Kerri??
Submitted April 17, 2009 Updated June 22, 2009 Status Incomplete | After getting kidnapped, girl finds herself in world where the supernatural exist and to find that she's not human, but a sorceress I don't have a title for my story yet Be harsh on the comments y'all cos i'm thinking of getting this published x
Category:
Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Taken
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 18, 2009
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Chapter 2 - Captor
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
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Chapter 3 - End of Her World
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 4 - Assigned
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 5 - Awaken
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 6 - Frustration and Desperation Can Do This to You
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 7 - Making Friends
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 8 - Temptation
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 9 - Knowing Your Purpose
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 10 - A Plan Backfired
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 11 - First Lesson
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Chapter 12 - Exhausted
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Chapter 13 - A Plan for Revenge
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Chapter 14 - Strong
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Chapter 15 - Betrayed
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Chapter 16 - The Point
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Chapter 17 - Knowledge
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Chapter 18 - Agony
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Chapter 19 - Discovery
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Chapter 20 - Persuasive
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Chapter 21 - Invasion
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Chapter 22 - Chased
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
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Chapter 23 - Barely Saved
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: June 11, 2009
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Chapter 24 - Living with the Guilt
Submitted: April 20, 2009 • Updated: April 20, 2009
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Chapter 25 - Finding a Babysitter
Submitted: April 21, 2009 • Updated: April 29, 2009
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Chapter 26 - Information
Submitted: April 24, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 27 - Painting Fun
Submitted: April 28, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 28 - Playing Hairdresser
Submitted: April 28, 2009 • Updated: April 28, 2009
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Chapter 29 - The Kiss
Submitted: April 29, 2009 • Updated: April 29, 2009
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Chapter 30 - The Truth About The Ex-girlfriend
Submitted: May 1, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 31 - Giving in to Temptation
Submitted: May 4, 2009 • Updated: May 4, 2009
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Chapter 32 - Seriously Cheesy Nicknames
Submitted: May 4, 2009 • Updated: May 4, 2009
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Chapter 33 - Sorry Carter
Submitted: May 5, 2009 • Updated: June 1, 2009
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Chapter 34 - Powerful
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Chapter 35 - Breakup and Makeup
Submitted: May 11, 2009 • Updated: June 1, 2009
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Chapter 36 - Trouble...With a Capital T
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Chapter 37 - Oh Crap.
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Chapter 38 - Comforting
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Chapter 39 - The Kind-Of Plan
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Chapter 40 - The Ring With Her Name On
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Chapter 41 - The Dinner
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Chapter 42 - As The Knife Meets Its Doom...
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Chapter 43 - The Boss Knows?!
Submitted: May 31, 2009 • Updated: June 1, 2009
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Chapter 44 - Afterwards
Submitted: June 2, 2009 • Updated: June 2, 2009
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Chapter 45 - Registration
Submitted: June 7, 2009 • Updated: June 7, 2009
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Chapter 46 - Meeting in the Middle
Submitted: June 9, 2009 • Updated: June 11, 2009
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Chapter 47 - The Calm Before The Storm
Submitted: June 11, 2009 • Updated: June 12, 2009
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Chapter 48 - The Werewolf Cometh...
Submitted: June 15, 2009 • Updated: June 15, 2009
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Chapter 49 - What Happened
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Chapter 50 - He Is SO Drunk
Submitted: June 16, 2009 • Updated: June 16, 2009
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Chapter 51 - Damn Those Dreams
Submitted: June 17, 2009 • Updated: June 17, 2009
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Chapter 52 - Taken Care Of
Submitted: June 17, 2009 • Updated: June 17, 2009
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Chapter 53 - So That's The Way It's Going To Be
Submitted: June 18, 2009 • Updated: June 18, 2009
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Chapter 54 - Mick
Submitted: June 19, 2009 • Updated: June 19, 2009
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Chapter 55 - The Great Escape
Submitted: June 20, 2009 • Updated: June 20, 2009
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Chapter 56 - Not a Dream This Time
Submitted: June 21, 2009 • Updated: June 21, 2009
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Chapter 57 - She's Really Back!
Submitted: June 22, 2009 • Updated: June 22, 2009
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blackcatcurse on June 14, 2009, 7:40:31 PM
xxnataxx on June 14, 2009, 7:52:29 PM
haha yea my friend was almost in tears after she read it. xxblackcatcurse on June 11, 2009, 5:55:57 AM
Chapter title recommendation: The Calm before the Storm
(Not a great one. In fact, I think you might have used it. Lemme check...)
xxnataxx on June 11, 2009, 9:30:16 PM
ooooh i havent used it yet...that's a good one...thx (:xx
blackcatcurse on June 9, 2009, 5:46:31 AM
Meeting in the middle.I like how Kerri made her mating of Arik seem like she was helping Mandy instead of hurting her. Good idea.
