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Naruto's Dream: One Year of Training by rffraff05
View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-08-04, Updated: 2007-11-23, Chapters: 29, Size: 237K, Words: 47199, Comments: 428, Views: 2700   Violence: Mild
Anime/Manga (1) > Naruto series (2780)
my first story! this is Naruto OC wonderland, if you have an OC tell me!
Chapters
0 - The Stranger - Submitted 2007-08-04 Updated: 2007-08-04 - 171 views, 624 words, 3k
1 - The Suprise - Submitted 2007-08-14 Updated: 2007-08-14 - 103 views, 729 words, 3k
2 - The weird reunion - Submitted 2007-08-14 Updated: 2007-08-14 - 91 views, 1025 words, 5k
3 - thanks lotz people - Submitted 2007-08-15 Updated: 2007-08-15 - 89 views, 101 words, 0k
3 - The Man - Submitted 2007-08-14 Updated: 2007-08-14 - 94 views, 1221 words, 6k
4 - Pirates! - Submitted 2007-08-15 Updated: 2007-08-15 - 84 views, 1308 words, 6k
5 - Pirates! Part 2 - Submitted 2007-08-16 Updated: 2007-08-16 - 78 views, 1424 words, 7k
6 - Dreams and Thoughts - Submitted 2007-08-16 Updated: 2007-08-16 - 78 views, 1551 words, 9k
7 - The Arrival - Submitted 2007-08-21 Updated: 2007-08-21 - 84 views, 2104 words, 11k
8 - A New Home - Submitted 2007-08-24 Updated: 2007-08-24 - 74 views, 2952 words, 15k
9 - Blood Line Limits - Submitted 2007-08-25 Updated: 2007-08-25 - 80 views, 1810 words, 9k
10 - Enter the Hidden Sparks Team - Submitted 2007-08-26 Updated: 2007-08-26 - 91 views, 1903 words, 9k
11 - Pranks, Rivals, and Love - Submitted 2007-08-29 Updated: 2007-08-29 - 88 views, 2576 words, 13k
12 - A Feast Fit For Kings (and some Karaoke) - Submitted 2007-08-31 Updated: 2007-08-31 - 84 views, 2394 words, 13k
13 - The Tournament - Submitted 2007-09-01 Updated: 2007-09-01 - 83 views, 2087 words, 11k
14 - The Tournament Prt. 2 - Submitted 2007-09-02 Updated: 2007-09-02 - 88 views, 1500 words, 8k
15 - Flying Leaves, Shifting Sand and Nine Tails - Submitted 2007-09-04 Updated: 2007-09-05 - 104 views, 1777 words, 9k
16 - The Escape - Submitted 2007-09-12 Updated: 2007-09-12 - 103 views, 2770 words, 15k
17 - The Return of Sasuke - Submitted 2007-09-17 Updated: 2007-09-17 - 93 views, 2223 words, 11k
18 - Training Finally Begins! - Submitted 2007-09-21 Updated: 2007-09-21 - 88 views, 1508 words, 7k
19 - Training Gets Tough - Submitted 2007-10-03 Updated: 2007-10-03 - 89 views, 1992 words, 10k
20 - Dinner Talk - Submitted 2007-10-17 Updated: 2007-10-17 - 88 views, 1873 words, 10k
21 - New Techniques - Submitted 2007-10-18 Updated: 2007-10-18 - 87 views, 1604 words, 8k
22 - New Techniques Part 2 - Submitted 2007-10-21 Updated: 2007-10-21 - 105 views, 2461 words, 12k
23 - Tyrone's Training Part 1 - Submitted 2007-10-27 Updated: 2007-10-27 - 87 views, 1456 words, 7k
24 - Tyrone's Training Part 2 - Submitted 2007-10-28 Updated: 2007-10-28 - 75 views, 1580 words, 8k
25 - Weird Training - Submitted 2007-11-23 Updated: 2007-11-23 - 66 views, 1074 words, 5k
26 - Yellow Flash - Submitted 2007-11-23 Updated: 2007-11-23 - 88 views, 1506 words, 7k
27 - Comments - Submitted 2007-11-23 Updated: 2007-11-23 - 87 views, 66 words, 0k

