The Power Inside (Naruto)
Submitted January 21, 2008 Updated September 20, 2008 Status Incomplete | This fic begins as a better version of "hell in the land of herbs". But from there, it becomes a regular story. Enjoy!
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Anime/Manga » Naruto series |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Healing, Torture, and Dedication
Submitted: January 21, 2008 • Updated: January 21, 2008
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Chapter 2 - The First Blow (Is Struck)
Submitted: January 21, 2008 • Updated: January 21, 2008
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Chapter 3 - A Willing Opponent
Submitted: January 21, 2008 • Updated: January 21, 2008
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Chapter 4 - Wake Me Up Inside
Submitted: January 21, 2008 • Updated: January 21, 2008
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Chapter 5 - A Wish Fufilled
Submitted: January 23, 2008 • Updated: January 23, 2008
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Chapter 6 - The Elder Speaks
Submitted: January 24, 2008 • Updated: January 24, 2008
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Chapter 7 - Otogakure Update
Submitted: January 25, 2008 • Updated: January 25, 2008
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Chapter 8 - Surprise Visit
Submitted: January 27, 2008 • Updated: January 27, 2008
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Chapter 9 - An Influx of Insanity
Submitted: January 29, 2008 • Updated: January 29, 2008
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Chapter 10 - Akatsuki Appearance
Submitted: January 31, 2008 • Updated: January 31, 2008
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Chapter 11 - Taking the Bait
Submitted: February 4, 2008 • Updated: February 4, 2008
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Chapter 12 - Three Villages, Two Swords, One Chance
Submitted: February 6, 2008 • Updated: February 6, 2008
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Chapter 13 - Cargo to Konoha
Submitted: February 7, 2008 • Updated: February 7, 2008
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Chapter 14 - Things are Explained
Submitted: February 12, 2008 • Updated: February 12, 2008
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Chapter 15 - Puppets: Toys Run Amok
Submitted: February 14, 2008 • Updated: February 14, 2008
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Chapter 16 - Sunagakure Under Siege!
Submitted: February 16, 2008 • Updated: February 16, 2008
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Chapter 17 - Feelings (Almost) Revealed
Submitted: February 16, 2008 • Updated: February 16, 2008
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Chapter 18 - Time Passes
Submitted: February 19, 2008 • Updated: February 19, 2008
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Chapter 19 - The Path of Most Resistance
Submitted: February 20, 2008 • Updated: February 20, 2008
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Chapter 20 - Chapter 20- Stacked Odds
Submitted: February 23, 2008 • Updated: February 23, 2008
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Chapter 21 - Accepting Pain
Submitted: February 26, 2008 • Updated: February 26, 2008
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Chapter 22 - Every Demon has it's Day
Submitted: February 27, 2008 • Updated: February 27, 2008
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Chapter 23 - A Desire Fufilled
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Chapter 24 - An Emotionless Existence
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Chapter 25 - Living alone, Trapped Inside
Submitted: March 4, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
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Chapter 26 - Plan into Action
Submitted: March 5, 2008 • Updated: March 5, 2008
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Chapter 27 - A Harsh Reality
Submitted: March 7, 2008 • Updated: March 7, 2008
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Chapter 28 - A Title of Meaning
Submitted: March 11, 2008 • Updated: March 11, 2008
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Chapter 29 - Falling Leaf and Striking Lightning
Submitted: March 12, 2008 • Updated: March 12, 2008
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Chapter 30 - The Leaf in Chaos! (part 1)
Submitted: March 14, 2008 • Updated: March 14, 2008
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Chapter 31 - The Leaf in Chaos! (Part 2)
Submitted: March 14, 2008 • Updated: March 14, 2008
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Chapter 32 - Leaf in Chaos (Part 3)
Submitted: March 15, 2008 • Updated: March 15, 2008
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Chapter 33 - Coming as a Friend
Submitted: March 17, 2008 • Updated: March 17, 2008
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Chapter 34 - Roll Reversal
Submitted: March 20, 2008 • Updated: March 20, 2008
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Chapter 35 - Sakura Shines
Submitted: March 21, 2008 • Updated: March 21, 2008
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Chapter 36 - The Unthinkable Happens
Submitted: March 22, 2008 • Updated: March 22, 2008
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Chapter 37 - How Could He Lose?
