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Life of Love and Confusion:A sonic story

This is a story 4 my babe jordanthehedgehog!


I know it is weird............well Enjoy

God i love my Boyfriend so much /\_/\

I'm sorry If this is disgusting or something....but..it is a request..

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Life of Love and Confusion(Jordan And Kira Story)
Submitted: February 10, 2007 • Updated: February 10, 2007
Word count: 345 • Size: 1k • Comments: 8 • views: 570

Chapter 2 - Mysterious Assasin
Submitted: February 11, 2007 • Updated: February 11, 2007
Word count: 556 • Size: 2k • Comments: 7 • views: 420

Chapter 3 - Confusion and a Get Together.
Submitted: February 11, 2007 • Updated: February 11, 2007
Word count: 291 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 381

Chapter 4 - The Attacked and the Confused
Submitted: February 11, 2007 • Updated: February 11, 2007
Word count: 321 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 387

Chapter 5 - The Surprise
Submitted: February 12, 2007 • Updated: February 12, 2007
Word count: 314 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 439

Chapter 6 - Surpirse turns into Cold
Submitted: February 12, 2007 • Updated: February 12, 2007
Word count: 276 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 392

Chapter 7 - Rest into Worry
Submitted: February 12, 2007 • Updated: February 12, 2007
Word count: 345 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 348

Chapter 8 - Lovely Morning?
Submitted: February 13, 2007 • Updated: February 13, 2007
Word count: 401 • Size: 2k • Comments: 7 • views: 360

Chapter 9 - Kiras Reaction
Submitted: February 13, 2007 • Updated: February 13, 2007
Word count: 426 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 372

Chapter 10 - Anger In The Morning
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 372 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 358

Chapter 11 - A Baby Is Born
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 394 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 380

Chapter 12 - Careing Love
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 302 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 353

Chapter 13 - Romantic Evening.
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 425 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 375

Chapter 14 - A Worried Angel
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 331 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 373

Chapter 15 - Happy Valentines Day
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 401 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 371

Chapter 16 - Lost Love
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 273 • Size: 1k • Comments: 8 • views: 380

Chapter 17 - "UP UP I SAY!"
Submitted: February 15, 2007 • Updated: February 15, 2007
Word count: 310 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 366

Chapter 18 - The Sickness part 1
Submitted: February 17, 2007 • Updated: February 17, 2007
Word count: 607 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 436

Chapter 19 - Leaving For A Break
Submitted: February 17, 2007 • Updated: February 17, 2007
Word count: 392 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 375

Chapter 20 - The Showdown
Submitted: February 18, 2007 • Updated: February 18, 2007
Word count: 442 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 367

Chapter 21 - Hope and Tradgities
Submitted: February 19, 2007 • Updated: February 19, 2007
Word count: 443 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 359

Chapter 22 - The Return of the Queen
Submitted: February 19, 2007 • Updated: February 19, 2007
Word count: 421 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 388

Chapter 23 - Hospitalized and a New Power
Submitted: February 20, 2007 • Updated: February 20, 2007
Word count: 508 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 401

Chapter 24 - Kira new Power.
Submitted: February 21, 2007 • Updated: February 21, 2007
Word count: 393 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 335

Chapter 25 - A Visit From Virus and Tony
Submitted: February 27, 2007 • Updated: February 27, 2007
Word count: 635 • Size: 3k • Comments: 9 • views: 360

Chapter 26 - A Small Visit
Submitted: March 8, 2007 • Updated: March 8, 2007
Word count: 472 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 359

Chapter 27 - Pain and Suffering
Submitted: March 9, 2007 • Updated: March 9, 2007
Word count: 482 • Size: 2k • Comments: 7 • views: 359

Chapter 28 - Koda Returns
Submitted: March 17, 2007 • Updated: March 17, 2007
Word count: 377 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 349

Chapter 29 - Friendly Hello
Submitted: March 17, 2007 • Updated: March 17, 2007
Word count: 347 • Size: 1k • Comments: 7 • views: 341

