Naruto: The Ryu Kozaku Chronicles
Submitted October 15, 2008 Updated October 24, 2009 Status Incomplete | This is the Story of Ryu Kozaku, a Boy who has A monster, Onaga the Dragon Emperor, inside of him.What is This Beast? And Why has it fallen to darkness? Read and Learn the Story that started it all...
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - “Before the Beginning…”
Submitted: October 15, 2008 • Updated: October 15, 2008
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Chapter 2 - "RYU APPEARS!"
Submitted: October 15, 2008 • Updated: October 16, 2008
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Chapter 3 - “The Chunnin Exams Await!"
Submitted: October 16, 2008 • Updated: October 17, 2008
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Chapter 4 - "I am a monster...and nothing else..."
Submitted: October 17, 2008 • Updated: October 17, 2008
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Chapter 5 - "Ryu Kozaku versus Snowie!"
Submitted: October 20, 2008 • Updated: October 21, 2008
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Chapter 6 - “Neo Kozaku Versus Elena!”
Submitted: October 21, 2008 • Updated: October 21, 2008
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Chapter 7 - “Gigi Versus Tora!”
Submitted: October 23, 2008 • Updated: October 24, 2008
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Chapter 8 - “Luna Versus Hexa!”
Submitted: October 24, 2008 • Updated: October 24, 2008
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Chapter 9 - “The Final Fight: Shizu versus Axle!”
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
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Chapter 10 - “NEW Friends of the Kozaku Clan!”
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
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Chapter 11 - “The Finals’ Line-ups!”
Submitted: October 28, 2008 • Updated: October 28, 2008
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Chapter 12 - “The Finals Begin, and the true Mitsusa!”
Submitted: October 28, 2008 • Updated: October 29, 2008
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Chapter 13 - “The Fight Between Two Allies!”
Submitted: October 29, 2008 • Updated: October 29, 2008
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Chapter 14 - "The Finals: Kurai versus Elena! (part 1)"
Submitted: October 30, 2008 • Updated: October 30, 2008
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Chapter 15 - “The Finals: Kurai Versus Elena (Part 2)!”
Submitted: October 30, 2008 • Updated: October 30, 2008
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Chapter 16 - “The Finals: Ryu Kozaku versus Axle! (PART 1)”
Submitted: October 31, 2008 • Updated: October 31, 2008
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Chapter 17 - “The Finals: Ryu Kozaku versus Axle (Part 2)!
Submitted: October 31, 2008 • Updated: October 31, 2008
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Chapter 18 - “Ryu’s First Mission, The Sacred Scroll!”
Submitted: November 3, 2008 • Updated: November 3, 2008
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Chapter 19 - “The search for Members! (Part 1)”
Submitted: November 5, 2008 • Updated: November 6, 2008
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Chapter 20 - “The search for Members! (Part 2)
Submitted: November 5, 2008 • Updated: November 6, 2008
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Chapter 21 - “The Search for The The third Member!”
Submitted: November 6, 2008 • Updated: November 6, 2008
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Chapter 22 - “The Quest for The Scroll: Kurai is found!”
Submitted: November 7, 2008 • Updated: November 7, 2008
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Chapter 23 - “The Golden Scroll is found!”
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 10, 2008
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Chapter 24 - “The End Is Near: Orochimaru Appears!”
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 12, 2008
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Chapter 25 - “The Fight against Thyself!”
Submitted: November 12, 2008 • Updated: November 12, 2008
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Chapter 26 - "Kurai's Decision!"
Submitted: November 12, 2008 • Updated: November 12, 2008
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Chapter 27 - “The Beast is Unleashed…”
Submitted: November 13, 2008 • Updated: November 14, 2008
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Chapter 28 - “The Beast is Unleashed: Episode 2”
Submitted: November 14, 2008 • Updated: November 14, 2008
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Chapter 29 - “Orochimaru versus The Corrupted Ryu!”
Submitted: November 17, 2008 • Updated: November 17, 2008
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Chapter 30 - “Orochimaru Versus The Corrupted Ryu! (Episode 2)”
Submitted: November 17, 2008 • Updated: November 18, 2008
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Chapter 31 - “Ryu’s Nightmare…"
Submitted: November 18, 2008 • Updated: November 18, 2008
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Chapter 32 - “Ryu is missing!”
