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Pharaoh's Curse

Atem got his own body but at a price...

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Poor Atem...
Submitted: April 10, 2006 • Updated: April 10, 2006
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Chapter 2 - Weak Love
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Chapter 3 - CLIFFHANGER!!!
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Chapter 4 - senses of a werewolf...
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Chapter 5 - Depression...
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Chapter 6 - Back to school...
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Chapter 7 - sleepy,sleepy,sleepy...
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Chapter 8 - Finally! Sleep!
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Chapter 9 - punky pukings...
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Chapter 10 - murderer
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Chapter 11 - relaxation
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Chapter 12 - three strange men
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Chapter 13 - ouchie!
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Chapter 14 - gone for good?
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Chapter 15 - Asha and Alani
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Chapter 16 - NUMB
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Chapter 17 - Boulevard of Broken Dreams
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Chapter 18 - desert?
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Chapter 19 - caves...
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Chapter 20 - Beach kisses
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Chapter 21 - The sleeping curse...
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Chapter 22 - Good morning Atem!
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Chapter 23 - gig gone wrong
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Chapter 24 - Pheral Pharaohs...
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Chapter 25 - THUD!
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Chapter 25 - THUD!
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Chapter 26 - Good night?
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Chapter 27 - Egypt?
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Chapter 28 - Blah...
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Chapter 29 - ATTACK!!!
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Chapter 29 - ATTACK!!!
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Chapter 30 - Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......
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Chapter 31 - mommy?
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Chapter 32 - grrr
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Chapter 33 - cured of the curse
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Chapter 34 - prom night
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Chapter 35 - new home?
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Chapter 36 - ~_o
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Chapter 37 - wolfguy
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Chapter 38 - =D
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Chapter 39 - The end T_T
Submitted: October 21, 2006 • Updated: October 21, 2006
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Fatal_dreamer on March 14, 2007, 3:17:23 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 39)
Fatal_dreamerNO ATEMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM YAMIIIIIIIIIIIIII U CANNOT DIE!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU TOOOO MUXH!!!!!!!!!!!! YAMIIII WAHHHHHHHHHHHHH.........................I LOVE YOU....*sniff* really sad storyh i lvie urs thre totally awesome ^^

Fatal_dreamer on March 14, 2007, 3:00:35 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 29)
Fatal_dreamerILL SAVE U ATEM !!!!!!!!! <3

Fatal_dreamer on March 14, 2007, 2:46:00 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 17)
Fatal_dreamerhe can live with me ^^

Fatal_dreamer on March 14, 2007, 2:43:48 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 14)
Fatal_dreamerNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YAMI!!!! ATEM BABY WAKE UP T_____T

Fatal_dreamer on March 14, 2007, 2:34:40 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 7)
Fatal_dreamerawesome lol he sounds sexy at the end ^^

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 23, 2006, 5:59:33 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 39)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuSad ending! T_____________________________________T  poor Tea...and..............NOOOOOOOOOO  YYAAMMIIIIII!!!!!!!!! T__________T oh well, great story! XD

fairywarrior on October 22, 2006, 12:52:53 AM

fairywarrior on (Chapter: 39)
fairywarriorNoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!! dont die!!

LOL on October 21, 2006, 3:00:23 AM

LOL on (Chapter: 39)
LOLWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!*snifs*Did he HAVE to die?!?!?!*sob*...
Great ending!I loved it!Although it would be better if it was a good ending...BWTF!*faves you*

BrazillianPaula13 on October 21, 2006, 12:49:12 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 39)
BrazillianPaula13*cries* Aw, man! I HATE ending like this, it makes sad!*sniff* Well, it was good while it lasted, right? ^^ I'd give you more than a two thumbs up, but i only have two thumbs, so.....TWO THUMBS UP!!!!hehe^^

zeldafan92 on October 20, 2006, 11:09:59 PM

zeldafan92 on (Chapter: 1)
zeldafan92cool! ^-^

ladychaos on October 20, 2006, 6:58:52 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 39)
ladychaosNOOOOOOOO YAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMIIIIIII!!!!!! *cries*
 
great story

yamiserenity on October 18, 2006, 5:19:44 AM

yamiserenity on (Chapter: 24)
yamiserenitydoes Atem actually know what he's doing.

LOL on October 16, 2006, 4:37:39 PM

LOL on (Chapter: 38)
LOLYugi deserved to be smacked!
I mean c'mon!Atem's a werewolf now!It's a curse!
Anyways,i love this chapter too,please make a good ending to the story!