Submitted: March 23, 2008 • Updated: March 23, 2008
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Chapter 38 - Lost Confidence
Submitted: March 28, 2008 • Updated: March 28, 2008
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Chapter 39 - Dirt Nap
Submitted: March 29, 2008 • Updated: March 29, 2008
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Chapter 40 - Chaos Dictates Life
Submitted: March 30, 2008 • Updated: March 30, 2008
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Chapter 41 - An Offer He Couldn't Refuse...
Submitted: March 31, 2008 • Updated: March 31, 2008
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Chapter 42 - Naruto's Surprise
Submitted: April 1, 2008 • Updated: April 1, 2008
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Chapter 43 - The Written Exams
Submitted: April 2, 2008 • Updated: April 2, 2008
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Chapter 44 - The Forest of Death
Submitted: April 2, 2008 • Updated: April 2, 2008
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Chapter 45 - Forest of Death: One Last Surprise!
Submitted: April 3, 2008 • Updated: April 3, 2008
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Chapter 46 - Chunin Exams: The Opponent is Revealed!
Submitted: April 4, 2008 • Updated: April 4, 2008
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Chapter 47 - Change of Plans...
Submitted: April 6, 2008 • Updated: April 6, 2008
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Chapter 48 - The Old Ways
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Chapter 49 - Fate's Fortune
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Chapter 50 - Reckoning and Genesis
Submitted: April 11, 2008 • Updated: April 11, 2008
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Chapter 51 - A Misconception meets a Dangerous Alliance
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Chapter 52 - A Trap is Laid...
Submitted: April 12, 2008 • Updated: April 12, 2008
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Chapter 53 - The Heiress with the Attitude!
Submitted: April 13, 2008 • Updated: April 13, 2008
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Chapter 54 - The Land of Herbs: Hell on Earth!
Submitted: April 15, 2008 • Updated: April 15, 2008
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Chapter 55 - A Twisted Heart and...
Submitted: April 16, 2008 • Updated: April 16, 2008
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Chapter 56 - ...Wicked Intentions
Submitted: April 17, 2008 • Updated: April 17, 2008
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Chapter 57 - The War for Tanzaku Town
Submitted: April 19, 2008 • Updated: April 19, 2008
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Chapter 58 - Our Town! The Mighty Leaf Rallies!
Submitted: April 21, 2008 • Updated: April 21, 2008
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Chapter 59 - Life Amongst Chaos: Holly's Surprise!
Submitted: April 23, 2008 • Updated: April 23, 2008
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Chapter 60 - The Wrath of the Byakugan!
Submitted: April 24, 2008 • Updated: April 24, 2008
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Chapter 61 - A Seed of Hope is Planted
Submitted: April 25, 2008 • Updated: April 25, 2008
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Chapter 62 - The Jonin in Genin's Clothing!
Submitted: April 26, 2008 • Updated: April 26, 2008
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Chapter 63 - Side Trip To Sunagakure (Part 1)
Submitted: April 28, 2008 • Updated: April 28, 2008
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Chapter 64 - Sidetrip to Sunagakure (Part 2)
Submitted: April 28, 2008 • Updated: April 28, 2008
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Chapter 65 - A Village Too Far
Submitted: April 29, 2008 • Updated: April 29, 2008
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Chapter 66 - The Akatsuki's Plan: Shukaku Unleashed!