xxnataxx on June 9, 2009, 7:59:14 PM
Meeting in the middle...? lol sorry dont really get that...is that a name for my chapter or sth?xx
blackcatcurse on June 10, 2009, 6:15:31 AM
Chapter name. They were meeting in the middle when they were argueing about time.That's why you always argue twice of what you want. =^-^=
xxnataxx on June 10, 2009, 8:02:19 PM
haha omg that's right...didnt realise that before...thanks (:xx
blackcatcurse on June 6, 2009, 9:36:17 PM
Hehe, Kerri is clever.I like her way to bend words to her own use.
xxnataxx on June 6, 2009, 10:06:58 PM
lol thxxx
KokoroTsuki24 on June 2, 2009, 5:16:40 AM
aw how sweet! um the distraction part. very good idea! i also like the theory involved with that necklace thing. hmm... maybe you could mention the shoe she hit arik with was the match to the one she threw at drake or something. that would be funny.
oh and i burst out laughing at like the first sentence. that was funny.
oh and the part with drake coming in was hiarious! arik was all like, 'you wait for an answer, then come in' that was really funny. one of my fave parts.
oh and i just dont wanna look in the dictionary to confirm, so does implode basically mean explode?
oh and seriously, what ur fave color?
KokoroTsuki24 on June 2, 2009, 5:17:46 AM
wow. four og those sentences started out with 'oh and'.thats kind sad. XD
blackcatcurse on June 2, 2009, 7:53:23 AM
Implode is SIMILAR to explode. But implode implies collapsing, not expansion.I'm so glad nata didn't do a real sex scene. For a second, I thought she had her hands on a copy of Wicked.
KokoroTsuki24 on June 2, 2009, 7:57:27 AM
yeah nata already explained it for me.lolz! yeah for awhile (the past few days actually) i thought she really was going to put it in. i kinda got scared. i was wondering how she was gonna put it and all. i tried not to use too much imagination...
xxnataxx on June 2, 2009, 6:11:58 PM
lol guys, seriously. the sexual content in my thing is mild, not sky high...xxKokoroTsuki24 on June 3, 2009, 12:38:41 AM
lolz. sry. cant help the thoughts that suspence gives us though can you?xxnataxx on June 3, 2009, 1:53:45 AM
lol i was looking forward to giving you guys some suspense...just...not in that way lolKokoroTsuki24 on June 3, 2009, 7:26:53 AM
haha. lolz. well you managed to keep me interested. well u have been sice like the first chapter but... Shhh! its a secret! (from who, dont ask. XD)xxnataxx on June 2, 2009, 5:32:01 AM
lol you're right. i didnt even realise.xxnataxx on June 2, 2009, 5:28:02 AM
implode meams to explode internally. you know when things explode they...explode outwards? well, to implode is to explode...inwards lol if you understand.hmm...fave colours?
dark purple, dark green, black, silver.
KokoroTsuki24 on June 2, 2009, 5:31:28 AM
oh ok. OH! yeah ok i remember what it means now! its mentioned in twilight! no wait eclipse. (have you read the series?)and those are very good color choices. ill see what i can do. XD
xxnataxx on June 2, 2009, 5:33:23 AM
i've finished them all...i actually read them before they became famous, then everybody else was like "omg i love them" lol and i couldnt say i loved them without being totally unoriginal anymore lolhaha thanks
KokoroTsuki24 on June 2, 2009, 5:38:16 AM
aw im sorry. and i did too. except for breaking dawn. i had to wait like two months after school started to get to read it. and it was REALLY popular by then. but i read the other three during summer break. so i was halfway original. XDxxnataxx on June 2, 2009, 5:46:17 AM
lolKokoroTsuki24 on June 2, 2009, 4:59:43 AM
whoah! he turned into a dragon?! wicked! ok i have to finish reading ill comment again in a minute. XDKokoroTsuki24 on May 31, 2009, 1:29:33 PM
hahaha... interesting... luff the ending! very... intriguing shall we say? lolz. and i like the part where shes trying to ignore the images. that was so funny! oh and was drake talking about the Denver dude? and lets see... oh yeah! i think you meant Drake beckoned her IMpatiently. 'case you wanna fix that. oh and the boss part was funny. and the part where she imitates Mandy. oh and i seriously laughed out loud when i realized what the title for the knife chapter meant! that was funny!ok im done... i think... XDxxnataxx on May 31, 2009, 7:08:13 PM
lol omg did i write patiently? lol if i did i'll change it to impatiently...thxx for that loloh i havent heard from you in a while...how are you?
xx
KokoroTsuki24 on June 1, 2009, 10:41:21 AM
fine fine thx for asking. and im doing pretty good. except im am SO not appreciating my parents right now! theyre making me clean something like every day! and today i got stuck helping clean the backyard, garage, breezeway, and den! and im currently supposed to be cleaning the kitchen. DX oh yeah and im sick. ive come down with SOMETHING. i just dont know what it is. all in all it just doesnt feel like break. but i am gong to Cali in a week! thats something to look forward to at least... :>xxnataxx on June 1, 2009, 8:06:31 PM
ugh. i hate doing chores...oooh sounds fun...i wish i could go too...
