Deceiver's Stone 2
Submitted May 14, 2006 Updated October 26, 2006 Status Incomplete | Okashi, a new girl, is discovered as looking strikingly similar to Mikita. Could she be a reincarnation? What about Tsuyoku's reign? Will he continue to take over Naraku's position?
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - The New Beginning
Submitted: May 14, 2006 • Updated: May 14, 2006
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Chapter 2 - Future Issues
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Chapter 3 - Mission Love
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Chapter 4 - Kagome's Tutoring
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Chapter 5 - Recurring Nightmares
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Chapter 6 - The Sleepover
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Chapter 7 - Discovering the truth
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Chapter 8 - Okashi's heart
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Chapter 9 - Back to school again
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Chapter 10 - Hiei and Karasu in High School?
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Chapter 11 - The Plot of Tsuyoku
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Chapter 12 - Hesitant Questions
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Chapter 13 - More school time
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Chapter 14 - Karasu killed the preps!
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Chapter 15 - Dance Time
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Chapter 16 - Recognized
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Chapter 17 - Protecting the jewel
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Chapter 18 - Tour Anyone?
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Chapter 19 - The Tipton Hotel
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Chapter 20 - Kagome's Surprise
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Chapter 21 - An Alternate Reality
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Chapter 22 - Surprising news about Sango...
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Chapter 23 - You're not the boss of me!
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Chapter 24 - Surprising Return
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Chapter 25 - Catching up on lost time
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Chapter 26 - How Evil Can One Demon Be?
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Chapter 27 - Dimensions Don't Mix
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Chapter 28 - Amnesia and an unplanned marriage
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Chapter 29 - A Jaganshi Honeymoon
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Chapter 30 - Rise of popularity
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Chapter 31 - Finding The Murderer
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Chapter 32 - Yet Even More Fame Arises
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Chapter 33 - A Break From It All
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Chapter 34 - Tell Me True
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Chapter 35 - Do you love me?
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Chapter 36 - Substitution Body
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Chapter 37 - Strangely Casual Escape Plan
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Chapter 38 - Reunited Yet Again
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Chapter 39 - Hiei Fanart and a Cohort of Cats
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Chapter 40 - Once A Hardened Heart...
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Chapter 41 - A Ninja's Search
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Chapter 42 - Evidence that leads to the truth
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Chapter 43 - Work your way up
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Chapter 44 - Found You
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Chapter 45 - Fight for the Shikon no Tama
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Chapter 46 - Is This The End?
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Chapter 47 - Kagome's Normal Life
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Chapter 48 - Everything is different
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Chapter 49 - Back to normal
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Chapter 50 - Creepy Creation
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Chapter 51 - Strange and freaky effects
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Chapter 52 - Gender Confused
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keera_punked_out on July 10, 2007, 8:16:27 AM
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ADD MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!keera_punked_out on November 14, 2006, 10:03:27 AM
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YAY! You sing this! I knew Miki sang this too! I just had to find it! Go you. Go me! Go Miki! Rawr! LOL!mikita_inugirl on November 14, 2006, 10:10:17 AM
mikita_inugirl on (Chapter: 25)
Yup. I had Mikita sing my song. XD ANd now you know what it sounds like. ^__^keera_punked_out on November 14, 2006, 10:14:00 AM
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Yes I do, but how you sing it is a little nicer. Miki says "You ran away and showed your tears just like a pansy" and you say something like "You ran away and showed your tears like it would hurt me".mikita_inugirl on November 14, 2006, 10:26:27 AM
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Oh I changed that part in the story. XDkeera_punked_out on November 5, 2006, 8:50:36 AM
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LOL! ME!!!! LOL! I'm okay... ^_^ Karasu is an idiot...mikita_inugirl on November 5, 2006, 8:58:49 AM
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Yesh yesh, she tends to be an idiot. ^__^ lolkeera_punked_out on November 5, 2006, 8:43:11 AM
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LOL! I love Hieie! ROFL! I wanna hear him talk!mikita_inugirl on November 5, 2006, 8:58:02 AM
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LOL! OMG ME TOO!mandy94t on October 27, 2006, 7:38:32 AM
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hehheh awesome.one time I got seriously busted for sneaking out at around midnight by tearing apart my window and jumping out.All just so I could try to ride my bike to Hinson's.not worth bein' grounded for three weeks...*blasts Delicious Surprise*IF I WON ME THE LOTTERY-I'D DANCE NAKED IN THE STREET-WITH A TOPHAT FULLA MONEY-AND YOU'D WANNA GETTA KNOW ME-IF I WON ME THE LOTTERY!!Ed:0.o that's a scary thought...
Me:What,me dancin' nekkie on Main Street?
Ed:*shudder*Exactly...
mikita_inugirl on October 27, 2006, 8:11:24 AM
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LOL! Thanks for the comment. ^__^mandy94t on November 2, 2006, 6:52:33 AM
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oh and Mikita-san?could I pleeeeeeeeeease meet Edo-san in DS2?pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease....?mikita_inugirl on November 2, 2006, 9:45:04 AM
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Sure. I was actually planning on it. ^__^ Sorry there haven't been any updates lately btw. I am kind of in a writers and an artists block. -_- I'll get a new chapter up as soon as I can though. ^__^mandy94t on November 2, 2006, 8:24:47 PM
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YAY!!Don't worry one time I couldn't draw diddly-squat for three months.THREE MONTHS!!*sigh*thanks a ton you rock!!mikita_inugirl on November 2, 2006, 11:21:17 PM
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Three months? Whoa... O.O That's a long time. My artists blocks don't last but maybe up to a month, usually about a couple weeks though. XDmandy94t on November 6, 2006, 6:40:11 AM
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yeah it was depressing....I kept tryin' and tryin' but I would just sit there with the pencil on the paper and on the occasion that I did get something drawn it was worse than when I started.....for a while I thought I lost my anime drawing 'skills' for good.then after three months I just plain COULDN'T STOP drawing.I kept getting awesome ideas and drawing better than usual.EQUIVALENT EXCHANGE!!mandy94t on October 24, 2006, 7:53:39 AM
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yay!!you had me with my country music!!^ ^ I would give you more lyrics but I can't think of any at the moment.*sigh*Man.....I need me some Tim McGraw....*blasts 'I Got Friends That Do'*and you had Al's body idea with a plus!!YOU ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCK!!!*sings*This is for the nobody-the one in the crowd who's got a-lost look on his faaaaaaace....this is for the downtrodden-the one that the world's forgotten-waitin' for a better daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay....Well I'm in no-position to judge 'em-heaven knows,they're just like me
Ed:*shoves Doritos in mouth*
Me:Mmmph!!*chew and swallow*Yeah.I'ma terrible singer,no?
