Word count: 1580 • Size: 8k • Comments: 8 • views: 469
Chapter 25 - Weird Training
Submitted: November 23, 2007 • Updated: November 23, 2007
Word count: 1074 • Size: 5k • Comments: 12 • views: 530
Chapter 26 - Yellow Flash
Submitted: November 23, 2007 • Updated: November 23, 2007
Word count: 1506 • Size: 7k • Comments: 20 • views: 682
Chapter 27 - Comments
Submitted: November 23, 2007 • Updated: November 23, 2007
Word count: 66 • Size: <1k • Comments: 16 • views: 494
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Tifa777 on August 10, 2008, 5:06:58 AM
Tifa777 on (Chapter: index)
............................TTfan1 on May 27, 2008, 7:36:01 AM
TTfan1 on (Chapter: 17)
KILL SASUKE.I'll do anything! ANYTHING!
Do you want money?! You can HAVE MONEY!
AND ITACHI-SAMA'S COOKIES!!! *throws cookies*
Itachi: HEY! Those were peanut butter!! >:|
Naruto: Shut up, she's trying to get rid of him!!!
Itachi: How is that a good thing?! o_o
Naruto: He took over my series! I'll NEVER forgive him! >:
TTfan1: AND he tried to rape you!
Naruto: That too! >:
Itachi: Well, maybe he was drunk...!
Naruto: HE'S ALWAYS DRUNK!
TTfan1: The MENACE! *shakes fist*
Naruto: Sixteen and a half LONG years with that man and I never could understand him. -_-
TTfan1: ...I thought you were nineteen.
Naruto: Well, he left, remember? T_T
TTfan1: Oh YEAH! ....How'd you do that in your head so fast? ._.
Itachi: It's ONLY TWO!
Naruto: And a half. U_U
Itachi: And a half! >:
TTfan1: Oh. Well, you all know I'm an idiot, so.... >_>;
Sasuke: *suddenly there* Whatcha talkin' 'bout? ^__^
Naruto: EEK! *ducks*
Sasuke: *stares*
Itachi: ....Go away.
Sasuke: Why? It's FUN here!
TTfan1: Do you even know where we ARE? T_T
Sasuke: .....No. >_>;
Itachi: We are currently commenting on this wonderful story here. :)
Sasuke: ...Oh. *swigs vodka* :3
Itachi: *snatches it* Give me that! Ludicrous little underage vagabond! >:|
Sasuke: *ignores him* Why the heck is the comment so dang long? >:
Naruto: *hisses* BECAUSE.
Sasuke: Because why? ._.
Naruto: Don't make me hurt you. =_=
Sasuke: Why would you hurt me, love?
Itachi: *restrains Naruto* He's hormonal. Don't screw with him. U_U
Sasuke: But it's fun to screw with hormonal people! ^_^ *wiggles Naruto's nose*
TTfan1: .....Whatever. Just PLEASE kill him, rffrff05! PLEASE!!!!
Naruto: PLEASE! O_O
Sasuke: YOU WANT TO KILL ME?!! O__O;;;;
Itachi: *drinks Sasuke's vodka* >_>;; ...Hey, this stuff is actually pretty good! o_o What kind is it?!
Symphoniaprincess101 on August 8, 2008, 3:21:19 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 17)
Kimu:...Squacks>_>'Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on June 6, 2008, 6:52:58 AM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 27)
Woo! Advertisements galore! Loved everything you wrote...only problem is I WANT MOOOOOORE!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on June 2, 2008, 11:25:49 PM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 2)
Lolness! Loving every part of this, a great mix of humor and suspense, plus you've got the characters perfect ^__^TTfan1 on May 27, 2008, 7:18:50 AM
TTfan1 on (Chapter: 26)
.....You kept spelling Yondaime wrong. *twitch*TTfan1 on May 27, 2008, 7:16:03 AM
TTfan1 on (Chapter: 1)
.....Put Raphael in there. It would be fun. ^_________^That's what I do, anyway.
And a random topic, too, like, uh, cheese, or.... even Swiss cheese taht's been out in the sun too long but nobody knows and they eat it anyway because Orochimaru did it on purpose because he wanted to see Sasuke throw up because he think it's sexy when people throw up. And he succeeds, but then he forgot that the cheese was no good, so he ate it too and now he has leprosy. U_U
...It doesn't look so good, but nobody cares, because Oro's a loser and we fangirls usually hate losers (or at least make their lives miserable to the extent of our power). And since HE ate the really bad part, and the only other thing worth mentioning is that since Sasuke stole Naruto's piece, Naruto went hungry and Saqsuke got double the ptomaine poisoning, since a deer shoot on it and all.
...Am I rambling? ._.
TTfan1 on May 27, 2008, 7:10:08 AM
TTfan1 on (Chapter: index)
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH!!!!I'm interested now.
hflp on April 10, 2008, 4:51:28 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 20)
Isn't Kabuto dead?erandor3 on April 4, 2008, 11:24:06 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 26)
XD LOL YOROICHI YAY!kagome99 on January 9, 2008, 3:58:04 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: 27)
XD This story is AWESOME!!! WTF? What the heck's a shetland pony?!
LOVED IT!!! 143!!!
SquishyNinaChan on December 31, 2007, 2:56:02 AM
SquishyNinaChan on (Chapter: index)
OMG i finally remembered i have to read this....*forgot what FAC even was*ummm well great story!......er...well, so far..........
erandor3 on December 15, 2007, 7:15:56 AM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 12)
nice chapterrffraff05 on December 15, 2007, 7:33:39 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 12)
thank you!GreyPichu on December 14, 2007, 12:55:55 PM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 27)
YEAH! GO PONIES!rffraff05 on December 15, 2007, 6:30:06 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 27)
YAY PONIES!Q!Kohakucrazy on December 7, 2007, 1:02:06 PM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 4)
I'll just have to go to the next chappie.rffraff05 on December 8, 2007, 7:05:25 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 4)
YAY FOR NEXT CHAPPIES!Kohakucrazy on December 7, 2007, 12:54:07 PM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 3)
OOOH! What's he gonna cook?rffraff05 on December 8, 2007, 7:04:59 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 3)
he gonna cook fishKohakucrazy on December 7, 2007, 12:43:14 PM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 2)
What's gonna happen?rffraff05 on December 8, 2007, 7:04:47 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 2)
CLIFFHANGER!!!Kohakucrazy on December 7, 2007, 12:35:00 PM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 1)
This is cool... BUt why doesn't Lady Tsunade know where she's sending everybody?rffraff05 on December 8, 2007, 7:04:23 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 1)
it's a secret!Kohakucrazy on December 7, 2007, 12:27:34 PM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: index)
This is... ok...I guess.... I mean the stranger was kinda creepy... Who IS it?rffraff05 on December 8, 2007, 7:03:59 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
you'll find out!GreyPichu on December 6, 2007, 10:04:48 AM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 7)
lol i was listening to a song by Hawk Nelson when it said Every little thing in ur story.ha, i find that funny^^rffraff05 on December 6, 2007, 10:59:44 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 7)
nice!GreyPichu on December 5, 2007, 10:13:23 AM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 3)
lol that was so funny!yes i've finally gotten to continue this story again!^^HOORAY!rffraff05 on December 6, 2007, 9:53:31 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 3)
make sure to comment on every chapter! for you know... tax reasonsNekogal411 on December 4, 2007, 7:25:45 AM
Nekogal411 on (Chapter: 26)
^^ awesome chappie!rffraff05 on December 6, 2007, 9:52:51 AM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 26)
thank you!moog1895 on November 27, 2007, 3:33:08 AM
moog1895 on (Chapter: 27)
*pulls out pad* Shet...land...Pony! There, got it!rffraff05 on December 3, 2007, 8:33:46 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 27)
thanks bunches! *huggles*moog1895 on November 27, 2007, 3:32:28 AM
moog1895 on (Chapter: 26)
Awww! I love cats!rffraff05 on December 3, 2007, 8:33:08 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 26)
Yay cats!moog1895 on November 27, 2007, 3:31:18 AM
moog1895 on (Chapter: 25)
Ahhaha! Yaaay! I was in this one! ah! T_T Gaara's a bittersweet sorta dude, huh? =] GREAT!
rffraff05 on December 3, 2007, 8:32:43 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 25)
i wouldn't call him bitter, just clueless when it comes to social activitiesAnimeAngel87 on November 25, 2007, 4:09:48 AM
AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: index)
When be Akane comming in?rffraff05 on December 3, 2007, 8:30:26 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
she'll be coming soon in the sequelsasukeXsakuraforever on November 25, 2007, 12:17:15 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 27)
A shetland Pony?....what?!Haha, you are something...but I can't quite put my finger on it...