Submitted: April 30, 2008 • Updated: April 30, 2008
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Chapter 67 - NOTE TO READERS
Submitted: May 5, 2008 • Updated: May 5, 2008
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Chapter 68 - The Boldest Moves
Submitted: May 21, 2008 • Updated: May 21, 2008
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musicismylife on May 23, 2008, 9:00:55 AM
YYYYEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! 100000000000/100000000000!!!!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 12:52:00 AM
WOOOOOOOO! That was AMAZING. Had me hooked from the first chapter to here. You're a natural at getting human interaction across, and you balance action and emotion perfectly. 10/10*Faves*
hflp on May 22, 2008, 12:54:05 AM
ALRIGHT, FINALLY he says it.andr28a on May 21, 2008, 8:16:53 PM
68 Chapters and all are huge O_OHow in the name of all that is holy am I going to read all that *faints*
musicismylife on May 6, 2008, 9:08:03 AM
okay.hflp on May 5, 2008, 3:25:42 PM
It's cool.musicismylife on May 1, 2008, 8:07:39 AM
*huggles Ekyt* It's okay....hflp on May 1, 2008, 6:25:11 AM
I just had a thought occur to me. Ekyt's never fought a Kunouchi before, and there's a Kunoichi in the Akatsuki isn't there. What would happen if they sent her after Ekyt?hflp on May 1, 2008, 1:31:58 AM
I feel bad that Ekyt is so down, but hell at least he finally killed one of those sons a doges.musicismylife on April 30, 2008, 12:25:56 PM
OMFG CANT WAIT!!!hflp on April 30, 2008, 1:50:21 AM
The Akatsuki just awoke a sleeping giant.musicismylife on April 29, 2008, 7:50:04 AM
I agree with hflp once again. dum dum dum DUM!!!!!!hflp on April 29, 2008, 1:08:14 AM
I got this feeling Ekyt is going to wind up killing someone.musicismylife on April 28, 2008, 9:08:30 AM
OMG I OFFICIALLY LOVE JIRAIYA!!!!! 8Dnextguardian on April 28, 2008, 11:40:00 AM
lolhflp on April 28, 2008, 12:15:16 AM
Poor Ekyt. At least his life is coming together. It would be funny as hell if Sakura ever found out about what's in that book.nextguardian on April 28, 2008, 11:39:16 AM
Funny until she found out Ekyt knew...then his problem of telling Sakura "I like you" would be solved...most likely with him being nuetered -_-' Yeow...hflp on April 29, 2008, 12:54:07 AM
-_- Point taken.... But it would still be funny as hell.hflp on April 27, 2008, 1:35:30 AM
Awesome, Someone finally took Neji down a peg. I also agree with what Tsunade about Ekyt giving the vest back again. But did Ekyt ever unseal Neji's eyes after the fight?nextguardian on April 27, 2008, 11:42:43 AM
Good question :D That's going to be covered in the next chapter, when Neji regains consciousness, lol.musicismylife on April 27, 2008, 1:47:44 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!-still kills Neji- XD
hflp on April 27, 2008, 4:46:17 AM
I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say that you don't like Neji.musicismylife on April 27, 2008, 10:41:50 PM
-hides knife and stuffs neji in a closet- what ever gave you that idea??hflp on April 28, 2008, 12:00:48 AM
-_-'musicismylife on April 26, 2008, 9:32:17 AM
*continues stabbing Neji* great work! now back to work...*stabs neji continuously* XP
musicismylife on April 26, 2008, 9:20:36 AM
*KILLS NEJI*hflp on April 25, 2008, 7:51:07 AM
I now officially see Ekyt as an Emotional Masochistnextguardian on April 25, 2008, 11:55:51 AM
Yeah, pretty much. But, to be fair, he feels like he doesn't belong, but he's got a strong sense of loyalty. Gotta be some nasty internal conflict in his mind, lol.hflp on April 24, 2008, 11:58:58 PM
Ekyt's life sucks. -_-alchemest1 on April 23, 2008, 2:26:55 PM
Very nice mate. Lol. Why do I have the feeling that the dogs events were based off of someones I know? Lol. Anyway. Not to mention I see my comment word for word almost from Neji. Lol. Great work as usual mate. I'm interested to see what happens with the pups and who blew up the house. Anyway. You've made me think. I think I'm going to add a canine division to my clan. After all I do fight like Kiba. Lol. I need a canine partner. Lol.hflp on April 23, 2008, 1:24:52 PM