mikita_inugirl on October 24, 2006, 8:04:15 AM
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Thanks to you for the Al's body idea. ^__^ *huggles* YAYAYAYAYAYAYay!mandy94t on October 25, 2006, 8:06:31 AM
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*gives huge box of cookies*^ ^mikita_inugirl on October 25, 2006, 10:31:05 AM
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Hee hee, you're awesome. ^__^mandy94t on October 25, 2006, 8:59:08 PM
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you rock.Ed:How many times are you gonna tell this poor girl that?
Me:*shrugs*How da heck'm I s'posed ta know?
Ed:Hick.
Me:Awwwww.....thanks!*glomp**gives you more cookies*
VahnTheWhiteDragon on October 24, 2006, 4:44:44 AM
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XDD nice!keera_punked_out on October 21, 2006, 7:21:11 AM
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Leona: Peaches!(Leona spotted a peach tree and grabbed as many peaches as she could carry. She began stuffing her face rather quickly. Hiei looked at her with disgust as he picked an apple from a nearby apple tree. He took a bite of his apple and continued to walk along casually. Mikita found a pear tree and took a pear from the tree. She took a bite and smiled, taking another one down from the tree.)
Mikita: Mmmm Here Sesshy. Have a pear. Its good.
Sesshomaru: No.
Mikita: Oh come on. Its not like its poison or anything.
Sesshomaru: I am not hungry, and do not call me Sesshy.
Mikita: Oh yeah. I forgot about that. Sorry flower boy.
Sesshomaru: Dont push it.
[size=] LOLS! That's great! I'm not in this chappie! Waaa! *gets shot*[/size]
mikita_inugirl on October 21, 2006, 7:23:22 AM
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lol don't worry. Keera will be in it again. ^__^keera_punked_out on October 21, 2006, 7:33:35 AM
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YAYS!keera_punked_out on October 21, 2006, 7:11:45 AM
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Yusuke: Whoa Does she kiss you with that tongue Hiei? (Karasu reeled her tongue back in and slurped it into her mouth.)
Karasu: Lets try it Hiei! Tongue war!
(She locked lips with Hiei and he soon began to gag. He pushed away from her and held onto his throat.)
Karasu: I win!
(Kurama sat down with depression yet again as he grabbed a bag of chips.)
Kurama: No need to rub it in.
Hiei: Ow you stabbed my tonsils.
Karasu: Oops
LOLs! This has to be one of my favorite chappies! I like that Ed randomly popped out of nowhere. ^_^ LOL!
mikita_inugirl on October 21, 2006, 7:14:42 AM
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lol mine too. Thankies ^__^mandy94t on October 19, 2006, 7:16:39 AM
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YA SAISHII!!Did ja know that one time I creamed my dad and got squealed on by Midget Man,a looooooooong lecture,and no TV for two weeks?ya know what I did after two weeks?I tried again!!^ ^ALL HAIL POSEIDON!!WE ARE NOT WORTHY!!^ ^ awesome job!!mikita_inugirl on October 19, 2006, 7:52:44 AM
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XD She is very insane and strange, especially in the next chapter. ^__^mandy94t on October 19, 2006, 8:48:53 AM
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!*passes out from lack of oxygen again*Ed:How the h*ll can she do that?
Me:X.X
mandy94t on October 17, 2006, 7:33:29 AM
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HAHA!!SAISHII!!!!DA STALKER!!YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!YOU ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCK!!!And she called Kagura a horror monkey!!and you mentioned me!!YAY!!*gives yet another Bob cookie*mikita_inugirl on October 17, 2006, 9:18:39 AM
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! *glompos* ^__^mandy94t on October 17, 2006, 7:19:00 AM
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oohh....so that's why the kitten stalked him...^ ^ you sure are creative,Miki!awesome job!!keera_punked_out on October 6, 2006, 2:48:57 PM
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...?! I confused... Wait... where's Karasu! *rapes kari* We secret lovers. So secret even she dun know. ^_^mikita_inugirl on October 7, 2006, 4:40:20 AM
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Now she does. XDDkeera_punked_out on October 7, 2006, 10:57:15 AM
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Whaa!?!?!? LOL! I love you... ^_^mikita_inugirl on October 8, 2006, 3:59:33 AM
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YAY! ZOMG! *glompos and gropies* I love you too my dear. ^__^keera_punked_out on October 6, 2006, 2:39:45 PM
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Hiei: Its called urinating and everyone has to do it.Kurama: Yes, and everyone has to breathe.
LOL! What an emo!
VahnTheWhiteDragon on October 5, 2006, 9:56:34 PM
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w00t awsome ^___^% cant wait to read more ^__^mikita_inugirl on October 6, 2006, 1:29:35 AM
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YAY! ^__^mandy94t on October 5, 2006, 9:33:12 PM
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one lil word:WELL.All she hasta do is jump in the well,right?Right?*rubs eyes*far too early...*plops head on computer table*Ed:*pokes*She's out.She's also gonna miss the bus...