Chapter 30 - A Visit fom Sonic2
Submitted: March 20, 2007 • Updated: March 20, 2007
Word count: 375 • Size: 2k • Comments: 7 • views: 356

Chapter 31 - Pleasure of a mating night (WARNING SEXUAL CONTENT!)
Submitted: June 3, 2007 • Updated: May 9, 2008
Word count: 407 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 438

Chapter 32 - Untitled
Submitted: August 24, 2007 • Updated: August 24, 2007
Word count: 318 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 327

Chapter 33 - Demonized.
Submitted: September 16, 2007 • Updated: September 16, 2007
Word count: 361 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 331

Chapter 34 - Summer
Submitted: May 4, 2008 • Updated: May 4, 2008
Word count: 701 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 320

Chapter 35 - lust (warning. sex XD )
Submitted: May 11, 2008 • Updated: May 11, 2008
Word count: 655 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 326

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ShadowAndMaria4Ever on May 1, 2009, 3:27:38 PM

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on (Chapter: 16)
ShadowAndMaria4EverI lost my breath and didnt even know it was gone until he giot revived with the chaos emerald

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on May 1, 2009, 3:13:54 PM

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on (Chapter: 11)
ShadowAndMaria4EverHES GONNA KILL AJ! I dont think Jordan and Kira will let him though.

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on May 1, 2009, 3:07:14 PM

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on (Chapter: 8)
ShadowAndMaria4EverI'm preparing my Dark Beam! (Midnight the Hedgehog, a drak type) It can go through four houses!

Forestdahedgehog on June 16, 2008, 10:16:32 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 35)
Forestdahedgehogawwwwwwwwwwwww,how romantic,write mor plz XD

Forestdahedgehog on June 16, 2008, 10:12:57 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 34)
Forestdahedgehogawwwwwwwwwwwwwww,summers a nice name XD

boykingkilla on May 11, 2008, 5:05:11 AM

boykingkilla on (Chapter: index)
boykingkillaIt is awesome my friend, Long time no chat huh? ^_^

sonicbabe5 on May 24, 2008, 1:17:59 AM

sonicbabe5 on (Chapter: index)
sonicbabe58smiles8 yeah, thanks ^^

Forestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 6:11:24 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 33)
ForestdahedgehogXD MOR PLZ!

Forestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 6:07:59 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 32)
Forestdahedgehog=3 cute

Forestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 6:06:22 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 31)
Forestdahedgehog:o!!!wow...that is lik so... a g-g-g-GREAT STORY XD!!but a lot of sexual content XP XD

Forestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 6:02:23 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 30)
ForestdahedgehogXD

Forestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 5:56:41 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 29)
ForestdahedgehogAwwwwww......... XD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:51:36 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 28)
Forestdahedgehogmor'fun time XP'but YAY!!

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:49:13 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 27)
ForestdahedgehogMARK!!NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!*sniffle*i didnt eve get 2 say hi 2 him...*sad puppy face*WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!lolz good stry,and wow,mor'playing arund'XP lol

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:42:09 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 26)
ForestdahedgehogXD i wonders who mark iz?good or not,friend or foe,guess ill find out in next chapters............lolz great story XD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:38:41 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 25)
ForestdahedgehogXD AWSOMENESS

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:24:06 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 24)
ForestdahedgehogXD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:21:12 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 23)
ForestdahedgehogXD FIRE BALLS

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:16:32 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 22)
ForestdahedgehogcoolXD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:03:48 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 21)
Forestdahedgehogoh noes

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 8:46:50 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 20)
Forestdahedgehog-_-oh great,koda...YAY!!THAT MEANS MOR VIOLENCE XD YAHOO!!!