268 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
hflp's avatar
by: hflp on Apr 10, 2008 11:51 AM chapter 20
Isn't Kabuto dead?
erandor3's avatar
by: erandor3 on Apr 5, 2008 06:24 AM chapter 26
XD LOL YOROICHI YAY!
kagome99's avatar
by: kagome99 on Jan 9, 2008 11:58 AM chapter 27
XD This story is AWESOME!!!
WTF? What the heck's a shetland pony?!
LOVED IT!!! 143!!!
SquishyNinaChan's avatar
by: SquishyNinaChan on Dec 31, 2007 10:56 AM chapter 0
OMG i finally remembered i have to read this....*forgot what FAC even was*
ummm well great story!......er...well, so far..........
erandor3's avatar
by: erandor3 on Dec 15, 2007 03:15 PM chapter 12
nice chapter
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 15, 2007 03:33 PM chapter 0
thank you!
GreyPichu's avatar
by: GreyPichu on Dec 14, 2007 08:55 PM chapter 27
YEAH! GO PONIES!
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 15, 2007 02:30 PM chapter 0
YAY PONIES!Q!
Kohakucrazy's avatar
by: Kohakucrazy on Dec 7, 2007 09:02 PM chapter 4
I'll just have to go to the next chappie.
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 8, 2007 03:05 PM chapter 0
YAY FOR NEXT CHAPPIES!
Kohakucrazy's avatar
by: Kohakucrazy on Dec 7, 2007 08:54 PM chapter 3
OOOH! What's he gonna cook?
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 8, 2007 03:04 PM chapter 0
he gonna cook fish
Kohakucrazy's avatar
by: Kohakucrazy on Dec 7, 2007 08:43 PM chapter 2
What's gonna happen?
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 8, 2007 03:04 PM chapter 0
CLIFFHANGER!!!
Kohakucrazy's avatar
by: Kohakucrazy on Dec 7, 2007 08:35 PM chapter 1
This is cool... BUt why doesn't Lady Tsunade know where she's sending everybody?
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 8, 2007 03:04 PM chapter 0
it's a secret!
Kohakucrazy's avatar
by: Kohakucrazy on Dec 7, 2007 08:27 PM chapter 0
This is... ok...I guess.... I mean the stranger was kinda creepy... Who IS it?
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 8, 2007 03:03 PM chapter 0
you'll find out!
GreyPichu's avatar
by: GreyPichu on Dec 6, 2007 06:04 PM chapter 7
lol i was listening to a song by Hawk Nelson when it said Every little thing in ur story.ha, i find that funny^^
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 6, 2007 06:59 PM chapter 0
nice!
GreyPichu's avatar
by: GreyPichu on Dec 5, 2007 06:13 PM chapter 3
lol that was so funny!yes i've finally gotten to continue this story again!^^HOORAY!
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by: rffraff05 on Dec 6, 2007 05:53 PM chapter 0
make sure to comment on every chapter! for you know... tax reasons
Nekogal411's avatar
by: Nekogal411 on Dec 4, 2007 03:25 PM chapter 26
^^ awesome chappie!
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 6, 2007 05:52 PM chapter 0
thank you!
FluffysPrincess2968's avatar
by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 28, 2007 06:06 PM chapter 0
Just thought I would throw this out here....

HOLY CRAP!!!!! THIS STORY IS HIGHER RANKING THAN SUPER SONIC TRUTH OR DARE!!!! :O!!!!
THATS ONE OF THE MOST POPULAR STORIES ON FAC!!!! :O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 4, 2007 04:27 AM chapter 0
fluffy? care to explain what that means to me? i have no idea about what you are talking about
FluffysPrincess2968's avatar
by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Dec 5, 2007 03:50 PM chapter 0
uhhh... look at my favs stories list ON MY PROFILE. u kno how it says them to the side under ur featured art? it moved above SSTOD. :D
moog1895's avatar
by: moog1895 on Nov 27, 2007 11:33 AM chapter 27
*pulls out pad* Shet...land...Pony! There, got it!
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 4, 2007 04:33 AM chapter 0
thanks bunches! *huggles*
moog1895's avatar
by: moog1895 on Nov 27, 2007 11:32 AM chapter 26
Awww! I love cats!
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 4, 2007 04:33 AM chapter 0
Yay cats!
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by: moog1895 on Nov 27, 2007 11:31 AM chapter 25
Ahhaha! Yaaay! I was in this one! ah!