mikita_inugirl on October 6, 2006, 1:29:14 AM
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Yup yups. She's gonna do just that... to discover many changes. XDDmandy94t on October 7, 2006, 5:06:58 AM
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changes?like Inuyasha still pinned to the tree?or one of the characters long dead?or....0.o a still alive Kikyo?!*throws hammers at Kikyo*Wait...*throws cherry bombs at Kikyo*mandy94t on October 3, 2006, 9:31:30 PM
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well heck no it ain't the end!I wanna see Tsuyoku get beat so hard his momma feels it,by God!....okay...hyped...sorry.Awesome job!mikita_inugirl on October 4, 2006, 2:13:48 AM
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lol yeppers. It can't be the end because Tsuyoku has not been defeated, Saishii hasn't been introduced, Vahn hasn't been introduced, and etc. I CAN'T WAIT TO WRITE MORE! XDmandy94t on October 4, 2006, 7:53:19 AM
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I CAN'T WAIT 'TILL SAISHII SHOWS UP!!IT AIN'T EVEN MY FIC FOR CHRIST'S SAKE!!AND I'M STILL HYPED!!GAH!!keera_punked_out on October 1, 2006, 1:16:43 AM
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I want a big spider... LOL! Kurama depressed?! LOL! What is wrong with you, Miki?! LOL! *pulls out a large white coat thingy* Cum here and put this jacket on, sweety... ^_^mikita_inugirl on October 1, 2006, 3:32:20 AM
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I shall NOT put that on! White is not my color. ^_^ Tee hee... XD ....What are you doing with that syringe? O_okeera_punked_out on October 1, 2006, 12:55:05 AM
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Okashi... Kakashi... THEY RHYME!!! LOL! I'm such a good liar. ^_^mikita_inugirl on October 1, 2006, 3:31:33 AM
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THEY DO RHYME! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! O_O YAY!keera_punked_out on October 1, 2006, 1:28:07 AM
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LOL! Okay. Yusuke is a nutty idiot... Vegtables...keera_punked_out on October 1, 2006, 1:06:54 AM
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Karasu: Whats up?Mikita: The ceiling.
Karasu: It is? Wow! So what are you doing?
Mikita: I got bored so I went into this chatroom thinger. Im about to go kill this idiot.
Karasu: Okay. Have fun Miki. I gotta go scrub the tub. Yay! I rhymed!
LOL! I say the ceiling too... and I point out when people rhyme. I did that a few days ago then claimed I was Dr. Suess. ^_^
mandy94t on October 1, 2006, 12:46:41 AM
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AWESOME JOOOOOOB!!!....beware the mutant spider.lol.I just wish my P.E. teacher croaked....By God,Grandma Moses is puuuure evil....keera_punked_out on September 14, 2006, 10:04:27 AM
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Karasu: Looks like its not coming up as easily (Cheery) Time to bring out the toothbrush!Hiei: (Sweat drop) Toothbrush?
Sounds like my mom. ^_^
Yusuke: Youre smarter than me and you dont even go to school.
Kurama: Neither do you.
Kurama DOES go to school! Mwahahaha!
Yusuke: No way Youre expecting? Man Hiei! How much playtime have you had before dinner?
Hiei: Pervert.
HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAAA!!!!!1!!!iii!!!11one
mikita_inugirl on September 30, 2006, 3:06:42 PM
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Whoops. I meant to add "You don't even go to school anymore." I forgot the anymore. My mind works too fast -_- XD.mandy94t on September 30, 2006, 12:41:27 PM
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UUUPDAAAAAATE!!!YEEEEEEEEEEAH BUUUUUUUDDDY!!!^ ^ YOU ROCK!!Wait...*eye twitch*Spider?Oh Christ.*grabs math book and hurls it at mutant spider**spider swallows book*Aww crudmuffins.Now I'm gonna get a lecture from Mrs.Negri.*kicks spider**spider dies*O.o wth?!weird...
Karasu:SAMMIE!!
Me:WHERE?!WHERE'S MAH HIMALAYAN CAT THE WORKER FROM KEITH BAKER HOMES STOLE?!
Karasu:YOU KILLED SAMMIE!!
Me:I'ma gonna kill Midget Man if he keeps stalkin' me!!
Ryan(Midget Man-my lil bro obsessed with soccer and Hannah Montana)-AAAH MOOOM!!
Me:Momma's boy.okay too random there sorry....
mikita_inugirl on September 30, 2006, 12:42:58 PM
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lol YAY RANDOMNESS! XD ^__^ ^__^ ^__^ ^__^mandy94t on September 29, 2006, 9:55:11 AM
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oooh yay.another update!!you're really good at this.*sings*Way on down to southern Alabama with the guitars jammin' that's where we're headed.Straight up to Buton Montana singin' Lord I was Born A Ramblin' Man.CAAAALIIFOOOORNIIIA,to OOOregon.Even New York City got one or two hillbillies ready to hit the road.It's a brither and a sister kinda thang.Raise up yo hands if ya all wanna hang with-ME AND MY GANG.We live,to ride,we ride,to live.Me and my gang.Jump on that train.Grab hold 'a' them reins.Gonna rock this thang,cock this thang-ME AND MY GANG!!
*done singing*WHOOOOOOO!!RASCAL FLATTS ROCKS!!YEAH BUDDY!!
Mikita:What kinda song was that?
Me:Me and My Gang by Rascal Flatts.COUNTRY MUSIC WITHOUT PREJUDICE!!*starts singin' Big and Rich*
mandy94t on September 29, 2006, 9:57:28 AM
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*brother not 'brither'.whoopsmikita_inugirl on September 28, 2006, 3:57:47 PM
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There were a couple different format-ish thingers I did for the chatroom part but it didn't work. *shrugs* In that blank space I had <BaltoFan86 has left the chatroom> also. Oh well. You get it.mandy94t on September 29, 2006, 9:56:14 AM
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doesn't it suck when FAC screws with your hard-worked on pieces of art?mikita_inugirl on September 29, 2006, 10:15:17 AM
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Yes it does. -_-mikita_inugirl on September 26, 2006, 3:06:24 PM
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And still yet the boxes and &'s still haunt my words... -_-mandy94t on September 28, 2006, 7:56:12 AM
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well heck,screw the boxes and &'s....this still rocks!^ ^mikita_inugirl on September 28, 2006, 7:59:53 AM
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lol thanks ^__^mandy94t on September 27, 2006, 8:12:32 AM
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oooh yaaaaaaaaaay!!update!!AWWWESOOOOOOOOOOMMMEEEE!!!*gives another Bob cookie*Sakura Pink:You're a weirdo.
Me:*munches Doritios**swallows*What you say?*munches more Doritos*
Naruto:What're those?