Submitted: November 18, 2008 • Updated: November 19, 2008
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Chapter 33 - “Ryu is Found…”
Submitted: November 19, 2008 • Updated: November 19, 2008
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Chapter 34 - “Ryu versus Naruto: The First Blood! (part 1)”
Submitted: November 19, 2008 • Updated: November 19, 2008
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Chapter 35 - “Onaga, The Dragon Emperor Appears…”
Submitted: November 20, 2008 • Updated: November 20, 2008
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Chapter 36 - “Onaga: First Form…”
Submitted: November 20, 2008 • Updated: November 20, 2008
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Chapter 37 - “Onaga: Second Form…”
Submitted: November 21, 2008 • Updated: November 21, 2008
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Chapter 38 - “Onaga: Third Form…”
Submitted: November 24, 2008 • Updated: November 24, 2008
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Chapter 39 - “Onaga: Fourth Form…”
Submitted: November 24, 2008 • Updated: November 24, 2008
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Chapter 40 - "ONAGA: AWAKENED..."
Submitted: November 24, 2008 • Updated: November 24, 2008
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Chapter 41 - “It is a God’s War…”
Submitted: November 25, 2008 • Updated: November 25, 2008
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Chapter 42 - “Naruto Fights Back!”
Submitted: November 26, 2008 • Updated: November 26, 2008
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Chapter 43 - “A Trip Down Memory Lane…”
Submitted: November 26, 2008 • Updated: November 26, 2008
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Chapter 44 - “Axle Appears, and Ryu’s Feeling are heard!”
Submitted: December 1, 2008 • Updated: December 1, 2008
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Chapter 45 - "Neo is found: On top of the Volcano!”
Submitted: December 1, 2008 • Updated: December 2, 2008
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Chapter 46 - “Rolus versus Elena: The fight for Neo's Freedom!”
Submitted: December 3, 2008 • Updated: December 3, 2008
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Chapter 47 - “Kurai and Tora are found: Inside the Pyramids!”
Submitted: December 3, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
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Chapter 48 - “The Trials Await: Neo’s Turn to shine!”
Submitted: December 4, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
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Chapter 49 - “The King of the Desert Appears!”
Submitted: December 4, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
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Chapter 50 - “Another trip in the darkness: Ryu is Close!”
Submitted: December 9, 2008 • Updated: December 9, 2008
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Chapter 51 - “The Terror Awaits: The Sea Serpent Appears!"
Submitted: December 10, 2008 • Updated: December 10, 2008
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Chapter 52 - “Inside the Belly of the Serpent!”
Submitted: December 10, 2008 • Updated: December 11, 2008
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Chapter 53 - “The Team Strikes Back!”
Submitted: December 17, 2008 • Updated: December 17, 2008
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Chapter 54 - “The Truth…”
Submitted: December 18, 2008 • Updated: December 18, 2008
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Chapter 55 - “Stairway to Heaven!”
Submitted: December 18, 2008 • Updated: December 18, 2008
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Chapter 56 - “The Dragon’s Tale…”
Submitted: December 22, 2008 • Updated: December 23, 2008
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Chapter 57 - “Ryu: Through the Eyes of Madness…”
Submitted: January 6, 2009 • Updated: January 6, 2009
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Chapter 58 - “Torashu comes out…”
Submitted: January 8, 2009 • Updated: January 8, 2009
Word count: 189 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 396
Chapter 59 - “Torashu: Reawakened!”
Submitted: January 12, 2009 • Updated: January 12, 2009
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Chapter 60 - “The Last Remaining Ninjas!”
Submitted: January 14, 2009 • Updated: January 14, 2009
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Chapter 61 - “The answers are Behind the Portal!"
Submitted: January 20, 2009 • Updated: January 20, 2009
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Chapter 62 - "The Truth is told..."
Submitted: January 21, 2009 • Updated: January 21, 2009
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Chapter 63 - “Along Came A Ninja!”
Submitted: January 29, 2009 • Updated: January 29, 2009
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Chapter 64 - “The Trap is sprung: A demon of great heights!”
Submitted: March 5, 2009 • Updated: March 5, 2009
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Chapter 65 - "Fist of Freedom."
Submitted: April 9, 2009 • Updated: April 10, 2009
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Chapter 66 - "An Easy Rescue: Dez Is Saved!"
Submitted: May 18, 2009 • Updated: May 18, 2009
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Chapter 67 - “The Show Down! Dez vs. Chihiro and Mitsusa!”