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 8:05:20 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 18)
ForestdahedgehogOH

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 8:01:42 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 17)
Forestdahedgehogawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww XD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:59:31 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 16)
ForestdahedgehogOMG!!!U HAD ME SCARED 4 A SECOND THERE!!!THAN HEAVEN 4 CHAOS EMERALDS XD DX IF there wasnt 1,then,idk wat 2 say about itXD awsome though^^

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:48:17 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 15)
Forestdahedgehogromantic XD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:41:13 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 14)
ForestdahedgehogXD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:34:23 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 13)
ForestdahedgehogawwwwwwXD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:23:56 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 12)
ForestdahedgehogOMG!!DE POOR BABY!!!than heaven jordan and kira saved him,BUT POOR JORDANA ND KIRA XP XD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:19:09 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 11)
ForestdahedgehogawwwwwXD AJ!!!!grrr KODA U R REALLY CROSSING DA LINE NOW!!!!!!!!GRRRRRR!!!RAWR!!!very nice story XD

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:08:35 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 10)
ForestdahedgehogGOD!!!OK KODA UR GOING DOWN 2 DA GROUND!!GRRRR LE ME AT HIM LE ME AT HIM >:(

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:03:46 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 9)
ForestdahedgehogOH YAH KICK KODAS BUTT!!!!!

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:00:56 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 8)
Forestdahedgehog>:(I SWEAR IM GONNA SHOOT THIS KODA GUY IN THE HEAD AND/OR BEAT HIS @$$!!!!!!!!

Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 6:54:59 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 7)
Forestdahedgehogok,this koda guy is gonna have a broken NECK IF HE DOESNT STEP AWAY FROM KIRA LIK NOW!!!!AND A BUSTED HEAD!!!!

xXKirathechihuahuaXx on August 26, 2007, 9:11:48 AM

xXKirathechihuahuaXx on (Chapter: 32)
xXKirathechihuahuaXxAwwwwwwwwww Thats sooooo cute! *favs* Make more!!!

sonicbabe5 on June 18, 2007, 11:19:37 AM

sonicbabe5 on (Chapter: index)
sonicbabe5yeah^^ flame can b in this

RogueTheBat18 on June 3, 2007, 9:23:00 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 31)
RogueTheBat18good to see ur back

Falconlobo on June 3, 2007, 7:41:57 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 31)
Falconlobocute but maybe this should be rated Moderate

Nudity and Moderate sex^^

virusthehedgehog on April 19, 2007, 11:23:47 PM

virusthehedgehog on (Chapter: 30)
virusthehedgehogwhat sonic 2 stole my new game lol

virusthehedgehog on April 19, 2007, 11:19:51 PM

virusthehedgehog on (Chapter: 28)
virusthehedgehogummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm wow

FlameTheFox578 on March 24, 2007, 3:11:36 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 29)
FlameTheFox578....is that all hes gonna do?

Sonic2 on March 26, 2007, 10:14:35 AM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 29)
Sonic2well for me i hope not because if he appers once...my charater will apper once! but its ok for me! at least i got to be in a chapter!

RogueTheBat18 on March 20, 2007, 8:50:08 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 30)
RogueTheBat18they like sleeping and relaxing, its how they end every chp :P

Falconlobo on March 20, 2007, 9:11:05 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 30)
Falconlobocute and funny^^

Sonic2 on March 20, 2007, 8:20:44 AM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 30)
Sonic2also yeah i do get nervious about myyoung age of 10but i would make a exuse...but first i'd play with a box!^^

Sonic2 on March 20, 2007, 5:02:26 AM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 30)
Sonic2YAYZ!!! TIS IS FUNNY AND MY FAVORITE CHAPTER!!!!!