Me:Noneya.*munches more Doritos**throws away empty bag*
DarkSlayerDouglas on September 25, 2006, 8:29:44 AM
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lol thisis funny/grtest/wat the heck is going on. :) r we able to do comments??? Or put things in the story???mikita_inugirl on September 25, 2006, 9:52:37 AM
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lol not this one, but I'm too busy at the time to do Ask Mikita..., but I'll try to answer your questions ASAP. kk? ^__^ btw, thanks for the comment.keera_punked_out on September 24, 2006, 8:44:47 AM
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(Keera was taking a shower and washing her face at the time. A little bit of soap got into her eyes and she couldnt open them. She began to grope for the washrag, which was casually handed to her.)Sakura: There ya go.
Keera: Thanks Sakura.
(Once Keera wiped her eyes off and realized what she said, she opened her eyes to see Sakura naked in the shower with her holding a loofa and examining it.)
Keera: Sakura! What are you doing here?
Sakura: I wanted to see how you were doing. Whats this thing?
Keera: Its a loofa. It is for washing your body Wait a second! You have to get out of here. If my mom finds out that Im in the shower with a female demon
(Too late. Her mother knocked on the door.)
Mother: Keera? Are you all right in there sweetie?
Hahahah! I'm in the shower. ^_^
mikita_inugirl on September 24, 2006, 10:28:55 AM
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lol yes you aremandy94t on September 22, 2006, 8:51:03 AM
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AWESOME YOU ROCK!!omg Naruto Sakura Kakashi and Sasuke showed up yay!!*hugs and gives giant cookie named Bob*Jenny(big sister):Why do you name all inanimate objects?
Me:AAAAH STALKER!!*attacks sister with fire extinguisher*
mikita_inugirl on September 22, 2006, 11:14:25 AM
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*takes cookie named Bob* WEEEEEEEEEEEEE BOB! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! *glomps and tackles and glompage and moogles!* O_o okay.... YEAH! WOOOOOOOOOOOT! .... Did that make any sense???mikita_inugirl on September 20, 2006, 6:56:57 AM
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As I said before, the easier to read version without the boxes and &'s instead of ...'s, go here if this is difficult to read:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3050522/1/
Thank you my supporters. You can read it there but still submit your comments here if you like, or if you can read this one just fine, that's cool too. ^__^
keera_punked_out on September 17, 2006, 11:40:57 AM
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Where's the next CHAPTER!!!mikita_inugirl on September 17, 2006, 1:21:44 PM
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Sorry XD. I'm still working on it and deciding plots and such. ^__^mandy94t on September 13, 2006, 6:56:49 AM
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lol finally a dog that jumps on someone else!!lol!Yusuke is a pervert.when I was about seven and didn't know what the heck anime was I pronounced his name Yoo-sook.lol.^ ^awesome jobInuyasha:Shut up midget!*kills me*
Me:*anime vien**comes back to life*HEY YA FREAKIN' HORROR MONKEY!!DIDN'T YO MOMMA TEACH YA ANY MANNERS WHILE YOU WERE SCREWIN' HER?!
Yusuke:And I thought I was rude.
Me:Shut up reject.
*we all get in huge fight*
mandy94t on September 12, 2006, 11:02:28 AM
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whoa.kitties.who woulda guessed?YAY RENA'S BAAAAACK!!*huggles Rena*Cutie!!^ ^ awesome job!!mikita_inugirl on September 12, 2006, 11:51:43 AM
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Thank ya ^__^keera_punked_out on September 12, 2006, 7:27:53 AM
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Hiei: Why does this one have a preview?Karasu: (Sweat Drop) Click it and youll see.
(Hiei clicked the picture and he was disgusted by what he saw.)
Hiei: Karasu! You drew me naked IN THE SHOWER?
LOL! That rox. I wanna see THAT picture. ^_^
Hiei: WHAT THE HELL? Yaoi Fanart of Inuyasha and me! This is all wrong. I should be the one on top! Retards!
That is so funnah! I love this story soo much!
Mikita: Well I finally made you show emotion and yell at me, so HA!
Sesshomaru: I did not yell. I raised my voice.
Mikita: Thats showing emotion.
YAY! Is Shessy the father of that one kitten. ^_^ Icky...
mikita_inugirl on September 12, 2006, 11:50:58 AM
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lol the kitten is gonna follow him everywhere now. XD There is a meaning that the cat enters his life though. ^__^mandy94t on September 8, 2006, 11:42:33 AM
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awesome job!!lol.my God.Now I know how my previous Social Studies teacher feels.S.S. teacher:*eye twitch**sitting in corner*Happy place....happy place....
Me:*pops knuckles*My hand still hurts from those fifty-nine vocabulary words.
(Social Studies teacher's screams are heard)
Me:*stashing katana*I feel sooooo much better....Oh and the fifty-nine vocabulary words wuddn't no joke.He actually made us do that.Ewwww,mah hands're all bloody....
mikita_inugirl on September 10, 2006, 1:38:01 PM
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I know how that is. *Smirks* Muahahahahahahaha! ..... HA! ^__^ lolkeera_punked_out on September 7, 2006, 11:53:47 AM
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LOL! Too funnah!"Mikita: Youre married you know!
Hiei: I thought it was Karasus hand. Besides, you wouldnt let my hand go.
Mikita: Likely excuse.
Hiei: (Sigh) Believe what you want.
Mikita: (Low voice) Strange& Karasu didnt wake up at all.
Karasu: Shut up! Im sleeping! (Twitch. Twitch. Twitch.)"
DarkSlayerDouglas on September 6, 2006, 12:25:30 PM
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Lol it was an interesting story?? A bit wierd but funny.mikita_inugirl on September 6, 2006, 12:29:20 PM
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Did you read only chapter 37? It would make more sense to read from the beginning. It's worth it. ^__^mandy94t on September 6, 2006, 11:11:50 AM
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awesome!!lol.awkward...I really don't like dogs.the big ones,at least.like my cousin's Aunt Raye's dog Major.All I need is a saddle and I could freakin' ride that gigantic thing that likes to stalk me.it's as big as a small horse.Inuyasha:What do you have against dogs,midget?