T_T Gaara's a bittersweet sorta dude, huh? =] GREAT!
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 4, 2007 04:32 AM chapter 0
i wouldn't call him bitter, just clueless when it comes to social activities
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Nov 25, 2007 12:09 PM chapter 0
When be Akane comming in?
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 4, 2007 04:30 AM chapter 0
she'll be coming soon in the sequel
sasukeXsakuraforever's avatar
by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Nov 25, 2007 08:17 AM chapter 27
A shetland Pony?....what?!
Haha, you are something...but I can't quite put my finger on it...

Ok, I don't know if I can promise you the pony, but I can advertise for you. ^_~. Like you said, you want to looks impressive! :P

And good luck on the pony idea, I give you the best of luck! haha! ^^

~Celine
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 4, 2007 04:29 AM chapter 0
i am... AWEESOME TIMES 10 TIMES YOUR MOM!
sasukeXsakuraforever's avatar
by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Nov 25, 2007 08:13 AM chapter 26
lol, almost everyone below me is like..spazzing out in caps lock....hey, if you can't beat em', join em'
...eh hem...
ZOMG THAT WAS SO COOL! DAN YOUR STILL SO MYSTERIOUS, WE KNOW NOTHING ABOUT YOU! THAT WAS SIMPLY FANTASTIC!
MORE MORE MORE!!!
*catches breath*
Alright, thats enough yelling for one day. Nice Chappie, love it!^^
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 4, 2007 04:29 AM chapter 0
i like being mysterious!
sasukeXsakuraforever's avatar
by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Nov 25, 2007 08:00 AM chapter 25
Hahaha, zomg I feel so bad for choji! T_T
lol, funny chapter, it seems like alot of people hate you, Dan! *snickers*

Anywho, sorry I wasn't around lately, I've been super buisy with school, fogive me! ~_~
Well, off to the next chapter!^^
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Dec 4, 2007 04:28 AM chapter 0
i felt bad about choji, but then i was all like... it's funny so why not?
eelchic's avatar
by: eelchic on Nov 24, 2007 09:15 AM chapter 26
interesting what Naruto learns and is going to learn very awsome!!!! ^-^ <3
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 25, 2007 06:10 AM chapter 0
thank you!!! i do indeed believe Yodaime is alive!
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Nov 24, 2007 09:12 AM chapter 27
XD wtf?! Shetland Poneh?

I be wanting a Unicorn
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 25, 2007 06:10 AM chapter 0
YESSSSS a shetland pony!!
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Nov 24, 2007 09:11 AM chapter 26
OMFG SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BLEACH YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 25, 2007 06:09 AM chapter 0
GO BLEEACCH!!!
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Nov 24, 2007 09:11 AM chapter 25
DUN STEAL CHO'S FOOD

