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Kerri??

After getting kidnapped, girl finds herself in world where the supernatural exist and to find that she's not human, but a sorceress
I don't have a title for my story yet
Be harsh on the comments y'all cos i'm thinking of getting this published
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Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Taken
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 18, 2009
Word count: 532 • Size: 2k • Comments: 9 • views: 412

Chapter 2 - Captor
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
Word count: 454 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 330

Chapter 3 - End of Her World
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
Word count: 1168 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 351

Chapter 4 - Assigned
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 573 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 337

Chapter 5 - Awaken
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 965 • Size: 5k • Comments: 5 • views: 364

Chapter 6 - Frustration and Desperation Can Do This to You
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 1364 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 366

Chapter 7 - Making Friends
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
Word count: 2865 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 398

Chapter 8 - Temptation
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 1222 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 374

Chapter 9 - Knowing Your Purpose
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
Word count: 2534 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 350

Chapter 10 - A Plan Backfired
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
Word count: 1482 • Size: 7k • Comments: 1 • views: 378

Chapter 11 - First Lesson
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
Word count: 2772 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 339

Chapter 12 - Exhausted
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
Word count: 608 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 320

Chapter 13 - A Plan for Revenge
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
Word count: 2008 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 356

Chapter 14 - Strong
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
Word count: 1616 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 368

Chapter 15 - Betrayed
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
Word count: 1494 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 346

Chapter 16 - The Point
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 383 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 308

Chapter 17 - Knowledge
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 2523 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 367

Chapter 18 - Agony
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
Word count: 191 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 341

Chapter 19 - Discovery
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 3718 • Size: 19k • Comments: 1 • views: 395

Chapter 20 - Persuasive
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
Word count: 243 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 326

Chapter 21 - Invasion
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 4151 • Size: 21k • Comments: 0 • views: 391

Chapter 22 - Chased
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
Word count: 822 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 355

Chapter 23 - Barely Saved
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: June 11, 2009
Word count: 2018 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 400

Chapter 24 - Living with the Guilt
Submitted: April 20, 2009 • Updated: April 20, 2009
Word count: 1971 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 371

Chapter 25 - Finding a Babysitter
Submitted: April 21, 2009 • Updated: April 29, 2009
Word count: 804 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 337

Chapter 26 - Information
Submitted: April 24, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 1070 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 336

Chapter 27 - Painting Fun
Submitted: April 28, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 770 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 327

Chapter 28 - Playing Hairdresser
Submitted: April 28, 2009 • Updated: April 28, 2009
Word count: 1216 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 327

Chapter 29 - The Kiss
Submitted: April 29, 2009 • Updated: April 29, 2009
Word count: 1022 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 345

Chapter 30 - The Truth About The Ex-girlfriend
Submitted: May 1, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 2294 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 369

Chapter 31 - Giving in to Temptation
Submitted: May 4, 2009 • Updated: May 4, 2009
Word count: 813 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 327

Chapter 32 - Seriously Cheesy Nicknames
Submitted: May 4, 2009 • Updated: May 4, 2009
Word count: 625 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 335

Chapter 33 - Sorry Carter
Submitted: May 5, 2009 • Updated: June 1, 2009
Word count: 1696 • Size: 8k • Comments: 1 • views: 330

Chapter 34 - Powerful
Submitted: May 5, 2009 • Updated: May 5, 2009
Word count: 903 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 324

Chapter 35 - Breakup and Makeup
Submitted: May 11, 2009 • Updated: June 1, 2009
Word count: 619 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 340

Chapter 36 - Trouble...With a Capital T
Submitted: May 11, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 408 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 274

Chapter 37 - Oh Crap.
Submitted: May 11, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
Word count: 1174 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 348

Chapter 38 - Comforting
Submitted: May 17, 2009 • Updated: May 17, 2009
Word count: 2265 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 366

Chapter 39 - The Kind-Of Plan
Submitted: May 17, 2009 • Updated: May 17, 2009
Word count: 2223 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 367

Chapter 40 - The Ring With Her Name On
Submitted: May 20, 2009 • Updated: May 20, 2009
Word count: 1155 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 323

Chapter 41 - The Dinner
Submitted: May 20, 2009 • Updated: May 20, 2009
Word count: 1085 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 363

Chapter 42 - As The Knife Meets Its Doom...
Submitted: May 31, 2009 • Updated: May 31, 2009
Word count: 386 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 249

Chapter 43 - The Boss Knows?!
Submitted: May 31, 2009 • Updated: June 1, 2009
Word count: 1102 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 357

Chapter 44 - Afterwards
Submitted: June 2, 2009 • Updated: June 2, 2009
Word count: 1146 • Size: 5k • Comments: 7 • views: 351

Chapter 45 - Registration
Submitted: June 7, 2009 • Updated: June 7, 2009
Word count: 1369 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 356

Chapter 46 - Meeting in the Middle
Submitted: June 9, 2009 • Updated: June 11, 2009
Word count: 273 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 321