Me:The big ones smell,bite,and like to burp in my face.
Inuyasha:*laughs*
Me:Then I kick 'em in the face.Then they go all mutant rabisized dog and try to kill me...
Inuyasha:Like this?*kills me*
Me:*comes back*That wasn't very polite horror monkey.
mikita_inugirl on September 6, 2006, 11:49:44 AM
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lol in the story you can be all annoying by regenrating everytime you're killed. LOL! You get killed, you come back, you get killed, you come back. XDmandy94t on September 2, 2006, 10:36:55 AM
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wth?!(hey,I didn't print out a full swear word so Stalker can't yack at me!!)the text in my comment is weird.....sorry....mikita_inugirl on September 2, 2006, 12:16:03 PM
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OMG! *spazzes because I have a chapter zero!* O_Omandy94t on August 31, 2006, 7:42:11 AM
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awesome freakin job man!!Jesus Christ Tsuyoku needsta get a life!!Freakin horror monkey.....Jesus....man....so many questions.....
Mikita:What the f*** is this,my IQ test?!
Me:That you would flunk?
Mikita:*kills me*
Me:*comes back to life*Name the twenty-fifth principle of the shinobi.
Mikita:WTF?!
Me:*sigh*A shinobi can never show his feeling no matter what the consequence.Feelings are a weekness that only cloud his judement...yadda yadda yaddy....
Mikita:And where did you learn that?
Me:Don't ask me lady,I just work here.
Mikita:*kills again*
Me:0.o *comes back to life*That's gettin' old....now name the first law of alchemy and exactly what it is.
Mikita:Do you know?
Me:Yup.the Law of Equivalent Exchange.To obtain,something of equal value must be lost.Man that sucks.
Mikita:Where exactly is this conversation going?
Me:Yo momma's house.Got that from the gay prick that steals my pencils.
Jennifer(big sister):AMANDA!!
Me:STALKER!!!
sorry for the random comment good God this thing's longer than my sister's history report.*sigh*see ya!Â
Mikita:FINALLY!!PRESS THE D*** BUTTON ALREADY!!
me:Don't rush my superior button-clicking!!see ya*clicks submit button*
keera_punked_out on August 30, 2006, 11:56:08 AM
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Keera: Hey Tsuyoku? How can you be new when you're improved or improved when you're now?Tsuyoku: Uh...
Â
LOL! That reminds me. I dreamed of Sesshomaru last night. He wasn't neutered. ^_^ And he had a kitten. LOL! He was carrying it around. Ali was with him with her own kitten. I don't know why there were kittens, but I know why Sesshomaru was in my dream. I was planing for Halloween (I know, two months early?! Last time my mom waited for the night before). Sesshie is who I'll be if we pick InuYasha.
mikita_inugirl on August 30, 2006, 12:26:01 PM
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lol the only dream I had of Sesshy was a creepy one. I was his dog. -_-keera_punked_out on August 30, 2006, 12:35:20 PM
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OKay. I WAS Sesshie. ^_^ We ran into a doctor and Ali wanted Sesshomaru to get neutered. That's how I remember that.mikita_inugirl on August 30, 2006, 12:56:37 PM
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lol at least you weren't his dog XDDkeera_punked_out on August 30, 2006, 1:35:54 PM
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Yeah. But you're mine! Mwahahaha! I, Sesshomaru, control you! LOL!mikita_inugirl on August 30, 2006, 1:39:38 PM
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Yeah.... and now I must hide... under a rock. *hides while holding Sesshomaru repellant with me* lolkeera_punked_out on August 30, 2006, 1:54:40 PM
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Hey! You're on! LOL! Sesshie's kyute when he tries to protect a kitten. ^_^keera_punked_out on August 26, 2006, 12:05:57 PM
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Keera: I was almost raped?! Ahhh!! *runs around screaming*Hiei: It's alright. *Keera runs into Hiei's arms*
Keera: Save me!
Â
LOL!
mikita_inugirl on August 26, 2006, 2:42:04 PM
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Next time, since Sakura taught her karate skills, she's gonna kick some @$$! Muahahahahahahaa! lol ^__^keera_punked_out on August 26, 2006, 3:45:03 PM
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I'm nearly gonna get raped again?! Man, the men must luff meh! LOL! JK!mikita_inugirl on August 27, 2006, 7:23:38 AM
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Nah, I don't think I'll have that happen again. XD It'll be someone threatening though. Maybe a robber. XD She could save her house from being robbed, and help the cops! YAY! She'll be on the news and they'll say, "Hey! You're one of the Morgan sisters in that movie!" ^__^ I just now came up with the idea. lolkeera_punked_out on August 26, 2006, 12:36:07 PM
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(Strange happiness took over her emotions as she quickly embraced him. This astonished him, but he put his arms loosely around her in return. Realizing what she had just done, Mikita separated from the hug and lightly blushed.)Â
HE ONLY HAS ONE ARM! LOL!
Â
Â
(Mikita looked over at Kagome and smiled a malicious smile. She tapped her evil little fingers together as she thought of the perfect question.)
Mikita: Kagome& Now tell me true: Have you ever masturbated?
(Kagome turned bright red with embarrassment and everyone focused their attention on her. This made it even more difficult for her to answer.)
Kagome: Uhh& Truth be told& I cannot tell a lie&
(She looked at the expectant face of her questioner and she gulped.)
Kagome: &Yes.
Â
I nearly died of laughing at this part!
mikita_inugirl on August 26, 2006, 2:40:23 PM
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Uhhh, Keera... Sesshy has two arms now remember? Mikita gave it to him from her father. ^__^keera_punked_out on August 26, 2006, 3:44:09 PM
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Sesshy with two arms scares me. ^_^keera_punked_out on August 26, 2006, 12:46:38 PM
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Sad. Tsuyoko is EVIL is chapter 35! *kills* I'm happy now. ^_^keera_punked_out on August 26, 2006, 12:28:02 PM
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Inuyasha: Youd back down because youre the chicken. Gobble gobble!LOL! I say chickens gobble. ^_^ I have a hot tub too, but it's outside.
keera_punked_out on August 26, 2006, 12:20:58 PM
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Hey coolio. I'm really a blue belt. LOL!keera_punked_out on August 26, 2006, 12:13:18 PM
keera_punked_out on (Chapter: 31)
What?! Kari's knocked up?!Â
Karasu: What? A magician?
