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Years in the Future... *Sonic*

Fast-Forward 25 years. Dictorial King and a masochistic queen. The original group of Freedom Fighers are still around, but now their kids take the more active rolls, trying to save Mobius from the clutches of the Evil king. 'Takin "Future" fan chars

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Welcome to the Jungle
Submitted: October 12, 2006 • Updated: October 12, 2006
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Chapter 2 - "King" Shadow?
Submitted: October 13, 2006 • Updated: October 13, 2006
Word count: 1016 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 317

Chapter 3 - Know Thy Enemy
Submitted: October 24, 2006 • Updated: October 24, 2006
Word count: 461 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 248

Chapter 4 - Dreams Come True (and So do Nightmares)
Submitted: October 26, 2006 • Updated: October 26, 2006
Word count: 574 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 250

Chapter 5 - Thoughts...
Submitted: November 12, 2006 • Updated: November 12, 2006
Word count: 613 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 251

Chapter 6 - A Huge Undertaking
Submitted: December 8, 2006 • Updated: December 8, 2006
Word count: 744 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 248

Chapter 7 - Danger Zone
Submitted: December 11, 2006 • Updated: December 11, 2006
Word count: 994 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 237

Chapter 8 - Death Warrant
Submitted: December 12, 2006 • Updated: December 12, 2006
Word count: 805 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 260

Chapter 9 - Doin' hard Time
Submitted: December 12, 2006 • Updated: December 12, 2006
Word count: 1183 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 261

Chapter 10 - Issue 10- Shocking Turn of Events
Submitted: December 13, 2006 • Updated: December 13, 2006
Word count: 1180 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 304

Chapter 11 - Paula's Fight
Submitted: December 14, 2006 • Updated: December 14, 2006
Word count: 1263 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 286

Chapter 12 - Future meets the Past (Pt 1)
Submitted: December 22, 2006 • Updated: December 22, 2006
Word count: 919 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 257

Chapter 13 - Family Reunion
Submitted: December 23, 2006 • Updated: December 23, 2006
Word count: 1326 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 285

Chapter 14 - Self-Worth vs. Self-Preservation
Submitted: January 8, 2007 • Updated: January 8, 2007
Word count: 797 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 235

Chapter 15 - Never Turn Back...
Submitted: January 20, 2007 • Updated: January 20, 2007
Word count: 1004 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 233

Chapter 16 - Out of Control
Submitted: February 4, 2007 • Updated: February 4, 2007
Word count: 1308 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 247

Chapter 17 - Linda's thoughts
Submitted: February 5, 2007 • Updated: February 5, 2007
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Chapter 18 - Checkmate
Submitted: February 8, 2007 • Updated: February 8, 2007
Word count: 1072 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 225

Chapter 19 - Introducing Rage
Submitted: February 13, 2007 • Updated: February 13, 2007
Word count: 741 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 235

Chapter 20 - Issue 20 Special- Putting out the Fire
Submitted: February 26, 2007 • Updated: February 26, 2007
Word count: 1548 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 239

Chapter 21 - hellfire and pain
Submitted: February 26, 2007 • Updated: February 26, 2007
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Chapter 22 - Neutral Corner
Submitted: March 3, 2007 • Updated: March 3, 2007
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Chapter 23 - Point Blank
Submitted: March 5, 2007 • Updated: March 5, 2007
Word count: 785 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 270

Chapter 24 - The Afterlife pt. 1
Submitted: March 11, 2007 • Updated: March 11, 2007
Word count: 630 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 227

Chapter 25 - The Afterlife Pt. 2
Submitted: March 11, 2007 • Updated: March 11, 2007
Word count: 726 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 211

Chapter 26 - Echinda, Human, Hedgehog
Submitted: March 12, 2007 • Updated: March 12, 2007
Word count: 829 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 231

Chapter 27 - Update from the Island
Submitted: April 28, 2007 • Updated: April 28, 2007
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Chapter 28 - Death's Beckon
Submitted: May 14, 2007 • Updated: May 14, 2007
Word count: 674 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 221

Chapter 29 - I Do's and I Dont's
Submitted: May 17, 2007 • Updated: May 17, 2007
Word count: 1070 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 218