Ok, I don't know if I can promise you the pony, but I can advertise for you. ^_~. Like you said, you want to looks impressive! :P
And good luck on the pony idea, I give you the best of luck! haha! ^^
~Celine
rffraff05 on December 3, 2007, 8:29:56 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 27)
i am... AWEESOME TIMES 10 TIMES YOUR MOM!sasukeXsakuraforever on November 25, 2007, 12:13:20 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 26)
lol, almost everyone below me is like..spazzing out in caps lock....hey, if you can't beat em', join em'...eh hem...
ZOMG THAT WAS SO COOL! DAN YOUR STILL SO MYSTERIOUS, WE KNOW NOTHING ABOUT YOU! THAT WAS SIMPLY FANTASTIC!
MORE MORE MORE!!!
*catches breath*
Alright, thats enough yelling for one day. Nice Chappie, love it!^^
rffraff05 on December 3, 2007, 8:29:16 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 26)
i like being mysterious!sasukeXsakuraforever on November 25, 2007, 12:00:58 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 25)
Hahaha, zomg I feel so bad for choji! T_Tlol, funny chapter, it seems like alot of people hate you, Dan! *snickers*
Anywho, sorry I wasn't around lately, I've been super buisy with school, fogive me! ~_~
Well, off to the next chapter!^^
rffraff05 on December 3, 2007, 8:28:42 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 25)
i felt bad about choji, but then i was all like... it's funny so why not?FluffysPrincess2968 on November 28, 2007, 10:06:39 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: index)
Just thought I would throw this out here....HOLY CRAP!!!!! THIS STORY IS HIGHER RANKING THAN SUPER SONIC TRUTH OR DARE!!!! :O!!!!
THATS ONE OF THE MOST POPULAR STORIES ON FAC!!!! :O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rffraff05 on December 3, 2007, 8:27:00 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
fluffy? care to explain what that means to me? i have no idea about what you are talking aboutFluffysPrincess2968 on December 5, 2007, 7:50:22 AM
FluffysPrincess2968 on (Chapter: index)
uhhh... look at my favs stories list ON MY PROFILE. u kno how it says them to the side under ur featured art? it moved above SSTOD. :Dwinxgirl21 on August 26, 2007, 9:08:06 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
Aww! that was so sweet with Dan and Temari! Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next update! ^-^rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:36:23 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 10)
thanks! i really liked that part!Nekogal411 on August 26, 2007, 6:23:53 AM
Nekogal411 on (Chapter: index)
Cool! ^^rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:35:27 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
thank you!!sasukeXsakuraforever on August 25, 2007, 1:48:11 PM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 9)
OH MY GOSH that was so cool!! I love those attacks! And yet another perfect song choice might I add! Good Job! ^_~rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:34:40 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 9)
thank you!!Symphoniaprincess101 on August 25, 2007, 12:34:10 PM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
might have to read it when i get home on monday.rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:34:14 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
awww! we'll see you then!winxgirl21 on August 25, 2007, 10:11:56 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
oo! yay! I can't wait for the last round! I really want to find out what their bloodline limits are! And if I was Temari, i would have killed Dan for throwing me over his shoulder...rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:33:33 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 8)
yeah, i would have killed me too!Chamilionshin on August 25, 2007, 6:48:09 AM
Chamilionshin on (Chapter: index)
yer strorey is awesomerffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:33:07 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
thanks!!sasukeXsakuraforever on August 25, 2007, 5:37:34 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 8)
Oooo! yay, last rounds ARE really fun! I can't wait to see Dan and Tyrones bloodline limits! Kyaa! Can't wait! ^^rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:32:37 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 8)
they're awesome!!eelchic on August 25, 2007, 3:27:07 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
SOOOOOOO GOOD LIKE AMAZINGLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!! I DEFF CANT WAIT 4 NEXT CHAPPY!!! STRAWBERRIES ROCK LOLZ!!!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:32:09 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
STRAWBERRIES ROCK!!!angelfox on August 25, 2007, 12:42:04 AM
angelfox on (Chapter: 8)
ohohohohohohohohohho! NEXT. CAPPY. SOON.rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:30:33 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 8)
YAY for CAPPY's!sasukeXsakuraforever on August 21, 2007, 11:39:50 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 7)
Land of Snow?! Holy cow, thats so cool! :D And once again, nice pick for songs! My fav. was Shut Up! God I love that song! Keep up the awesome work, Ok? ^_~rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:29:56 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 7)
Land of SNOW!!!angelfox on August 24, 2007, 11:03:12 AM
angelfox on (Chapter: index)
Very cool!^^rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:29:32 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
thank you!!SharinganKakashi on August 24, 2007, 3:35:24 AM
SharinganKakashi on (Chapter: 7)
awesome storey cant wait for the next chapter ^_^rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:28:54 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 7)
it's coming!winxgirl21 on August 21, 2007, 11:15:38 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 7)
Omg! Awesome chapter! But poor Naruto, taht must have really hurt... I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:28:21 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 7)
it really does hurt!eelchic on August 21, 2007, 10:42:27 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 7)
OMG I LUV DA SONG THING ITS SO AWSOME RELLY GOOD AND INO DOES SEEM LIKE A PERSON 2 B ON TOP JUST KIDDIN RELLY GOOD IF NARUTO HINATA SLEEP IN THE SAME BED AGAIN A GOOD SONG MITE BE ONE MORE NIGHT BY CASACADA AND WHEN THEY ARE DREAMING ONCE UPON A DREAM WHEN THEYRE DREAMIN ABOUT SOMEONE JUST A SUGGESTION RELLY GOOD STORY SO FAR KEEP IT UP!!!!!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:27:51 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 7)
thanks! and she does seem like a person to be on top!winxgirl21 on August 21, 2007, 7:25:30 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 6)
Awesome! Neji walked in at just the right time! That was so cute! And I loved Naruto and Hinata! That was adorable! Update soon!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:27:08 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 6)
i thought the timing was good!eelchic on August 20, 2007, 2:44:52 PM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
AWSOMELY AWSOME RELLY GOOD!!!!!!!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:26:22 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
YAY!!! Thanks!erandor3 on August 17, 2007, 12:00:12 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 6)
Yay make more chapters make more chapters!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:25:57 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 6)
i will!!!sasukeXsakuraforever on August 17, 2007, 2:01:01 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 6)
Hm? Sounds to me that Temari's got Dan on the mind! *sniker* Oh Temari, what Youthful love (Lee: Copyer!)! Nice dreams by the way, perfect timing on when Neji walked in on TenTen! hehe! GOOD JOB! If Lee wasn't so mad at me, I would give you the Lee thumbs up! ^_^rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:25:32 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 6)
Copyer!!!winxgirl21 on August 16, 2007, 3:43:42 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 5)
Temari has a secret? Oo I can't wait to find out what it is! Awesome chapter! And I lvoe the music thing! It's awesome! ^-^rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:24:40 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 5)
thanks! i think the music gives it an extra kick!winxgirl21 on August 15, 2007, 11:57:49 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
No! Not a cliffhanger! i have to know what happens!! Please update soon!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:23:15 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 4)
CLIFFHANGER!!!sasukeXsakuraforever on August 15, 2007, 11:30:29 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 4)
Wow! This is really good! ... darn you and your cliffhangers of DOOM! lolz. I can't wait to read more! ^_^rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:22:47 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 4)
cliffhangers of DOOOOOM!winxgirl21 on August 14, 2007, 11:04:35 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
Oh! Update soon! I have to see what happens! Awesome chapter, by the way!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:22:06 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 3)
don't worry i will!sasukeXsakuraforever on August 15, 2007, 11:24:14 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 3)
*te he* No problem! Thank you, for letting me and the two others be in your story! ^_~*rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:21:24 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 3)
thanks! you'll be in soon!sasukeXsakuraforever on August 14, 2007, 9:54:16 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 1)
Ohhhh! This is going to be very interesting! Poor Naruto... getting eaten by ramen... haha! ok, ok! Any who, very good job! ^_~rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:20:53 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 1)
I enjoy irony!winxgirl21 on August 6, 2007, 8:02:19 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
This story is really awesome so far! Can I make a suggestion? Maybe put a little bit more spacing in it. Other than that, I can't wait for the next chapter!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:20:16 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: index)
point taken!eelchic on November 24, 2007, 1:15:44 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 26)
interesting what Naruto learns and is going to learn very awsome!!!! ^-^ <3rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:10:52 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 26)
thank you!!! i do indeed believe Yodaime is alive!AnimeAngel87 on November 24, 2007, 1:12:45 AM
AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 27)