Submitted: June 9, 2009 • Updated: June 9, 2009
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Chapter 68 - "State of Pain: Sasuke with a Vengeance."
Submitted: October 23, 2009 • Updated: October 24, 2009
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thingy on October 29, 2009, 9:00:55 AM
o0othingy on October 29, 2009, 8:55:15 AM
lol nice part about the ill fiish later thingypinky123 on October 28, 2009, 11:07:42 AM
nice can't wait till next chapter Love it Greatanimespring on July 3, 2009, 3:37:42 AM
OROCHIMARU GOT PWNED!!!XD
dingocat on July 1, 2009, 11:49:43 PM
taraforest on June 29, 2009, 5:37:11 AM
wOOt can't wait for the next chapter
(^-^)
erandor3 on June 23, 2009, 11:31:47 AM
hurry up and make my oc appear o3o!!!!!Forestdahedgehog on June 16, 2009, 4:12:32 AM
Ryu: You’re serious? Can you not kill them in the process please?Dez: I’ll see what I can do you just go!
Torashu: Just be careful…
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Favorote part here XD That just made me laugh! Dont kil them XD lol Good job! Moar x3 Pweeze
arijo on June 3, 2009, 12:04:45 AM
awesome!^^CaremelKyoko on May 28, 2009, 11:14:16 PM
Best!Hey everyone here ! check out my first submition!n comments needed~!XDanimespring on May 27, 2009, 10:15:48 PM
haha everyone laughing about michael jacksonXD
animespring on May 27, 2009, 7:48:32 PM
"awesome hothead"haha!
animespring on May 27, 2009, 7:33:18 PM
poor Ryuanimespring on May 26, 2009, 1:07:15 AM
Mitsusa was scary!animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:38:36 AM
haha!!Cool!!^^
animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:36:15 AM
YAY!!!!!WOOHOOOO!!^^
animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:26:34 AM
cool!!^^animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:23:25 AM
man, this is so good!!^^animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:08:31 AM
WOOHOOOOOO!!!!hehe
animespring on May 25, 2009, 11:59:31 PM
Ryu vs Snowie!!so cool!!!^^
animespring on May 25, 2009, 11:39:08 PM
so excited!^^animespring on May 25, 2009, 11:28:06 PM
"I’ll Skin you alive, stitch your skin back, then skin you again!"haha!!!
so funny!!^^
animespring on May 25, 2009, 11:23:20 PM
me likey likey^^Vhee on May 9, 2009, 3:59:34 AM
Well, I wanted to see what kind of writing skill you had, and I must say well done! Good structure, no grammar problems, and an easy read. I don't like Naruto, but I just wanted to check this out. ^^ Great job!
taraforest on May 5, 2009, 11:16:40 PM
yay good job (^-^)Forestdahedgehog on May 2, 2009, 2:18:28 AM
-dances- Good job! Moar -noms your head-Repaa on April 23, 2009, 2:47:29 AM
Awsumness!Repaa on April 23, 2009, 2:24:45 AM
Ha! Poor Rock Lee... XPRepaa on April 23, 2009, 2:17:37 AM
Cool! This may take a while to read...arijo on April 9, 2009, 4:04:16 AM
good story but why is it all the same story in each chapter?andr28a on March 5, 2009, 1:42:48 AM
I high ranker. This should be interestingtaraforest on February 2, 2009, 6:32:40 AM
hurrah now for the rest of em
andr28a on January 29, 2009, 5:07:11 PM
Found one at leasttaraforest on January 27, 2009, 10:25:26 PM
wow it's really good
(^-^)
andr28a on January 21, 2009, 12:47:48 AM
The final battle approachestaraforest on January 20, 2009, 10:28:06 PM
so coolcan't wait to see what happens next
(^-^)
andr28a on January 20, 2009, 2:59:58 AM
To Gandoraerandor3 on January 19, 2009, 7:17:27 PM
CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!!!! >:P i cant wait till my Oc ish put in o3oForestdahedgehog on January 17, 2009, 10:48:42 AM
find the others xD hurry!andr28a on January 14, 2009, 8:17:25 PM
Hurry find the otherslumbeelove on January 14, 2009, 4:23:24 AM
Leave Sasuke there!!! He doesn't need to be found!andr28a on January 12, 2009, 5:46:18 PM
Ryu has finally been found....or has Naruto's group been found.....andr28a on January 12, 2009, 5:44:19 PM
The Dragon risesForestdahedgehog on January 12, 2009, 9:18:20 AM
yay!they found us!WERE GONNA LIIIVE X3 lolForestdahedgehog on January 12, 2009, 9:17:04 AM
go torashu,go!Forestdahedgehog on January 12, 2009, 9:15:56 AM
o-o woah..no skinaxle on January 8, 2009, 11:09:09 PM
keep up the good work doom!!! woo0o0o0o0ooo0o u can do it !!andr28a on January 6, 2009, 3:36:10 AM
Wow thats some wake up callsnowieXchan on January 5, 2009, 2:26:35 AM
tis shall be a great battle!snowie's probably just all like "holy s***...O_O'''"
xD
snowieXchan on January 5, 2009, 2:10:31 AM
fighhht! xDsnowieXchan on January 5, 2009, 2:07:27 AM
noooeeeess!*gets tissue*
andr28a on December 24, 2008, 5:00:20 AM
Yeah lets go all the way to Hellaxle on December 22, 2008, 10:58:06 PM
omg *takes pictures * awsome XPForestdahedgehog on December 22, 2008, 7:26:55 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh,cool,the underworld :O always wanted 2 go there :3 lolForestdahedgehog on December 22, 2008, 7:24:40 AM
zomg,a white dragon :O i luffs dragons :O sachi,hug the dragon 4 me!!or sumone at least TT-TT lol XDForestdahedgehog on December 22, 2008, 7:23:21 AM
good boy Kragor,good boy :3 helping us out gets us 1 step closer 2 Ryu and TorashuForestdahedgehog on December 22, 2008, 7:21:36 AM
lol,what andr28a said XD lol..who knew XDandr28a on December 19, 2008, 8:09:08 AM
The realm of the Gods. Wonder what things lie within itandr28a on December 19, 2008, 8:05:43 AM
A sea God, coolaxle on December 18, 2008, 10:50:33 PM
wow lol so many demonsandr28a on December 17, 2008, 2:29:08 AM
A simple small rice ball sorted this whole problem LOLForestdahedgehog on December 14, 2008, 2:27:20 AM
zomg o-o regeneration...woahs...cant wait 4 more :DForestdahedgehog on December 14, 2008, 2:25:58 AM
oh noes!not shizu and sachi!:O lol,woot!im pretty sure sachi tho was enjoying herself by talking with the serpent XD
Forestdahedgehog on December 14, 2008, 2:24:07 AM
lol,-dont die! xD funneherandor3 on December 14, 2008, 12:02:19 AM
ive read all the other chapters and i love this XD cant wait for the next one and tell me wen erandor comes in.i also forgot that erandor has a wolf demon sealed inside him as well and yellow chakra surrounds him wenever he goes into his demon form like naruto
axle on December 12, 2008, 1:33:01 AM
regeneration scary 0.0andr28a on December 10, 2008, 4:58:25 PM
Sea Serpant is angryandr28a on December 10, 2008, 4:55:45 PM
Sea serpant. Cooltaraforest on December 10, 2008, 4:11:08 AM
sea monster that heals itself that doesn't sound too good
(-_-)
axle on December 9, 2008, 11:31:04 PM
omg a serpent gahhhhh!!!! ( kool a serpent lol)axle on December 9, 2008, 11:02:06 PM
spooky lolandr28a on December 9, 2008, 4:53:32 PM
Whats in store for these two nowlumbeelove on December 9, 2008, 10:00:38 AM
Can't wait for another chapter!andr28a on December 5, 2008, 3:43:12 AM
Thats that challenge done. Whats nextForestdahedgehog on December 4, 2008, 9:49:00 AM
yay 4 shiny glowyness x3 lol moaaar x3Forestdahedgehog on December 4, 2008, 9:47:17 AM