Chapter 30 - One Word (Is all you need)
Submitted: May 18, 2007 • Updated: May 18, 2007
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Chapter 31 - How Did THAT Happen???
Submitted: July 28, 2007 • Updated: July 28, 2007
Word count: 693 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 237

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Shadowthe_hedgehog on March 29, 2009, 5:35:48 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 30)
Shadowthe_hedgehogsorry I haven't replied to these chapters ^^'
Eee, Tiffany wouldn't take that well either, she right there with Shadow when it comes to Maria, let's just say she wouldn't be too happy with him for using THAT against Shadow

alchemest1 on August 16, 2007, 1:46:34 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 30)
alchemest1Wow! That was a smart note on Ekyt's part. If not suicidal. Lol. I figured that Maria was the one word. GREAT CHAPTER! LOVED IT! (bounces off to read next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 8:57:04 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 29)
alchemest1(sniffs angrily) That's just like Shadow to show up on a wedding day. Anyway. Yeah. This could be bad for the resistant. I hope they are ready. (slips off to read the epic battle chapter!)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 8:34:18 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 28)
alchemest1(appears with a mile growl) I knew that would have been to easy! (snaps in annoyance) I knew he wasn't dead. Anyway. Great chapter. (slinks off to next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 8:18:04 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 27)
alchemest1(cocks head and laughs) okay. Confusing chapter. But really good. (shakes head and turn away to read next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 7:57:06 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 26)
alchemest1(appears and barks happily as it all falls into place) Ah. You clever dog you! (pouncer on you and hold you down while trying to decide if to bite you or grin) You had me so confused there for a while. Now I get it. It was a test although I'm not really sure what the whole choice thing was. It was sweet none the less! (bounces happily to the next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 7:41:30 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 25)
alchemest1(doesn't even bother to stop. Loved the chapter but is still looking for answers.)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 7:30:14 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 24)
alchemest1(shakes head and stares blankly) I'm completely lost! I think I need to read that one again. It was amazing. But i am so confused. (staggers back to previous chapter then after fifth time still confused continues on hoping for answers)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 7:13:25 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 23)
alchemest1(growls in confusion mouse still on shoulder) So who is he fighting for again. (shakes head nearly dislodging the mouse) Anyway. Paula brought up a really good point. Maybe she will talk some sense into those buka! (slinks off to next chapter mouse eating a seed on his shoulder)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 7:00:48 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 22)
alchemest1(appears with a mouse on shoulder) Hmmm. Ekyt once again the lonely hand of true uninhibited justice. (growls approval and gives a piece of bread to the mouse) Untods like some one is tired of being dumped on, and doesn't want to be taken lightly anymore. I DON'T BLAME HIM! (growls in aggrivated disgust and disappears with mouse to the next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 6:47:07 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 21)
alchemest1(howls in frustrated anticipation) You always do this! (snaps jaws in mock annoyance) you just love making us not know what's going to happen! (sighs and sniffs) Oh well! I guess i could always just in to the next chapter. Oh and Ekyt better not be doing what I think he is! (disappears with a swish of tail)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 6:28:26 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 20)
alchemest1(ears drooping sits back on haunches and howls in sorrow) They can't make Ekyt give up his position! (growls angrily and snarls in non acceptance) I know it's going to his daughter and is a thing to be proud of but I just can't and won't accept it. And that's final! (grudgingly slinks off to next chapter growling and muttering under breath)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 6:01:17 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 19)
alchemest1(cocks head and scratches behind ear thoughtfully) An Echidna and bat half breed. Hmmm. . . An Echibat. Lol. Anyway. How are the parents going to handle this one. Ekyt already feels bad about his daughter's half breed heritage. This is going to be interesting! (dashes off to next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 6:01:15 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 19)