Dan is being Sneaky
<.< >.>
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 25, 2007 06:09 AM chapter 0
I IS SUPAH SNEAKY!!
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Nov 25, 2007 12:07 PM chapter 0
SUPAH!!!!!!!!
eelchic's avatar
by: eelchic on Nov 24, 2007 08:55 AM chapter 25
funny,but bad stealing choji's food its worse than calling choji the F word F-A-T i like it
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 25, 2007 06:08 AM chapter 0
it's very bad
winxgirl21's avatar
by: winxgirl21 on Nov 24, 2007 05:19 AM chapter 27
Shetland pony's are so cute! lol. I'll advertise in my next chapter, kk? ^-^
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by: rffraff05 on Nov 25, 2007 06:08 AM chapter 0
thank you!!!!
winxgirl21's avatar
by: winxgirl21 on Nov 25, 2007 08:03 AM chapter 0
np. ^-^
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by: winxgirl21 on Nov 24, 2007 05:18 AM chapter 26
Oh my gosh!! This is sooo awesome!! I'll have to look up some Bleach stuff since I don't know much about that...lol.
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 25, 2007 06:07 AM chapter 0
thanks! you could watch episodes on youtube if you want
winxgirl21's avatar
by: winxgirl21 on Nov 25, 2007 08:02 AM chapter 0
I think i'm going to check the manga out from the library. My computer oesn't like youtube...>.< it takes forever to load videos...lol.
winxgirl21's avatar
by: winxgirl21 on Nov 24, 2007 05:11 AM chapter 25
Ooo, I wodner who Dan's going to meet? Awesome chapter!!
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 25, 2007 06:07 AM chapter 0
it's a secret!
winxgirl21's avatar
by: winxgirl21 on Nov 25, 2007 08:08 AM chapter 0
secrets are revealed eventually. =D
angelfox's avatar
by: angelfox on Nov 23, 2007 10:00 PM chapter 27
what the hell is a shetland pony? O.o
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 25, 2007 06:06 AM chapter 0
it's like a midget horse
Symphoniaprincess101's avatar
by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Nov 23, 2007 08:05 PM chapter 27
lol the last one was funny lol.
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 08:11 PM chapter 0
Who doesn't want a shetland pony?
FluffysPrincess2968's avatar
by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 23, 2007 08:30 PM chapter 0
SRSLY!!! only i would want a Clydesdale horse...
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 08:42 PM chapter 0
what's a clydesdale horse?
FluffysPrincess2968's avatar
by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 24, 2007 09:37 AM chapter 0
haven't u ever seen the Budweiser horses?
Symphoniaprincess101's avatar
by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Nov 23, 2007 08:05 PM chapter 26
that's awsome your mixing Bleach and Kingdom hearts with Naruto i give you 10 cakes for that awsome^^
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by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 08:10 PM chapter 0
10 cakes!!!! ILIKEEMCAKEGUUUUUD!!!!!!
Konohasdarkshadow's avatar
by: Konohasdarkshadow on Nov 23, 2007 08:01 PM chapter 26
..............OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EEEEEVVVVVEEEERRRRR!!! you have naruto and now bleach and kingdom hearts...wait so Dan is a Shinigami Ninja?...cccooooooolllllll...NICE JOB BB
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 08:10 PM chapter 0
don't tell anyone but full metal alchemist is coming later... ooops.... oh well
FluffysPrincess2968's avatar
by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 23, 2007 08:15 PM chapter 0
OMFG!!! CROSS-OVER-NESS!!! YAY!!!!
Kouni46892742's avatar
by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 23, 2007 08:23 PM chapter 0
W00T!!!
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 08:26 PM chapter 0
so apparently every one likes crossovers?
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 23, 2007 08:30 PM chapter 0
I DO!!!! but i suck at them.... )=
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by: Konohasdarkshadow on Nov 24, 2007 04:36 PM chapter 0
im with you fluffy-san...BUT NIISAN IS GREAT AT THEM!!!!!^_^
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by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 23, 2007 08:01 PM chapter 0
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!

THESE WERE ALL AWESOME!!! YESS!!!!
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by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 08:09 PM chapter 0
thanks!!!!
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by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 23, 2007 08:17 PM chapter 0
Really! Now you need to submit again soon! I can't take the suspense! It's killing me!

*dies*
 
See what I mean?!
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 23, 2007 08:34 PM chapter 0
*pulls a Kool-aid* OH YEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! *dies*
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 08:23 PM chapter 0
yeah, i know what you mean
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 23, 2007 07:54 PM chapter 26
O.M.F.G.... THOSE WERE SO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!! OMFGOMFG OMFG!!!!! THAT WAS AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEESSSSSOOOOOOMMMEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! w00T!!! GO BLEACH AND KINGDOM HEARTS!!!! WOOT!!!! *goes into fangirl mode* OMFG URAHARA IS SOOOOO AWESOME!!! WILL HE BE IN IT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? OMFG!!!! *explodes*
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by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 07:55 PM chapter 0
he'll come fluffy, he'll come
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 23, 2007 07:57 PM chapter 0
YAAAAAAY!!!! :D In that case... *Goes t tell SquishyNinaChan* If her OC isn't with him... I think she'll slef-destruct... sending all of FAC into the firey pits of hell.... O_O
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by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Nov 23, 2007 08:07 PM chapter 0
fluffy you're a spazz.
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 23, 2007 08:15 PM chapter 0
o_O
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by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Nov 23, 2007 07:51 PM chapter 25
oh bot wat's dan got up his sleeve? awsome new chappter off to read the next one^^*5000000 boxes of pocky was on the ground*
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by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 07:52 PM chapter 0
yay for pocky!!!!