lol,luffs the dumb luck thing XDlumbeelove on December 4, 2008, 4:17:56 AM
yay!!andr28a on December 4, 2008, 12:41:23 AM
Wonder whats in the empty roomaxle on December 3, 2008, 11:33:44 PM
wow puzzles r eveil now lol i knew my sisters spongebob puzzle was bad lol^^axle on December 3, 2008, 10:57:25 PM
must resist to not punch must resisdt burning bad X( lolaxle on December 3, 2008, 10:55:58 PM
electricity herts /)_^Forestdahedgehog on December 3, 2008, 8:50:45 AM
lol,sploading puzzles >w< lol..and i has a question-who ish this shizu? my oc or sum1 elses? ?-? x3Forestdahedgehog on December 3, 2008, 8:48:58 AM
woot 4 mysterious hammers >w< lolForestdahedgehog on December 3, 2008, 8:31:29 AM
lol,theres the chuck norris thing XDForestdahedgehog on December 3, 2008, 8:25:08 AM
lol, who do u think u are?-Chuck Norris? tht made me laugh Cxlumbeelove on December 3, 2008, 4:36:00 AM
puzzles are funlumbeelove on December 3, 2008, 4:34:21 AM
good job!andr28a on December 3, 2008, 3:44:13 AM
Pyramids and puzzles go hand in hand but if your not careful it could do the oposite effect you desiredandr28a on December 2, 2008, 11:34:19 PM
Is this a test. Once one person accomplishes a task another doorway openstaraforest on December 2, 2008, 11:32:32 PM
yay the magical hammer of magicalness(^-^)
axle on December 2, 2008, 11:14:24 PM
hopefully the eys easy to get lolXPaxle on December 2, 2008, 11:13:52 PM
im not chuck norris lmaotaraforest on December 2, 2008, 11:05:37 PM
wow this world is weird rock monster dude is going down
(^-^)
andr28a on December 1, 2008, 4:55:13 PM
This world gets wierder by the minutelumbeelove on December 1, 2008, 4:32:48 AM
nice!Elena needs to stop being brave
lol jk
lumbeelove on December 1, 2008, 4:25:53 AM
nice!andr28a on December 1, 2008, 1:13:02 AM
The longer they stay in this realm the more they learn about Ryu......interestingtaraforest on November 27, 2008, 2:10:28 AM
hmm mysterious portali wonder what they'll discover
(?_?)
andr28a on November 26, 2008, 4:35:31 AM
Hmm a time protal or could it be another world that Onaga created using his demonic powers to warp time and spaceForestdahedgehog on November 26, 2008, 4:02:44 AM
oh noes,tht ish so sad <:OForestdahedgehog on November 26, 2008, 4:00:58 AM
o-o woah wats happening?lumbeelove on November 26, 2008, 3:32:10 AM
cool!andr28a on November 26, 2008, 2:16:22 AM
I have a bad feeling about thislumbeelove on November 25, 2008, 11:55:26 PM
the suspense is killing me!!taraforest on November 25, 2008, 10:18:44 PM
A combined force Clever
(^-^)
Forestdahedgehog on November 25, 2008, 5:57:33 AM
OWO TOTALLY KICK BUTT >DForestdahedgehog on November 24, 2008, 9:49:34 AM
AWSUM COMBO MOVES XD i wonder how itll end owoForestdahedgehog on November 24, 2008, 9:47:41 AM
O__________________O oh noes!!WERE ALL DOOMED!O3OForestdahedgehog on November 24, 2008, 9:46:21 AM
o-o oh noes...1 more 2 go..tht does not sound good at all o3o
lumbeelove on November 24, 2008, 5:07:01 AM
awesome!!!!andr28a on November 24, 2008, 4:04:39 AM
Who wins, who wins I can't waittaraforest on November 24, 2008, 2:38:40 AM
Final form well he can't get any stronger
hopefuly
(O_o)
taraforest on November 24, 2008, 2:36:26 AM
Fourth Form (O_O)
It really can get worse can't it
how will they stop him
(-_-)
sonicfan1 on November 24, 2008, 1:28:21 AM
awesomly done!andr28a on November 24, 2008, 12:20:43 AM
This is getting more problimatic by the secondForestdahedgehog on November 23, 2008, 9:43:49 AM