alchemest1(cocks head and scratches behind ear thoughtfully) An Echidna and bat half breed. Hmmm. . . An Echibat. Lol. Anyway. How are the parents going to handle this one. Ekyt already feels bad about his daughter's half breed heritage. This is going to be interesting! (dashes off to next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 15, 2007, 5:49:50 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 18)
alchemest1(appears out of the shadows bouncing happily) Wow! That chapter was awesome! The battle was brutal and Shadow was being extra brutal this time. He must have really wanted to finish Ekyt off! Anyway. Excellent chapter! (bounds off towards next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 12, 2007, 12:20:33 AM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 17)
alchemest1(just shows up out of nowhere) sweet chapter! It really shows Linda's concern and sorrow for her husband. This chapter really did a good job at tying the two closer together. Good job! (bounces off to next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 10:49:24 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 16)
alchemest1(materialises from the shadows and mutters a happy growl) does this mean he is getting back to normal? Anyway. Great chapter. Your stories rock! Anyway. I have to split for now. I will be back for more! (with a swish of his tail vanishes into the darkness)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 10:37:03 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 15)
alchemest1(slinks out of shadows and cocks head) So. I obviously need to read all the preceding stories to understand this chapter. I didn't know Tails was the head of the Freedom fighters now!? Hmmm. COOL! Anyway. I don't think Tiffany is going to like Ekyt volunteering her kids to fight without her permission. GREAT chapter! I love it! (turns and disappears into the shadows towards next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 10:16:48 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 14)
alchemest1(whimpers in sympathy) Poor Ekyt. He offer to get this figured out before it gets him kille or kills him outright. (lays head on ground and puts paws over eyes and snout) How much more of this can he take? (slinks off sadly into the shadows for a moment before next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 9:50:07 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 13)
alchemest1(laughs wolfishly, stands up and stretches) Kyle is a brave little guy isn't he. Trying to take on Uncle Shadow. Cool! (growls his approval) BTW I love the plugs you throw in! They get me phyced for more! (runs off to read more)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 9:36:08 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 12)
alchemest1(runs around in circles excitedly until he crashes into a wall then gets up and growls excitedly instead) I love this story (tackles you happily and grins down at you wolfishly) The next chapter sounds amazing! I GOT TO GO READ IT!! (leaps of your chest and bounds away to next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 9:25:05 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 11)
alchemest1(growls happily and jumps around in amusement) Shadow got beat by a girl! Shadow got beat by a girl! (laughs wolfishly) That was classic! I bet he's in a bad mood for a while. He got creamed. I love this chapter. (howls in excitement then runs to read on)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 9:11:17 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 10)
alchemest1Yeah. I've decided it will be worth the bad taste! I'm going to bite that stupid hedgehog! Anyway. Great chapter! Although I can't believe Lord Lard got away! (growls with hackles raised) anyway. Great job! (runs off to next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 8:53:59 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 9)
alchemest1Wow! Great chapter. This is intense! (rushes happily to the next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 8:43:26 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 8)
alchemest1(lets out a sigh of relief and then growls) I don't trust that. . .stupid hedgehog! He's up to something! Can I bite him? (cocks head and bares fangs then stops and thinks about it) No then I'd have to wash my mouth out to get his foul taste out. Anyway. Yeah. (shakes head trying not to confuse himself and runs to next chapter)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 8:24:08 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 7)
alchemest1(looks and see there is another chapter) Your lucky! Lol. Otherwise I would be going nuts again! Great chapter! (growls happily and runs off to read more)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 8:13:58 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 6)
alchemest1Arg! You drive me crazy with chapters like this. WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN. EKYT IS GOING TO DO WHAT!? WHAT HAPPENS??! (looks down and realizes there is more chapters turns red, covers snout with paws in embaressment and slinks away to read what happens in next chapter rather than yelling more)