Sonic2 on March 18, 2007, 9:39:59 AM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: index)
Sonic2if u forgot, when will u put me in (if i can't be in this story, i'll be in a box) and i love being in that box!^^

Falconlobo on March 17, 2007, 7:56:36 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 29)
Falconlobocute^^

Falconlobo on March 17, 2007, 7:55:23 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 28)
Falconlobowow no Jordons Power Ups alsmost got the better of him

FlameTheFox578 on March 17, 2007, 7:01:02 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 29)
FlameTheFox578like...how there both red,and both there names start with a "J" and how both there names have 6 letters o.o

FlameTheFox578 on March 17, 2007, 6:59:37 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 29)
FlameTheFox578eheh....awesome*faves*y'know,jordan reminds me of jaiden for some reason

FlameTheFox578 on March 17, 2007, 6:09:04 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 28)
FlameTheFox578cool :3.

virusthehedgehog on March 12, 2007, 7:24:37 PM

virusthehedgehog on (Chapter: 27)
virusthehedgehognnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oh well virus didn't know him that well cool chapter

Falconlobo on March 12, 2007, 7:23:33 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 27)
Falconlobowow something has awakened in her very powerfull

Falconlobo on March 12, 2007, 7:21:26 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 26)
Falconlobois Mark what he seems or not is he bad or good

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on March 12, 2007, 12:55:32 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 20)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxI never imagined Tydle as a bad guy, great work!^__^ an I tottaly understand it, sis.^^ Anyways, it'sjust a story, plus you know I don't mind things such as these.^__^Keep up an exelent work!^__^

Sonic2 on March 10, 2007, 2:42:24 PM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 27)
Sonic2AWESOME! just don't get my chareter mad or hell will raise

RogueTheBat18 on March 10, 2007, 10:02:46 AM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 27)
RogueTheBat18Shes getting really unstable with her powers

FlameTheFox578 on March 9, 2007, 2:49:11 PM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 27)
FlameTheFox578freaking sweet! i LOVE yur stories! ^^ Keep up the Excellent work!!!!!^______^

virusthehedgehog on March 8, 2007, 10:36:06 PM

virusthehedgehog on (Chapter: 26)
virusthehedgehoghmmmmmmmmm i wonder i wnder did u invent mark or is he someone elses charrie

Sonic2 on March 8, 2007, 4:41:09 PM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 26)
Sonic2also can i be in your stories

Sonic2 on March 8, 2007, 4:29:52 PM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 19)
Sonic2every hedgehog gets this -feels head- oh...f*ck

Sonic2 on March 8, 2007, 4:17:32 PM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 13)
Sonic2you had to say um... u know... sex. -falls to ground- -dies-

Sonic2 on March 8, 2007, 4:01:42 PM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 6)
Sonic2this is kinda like a movie... A RATED "R" MOVIE!!!! :(

Sonic2 on March 8, 2007, 3:53:30 PM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 2)
Sonic2cool but kinda' creeped me out (my weakness is romance)

Sonic2 on March 8, 2007, 9:51:12 AM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 26)
Sonic2I saw this imeadeatly due to e-mail. IT ROX!

Falconlobo on March 6, 2007, 7:29:50 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 25)
Falconlobogreat chapter durnks should not be allowed to hit they then miss every time^^

Falconlobo on March 6, 2007, 7:27:32 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 24)
Falconlobonice and cute

Falconlobo on March 6, 2007, 7:25:47 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 23)
Falconlobocool when did this happen ya left out the fight^^

FlameTheFox578 on March 4, 2007, 8:44:18 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 25)
FlameTheFox5783rd comment on this.yur just so fraking good at writing stories :DDDDDDDD keep up the Great work!:3 i really cant wait for the next chapter! ^0^

virusthehedgehog on February 28, 2007, 5:47:52 PM

virusthehedgehog on (Chapter: 25)
virusthehedgehogaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrggggggghhhhhhhhhh why did i get landed with that prick tony

Sonic2 on February 28, 2007, 4:54:14 PM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 1)
Sonic2is this how...?

Sonic2 on February 28, 2007, 4:52:17 PM

Sonic2 on (Chapter: 25)
Sonic2THIS,IS,F**KIN',AWESOME!!!!!!!!