O-O GASPETH!!taraforest on November 21, 2008, 7:12:36 AM
stage three (0_0) wow!andr28a on November 21, 2008, 4:57:13 AM
How many stages does this guy havelumbeelove on November 21, 2008, 3:40:41 AM
coolaxle on November 21, 2008, 3:17:48 AM
lol micheal jackson lol in my story hes a pedifile ninja loltaraforest on November 21, 2008, 3:06:30 AM
(0_0) stage 2!!! could it get any worse ........ or maybe i shouldn't say that just in caseForestdahedgehog on November 20, 2008, 7:38:31 AM
o-o ih noes,stage 2Forestdahedgehog on November 20, 2008, 7:36:48 AM
woahs!o-o awsumness!Forestdahedgehog on November 20, 2008, 7:35:15 AM
woot!awsum!but short!Forestdahedgehog on November 20, 2008, 7:34:28 AM
oh,yes i agree with wat andr28a said!owolumbeelove on November 20, 2008, 4:24:05 AM
whoa...didn't see that coming!lumbeelove on November 20, 2008, 4:23:18 AM
awesome!Knucklescrazy on November 20, 2008, 3:44:23 AM
RAWR!! WATCH OUT ONAGA!andr28a on November 20, 2008, 12:48:39 AM
Interesting. It's time for Ryu's friend to save him from himself.andr28a on November 19, 2008, 4:24:40 AM
A battle where only the heavens know the outcomeandr28a on November 19, 2008, 1:55:08 AM
Uh Oh Onaga is back. This could turn out good Onaga the Demon King versus Kyubi the king of the Bijuuandr28a on November 18, 2008, 5:59:59 PM
If Onaga still has a hold of Ryu this could be quite the problem very quicklyandr28a on November 18, 2008, 5:57:08 PM
Poor RyuForestdahedgehog on November 18, 2008, 9:44:33 AM
nuu,ryu!comes baaack!woot >w<
Forestdahedgehog on November 18, 2008, 9:43:03 AM
zomahgawd!is tht how ryu's mom rly died o-o thts terrible!TT-TTForestdahedgehog on November 18, 2008, 9:40:38 AM
aw,poor ryu >o< i shall gives him a hugs 2 make him better XD*hugs him*WOOTForestdahedgehog on November 18, 2008, 9:39:02 AM
woahs!poor snakie snake DX lolandr28a on November 17, 2008, 8:38:19 PM
Wonder what he'll be like when he wakes up?andr28a on November 17, 2008, 1:12:57 AM
Manda's been through this once before. Hope he managed to shed his skin in time and livesForestdahedgehog on November 15, 2008, 1:08:39 AM
o-o woahzandr28a on November 14, 2008, 4:52:15 AM
Purple Snake? Must be Manda? Not wise my friendandr28a on November 14, 2008, 4:48:08 AM
Oh Dearlumbeelove on November 14, 2008, 4:23:57 AM
good jobForestdahedgehog on November 13, 2008, 9:56:01 AM
ZOMAGAWD!AWSUMNESS!!MOOOOOAAAAAAARRForestdahedgehog on November 13, 2008, 9:51:43 AM
lol,so suspencfullumbeelove on November 13, 2008, 4:23:46 AM
nice job! :Dandr28a on November 12, 2008, 4:15:03 AM
Orochimaru: That withered old buzzurd will pay for his trickeryLol
andr28a on November 11, 2008, 11:45:38 PM
This is hard for KuraiListen to her powerful father
Or listen to her friends
Forestdahedgehog on November 11, 2008, 9:36:13 AM
lmao XD michael jackson XD lolz!cant wait 2 c the fight XDForestdahedgehog on November 11, 2008, 9:34:24 AM
oh noes,orochimaru o-otaraforest on November 11, 2008, 2:03:59 AM
Michael Jackson LOL(^-^)
YumeXItachi on November 10, 2008, 6:23:46 AM
*Falls OVer Laughing*Micheal Jackson?? XD
Omg F=U-N-N-Y!!!
YumeXItachi on November 10, 2008, 3:49:45 AM
Oh Can I Join? =]YumeXItachi on November 10, 2008, 6:22:24 AM
Name:Kairi Meidou [Uchiha]Age:17
Race:Human
Hair:Pink With Black Tips Or Just Black Either One
Eyes:Blue Green But More Of A Green Color
Clothes: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-656914.html
Village:Leaf Village
Rank:Chunin
Sibling(s):Sasuke&Itachi
Jutsu:Normal Jutsu,Nothing Real Special.