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 7:54:06 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 5)
alchemest1(growls, snarls and snaps jaws) i knew that dirty scientist couldn't do something decent to rate his life! And wow. What a fight that was with shadow. The kids did great! OFF TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 7:43:36 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 4)
alchemest1Wow. I love Ekyt's enterince in this chapter. That was wicked cool. (growls with approval) Robotnic on the good side i think the Earth just stopped spinning. Lol. Anyway. What happens to their chaos Emerald? MUST. . .FIND. . .OUT. ONWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

alchemest1 on August 11, 2007, 7:34:35 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 3)
alchemest1Wow! Great chapter. Must read more! (rushes away to read next chapter)

Flashthehedgehog on August 2, 2007, 4:35:22 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 31)
FlashthehedgehogWow, I wasn't expecting that, imagine if he was still on the vine. (If I'm correct it's a rope, and if I'm wrong, then never mind ^^"

Linda: I think I'm pregant
Eykt falls off Angel Island

alchemest1 on July 28, 2007, 7:28:15 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 2)
alchemest1Wow. Ekyt didn't freak when he found those two outside? He really has changed. Lol. Sweet chapter!

alchemest1 on July 28, 2007, 3:13:59 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 1)
alchemest1Wow. Great start. You did it perfectly. The aged heroes the timeless villian. All masterfully done. Oh. And i love the pairings. I actually support most of them. Lol

alchemest1 on July 28, 2007, 1:01:22 PM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 31)
alchemest1Wow. You weren't kidding this is unpredictable! I love it though. I think I found my new series to work my way through!

Flashthehedgehog on May 18, 2007, 5:43:08 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 30)
FlashthehedgehogWoah. I never would've thought Shadow could get so het up over Maria. I mean he's got his reasons but jeez take a vacation!

nextguardian on May 19, 2007, 12:49:31 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 30)
nextguardianI couldn't resist, I wanted something that would make Shadow weak enough to turn the tide of the war...that's just what came to me, lol.

Ekyt (To Shadow): Take your downers, spunky!

Flashthehedgehog on May 18, 2007, 5:31:55 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 29)
FlashthehedgehogA cool chapter. Trust Shadow to make his appearence on the wedding, that is just negatively punctual.

nextguardian on May 19, 2007, 12:47:53 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 29)
nextguardianThat's Shadow for you! I wish he HAD crashed the wedding I was at the other day! Two hours and then a lousy reception! GAAH! So, the fic's wedding was inspired, in other words, lol!

Flashthehedgehog on May 17, 2007, 3:25:35 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 28)
FlashthehedgehogOh wow. To be honest I didn't believe that the ultimayte lifeform could be killed by chaod abilities either, but you know this is your story so *shrugs*

Flashthehedgehog on April 29, 2007, 4:51:19 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 27)
Flashthehedgehoglol. Look out for another thrilling woman fight! In the next chapter, Eykt is forced to help Flash find his hat, instead of saving the world. The fact that Flash found in by the side of his bed......well...

Lol great chapter.

nextguardian on April 29, 2007, 10:39:49 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 27)
nextguardianI couldn't resist, lol, that just cracked me up while I was writing it :P

Flashthehedgehog on March 15, 2007, 2:39:32 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 26)
FlashthehedgehogLol. I guess not all men are like Eykt. I'm totally siked (or however you spell it, at least that's how you pronouce it) that you used my comment there. It's very true here in England.

Great chapter

nextguardian on March 15, 2007, 12:12:22 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 26)
nextguardianI tried to make him special and different...Anyway, no problem, the comment managed to crack me up and inspire me at the same time!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on March 13, 2007, 7:12:55 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 26)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME! Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next!

nextguardian on March 13, 2007, 11:13:43 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 26)
nextguardianthank you ^^

nextguardian on March 12, 2007, 1:54:38 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: index)
nextguardian"What a strange world Eykt is in! I must read the next chapter and find out what happens.

Oh and correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't an argument between 2 women (or rather a "cat fight") be arousing to a male? Just kidding. :P"

I think you'll find this next chapter amusing Flash, lol.

Shadowthe_hedgehog on March 12, 2007, 8:10:56 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 25)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^^ He's a guardian again, SWEET!

Great chapter NG ^-^

nextguardian on March 12, 2007, 1:53:42 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 25)
nextguardianThank you^^ Glad you liked it

Flashthehedgehog on March 12, 2007, 2:17:09 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 25)
FlashthehedgehogHuh? This is confusing me. I mean I kind of get it but at the same time....0_o. Oh well I suppose this is type of reaction you're looking for? Well written!

nextguardian on March 12, 2007, 3:05:23 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 25)
nextguardianThank you! It is supposed to be...deep, I guess. I was trying to layer the story a bit.

Flashthehedgehog on March 12, 2007, 2:10:41 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 24)
FlashthehedgehogWhat a strange world Eykt is in! I must read the next chapter and find out what happens.