Hiei: No. A father.
mandy94t on August 24, 2006, 8:58:57 AM
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ooooh....Tsuyoku is a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig uma kuso!!!*kicks Tsuyoku*DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE!!!!!Mikta:....
Me:What?What'd I do now?
mikita_inugirl on August 24, 2006, 9:13:21 AM
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lol you're funny. ^__^ YAY FUNNY! WOOT! BOOGA BOOGA BOOGA *Gets slapped* Owies...mandy94t on August 24, 2006, 8:51:25 AM
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awww man.awesome job.poor Kagome.*Sango does the truth thing to me*
Sango:...do you ever panic?
Me:What the crap-?!Heck no!!
*orby thingy turns red*
Me:Uhhh....hehehe.....
mandy94t on August 24, 2006, 8:43:16 AM
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awesome job!!aww man they too lucky.I don't even have a DS.*flips them off*Hiei:*kills me*
Me:0.o *comes back to life*^ ^ heheheheheeee...
mandy94t on August 23, 2006, 6:57:07 AM
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lol.maaaaan,everyone's famous,even me (at my school) for my attitude.^ ^ hehehe....awesome job!!mandy94t on August 23, 2006, 6:50:19 AM
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weird coincidence.*sweatdrop*hehehe...Scientist guy:I got you now.
Me:Are you a biologist or a forensic scientist?
Scientist guy:Forensic.
Me:Then I guess you're aware of the fact that yo real momma was a Gila monster,ya freakin horror monkey.
lol too random but scientists are evil they think they're right all the time.*sigh*I'ma gonna read the next chapter,'kay?see ya.*gives you giant bottle of hot sauce named George*
mandy94t on August 10, 2006, 8:37:46 AM
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okay then...weird....Blanca is a stalker.and aggressive.like the neighbor's ugly pitbull.*sweatdrop*great job!!if Sango does cough up a kid she'll probably call him\her Kohaku since it can be a guy's or girl's name.heh.
Inuyashalover12 on August 23, 2006, 6:16:19 AM
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Blanca:I am not a STALKER!!me:Yesh you are,Blanca
Blanca:shut up Blanca
me:no u shut up Blanca!!
XDDDD lol
mandy94t on August 22, 2006, 7:45:05 AM
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awesome job!!! 0.o Mikita is evil.I'd hate to be famous.*shudder*I prefer a quiet life.well,'quiet' isn't a good term to use when my cousin and me blast Big and Rich on our way to Wal-Mart with the windows rolled all the way down....heh.this is great!here ya go!*gives you giant gumball named Jack*^ ^mikita_inugirl on August 22, 2006, 11:18:04 AM
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Thank you. ^__^ Plus, I have another chapter, 31, to add now ^__^mandy94t on August 17, 2006, 7:21:35 AM
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lol.Grand Theft Auto??my little brother plays that game.most the time he just blows up helicopters with a bazooka...*stares at possessed little brother*Mikita reminds me of my cousin when she's playin Super Mario Sunshine(and made me try to beat it)okay too random there sorry...awesome job!!mandy94t on August 17, 2006, 7:11:20 AM
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lol!!!hahaha!!great job!^ ^ *gives you giant milkshake named Mike*mandy94t on August 16, 2006, 6:45:10 AM
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lol.lol.great job.itching powder....i needta get me some 'a that for the big scary guy that says the word 'okay' a lot.A.K.A.,my Geology teacher.lol.this is awesome!!*gives you giant Oreo named Moe*
mandy94t on August 14, 2006, 7:44:07 AM
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aww man you sure had me freakin fooled.now I feel like a total idiot.Mikita:Whaddya mean "feel like"?
Me:*anger vein*What'd you say to me freakin horror monkey?!
Mikita:What'd you call me?!*kills me*
Me:*comes back to life*Teehehehehe....I win again.
great job!!can't wait for the next chapter!!*gives you giant cookie named Bob*
mikita_inugirl on August 14, 2006, 11:15:09 AM
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YAY! I haves a BOB COOKIEEEEEEEEEE! *huggles the cookie* Bob: Where's my cookie?
Me: GET AWAY! MINE!
Mikita: *Steals Bob cookie* No. Mine.
Karasu 1: BUT I WANT IT! AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!
Hiei: I don't want it.
Mikita: You're weird.
Hiei: No, I'm different. There's a difference.
Mikita: Obviously.
XD ^__^
mandy94t on August 12, 2006, 3:49:10 AM
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ooh.that's just nice.Mikita's meeeeeean,man.Mikita:What're you gonna do about it *****?
Me:I can be meaner.Lots.
Mikita:Ya wanna bet?
Me:I would but I'm broke.And I needta swipe me a weapon first.*swipes Tetsusaiga*
okay too random there.......great job!!
mandy94t on August 11, 2006, 8:06:15 AM
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oh my God holy crap on a cracker served with cheese Jesus Crudmuffins....Â
mandy94t on August 11, 2006, 7:58:01 AM
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okay then...Blanca is kinda obsessed,no?lolgreat job!!
VahnTheWhiteDragon on August 10, 2006, 3:32:25 PM
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O.O cool!!! love the ending ^^vmandy94t on August 10, 2006, 8:02:47 AM
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(dazed look)ooohhh....pretty starsssss.....Karasu:That's whatcha get for gettin' in my way!
Me:I was in my freakin room and you drove my sister's car through the window....!!!