Personality:Sweet,Funny,Caring,Very Mother Like at times & Loving
Love intrest:Deidara
Bloodline Trait:Don't Really Know What This Means But She's From The Uchiha Clan.Her Father Was An Uchiha And Her Mother Was A Meidou.
andr28a on November 10, 2008, 3:48:05 AM
Michael Jackson WTF?andr28a on November 10, 2008, 12:14:00 AM
Heh heh heh, Orochimaru is hereaxle on November 9, 2008, 11:29:03 PM
lol its gonna rain^^axle on November 8, 2008, 7:42:07 AM
on to the mission!!! lolForestdahedgehog on November 7, 2008, 6:20:32 AM
oh noes!!OROCHIMARU IS FOLLOWING THEM!!!A STALKING PEDAFILE!!!GAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!jk,lol XD well,i bets itll get interesting >w<andr28a on November 7, 2008, 3:38:56 AM
OOOOOOO Sounds like a storm is comingandr28a on November 6, 2008, 9:28:28 PM
Ryu: 1Saskue: 0
Forestdahedgehog on November 6, 2008, 6:12:05 AM
lol,sasuke isnt the brightes bulb is he,4 messing with ryu?taraforest on November 6, 2008, 5:07:14 AM
lol sasuke's stupid messin with Ryu
(^-^)
axle on November 5, 2008, 10:52:58 PM
lol y do u hate sasuke lol and hopefully they find them this is getting good..^^axle on November 5, 2008, 10:50:11 PM
kool u have 2 tell methem so i can use them in my story aswell XPSasukesgirlfriend on November 5, 2008, 8:36:33 AM
yep something big is going to happen.loly do u hate sasuke?lol well why does ur character hate sasuke?
andr28a on November 5, 2008, 3:37:22 AM
Hmmm I feel like something big is gonna happenaxle on November 4, 2008, 11:04:41 PM
kool lol^^taraforest on November 3, 2008, 3:48:23 AM
Building a squad huh cool (^-^)just wonderin but where is my oc at this time
(?_?)
andr28a on November 3, 2008, 3:37:38 AM
Hmm time to build a squad, wonder who will he pick Kurai or Elenaandr28a on November 3, 2008, 2:23:46 AM
That was intense, cool fightandr28a on November 3, 2008, 2:19:23 AM
Now that is how Kurai gets the job doneaxle on October 31, 2008, 6:45:05 AM
wow a draw lol kool but u never used my kekegenkae but i'll be sure to put this in my story XP this fight is gonna be longer XP lol u can count on thataxle on October 31, 2008, 6:42:00 AM
just waiting is killing me ^^taraforest on October 31, 2008, 4:45:00 AM
that was a great ending the fight (^-^)
taraforest on October 31, 2008, 1:52:50 AM
(O_O)Wow
cool fight
i wonder who will win
axle on October 30, 2008, 7:10:41 AM
this story is going on greataxle on October 30, 2008, 7:09:48 AM
omg im scared i cnt wait * starts bitting finger* lol ^^DarkAngelofDoom13 on October 30, 2008, 4:25:12 AM
you did a great job with each chapterandr28a on October 29, 2008, 2:42:26 AM
The exams are over already? thought orochi might have made an entrance but I guess not.Let's see what chaos happens now, party time woo-hoo
axle on October 28, 2008, 6:08:20 AM
wasnt ryu and mitsusa last?lolaxle on October 28, 2008, 6:02:02 AM
heh kool i won lolaxle on October 28, 2008, 5:46:51 AM
kool starttaraforest on October 28, 2008, 12:45:41 AM
ooh the finals (0_0)
can't wait to see what happens next
andr28a on October 27, 2008, 7:08:00 PM
Have to say I wasn't expecting to run into Kurai like that, interesting, wonder how things will turn out.Forestdahedgehog on October 27, 2008, 10:34:35 AM
AWSUMNESS,but kinda short tho DX XD but still good!wite mor k?Forestdahedgehog on October 27, 2008, 10:19:33 AM
awsumness >W<taraforest on October 27, 2008, 5:08:32 AM
ha sounds just like my oc great work
can't wait to read more
(^-^)
Sasukesgirlfriend on October 25, 2008, 4:08:06 PM
MORESasukesgirlfriend on October 25, 2008, 4:07:38 PM
WHOA you gave gigi guts.lol Cool fight.Sasukesgirlfriend on October 25, 2008, 4:06:31 PM
awesome!Forestdahedgehog on October 24, 2008, 11:14:13 AM
woot!!!awsumness!!Forestdahedgehog on October 24, 2008, 12:13:02 AM
wow!awsum!but quick DX cants wait 4 mor >DForestdahedgehog on October 24, 2008, 12:10:31 AM
lol XD i lik their justus >W<Forestdahedgehog on October 24, 2008, 12:06:22 AM
woot >W< tht was awsumnesssfuullll >W<Knucklescrazy on October 23, 2008, 2:35:15 AM
Good fight! WOO!lumbeelove on October 21, 2008, 5:26:22 AM
yay!!! i won!!!Sasukesgirlfriend on October 20, 2008, 9:52:00 AM
GO RYU! X3arijo on October 20, 2008, 9:28:25 AM
i'll joinName:Dez
age:14
race:Jinchuuriki(has Gobi No Houkou)5-tails
Hair:black
eye color:brown
gender:female
personality:shy,quiet,friendly
Village:Akatsuki
Jutsu:has no jutsu.just aura
Love interest:Deidara
Favorite weapon:???