XD wtf?! Shetland Poneh?I be wanting a Unicorn
rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:10:21 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 27)
YESSSSS a shetland pony!!AnimeAngel87 on November 24, 2007, 1:11:07 AM
AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 25)
DUN STEAL CHO'S FOODDan is being Sneaky
<.< >.>
rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:09:31 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 25)
I IS SUPAH SNEAKY!!AnimeAngel87 on November 25, 2007, 4:07:43 AM
AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: index)
SUPAH!!!!!!!!AnimeAngel87 on November 24, 2007, 1:11:49 AM
AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 26)
OMFG SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BLEACH YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:09:02 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 26)
GO BLEEACCH!!!eelchic on November 24, 2007, 12:55:50 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 25)
funny,but bad stealing choji's food its worse than calling choji the F word F-A-T i like itrffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:08:38 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 25)
it's very badwinxgirl21 on November 23, 2007, 9:19:08 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
Shetland pony's are so cute! lol. I'll advertise in my next chapter, kk? ^-^rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:08:11 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 27)
thank you!!!!winxgirl21 on November 25, 2007, 12:03:45 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
np. ^-^winxgirl21 on November 23, 2007, 9:18:09 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
Oh my gosh!! This is sooo awesome!! I'll have to look up some Bleach stuff since I don't know much about that...lol.rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:07:50 PM
rffraff05 on (Chapter: 26)
thanks! you could watch episodes on youtube if you wantwinxgirl21 on November 25, 2007, 12:02:58 AM
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I think i'm going to check the manga out from the library. My computer oesn't like youtube...>.< it takes forever to load videos...lol.winxgirl21 on November 23, 2007, 9:11:27 PM
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Ooo, I wodner who Dan's going to meet? Awesome chapter!!rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:07:08 PM
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it's a secret!winxgirl21 on November 25, 2007, 12:08:20 AM
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secrets are revealed eventually. =Dangelfox on November 23, 2007, 2:00:19 PM
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what the hell is a shetland pony? O.orffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:06:30 PM
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it's like a midget horseSymphoniaprincess101 on November 23, 2007, 12:05:59 PM
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lol the last one was funny lol.rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 12:11:11 PM
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Who doesn't want a shetland pony?FluffysPrincess2968 on November 23, 2007, 12:30:28 PM
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SRSLY!!! only i would want a Clydesdale horse...rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 12:42:37 PM
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what's a clydesdale horse?FluffysPrincess2968 on November 24, 2007, 1:37:44 AM
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haven't u ever seen the Budweiser horses?Symphoniaprincess101 on November 23, 2007, 12:05:04 PM
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that's awsome your mixing Bleach and Kingdom hearts with Naruto i give you 10 cakes for that awsome^^rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 12:10:42 PM
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10 cakes!!!! ILIKEEMCAKEGUUUUUD!!!!!!Konohasdarkshadow on November 23, 2007, 12:01:48 PM
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..............OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EEEEEVVVVVEEEERRRRR!!! you have naruto and now bleach and kingdom hearts...wait so Dan is a Shinigami Ninja?...cccooooooolllllll...NICE JOB BBrffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 12:10:12 PM
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don't tell anyone but full metal alchemist is coming later... ooops.... oh wellFluffysPrincess2968 on November 23, 2007, 12:15:38 PM
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OMFG!!! CROSS-OVER-NESS!!! YAY!!!!Kouni46892742 on November 23, 2007, 12:23:41 PM
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W00T!!!rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 12:26:41 PM
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so apparently every one likes crossovers?FluffysPrincess2968 on November 23, 2007, 12:30:57 PM
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I DO!!!! but i suck at them.... )=Konohasdarkshadow on November 24, 2007, 8:36:03 AM
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im with you fluffy-san...BUT NIISAN IS GREAT AT THEM!!!!!^_^Kouni46892742 on November 23, 2007, 12:01:23 PM
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OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!THESE WERE ALL AWESOME!!! YESS!!!!
rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 12:09:36 PM
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thanks!!!!Kouni46892742 on November 23, 2007, 12:17:33 PM
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Really! Now you need to submit again soon! I can't take the suspense! It's killing me!*dies*
See what I mean?!
FluffysPrincess2968 on November 23, 2007, 12:34:19 PM
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*pulls a Kool-aid* OH YEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! *dies*rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 12:23:47 PM
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yeah, i know what you meanFluffysPrincess2968 on November 23, 2007, 11:54:06 AM
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O.M.F.G.... THOSE WERE SO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!! OMFGOMFG OMFG!!!!! THAT WAS AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEESSSSSOOOOOOMMMEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! w00T!!! GO BLEACH AND KINGDOM HEARTS!!!! WOOT!!!! *goes into fangirl mode* OMFG URAHARA IS SOOOOO AWESOME!!! WILL HE BE IN IT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? OMFG!!!! *explodes*rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 11:55:22 AM
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he'll come fluffy, he'll comeFluffysPrincess2968 on November 23, 2007, 11:57:48 AM
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YAAAAAAY!!!! :D In that case... *Goes t tell SquishyNinaChan* If her OC isn't with him... I think she'll slef-destruct... sending all of FAC into the firey pits of hell.... O_OSymphoniaprincess101 on November 23, 2007, 12:07:41 PM
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fluffy you're a spazz.FluffysPrincess2968 on November 23, 2007, 12:15:54 PM
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o_OSymphoniaprincess101 on November 23, 2007, 11:51:54 AM
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oh bot wat's dan got up his sleeve? awsome new chappter off to read the next one^^*5000000 boxes of pocky was on the ground*rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 11:52:46 AM
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yay for pocky!!!!what's pocky?
FluffysPrincess2968 on November 23, 2007, 11:54:55 AM
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it's like, a thng from Japaen... I think it's like a biscuit-stick covered in different falvored candies or something....rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 11:55:58 AM
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yay! sounds like a cookie... ILIKEEMCOOOOKIESGUUUUD!!!!!!!!!Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2009, 5:08:07 AM
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they are cookies^^eelchic on November 18, 2007, 5:57:01 AM
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OMG THOSE LAST 3 CHAPPS WERE AMZING I LUVED THEM EXPECIALLY WITH NEJI AND HINATA CANT WAIT 4 NEXT UPDATE!!!!!! ^-^ <3sasukeXsakuraforever on November 8, 2007, 6:42:17 AM
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Haha! You go Shikamaru!! lol. And I'm agreeing with Winx, I must know!!!... and I also agree with AnimeAngel...HALF BODY! haha! jk jk. Nice chappie, bro! ^^AnimeAngel87 on November 14, 2007, 8:54:54 AM
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XDRockLeeLuver on November 11, 2007, 12:49:33 AM
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aaahhh suspence >.< can't wait for next chappie!Kouni46892742 on October 29, 2007, 7:48:16 AM
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That mountain isn't gonna be a mountain for much longer. More like an ice pit. Nara's gonna be the one to injure herself because she's so stubborn.rffraff05 on October 29, 2007, 9:23:07 AM
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I'll make sure to add that later, but i still have like 5 new techniques to think of, but it will come!winxgirl21 on October 29, 2007, 7:14:35 AM
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Hmm...ya, I'm with Sakura. I wanna know what it is....I can't wait for the next chapter! ^-^rffraff05 on October 29, 2007, 7:33:53 AM
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you won't find out what it is exactly, at least not now. don't worry, you'll find out!winxgirl21 on October 29, 2007, 7:51:08 AM
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yes! lolz. I'm glad we'll find out.AnimeAngel87 on October 28, 2007, 9:16:58 PM
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half body XDSymphoniaprincess101 on October 28, 2007, 11:02:00 AM
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oh snap leave me in suspence why don't ya awsome^^8000000000 boxes of almond crush pocky for you^^winxgirl21 on October 28, 2007, 10:43:37 AM
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lolz! OMG! Now i wanna try and move a rock with my mind! *stares at rock* darn it! it won't move! lolz! Awesome chapter!FluffysPrincess2968 on October 28, 2007, 10:43:29 AM
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ZOMG CLIFFY-ness... ish... thingy.... WRITE MORE!!!Symphoniaprincess101 on October 28, 2007, 1:06:51 AM
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cool yea fluffy's part craks me up lol^^you get 300000 boxes of pocky^^FluffysPrincess2968 on October 27, 2007, 8:26:52 AM
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LMAO!!! DIE ROCK!!! *stares at rock**nothing happens* DAMN YOU!!!