what's pocky?
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Nov 23, 2007 07:54 PM chapter 0
it's like, a thng from Japaen... I think it's like a biscuit-stick covered in different falvored candies or something....
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Nov 23, 2007 07:55 PM chapter 0
yay! sounds like a cookie... ILIKEEMCOOOOKIESGUUUUD!!!!!!!!!
eelchic's avatar
by: eelchic on Nov 18, 2007 01:57 PM chapter 0
OMG THOSE LAST 3 CHAPPS WERE AMZING I LUVED THEM EXPECIALLY WITH NEJI AND HINATA CANT WAIT 4 NEXT UPDATE!!!!!! ^-^ <3
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by: RockLeeLuver on Nov 11, 2007 08:49 AM chapter 24
aaahhh suspence >.< can't wait for next chappie!
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by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Nov 8, 2007 02:42 PM chapter 24
Haha! You go Shikamaru!! lol. And I'm agreeing with Winx, I must know!!!... and I also agree with AnimeAngel...HALF BODY! haha! jk jk. Nice chappie, bro! ^^
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Nov 14, 2007 04:54 PM chapter 0
XD
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by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 29, 2007 02:48 PM chapter 23
That mountain isn't gonna be a mountain for much longer. More like an ice pit. Nara's gonna be the one to injure herself because she's so stubborn.
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by: rffraff05 on Oct 29, 2007 04:23 PM chapter 0
I'll make sure to add that later, but i still have like 5 new techniques to think of, but it will come!
winxgirl21's avatar
by: winxgirl21 on Oct 29, 2007 02:14 PM chapter 24
Hmm...ya, I'm with Sakura. I wanna know what it is....I can't wait for the next chapter! ^-^
rffraff05's avatar
by: rffraff05 on Oct 29, 2007 02:33 PM chapter 0
you won't find out what it is exactly, at least not now. don't worry, you'll find out!
winxgirl21's avatar
by: winxgirl21 on Oct 29, 2007 02:51 PM chapter 0
yes! lolz. I'm glad we'll find out.
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Oct 29, 2007 04:16 AM chapter 24
half body XD
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by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Oct 28, 2007 06:02 PM chapter 24
oh snap leave me in suspence why don't ya awsome^^8000000000 boxes of almond crush pocky for you^^
winxgirl21's avatar
by: winxgirl21 on Oct 28, 2007 05:43 PM chapter 23
lolz! OMG! Now i wanna try and move a rock with my mind! *stares at rock* darn it! it won't move! lolz! Awesome chapter!
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 28, 2007 05:43 PM chapter 24
ZOMG CLIFFY-ness... ish... thingy.... WRITE MORE!!!
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by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Oct 28, 2007 08:06 AM chapter 23
cool yea fluffy's part craks me up lol^^you get 300000 boxes of pocky^^
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 27, 2007 03:26 PM chapter 23
LMAO!!! DIE ROCK!!! *stares at rock*

*nothing happens* DAMN YOU!!!
Nekogal411's avatar
by: Nekogal411 on Oct 27, 2007 01:48 PM chapter 23
Shweet! ^^
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Oct 27, 2007 11:35 AM chapter 23
Nice Chap *Thumbs up*
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by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Oct 27, 2007 11:11 AM chapter 23
Dang, I love all those technique's!
And Fluffy's hilarious, you go girl! ^_~
Awesome chapter, please hurry up and make another one! *gives you the Lee thumbs up and my teeth sparkle*
Symphoniaprincess101's avatar
by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Oct 26, 2007 07:00 PM chapter 22
coolness^^you get 100000000 boxes of pocky^^
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Oct 26, 2007 05:24 PM chapter 22
OMG DAN LIKE...Know the 8 trigrams move and things...

Hey just wondering no pressure. When does My O.C come in>
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Oct 26, 2007 05:22 PM chapter 21
K-K-K-K-K-KEWLL CHAPP!
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by: AnimeAngel87 on Oct 26, 2007 05:21 PM chapter 0
Sorry 4 the late reviews i havent been on 4 a while
AnimeAngel87's avatar
by: AnimeAngel87 on Oct 26, 2007 05:20 PM chapter 20
I Heart this Chappie
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by: AnimeAngel87 on Oct 26, 2007 05:18 PM chapter 19
Nice Chappie!!!!