LOL on October 16, 2006, 4:38:32 PM

LOL on (Chapter: 38)
LOLComment for 38

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 15, 2006, 9:05:57 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 38)
HikariYugiYamiAtemulol...poor Atemu! XD

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 15, 2006, 9:04:35 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 37)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuaww..poor Atemu

ladychaos on October 14, 2006, 11:53:50 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 38)
ladychaospoor Yami

BrazillianPaula13 on October 14, 2006, 11:08:14 PM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 38)
BrazillianPaula13I thought I was moody, but that's nuts! Hehe. Good work!:D

BrazillianPaula13 on October 14, 2006, 3:00:58 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 37)
BrazillianPaula13Poor Atem! I can´t even imagine how muh that must hurt.
Keep up the awesome work with the story!

LOL on October 13, 2006, 11:17:38 PM

LOL on (Chapter: 37)
LOLWOW!I love it!
This is a really nice thriller-story!Oh yeah,did i mention i LOVE wolves?*faves*

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 10, 2006, 7:03:34 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 36)
HikariYugiYamiAtemucool!

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 10, 2006, 6:57:20 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 34)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuooppss...forgot comment this one..they're look sweet! XD

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 10, 2006, 6:56:50 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 35)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuporr Atemu..he missed his own father..:(

CristyMasashi52764 on October 10, 2006, 10:02:09 AM

CristyMasashi52764 on (Chapter: 36)
CristyMasashi52764kul story!!!!

BrazillianPaula13 on October 10, 2006, 5:33:54 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 36)
BrazillianPaula13aww.....he coulda killed them.....hehe.XP Really good story! Two thumbs up!

BrazillianPaula13 on October 9, 2006, 8:37:58 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 35)
BrazillianPaula13You just began writing about this "Ross" guy and I already don't like him.....(sorry if I offended) I think I know what Atem's going through....poor guy.....Nice story, though!^^ Keep it up!:D

CristyMasashi52764 on October 9, 2006, 2:53:33 AM

CristyMasashi52764 on (Chapter: 35)
CristyMasashi52764this is cool!! ur such a great story writer!!!!

BrazillianPaula13 on October 7, 2006, 11:33:51 PM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 34)
BrazillianPaula13Awww.....so cute! Isn't love so beautiful?hehe....Two thumbs up!^^

fairywarrior on October 7, 2006, 4:11:31 AM

fairywarrior on (Chapter: 33)
fairywarriorwhoa dude good chapter there mate!! what happens what happens??!!

BrazillianPaula13 on October 6, 2006, 10:20:22 PM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 33)
BrazillianPaula13Wow! Thank God! I was getting worried that it'd never end! Woah........Keep it up!

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 6, 2006, 8:23:03 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 33)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuYay! Yami becomes a normal guy again!! XD thanks to her mother, Yemi!!! ^^

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 6, 2006, 6:42:19 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 32)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuaww..Neo and Atemu are so adorable when they wrestled...I hope nothing bad happens after this...and porr Atemu..he have to sneak outside the house and eat dead animals without his family notice him! :(

ladychaos on October 6, 2006, 6:35:02 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 32)
ladychaosawwwwwww....not more nightmares.
 
that bastard, Barura *growls*

ladychaos on October 6, 2006, 5:56:40 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 31)
ladychaosOMG! Atemu's mom has returned from the dead?

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 6, 2006, 2:08:44 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 31)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuAtemu has a mother and a brother, Neo? and why Atemu crying? he missed his family too? or just hope that he didn't see his family again because of some reasons? O_O

ladychaos on October 4, 2006, 2:09:16 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 30)
ladychaosYeah i agree, he needs a good rest.
 
Joey just doesn't think before he talks. lol

ladychaos on October 4, 2006, 2:06:17 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 29)
ladychaosGO YAMI!
 
oh no, please be o.k Yami...

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 3, 2006, 7:07:30 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 30)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuaww...Atemu! X( he's sick and needs more rest...! X(

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 3, 2006, 7:04:59 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 29)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuawww...poor Atemu..he got injured! :(

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 3, 2006, 7:03:19 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 27)
HikariYugiYamiAtemulol..XD

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on October 3, 2006, 6:59:14 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 26)
HikariYugiYamiAtemupoor Atemu!..:(

CristyMasashi52764 on October 3, 2006, 1:30:26 PM

CristyMasashi52764 on (Chapter: 29)
CristyMasashi52764wow sooo full of description.... awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CristyMasashi52764 on October 3, 2006, 1:28:25 PM

CristyMasashi52764 on (Chapter: 30)
CristyMasashi52764cool! poor yami... but i love the story!!