Nekogal411 on October 27, 2007, 6:48:27 AM
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Shweet! ^^AnimeAngel87 on October 27, 2007, 4:35:41 AM
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Nice Chap *Thumbs up*sasukeXsakuraforever on October 27, 2007, 4:11:03 AM
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Dang, I love all those technique's! And Fluffy's hilarious, you go girl! ^_~
Awesome chapter, please hurry up and make another one! *gives you the Lee thumbs up and my teeth sparkle*
Symphoniaprincess101 on October 26, 2007, 12:00:19 PM
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coolness^^you get 100000000 boxes of pocky^^AnimeAngel87 on October 26, 2007, 10:24:44 AM
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OMG DAN LIKE...Know the 8 trigrams move and things...Hey just wondering no pressure. When does My O.C come in>
AnimeAngel87 on October 26, 2007, 10:22:56 AM
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K-K-K-K-K-KEWLL CHAPP!AnimeAngel87 on October 26, 2007, 10:21:20 AM
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Sorry 4 the late reviews i havent been on 4 a whileAnimeAngel87 on October 26, 2007, 10:20:55 AM
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I Heart this ChappieAnimeAngel87 on October 26, 2007, 10:18:11 AM
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Nice Chappie!!!!Kewl use of Dialouge
:D
sasukeXsakuraforever on October 21, 2007, 11:55:14 AM
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lolz! Dan your so mean! How dare you cause mischief and break the girls into fighting!...but it was pretty funny! haha! Awesome chapter! Hope the next one is TWICE as good! ^_^Konohasdarkshadow on October 22, 2007, 1:30:25 PM
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well....i hope its TRIPLE times as goodoooooohhhhhhh what now Celine? huh? huh?...oh yeah thats right you got NOTHING!!!....OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU JUST GOT SSSSSEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...lol...my friend AJ did that to my friend Javi (haw-vee) and everyone laughed so hard...Javi had chocolate milk coming out of his nose!!!!!!!XD
sasukeXsakuraforever on October 23, 2007, 5:08:52 AM
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Haha, nice!...well I hope it's QUADRUPLE times as better! *smirks* Oh, what now, Jamal?! Huh?! Huh?! Bring it on, little boy! *sticks out tounge* OHHHHHH! NOW WHO GOT SERVED, HUH?! THATS RIGHT LIL BRO! ^_~ WHAT NOW?!
Konohasdarkshadow on October 23, 2007, 6:24:22 AM
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well...i hope its INFINITE times as betterYEA U AINT GOT NOTHIN ON DIS
sasukeXsakuraforever on October 23, 2007, 6:30:36 AM
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I got nothing, eh?Well INFANINTY PERIOD times better!
Oh, BUUUURN! Ouch, thats gatta hurt there, dawg!
Konohasdarkshadow on October 23, 2007, 6:40:09 AM
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ok you win...or do you?A GOOGLEPLEX TIMES INFINITE BETTER!!!!
u got iced
rffraff05 on October 23, 2007, 8:05:27 AM
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know what? i can school you all!A FLOOOOPPITY JILLLLLION TIMES BEEEETTTTTER!!!!
what now?
sasukeXsakuraforever on October 23, 2007, 11:49:15 AM
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Hey! You can't do that, your the one who's writing the story in the first place! haha! and besides... *looks left to right with a smirk* A girl can SOOOOOO totatally out-serve a guy when it comes to comeback! :PBOOYAH!
FluffysPrincess2968 on October 24, 2007, 9:56:12 AM
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OH YEAH!?!?!? I GOTS A EVEN BETTER ONE!!!!!!!A WAFFLESMORFAGOOGLENRETARDMOOSEYMOO GAGGILIION INFINITYMOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! TIMES MOOOOORRRE!!!!!!
sasukeXsakuraforever on October 24, 2007, 9:59:18 AM
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Hey! I think we should team up against the guys! Me and you against Jamal and Dan! What do you say? We could SOOOO KICK THOSE BOYS BUTTS! ^_^rffraff05 on October 24, 2007, 10:16:42 AM
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you know what? bring it! oh and i don't need to out serve you in insults, i can do it on the volleyball court celine! what now!FluffysPrincess2968 on October 28, 2007, 11:02:09 AM
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OH YEAH!!! WELL YOU DON'T KNOW WHERE THE CRAP I LIVE!!! SO THERE!!!! oh... and...AGOOGLESMORFORIFICNESSFULMOOCOWJOOISDESHIZNITBIZNATCHBASSTURDFULLSCRAPOLOONEY TIMES MORE!!!!
FluffysPrincess2968 on October 28, 2007, 11:04:01 AM
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TIMES A GOOGLELEYPLEXMOO!!!!!! MULTIPLY THEM TOGETHER!!!!FluffysPrincess2968 on October 28, 2007, 11:05:18 AM
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OH SNAP SON! WATCHA GONNA DO NOW!?!?!?FluffysPrincess2968 on October 28, 2007, 11:06:32 AM
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AND THEN MULTIPLY IT TIMES... times... YOUR MOM!!!! OH BURN!!!moog1895 on October 21, 2007, 11:25:57 AM
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ahahah aww jamal loves me!Konohasdarkshadow on October 22, 2007, 1:26:16 PM
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o///oKonohasdarkshadow on October 22, 2007, 1:23:10 PM
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NICE CHAP BIG BRO!!!!...and sorry for not keeping up with the deal...its because my basketball tryouts are on this coming up thursday and i practice for a long time until like 10 pm so when i come home i am SUPER UBER tired!!!!!...but anyways...NICE CHAP!!!Kouni46892742 on October 22, 2007, 10:01:55 AM
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I luv how the girls have to get up! Funneh! Here's Nara's reaction!Â
Nara: *crawls under the bed and hides under a blanket* I-is it over?
Kouni46892742 on October 22, 2007, 9:57:13 AM
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AWESOME CHAPPIE!!! Just....please....can you involve Nara just a bit more?winxgirl21 on October 22, 2007, 7:11:13 AM
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Awesome chapter! Haha, i bet Ino adn Sakura are still going at it. I hope they don't kill each other...great chapter!pizza24 on October 22, 2007, 1:19:01 AM
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OMG! nice job yo! i can't wait for thr next chapter!!!!^^angelfox on October 21, 2007, 11:47:43 AM
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sweetmoog1895 on October 21, 2007, 11:23:35 AM
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Jamster...oimoog1895 on October 21, 2007, 11:19:44 AM
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:DD i love your storiesmoog1895 on October 21, 2007, 11:14:00 AM
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ooooh sweet FIGHING HAHAHAHAHAmoog1895 on October 21, 2007, 11:09:35 AM
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T__T dammit i lost again... HAHA great chapter!FluffysPrincess2968 on October 21, 2007, 10:49:16 AM
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ZOMG AWESOME!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!sasukeXsakuraforever on October 21, 2007, 3:48:30 AM
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Woah, I wonder if they would consider putting Sasuke's new weapon in the manga! That would be awesome, I wonder if they ever thought about it before? << hehe, nice fighting chapter, it was quite enjoyable^^sasukeXsakuraforever on October 21, 2007, 3:42:17 AM
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Holy cow!!!... idk, I just wanted to say that. Awesome chappie, it pretty much answered all my questions that I was going to ask you, heh^^ I'm excited to read the next chappie, It's so good!Kouni46892742 on October 20, 2007, 9:06:37 AM
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This chappie was AWESOME!!!!!Â
(Um...could you please involve Nara a bit more? In each chappie, she's only had like one or two lines at the most.)
Symphoniaprincess101 on October 20, 2007, 6:48:48 AM
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whoa wicked^^eelchic on October 20, 2007, 12:38:47 AM
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INTERESTING WAT WILL SASUKE DO? WILL HE BETRAY DAN OR OROCHIMARU? WAT WILL NARUTO LEARN? JUST WAT IM WONDERING FANTASTICAL CHAPPY CANT WAIT 4 NEXT 1 CAKE 4 U ^-^!!!!winxgirl21 on October 19, 2007, 12:10:38 PM
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Awesome chapter! Very awesome, indeed! I can't wait for the next one! ^-^FluffysPrincess2968 on October 19, 2007, 7:14:26 AM
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SWEETNESSS!!!!!!!! AWESOMENESS!!! WOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! lol to Konohasdarkshadow's comment. Ishi-chan: I SHALL USE TEH FLAMING BLADES TO POKE OUT MICHEAL JACKSONS BRAINZEZ!!!!