Kewl use of Dialouge

:D
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by: Konohasdarkshadow on Oct 22, 2007 08:23 PM chapter 22
NICE CHAP BIG BRO!!!!...and sorry for not keeping up with the deal...its because my basketball tryouts are on this coming up thursday and i practice for a long time until like 10 pm so when i come home i am SUPER UBER tired!!!!!...but anyways...NICE CHAP!!!
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by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 22, 2007 05:01 PM chapter 22
I luv how the girls have to get up! Funneh! Here's Nara's reaction!
 
Nara: *crawls under the bed and hides under a blanket* I-is it over?
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by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 22, 2007 04:57 PM chapter 22
AWESOME CHAPPIE!!! Just....please....can you involve Nara just a bit more?
winxgirl21's avatar
by: winxgirl21 on Oct 22, 2007 02:11 PM chapter 22
Awesome chapter! Haha, i bet Ino adn Sakura are still going at it. I hope they don't kill each other...great chapter!
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by: pizza24 on Oct 22, 2007 08:19 AM chapter 22
OMG! nice job yo! i can't wait for thr next chapter!!!!^^
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by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Oct 21, 2007 06:55 PM chapter 22
lolz! Dan your so mean! How dare you cause mischief and break the girls into fighting!...but it was pretty funny! haha! Awesome chapter! Hope the next one is TWICE as good! ^_^
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by: Konohasdarkshadow on Oct 22, 2007 08:30 PM chapter 0
well....i hope its TRIPLE times as good



oooooohhhhhhh what now Celine? huh? huh?...oh yeah thats right you got NOTHING!!!....OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU JUST GOT SSSSSEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



...lol...my friend AJ did that to my friend Javi (haw-vee) and everyone laughed so hard...Javi had chocolate milk coming out of his nose!!!!!!!XD
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by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Oct 23, 2007 12:08 PM chapter 0
Haha, nice!...

well I hope it's QUADRUPLE times as better! *smirks* Oh, what now, Jamal?! Huh?! Huh?! Bring it on, little boy! *sticks out tounge* OHHHHHH! NOW WHO GOT SERVED, HUH?! THATS RIGHT LIL BRO! ^_~ WHAT NOW?!
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by: Konohasdarkshadow on Oct 23, 2007 01:24 PM chapter 0
well...i hope its INFINITE times as better


YEA U AINT GOT NOTHIN ON DIS
sasukeXsakuraforever's avatar
by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Oct 23, 2007 01:30 PM chapter 0
I got nothing, eh?

Well INFANINTY PERIOD times better!

Oh, BUUUURN! Ouch, thats gatta hurt there, dawg!
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by: Konohasdarkshadow on Oct 23, 2007 01:40 PM chapter 0
ok you win...or do you?

A GOOGLEPLEX TIMES INFINITE BETTER!!!!


u got iced
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by: rffraff05 on Oct 23, 2007 03:05 PM chapter 0
know what? i can school you all!

A FLOOOOPPITY JILLLLLION TIMES BEEEETTTTTER!!!!

what now?
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by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Oct 23, 2007 06:49 PM chapter 0
Hey! You can't do that, your the one who's writing the story in the first place! haha! and besides... *looks left to right with a smirk* A girl can SOOOOOO totatally out-serve a guy when it comes to comeback! :P
BOOYAH!
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 24, 2007 04:56 PM chapter 0
OH YEAH!?!?!? I GOTS A EVEN BETTER ONE!!!!!!!

A WAFFLESMORFAGOOGLENRETARDMOOSEYMOO GAGGILIION INFINITYMOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! TIMES MOOOOORRRE!!!!!!
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by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Oct 24, 2007 04:59 PM chapter 0
Hey! I think we should team up against the guys! Me and you against Jamal and Dan! What do you say? We could SOOOO KICK THOSE BOYS BUTTS! ^_^
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by: rffraff05 on Oct 24, 2007 05:16 PM chapter 0
you know what? bring it! oh and i don't need to out serve you in insults, i can do it on the volleyball court celine! what now!
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 28, 2007 06:02 PM chapter 0
OH YEAH!!! WELL YOU DON'T KNOW WHERE THE CRAP I LIVE!!! SO THERE!!!! oh... and...