FlameTheFox578 on February 28, 2007, 6:54:21 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 25)
FlameTheFox578cool *faves*

RogueTheBat18 on February 27, 2007, 7:27:55 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 25)
RogueTheBat18okay, wats going to happen?

jordanthehedgehog on February 27, 2007, 3:53:07 PM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 25)
jordanthehedgehogoi tony hands off

FlameTheFox578 on February 27, 2007, 5:33:54 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 25)
FlameTheFox578woo...awesome..

virusthehedgehog on February 21, 2007, 10:30:44 PM

virusthehedgehog on (Chapter: 8)
virusthehedgehogwheres virus when you need him i'd show gim where to go lol

FlameTheFox578 on February 21, 2007, 12:21:20 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 24)
FlameTheFox578cool..

FlameTheFox578 on February 20, 2007, 3:55:39 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 23)
FlameTheFox578awesome!u can seriously write.yur stories are kickass.do more,im really interested.

Falconlobo on February 20, 2007, 12:17:08 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 22)
FalconloboNice chapter useing her roayl sttis to help a freind is nice but what did Max do to make him say he's a monster?

Falconlobo on February 20, 2007, 12:14:42 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 21)
FalconloboWow intesnseness

RogueTheBat18 on February 19, 2007, 5:56:40 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 22)
RogueTheBat18whoa, so much in so little time

RogueTheBat18 on February 19, 2007, 5:54:34 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 21)
RogueTheBat18Wats up?

FlameTheFox578 on February 19, 2007, 6:31:51 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 22)
FlameTheFox578awesome

jordanthehedgehog on February 19, 2007, 1:07:47 AM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 21)
jordanthehedgehogno wats wrong

RogueTheBat18 on February 18, 2007, 6:20:47 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 20)
RogueTheBat18Koda's return, cant wait to the next chp

Falconlobo on February 18, 2007, 6:02:12 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 20)
FalconloboWow stress endures Them and Koda returns

jordanthehedgehog on February 17, 2007, 10:05:55 PM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 20)
jordanthehedgehogOMG i cant wait for the next chapter

FlameTheFox578 on February 17, 2007, 3:51:43 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: index)
FlameTheFox578heh....u really know how to write......

Falconlobo on February 17, 2007, 1:36:59 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 19)
FalconloboFunny Someone stop the love


ya can't stop it^^

Falconlobo on February 17, 2007, 1:34:55 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 18)
Falconlobonice funny and cute chapter

jordanthehedgehog on February 17, 2007, 12:29:03 AM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 19)
jordanthehedgehogwhat did i do

jordanthehedgehog on February 16, 2007, 11:07:53 PM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 18)
jordanthehedgehogOMG WHATS HAPPENING AND HOW DARE YOU WASH UR NOT MY MOTHER BESIDE I CAN WASH MY SELF still very good i will wait for the next one

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:22:02 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 17)
Falconlobonice story but far from over for future chapters though

i think spacing might be neeed if the chapters are logner^^

and ratings please^^

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:20:31 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 16)
Falconloboguees when there are no dragonballs handy a chaos emerald will do

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:19:09 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 15)
Falconloboshouldn't they get married^^

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:18:02 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 14)
Falconloboseriously Koda needs to let it be

and give it up

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:15:08 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 13)
Falconlobosuper powers cool

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:13:45 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 12)
FalconloboHmm must be super healing or something like wolverine

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:12:14 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 11)
FalconloboOh Koda You crossing the line now

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:11:20 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 9)
FalconloboKoda si begging to be more of an evil jerk all the time

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:09:21 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 8)
FalconloboKoda sounds like a real jerk

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:07:28 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 7)
FalconloboA hedgedog cool

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:06:03 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 6)
Falconloboooh mood swings^^

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:05:12 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 5)
Falconlobocute a baby^^ nice

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:03:02 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 4)
Falconloboalso i would rate this mdoerate launguge

to be safe^^ but goood story but what happened inbweteen this and the last chapter?^^

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:00:05 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconloboalso i would rate it moderate spoilers and sex and perhaps moderate nudity depdming on how the story goes

and moderate violence just to be safe

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 9:58:54 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 3)
Falconlobothis is good but needs the spacing^^

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 9:57:28 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 2)
Falconloboreally good but spacing is needed

Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 9:55:24 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
Falconlobonice start but needs spaceing^^

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 15, 2007, 2:05:56 PM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 17)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxYay!Relaxation!Woohoo!!