Oh and correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't an argument between 2 women (or rather a "cat fight") be arousing to a male? Just kidding. :P

nextguardian on March 12, 2007, 3:04:46 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 24)
nextguardianlmao, it wasn't supposed to be in this case! They're married! It was just supposed to be tension building, lol. But you made a good point. I'll have to be careful how I word things :D

Flashthehedgehog on March 9, 2007, 1:52:44 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 21)
FlashthehedgehogAh mega suspense and just ah so cool!

Flashthehedgehog on March 9, 2007, 1:41:35 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 20)
FlashthehedgehogAwesome chapter

Shadowthe_hedgehog on March 5, 2007, 6:43:16 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 22)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAwesome ^^ nice chapter NG

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 27, 2007, 6:36:20 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 21)
Shadowthe_hedgehogSweet ^^ can't wait to read the next chapter ^^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 27, 2007, 6:35:37 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 20)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAwesome ^^ great job NG

WhiteLighting681 on February 26, 2007, 4:43:41 AM

WhiteLighting681 on (Chapter: 1)
WhiteLighting681OMG, you support shadow + Lien-da? Me Too!! Yay SonSal to^^
This is so cool!! ^__^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 13, 2007, 3:11:54 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 19)
Shadowthe_hedgehogOOH, this I've gotta see ^^

Awesome chapter!

Flashthehedgehog on February 10, 2007, 6:05:11 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 17)
FlashthehedgehogGreat chapter NG, it really catches Lindas feelings to Eykt ^^ ah what the hell I'm no teacher give me hug!

0_o

nextguardian on February 10, 2007, 7:35:15 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 17)
nextguardianlol

Flashthehedgehog on February 10, 2007, 6:30:40 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 18)
FlashthehedgehogGreat chapter, and this is feedback ok, so you don't have to listen, but where Shadow said "I’ll even let that dog that you call your wife come with you." Was a little bit too evil, even for Shadow. Just a thought though. ^^ and you did need that bit in order for Eykt to change his mind.

nextguardian on February 10, 2007, 7:34:59 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 18)
nextguardianYou know, you're right. Thank you for pointing that out.

Note: I apologize to anyone else who felt that comment was vulgar or innapropriate. It will not happen again.

-NextGuardian-

Flashthehedgehog on February 10, 2007, 5:22:53 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: index)
Flashthehedgehogcheers NG

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 8, 2007, 12:07:44 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 18)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAwesome ^-^ Nice chapter
It's awesome!!!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 6, 2007, 7:46:29 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 17)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAw, nice chapter NG ^^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 5, 2007, 7:28:01 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 16)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^^
I still say your stories are way better than mine... DON'T DENY IT, YOU KNOW IT'S TRUE!!! LOL sorry, just had to do that ^-^'

nextguardian on February 5, 2007, 9:16:20 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 16)
nextguardian(makes a face like a three-year-old) Nuh-uh! ;)

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 5, 2007, 9:27:07 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: index)
Shadowthe_hedgehog(Does the same) Yeah huh

Flashthehedgehog on January 30, 2007, 3:52:41 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 15)
FlashthehedgehogThat was a wonderful chapter NG, sorry I didn't read it sooner. It's all this commotion with money and school work. It's doing my head in.

nextguardian on February 4, 2007, 1:01:41 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 15)
nextguardianI can totally relate!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on January 20, 2007, 12:19:29 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 15)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^^ yeah, it's cool with me NG ^_~

Nice work!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on January 9, 2007, 10:11:56 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 14)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAW, poor Ekyt!

Nice work NG ^^

Flashthehedgehog on December 23, 2006, 9:20:14 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 13)
FlashthehedgehogWow great chapter. I laughed at the part where Shadow meets Kyle and Tracey. Why Shadow reminded me of the big bad wolf (from red riding hood) when I read that I don't know!

nextguardian on December 26, 2006, 3:49:27 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 13)
nextguardianMaybe you're thinking of the red cape he wears in the "future?" lol, nice comparison though

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 23, 2006, 1:29:41 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 13)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME!!! Oh, I've gotta read the next chapter ^^

Flashthehedgehog on December 22, 2006, 7:36:44 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 12)
FlashthehedgehogThe blurb for the new chapter sounds amazing! Keep up the good work.

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 22, 2006, 2:46:48 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 12)
Shadowthe_hedgehogSWEET ^^ I luv this chapter!!!