Chapter 47 - The Calm Before The Storm
Submitted: June 11, 2009 • Updated: June 12, 2009
Word count: 2119 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 298

Chapter 48 - The Werewolf Cometh...
Submitted: June 15, 2009 • Updated: June 15, 2009
Word count: 1747 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 274

Chapter 49 - What Happened
Submitted: June 16, 2009 • Updated: June 16, 2009
Word count: 42 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 278

Chapter 50 - He Is SO Drunk
Submitted: June 16, 2009 • Updated: June 16, 2009
Word count: 869 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 385

Chapter 51 - Damn Those Dreams
Submitted: June 17, 2009 • Updated: June 17, 2009
Word count: 2105 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 359

Chapter 52 - Taken Care Of
Submitted: June 17, 2009 • Updated: June 17, 2009
Word count: 661 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 297

Chapter 53 - So That's The Way It's Going To Be
Submitted: June 18, 2009 • Updated: June 18, 2009
Word count: 764 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 324

Chapter 54 - Mick
Submitted: June 19, 2009 • Updated: June 19, 2009
Word count: 2088 • Size: 10k • Comments: 5 • views: 380

Chapter 55 - The Great Escape
Submitted: June 20, 2009 • Updated: June 20, 2009
Word count: 1324 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 334

Chapter 56 - Not a Dream This Time
Submitted: June 21, 2009 • Updated: June 21, 2009
Word count: 776 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 343

Chapter 57 - She's Really Back!
Submitted: June 22, 2009 • Updated: June 22, 2009
Word count: 1054 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 308

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Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 2:53:23 AM

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Konohasdarkshadowagreed! XD

Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 2:29:38 AM

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Konohasdarkshadowarik seems....nice? lol good chap, moving onto the next one! (only 37 left)

KokoroTsuki24 on May 17, 2009, 4:14:32 AM

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KokoroTsuki24AWESOMENESS!!! love the new one! and okay fine. ill wait. i mean i guess ill have to but... ill try to wait patiently. but i guess its a good thing cuz im like busy with stupid end-of-the-year school projects and stuff. so i guess i should be focusing. but still...

xxnataxx on May 17, 2009, 4:19:03 AM

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xxnataxxlol same here. and i hate revising for exams as well...
anyway, i'll try my best
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KokoroTsuki24 on May 17, 2009, 4:22:26 AM

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KokoroTsuki24revising for exams? how do u revise for exams? do u like already know what the questions are gonna be or something? i dont get it.

xxnataxx on May 17, 2009, 4:29:58 AM

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xxnataxxno, you DON'T know the answers for it, which means you have to revise EVERYTHING to make sure you know it....it's annoying

KokoroTsuki24 on May 17, 2009, 4:35:50 AM

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KokoroTsuki24okay. that must be annoying! geez! people cant just make things easy?! oh no i guess not! that might be WAY too much work for their poor little minds! *heavy sarcasm* *makes a mad face*

KokoroTsuki24 on May 16, 2009, 5:09:19 AM

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KokoroTsuki24half japanese? that's pretty kewl. and i started up here cuz i got tired of trying to find where we were... so yeah. and i like this particular smiley ( >.< )cuz, well... im not exactly sure. i just do. lolz

xxnataxx on May 16, 2009, 6:13:01 PM

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xxnataxxlol yea. i was addicted to (: and (; you know, just normal smileys, but the other way round...lol that was pretty random but yea

KokoroTsuki24 on May 17, 2009, 3:32:33 AM

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KokoroTsuki24lolz. i guess it wuz kinda random but not rly cuz we were on the smiley subject... and i LOVE the new chapter! well actually i love all of them, but still. gosh i cant wait for the next chapters! :D

xxnataxx on May 17, 2009, 3:41:44 AM

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xxnataxxwow you've read it already! didnt i just put it up like five mins ago?
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KokoroTsuki24 on May 17, 2009, 3:45:27 AM

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KokoroTsuki24lolz. probably. but i wuz checking my emails nd it said i had gotten a new reply from you. so but i didnt click on the link and just went to the fanart homepage. i scrolled down to stories to see what new ones were up and it said kerri?? i wuz SO excitd! lolz. but yeah. otherwise i wouldnt have checked. and im also a fast reader so that couldve helped... XD

xxnataxx on May 17, 2009, 3:48:38 AM

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xxnataxxlol oh and i added another chapter since you read so quickly lol but dont expect any for a few days...still writing xx

KokoroTsuki24 on May 11, 2009, 10:23:59 AM

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KokoroTsuki24oooh! yes! this is awesomeness! now i RLY cant wait for the other chapters! im like, spazzing out right now! well on the inside. cuz my mom would probably be freaked out otherwise. lolz. and i can kinda see (i think) where the whole british spelling thing comes in with 'rumours' and 'familiarise'. am i right? hmm... im STILL trying to think of some good titles. ill keep you posted with my ideas. =)

xxnataxx on May 11, 2009, 8:02:14 PM

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xxnataxxlol yea. okk thxx (:

KokoroTsuki24 on May 11, 2009, 12:48:49 PM

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KokoroTsuki24my friend suggested a title and she said "dont worry, itll all come out fine" and she also wants to know... uh... r u a girl or a boy? i couldnt answer cuz, well, im not sure myself.

xxnataxx on May 11, 2009, 8:01:34 PM

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xxnataxxohohohhhh that sounds pretty good, actually...hm...thx lol and i'm a girlxx

KokoroTsuki24 on May 12, 2009, 11:54:21 AM

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KokoroTsuki24ya thats wut i thought but i just wanted to make sure in case i said something offensive. and my friend wuz referring to the part about the kidnapping and everything... thats where she thought of the title from... wait does that make sense...? hopefully! lol

xxnataxx on May 12, 2009, 6:09:15 PM

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xxnataxxlol it's okay. i'm curious though...does nata really sound like a boy name?

KokoroTsuki24 on May 14, 2009, 10:35:55 AM

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KokoroTsuki24nope. not rly. it kinda sounds in between... thats not ur actual name is it? cuz wut i just typed could have been seriously offensive... so sry... and i kinda figures you were a girl cuz of the voice(gosh i sound like a reading teacher! lol) i can usually tell when its a girl or boy. have u ever felt that way? and im not sure if i commented on the newest chapters. i dont wanna read through all the comments already on so... THEYRE AWESOME! lolz. ^.^

xxnataxx on May 14, 2009, 6:46:50 PM

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xxnataxxlol no...it isnt my real name. kinda like my nickname. your name isnt really kokoro tsuki either right? xx

KokoroTsuki24 on May 15, 2009, 11:34:49 AM

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KokoroTsuki24lolz. no. i doubt my parents would name me werewolf- as i translate kokoro tsuki to. kokoro tsuki loosely translated means 'blue moon'- it took me forever to put it together cuz i wuz lookin for a good username- but i found someone who knows japanese and they told me that fully translated, it means 'spirit child of the blue moon'. so i guess can see where werewolf comes in... >.< <- btw u may or may not have seen me use this face multiple times. its my signature 'smiley' i guess u could say, if u rly wanna know. >.<

xxnataxx on May 15, 2009, 8:18:46 PM

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xxnataxxlol i went through this phase when i was obsessed with smileys...
and that's a cool name "spirit child of the blue moon"...i like it...i have some friends who are half japanese.
xx

KokoroTsuki24 on May 14, 2009, 11:52:07 AM

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KokoroTsuki24okay by voice i meant voice in the story in case that was a source of confusion. ;) and i also meant figured instead of figures

xxnataxx on May 10, 2009, 10:51:17 PM

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xxnataxxbtw i changed Shyam's name to Ramani (because apparently according to my friend, Shyam's a boy name)...so yea. xx

xxnataxx on May 11, 2009, 3:25:06 AM

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xxnataxxoh yea...i kind of changed it again (sorry!!) to Sitara. the name's quite pretty. Apparently it means star. which is kind of symbolic. somehow. xx

Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 8:02:54 AM

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Konohasdarkshadowokay i dont know which chapter it was, but i remember, you forgot to change one of the "Shyam"s to "Sitara". i remember because i got super confused at that point but just ignored it lol

KokoroTsuki24 on May 10, 2009, 11:47:53 AM

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KokoroTsuki24hm... im just curious and when im curious im usually annoying but... when do u think ur gonna put the next one up?

xxnataxx on May 10, 2009, 7:13:17 PM

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xxnataxxlol soon. i promise.
sorry if i havent uploaded any recently, but i JUST CANNOT FIND ANY INCENTIVE TO WRITE! (it's so frustrating, really.)
xx

KokoroTsuki24 on May 11, 2009, 10:09:27 AM

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KokoroTsuki24its quite fine with me that u changed the name for shyam. sitaras a rly pretty name. and i see u put up the new chapters... *starts reading excitedly* lolz

KokoroTsuki24 on May 5, 2009, 3:59:56 PM

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KokoroTsuki24ooh. like the new ones! keep it up please! im DYING to know wut happens next!

xxnataxx on May 5, 2009, 10:30:08 PM

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xxnataxxlol i'm actually quite excited to know what happens next as well cos i just cant decided...

KokoroTsuki24 on May 4, 2009, 1:55:47 PM

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KokoroTsuki24um... just so u know... apologized is spelled with a z. my frend said to tell u. gosh sry if im getting annoying

xxnataxx on May 4, 2009, 8:03:00 PM

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xxnataxxlol i'm not british, btw. i just go to a british boarding school so they like kill me when i use z instead of s so it's kinda become a habit

KokoroTsuki24 on May 5, 2009, 3:50:18 PM

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KokoroTsuki24oh lol. sry then! ^.^

xxnataxx on May 5, 2009, 10:30:53 PM

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xxnataxxlol s'ok

xxnataxx on May 4, 2009, 6:29:04 PM

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xxnataxxthere are two spellings for apologise. to spell it with a z is american, to spell it with an s is british lol
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