WELL THAT WAS UNEXPECTED!!! But would it be the end of the world for ONE thing to go right in Ekyt's life.musicismylife on April 22, 2008, 6:52:25 AM
curse the cowards!hflp on April 22, 2008, 1:12:18 AM
Why is the strongest bad guys are always the biggest cowards as well.Maddallinah272 on April 19, 2008, 9:52:13 PM
Mannn! This is big! It must be good! I'm saving it for later! :3 hflp on April 19, 2008, 4:39:18 PM
HELL YEAH!! Kick some @$$.musicismylife on April 19, 2008, 4:10:21 PM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!musicismylife on April 18, 2008, 12:36:53 PM
that had to have SUCKED for Ekyt. Poor Guy.hflp on April 18, 2008, 12:33:31 AM
This was an awesome chapter. Poor Ekyt, that mission had to be humiliating.musicismylife on April 17, 2008, 7:46:39 AM
wow this is gonna be great! i can't wait!!!musicismylife on April 17, 2008, 7:33:00 AM
lol compadre. a mi me da igual si usas los nombres americanos o los nombres japoneses. De verda me da igual. De todas maneras me encanto el capitulo!!=Dhflp on April 16, 2008, 3:06:36 PM
This next chapter is going to be something different. I just get that feeling. Can't wait.hflp on April 16, 2008, 4:01:41 AM
Awesome, can't wait for more. Also I personally prefer the American Jutsu names.musicismylife on April 14, 2008, 9:18:42 AM
lol good chappiehflp on April 14, 2008, 3:52:03 AM
This is going to be intense.musicismylife on April 13, 2008, 2:34:47 AM
NIRVANA!!!!!!!!!!!! srry i lyk nirvana....XD great chappiehflp on April 13, 2008, 2:16:10 AM
Awesome. Can't wait.musicismylife on April 12, 2008, 12:43:13 PM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hflp on April 12, 2008, 2:35:51 AM
When did Kisame escape from prison?nextguardian on April 12, 2008, 7:47:32 AM
Oh, crap, good catch! Somehow, I wrote it, but I deleted that part -_-' It was supposed to happen during the chunin exams, when Ekyt's fight with Kimimaro is interrupted by the Akatsuki. He was supposed to have been freed while most of the Leaf Village were held hostage in the stadium. My mistake ^^'hflp on April 12, 2008, 10:07:15 AM
It happens. Just adjust accordingly and it should be fine. Still a good chapter.musicismylife on April 11, 2008, 2:18:23 PM
wow. another near death fiasco. great work btwhflp on April 11, 2008, 12:28:04 AM
Could this guy's life get anymore complicated. At least he got one thing he wanted. I just really hope he doesn't turn it down-AGAIN.hflp on April 9, 2008, 1:52:47 PM
The next chapter is really going to be something. I can't wait.musicismylife on April 8, 2008, 7:38:15 AM
great for Ekyt.... i want you to make that special thingy!!! that would be awesome!hflp on April 8, 2008, 1:13:20 AM
Looks like Ekyt is back to square one.hflp on April 7, 2008, 3:39:51 AM
HOLY shoot!musicismylife on April 5, 2008, 7:55:23 AM
ah...bone vs. bone. This shall definately be interesting....hflp on April 5, 2008, 2:32:34 PM
lol. That's good. bone vs. bonehflp on April 5, 2008, 2:39:58 AM
This fight is going to be very exciting.hflp on April 4, 2008, 3:29:21 AM
yeah, that's JUST what Ekyt needs. Naruto in the cheering section.musicismylife on April 4, 2008, 1:02:15 AM
Naruto's gonna be a cheerleader lolmusicismylife on April 3, 2008, 10:10:58 AM
heh lets see who is against who next....cant wait!hflp on April 3, 2008, 2:52:40 AM
Alright. Now is where the fun really begins.musicismylife on April 2, 2008, 9:03:15 AM
thats Anko for you. I think....hflp on April 2, 2008, 4:00:19 AM
COOLmusicismylife on April 1, 2008, 2:20:10 PM
lol i agree with hflp i will forever avoid calendarshflp on April 1, 2008, 1:28:46 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... That chapter was AWESOME. 10/10musicismylife on April 1, 2008, 12:38:52 AM
lol thats hilarioushflp on March 31, 2008, 12:45:19 PM