Â
lol sorry.great job!!goin' on!!
mandy94t on August 10, 2006, 7:56:22 AM
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wait a minute here....Blanca is Inuyasha lover 12's OC right??right??just kiddin'.great job!!!I woulda commented yesterday but it wouldn't let me...
keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 7:24:17 PM
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YAY! I want Hiei! My obsession with him is baack! YAY! *jumps on Hiei and pulls a Karasu move* LOL! I want my Hiei!Rarr!!!keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 7:14:15 PM
keera_punked_out on (Chapter: 21)
"Inuyasha: (Dazed look) Pretty fire pretty destruction" He sounds like me. ^_^keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 7:01:19 PM
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I KNEW something was very femular about the Tipton Hotel. I want my crazy Spanish dude! What's his name again? Esteban? Is that him. I love me in this paret! LOL! But I want Hiei!keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 6:40:17 PM
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I didn't poison the band... hehe..."Kurama: I cant feel my eyelids." LOL! I love Kura. Actually... I hate him... awelll.
keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 6:34:23 PM
keera_punked_out on (Chapter: 15)
LOL! What's with Yusuke and chips? ... I wnat HIEI! Rarr!!! Why does Karasu get him?! *cries* I'm okay now.keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 6:27:43 PM
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Hey I use Axe. LOL! And I would be one of those gothic, anti-preps. LOL! Crazy man.keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 6:16:36 PM
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Toooo funnah! Laughing hystericaly!keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 6:11:19 PM
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I love Bob. ^_^ Soooo funnah!keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 6:05:23 PM
keera_punked_out on (Chapter: 10)
"Teacher: Are your eyes& red? Hiei: Crimson." Ah, I love Hiei. ^_^keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 5:39:49 PM
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I wanna play 'house' with Hiei! Waa! LOL! Burger King... ^_^"Hiei: Oh look. Mommy grape had an accident and died." Tooooo funnah!
keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 5:33:41 PM
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The power of Christ compels you. LOL! My friend said that to me one time. ^_^keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 5:22:01 PM
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They all have been brainwashed! LOL!keera_punked_out on August 9, 2006, 5:17:45 PM
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LOL! Buddha! Crazy. I like the Eminem song. ^_^mandy94t on August 5, 2006, 3:45:22 PM
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lol.wait...I don't know these people....GET AWAY!!!*throws stick and runs like lunatic*great job on the chapterVahnTheWhiteDragon on August 5, 2006, 2:35:34 PM
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hahah nice chapter keep up the great work ^_^mandy94t on August 5, 2006, 4:46:57 AM
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Tipton Hotel?hotels suck.'cept for the one's that have a pool.(heh heh,pool crashin' anyone?)only the first stop....then the second.then the third.then the fourth.then eventually you lose count and lose your mind.lolmandy94t on August 5, 2006, 4:40:28 AM
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oooh.sweet.I went around a few states once.I hadta live in an eighteen wheeler for two weeks.but I went to Texas,North Carolina,and a few more.Okashi on tour?like Big and Rich with Comin' to Your City?
kinda hard to believe.lol
mandy94t on August 5, 2006, 4:33:27 AM
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YAY!!!!!!!!a record deal?sweet!!Okashi's lucky.she's talented.I'm just talented at being annoying.lolmikita_inugirl on August 3, 2006, 8:41:26 AM
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I mean above -_- lolmikita_inugirl on August 3, 2006, 8:40:39 AM
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3050522/1/This is annoying submitting it here. The story can also be found in the link below. ^__^
InuyashaGirl08 on July 28, 2006, 2:23:54 PM
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Aww...poor Inu-getting his ears pulled, then the dog whistle thing, then getting kicked by a bunch of football guys who don't realize what they've done cause INuyasha can totally kick their butts!mandy94t on July 28, 2006, 12:50:38 AM
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oooh sweet she is the reincarnation I knew it I knew it I knew it I knew it I knew it I KNEW IT!!!SWEEEEEEEEEEEEET....great job!!!Kagome:Are you a hippie?
Me:Heck no.
Kagome:Sure.
Me:Listen lady,I'm only gonna tell you once-I AIN'T NO HIPPIE I'M A COUNTRY HICK THERE'S A BIG DIFFERENCE.
sorry for the pointless comment,but you did great.next chapter soon!!plz.
mandy94t on July 28, 2006, 12:42:32 AM
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*raises eyebrow*Okie dokey then...Okashi:*grabs my arm*C'mon,help me get back at Kagome!!
Me:What'm I s'posed ta do,brandish a bonryu and pray it don't fall on my head?
Okashi:...
Me:And I ain't goin' to no dance.I don't dance.I run away screaming.
Okashi:No one said you had to,you don't go to this school.
Me:Yeah yeah I know.
great job on the chapter!!can't wait for the next!
mandy94t on July 28, 2006, 12:34:50 AM
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aaah Karasu killed da preps!!!...
FINALLY!!GOD I HATE CHEERLEADERS WHO THINK THEY'RE ALL THAT!!!!*gives Karasu a bottle of Coke*
Karasu:*sniff*What's this?
Me:Coke.
Karasu:*pours it over her head*
Me:You're s'posed ta drink it.
InuyashaGirl08 on July 27, 2006, 1:39:56 PM
InuyashaGirl08 on (Chapter: 14)
OOh yay, more chapters! ack, my brain has trouble keeping up with all the similar K names-Karasu...Kurama...Kumaraarctic_fox_sakura on July 27, 2006, 11:56:32 AM
arctic_fox_sakura on (Chapter: 14)
XD I love me.....O.o okem-dokey...... Ima shut up. *glomps Kura's leg* MINE!Kura: WTH?!
Me: :D
mandy94t on July 27, 2006, 4:10:23 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 12)
lol hey Karasu can I have three thousand dollars so I can go to Japan??I really need it.America's great,but I wanna go to Japan reeeeeeeeeeeally bad.great job on the story.Can you have me killing my younger brother since he keeps stealing my bandanna?
mandy94t on July 27, 2006, 4:03:52 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 11)
oh God Tsuyoku's a freakin' jerk.but hey...go Bob!!there's a tree named after you on the grass playground.now I know why!!Bob:Whatever dude.