lumbeelove on October 20, 2008, 4:42:28 AM
cool!Forestdahedgehog on October 17, 2008, 10:31:39 AM
ohh i wunder who snowie is?XDForestdahedgehog on October 17, 2008, 10:27:33 AM
awwwwwzuuuumneessss XDForestdahedgehog on October 17, 2008, 10:24:53 AM
O___O woah.......lee better not get on ryu's bad side...Forestdahedgehog on October 17, 2008, 10:20:45 AM
AWSUMNESSS XDDDSasukesgirlfriend on October 17, 2008, 9:15:28 AM
OMG WHO IS SNOWIE?! >83 WE WILL NEVER KNOW! >8Olol
Sasukesgirlfriend on October 17, 2008, 9:11:54 AM
Oh ok then. 83Gigi's crush is Jeke. He gave her a yin-yang necklace and never takes it off. Doesn't let anyone touch it. Jeke does like her back but he is too hot headed and macho to confess so he her teases. Zane is like her brother. Jeke feels like Zane is going to take her so he hates him.
Gigi mostly trains and raises wolf pups when there are no missions or anything. In her team she is very good at taijustsu, Zane genjustsu, and Jeke ninjustu.
She has shoulder length hair that's blue but when she turns into full demon wolf form she has pure white hair with red eyes. And she can get very touchy and easliy angered when she's in that form.
I think that's it.lol
Knucklescrazy on October 17, 2008, 2:38:07 AM
OOH Joinage!Knucklescrazy on October 17, 2008, 3:25:18 AM
Has no squad, but hopefully wants to help the new Chunin of the hidden leaf.Name:Tora Zensoku
Age:20
Race: Tiger demon/human(not biju but stronger than Kyuubi)
Hair: Sky blue
Eyes:Gray/Silver Cat like
Clothes: A light blue jumpsuit that is cut off just below the knees and above the elbow, snow camo cut-off shorts just above the jumpsuit, an old Katana straped to her back.
Village:Waterfall orignally, Zensoku clan.
Rank: Chunin
Sibling(s):(way older half sister)Rock Lee
Jutsu:Taijutsu only, Tiger chakra infused Tai-jutsu...
SECRET JUTSU: Reverse Lotus, eighth/final gate...Taught herself both lotuses, and a full take over Tiger demon.
Personality: Hyper, happy and optimistic
Love intrest: Maito Gai
Bloodline Trait: extreame speed, can beat Lee with the weights off easily.
Weapon: The 300 year old Katana.
(Prefered She JUST got there...)
Has no squad, but hopefully wants to help the new Chunin of the hidden leaf.
Original squad was killed.
Reverse Lotus is used ONLY as a LAST RESORT!
Knucklescrazy on October 17, 2008, 3:12:36 AM
Knucklescrazy on October 17, 2008, 2:59:24 AM
Sasukesgirlfriend on October 16, 2008, 10:44:25 AM
Oh so is this is what u r talking about! Can I join?! 83Profile
Name: Gigi
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Race: Half demon wolf half human
Related to: Naruto (half blood brother) (poor gigi.lol)
Squad(I don't know if ya want this info): Jeke Hyuga(age 11, male) and Zane (age 12, male)
Personality: Smart and quite
Favorite Jutsu: Wolf Summoning Jutsu
Favorite Weapon: Sais
Anything else to add?
Sasukesgirlfriend on October 16, 2008, 10:37:08 AM
83 awesome.supervanman64 on October 16, 2008, 1:56:08 AM
This is a good original story in the Naruto universe! I hope that it stays as good as it is now. Good Job!hflp on October 15, 2008, 1:17:41 PM
o_o. Whoa. Over protective brother with demon enhancements. Not-a-good-mix.