BrazillianPaula13 on October 3, 2006, 5:52:52 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 30)
BrazillianPaula13Real nice! (except for the puking part) hehe.....But the story's really good!!!!^^

ladychaos on October 3, 2006, 1:27:31 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 28)
ladychaoslol. hyperness is normaly a good thing. lol

BrazillianPaula13 on October 3, 2006, 5:34:10 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 28)
BrazillianPaula13I know....but I only get like that when I sleep less than normal.....which is a lot......huahuahua

BrazillianPaula13 on October 3, 2006, 5:32:48 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 29)
BrazillianPaula13Wow, this is cool!!!It's coming along GREAT!! Keep up the awesome work!!!

BrazillianPaula13 on October 2, 2006, 7:52:34 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 28)
BrazillianPaula13This is awesome!!!HeHe Poor Pharaoh....hehe I must've fallen in love with this story or something!(not being serious here, don't worry) But this story is just so cool! Thanks for making this chapter longer!(I'm hyper today, so I'm writing a lot^^)Thanks again!

BrazillianPaula13 on October 2, 2006, 5:52:00 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 27)
BrazillianPaula13The story's coming along great! Keep it up! Just one thing: Could you make the chapters a little bit longer? Thanks.

ladychaos on October 2, 2006, 1:55:26 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 27)
ladychaoslol. Joey is such an idiot.

ladychaos on October 2, 2006, 1:50:42 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 26)
ladychaosOMG!, poor Yami, i hate nightmares.
 
wonder if the pillow would become a werewolf. lol

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on September 30, 2006, 9:17:30 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 25)
HikariYugiYamiAtemulol...and cool! ^^

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on September 30, 2006, 9:14:39 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 24)
HikariYugiYamiAtemupoor Atemu!

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on September 30, 2006, 9:13:00 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 23)
HikariYugiYamiAtemu*sigh* those kids needs some manners! :(

ladychaos on September 30, 2006, 7:23:00 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 25)
ladychaoscool, he's back to normal again or as normal as teenage werewolfs can get anyway.

ladychaos on September 30, 2006, 7:17:25 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 24)
ladychaospoor Yami. Dog instincts can be so horrible.

ladychaos on September 30, 2006, 7:14:47 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 23)
ladychaosawwwwww Yami, don't yell at Rah.....
 
stupid kids....ruining Yami's gig *growls*

IluvAtem on September 30, 2006, 5:50:40 PM

IluvAtem on (Chapter: index)
IluvAtemIGNORE THE 2ND "THUD"!!!! IT WAS A MISTAKE AND I CAN"T DELETE IT!!!! T_____T

CristyMasashi52764 on September 30, 2006, 1:26:19 AM

CristyMasashi52764 on (Chapter: 22)
CristyMasashi52764awwww yugi's sooooo cute!! cool story!!!

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on September 29, 2006, 7:55:53 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 22)
HikariYugiYamiAtemulol...XD I like the story! sometimes it's funny..sometimes it's interesting! great story! keep it up! ;)

ladychaos on September 29, 2006, 6:31:26 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 22)
ladychaoslol. poor Yami. *snort* lol

ladychaos on September 29, 2006, 6:30:01 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 21)
ladychaoslol. cute

CristyMasashi52764 on September 29, 2006, 10:28:07 AM

CristyMasashi52764 on (Chapter: 21)
CristyMasashi52764um... awesome!!!!!!

ladychaos on September 27, 2006, 4:15:06 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 20)
ladychaosawwwwwwww
 
ha ha ha. not a very good hiding place Joey

ladychaos on September 27, 2006, 1:22:54 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 19)
ladychaosawww...cute.
 
 

ladychaos on September 26, 2006, 6:41:00 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 18)
ladychaosawwww....cute

ladychaos on September 26, 2006, 5:35:20 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 17)
ladychaosoh...poor Yami, discriminative people suck and people who spread rumours suck even more.
 
I don't care if he kills me, he can stay with me.
 
I just thought of another song that goes with this chapter.
 
Fine Again - Seether
(at least i think it's relivant to this chapter

ladychaos on September 26, 2006, 1:34:27 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: index)
ladychaosoh...i just thought of a song that fits in perfectly for this story.
 
Would you love a monsterman - Lordi
 
lol. i'm totally music brained.

ladychaos on September 26, 2006, 1:32:51 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 16)
ladychaosno.....not another full moon.....will his torment ever stop?

ladychaos on September 26, 2006, 1:30:54 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 15)
ladychaosYAY.....YAMI LIVES!!!
 
poor Yami *gives him a hug*

ladychaos on September 24, 2006, 6:46:28 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: index)
ladychaos(i was talking about the doctors, sorry i got a little carried away)

ladychaos on September 24, 2006, 6:45:27 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 14)
ladychaosNO YAMI!!!!........
 
