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STAR WARS: Trouble Follows Us

This is the story of my OC Ash Chi and her twin sister Echo...
WARNING: If you can't stand the intense action...don't read this story!!
no wait...nevermind...read the story!!!
ALL THINGS STAR WARS BELONG TO and ARE COPYRIGHTED BY GEORGE LUCAS!!!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Introduction
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Chapter 2 - Surprise!! You have a twin sister!!
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Chapter 3 - Sisterly Bonding
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Chapter 4 - Say what?!
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Chapter 5 - Say what...AGAIN??!!
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Chapter 6 - Where'd she go?
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Chapter 7 - Nightmares
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Chapter 8 - First mission...didn't go so well...
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Chapter 9 - Closer than you thought...
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Chapter 10 - First mission
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Chapter 11 - Captured
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Chapter 12 - Tortured
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Chapter 13 - Rather kiss a Hutt...until now!
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Chapter 14 - Home Sweet Temple
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Chapter 15 - Things never stay safe
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Chapter 16 - Stabbed in the back...literally
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Chapter 17 - I'm an Idiot
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Chapter 18 - Sacrifice
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Chapter 19 - Saved again
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Chapter 20 - What in blazes did I just do?
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Chapter 21 - 13th Birthday
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Chapter 22 - Trouble follows Us
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Chapter 23 - Son of a Gundark!!
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Chapter 24 - Trapped and Escaped
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Chapter 25 - You're a Jedi?
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Chapter 26 - A New Friend for us...for some of us...
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Chapter 27 - Redemption
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Chapter 28 - Revenge is never enough
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Chapter 29 - Didn't you know not to trust strangers?
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Chapter 30 - Don't ever trust Salesmen either...
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Chapter 31 - Final Trial
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Chapter 32 - Someone's in trouble...again...
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Chapter 33 - Never expected this!
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Chapter 34 - Party?
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Chapter 35 - Shut out by a Sister
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Chapter 36 - Familar Feelings
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Chapter 37 - Never met YOU before!?!
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Chapter 38 - Shocked beyond Belief
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Chapter 39 - New Mission, New Friends...and Old Rivals
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Chapter 40 - The Battle Begins
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Chapter 41 - Battle brings out more than dead droids...
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Chapter 42 - Love and Attention
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Chapter 43 - There's more to Us than just fighting...
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Chapter 44 - Delsuions are NEVER good
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Chapter 45 - Why does something like this always happen?
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Chapter 46 - Anger Issues and Love cut Off
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Chapter 47 - Sometimes friends can't even help
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Chapter 48 - Going Insane...literally...
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Chapter 49 - It takes Love to Kill
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Chapter 50 - Forbidden Love is never Sweet
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Chapter 51 - Ready, You Are
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Chapter 52 - Why a Padawan??
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Chapter 53 - Signs of Victory
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Chapter 54 - My name is Neon
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Chapter 55 - The Answer to Forgetting
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Chapter 56 - Love Hurts
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Chapter 57 - Something to get my mind of Kiro...
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Chapter 58 - Still never beaten...
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Chapter 59 - Looking in the mirror...
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Chapter 60 - Take Me Back
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Chapter 61 - The Reappearing Villian!
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Chapter 62 - Evil Schemes don't mix with Me
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Chapter 63 - Double-Crossin Nerf-Herder
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Chapter 64 - Hostage Crisis
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Chapter 65 - The Only Way
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Chapter 66 - Consequences of Killing
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Chapter 67 - My plan worked...sort of...
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Chapter 68 - A Taste of the Dark Side
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Chapter 69 - Oh No you didn't!!??...
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Chapter 70 - Forced to Fight
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Chapter 71 - Stronger than Before
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Chapter 72 - Sitting Back for a Change
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Chapter 73 - Love against Love
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Chapter 74 - Love for Love
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Chapter 75 - Surprise!!
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Chapter 76 - Just not Fair
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Chapter 77 - Differences between Dreams and Nightmares
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Chapter 78 - You don't Wanna Know
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Chapter 79 - New Blades
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Chapter 80 - Lost for Words
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Crystalgirl29 on July 13, 2009, 1:22:28 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 80)
Crystalgirl29K!!! im up to date!...safe to proceed!:)

Crystalgirl29 on July 13, 2009, 1:19:50 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 79)
Crystalgirl29haha...luv it!

Crystalgirl29 on July 13, 2009, 1:17:23 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 78)
Crystalgirl29it better not come to pass!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 13, 2009, 1:14:21 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 77)
Crystalgirl29awww, isnt Xiang sweet?



NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!-i hate nightmares!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 7:08:22 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 76)
Crystalgirl29yeah it isnt fair!!!!!
-i think somebody needs to have a little talk w/ Echo!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 7:05:49 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 75)
Crystalgirl29BROZE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs him*

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 7:00:18 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 74)
Crystalgirl29poohy!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 6:57:05 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 73)
Crystalgirl29aw, man!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 6:52:53 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 72)
Crystalgirl29Family!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 6:48:29 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 71)
Crystalgirl29YAY!!!!!!!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 6:41:08 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 70)
Crystalgirl29haha...we can still outsmart ya...U BIG DUMB NERF HERDER!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 6:31:09 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 69)
Crystalgirl29i dont have any smart comment...sry:)

GREAT story!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 6:26:21 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 68)
Crystalgirl29aw, CRAP!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 6:19:24 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 67)
Crystalgirl29ohhhhhhh goodness...this better turn around!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 6:17:07 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 66)
Crystalgirl29*sob*GREAT!!! NOW IM CRYING AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!*sob*

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 6:03:50 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 65)
Crystalgirl29heh...famous villain words..."im not done with you yet!!"

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:56:05 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 64)
Crystalgirl29hmph!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:48:54 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 63)
Crystalgirl29NOT COOL!>:-(

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:44:45 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 62)
Crystalgirl29oh,boy...

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:42:35 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 61)
Crystalgirl29oh no!!!

Ya'll better get a plan!!!! ya hear?

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:39:16 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 60)
Crystalgirl29ha...i like Kiro...

not again!!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:35:30 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 59)
Crystalgirl29cant wait!...

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:33:19 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 58)
Crystalgirl29haha...LOVE IT!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:31:05 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 57)
Crystalgirl29whoooooo...im ready!

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:27:51 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 56)
Crystalgirl29ohhhhhhhhhh*sob!* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!

-so how did i just now find out that i can cry at a computer screen??

Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 5:23:01 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 55)
Crystalgirl29Cute!!!
loved it!!!!...little kids can be a handful...

Crystalgirl29 on July 11, 2009, 1:27:18 PM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 54)
Crystalgirl29AWESOME!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 11, 2009, 2:45:12 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 53)
Crystalgirl29yay!

Crystalgirl29 on July 11, 2009, 2:43:28 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 52)
Crystalgirl29ooh....i wanna see what happens!

Crystalgirl29 on July 11, 2009, 2:40:14 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 51)
Crystalgirl29hmmmm...interesting.

Crystalgirl29 on July 10, 2009, 9:56:17 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 50)
Crystalgirl29STUPID JEDI ORDER!!!!!!!!!!! *sob*

Crystalgirl29 on July 10, 2009, 4:24:05 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 49)
Crystalgirl29Awwwwwwwwwww!!!!!
AWESOMENESS!!!
super glad!

Crystalgirl29 on July 10, 2009, 3:56:12 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 47)
Crystalgirl29:(

Crystalgirl29 on July 10, 2009, 3:50:43 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 46)
Crystalgirl29non-idiotic is always good!

Crystalgirl29 on July 10, 2009, 3:45:55 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 45)
Crystalgirl29oh, sooooooooooooooo not A-okay!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 10, 2009, 3:41:50 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 44)
Crystalgirl29NOT A-OKAY!!!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 9, 2009, 1:13:40 PM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 43)
Crystalgirl29oh,no...


Kiro & Xiang need 2 SNAP OUT OF IT!!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 9, 2009, 6:08:48 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 41)
Crystalgirl29GREAT!!!!!!!!!

-i am a fanatic of you now!!!
& i faved ure story!!!!!

Awesome job!

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 6:16:11 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 40)
Crystalgirl29WOW!!! Awesome!

quick Q...is this from the movie??

starwarsgeek on July 8, 2009, 6:29:13 AM

starwarsgeek on (Chapter: 40)
starwarsgeekya, the battle of geonosis....i tried to give my (ash's) side of the story. i figure, the star wars universe is so big, why not add another couple people to the battle!! ^-^

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 6:05:52 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 39)
Crystalgirl29Yay! Friends are needed...we need them to listen, to comfort, and we can do it 4 them...frendship is important:)


NOOOOOOO!-nt Obi-1,Anakin & Padmay!!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 5:57:40 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 38)
Crystalgirl29Awwwwwwwwwww..im almost teary eyed!!!!

-u should make ure own books or a tv show or something!!!
simply wonderful!

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 5:49:49 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 37)
Crystalgirl29ahhhh...so thats who Kiro is:)

oooh and i LOVE ure made up expressions!!!!
"Keep ure nerfs in a herd!!!!"

haha GREAT!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 5:42:39 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 36)
Crystalgirl29o.o intense...

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 5:39:31 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 35)
Crystalgirl29hmmmmmmmmm...odd.

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 5:36:03 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 34)
Crystalgirl29haha-cute:)

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 5:26:46 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 33)
Crystalgirl29WoooooHooooooooooo!!!!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 5:21:02 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 32)
Crystalgirl29their in SO much trouble!!!!!!!!!

poor Nya:(

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 2:05:42 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 31)
Crystalgirl29wow!!! Packed full of jamXD...if u watch sg-1 ull get that...if not, im a nerd-and thats all u need to know!!!