Nice work NG

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 14, 2006, 9:56:38 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 11)
Shadowthe_hedgehogKEWL ^^
Awesome work

Tiffany: *Snicker* Shadow got beaten by a girl! lol

nextguardian on December 15, 2006, 11:23:43 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 11)
nextguardianlol, and she's not an ultimate life-form either! He'll never live this down!

@ Flash- Yeah, he's gonna be upset. Big Time! Poor Flash, just being friendly, lol.

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 16, 2006, 3:18:31 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: index)
Shadowthe_hedgehogTiffany: Yeah, I'm not sure if I'll let him live this down.... but, then again, I am his sister..... hmmm

nextguardian on December 18, 2006, 12:25:06 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: index)
nextguardianTAKE IT TO 'IM TIFF!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 18, 2006, 9:52:20 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: index)
Shadowthe_hedgehogTiffany: Oh believe me, I will. *Turns to Shadow* You got beaten by a girl!!! XP

Flashthehedgehog on December 14, 2006, 11:58:08 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 11)
FlashthehedgehogLol, I bet Shadow will be sulky

Hey Shadow, what's up?
Get the hell away from me!!!!!!!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 14, 2006, 6:41:17 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 10)
Shadowthe_hedgehog*GASP* SHADOW!!!
Tiffany: Grr, of course he can't be good for more than one day!

Great job NG
Tracey: Hi Granpa ^^

nextguardian on December 14, 2006, 11:19:17 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 10)
nextguardianEkyt: Granpa? Okay, Grandkid # 2!

lol

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 14, 2006, 9:42:57 PM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogTracey: Heehee ^^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 13, 2006, 9:54:14 PM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^^ thanks for adding the chars ^_~

Flashthehedgehog on December 12, 2006, 10:29:30 PM

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FlashthehedgehogOh wow that was fantastic

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 12, 2006, 8:46:40 AM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogOOH, I've gotta read the next chapter!!!
Nice job NG ^^

Flashthehedgehog on December 12, 2006, 12:23:09 AM

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FlashthehedgehogNow don't think that I'm not reading your stories anymore because I am. It's just that I can never think what to typr down at the end ^^

nextguardian on December 12, 2006, 2:35:53 AM

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nextguardianNever lost faith in you ;)

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 10, 2006, 7:16:21 AM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogOOH I hope Ekyt knows what he's doing!
Great chapter ^-^

Flashthehedgehog on December 9, 2006, 9:32:27 PM

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FlashthehedgehogGreat suspenseful chapter

Shadowthe_hedgehog on November 14, 2006, 6:55:49 AM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^^

nextguardian on November 1, 2006, 1:10:33 PM

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nextguardianThanks to everyone for the comments!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on November 1, 2006, 4:35:57 PM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogNo prob,

Your stories ROCK!!!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 29, 2006, 10:12:29 AM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogOOOH I've gotta see what happens next!!! ^0^ Nice work

Flashthehedgehog on October 28, 2006, 7:28:04 PM

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FlashthehedgehogOOOh, tension and excitement. I love it! Good job

Flashthehedgehog on October 28, 2006, 7:23:47 PM

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FlashthehedgehogWow, awesome!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 25, 2006, 1:25:20 PM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogAwesome ^^ cool chapter!

nextguardian on October 25, 2006, 2:36:41 PM

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nextguardianthanks ^^

nextguardian on October 24, 2006, 1:42:56 PM

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nextguardianSorry it's short, but it's leading up to something better ;)

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 14, 2006, 2:22:50 AM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogGREAT JOB ^^

Flashthehedgehog on October 13, 2006, 7:53:18 PM

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FlashthehedgehogCool. Shadow with a crown on his head. Why am I reminded of Garfield? Lol anyways good chapter keep going

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 13, 2006, 3:11:08 PM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogSWEET, I really like this story ^^

Violet_Rose on October 13, 2006, 2:31:50 PM

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Violet_RoseAwesome!

Flashthehedgehog on October 13, 2006, 1:18:04 AM

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Flashthehedgehogwow cool chapter. Shadow ruling the world. How cool! Sorry I'm not supposed to say that. GO FUTURISTIC STORY! And I know I keep refuring to him but i'd just like to say that Flash isn't really futuristic, unless you count LoH ^^