Me: STOP WITH THE FREAKING MOUNTAIN DUE!!!!
LOL, she's not really like that though. XP
Nekogal411 on October 19, 2007, 2:46:05 AM
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^^ Sweet!Konohasdarkshadow on October 18, 2007, 1:40:14 PM
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WOOOH!!!...beware evil villians (micheal jacks-...i mean orochimaru) for i will use a cork screw sword to stab your brains out!...nice chap!^^winxgirl21 on October 18, 2007, 9:48:01 AM
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omg! Sasuke's goin to betray them!! I can't believe it!! Awesome chapter! And don't worry about having taken a break, everyone needs one at some point ^-^. Great chapter, btw!Symphoniaprincess101 on October 18, 2007, 9:12:06 AM
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i'm a kill him when am i comeing in the story come on hurry up><but never the less awsome like always 100000 boxes of pocky for you.Kouni46892742 on October 18, 2007, 8:29:46 AM
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Sasuke is a traitor! You meanie, Sasuke! Once Nara finds out, oooh, busted!eelchic on October 18, 2007, 5:53:12 AM
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xiting chap!!!! who will learn the flashes technique? this is wat im lookin forward 2 Yahnextguardian on October 17, 2007, 12:09:05 PM
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nice work!vesblondie on October 17, 2007, 11:55:58 AM
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*gasp* I see all meh friends in there XDDD YAY! I liked this chappie! *hugs* lol Fluffy, you're insain! Awwwwws! Naruto and Hinata! I love it! :D Very very good job!
Konohasdarkshadow on October 17, 2007, 11:54:13 AM
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dan...YOU CHEATED!!! (obviously)...sasuke your a traitor...a double traitor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...NICE CHAP!!!^^FluffysPrincess2968 on October 17, 2007, 11:40:51 AM
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*GASPEH*!!!!!!!! OMG!!! SASUKE-TEME!!!!! RAWR!!!!!!!!! *coughcough* *gains composer* YAY Fluffy wierdness. WEEEEEE!!!!! WIERD!!! IT RULZ ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! once again (and i know this gets annoying, but i cant help it) when with shootatzu come in? XD XP LOL poor Neji and Hinata
Nekogal411 on October 17, 2007, 11:38:25 AM
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^^ So awesome! :3 Great job!!FluffysPrincess2968 on October 4, 2007, 10:58:32 AM
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SWEET!!! UPDATE SOON!!! Also, don't forget what I told you about Fluffy... its really important to her personality...FluffysPrincess2968 on October 9, 2007, 5:09:53 AM
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RAWR!!! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL EXPLODE!!!!!Symphoniaprincess101 on October 16, 2007, 7:58:59 AM
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i'm with ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Symphoniaprincess101 on October 6, 2007, 3:36:14 AM
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wicked^^Kouni46892742 on October 5, 2007, 4:53:51 AM
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Awesome chappie!....But my name isn't even in it again...sasukeXsakuraforever on October 4, 2007, 12:28:24 PM
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Duuuude! Thats so cool!! Geez, why can't I have skills like that?! Geez! Lolz, just kidding :P. Can't wait for chapter 20!!^^Nekogal411 on October 4, 2007, 10:19:20 AM
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Sweet! ^^ Good job!winxgirl21 on October 4, 2007, 6:54:19 AM
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Awesome chapter! Gaara's trap was a brilliant idea, too bad for him taht it didn't work...eelchic on October 4, 2007, 5:49:38 AM
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awsome chap cant wait 4 next one!!!!!!nextguardian on October 3, 2007, 2:20:13 PM
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Nice work!Konohasdarkshadow on October 3, 2007, 12:25:31 PM
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WOOH!!!...NICE ONE BIG BRO!!!...oh wait....now i have to make another chap...brb...im gonna go make the next chap or 2vesblondie on October 3, 2007, 12:22:04 PM
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Wow...poor Neji-kun. That was pretty cool, though. Aw. That whole thing with Gaara and Dan was really awesome!!! *nods* This chapter was really good!!! I can't for more >X3
eelchic on September 28, 2007, 6:39:20 AM
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awsomeness cant wait 4 next one!!!!! ^-^SharinganKakashi on September 24, 2007, 1:11:12 PM
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the preview for that chapter was great lol im still behinde 2 chapters il have to read it tomarrow later dude and that's very clever this will be very no extremly long not only that but itl be great mabey some day theyl make it into a chapter or movie in the REAL show i wouldnt put it past them in 18 chp youv had 1000 veiws in my 3 chapters iv had 50 veiws -_-" oh well im not cut out for storey writeing.
winxgirl21 on September 24, 2007, 6:19:32 AM
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sorry it's taken me so long to review! Awesome chapter! i can't wait to see what hapens next!Nekogal411 on September 22, 2007, 4:09:18 AM
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awesome!! ^^rffraff05 on September 22, 2007, 6:20:06 AM
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thank you!!!Symphoniaprincess101 on September 22, 2007, 2:41:25 AM
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coolness^^rffraff05 on September 22, 2007, 6:19:46 AM
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do i get cookies?AnimeAngel87 on September 22, 2007, 10:58:23 AM
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*Gives All the Cookies The Teh World!*Symphoniaprincess101 on September 26, 2007, 7:28:49 AM
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hey i wanted to do that>< oh well^^AnimeAngel87 on September 28, 2007, 5:46:29 AM
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lolx]
AnimeAngel87 on September 22, 2007, 2:21:00 AM
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:o!NEXT CHAPPIE! NEXT CHAPPIE!
rffraff05 on September 22, 2007, 6:19:08 AM
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okay, okay!zerotimberwolf on September 22, 2007, 1:11:40 AM
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ooooh Im exited for the next chapterrffraff05 on September 22, 2007, 6:18:50 AM
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i'll try to update as soon as i can!PanicMode24 on September 22, 2007, 1:11:21 AM
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Oh Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!Pirates VS. ninja!rffraff05 on September 22, 2007, 6:18:25 AM
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i know right?RockLeeLuver on September 22, 2007, 1:11:28 AM
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greeat of course!!!! cant wait for next chappie!!SasukesGirl01 on September 22, 2007, 12:01:11 AM
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hey! i loved it! do you.. think my oc could be in it!?rffraff05 on September 22, 2007, 1:00:44 AM
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sure! i just need some information, but you might have to wait a while. everyone who reads my story has an oc in itAnimeAngel87 on September 21, 2007, 11:34:23 AM
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O.C?D:
rffraff05 on September 21, 2007, 12:59:36 PM
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did you want your's in here?AnimeAngel87 on September 21, 2007, 1:00:52 PM
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Yes:D
sasukeXsakuraforever on September 21, 2007, 11:47:26 AM
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Gah, what's up with you and challenging people?! Ha, your worse than Jamal and Naruto! lolz. Hurry up and update, I'm excited!!! ^_^rffraff05 on September 21, 2007, 12:59:11 PM
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i love challenging everyone! it's fun to watch them try to beat me!FluffysPrincess2968 on September 21, 2007, 11:53:28 AM
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OMG!!! KICK-@$$!!!! WRITE MORE!!! and, again, WHEN WILL MY OTHER OC COME IN!?!?!?!?!?!?!?rffraff05 on September 21, 2007, 12:58:44 PM
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i told you, just be patient and wait!!!nextguardian on September 21, 2007, 12:04:18 PM
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Great work!rffraff05 on September 21, 2007, 12:58:21 PM
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thank you!rffraff05 on September 21, 2007, 10:58:02 AM
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sweeet!! 200 comments! thank you all my readers, this means a lot to me!Kouni46892742 on September 21, 2007, 10:39:47 AM
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Kewl! But...my name wasn't even in the chappie...Konohasdarkshadow on September 21, 2007, 10:32:20 AM
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DUN DUN DUUUUNNNNN!!!...hhhhhmmmm....theres only 1 way...rffraff05 on September 21, 2007, 9:07:11 AM
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yes!! 1000 views! thank you everyone!vesblondie on September 21, 2007, 8:41:27 AM
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kawaii!!! The dreams were so cute! >X3 Aw. Gaara...people love you :[ hehe Awesome chapter! :D
rffraff05 on September 21, 2007, 9:04:34 AM
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you did a frowny face instead of a smiley faceFluffysPrincess2968 on September 19, 2007, 11:41:09 AM
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OMGOMGOMGOMG!!! UPDAAAAAATEE!!!!!!!! And I'll include advertisment in my next chapter of any of my stories!!Ulrich101692 on September 19, 2007, 11:27:01 AM
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rffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 11:34:38 AM
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thanks!! hope you enjoy the rest!vesblondie on September 19, 2007, 10:31:55 AM
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Wow. Amazing writing style :] It's really really good! I love this already. I'M HOOKED NOW. >X3 *faves*
rffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 11:23:28 AM
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yay i love faving!vesblondie on September 19, 2007, 10:39:07 AM
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X[ I hope no one dies. Nya! I need more! XD lol Tsunade has a very short temper *nods*
rffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 11:22:43 AM
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she does indeed!vesblondie on September 19, 2007, 10:41:00 AM
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kawaii! Shika and Neji fuming awwwwws! hehe Awesome job.rffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 11:22:08 AM
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that was my favorite part of the chapter!Symphoniaprincess101 on September 19, 2007, 10:42:30 AM
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awsome^^rffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 11:21:22 AM
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thanks!ninjaofthewaterlily on September 19, 2007, 11:02:32 AM
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wow!!!! this is so cool!!!i likes it!