AGOOGLESMORFORIFICNESSFULMOOCOWJOOISDESHIZNITBIZNATCHBASSTURDFULLSCRAPOLOONEY TIMES MORE!!!!
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 28, 2007 06:04 PM chapter 0
TIMES A GOOGLELEYPLEXMOO!!!!!! MULTIPLY THEM TOGETHER!!!!
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 28, 2007 06:05 PM chapter 0
OH SNAP SON! WATCHA GONNA DO NOW!?!?!?
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 28, 2007 06:06 PM chapter 0
AND THEN MULTIPLY IT TIMES... times... YOUR MOM!!!! OH BURN!!!
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by: angelfox on Oct 21, 2007 06:47 PM chapter 22
sweet
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by: moog1895 on Oct 21, 2007 06:25 PM chapter 22
ahahah aww jamal loves me!
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by: Konohasdarkshadow on Oct 22, 2007 08:26 PM chapter 0
o///o
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by: moog1895 on Oct 21, 2007 06:23 PM chapter 21
Jamster...oi
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by: moog1895 on Oct 21, 2007 06:19 PM chapter 20
:DD i love your stories
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by: moog1895 on Oct 21, 2007 06:14 PM chapter 19
ooooh sweet FIGHING HAHAHAHAHA
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by: moog1895 on Oct 21, 2007 06:09 PM chapter 18
T__T dammit i lost again... HAHA great chapter!
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 21, 2007 05:49 PM chapter 22
ZOMG AWESOME!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Oct 21, 2007 10:48 AM chapter 21
Woah, I wonder if they would consider putting Sasuke's new weapon in the manga! That would be awesome, I wonder if they ever thought about it before? << hehe, nice fighting chapter, it was quite enjoyable^^
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by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Oct 21, 2007 10:42 AM chapter 20
Holy cow!!!... idk, I just wanted to say that. Awesome chappie, it pretty much answered all my questions that I was going to ask you, heh^^ I'm excited to read the next chappie, It's so good!
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by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 20, 2007 04:06 PM chapter 21
This chappie was AWESOME!!!!!
 
(Um...could you please involve Nara a bit more? In each chappie, she's only had like one or two lines at the most.)
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by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Oct 20, 2007 01:48 PM chapter 21
whoa wicked^^
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by: eelchic on Oct 20, 2007 07:38 AM chapter 0
INTERESTING WAT WILL SASUKE DO? WILL HE BETRAY DAN OR OROCHIMARU? WAT WILL NARUTO LEARN? JUST WAT IM WONDERING FANTASTICAL CHAPPY CANT WAIT 4 NEXT 1 CAKE 4 U ^-^!!!!
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by: winxgirl21 on Oct 19, 2007 07:10 PM chapter 21
Awesome chapter! Very awesome, indeed! I can't wait for the next one! ^-^
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 19, 2007 02:14 PM chapter 21
SWEETNESSS!!!!!!!! AWESOMENESS!!! WOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! lol to Konohasdarkshadow's comment.

Ishi-chan: I SHALL USE TEH FLAMING BLADES TO POKE OUT MICHEAL JACKSONS BRAINZEZ!!!!

Me: STOP WITH THE FREAKING MOUNTAIN DUE!!!!

LOL, she's not really like that though. XP
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by: Nekogal411 on Oct 19, 2007 09:46 AM chapter 21
^^ Sweet!
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by: Konohasdarkshadow on Oct 18, 2007 08:40 PM chapter 21
WOOOH!!!...beware evil villians (micheal jacks-...i mean orochimaru) for i will use a cork screw sword to stab your brains out!...nice chap!^^
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by: winxgirl21 on Oct 18, 2007 04:48 PM chapter 20
omg! Sasuke's goin to betray them!! I can't believe it!! Awesome chapter! And don't worry about having taken a break, everyone needs one at some point ^-^. Great chapter, btw!
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by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Oct 18, 2007 04:12 PM chapter 20
i'm a kill him when am i comeing in the story come on hurry up><but never the less awsome like always 100000 boxes of pocky for you.
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by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 18, 2007 03:29 PM chapter 20
Sasuke is a traitor! You meanie, Sasuke! Once Nara finds out, oooh, busted!
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by: eelchic on Oct 18, 2007 12:53 PM chapter 0
xiting chap!!!! who will learn the flashes technique? this is wat im lookin forward 2 Yah
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by: nextguardian on Oct 17, 2007 07:09 PM chapter 20
nice work!
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by: vesblondie on Oct 17, 2007 06:55 PM chapter 20
*gasp* I see all meh friends in there XDDD YAY! I liked this chappie! *hugs* lol Fluffy, you're insain!
Awwwwws! Naruto and Hinata! I love it! :D Very very good job!
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by: Konohasdarkshadow on Oct 17, 2007 06:54 PM chapter 20
dan...YOU CHEATED!!! (obviously)...sasuke your a traitor...a double traitor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...NICE CHAP!!!^^
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 17, 2007 06:40 PM chapter 20
*GASPEH*!!!!!!!! OMG!!! SASUKE-TEME!!!!! RAWR!!!!!!!!! *coughcough* *gains composer* YAY Fluffy wierdness. WEEEEEE!!!!! WIERD!!! IT RULZ ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! once again (and i know this gets annoying, but i cant help it) when with Shitatzu come in?