KokoroTsuki24 on June 2, 2009, 4:08:16 AM
they are the worst. at least today i only have to do the microwave and fridge. :3 (looking on the bright side XD)and yeah im going to visit my aunt and were staying for like a week. i cant wait!
oh do u like my new avatar? i was getting tired of the orange and this pic has always been my fave.
xxnataxx on June 2, 2009, 4:15:59 AM
same here. i used to really like the sunset...however, i'm starting to think there's a bit too much pink in there...i'm more fond of the colour orange now...KokoroTsuki24 on June 2, 2009, 4:23:30 AM
lolz. ill change it when i find something more suitable to ur taste. *giggles* whats ur fave color? ill see if i have something. ;Dxxnataxx on June 2, 2009, 4:25:33 AM
lol nah it's fine. oh btw uploading a chapter...xxKokoroTsuki24 on May 22, 2009, 3:01:09 PM
YES! love the last two chapters! theyre full of awesomeness! lolz. and when i saw the title of the chapter, i started like flipping out! i seriously thought Arik was going to propose ans i was like 'Aw! He's going to propose before the fight! how sweet!' of course, i found out he didnt. (oh wait hang on! duh! you already knew that cuz you wrote it! geez!) ok. yeah i know i could have just erased the comment before the parenthases part but i just felt like being weird. ^.^ hm. i just cant seem to write a short comment... oh well. hope it doesnt bother you!xxnataxx on May 22, 2009, 8:51:40 PM
lol course it doesnt bother me. you know i always welcome comments (: xxKokoroTsuki24 on May 23, 2009, 4:39:44 AM
lolz. yes that is true... well it just bugs me cuz then i have to read through the WHOLE comment just to see wut you answered or are commenting on or wutever. you should see some of the comments from when i first joined! now THOSE were SO short!xxnataxx on May 23, 2009, 3:11:24 PM
lolblackcatcurse on May 20, 2009, 8:27:25 AM
*faving*I wanna see how this turns out!
KokoroTsuki24 on May 22, 2009, 2:34:30 PM
you REALLY should! like i mean it! seriously. you have to. and have you read the other chapters? arent they awesome?! oh and can you help think up a title for the story? nata requires help.Konohasdarkshadow on May 20, 2009, 8:51:54 AM
um dont you put the engagement ring on your ring finger? the one between your middle finger and pinkie? lol you wrote middle finger, so at first i thought she was going to flip him off with it on. love the 2 new chaps!!! i was going to say that jewelry is spelled with 1 'l' but then i noticed that it can be spelled both ways, with 1 or 2 'l' s lol. keep on writing and keep up the good work (basically the same thing, but yeah, you get it lol)xxnataxx on May 20, 2009, 8:05:24 PM
lol i dont actually know which finger you put it on...isnt it the middle finger of your left hand?? the wedding ring (like the gold band) is on your fourth finger right? i dont know...xxKonohasdarkshadow on May 22, 2009, 11:20:37 AM
in order from thumb to pinkie theses are the fingers and some uses:Thumb: Thumbs up/down
Pointer: Pointing
Middle: Insulting (F U/Flipping off)
Ring: Where your wedding rings usually go
Pinkie: Picking your nose or holding out - for fanciness
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okay, though these are kind of silly, this is some info i found :P
i love the pinkie info! XD (honestly had a large portion to do with why i chose this site's definitions and such)
xxnataxx on May 22, 2009, 8:33:57 PM
lol well....that was....interesting lol i'll ask my mom (she should know lol from the personal experience)xxnataxx on May 22, 2009, 8:52:46 PM
lol btw, she said that when you're engaged, you put the engagement ring on your middle finger. after you've married, you put both your engagement and your wedding ring on your ring finger...KokoroTsuki24 on May 23, 2009, 4:43:09 AM
whoah! rly?! and sry i like to read the comments. but my mom only wears her wedding ring. and come to think of it, i forgot you even HAD an engagment ring! so you have like a wedding ring AND and engagement ring? thats kewl. i just hope mine arent gold. i HATE gold jewelry. silvers MUCH prettier.xxnataxx on May 23, 2009, 3:12:36 PM
yea i think so too...silver's really pretty. gold is kind of like...tacky.anyway yea...when a guy proposes, he uses an engagement ring which you put on your third finger. after you get married, you'll have that wedding ring (which is usually a plain band) and you put it on your ring finger together with your engagement ring
KokoroTsuki24 on May 24, 2009, 1:36:45 PM
oh ok! i get it! and i agree with you on the tacky part. it kinda screams 'Trying WAY to hard!' ya know? but silver is like i gues you could 'casual' but still kinda flashy. does that make sense?xxnataxx on May 24, 2009, 7:05:11 PM
lol yep. totally get what you mean. silver's more classy and elegant as well, in my opinion.KokoroTsuki24 on May 25, 2009, 7:01:42 AM
yes! exactly! curse you story writers! i mean... what? who said that? *smiles* XD
Oh the horror~!