YOU BASTARDS.....YOU CAN'T GIVE UP NOW!!!!
 
Me: *uses mystical elf's magic to bring him back*

ladychaos on September 24, 2006, 6:43:03 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 13)
ladychaosOh no. poor Yami.
 
i really hate doctors/nurses like that, they insist on touching you to test if somethings soar when it's obvious that it is.
 
your right Hathor is an Egyptian goddess, i think she was the goddess of healing or something

BrazillianPaula13 on September 24, 2006, 2:30:26 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 12)
BrazillianPaula13The story is totally cool! Keep writing more!!!

ladychaos on September 23, 2006, 11:55:36 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 12)
ladychaoswow.
 
wonder who the men are.....don't go Yami, it's probably a trap.

ladychaos on September 22, 2006, 5:17:11 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 11)
ladychaosTea is right, it's not his fault.

ladychaos on September 22, 2006, 5:14:23 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 10)
ladychaospoor Yami, it's not his fault. Werewolves have no control over their instincts.
 
Me: *hugs him as he crys on my shoulder* 

ladychaos on September 21, 2006, 6:19:03 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 9)
ladychaoswow, love Yami's outfit tee hee.
 
poor Yami, he was doing so well until his dinner came back up

ladychaos on September 21, 2006, 1:34:38 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 8)
ladychaoswoo hoo YAY!!! he's not colourblind anymore and he finaly got a good night sleep.
 
why does that get me thinking of that song Colourblind by Darius....oh well

ladychaos on September 21, 2006, 1:31:38 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 7)
ladychaoshee hee, i do that sometimes, fall asleep with music on.
 
a applaud Atemu's good taste in music, Grandpa just doesn't have any.

IluvAtem on September 20, 2006, 5:32:26 AM

IluvAtem on (Chapter: 6)
IluvAtemeh? Oh! Me thinks yes? * falls asleep*

ladychaos on September 20, 2006, 5:01:38 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 6)
ladychaospoor Yami.
 
i guess he's going through the lone wolf stage, am i right?

ladychaos on September 20, 2006, 2:15:48 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 5)
ladychaospoor Yami
 
the life of a werewolf is a harsh one indeed.

Yami_And_The_Fallen_Angel on September 19, 2006, 6:56:53 AM

Yami_And_The_Fallen_Angel on (Chapter: 5)
Yami_And_The_Fallen_AngelPoor Atem.

ladychaos on September 19, 2006, 1:47:18 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 4)
ladychaosAwwwwwwwwww.....poor Yami.
 
and i thought my Sphinx Yami was having a rought time.....

ladychaos on September 19, 2006, 1:45:20 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 3)
ladychaosi knew he'd be a guitarist, i just knew it.
 
NO YAMIKINS!!!! I'LL SAVE YOU!!!!

Yami_And_The_Fallen_Angel on September 18, 2006, 7:41:23 AM

Yami_And_The_Fallen_Angel on (Chapter: 3)
Yami_And_The_Fallen_Angelno Atem!

ladychaos on September 16, 2006, 7:38:09 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 2)
ladychaoscool. another great chapter.
 
poor Yami, it's a hard life being a werewolf.

IluvAtem on September 16, 2006, 7:35:05 PM

IluvAtem on (Chapter: 2)
IluvAtemokay... the  are " and 'and the &'s are ... 's okay? O.o

IluvAtem on September 16, 2006, 7:31:51 PM

IluvAtem on (Chapter: 2)
IluvAtemWHY WON"T THE ...'s AND ""'s WORK!!!!

ladychaos on September 15, 2006, 6:36:40 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 1)
ladychaoswow. poor Atemu.
 
you should wright more.

Anurama on May 2, 2006, 8:19:33 PM

Anurama on (Chapter: 1)
AnuramaI think that would be very cool!
yup! =)

IluvAtem on April 25, 2006, 2:02:13 AM

IluvAtem on (Chapter: 1)
IluvAtemThanks!:)I hope to be an auther someday. Maybe I could illustrate too!

Anurama on April 24, 2006, 6:06:38 PM

Anurama on (Chapter: 1)
AnuramaThats okay. My endings are much dumber than yours. you are good at writting stories. =D

IluvAtem on April 16, 2006, 2:58:54 AM

IluvAtem on (Chapter: 1)
IluvAtemThanks I usually suck at endings....

Anurama on April 16, 2006, 2:47:21 AM

Anurama on (Chapter: 1)
AnuramaThats sad. I like the ending. My favourite character is Dartz. Good story. *favs*