ninjaofthewaterlily on September 19, 2007, 11:09:01 AM
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i plan on reading the next couple of chapters in a little while!!!rffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 11:20:51 AM
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sweet!vesblondie on September 19, 2007, 10:44:12 AM
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Yay! Lee saved Gaara!!! *huggles a Gaara plushi* This was really good on decriptions :]
rffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 10:45:42 AM
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that is something im not very good at, i tend to skip very specific things unless they are important foreshadowing in the storyvesblondie on September 19, 2007, 10:51:20 AM
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I try to be more descriptive, but sometimes I'm not too ood at it :[ Hehe you're a really good writer. My boyfirend Lane (emobuddie0) and I are planning on writing a story together...I don't know how it'll work...but we'll try something XDrffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 10:52:32 AM
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that'll be awesome!Nekogal411 on September 18, 2007, 9:19:35 AM
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Sweet! lol ill totally advirtis the next time i update 'Blood roses'!winxgirl21 on September 18, 2007, 7:31:53 AM
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Awesome! I'll totally tell people about your story in my next author's note. ^-^ I can't wait to find out if sasuke stays or goes! If i had been Sakura, i would've screamed my head off at him...sasukeXsakuraforever on September 18, 2007, 5:03:48 AM
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Woah, that soooo cool!!! Awesome job once again, I love your writing style, it's perfect! Ten Thunbs up, AWESOME JOB!!! You must continue ASAP!!!pizza24 on September 17, 2007, 11:53:34 AM
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WOOT so kool.........nextguardian on September 17, 2007, 11:42:22 AM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 17)
Great job, perfect dialogue!zerotimberwolf on September 17, 2007, 11:41:41 AM
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awesome!moog1895 on September 17, 2007, 11:39:32 AM
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Aww Dan's such as sweetie!angelfox on September 17, 2007, 11:31:40 AM
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Nice^^Kouni46892742 on September 16, 2007, 10:32:20 AM
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!!!eelchic on September 15, 2007, 10:31:17 AM
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VERY GOOD BUT WHAT WAZ KIBA GUNNA THREATEN NARUTO FOR BUT THAT WAZ VERY NARUTASTIC WITH LOTS OF AWSOMENESS!!!!!!! ^-^zerotimberwolf on September 14, 2007, 11:13:31 PM
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awesome manNekogal411 on September 13, 2007, 10:45:27 AM
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Sweet! ^^ YAYS! I GET A QUITE A FEW LINES!!! ^O^ *dances*pizza24 on September 13, 2007, 9:26:27 AM
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YESH!!!!excelent!Kouni46892742 on September 13, 2007, 5:14:07 AM
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Even if I was only in one sentence, this chapter ROCKED!!winxgirl21 on September 12, 2007, 9:55:54 AM
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omg! this chapter was awesome! Now Sasuke's going with them!! Although he didn't go willingly...hmm..i wonder what's going to hapen?oh, and sorry about takin so long to review, my mom kicked me off b4 i could finish reading the chapter...>.<
Kouni46892742 on September 12, 2007, 9:54:42 AM
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Please tell me I'll be more in the next chappie....sasukeXsakuraforever on September 12, 2007, 9:38:06 AM
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God I want those bikes now -_-, no fair! That was an awesome chappie, I can't wait for the next. Very Good job, as expected^^TheMasterOfPuppets on September 12, 2007, 9:32:06 AM
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*looks at own guitar* Man, I wish my guitar could do that...FluffysPrincess2968 on September 12, 2007, 9:31:00 AM
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ZOMG!! THATS AWESOOOOME!!!!!!! FLUFFY HAS THE PERFECT AMOUNT OF HYPER-NESS!!!!!And when will my other OC come in?
Symphoniaprincess101 on September 12, 2007, 9:06:11 AM
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Awsomeness^^oh what are u going ti do with Sasuke,Dan?O.OSymphoniaprincess101 on September 12, 2007, 9:07:16 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 16)
i put "ti" instead of "to"LOL i'm stupidKouni46892742 on September 12, 2007, 9:05:39 AM
Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 16)
Yay! I got...one sentence with moi in it....Sweet!Konohasdarkshadow on August 29, 2007, 12:39:57 PM
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OH YEA!!!...IM GONNA BEAT NARUTO SO BAD!!!...PAY BACK TIME...or he could beat me...or we could end in a tie...anyway...AWSOME CHAP!!!moog1895 on September 12, 2007, 8:57:03 AM
moog1895 on (Chapter: 11)
T_Tmoog1895 on September 12, 2007, 8:51:43 AM
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Woo!!! veey great!!!! Ugh Jamal sucks at driving...O_O i got..*checks*..one line...lolz do i still get payed?
rffraff05 on September 12, 2007, 8:52:11 AM
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of course!moog1895 on September 12, 2007, 8:58:34 AM
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YES!!!angelfox on September 12, 2007, 8:30:20 AM
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^_^ very cooltoo bad about the virus!
bookworm369 on September 12, 2007, 8:21:33 AM
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excellent work, as always!eelchic on September 6, 2007, 6:11:07 AM
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OMG I TOTALLY LOVE ANIMAL I HAVE BECOME ITS ON MY PROFILE AND LUVED 9TAILS FIGHT TOTALLY AMAZING IT BUT WHO WON AND WHO GETS 2 FIGHT DAN? IT WAZ AWSOME!!!!!!!! SO STRAWBERRIES 4 U! ^-^nextguardian on September 5, 2007, 2:28:18 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 4)
Nice!FluffysPrincess2968 on September 5, 2007, 8:10:50 AM
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ZOMG THATS AWESOOOOME!!!!!!!! YAYZ!!!!! YOU FINALLY GOT IN ONE OF MY OC'S!!!!! SWEET ENTRANCE!!!! THAT WOULD BE EXACTLY LIKE ME!!!!! (yes, my nickname is Fluffy!)winxgirl21 on September 5, 2007, 7:08:22 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
omg!! Awesome chapter! i can't wait to see what's going to happen! And Naruto and Jamal's battle was awesome! ^-^RockLeeLuver on September 5, 2007, 4:39:07 AM
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ausome as usual! ^^moog1895 on September 5, 2007, 4:18:37 AM
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Wooooooooooooooooow!!! ^_^ Your really a talented writer.sasukeXsakuraforever on September 4, 2007, 11:11:16 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 15)
Oh yup! That reminds me of a certain someone! *points to myself* ^.^ Awesome chappie! Jamal and Naruto were AWESOME! As of Gaara and Lee..... ZOMG WHAT IS MICHEAL JACKSON-ER-OROCHIMARU GOING TO DO?! ... Well, I know what he's "going" to do, just not exactly! -_- hehe! AWESOME ONCE AGAIN! Cause I like to say it twice! :Pmoog1895 on September 5, 2007, 4:17:42 AM
moog1895 on (Chapter: 15)
your so Honest dear!!!!mew54 on September 4, 2007, 12:41:25 PM
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hits you in the head im not in itSharinganKakashi on September 4, 2007, 11:30:19 AM
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sweet cant wait for the next one ^_^angelfox on September 4, 2007, 11:16:03 AM
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^-^ coolonepiecenut on September 4, 2007, 11:12:03 AM
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Rather intresting...I'm gonna go read the rest.rffraff05 on September 4, 2007, 11:14:40 AM
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thank you!Symphoniaprincess101 on September 4, 2007, 10:38:01 AM
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oh Crap O.O Cool^^ Hey can my oc be in this story too plz*beging*Symphoniaprincess101 on September 4, 2007, 10:47:19 AM
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Here's the info and pics of me:
This is me when I don't fight with my voice and me when I fight with my voice
and me when I get too angry
This is my final form when I fight for too long
Name:Kimu(me)
Power:Darkness,wind,water,ice,earth,fire,light,space control,time control
age:13
Wepons:I have a bow and arrows,guns,swords,and a ton of other things
Jutsu's:can use chidori,rasengan,shadow clones,fuses chidori and rasengan to create an attack known as Ribbon Destruction Orb,super human stregth,medical powers.