XD XP LOL poor Neji and Hinata
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by: Nekogal411 on Oct 17, 2007 06:38 PM chapter 20
^^ So awesome! :3 Great job!!
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by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Oct 6, 2007 10:36 AM chapter 19
wicked^^
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by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 5, 2007 11:53 AM chapter 19
Awesome chappie!....But my name isn't even in it again...
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by: sasukeXsakuraforever on Oct 4, 2007 07:28 PM chapter 19
Duuuude! Thats so cool!! Geez, why can't I have skills like that?! Geez! Lolz, just kidding :P. Can't wait for chapter 20!!^^
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 4, 2007 05:58 PM chapter 19
SWEET!!! UPDATE SOON!!! Also, don't forget what I told you about Fluffy... its really important to her personality...
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by: FluffysPrincess2968 on Oct 9, 2007 12:09 PM chapter 0
RAWR!!! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL EXPLODE!!!!!
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by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Oct 16, 2007 02:58 PM chapter 0
i'm with ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by: Nekogal411 on Oct 4, 2007 05:19 PM chapter 19
Sweet! ^^ Good job!
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by: winxgirl21 on Oct 4, 2007 01:54 PM chapter 19
Awesome chapter! Gaara's trap was a brilliant idea, too bad for him taht it didn't work...
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by: eelchic on Oct 4, 2007 12:49 PM chapter 0
awsome chap cant wait 4 next one!!!!!!
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by: nextguardian on Oct 3, 2007 09:20 PM chapter 19
Nice work!
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by: Konohasdarkshadow on Oct 3, 2007 07:25 PM chapter 19
WOOH!!!...NICE ONE BIG BRO!!!...oh wait....now i have to make another chap...brb...im gonna go make the next chap or 2
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by: vesblondie on Oct 3, 2007 07:22 PM chapter 19
Wow...poor Neji-kun. That was pretty cool, though.
Aw. That whole thing with Gaara and Dan was really awesome!!! *nods* This chapter was really good!!! I can't for more >X3
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by: eelchic on Sep 28, 2007 01:39 PM chapter 0
awsomeness cant wait 4 next one!!!!! ^-^
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by: SharinganKakashi on Sep 24, 2007 08:11 PM chapter 0
the preview for that chapter was great lol im still behinde 2 chapters il have to read it tomarrow later dude and that's very clever this will be very no extremly long not only that but itl be great mabey some day theyl make it into a chapter or movie in the REAL show i wouldnt put it past them in 18 chp youv had 1000 veiws
in my 3 chapters iv had 50 veiws -_-" oh well im not cut out for storey writeing.
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by: winxgirl21 on Sep 24, 2007 01:19 PM chapter 18
sorry it's taken me so long to review! Awesome chapter! i can't wait to see what hapens next!
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by: Nekogal411 on Sep 22, 2007 11:09 AM chapter 18
awesome!! ^^
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by: rffraff05 on Sep 22, 2007 01:20 PM chapter 0
thank you!!!
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by: Symphoniaprincess101 on Sep 22, 2007 09:41 AM chapter 18
coolness^^
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by: rffraff05 on Sep 22, 2007 01:19 PM chapter 0
do i get cookies?
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by: AnimeAngel87 on Sep 22, 2007 05:58 PM chapter 0
*Gives All the Cookies The Teh World!*
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