hahahahaha, That ending was awesome. I could definately see Ekyt having fun at this new job.hflp on March 31, 2008, 3:48:40 AM
DAMN!musicismylife on March 30, 2008, 12:24:18 AM
HOLY **** THAT WAS AWESOME!hflp on March 29, 2008, 2:58:55 AM
WOW!!!hflp on March 28, 2008, 12:21:29 PM
Woah. He really has hit rock bottom.hflp on March 23, 2008, 2:23:03 PM
Awesome chapter.hflp on March 23, 2008, 2:31:20 AM
Will Ekyt EVER catch a break?!hflp on March 22, 2008, 1:35:24 AM
Cool chapter. But will it kill Ekyt open up. That habit is starting to really annoy.hflp on March 21, 2008, 12:42:04 AM
Note to self, NEVER piss off Ekyt.hflp on March 18, 2008, 1:09:56 AM
Cool. He fianlly spoke his mind.hflp on March 16, 2008, 7:22:21 AM
Awesome chapter, can't wait to see what hppens next.hflp on March 15, 2008, 6:27:42 AM
Ekyt always manages to kick some @$$hflp on March 13, 2008, 3:27:54 AM
Wow.hflp on March 12, 2008, 3:28:23 AM
Awesome Chapter. I especially enjoyed the ending.musicismylife on March 8, 2008, 11:33:09 PM
wow. well its what Tsunade deserves for being so mean to Ekyt regardless of the situation!musicismylife on March 8, 2008, 10:20:43 PM
wow. awe.some.musicismylife on March 8, 2008, 9:42:43 PM
uhoh......tsunade's a meanie headhflp on March 7, 2008, 12:25:02 PM
That's a bit of a shocker. No wonder Tsunade has been acting like this.winxgirl21 on March 6, 2008, 7:01:31 AM
Oh no..I hope everything goes ok in the land of herbs...hflp on March 6, 2008, 1:50:43 AM
Cool.hflp on February 28, 2008, 12:08:07 PM
I swear, this poor guy's life sucks big time.hflp on February 27, 2008, 10:43:58 AM
Ekyt can NEVER catch a break.hflp on February 26, 2008, 12:17:25 AM
That was awesome.hflp on February 24, 2008, 4:28:05 AM
This is not going to end well.hflp on February 20, 2008, 2:03:30 PM
I really don't like where this is going for Ekyt. At least he got a little of his honor back.hflp on February 20, 2008, 3:03:50 AM
This is not going to end well for Ekyt.Konohasdarkshadow on February 19, 2008, 4:00:55 PM
oooooohhhhhh...Ekyts gonna kick Itachi's @$$!Konohasdarkshadow on February 19, 2008, 4:03:18 PM
oh and did you get it from Star Trek Generations?...Picard said it...right?hflp on February 17, 2008, 4:30:49 AM
Pretty good. I liked it.hflp on February 17, 2008, 4:13:28 AM
Nice. Keep it up.musicismylife on February 16, 2008, 1:52:05 PM
yes im finally caught up!!! great work!! yay for ekyt!musicismylife on February 15, 2008, 10:37:15 AM
omg that was the best!musicismylife on February 15, 2008, 9:35:45 AM
oh dear...musicismylife on February 13, 2008, 5:19:40 AM
very nicemusicismylife on February 12, 2008, 9:33:29 PM
now THAT is a chaptermusicismylife on February 12, 2008, 11:36:28 AM
o dear.... illread more tomorrowmusicismylife on February 12, 2008, 11:28:10 AM
oh no!hflp on February 12, 2008, 11:28:09 AM
Awesome chapter. I swear the ribbing Enji gets is endless.musicismylife on February 12, 2008, 11:18:00 AM
wow that is ttly great. srry it took me 4evr to start reading ur fic stuffs been keepin me busy lately.hflp on February 8, 2008, 2:35:40 AM
That was a hell of a chapter.hflp on February 7, 2008, 1:56:00 AM
Wow.hflp on February 4, 2008, 3:00:28 AM
I'm curious why his back up hasn't come yet. I wonder what this plan is.Amber434 on February 2, 2008, 4:16:27 PM
The land of herbs seems like a heartless area. It's like a second hell. I hope everything gets better TT_TThflp on February 1, 2008, 3:01:43 AM
A little unexpected, but good none the less. Can't wait to see how it turns out.hflp on January 30, 2008, 2:50:32 AM
Great Chapter. I think I see where this may be going.hflp on January 28, 2008, 4:44:29 AM
Good Chapter can't wait for more.hflp on January 27, 2008, 11:35:38 AM
No problem.hflp on January 27, 2008, 2:55:29 AM
hflp on January 25, 2008, 5:06:14 AM
Now that is a Chapter. Awesome Jobhflp on January 21, 2008, 12:44:54 PM
Good Story. Can't wait to see what other differences their are in this version.