Nekogal411 on September 4, 2007, 10:37:27 AM
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Sweet chappie! ^O^ ....damn orochimaruKouni46892742 on September 4, 2007, 10:33:30 AM
Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 15)
This chappie rocked!!Symphoniaprincess101 on September 4, 2007, 9:43:23 AM
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Awsome^^Kouni46892742 on September 3, 2007, 11:37:45 AM
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I can't wait till I come in! Please let me come in soon!!!!eelchic on September 3, 2007, 10:19:47 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
OMG IT WAZ A SET UP!!! AND WAT WAZ IN NARUTO'S BOOK AND WAT WAZ NARUTO'S BOOK GREAT CHAP AMAZING CANT WAIT 4 NEXT ONE !!!! >_< *SQEAL*moog1895 on September 3, 2007, 8:32:15 AM
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.....*still depressed about loosing*FluffysPrincess2968 on September 3, 2007, 7:18:49 AM
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WWWOOOOOOOHHHHOOOOOOO!!!!!!! ATTACK LEE, GAARA!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!! I MUST SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!! AWESOME!!!!! YAY NEJITEN!!!!!RockLeeLuver on September 3, 2007, 5:10:37 AM
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woo ausome!!! cannot wait for next chapter!TheMasterOfPuppets on September 3, 2007, 3:21:56 AM
TheMasterOfPuppets on (Chapter: 4)
Pirates vs. Ninjas?TheMasterOfPuppets on September 3, 2007, 3:00:28 AM
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Interesting.........Nekogal411 on September 3, 2007, 2:35:58 AM
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WOOT! ^_^ Awesome!winxgirl21 on September 2, 2007, 11:03:15 PM
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Great chapter! i can't wait for the next one! Lee and Gaara. That's going to be very good match.winxgirl21 on September 2, 2007, 10:56:26 PM
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He could have killed Neji! *gasp* I can't believe Shino did that...Awesome chapter!!winxgirl21 on September 2, 2007, 10:47:38 PM
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Awesome chapter! Ya, i do put a lot of detail into my stories...lolz! Aww! Naruto and Hinata are so cute!! And i can't believe how Gaara has changed!winxgirl21 on September 2, 2007, 10:37:44 PM
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Awesome! i can't wait to read the tournament!Konohasdarkshadow on September 2, 2007, 4:13:09 PM
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WWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!AWESOME!!!...so it looks like the student tought the teacher o.O...so so far the winners are Mew, Temari, Shino and Neji didnt count i guess...Hinata, Shikamaru, and thats it i think.......................ooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh The Green Beast and The Secret Weapon is next, the rematch...(dun dun dun!!!!!!)SharinganKakashi on September 2, 2007, 12:54:02 PM
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cant wait 4 the next match mabey lee will open more inner gates this time?oh and that part with neji and tenten was awesome whoever got that idea most have been really really clever lol ~_^
pizza24 on September 2, 2007, 12:22:48 PM
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WOOH KEEP GOING^^Kouni46892742 on September 2, 2007, 12:15:20 PM
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This rocked!!!sasukeXsakuraforever on September 2, 2007, 12:14:14 PM
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Yay! My excitement has finally met it's demants! Very nice.... HEY, thats no fair, Jamal and I, as of sakura and naruto don't get to fight yet! Grrr, your doing it again! Getting me all excited...and hyper! Oh well, I think I can wait! Very nice chapter, I love it!^^moog1895 on September 2, 2007, 9:34:35 AM
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Damn.........*slaps Skika*moog1895 on September 2, 2007, 9:30:02 AM
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T_T Jamal.....Doosh.Symphoniaprincess101 on August 29, 2007, 8:56:57 AM
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dun dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun awsome^^moog1895 on September 2, 2007, 9:21:04 AM
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-////////- Jamal.....O_O OH NOES!!!! I DATED SHIKAMARU!!!!! CRAPCRAPCRAPCRAPCRAP!!!!
SharinganKakashi on September 2, 2007, 7:47:34 AM
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sweet thats cool glad i could help but its noy completely over with yet ~_^eelchic on September 1, 2007, 1:08:35 PM
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TISK TISK TISK SHINO, HINATA KICKED SOME A** U GO GIRL!!!! GO GO GO SHIKAMARU YAH!!! GREAT CHAP CANT WAIT 4 NEXT ONE HAVE A GOOD LABOR DAY!!!nextguardian on September 1, 2007, 12:34:10 PM
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Nice job, great ch!sasukeXsakuraforever on September 1, 2007, 12:08:37 PM
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*gasp* I never knew Shino was so mean! *slaps Shino in the back of the head* Geez!Awesome chapter though, I really like fighting scenes! ^_~ Ten thumbs up!
sasukeXsakuraforever on September 1, 2007, 12:09:14 PM
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Oh and tell SharinganKakashi I said thank you for the ideas too! ^_~nextguardian on September 1, 2007, 11:50:08 AM
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Nice!rffraff05 on September 1, 2007, 11:55:04 AM
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thanks and thank you for commenting on everyone. thats not sarcastic it's sincere since i think the more comments you have the more bragging rights you have! so plz comment all you want!nextguardian on September 1, 2007, 11:48:47 AM
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Great start!rffraff05 on September 1, 2007, 11:53:50 AM
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thanksnextguardian on September 1, 2007, 11:52:09 AM
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Great Job!pizza24 on September 1, 2007, 11:01:49 AM
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........*shivers*that was scary*eats chapter* i like it!rffraff05 on September 1, 2007, 11:51:27 AM
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is it yummy?pizza24 on September 2, 2007, 12:18:06 PM
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yes yes it is^^FluffysPrincess2968 on September 1, 2007, 9:47:16 AM
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woooaaaaaahhhhh.... O_o Shino was harsh.... NUUUU!!!!!! NEJI!!!!!! PLZ BE ALRIGHT!!!!! I WUVS UUU!!!!!!! sorry it took me so long to comment... my friend kept begging me to get onto youtube...FluffysPrincess2968 on September 1, 2007, 9:48:10 AM
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BAD BAD BAD BAD BAD *20 minutes later (with whip and beating the crap out of shino)* BAD SHINOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!Kouni46892742 on September 1, 2007, 9:06:32 AM
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O_O...No! Bad Shino! Don't let Neji-nii die!Symphoniaprincess101 on September 1, 2007, 7:15:21 AM
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whoa that was scarie O.O Awsome Chapter^^RockLeeLuver on September 1, 2007, 6:58:57 AM
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that is a really ausome story ^^ can't wait for next chapter XDangelfox on September 1, 2007, 6:55:08 AM
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Cool, I like this one :INekogal411 on September 1, 2007, 6:03:04 AM
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^^ Awesome new chapter! It really kicks butt! good job!!eelchic on September 1, 2007, 4:19:30 AM
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best chapter so far cant wait 4 next 1 strawberries 4 u !!!!!!!!! ^-^angelfox on September 1, 2007, 4:07:11 AM
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Very cool, good work.pizza24 on August 31, 2007, 11:20:02 PM
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heh heh cute^w^ i can't wait for the next chapter!FluffysPrincess2968 on August 31, 2007, 2:01:53 PM
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*cries* WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! POOR DAN-SAN!!!!! WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!Symphoniaprincess101 on August 31, 2007, 1:28:55 PM
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I'm with sasukeXsakuraforever on this chapter awsome^^FluffysPrincess2968 on August 31, 2007, 1:16:33 PM
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OMG!! FREE MALL!!!! VIDEO GAMES AHOY!!!! (and yes, I AM A GIRL!)FluffysPrincess2968 on August 31, 2007, 1:03:41 PM
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omg, land of snow... u got that from the movie didnt you!?FluffysPrincess2968 on August 31, 2007, 12:43:59 PM
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lol, JAWS MUSIC!! My cousin is obsessed with jaws, and I always tell her about the fics that i read, so now she's gonna pester me until i show this to her...sasukeXsakuraforever on August 31, 2007, 12:06:48 PM