Me:I ain't no dude,dude.
mandy94t on July 26, 2006, 2:53:36 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 10)
lol yeah that school is fun cuz Karasu is going to blow it apart!!!SMORES!!!!no,wait...I needta invite Joe,Fred,Bob(da tree),and George.
and I havta sneak onto campus since I ain't wearin' a skirt!!!!!!!
mandy94t on July 26, 2006, 2:45:50 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 9)
lol uniforms!!!hah hah!!!my God I'd hate to wear a sissy skirt to school everyday-specially with all those jerks around.Jesus Christ I can seriously imagine Karasu in a uniform getting ready to kill someone...InuyashaGirl08 on July 25, 2006, 3:02:30 PM
InuyashaGirl08 on (Chapter: 10)
Yay more updates! You're freaking awesome I don't see how you update this much. I have stories on other sites and it's slow going. can't wait for more!InuyashaGirl08 on July 25, 2006, 10:43:11 AM
InuyashaGirl08 on (Chapter: 8)
OMG!!! I was on vacation for two weeks and I come back to all these updates from here and another fanfic site and lo and behold 6 new chapters for this story. needless to say I was super excited and your's was the first update i read. can't wait for more and I'm loving the sequel!!mandy94t on July 24, 2006, 4:28:01 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 8)
lol.good God almighty Karasu is really dumb.Karasu:*smacks me with fish*
Me:Eeww.Now I smell like Ryan.
Karasu:Who's Ryan?
Me:None yo business fool!
Karasu:Do you ever eat?
Me:Yeah,too much to be exact.
Karasu:Don't look like it toothpick.
Me:Okay,where is this conversation going exactly?
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sorry for the pointless comment.you did a great job.
mandy94t on July 24, 2006, 4:20:05 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 7)
ooh,that's gotta suck.Okashi can be kinda touchy though.My pals lie to me all the time but I don't care.great job on the chapter.mandy94t on July 24, 2006, 4:12:45 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 6)
why do you taunt me?well....at least you don't tell me stuff I already know like my teachers.And at least there are two more chapters.Heh.VahnTheWhiteDragon on July 21, 2006, 5:56:40 AM
VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 8)
lol funny ...bob scares me XD he a hippi?VahnTheWhiteDragon on July 21, 2006, 4:44:33 AM
VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 6)
O.O ohhhh nice chap ^^ me likesmandy94t on July 20, 2006, 8:37:08 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 5)
noooooooooooooooooooooooooo why'd you end it here?!?!I wanted to blast some country music around them!!!!Geez,if I say Big and Rich Inuyasha'll say"Huh?Who?"They need some real music!!!*blasts Big and Rich*even Okashi would like country,there's plentya christian songs.some of which suck in my opinion.*blasts Brad Paisley**shoots brother's radio since he's playing his CD for the fiftieth time*lolThe Road and the Radio's a cool CD and all,but enough's enough,man.Too much Kenny Chesney.sorry for the pointless comment,but I havta say that i love country.the only one in my family who doesn't is my oldest sister,and she's evil.lol.anyway,great job!!
mandy94t on July 20, 2006, 8:26:29 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 4)
Eminem?What the crap??I listen to real music,man-COUNTRY!!!!*blasts Big and Rich**MP3 messes up*Fine.Rascal Flatts.*blasts Rascal Flatts**radio explodes*oops.Better that than my MP3.mandy94t on July 20, 2006, 8:18:05 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 3)
lol I wouldn't be surprised if someone asked you to make a movie outta this!Haha!!I'm sugar high!!!*dances around room*VahnTheWhiteDragon on July 17, 2006, 1:22:00 PM
VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 4)
hahaha this chap was funny XDVahnTheWhiteDragon on July 17, 2006, 1:10:48 PM
VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 3)
sweet awsome story lolmikita_inugirl on July 17, 2006, 1:09:21 PM
mikita_inugirl on (Chapter: 4)
Well so far the chapters are showing odd errors, but hopefully those will clear up. The & things are supposed to be ... and the square boxes are suppposed to be apostrophies. Oh well.mandy94t on June 2, 2006, 12:56:23 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 2)
noooo cliffhanger....but...*blasts country music*good way to cheer up.Karasu's no toothpick.I weigh less than eighty and I'm twelve.*whacks Inuyasha*Inuyasha:*rubbing head*What was that for?!
me:for having such a long freakin name.
sorry for the random craziness that is my twisted imagination.I'm afraid I was born insane ^ ^ please update soon!
InuyashaGirl08 on June 1, 2006, 6:22:06 PM
InuyashaGirl08 on (Chapter: 2)
ROFL!!!!! Avatar part was great and random! this was hilarious tooKarasu: What did you say, big @$$?
(Inuyasha looks at Karasu confused, and then looks back at his butt.)
Inuyasha: â¦Is it really that big?
Inuyasha: Whatever toothpick.
Karasu: Aww, toothpick⦠Am I really that small?
Karasu: Teaches you to mess with me, big @$$.
Inuyasha: At least I have an @$$!
Karasu: Ooh! That's it!
Inu_lover1644 on May 23, 2006, 8:46:09 AM
Inu_lover1644 on (Chapter: 2)
UGH! you're evil! omg dude! I luv this story and you just had to end it here didn't you?! oy, anyway, cyaInu_lover1644 on May 23, 2006, 8:29:10 AM
Inu_lover1644 on (Chapter: 1)
me luv me luv! this is so good!VahnTheWhiteDragon on May 16, 2006, 4:50:08 AM
VahnTheWhiteDragon on (Chapter: 1)
EEEEE!!! yay!! second story! this is awosme ^^keera_punked_out on May 14, 2006, 10:06:00 AM
keera_punked_out on (Chapter: 1)
LMAO! Miroku is me! In the end! I lurve massages. ^_^ I couldn't quit laughing! *locks Kari in a closet* I wuv you Hiei... *Takes Karasu's place* YAY! Fluffy_fan4774 on May 14, 2006, 10:02:30 AM
Fluffy_fan4774 on (Chapter: 1)
^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^ YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! NEW SEASON XD can't wait until the next chappie. ^_^; sadly thats all I got. I wasted all my useful comments on the last season *whistling* ^_^Inuyashalover12 on May 14, 2006, 7:51:23 AM
Inuyashalover12 on (Chapter: 1)
next chapter,next chapter plzzz!!!i love this..loved the frst season...^^which is funny Blanca is a reincarnation and Mikita has one...lol XDi'll shut up nowmandy94t on May 14, 2006, 6:09:40 AM
mandy94t on (Chapter: 1)
I wouldn't.I had the same thought of Mikita having a reincarnation.this is gonna be awesome!