It's nice and all, but KODA?!XD now I miss himXD

It's comin allong very well! Keep up th brilliant work!

BTW: I added a story on myself!=D I doubt you'll read i, but hey, I wanna tell you anyways..^^

AlleyCat17 on February 15, 2007, 2:19:19 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 16)
AlleyCat17wow sad but nice.

RogueTheBat18 on February 14, 2007, 3:29:33 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 16)
RogueTheBat18whoa, pretty good

RogueTheBat18 on February 14, 2007, 3:10:03 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 12)
RogueTheBat18Bloody hell, these two take all sorts of hits, but they never die:P

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 11:14:01 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 16)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxJordan's brave, that's good in a man, he should be able to do anything for his loved ones, and by far he's doing a perfect job at it.^__^I'm luvin it, sis!Bring up the next chapter....if there is one..O.o

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 11:10:32 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 15)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxSo touching!The love in this one is so very strong!I oved the turn out on it!

This is awsome, keep up the vey nice job!*sobs* so nice.....

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 11:05:04 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 14)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxTisk tisk, Jordan shouldve waited for the challange to come to him, thats the fighter's noble way to fight, thus youll have the element of surprise and the calmness of of winning.^^I'm cunning that way, I know what I'm saying^^

Nice chapter, I liked this one too, but Koda's gotta back off, seriously he should get a blow up doll!XDD

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 11:00:21 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 13)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxAwwwwwwww!Up! what a nice way for a first word to come out! That was awsome! and finaly you two have some alone time!*claps*

Nice and very touching chpter, I like this one most of al so far! Keep up the great job!

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:29:21 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 12)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxT-T Ok that's reminding me way too much of Angie. I was shot in the arm too, thank you very much, plus the babie was in danger of bein squashed!T-T

Nice and killer story, I'm luvin it!

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:24:02 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 11)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxKoda'd better not do what I think he's doing! T-T your stpry reminds me so much about angie! My opposite wanted to kill his own son!T-T Thankully I didnt let him*phew*

Killer job killer scenery, and killer name for your son!

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:17:21 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 10)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxKoda dosent seem to give up does he? PAIN IN THE @$$ BASTERD! DIE LIKE THE ROACH YOU ARE!>.<

Still I comment the story as a thriller!(for once jordan ans kira didnt go at it in the bed!XD)

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:12:01 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 9)
xXHerMusicalAngelXx= / Koda needs to know that if he wants Kira sooooo much that he should learnt o respect her, unlike some people I know, anyways, Koda wont get Kira!XP


Awshumness job on the storyline here!It's kicking so much @$$ as a narrative!

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:04:45 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 8)
xXHerMusicalAngelXx*taps foot* That Koda knows how oget on my nerves and you know what? I'm preparing to go all Tydle on his @$$!

Agin nice job, and I love the way the other couple are!X3

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 9:59:21 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 7)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxThe hell will Koda wrek ya'lls happy birth! Lemme at him!

Very great job! Dogs are known todo thar, an kira bein part dog, she's kool like that!*thumb up*Very extravagant job!

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 9:51:16 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 6)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxHmm hmm, Kira's got a small aggression, can't wait to read the next one!So far so god!I'm rootin for ya sis!

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 9:46:56 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 5)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxA baby? Awwwww!

You two really seem to get magical allot dont ya?XD


Nice job, keep it up!

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 9:39:48 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 4)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxCrap!>.< I fight off rappers every mudda fukcing day! Bring dem on!

jordanthehedgehog on February 14, 2007, 6:24:30 AM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 16)
jordanthehedgehogaww cute

jordanthehedgehog on February 14, 2007, 3:14:24 AM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 14)
jordanthehedgehogaww sweet and OMG only 13 and already married

jordanthehedgehog on February 14, 2007, 2:05:07 AM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 13)
jordanthehedgehogaww so cute his first word i cant wait for the next chapter

RogueTheBat18 on February 13, 2007, 6:40:07 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 9)
RogueTheBat18haha, well done.
I am very impressed with your story, cant wait until the next chps come.