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o...m...g... I think I'm going to cry! Thats so romantic at the end! *sniff sniff* God Bless The Broken Rhode always makes me cry and add the Naruto & Hinata part got me sobbing for my life! And I'm being as serious are serious can be, I'm crying all right! But happy crying, not sad! Great job, if I had ten hands, I would give you ten thumbs up! ^_~ Awesome song choices too, my favs were...accually, I love them all!... I didn't know you liked High School Musical 2? Awesome! I Don't Dance was my favorite song! VERY GOOD JOB! ...........God I need a tissue!Nekogal411 on August 31, 2007, 11:29:05 AM
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^____^ Awesome! Well written! i was wondering if my charater could be in it? or somethingSharinganKakashi on August 31, 2007, 11:24:45 AM
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sweet awesome it just keeps getting better and better cant wait 4 the next 1Kouni46892742 on August 31, 2007, 11:13:34 AM
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This story rocks!!! Um...could I be in this? Pwease! Are any guys still open?eelchic on August 29, 2007, 1:33:37 PM
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AWSOME BY THE AWSOMENESS RELLY FUNNY 2 CANT WAIT 4 NEXT CHAP!!! STRAWBERRIES!!pizza24 on August 29, 2007, 9:49:08 AM
pizza24 on (Chapter: 11)
WOOH YEAH!! i love this so much! can't wait to see wat happens next.....kiba.......LET THE TOURNAMENTS BEGIN!angelfox on August 29, 2007, 8:59:16 AM
angelfox on (Chapter: 11)
^w^ hee hee!mew54 on August 28, 2007, 9:02:39 AM
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im not twentysasukeXsakuraforever on August 29, 2007, 8:52:31 AM
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Mew, your twenty in the Hidden Sparks. You have to be older than us, even if in real life I'm older than you. But still, don't you want to be older?mew54 on October 21, 2007, 11:07:52 AM
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no!change memew54 on October 21, 2007, 11:09:42 AM
mew54 on (Chapter: 10)
jamal doesnt choose for me!sasukeXsakuraforever on August 29, 2007, 8:50:43 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 11)
KAWAII!!!! <333 ZOMG I love all those pairings so much!! *squee* So cute! JAMAL YOU CHEATER! lolz! haha, I can't wait to read the tournament between them all!^^pizza24 on August 29, 2007, 12:33:29 AM
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RIGHT ON!!! niceSymphoniaprincess101 on August 28, 2007, 2:38:59 AM
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man this is getting good^^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 28, 2007, 2:27:01 AM
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Yay Celine^^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 28, 2007, 2:25:33 AM
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i'm with sasukeXsakuraforever on this^^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 28, 2007, 2:19:16 AM
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O.O awsome^^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 28, 2007, 2:14:02 AM
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awsome ^^angelfox on August 27, 2007, 12:00:20 PM
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^/////^eelchic on August 27, 2007, 7:57:23 AM
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OMG THE CHAP 9 WAZ AMAZING AND CHAPTER 10 WAZ SO SWEET!!!!! I TOTALLY LOVED BOTHsasukeXsakuraforever on August 27, 2007, 7:40:35 AM
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Kyaaaa! ^///^ Arn't I the popular one! lolz. Thats very cute though, I love it! The other pairings are also amusing as well. Ino and Shika playing Go, and Temari and Dan! Kyaa! so cute!!! Thank you for putting us Sparks in here, we really appreciate it! ^_~*Konohasdarkshadow on August 26, 2007, 2:33:53 PM
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WOOH!!!...NICE CHAP!!!....CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!^^moog1895 on August 26, 2007, 9:55:16 AM
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lol Nova! Ahh, attempting to hide her feelings for Jamal! Jamal doing the same!!!! XD lolerandor3 on August 26, 2007, 9:30:28 AM
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yeah next chapter would be cool117masterchief on August 25, 2007, 12:17:17 PM
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coolrffraff05 on August 25, 2007, 12:37:44 PM
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Thanks and tell your friends!angelfox on August 25, 2007, 12:18:19 PM
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*GASP* THAT. WAS. AWESOME.rffraff05 on August 25, 2007, 12:37:21 PM
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I had a good time writing itwinxgirl21 on August 25, 2007, 12:34:01 PM
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That was awesomeful!! There blood line limits are so cool, too!rffraff05 on August 25, 2007, 12:36:59 PM
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Thanks!erandor3 on August 21, 2007, 10:18:04 AM
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yay! continue continue continue! i love this story oh and you forgot neji's colorrffraff05 on August 21, 2007, 10:30:13 AM
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hey thank you about the compliment and the thing i forgotSharinganKakashi on August 17, 2007, 1:24:40 PM
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awesome storey i must say im a fan of the hinata/naruto more of that would make the storey awesome (also a fan of tenten/neji) oh oh and shino should fight neji and shino win and then tenten comes out and somehow neji and tenten end up together sorey kinda goin crazy with that but the point im tryin 2 make is yer storey is awesome ^_^rffraff05 on August 17, 2007, 10:30:04 PM
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Zomg that's a brilliant idea when i write it i will give you full crdit for the idea so everyone knows how brilliant it was!SharinganKakashi on August 19, 2007, 11:47:34 PM
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really? cool but its a ruff idea have u seen the clip were hinta beat almost all of shinos bugs hel need lots of trainin 2 win ^_^SharinganKakashi on August 19, 2007, 11:48:19 PM
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oh and WOOO! here that im briliantSharinganKakashi on August 16, 2007, 1:54:59 AM
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i must say ur a very good storey writer ul have 2 tell me when u update ^^rffraff05 on August 16, 2007, 4:19:32 AM
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thanks a lot might have chapter 6 up today but i have orientation in like 3 hours it might be late tonightsasukeXsakuraforever on August 16, 2007, 3:31:50 AM
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OMG that was so much fun! I love putting music in the story. I used good-old YouTube for my music while I read. Also, good choice of music! My favorite was Runaway! ^_^ I can't wait to read more! Good job!^^rffraff05 on August 16, 2007, 4:18:10 AM
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oh my god thats exacltly what i do! there will be more serious songs in the story stuff from my chemical romance, if you like itsasukeXsakuraforever on August 16, 2007, 11:25:03 AM
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KYAAA?! MCR?! ONE OF MY FAVORITES!!! Squee! Great minds think alike I presume? :P lolz! Ok, thanxs for the update, I'll be sure to check it out when it comes!^^rffraff05 on August 16, 2007, 11:35:17 AM
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Yay Itz Here!sasukeXsakuraforever on August 14, 2007, 10:01:48 AM
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Haha, scratch that "poor Naruto" I said in chapter 2. Poor Hinata for fainting! lolz. Yay, now the Sand group is with them! This is going to be very VERY interesting indeed! *evil grin*rffraff05 on August 14, 2007, 10:03:10 AM
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alright gonna work on # 4 nowsasukeXsakuraforever on August 14, 2007, 9:49:16 AM
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ZOMG I like it so far! Very nice description and personalities! If I'm allowd to be in the story, my name could be Celine. Its not very Japanese, but it's definatly not a common name like Brittany or Jessica. So Celine is my name, and if you don't like that or you want it japanese, I'll think of something! GOOD STORY THOUGH! Keep it up! ^_~rffraff05 on August 14, 2007, 9:51:18 AM
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hey thanks bunches i might squeeze in # 4 today if not today tommorowsasukeXsakuraforever on August 14, 2007, 9:55:37 AM
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No problem! ^_^ So it's ok if I use Celine as my name? Because I can change it if you would like?rffraff05 on August 14, 2007, 10:00:11 AM
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no no Celine is great its awesomesasukeXsakuraforever on August 14, 2007, 10:02:54 AM
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Ok then! Thank you so much!^^winxgirl21 on August 14, 2007, 9:23:49 AM
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Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what happens! oh, and don't worry about that, i know how it feels, only I always get the internet taken away, so i still type. ^-^rffraff05 on August 14, 2007, 9:37:39 AM
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chapter 3 should be out today if you get back onwinxgirl21 on August 14, 2007, 10:53:59 AM
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yay! It's already up! ^-^