-haha cute at the end!-great work!

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 1:53:50 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 30)
Crystalgirl29man,Again????

Crystalgirl29 on July 8, 2009, 1:42:00 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 29)
Crystalgirl29ooooohh!!!-Kali's gettin on my nerves!!!!

awwww man!!!!-i hate the trapyness of it all!:P

Crystalgirl29 on July 7, 2009, 1:23:18 PM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 28)
Crystalgirl29Noooooooooooooooo!!!!
ohhhhhnooooooooohoooooooohooooooooooooooo!*sob*

Crystalgirl29 on July 6, 2009, 3:16:20 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 27)
Crystalgirl29Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rescue mission!-oh,dear...i hope its not a trap:(

WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!GET ON THE STICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!jkjkjkXD

Crystalgirl29 on July 6, 2009, 2:17:44 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: index)
Crystalgirl29yeah...not so much!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 5, 2009, 5:46:04 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 26)
Crystalgirl29To Sakura & Hiro "Do i have to separate you two?!"

Hahahaah-very good:)

starwarsgeek on July 6, 2009, 2:02:08 AM

starwarsgeek on (Chapter: 26)
starwarsgeeklet's just say they aren't the BEST of friends!! tehehe...

Crystalgirl29 on July 5, 2009, 5:43:01 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 25)
Crystalgirl29haha-much deserved!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 4, 2009, 5:05:16 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 23)
Crystalgirl29awwww,man!!!! not again!!!!!!

-Man...Ash is Baaaaaaaaaaaaaad!!!!!!(in a good way:))

starwarsgeek on July 4, 2009, 11:03:44 PM

starwarsgeek on (Chapter: 23)
starwarsgeekhehehe...yay!! i was aiming for that!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 10:55:45 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 21)
Crystalgirl29haha-the robot was disappointed...

good^^:)

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 10:49:12 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 20)
Crystalgirl29Totally cool!!! SHATER POINTS!!! oooooooooh, awwwwwwwwww!!!

-If i were Ash...I would go up to Aero, and tell him "I forgive you" ...and let him think about that...

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 5:15:59 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: index)
Crystalgirl29Ya, course!-is really good!!!!

-yes i really think so:)

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 5:06:13 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 18)
Crystalgirl29-intense...

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 5:02:40 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 17)
Crystalgirl29Man ure story is soooooooooooo good!!^^

starwarsgeek on July 3, 2009, 5:04:57 AM

starwarsgeek on (Chapter: 17)
starwarsgeekwow...you really think so???????????
tehehe...
THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO MUCH DOOD!!!!!!!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 4:58:58 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 16)
Crystalgirl29Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh, Aero...HOW COULD YOU???!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 4:53:56 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 15)
Crystalgirl29Nice^^

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 4:46:22 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 14)
Crystalgirl29Oooooh, how sweet!

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 4:44:05 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 13)
Crystalgirl29I DO NOT LIKE JABA!!!!

Yay!!!-Cin to the rescue!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 4:39:13 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 12)
Crystalgirl29Woah...

I would say ewwwwwwwww, too!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 4:30:31 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 10)
Crystalgirl29Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

starwarsgeek on July 3, 2009, 4:34:48 AM

starwarsgeek on (Chapter: 10)
starwarsgeekwow!!!
thnkz soooooooooooooo much for readin my story!!!
no one else ever has really!!
this means lot!!
there's a whole lot more i've written, just haven't posted.

also, i wrote this story with my bff, starwarsdood, who's OC is Echo. she wrote a story too, but it's from Echo's point of view!! you should really read it!! it's awesome!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 4:34:10 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 11)
Crystalgirl29Oh my gosh!!!!!
Crazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 4:21:46 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 9)
Crystalgirl29awwwwwwww...bonding!:):):)

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 1:16:54 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 8)
Crystalgirl29haha...i really like Broze!!!

-Oh,no!!!!!!! poor Echo!

Crystalgirl29 on July 3, 2009, 1:13:37 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 7)
Crystalgirl29FREAKY!!!!

-Yoda's talking was very good...u got it down pat!!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 2, 2009, 11:00:30 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 5)
Crystalgirl29Ooooooooooooooooooooooh...the first REAL encounter!!!!

-very good!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 2, 2009, 10:49:10 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 4)
Crystalgirl29aw, man...id hate to do that to my friends...


Ooooooooooooh, MOVIN' ON UP!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 2, 2009, 10:35:33 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 3)
Crystalgirl29AWESOME!!!!

Crystalgirl29 on July 2, 2009, 10:26:19 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 2)
Crystalgirl29Whoa!!!! CRAZY!!!!!!

loved it allot & LOVED the action:D:D:D

Crystalgirl29 on July 2, 2009, 10:19:10 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 6)
Crystalgirl29Haha-cute:)