RogueTheBat18 on February 13, 2007, 6:37:48 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 8)
RogueTheBat18cool, off to read the last chp

RogueTheBat18 on February 13, 2007, 6:35:39 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 7)
RogueTheBat18hmm...not bad, i mean, Kira is part dog, they get rather aggressive when they r about to hav pups.

Well done

RogueTheBat18 on February 13, 2007, 6:31:54 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 5)
RogueTheBat18Whoa, a wee bit violent :P but still good.

Amazment88 on February 13, 2007, 8:02:04 AM

Amazment88 on (Chapter: 9)
Amazment88Luv tha chapter!
YAY U!
Awesomestory soo far!
I want 2 see wut happens!

Amazment88 on February 13, 2007, 8:01:32 AM

Amazment88 on (Chapter: 1)
Amazment88Awesome!

sonicbabe5 on February 12, 2007, 4:29:14 AM

sonicbabe5 on (Chapter: index)
sonicbabe5Thanks everyone!

jordanthehedgehog on February 12, 2007, 4:29:07 AM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 5)
jordanthehedgehogi loved do the next i cant wait

RogueTheBat18 on February 11, 2007, 5:46:23 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 4)
RogueTheBat18Whoa, keep going, i want to see the ending

RogueTheBat18 on February 11, 2007, 5:44:03 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 3)
RogueTheBat18Cool, keep writing

RogueTheBat18 on February 11, 2007, 5:42:11 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 2)
RogueTheBat18Bloody good mate.

RogueTheBat18 on February 11, 2007, 5:39:13 PM

RogueTheBat18 on (Chapter: 1)
RogueTheBat18Bloody hell, good one mate, keep going
Off to read next chp
Faves

And i hav notice some lines from my stories, i dont mind, good story idea.

jordanthehedgehog on February 11, 2007, 4:28:33 PM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: index)
jordanthehedgehogcool cant wait for the next one

FlameTheFox578 on February 11, 2007, 1:01:41 PM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 1)
FlameTheFox578heh...nice one.keep it up

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 11, 2007, 4:08:48 AM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 3)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxXP Someone fancies Kira allot huh?XP

Nice chapter, Kira almost reminds me of shdwo, serious, but a fighter at the same time, keep up the great work, sis!^__^

jordanthehedgehog on February 11, 2007, 3:58:59 AM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 3)
jordanthehedgehognext one next one i need it plz babe do the next one*kisses u *

Shademaster12345 on February 11, 2007, 1:08:20 AM

Shademaster12345 on (Chapter: 2)
Shademaster12345Neeto

sonicspeed619 on February 11, 2007, 12:13:37 AM

sonicspeed619 on (Chapter: index)
sonicspeed619Awesome sis ^^*faves*

Doomlord1234 on February 11, 2007, 12:05:03 AM

Doomlord1234 on (Chapter: index)
Doomlord1234now THIS is a story!!! faving this!!!

jordanthehedgehog on February 10, 2007, 11:41:07 PM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 2)
jordanthehedgehogcool do the next chapter do it *kisses u*

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 10, 2007, 10:41:54 PM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 2)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxWoah!Light purple you say!ooh!May I draw!*Holds up pencil happily*^-^ Me color too!With green also right?AWSOME!

Kick @$$ story all the way, I'm liking the suspence.

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 10, 2007, 10:35:55 PM

xXHerMusicalAngelXx on (Chapter: 1)
xXHerMusicalAngelXxOO Wow....Kiack @$$ narrative! Your good at narrating!Plus the story was awsome!(Well the chapter)

jordanthehedgehog on February 10, 2007, 6:54:18 PM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
jordanthehedgehogawww cute